Fairly long mod however some things are simply suggestions. Feel free to ignore things you disagree with
-You do not need to include anything in the tags that is already in the source/title/artist (also make sure to include every guest mappers name in tags on all difficulties
-That is alot of time to have kiai in a map, I suggest you try and cut some of that down (or just keep the fountains for some parts). Also try and keep kiai time the same on all of your difficulties
-Your mp3 is currently 320kbps, you will need to find one between 128-192kbps for it to get ranked
-Make sure to include a hitcircle approach circle in the folder even if it is just the default one
-It would be better if you could scale your background to a 4:3 size to make it look nicer
-Difficulty names don't really need ~ at the end of them, seems slightly odd to have it
-Don't have the pause overlay over 1024x768 (it is currently 1171x768)
Easy:
-Try and keep your claps following a consistent pattern, they seem to switch from following white ticks to red ticks and they become hard to follow
-At least OD+1, it does not need to be on the lowest setting for this song
-Does this difficulty need a BPM that is half of the other difficulties?
-Do not put kiai time during a break if possible
Pretty straightforward but all seems fine
Normal:
-Could be more enjoyable if not so linear, you could try and make some more creative patterns to keep it interesting
-Again double check your hitsounds (will point out a few)
00:20:239 (2,3,4) - why change clap pattern here?
00:21:953 (8,1) - space out more
00:35:239 (2) - clap should be on this note to follow previous pattern
00:43:382 (6,1) - try not to overlap to make it look neater
01:16:382 (1,1) - both new combos aren't really needed
01:36:524 (6,8) - try not to overlap
01:38:239 (7,8,9,10,1) - align these to look better?
bobek's flow:
-This is the only difficulty with a custom name?
-Don't have kiai during a break
00:08:239 (7) - kind of random clap
00:37:596 (4) - sounds too quiet compared to the notes around it in my opinion (same for other ones after this)
Would make more sense if the map ended where the other difficulties do or at 02:36:525
Vass_Bass's Hard:
01:43:382 (5,6) - avoid hidden repeats
02:34:167 (2,4) - might be nicer if these didn't overlap?
Hard:
-Don't have those long gaps between notes towards the end of the song, the HP Drain is too fast for stuff like that, either fill them in with breaks or add some notes there
-Odd having the difficulty with the largest score having much lower stats than the last difficulty, might want to try fixing that slightly
-Don't have kiai during a break
00:10:596 (4) - clap should go at the end of this to follow your pattern (and get rid of the clap after this)
01:26:239 (6,8) - would look better if not touching
Map is nice but you need to finish adding hitsounds to some nonkiai parts of it
Needs some more improvements before I can give this a star, once you fix all the issues that are in the folder and clean up your hitsounds slightly it should look pretty good~
