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SamiPale

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SamiPale 2010-11-26T01:55:05+00:00

Hi~ As rule 5 at mod queue

[General]
Is "lepidon" in Tags necessary? When you input "lepidon" to search it's also out because of the diff name has "lepidon", too

[Normal]
00:31:999(4) - Finish?
00:44:833(1) - End at 00:45:999?
01:21:333(2,3) - Suggestion, add finish at the beginning?
01:47:333(1) - Finish?
01:52:666(1) - ^
01:11:999(2) - Whistle?

[Insane]
00:40:499(T) - Keep the 55% volume, don't low it
01:00:666(1) - Finish?
01:01:333(1,2,3) - Not a perfect triangle shape, right?
Most place you use Normal hitsound I recommand using 55% volumn as the first KIAI

Solid map, and pink star for のんちゃん先輩

IIlIIlIlIl

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IIlIIlIlIl 2010-11-26T08:22:41+00:00

nice song~

star+1

Louis Cyphre

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Louis Cyphre 2010-11-26T10:44:17+00:00

00:40:499(T) - Keep the 55% volume, don't low it

changed only this.

Thanks for modding.

And thanks for stars

Armin

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Armin 2010-11-28T20:11:43+00:00

ops

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Armin

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Armin 2010-11-28T20:22:13+00:00

Timing is wrong in my opinion.

BPM:179,95
Offset: -4

If you fix it, don't forget to resnap all notes

[Easy]

00:03:999 (2) - I expected a new combo here

...nothing of relevant, very clean easy.

[Normal]

00:23:999 (6) - Very bad, move the anchor point and the last waypoint in order to obtain something like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/38291

Rest is perfect. I have to complain just the position of these spinners: 00:33:999 (1) and 01:54:166 (1), because their recovery time is very short for a normal.

[Insane]

00:51:222 (x) - I'd add another beat if I were you

Louis Cyphre

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Louis Cyphre 2010-11-28T20:29:31+00:00

everything done

Haneii

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Haneii 2010-11-29T21:23:04+00:00

~Twinkle twinkle little star~

Edit:

Lucifer!

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Louis Cyphre

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Louis Cyphre 2010-11-29T21:58:56+00:00

~Twinkle twinkle little star~

Thanks for star and irc modding : )

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yeahyeahyeahhh 2010-11-30T12:15:18+00:00

.

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-maJu 2010-11-30T12:15:36+00:00

star

Louis Cyphre

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Louis Cyphre 2010-11-30T12:39:14+00:00

thanks =P

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Verdisphena 2010-12-01T19:29:22+00:00

Insane:

01:34:022 (1) - Make this slider like this.

1

01:47:692 (3,4,5) - Does not match with the music, change with another thing -3-
01:48:026 (1) - Delete new combo
01:58:362 (2,3,4) - Does not match with the music, change with another thing -3-
02:00:696 (1,2,3,4,5) - Boring to play

Taiko diff:
<3

Normal:

For some reason, i cant mod this diff, because...

Louis Cyphre

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Louis Cyphre 2010-12-01T19:36:33+00:00

FullSubmitted.

And nothing changed =(

Thanks for taking attention

Verdisphena

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Verdisphena 2010-12-01T21:15:22+00:00

T^T

James2250

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James2250 2010-12-02T05:56:01+00:00

-Include a hitcircle approach circle in the folder
-HP bar looks kind of odd to me

Easy:
At least OD+1?
01:11:349 (2) - add whistle to the start of this to match 01:08:681 (2)?

Normal:
00:35:339 (7,1) - switch new combo
Have 01:14:016 (1,2,1,2,3) and 01:18:017 (1,2,3,4,5,6) match in combos?

Taiko:
Other timing sections are for taiko?
Keep audio lead-in the same as the other difficulties?
No other problems

Insane:
00:03:997 (2) - new combo to match others
00:29:337 (4) - can't tell the difference from the rest of them, so prob bad idea
00:40:007 (8) - ^
00:46:119 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - for this entire long stream I would start each new combo 1 earlier (it suits music more)
00:53:677 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - don't follow combos here much either but ok~
(btw those streams are veryyyy hard to fc...)
01:49:026 (2,3) - jump doesn't really fit to me

Insane is crazy but nicely done
Star'ed

Louis Cyphre

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Louis Cyphre 2010-12-02T10:29:02+00:00

-HP bar looks kind of odd to me

OMG. It's awesome <_<

Hitcircles, approach circle, lightning and defualt 1 2 3 4 are deleted.

01:49:026 (2,3) - jump doesn't really fit to me

For you =P not for me X)

all fixed except ^.

Thank you James :3

qwert962005

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qwert962005 2010-12-02T12:12:44+00:00

Good music and the good map!!

GJ~LC^^

star~~~

Armin

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Armin 2010-12-02T20:58:15+00:00

Bubbled

Louis Cyphre

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Louis Cyphre 2010-12-02T21:00:11+00:00

thank you qwert :3
thanks for bubble Armin :3

lepidopodus

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lepidopodus 2010-12-03T04:29:57+00:00

I think I said you need to contact me when there is timing change, hmm.

Unfortunatly all notes after 00:13:999 are mistimed by around 5ms. There were 2 more uninherited sections in Taiko map 1 and you moved only one.

And here's fixed one.

Download: Len - U.N. Owen was her (Louis Cyphre) [lepidon! - Taiko Oni].osu

Louis Cyphre

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Louis Cyphre 2010-12-03T07:31:14+00:00

D:

Fixed.... ._.

lepidopodus

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lepidopodus 2010-12-03T08:12:22+00:00

Fixed.

Uninheritted sections must be snapped properly if we used those for correcting barlines in Taiko mode, but sometimes merely seeting uninheritted section can move offset by 1ms or less. To compensate that, I need to set offset moved by 1ms purposly.

Download: Len - U.N. Owen was her (Louis Cyphre) [lepidon! - Taiko Oni].osu

Shinxyn

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Shinxyn 2010-12-03T08:18:15+00:00

Okay.. o-o checked through, already voiced by opinion through IRC~
Things are fine... (won't nazi any more than what I did in irc)

Fine >_> you can get the rebubble <_<

Louis Cyphre

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Louis Cyphre 2010-12-03T08:28:23+00:00

thank you guys

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Berncastell 2010-12-03T10:45:23+00:00

star :3

Andrea

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Andrea 2010-12-03T16:30:06+00:00

[lepidon! - Taiko Oni]

First offset is different compared to the other difficulties. Fix it!

[Insane]

00:46:119 (1) ~ 01:01:346 (1) - I'm totally not sure about these notes placement. Try to replace them with using 1/3 or 1/6 please?

Popped for now.

lepidopodus

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lepidopodus 2010-12-03T16:35:45+00:00

Someone told me to delete 1st timing section in -4ms cause it's useless, and now I need to restore that, hmm...

For other uninheritted sections, that's just for barlines, and additionally...

lepidopodus wrote:
Uninheritted sections must be snapped properly if we used those for correcting barlines in Taiko mode, but sometimes merely seeting uninheritted section can move offset by 1ms or less. To compensate that, I need to set offset moved by 1ms purposly.

Download: Len - U.N. Owen was her (Louis Cyphre) [lepidon! - Taiko Oni].osu

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Card N'FoRcE 2010-12-03T16:38:05+00:00

osuplayer111 wrote:
[lepidon! - Taiko Oni]
First offset is different compared to the other difficulties. Fix it!

lepidopodus wrote:
Fixed.

Uninheritted sections must be snapped properly if we used those for correcting barlines in Taiko mode, but sometimes merely seeting uninheritted section can move offset by 1ms or less. To compensate that, I need to set offset moved by 1ms purposly.

Maybe have the other diffs match Taiko's first offset?

EDIT: ninja'd

Alace

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Alace 2010-12-03T17:39:41+00:00

BPM is 180.00
offset should be 682 with 5/4 divisors add another red line with 4/4 divisors on 14015

lepidopodus

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lepidopodus 2010-12-03T17:47:53+00:00

Fixed.

Download: Len - U.N. Owen was her (Louis Cyphre) [lepidon! - Taiko Oni].osu

Louis Cyphre

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Louis Cyphre 2010-12-03T18:10:26+00:00

Fixed X_X
thanks for modding

Andrea

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Andrea 2010-12-03T18:27:49+00:00

I guess it's fine now.

Re-Bubbled~

To the next BAT: Please recheck carefully 1/3 part on Insane before ranking.

YGOkid8

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YGOkid8 2010-12-05T04:25:46+00:00

hmm...

General:
- Add "remix" to tags?
- Also, what does the background have to do with Touhou? Touhou background (one with Flandre Scarlet) would be... better.

Easy:
- IMO, slider velocity agonizingly slow. I know it's an easy, but still...

00:34:014 (1,1) - Spinner not long enough for easy, and not enough time for spin recovery
00:44:848 (1) - Yeah, not long enough.
01:54:014 (1,1) - Yeah, same thing + not enough time for spin recovery

Normal:
- Remember how I said slider velocity was agonizingly slow for Easy? Yeah, Normal's the opposite: Too fast. Just my opinion though.
- So, uh, kinda feels like a Normal+ for me.

Insane:
- Increase the circle size by 1 and I will love you longtime. So, um, I'm thinking small circle size doesn't go well with high slider velocity. Nothing WRONG with it, but... just my opinion again.

00:46:098 (1) - This isn't snapped to the 1/3... if it's meant to be.
01:53:348 (3,4,5) - Perfectly stack these? It looks ugly when playing ._.
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Mainly just my opinion. Though you probably won't fix the ones where I say stuff about slider velocity (everything *cough*), please consider what I'm saying.

EDIT: Erm, sorry for changing your bubble to a star, still getting use to these control stuff... I'll fix it after you consider the... stuff.

Louis Cyphre

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Louis Cyphre 2010-12-05T09:41:41+00:00

- Add "remix" to tags?

It's useless

- Also, what does the background have to do with Touhou? Touhou background (one with Flandre Scarlet) would be... better.

Get more awesome BG and i'll change it. I'm pretty sure, you will not find the better one. So no.

- IMO, slider velocity agonizingly slow. I know it's an easy, but still...

00:44:848 (1) - Yeah, not long enough.
01:54:014 (1,1) - Yeah, same thing + not enough time for spin recovery

I have SS'd this with ALL mods about 10 times, and i don't have problems with spinners, take in mind that i'm not standart player, i won't change it <_<

- Remember how I said slider velocity was agonizingly slow for Easy? Yeah, Normal's the opposite: Too fast. Just my opinion though.
- So, uh, kinda feels like a Normal+ for me.

- Increase the circle size by 1 and I will love you longtime. So, um, I'm thinking small circle size doesn't go well with high slider velocity. Nothing WRONG with it, but... just my opinion again.

00:46:098 (1) - This isn't snapped to the 1/3... if it's meant to be.

SHIIIIIIIIIIIIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! D: Fixed

01:53:348 (3,4,5) - Perfectly stack these? It looks ugly when playing ._.

No =/

Thanks for modding ...

YGOkid8

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YGOkid8 2010-12-06T05:41:08+00:00

Louis Cyphre wrote:
- Add "remix" to tags?
It's useless

um, I wouldn't say it's useless, but if you don't want to put it in, don't.

- Also, what does the background have to do with Touhou? Touhou background (one with Flandre Scarlet) would be... better.
Get more awesome BG and i'll change it. I'm pretty sure, you will not find the better one. So no.

just gonna list some suggestions:
http://img383.imageshack.us/i/konachanc ... dreko8.jpg
http://www.scenicreflections.com/files/ ... _yvt2.jpeg
http://i716.photobucket.com/albums/ww16 ... landre.jpg

- IMO, slider velocity agonizingly slow. I know it's an easy, but still...

not telling you to change it, just stating my opinion to think about.

00:44:848 (1) - Yeah, not long enough.
01:54:014 (1,1) - Yeah, same thing + not enough time for spin recovery
I have SS'd this with ALL mods about 10 times, and i don't have problems with spinners, take in mind that i'm not standart player, i won't change it <_<

from experience, i can tell you. for a beginner player, even two seconds isn't really long for spinner recovery. if you don't mind, i'd like to get more opinion on this.

- Remember how I said slider velocity was agonizingly slow for Easy? Yeah, Normal's the opposite: Too fast. Just my opinion though.
- So, uh, kinda feels like a Normal+ for me.

just stating my opinion again...

- Increase the circle size by 1 and I will love you longtime. So, um, I'm thinking small circle size doesn't go well with high slider velocity. Nothing WRONG with it, but... just my opinion again.

just going to ask here: is there a problem with me stating what i think? just because there's nothing wrong with it, it doesn't mean that it can't be improved (not saying this WILL improve it).

01:53:348 (3,4,5) - Perfectly stack these? It looks ugly when playing ._.
No =/

um, okay, don't see why though >.<
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consider background, I want to get opinions on the spinner stuff in easy. rebubble will come afterwards.

Louis Cyphre

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Louis Cyphre 2010-12-06T05:59:58+00:00

just gonna list some suggestions:
http://img383.imageshack.us/i/konachanc ... dreko8.jpg
http://www.scenicreflections.com/files/ ... _yvt2.jpeg
http://i716.photobucket.com/albums/ww16 ... landre.jpg

Mine is too better than these =P

Well, i don't want to change anything, cz all stuff is rankable and was done accroding to my mapping style. So please take my bubble back D:
Thanks for attention

Lilac

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Lilac 2010-12-06T06:10:59+00:00

I have to agree with D-- YGOkid.

I don't agree with it being too short, however, the recovery is far too little for my liking.

My two cents since YGOkid wanted it.

YGOkid8

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YGOkid8 2010-12-06T06:42:22+00:00

Managed to get spinner length + spinner recovery adjusted. Yay.

Rebubbled ~

Louis Cyphre

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Louis Cyphre 2010-12-06T06:51:05+00:00

thanks

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artpiggo 2010-12-06T07:29:11+00:00

star~1

Garven

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Garven 2010-12-06T09:09:03+00:00

Sorry for the delays. ;_;

[General]
That BG is a little risque for my liking. Think you could replace that with a more-clothed version please?
Your scorebar skins seem to be working incorrectly. They seem to have excess life before HP starts draining visibly. Please address this. Also remove scorebar-colour-ALTERNATE since it's not being used.
followpoint looks ugly compared to the combo colors. I'd just leave it as the default.

[Easy]
Raise OD by 2 please.
00:51:348 (1,1,1,1) - Kind of boring. Maybe mix it up a little bit?
01:23:014 - May as well map through this break or the one after. The break right afterward feels disruptive of flow if you keep the first one. Pretty much feels kind of drab to play for 5 seconds (and it's only a spinner) and break for even longer. -_-

[Normal]
Raise the difficulty settings a notch or two. Feels way too low for the map style.
00:05:681 (2) - Kinda ugly
01:10:015 (1,1) - That overlap. :<
Same comments on the breaks.

[lepidon!]
01:01:237 (40,41) - I ... guess this is okay? I suppose it's not 1/4, haha.

[Insane]
Wow, quite the difficulty jump. It'd be nice if you could get a hard difficulty in here to bridge the gap between Normal and this.
I'd prefer if you kept the same break-scheme as the rest of the difficulties, but okay.
00:46:126 (1) - Holy hell this is hard. Maybe mix in some short sliders?
01:28:681 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Considering the crazy stuff you did earlier, this part was rather tame.
01:39:014 - And considering the pace of this difficulty, I'd map through this break.
01:53:598 (4,5) - Stack these properly
02:00:681 (1,2,3,4,5) - Kind of boring for the finale of the map.

Mainly need to address that skin problem, the bg, and remove the extra image.

Edit:

Okay, new bg is fine. The HP bar is still screwed up, but I guess the skin has been used all over the place and no one else seems to care, so okay. And no changes to the maps, which is disappointing - especially the difficulty settings, but whatever.

Just leaving this here since it's kinda buried now:

osuplayer111 wrote:
To the next BAT: Please recheck carefully 1/3 part on Insane before ranking.

lepidopodus

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lepidopodus 2010-12-06T15:00:49+00:00

Garven wrote:
[lepidon!]
01:01:237 (40,41) - I ... guess this is okay? I suppose it's not 1/4, haha.

big notes in 1/3 streams are ok unless it's overused. So, yeah, I think this is ok.

Alace

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Alace 2010-12-07T19:10:23+00:00

After fixing some hitsounds and new combos
ranked

Louis Cyphre

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Louis Cyphre 2010-12-07T19:11:51+00:00

thanks ^_^

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Kurai 2010-12-07T19:50:27+00:00

Awesome ><~

OnosakiHito

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OnosakiHito 2010-12-07T20:18:36+00:00

OH MY... HOLY... lepidopodus, what is happening?! Where are your playable maps? >_<
This is insanity³!! LOL, I love it!

Wow the osu! one is also damn good!
フランドの曲は本当にかっこいいです！

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Haneii

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Haneii 2010-12-07T20:30:14+00:00

BG change :O

Congrats~

Louis Cyphre

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Louis Cyphre 2010-12-07T20:47:03+00:00

Well, that girl was naked =/ But i love her D:

Thanks guys :3

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KIA 2010-12-07T22:31:15+00:00

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lepidopodus

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lepidopodus 2010-12-08T00:58:01+00:00

Oh, finally... Congratulations!

OnosakiHito wrote:
OH MY... HOLY... lepidopodus, what is happening?! Where are your playable maps? >_<
This is insanity³!! LOL, I love it!

Sometimes I want to make hard maps lol

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Faust 2010-12-08T01:04:02+00:00

Louis Cyphre wrote:
Well, that girl was naked =/ But i love her D:

Thanks guys :3

Dammit Louis. I want my naked girl ! Now! Or I'm going to cry.

thekillerhjkhjk

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thekillerhjkhjk 2010-12-08T02:30:42+00:00

my hands hurt now

awesome map

Louis Cyphre

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Louis Cyphre 2010-12-08T04:11:06+00:00

Dammit Louis. I want my naked girl ! Now! Or I'm going to cry.

D:

dNextGen

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dNextGen 2010-12-08T04:12:09+00:00

hey louis,link me the full image of the previous BG

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Lizbeth

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Lizbeth 2010-12-08T04:27:20+00:00

Gratz<3

lepidopodus

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lepidopodus 2010-12-08T06:20:29+00:00

So, someone needs previous BG?

SPOILER

Louis Cyphre

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Louis Cyphre 2010-12-08T11:20:19+00:00

It's cut version

and here is full
http://konachan.com/post/show/72934/fla ... ed_eyes-re

TKiller

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TKiller 2010-12-08T11:31:26+00:00

that 1/3 part is so ridiculous

Cyril Scarlet

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Cyril Scarlet 2010-12-08T12:33:52+00:00

lepidopodus wrote:
So, someone needs previous BG?
SPOILER
[attachment=0:150e9]BG.jpg[/attachment:150e9]

SAVED !!!!!!!!!! <3

Louis Cyphre

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Louis Cyphre 2010-12-08T13:48:39+00:00

I was sure, that BG was more better!!!
But rules, no nuked awesome girls =/

Natteke

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Natteke 2010-12-08T16:02:51+00:00

TKiller wrote:
that 1/3 part is so ridiculous

mikhe

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mikhe 2010-12-08T16:45:07+00:00

Awesome, man, congragtz~ ^^
(waiting more of your maps, you are really nice mapper

)

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Verdisphena 2010-12-09T00:56:17+00:00

ilu

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Garven 2010-12-10T16:32:04+00:00

Natteke wrote:
TKiller wrote:
that 1/3 part is so ridiculous

O ho ho. (I'm in that first red section D:)

Louis Cyphre

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Louis Cyphre 2010-12-10T20:11:36+00:00

O ho ho. (I'm in that first red section D:)

With love from me <3

those

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those 2010-12-10T20:18:02+00:00

The Taiko map's really fun.

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OnosakiHito 2010-12-11T10:22:19+00:00

lepidopodus wrote:
OnosakiHito wrote:
OH MY... HOLY... lepidopodus, what is happening?! Where are your playable maps? >_<
This is insanity³!! LOL, I love it!
Sometimes I want to make hard maps lol

Feels good zo hear.ww

Just by the way, Siriru has another naked picture... find it if you can... xD

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Zyptic 2011-02-23T18:01:48+00:00

I think it's a pretty good map in my opinion.

choye1213

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choye1213 2013-03-07T07:15:07+00:00

플랑도르 스칼렛~

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