1. Lv.12 HD - 4Key (3.67 stars, 1486 notes)
2. Lv.15 SHD - 4Key (4.17 stars, 1903 notes)
3. Lv.4 EZ - 4Key (1.61 stars, 449 notes)
4. Lv.7 NM - 4Key (2.46 stars, 977 notes)

tatatat wrote:

You may want to consider decreasing the HP drain for the Normal by 0.5 if others comment on it as well. - Fixed
Hard and Insane have less HP than normal? Consider including tags to help users search for the map. Include the genre of music and any other significant things that could be used to identify your map. - Fixed
Consider adding a difficulty between the normal and hard difficulty if the song allows for it, a low hard difficulty around 2.5-2.8* would be nice for newer players. Your difficulty spread doesn't go against the ranking criteria, it'd just be a nice addition. Do whatever you feel is best. - Adjusted
Remove the countdown from difficulties that have it. Countdowns aren't for osu!mania. - Fixed
Your source field isn't the same for all the difficulties, make sure the metadata is the same across the difficulties. - Fixed
Don't forget to increase and decrease the hitsound volume in the timing panel under the audio tab based on the mood and volume of the music. For example, the beginning of the map should be quieter than at 00:41:380 - . Use green (inherited) timing sections to change the volume. Make sure your uninherited timing sections you add for this purpose are snapped as well. Volume at 02:24:606 - should also be lower. - Fixed
Nearly all the objects in your hard difficulty aren't snapped. Run AI mod to see more on this problem. Press CTRL+SHIFT+A to run AIMod. - Fixed
In the Hard difficulty you should probably place a note somewhere at 00:33:074 - , since similar sounds are mapped earlier while this one is ignored. - Fixed
In the Easy difficulty the LN at 01:22:590 (82590|2) - is a higher pitch than the LN at 01:24:042 (84042|3) - , you should probably move around the LNs to reflect this.

InfinityGhost wrote:

Easy

00:30:977 (30977|0,31300|0,31622|0,31945|0) - pretty dense tapping for an easy, would spread that out - Adjusted
00:32:268 (32268|3,32590|3,32913|3,33235|3) - ^
i honestly dont see much wrong with this, consistent and beautiful

Normal

00:05:977 (5977|2,6300|2,6622|1,6945|1) - i think this fits better - Fixed

01:33:719 (93719|0,93961|1,94203|2,94445|3,94606|2,94848|0,95090|1,95332|2,95493|3,95735|2,95977|1,96139|0,96380|3,96622|2,96703|1,96784|0,97026|3,97268|2,97429|1,97751|0) - not sure why you changed the instrument you were following but its very confusing, repeat what was followed before
and thats all i could see, also really nice map - Changed the Pattern

i'm so bad at mania, couldn't even play the hard or insane if i tried, and i see next to nothing wrong with those difficulties in the editor.

Great map my dude!

Animerge wrote:

This is my first time modding a map.
Hopefully understandable and can contribute

Hard

00:19:848 (19848|0) - Probably better in single note to follow the upcoming cymbal ahead - Fixed
00:20:009 (20009|2) - There is cymbal there. Considering to add note on the third column and leave the LN in first column to single note - Fixed


00:31:945 (31945|0) - Drum. Double note maybe? - There is only one base drum sound
00:32:268 (32268|3) - 00:32:590 (32590|3) - 00:34:526 (34526|0,34848|3,35171|3) - Same as above - There is only one base drum sound

00:36:139 (36139|0,36300|0,36461|1,36622|1) - Somehow i like it more when the note descending, to follow the drum pitch - Fixed


00:37:106 (37106|1,37268|1) - Move to 2nd column maybe? Same reason as above, since descending drum pitch - Fixed

01:02:832 (62832|3,62832|2,62913|0,63074|2,63074|1,63397|1,63397|2,63558|0,63558|1,63558|2,63880|1,63880|2,64122|0,64122|1,64203|3,64364|1,64364|2,64687|1,64687|2,64848|0,64848|1,64848|2,65171|1,65171|2,65413|2,65413|3,65493|0,65655|1,65655|2,65977|1,65977|2,66139|3,66139|1,66139|2,66461|0,66461|1,66703|1,66703|2,66784|0,66945|2,66945|3,67268|1,67268|2,67429|3,67429|1,67429|2,67751|1,67751|2,67993|2,67993|3,68074|0,68235|1,68235|2,68558|1,68558|2,68719|0,68719|1,68719|2,69042|1,69042|2,69284|0,69284|1,69364|3,69526|1,69526|2,69848|1,69848|2,70009|3,70009|1,70009|2,70332|1,70332|2,70574|2,70574|3,70655|0,70816|1,70816|2) - Flip horizontal. This particular pattern in them sections sound flipped, in relating to the rythym. So suggesting to flip those sections since it matches the rythym better ( or at least in my perspective ) - Double notes is Electronic Sounds, and Single note is Snare Drum Sound


01:33:235 (93235|2) - Drum. Double note maybe? in first and second column - There drum beat is same as from 01:22:590 - to 01:32:913 -

01:44:122 (104122|1,104122|0,104203|3,104364|1,104364|2,104687|2,104687|1,104848|3,104848|2,104848|1,105171|2,105171|1,105413|3,105413|2,105493|0,105655|2,105655|1,105977|2,105977|1,106139|3,106139|2,106139|1,106461|2,106461|1,106703|1,106703|0,106784|3,106945|2,106945|1,107268|2,107268|1,107429|0,107429|2,107429|1,107751|3,107751|2,107993|2,107993|1,108074|3) - Also, flip horizontal. Same reason - Double notes is Electronic Sounds, and Single note is Snare Drum Sound

SPOILER

01:49:284 (109284|1,109284|0,109364|3,109526|2,109526|1,109848|2,109848|1,110009|3,110009|2,110009|1,110332|2,110332|1,110574|3,110574|2,110655|0,110816|2,110816|1,111139|2,111139|1,111300|0,111300|2,111300|1,111622|2,111622|1,111864|1,111864|0,111945|3,112106|2,112106|1) -

I'm not so confident in the insane diff, but a certain region really bugged me out

suggestion maybe in insane diff

01:12:268 (72268|3) - this point onward to 01:17:268 (77268|3) - kinda late by 1/2 beat. I erased the 1/2 region then shift all the notes after it down and kinda like it more. Also, repositioned the LNs to this shape and it matches the music better. - 1/2 region is Fast Marimba Sounds, and LNs are same thing as from 01:01:945 - to 01:12:268 - , difference is single LNs

So... overall looks would be like this

second suggestion

01:29:445 (89445|1) - pattern remap. thinking of this pattern so it doesn't feel bland - That sound is Fast Marimba sounds, it paly 3 step up consistently, that pattern is which I appear it

The rest pattern after 01:33:155 (93155|0) - can also be improved with similar ascending-descending pattern - all pattern is appear to ascending, If i replace some pattern to descending, pattern will not be match with music :3

Overall, it's a great and enjoyable map
almost got perfect on insane aaagghh XD

Ayato_k wrote:

Hi from my ModQueue ! o/

[Easy]

01:21:300 (81300|0,81300|3,81945|0) - This pattern reminds me of the autoconverts one, i was a bit disturbed >< - Adjusted
02:05:332 (125332|1,125574|1,125816|1) - I think you should move those 3 objects on an other column, i find it uncomfortable because of the previous object being on the same column 02:05:009 (125009|1) - Fixed

02:07:590 (127590|1,127913|1,128155|1,128397|1) - same - Fixed
02:10:171 (130171|1,130493|1,130735|1,130977|1) - same - Fixed
02:12:751 (132751|1,133074|1,133316|1,133558|1) - same - Fixed
02:15:332 (135332|1,135655|1,135897|1,136139|1) - Well, you get it - Fixed
02:17:913 (137913|1,138235|1,138477|1,138719|1) - ^ - Fixed
02:24:848 - The last 3 inherited points are un-necessary, i see that you are trying to lower the volume , but it only acts on hitsound volume, not the volume of the song itself. since there is no object here you can remove the inherited points - Fixed - Because after 02:24:526 - I write some notes in before, but those notes have been erased, but i forgot to erase Inherited Point xD, Now I can modify it with your help, Thanks!

I'm sorry i can't find anything to say about Normal and Hard diffs. They look very nice and perfectly rankable !
Only thing i would say is That the patterns for the Hard diffs are i think a bit complex for the Star level, but that's just a personnal opinion.

Good luck dude keep on mapping ! i hope it will get ranked !