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Sorafu_old_1

Whirl wrote:

the diff name is: Stop! Stop winny upload!!

when the vocalists would say: Stop Stop! Winny upload!!

(exclamation after both stops, not just the first one)
Literally unplayable
Mint

Whirl wrote:

the diff name is: Stop! Stop winny upload!!

when the vocalists would say: Stop Stop! Winny upload!!

(exclamation after both stops, not just the first one)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TdwT5JlH8gM , around ~3:37 you can see the lyrics (keep in mind this is the official video), it seems it's supposed to be this way.
Joe Castle
O shit, he doin it again
laura-
hey monstrata, i don't really like the spinners at the beginning. did u think about a long ugly slider?
a heart would be funny i think. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6307496
VINXIS
^ i agre

but mak it mor resembling to a heart cuz tht doesnt look lik a heart at all despite the efforts 2 make it look ugly Lol
laura-
yeah that was just an example
Vivyanne

Monstrata wrote:

Pretty Ugly
Froslass
00:58:150 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Why is this symmetric? Everyone knows symmetry is beautiful, so this doesn't apply to the concept of the map. Move one of the notes 1 grid left so it's not symmetrical anymore.
01:24:577 (2,3,4,5) - Same here.
Kujinn

Monstrata wrote:

Pretty Ugly
edit: new page hype
pimp
i'm certainly not the 1st to say that, but would be awesome if someone map only from 02:57:257 (1) - until the end

the ugly part would still count as intro, right? https://osu.ppy.sh/s/3959
laura-

pimpG wrote:

i'm certainly not the 1st to say that, but would be awesome if someone map only from 02:57:257 (1) - until the end

the ugly part would still count as intro, right? https://osu.ppy.sh/s/3959
interesting thought, but the map you linked was made in 2009, I don't think this is possible in 2016 D:
Bara-

-Tatsuo wrote:

pimpG wrote:

i'm certainly not the 1st to say that, but would be awesome if someone map only from 02:57:257 (1) - until the end

the ugly part would still count as intro, right? https://osu.ppy.sh/s/3959
interesting thought, but the map you linked was made in 2009, I don't think this is possible in 2016 D:
It is, but since the drain time will be below 5 minutes, you'll need a full spread if you want to get it ranked
Intros do not count towards the 'Map atleast 80% of the song' rule
fieryrage
04:44:784 (1) - isnt the bpm here 120 lo
Circle
Is it just me? It says drain is less than 5 minutes although actual playtime is 300.15 seconds... it says 288 seconds on editor too

https://puu.sh/rLCUm/66ff92156f.png
Lunicia
sum1 explain what a stop stop winny upload is :(
capes-

Circle wrote:

Is it just me? It says drain is less than 5 minutes although actual playtime is 300.15 seconds... it says 288 seconds on editor too
The spinners at the start and at the end don't count towards the drain time IIRC
rc fox

Xendogenesis wrote:

sum1 explain what a stop stop winny upload is :(
Pretty sure Winny is some old pirating site and they're telling you not to upload to it or something idk
C00L

Xendogenesis wrote:

sum1 explain what a stop stop winny upload is :(
it's the lyrics in the song...
Lunicia

C00L wrote:

Xendogenesis wrote:

sum1 explain what a stop stop winny upload is :(
it's the lyrics in the song...
i know it is, but what does it mean?
Joe Castle
winny is a japanese filesharing program, regulary used to share illegal stuff
Lunicia
how come whenever i enter the map in the editor all i hear is ear rape
quaternary
Is it just me, or is the timing is a little bit late starting from 03:53:600 ?

I get lots of 100s and if I play the song in the editor, it doesn't match well. Especially the reverse arrow on 04:33:754 (1) - , it sounds super late.

Edit: You might also want to use a custom sound to mute the sliderticks on 04:45:311 (1) -
Sotarks
New BNG rules.

RIP A-L-I-E-N xd
melloe
Meteo L-Drago
03:18:650 (4,1) - fix stack lol xdxdxdx
Peydey
we're back!
Weedy
stop stop winny upload
Ancelysia
stop winny
AchsanLovers
2020 mapping style?
Jonis221
.
Loctav
Loved as per mapper's request.
_handholding


lol
_Meep_

Kisses wrote:



lol
SnowNiNo_

Kisses wrote:



lol
diraimur

Kisses wrote:



lol
puxtu

Kisses wrote:



lol
Seni

Kisses wrote:



lol
worst fl player
I'll rather stick a pencil up my nose and slam myself on the desk then listen to this anymore.
Ornsteins Gate

Kisses wrote:



lol
fieryrage
damn i forgot how many people hated this map Lomao
Ideal
i dont think anyones gonna assume this is loved once they look at the user rating
riktoi

L-a-m-e-y [ B ] wrote:

I'll rather stick a pencil up my nose and slam myself on the desk then listen to this anymore.
-sandAI
I thought the loved section was for community 'loved' maps... ? What the fuck is this. No more than .1% of the population that has seen this map have actually liked it, so why should this even be in the loved section? I like the whole SR shit so that way more experienced people can 'cast votes' towards the maps they want to see, but I feel like there should be some background inspection on if the map is actually liked by the community. Also, I feel like self starring a song completely takes away the feeling of the whole 'community' feel. This isn't the only map loved atm with most of the stars supplied by the creator itself.

Start the flame war again, nothing will get fixed for sure but I just wanted to get my point across.
Topic Starter
Monstrata
Loctav loved this map, therefore your argument is invalid!
AchsanLovers

Monstrata wrote:

For Approval
aaaa, it's loved now T_T
wanna see cookiezi play this
Nelly

-Vanilla wrote:

blah
I dont get it, 2016 is over lol
riktoi

-Vanilla wrote:

b
since this map had 100+ SP and 30+ favorites, wouldn't it be apparent that someone would be glad that this got into loved?
Tanomoshii Nekojou
Please monstrata sama continue making this kind of maps~... <3
Scarlet Evans
Good luck, if you try to rank it someday!
AFlyingRhino
Damn, 41 kudos and no rank :///
Haxwill
Don't hate on map, is gud!
Haxwill
Descriptive guide on how to complete level!
Step 1.) Go to "mod selection"
step 2.) Turn on "No Fail"
step 3.) turn on "Halftime" (optional)
step 4.) Start the level
step 5.) Finish level
Caput Mortuum
Better guide:
1. Press F1
2. Press V (or B idk)
3. Start this song
4. ???
5. Profit!
Tanomoshii Nekojou
still waiting to be ranked.... ;w;
this will be a ctb pp farming monster map uwu
Nao Tomori
[this is a loved map why am i modding]
00:19:486 (1) - minor but wouldnt it make sense to separate these more visually cuz drums

00:55:579 (1) - makes sense to have flow break here right? but it's still a ccw cursor motion

00:59:444 - how come these spacings are now larger than the phrase right before? like this is looking like quaver to me >.> increase in spacing but same in song

01:24:363 (1) - shouldnt this b a repeat slider too

01:43:490 (1,2) - add more gray points

02:39:463 (10,1) - you should rearrange this pattern a bit so that these are stacked - it's done that way the other times, and a 1/1 jump here is kinda weird

04:37:276 (3,1) - see if you can avoid this overlap?
Tsukioka Kogane
Seems this is coming back? (Nao's mod)

P.D.: This thread is pure gold, I loved it from the beginning to the end :D
Pachiru

MrMenda wrote:

Seems this is coming back? (Nao's mod)

P.D.: This thread is pure gold, I loved it from the beginning to the end :D
he is just memeing
Aurele
we never know
pishifat
no memes here

unloved as requested
Natsu

pishifat wrote:

no memes here

unloved as requested
wew
Topic Starter
Monstrata

Naotoshi wrote:

[this is a loved map why am i modding]
00:19:486 (1) - minor but wouldnt it make sense to separate these more visually cuz drums Can't really separate them xP. I think it's fine as is.

00:55:579 (1) - makes sense to have flow break here right? but it's still a ccw cursor motion The whole section doesn't actually utilize flowbreaks that much. The sliders are set up so that if you use slider-leniency they should actually flow well, which is what you see here when you see ccw cursor motion instead of flowbreak.

00:59:444 - how come these spacings are now larger than the phrase right before? like this is looking like quaver to me >.> increase in spacing but same in song Agreed. Actually some people pointed it out earlier, so I made some more spacing adjustments to make the spacing more justified

01:24:363 (1) - shouldnt this b a repeat slider too No, because the drums kick in here.

01:43:490 (1,2) - add more gray points Yea, did this with some other sliders too.

02:39:463 (10,1) - you should rearrange this pattern a bit so that these are stacked - it's done that way the other times, and a 1/1 jump here is kinda weird Yea agreed. Remapped this pattern.

04:37:276 (3,1) - see if you can avoid this overlap? I can't xP It's blanketing the T, but I changed some of the previous patterns to set up the symmetry a bit better.
wew
Froslass


well.. if you're actually serious about ranking it, I can give it a mod
Topic Starter
Monstrata

Mismagius wrote:

00:58:150 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Why is this symmetric? Everyone knows symmetry is beautiful, so this doesn't apply to the concept of the map. Move one of the notes 1 grid left so it's not symmetrical anymore.
01:24:577 (2,3,4,5) - Same here.
Really true. Fixed both

quaternary wrote:

Is it just me, or is the timing is a little bit late starting from 03:53:600 ? Adjusted offset slightly.

I get lots of 100s and if I play the song in the editor, it doesn't match well. Especially the reverse arrow on 04:33:754 (1) - , it sounds super late. It's on sync with the vocal which iswhat im folllowing given the S T O P sliders xD

Edit: You might also want to use a custom sound to mute the sliderticks on 04:45:311 (1) - Fixed this

fieryrage wrote:

04:44:784 (1) - isnt the bpm here 120 lo
Fixed, it was 114 bpm actually xD

@Mismagius - I think i'm good with mods... I really think 47 pages of discussion is enough lol. You're free to poke me in game though if you really think something needs to be changed.
UndeadCapulet
gogogogo
Girl
heck
Froslass


  1. 00:33:832 (4) - Not sure if this is irrelevant, but red sliderpoint goes 1 pixel offgrid. Better safe than sorry!
  2. 00:35:361 (2,3,1,2,3,4,1) - That old post was actually me just meme'ing, but in this case it really doesn't make sense to make 2 perfect triangles (unless you're memeing as well). Even for beat emphasis purposes, I believe spacing 00:35:790 (1) - more will make this pattern not.. "stand out" in a bad way.
  3. 00:38:784 (5,6) - I know the whole point of the map is to make use of "unusual" or ugly patterns, but from a player standpoint, I'd really like if these two were ctrl+g'd so it's more comfortable to play while keeping the aesthetics like that & not ruining the emphasis. If you apply this, then I suppose ctrl+g'ing (7,8) will be necessary as well.
  4. I'm going to assume that the slightly unadjusted stacks such as 00:44:663 (4,6) - and 00:47:449 (3,1) - are intentional to keep with the map's aesthetic, so I won't really be bugging you with these
  5. 00:53:425 (1,2,3,4) - If you're actually taking my symmetry-meme post seriously, then I guess these should be un-symmetrified as well.
  6. 01:06:090 (1) - and 01:10:902 (1) - and 01:15:702 (1) - I personally feel like the first beat on these should be clickable, as it's a pretty strong one and presents a change in rhythm.
  7. 01:25:434 (6) - Pretty much every slider in all the other occasions of this rhythm were more curved/bizarre to emphasize the scream properly, however this one looks fairly normal. May want to change it up a bit
  8. 01:28:862 (5) - ^ Same. I know inconsistency may be intentional, but in these cases it just feels awkward since it was like 6 times of weird sliders and 2 times of fairly normal sliders.
  9. 01:52:133 (1) - As much as the path is -technically- clear, I tend to misread this slider because of the sharp curve at the start. Personally, I'd like it to be something like this, where it keeps a similar aesthetic while not being as frustrating for the player.
  10. 02:11:659 (2) - Well, this is much more offgrid, but I guess it's not off the playfield. Again, better safe than sorry! Anyways, my big issue here is that this slider is pretty much perfectly blanketing with the previous one, and this looks... aesthetically nice. Not memeing here, but it kinda contrasts a bit with the rest of the map, since I believe it's the only time where it happens.
  11. 02:27:612 (1) - Similar issue to 01:52, but in this case, well, it's kinda deserving of an unusual shape.
  12. 02:30:492 (8) - Same issue, but ugh I just keep sliderbreaking here. Honestly I feel like this doesn't need to be emphasized so much with the shape you're using, IMO it wouldn't be too bad if you just used a similar shape as the other sliders in the combo.
  13. 02:44:569 (1) - For the intensity of the song, this slider seems fairly simple in my opinion. Maybe make it a more exotic shape, like all the others in this section? This one really stands out.
Rest is the normal part where things get pretty consistent and there's not anything important to mention there, I guess

good luck
Topic Starter
Monstrata

Mismagius wrote:



  1. 00:33:832 (4) - Not sure if this is irrelevant, but red sliderpoint goes 1 pixel offgrid. Better safe than sorry! Thats fine.
  2. 00:35:361 (2,3,1,2,3,4,1) - That old post was actually me just meme'ing, but in this case it really doesn't make sense to make 2 perfect triangles (unless you're memeing as well). Even for beat emphasis purposes, I believe spacing 00:35:790 (1) - more will make this pattern not.. "stand out" in a bad way. These are fine xP. Not literally everything has to be messed up. It's actually good that these aren't messy yet so you can see the structure actually breaking apart.
  3. 00:38:784 (5,6) - I know the whole point of the map is to make use of "unusual" or ugly patterns, but from a player standpoint, I'd really like if these two were ctrl+g'd so it's more comfortable to play while keeping the aesthetics like that & not ruining the emphasis. If you apply this, then I suppose ctrl+g'ing (7,8) will be necessary as well. No i disagree, keeping them like this is better for play. It's got better flow and plays on wide angle movement that slowly becomes bigger and sharper.
  4. I'm going to assume that the slightly unadjusted stacks such as 00:44:663 (4,6) - and 00:47:449 (3,1) - are intentional to keep with the map's aesthetic, so I won't really be bugging you with these Yea.
  5. 00:53:425 (1,2,3,4) - If you're actually taking my symmetry-meme post seriously, then I guess these should be un-symmetrified as well. This is fine imo because theres not enough symmetry to make it feel like a pattern. also the entry and ext movement going to this and comout out of this pattern are not symmetrical so the effect is really lost imo,
  6. 01:06:090 (1) - and 01:10:902 (1) - and 01:15:702 (1) - I personally feel like the first beat on these should be clickable, as it's a pretty strong one and presents a change in rhythm. I still want enough time for players to be able to spin at a relatively slower speed. The current time frame doesn't allow for a lot of spin time and forcing players to spin extrmeely fast to get 300 on these sounds isn't good. The forcing of high speed movement doesn't really fit xp
  7. 01:25:434 (6) - Pretty much every slider in all the other occasions of this rhythm were more curved/bizarre to emphasize the scream properly, however this one looks fairly normal. May want to change it up a bit It's necessary in order to establish structure being broken as the vocals intensify.
  8. 01:28:862 (5) - ^ Same. I know inconsistency may be intentional, but in these cases it just feels awkward since it was like 6 times of weird sliders and 2 times of fairly normal sliders. ^ The shift begins at 01:30:362 - for example.
  9. 01:52:133 (1) - As much as the path is -technically- clear, I tend to misread this slider because of the sharp curve at the start. Personally, I'd like it to be something like this, where it keeps a similar aesthetic while not being as frustrating for the player. Okay changed it.
  10. 02:11:659 (2) - Well, this is much more offgrid, but I guess it's not off the playfield. Again, better safe than sorry! Anyways, my big issue here is that this slider is pretty much perfectly blanketing with the previous one, and this looks... aesthetically nice. Not memeing here, but it kinda contrasts a bit with the rest of the map, since I believe it's the only time where it happens. Made it not perfectly blanket, but the slider is fine offgrid...
  11. 02:27:612 (1) - Similar issue to 01:52, but in this case, well, it's kinda deserving of an unusual shape. You kinda answered it. This is fine.
  12. 02:30:492 (8) - Same issue, but ugh I just keep sliderbreaking here. Honestly I feel like this doesn't need to be emphasized so much with the shape you're using, IMO it wouldn't be too bad if you just used a similar shape as the other sliders in the combo. This is fine. If you sliderbreak then it's just you honestly xP.
  13. 02:44:569 (1) - For the intensity of the song, this slider seems fairly simple in my opinion. Maybe make it a more exotic shape, like all the others in this section? This one really stands out. The shape doesn't really create more intensity anyways xP. I think the curve-based shape is fine, and using red nodes and bumps isn't necessary, nor does that contribute to the effect you want anyways imo.
Rest is the normal part where things get pretty consistent and there's not anything important to mention there, I guess

good luck
Thanks!
7ambda
technically, this isn't at least 5:00 drain time since you've got over four seconds of silence after the second spinner
Caput Mortuum
oh wow
Topic Starter
Monstrata

F1r3tar wrote:

technically, this isn't at least 5:00 drain time since you've got over four seconds of silence after the second spinner


https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GXtHd25RyV4
Nao Tomori

Pachiru wrote:

MrMenda wrote:

Seems this is coming back? (Nao's mod)

P.D.: This thread is pure gold, I loved it from the beginning to the end :D
he is just memeing

haaaaa
UndeadCapulet
pls dont post to reddit
Hobbes2
hype, love this map
Yuii-
00:00:838 (1) - would rather not have this as a normal addition, too much volume for what you're mapping to. either go with soft sampleset or run a lower volume. could also not silence the sliderslider, that's quite e
also, both sliderticks and sliderslides being silent at the beginning pogchamp
feedback there pls
01:01:151 (3,4,5,6) - no contrast between 01:01:580 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ? hey, this was mapped in 2016!!
01:24:577 (2) - minor but i thought you were aiming for non-repeat vocal sliders with new combos and stuffzzz
01:33:991 - you better lower the volume of the dumbos ticks
01:37:737 (6) - you'd probably say how you're trying to map it consistently with 01:36:022 (5) - but (6) sounds actually very different, both guitar, drums and vocals have a bigger prominence at the white tick. so maybe a 1/2 repeat?
02:13:776 (1,2,3) - too much
03:13:946 - you 5%

you know what to do
Topic Starter
Monstrata

Yuii- wrote:

00:00:838 (1) - would rather not have this as a normal addition, too much volume for what you're mapping to. either go with soft sampleset or run a lower volume. could also not silence the sliderslider, that's quite e
also, both sliderticks and sliderslides being silent at the beginning pogchamp reduced the volume to 20%
feedback there pls
01:01:151 (3,4,5,6) - no contrast between 01:01:580 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ? hey, this was mapped in 2016!! I made the jumps smaller here and more rotational to contrast with the vertical/zigzag movement of the later jumps.
01:24:577 (2) - minor but i thought you were aiming for non-repeat vocal sliders with new combos and stuffzzz Nao convinced me otherwise,
cuz basically even tho there's a drum beat, the vocal doesn't kick in until the measure after which is what really counts in terms of rhythmic contrast here.

01:33:991 - you better lower the volume of the dumbos ticks reduced the volume to 35%
01:37:737 (6) - you'd probably say how you're trying to map it consistently with 01:36:022 (5) - but (6) sounds actually very different, both guitar, drums and vocals have a bigger prominence at the white tick. so maybe a 1/2 repeat? I'd prefer the 1/1 slider here just because the vocal is snapped rather weirdly, and I think the current bend helps capture the sound pretty well. Also the 1/1 rhythm is more consistent with the rest of the structure here.
Lastly it creates a buffer for the 1/4 kickslider section afterwards

02:13:776 (1,2,3) - too much Yea, made the jumps smaller
03:13:946 - you 5% Done

you know what to do
Thanks yuii ^^
aesu
good luck nathan2
-Sh1n1-
:o let's go!!
sahuang
wtf
Linada
Finally :D

edit:
01:38:915 (1,2,3,4,5) - imo they don't really fit as kicksliders since they're on clear 1/2 since 01:38:058 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - are on incomprehensible screamings

yeah 👀
SnowNiNo_

Monstrata wrote:

For Loctav's Love.
Sotarks
Go go go! *Grabbing popcorns*
Alyseka
Can you explain the reasoning for AR 9.7 instead of 10, unless you want this to be a reading challenge.

You've probably mentioned why in the previous 47 pages somewhere, but fuc that
Mini Gaunt

Strykerto wrote:

Can you explain the reasoning for AR 9.7 instead of 10, unless you want this to be a reading challenge.

You've probably mentioned why in the previous 47 pages somewhere, but fuc that
Iirc something about ar 10 being to much for the whinny upload part
SnowNiNo_

Strykerto wrote:

Can you explain the reasoning for AR 9.7 instead of 10, unless you want this to be a reading challenge.

You've probably mentioned why in the previous 47 pages somewhere, but fuc that
if u look through the thread ull find the answer i believe :>
Shmiklak
Oh, you are trying to rank it again. Best of luck owo
Alyseka

SnowNiNo_ wrote:

if u look through the thread ull find the answer i believe :>
I'd rather have a more productive day tbh :>

Mini Gaunt wrote:

Iirc something about ar 10 being to much for the whinny upload part
This is probably the reason why, even though i think its a pretty dumb reason. Ur making 80% of the map difficult to read just so 20% is easier to read, and anyone who can pass that far can read AR 10 anyway. Basically, i find AR 9.7 pretty pointless unless you want it to be challenging to read.

I'm rambling about AR smh

Regardless, GL Monstrata with Rank!
Nao Tomori
welp
Kalibe
rip
hi-mei
thanks god it didnt happen

i was about to jump off the bridge, but god saved me
Ankanogradiel
Good God almost 50 pages of posts
Kaine
Aurele
You can do it!
1597534268
dooooooooooo it :) :) :)
defiance
rank this pls
Kynan
Yeah the shitty reason given for AR9.7 makes the rest really, REALLY annoying to play.
RatCoffee

Strykerto wrote:

SnowNiNo_ wrote:

if u look through the thread ull find the answer i believe :>
I'd rather have a more productive day tbh :>

Mini Gaunt wrote:

Iirc something about ar 10 being to much for the whinny upload part
This is probably the reason why, even though i think its a pretty dumb reason. Ur making 80% of the map difficult to read just so 20% is easier to read, and anyone who can pass that far can read AR 10 anyway. Basically, i find AR 9.7 pretty pointless unless you want it to be challenging to read.

I'm rambling about AR smh

Regardless, GL Monstrata with Rank!
I found this on the second page:

Monstrata wrote:

To make the high bpm part even more messy. The central theme of this map is to create really messy sliders and patterns during the metal section, and then regress to my usual pretty and well-structured mapping style for the moe/anime stop stop winny upload section. So essentially, ugly section, then pretty section. Low AR's allow for more objects on the map, which contributes to more messiness in the metal section, and it makes the later half of the map less forced and more normal/acceptable/natural.

Hope that covers it. I might increase it to AR 10 again if enough people complain about the readability aspect though xD.
Topic Starter
Monstrata
Changing to AR 10. I've received a lot of feedback while this map was loved and indeed, AR was the most popular complaint so I think that trumps my original reasons for using AR 9.7. I'll push the change when I get home, hope that satisfies some people~ I was actually going to change it earlier but I forgot so I guess thanks for reminding me.
Kynan
Aight thanks
Topic Starter
Monstrata

Linada wrote:

Finally :D

edit:
01:38:915 (1,2,3,4,5) - imo they don't really fit as kicksliders since they're on clear 1/2 since 01:38:058 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - are on incomprehensible screamings

yeah 👀
I realy think the kicksliders fit the music here. Using 1/2 circles is the exact same rhythm, the kicksliders add the emphatic and visual effect that really matches the song here lol.
Hobbes2
Hello I've come to save humanity

I actually irc'd with monstrata, but i wrote down all the points I made for clarity since it makes it easier for everyone to see whats changed without digging through a chatlog. ill let monstrata respond to this as usual so you guys can know why he rejected stuff that he did. edit: some stuff here also wasnt in the irc lol

00:23:131 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think you could gradually make these more "ugly", (same with the later ones 00:24:842 (1,2,3,4,5) - etc etc) to ease into the "ugly" concept, instead of shooting it out all at once with 00:27:409 (1) - this mess. The vocals also kinda have that effect over time, so it would fit in that regard too. you do this later too (01:24:577 (2) -section)
00:31:903 (3) - 00:31:475 (1,2,4) - are all quite clear in that the movement is downward, but because is particularly smooshed, i'd make 3 a bit more linear (while still ugly of course xd)
00:36:111 - thought it weird that you skipped this vocal but the next measure maps it (00:37:715 (2,3,4))
00:43:260 (5,1) - could be emphasized better, compared to these other downbeats
00:48:192 (3) - recommend splitting this into two, I like the repeat itself for the scream (+ the guitar is a bit more intense), but like the other guitar sounds, there's two of them on each white tick. so like things on 00:46:484 (3,4), etc, two repeat sliders would fit better here. like -
https://puu.sh/wP0rU/189f2a99b4.jpg
^Regarding this, it might also make sense to do it for the ones at like 00:29:347 (5), 00:31:049 (5), etc, since the guitar sound is the same.
00:52:107 (1) - could be broken into circle+1/2 slider, consistent with...the rest of them in the area lol
00:53:096 (2) - this slider could be curved upward instead, its not a huge change but this would improve the flow from 1-2-3 in terms of allowing for better slider leniency. pretty optional lol
01:40:629 (1,2) - this gonna sound dumb but make 01:40:629 (1) - uglier than 2 because 1 still has the nasty screaming vocal whereas 2 goes back to the other one
01:46:197 (3,1) - move these closer? would be better for playability because of the timing. side note, 01:50:506 (3,1) - has a similar issue but the timing isnt as bad so..up to you on this one. same with 01:52:047 (3,1) -
01:47:749 - shouldnt there be something mapped here? you skipped a sound in the guitar lol. not a lot of time until the offset shift so i can understand not mapping this tho, just wanna make sure its intentional
02:50:117 (2) - too clean, its part of the "ugly" combo and should be ugly
02:55:471 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - I recommend starting this sequence on the top left, (so like 02:55:682 (1,2) - would be the first in the pattern), biggets reason is that the momentum the player has from 02:53:686 (1) - this super fast movement is better transitioned into the jump pattern if the first jumps are parallel to the slider. hope this makes sense lol, as it is now the momentum is kinda lost in the sharp switch in the angle.
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