general
http://i.imgur.com/mzimYbD.jpg combo 3 should be brighter, I doesn't look nice overall and is also a pain to read with bg dim
garden
where's the intro
00:10:389 (1) - 3/4 seems so weird here with the strong sounds on red tick, seems even like there is some guitar there
00:11:037 (2,3) - this part makes it so hard to tell what you want to follow, like 2 is mapped to a drum, then 3 to guitar, 4 emphasizes drums again
same for similar spots like 00:13:307 (1,2,3,4,5) -
00:53:524 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - I think either 5 note streams to fit the drums with tapping, or utilize more 1/4 sliders to have tapping on vocals?
00:57:578 (1,2,3,1) - could make this easier, it's way harder than first time that pattern happens even though music is the same
also for all these 1/4 sliders patterns with overmapped ends, like this one or 01:06:334 (1,2,3,4) - I think muting/lowering tail volume would fit well
01:25:389 (5) - this plays so different from all your doubles after sliders etc. and there seems to be no real reason do put it here once when it's not something your map really utilizes and there is no sudden blue tick emphasis in the song
yea I can't really understand a lot of rhythm choices :/
hard
garden's hitsounding seemed better, could probably copy that or fix yours
for example: you replaced the whistle with a kick hitsound and thus can't use real whistles which makes it really empty
+ lots of misplaced things and missing things
like 00:22:064 (3) - should have a kick or drum clap or something, not a snare
00:01:470 (1,2,3) - i don't get what this is supposed to follow, definitely not the claps and the guitar also sounds more it's doing 3+2 patterns, like http://i.imgur.com/rIyhTUG.jpg
similar for most of the intro
00:04:064 (1,2,1,2,3) - things like this actually make sense though
00:10:226 (3) - think you could do something like http://i.imgur.com/VCx67Ad.jpg here, drums are really intense to fit a triple and slider makes it easier, garden's diff uses some 5+ note streams, so having some clickable 1/4 in this diff would also make sense
00:11:199 - rhythm again seems a bit unrerasonable as it feels like you just mixed multiple layers together for tapping with no differantiation. could try something like http://i.imgur.com/iWfuS0a.jpg
some examples^ rhythm seems to be one of the major issues
another issue is, there seems to be no real coherence of your objects a lot of times
00:11:848 (5,7) - things like this seems okay, but would still be nicer if you went for more even visual spacing http://i.imgur.com/nNE5YiW.jpg
00:12:497 (7,8,9,1) - same here, looks like you tried to make some kind of geometrical shape on 7-8-9 but and then 1 is just like "lol no"
quick example how even angles would clean stuff like this up http://i.imgur.com/JXySrs4.jpg
some other things:
00:18:172 (8,9) - why is this suddenly a stack when you usually spaced them? (though stack seems actually better with how insignificant 9 is musically)
00:20:929 (9,1) - pretty overdone sudden spike for a hard diff, even more so as it becomes really easy to misread as 1/1
00:23:686 - rhythm in this part seems a bit better overall, at least more clear what you're following usually
00:25:794 (7,8) - should ctrlg this rhythm though as you follow vocals before and after so suddenly mapping drums makes no sense when music is the same
01:07:794 - and the next big issue: this parts feels the same as the less intense parts, besides a few more passive 1/4 rhythms. no spacing increase, no sv increase, nothing that really differentiates them
01:31:145 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - why is this suddenly so undermapped and empty, the song is so intense and offers drums on the red ticks usually, so you could use some 1/2 sliders etc
normal
00:00:335 (1,2,3) - rhythm here is like the opposite of the following ones lol looking at what ticks it emphasizes
http://i.imgur.com/5ACY6SA.jpg or http://i.imgur.com/qqg23wP.jpg both make more sense
though overall rhythm for this part seems much better than hard
00:08:280 (1) - should be careful with random normal sampleset on sliderbody, sudden scratchy sounds are weird there
01:25:307 (4) - what is this mapped to? something like http://i.imgur.com/EduIq7D.jpg seems better
as on hard, visuals on some spots look pretty messy, mainly due to visual spacing being so unevend/random, like 01:33:416 (6,1,2) - for example, but overall the diff is better than hard
easy
00:34:713 (2) - really unintuitve rhythm as song emphasizes red ticks here, something like http://i.imgur.com/i7FL2yx.jpg or at least http://i.imgur.com/EtAO6za.jpg would be nice
01:07:307 (3) - 1/2 sliders aren't really nice on easy diffs, especially if you use them only once and in a part with much surrounding density. http://i.imgur.com/nH2PzUj.jpg should be fine if your spacing makes it clear that gap is different, like http://i.imgur.com/0glZO6G.jpg
01:17:686 (4) - similar here, would go for the same gap, or maybe even http://i.imgur.com/LYJdCyU.jpg
01:11:037 (2,3) - things like this really oversimplify the song imo. emphasis is on 01:11:524 - - but it's ignored to map weak drums. could be something like http://i.imgur.com/t9BXMg0.jpg // 01:22:064 (3) - same on this and so on
rhythms like 01:25:956 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - are really nice though
01:33:740 (1,2,3) - this is really much for an easy, considering the target audience of this difficulty (pretty much people that just installed the game). and that on 185bpm
most things mentioned are examples and apply more throughout the map
gl!
http://i.imgur.com/mzimYbD.jpg combo 3 should be brighter, I doesn't look nice overall and is also a pain to read with bg dim
garden
where's the intro
00:10:389 (1) - 3/4 seems so weird here with the strong sounds on red tick, seems even like there is some guitar there
00:11:037 (2,3) - this part makes it so hard to tell what you want to follow, like 2 is mapped to a drum, then 3 to guitar, 4 emphasizes drums again
same for similar spots like 00:13:307 (1,2,3,4,5) -
00:53:524 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - I think either 5 note streams to fit the drums with tapping, or utilize more 1/4 sliders to have tapping on vocals?
00:57:578 (1,2,3,1) - could make this easier, it's way harder than first time that pattern happens even though music is the same
also for all these 1/4 sliders patterns with overmapped ends, like this one or 01:06:334 (1,2,3,4) - I think muting/lowering tail volume would fit well
01:25:389 (5) - this plays so different from all your doubles after sliders etc. and there seems to be no real reason do put it here once when it's not something your map really utilizes and there is no sudden blue tick emphasis in the song
yea I can't really understand a lot of rhythm choices :/
hard
garden's hitsounding seemed better, could probably copy that or fix yours
for example: you replaced the whistle with a kick hitsound and thus can't use real whistles which makes it really empty
+ lots of misplaced things and missing things
like 00:22:064 (3) - should have a kick or drum clap or something, not a snare
00:01:470 (1,2,3) - i don't get what this is supposed to follow, definitely not the claps and the guitar also sounds more it's doing 3+2 patterns, like http://i.imgur.com/rIyhTUG.jpg
similar for most of the intro
00:04:064 (1,2,1,2,3) - things like this actually make sense though
00:10:226 (3) - think you could do something like http://i.imgur.com/VCx67Ad.jpg here, drums are really intense to fit a triple and slider makes it easier, garden's diff uses some 5+ note streams, so having some clickable 1/4 in this diff would also make sense
00:11:199 - rhythm again seems a bit unrerasonable as it feels like you just mixed multiple layers together for tapping with no differantiation. could try something like http://i.imgur.com/iWfuS0a.jpg
some examples^ rhythm seems to be one of the major issues
another issue is, there seems to be no real coherence of your objects a lot of times
00:11:848 (5,7) - things like this seems okay, but would still be nicer if you went for more even visual spacing http://i.imgur.com/nNE5YiW.jpg
00:12:497 (7,8,9,1) - same here, looks like you tried to make some kind of geometrical shape on 7-8-9 but and then 1 is just like "lol no"
quick example how even angles would clean stuff like this up http://i.imgur.com/JXySrs4.jpg
some other things:
00:18:172 (8,9) - why is this suddenly a stack when you usually spaced them? (though stack seems actually better with how insignificant 9 is musically)
00:20:929 (9,1) - pretty overdone sudden spike for a hard diff, even more so as it becomes really easy to misread as 1/1
00:23:686 - rhythm in this part seems a bit better overall, at least more clear what you're following usually
00:25:794 (7,8) - should ctrlg this rhythm though as you follow vocals before and after so suddenly mapping drums makes no sense when music is the same
01:07:794 - and the next big issue: this parts feels the same as the less intense parts, besides a few more passive 1/4 rhythms. no spacing increase, no sv increase, nothing that really differentiates them
01:31:145 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - why is this suddenly so undermapped and empty, the song is so intense and offers drums on the red ticks usually, so you could use some 1/2 sliders etc
normal
00:00:335 (1,2,3) - rhythm here is like the opposite of the following ones lol looking at what ticks it emphasizes
http://i.imgur.com/5ACY6SA.jpg or http://i.imgur.com/qqg23wP.jpg both make more sense
though overall rhythm for this part seems much better than hard
00:08:280 (1) - should be careful with random normal sampleset on sliderbody, sudden scratchy sounds are weird there
01:25:307 (4) - what is this mapped to? something like http://i.imgur.com/EduIq7D.jpg seems better
as on hard, visuals on some spots look pretty messy, mainly due to visual spacing being so unevend/random, like 01:33:416 (6,1,2) - for example, but overall the diff is better than hard
easy
00:34:713 (2) - really unintuitve rhythm as song emphasizes red ticks here, something like http://i.imgur.com/i7FL2yx.jpg or at least http://i.imgur.com/EtAO6za.jpg would be nice
01:07:307 (3) - 1/2 sliders aren't really nice on easy diffs, especially if you use them only once and in a part with much surrounding density. http://i.imgur.com/nH2PzUj.jpg should be fine if your spacing makes it clear that gap is different, like http://i.imgur.com/0glZO6G.jpg
01:17:686 (4) - similar here, would go for the same gap, or maybe even http://i.imgur.com/LYJdCyU.jpg
01:11:037 (2,3) - things like this really oversimplify the song imo. emphasis is on 01:11:524 - - but it's ignored to map weak drums. could be something like http://i.imgur.com/t9BXMg0.jpg // 01:22:064 (3) - same on this and so on
rhythms like 01:25:956 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - are really nice though
01:33:740 (1,2,3) - this is really much for an easy, considering the target audience of this difficulty (pretty much people that just installed the game). and that on 185bpm
most things mentioned are examples and apply more throughout the map
gl!
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