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Taeyang feat. G-Dragon - I Need a Girl
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Text images for the storyboard!!
They're named according to the lines on the lyrics file above. "L4a, L4b, L4c" means they're on the same line.
Hope you like it! :3
Download: Lyrics.rar
They're named according to the lines on the lyrics file above. "L4a, L4b, L4c" means they're on the same line.
Hope you like it! :3
Download: Lyrics.rar
// Beuchi
oh wait.. I didn't expect to using pronunciation when I took a request from Keksi. I wrote it just for distinction of Korean word.
I'm not perfect at pronunciation rule. So it isn't flawless pronunciation. Should I fix it?
Pronunciation rule of Korean is very very hard. >_<
oh wait.. I didn't expect to using pronunciation when I took a request from Keksi. I wrote it just for distinction of Korean word.
I'm not perfect at pronunciation rule. So it isn't flawless pronunciation. Should I fix it?
Pronunciation rule of Korean is very very hard. >_<
Topic Starter
Beuchi-chan wrote:
Text images for the storyboard!!
They're named according to the lines on the lyrics file above. "L4a, L4b, L4c" means they're on the same line.
Hope you like it! :3
[attachment=0:fdc86]Lyrics.rar[/attachment:fdc86]
Thank you so much , i love it :3
Aqu;i esta mi parte semi completa. >.<
Intenté conversar contigo in-game, pero parece que tu conección no anda muy bien @.@
Pués el mapa en si esta completo, solo que no he agregado los hitsounds. Igual lo dejo aquí para que lo vayas viendo y me digas si te gusta o si tienes alguna sugerencia :3
Download: Taeyang - I Need A Girl (Feat. G-Dragon) (_llkey_18) [Lizbeth's Hard].osu
Intenté conversar contigo in-game, pero parece que tu conección no anda muy bien @.@
Pués el mapa en si esta completo, solo que no he agregado los hitsounds. Igual lo dejo aquí para que lo vayas viendo y me digas si te gusta o si tienes alguna sugerencia :3
Download: Taeyang - I Need A Girl (Feat. G-Dragon) (_llkey_18) [Lizbeth's Hard].osu
here u go...it still sounds weird between those 2parts...
02:47:053 (1) - 02:55:334 (1)
anyways. enjoy..
Download: Taeyang - I Need A Girl (Feat. G-Dragon) (_llkey_18) [simplistiC's Hard].osu
02:47:053 (1) - 02:55:334 (1)
anyways. enjoy..
Download: Taeyang - I Need A Girl (Feat. G-Dragon) (_llkey_18) [simplistiC's Hard].osu
timing help
Offset seems fine to me
But while I am here mp3's are no longer allowed to be 320kbps, they must be between 128-256kbps, so either find a new one or check my signature
But while I am here mp3's are no longer allowed to be 320kbps, they must be between 128-256kbps, so either find a new one or check my signature
Try this for second red line...
BPM: 113.000
Offset: 167,000
Btw, delte .osb, also I think you should change the background from png to jpg to reduce the size.
And star
BPM: 113.000
Offset: 167,000
Btw, delte .osb, also I think you should change the background from png to jpg to reduce the size.
And star
Disculpa la espera ;_;
Download: Taeyang - I Need A Girl (Feat. G-Dragon) (_llkey_18) [Lizbeth's Hard].osu
Download: Taeyang - I Need A Girl (Feat. G-Dragon) (_llkey_18) [Lizbeth's Hard].osu
...That offbeat section.
The first and third section are fine, but that second section is anyone's guess
Here is what I tried: (not sure if the current section is better, please don't give kds unless you use this timing)
BPM: 114.5
Offset:167,040
Still, you are better off making this section a break.
Also as James said, you need to change the mp3.
The first and third section are fine, but that second section is anyone's guess
Here is what I tried: (not sure if the current section is better, please don't give kds unless you use this timing)
BPM: 114.5
Offset:167,040
Still, you are better off making this section a break.
Also as James said, you need to change the mp3.
Topic Starter
thanks lizbeth for kds star also thanks all you guys for timing help ^_^blissfulyoshi wrote:
...That offbeat section.
The first and third section are fine, but that second section is anyone's guess
Here is what I tried: (not sure if the current section is better, please don't give kds unless you use this timing)
BPM: 114.5
Offset:167,040
Still, you are better off making this section a break. agreed ( so kds for it )
Also as James said, you need to change the mp3.
first timing: correct
second timing: 175374 (give or take -10 to +10 ms)
last offset: 208811 not sure!
second timing: 175374 (give or take -10 to +10 ms)
last offset: 208811 not sure!
Una parte se daño con el segundo offset, aqui esta arreglada :<
Fixed version
Download: Taeyang - I Need A Girl (Feat. G-Dragon) (_llkey_18) [Lizbeth's Hard].osu
Fixed version
Download: Taeyang - I Need A Girl (Feat. G-Dragon) (_llkey_18) [Lizbeth's Hard].osu
with yoshi's timing..+ some fixes..
Download: Taeyang - I Need A Girl (Feat. G-Dragon) (_llkey_18) [simplistiC's Hard].osu
Download: Taeyang - I Need A Girl (Feat. G-Dragon) (_llkey_18) [simplistiC's Hard].osu
Topic Starter
Todo arregladoLizbeth wrote:
Una parte se daño con el segundo offset, aqui esta arreglada :<
Fixed version
Timing mod on request:
016,760 - A +20 should sound much better (so 16,780).
175,380 - Sounds fine.
208,824 - Very wrong. The bpm changes here (to something like 100 and +30 offset), but it's a bit hard to approximate since he's slowing down... I suggest just starting the spinner in simplistic's diff earlier instead of trying to have normal beats there.
PS: Why is there an .osb in the folder? There isn't even a sprite in the folder that the .osb corresponds to. o-o;
016,760 - A +20 should sound much better (so 16,780).
175,380 - Sounds fine.
208,824 - Very wrong. The bpm changes here (to something like 100 and +30 offset), but it's a bit hard to approximate since he's slowing down... I suggest just starting the spinner in simplistic's diff earlier instead of trying to have normal beats there.
PS: Why is there an .osb in the folder? There isn't even a sprite in the folder that the .osb corresponds to. o-o;
Wenas~
[General]
-Falta el preview point en todas las diff (Timing -> Set Current Position...)
Emm eso, no me gusta mucho este tipo de canciones pero creo q esta bien mapeada y no encontre nada malo aparte del preview point.
Star~
[General]
-Falta el preview point en todas las diff (Timing -> Set Current Position...)
Emm eso, no me gusta mucho este tipo de canciones pero creo q esta bien mapeada y no encontre nada malo aparte del preview point.
Star~
As your request.
Read this first for the icon explanation.
- [?] Asking for a second thought.
- [!] Fatal error. You have to fix this for sure.
- [No icon] Only a suggestion.
Read this first for the icon explanation.
- [?] Asking for a second thought.
- [!] Fatal error. You have to fix this for sure.
- [No icon] Only a suggestion.
[General]
Nice song.
[Normal]
-- Change countdown offset to 2.
-- May I know why you lower the volume of some notes? It will be better if all the almost-silenced notes become clap or something sounds like clap (see simplistiC's diff).
01:37:127 (5) - Silence the end of the slider.
01:37:910 (1) - Silence the end of the spinner.
01:39:736 (1) - Silence this if necessary.
Overall, nice diff.
[Lizbeth's Hard]
Cool :3
[Hard]
-- Change countdown offset to 2.
-- I don't really like the inconsistent and sudden jumps but, well as long as it's okay to be played..
-- I found some unnecessary new combo and some too-long-combos. But, ignore this. It's okay the way it is.
-- May I know why you lower the volume of some notes? They will be better if all the almost-silenced notes become clap or something sounds like clap (see simplistiC's diff).
01:15:997 (2) - Make this pattern neatly. Move (2) one tiny grid right.
01:20:171 (7) - Add new combo.
01:23:562 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:33:475 (8) - Isn't this better if moved up 1 tiny grid? *lol nazi orz*
01:37:127 (8) - Silence the end of the slider.
01:37:910 (1) - Silence the end of the spinner.
01:39:736 (1,1,1) - Silence this if necessary.
01:39:866 (1,1) - Unnecessary new combos.
[simplistiC's Hard]
There are a lot of long combos here, some of then even reach 16. Consider break some of them or maybe all of them into tinier combos?
Star.Nice song.
[Normal]
-- Change countdown offset to 2.
-- May I know why you lower the volume of some notes? It will be better if all the almost-silenced notes become clap or something sounds like clap (see simplistiC's diff).
01:37:127 (5) - Silence the end of the slider.
01:37:910 (1) - Silence the end of the spinner.
01:39:736 (1) - Silence this if necessary.
Overall, nice diff.
[Lizbeth's Hard]
Cool :3
[Hard]
-- Change countdown offset to 2.
-- I don't really like the inconsistent and sudden jumps but, well as long as it's okay to be played..
-- I found some unnecessary new combo and some too-long-combos. But, ignore this. It's okay the way it is.
-- May I know why you lower the volume of some notes? They will be better if all the almost-silenced notes become clap or something sounds like clap (see simplistiC's diff).
01:15:997 (2) - Make this pattern neatly. Move (2) one tiny grid right.
01:20:171 (7) - Add new combo.
01:23:562 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:33:475 (8) - Isn't this better if moved up 1 tiny grid? *lol nazi orz*
01:37:127 (8) - Silence the end of the slider.
01:37:910 (1) - Silence the end of the spinner.
01:39:736 (1,1,1) - Silence this if necessary.
01:39:866 (1,1) - Unnecessary new combos.
[simplistiC's Hard]
There are a lot of long combos here, some of then even reach 16. Consider break some of them or maybe all of them into tinier combos?
Hi,
Suggestion:
Set the preview point at 01:39:736
Nice Song,
Star~
Suggestion:
Set the preview point at 01:39:736
Nice Song,
Star~
Here is my shitty mod ;D
[simplistiC's Hard]
00:23:562 (11) - New combo
00:45:997 (1,2) - [Nazi]Move 1grid right ?
[Hard]
00:32:171 (6) - Add note ?
00:44:953 (1) - Remove new combo
01:37:910 (1) - Move 1/4 earlier and end it at the same spot it was
[Lizbeth's Hard]
02:16:780 (6) - Spacing
Star~
[simplistiC's Hard]
00:23:562 (11) - New combo
00:45:997 (1,2) - [Nazi]Move 1grid right ?
[Hard]
00:32:171 (6) - Add note ?
00:44:953 (1) - Remove new combo
01:37:910 (1) - Move 1/4 earlier and end it at the same spot it was
[Lizbeth's Hard]
02:16:780 (6) - Spacing
Star~
Fiiiinally! I finished! x3
Extract all the files on the folder of your song. I hope you like it!
If there's something wrong just tell me
Download: Storyboard.rar
Extract all the files on the folder of your song. I hope you like it!
If there's something wrong just tell me
Download: Storyboard.rar
Topic Starter
Beuchi-chan wrote:
Fiiiinally! I finished! x3
Extract all the files on the folder of your song. I hope you like it!
If there's something wrong just tell me
Thank you so much beuchi , i really like it
YOUR THE BEST ^_^
Hey there 
Make an easy? This diff feels too hard for the easiest difficulty, so an Easy would be nice. Besides, This is over 3 star difficulty so people would moan at you for that (That doesn't bother me, but this is still too hard to be the easiest difficulty
)
That, and the fact that you have 1 Normal, and 3 Hard's :V
The map itself is pretty good though. Seemed fine to me.
[LIZBETH'S HARD]
I would have mapped to the lyrics a bit more in the first 2 verses (00:16:779 - 00:49:649, and 01:14:953 - 01:37:127), but the way you mapped it still fits nicely. Fun stuff.
[HARD]
Time to rag on all those jumps
00:33:997 (1,2) - Remove this jump? I really don't like this. It feels completely random to me, since it isn't really mapped to anything.
00:39:475 (7,8) - ^
00:50:432 (3,4,5,6,7) - Now this shouldn't be here. The chorus works fine without jumps like these, As well as the song being really calm here, there isn't any vocals or anything that they could be mapped to. so can you remove these jumps as well?
03:02:684 (9,10) - Same here. Remove this one too?
03:09:988 (5,6,7,8) - And here. For such a calm song. These jumps are rather unnecessary imo.
Also feels kinda overmapped due to all those triplets you used. They are not bad enough to warrant a mention though. Those jumps were much worse. Sorry
[SIMPLISTIC'S HARD]
Look at all those green lines. It could almost be a christmas decoration.
As for the map, I feel the same way with this with what I feel about Hard. This is just way too jumpy for the song imo. Of course, I know you like mapping with jumps, but for this song, It really doesn't need it. It also felt too streamy. There are too many triplets and such adding fake difficulty. Sorry SimplistiC, I don't like this one.
The lower end difficulties (Difficulty), and Lizzies Hard are pretty damn nice. Well made and pretty fun, but the other 2 difficulties are just too much. A song like this should have a nice, calm, easy map, and these are just too much I'm afraid. Sorry
Due to this, I won't star.
- Your offset feels off. It's pretty late. I got Offset: 16,760 (the first beat might sound off, but the rest of the song sounds perfect with this.)
Make an easy? This diff feels too hard for the easiest difficulty, so an Easy would be nice. Besides, This is over 3 star difficulty so people would moan at you for that (That doesn't bother me, but this is still too hard to be the easiest difficulty
)That, and the fact that you have 1 Normal, and 3 Hard's :V
The map itself is pretty good though. Seemed fine to me.
[LIZBETH'S HARD]
I would have mapped to the lyrics a bit more in the first 2 verses (00:16:779 - 00:49:649, and 01:14:953 - 01:37:127), but the way you mapped it still fits nicely. Fun stuff.
[HARD]
Time to rag on all those jumps
00:33:997 (1,2) - Remove this jump? I really don't like this. It feels completely random to me, since it isn't really mapped to anything.
00:39:475 (7,8) - ^
00:50:432 (3,4,5,6,7) - Now this shouldn't be here. The chorus works fine without jumps like these, As well as the song being really calm here, there isn't any vocals or anything that they could be mapped to. so can you remove these jumps as well?
03:02:684 (9,10) - Same here. Remove this one too?
03:09:988 (5,6,7,8) - And here. For such a calm song. These jumps are rather unnecessary imo.
Also feels kinda overmapped due to all those triplets you used. They are not bad enough to warrant a mention though. Those jumps were much worse. Sorry
[SIMPLISTIC'S HARD]
Look at all those green lines. It could almost be a christmas decoration.
As for the map, I feel the same way with this with what I feel about Hard. This is just way too jumpy for the song imo. Of course, I know you like mapping with jumps, but for this song, It really doesn't need it. It also felt too streamy. There are too many triplets and such adding fake difficulty. Sorry SimplistiC, I don't like this one
.The lower end difficulties (Difficulty), and Lizzies Hard are pretty damn nice. Well made and pretty fun, but the other 2 difficulties are just too much. A song like this should have a nice, calm, easy map, and these are just too much I'm afraid. Sorry
Due to this, I won't star.
Sorry I took so long to get to this. -_-
Anyway, as per your request:
[Storyboard]
There's a Thumbs.db in your storyboard folder - enable viewing of hidden files and delete it and full resubmit.
L8b: I'm not familiar with the language, but does it really start with two "k"s?
L9a and L9a are the same thing pretty much. Please try to reduce the size a bit by reusing similar files.
L9b and L18b
L9c and L18c
There are a few others too but with color changes. See if you can optimize this a little bit, please.
You get this weird border around a lot of your lyrics too:
I'm not sure if it's the same thing that I had issues with, but it may be that you'll need to add a semi-transparent border around each character. :/
[General]
The orange slider track border is really weird looking with a white hit circle overlay. Maybe skin an orange one? Or just change it back to white.
[Normal]
02:53:281 - I kind of expected the spinner to start here instead.
03:31:380 - Can you make this more gradual instead of just suddenly being quiet?
[Lizbeth's Hard]
I love what you did for the chorus'
03:17:553 (3) - Remove whistle from slider slide
03:31:380 - Can you make this more gradual instead of just suddenly being quiet?
[Hard]
01:39:716 (1,1,1) - Eh, don't see the need for these new combos.
02:53:281 - I kind of expected the spinner to start here instead.
03:31:380 - Can you make this more gradual instead of just suddenly being quiet?
[simplistiC's Hard]
Wait... 3 hards? You could easily rename this one to insane due to the streams. Those are easily beyond a hard difficulty.
03:31:380 - Can you make this more gradual instead of just suddenly being quiet?
Nice diff~
'sa good set here.
Anyway, as per your request:
[Storyboard]
There's a Thumbs.db in your storyboard folder - enable viewing of hidden files and delete it and full resubmit.
L8b: I'm not familiar with the language, but does it really start with two "k"s?
L9a and L9a are the same thing pretty much. Please try to reduce the size a bit by reusing similar files.
L9b and L18b
L9c and L18c
There are a few others too but with color changes. See if you can optimize this a little bit, please.
You get this weird border around a lot of your lyrics too:
I'm not sure if it's the same thing that I had issues with, but it may be that you'll need to add a semi-transparent border around each character. :/
[General]
The orange slider track border is really weird looking with a white hit circle overlay. Maybe skin an orange one? Or just change it back to white.
[Normal]
02:53:281 - I kind of expected the spinner to start here instead.
03:31:380 - Can you make this more gradual instead of just suddenly being quiet?
[Lizbeth's Hard]
I love what you did for the chorus'
03:17:553 (3) - Remove whistle from slider slide
03:31:380 - Can you make this more gradual instead of just suddenly being quiet?
[Hard]
01:39:716 (1,1,1) - Eh, don't see the need for these new combos.
02:53:281 - I kind of expected the spinner to start here instead.
03:31:380 - Can you make this more gradual instead of just suddenly being quiet?
[simplistiC's Hard]
Wait... 3 hards? You could easily rename this one to insane due to the streams. Those are easily beyond a hard difficulty.
03:31:380 - Can you make this more gradual instead of just suddenly being quiet?
Nice diff~
'sa good set here.
Delete thumbs from sb folder?
Not sure if I really like the countdown, I guess it can stay
End the first kiai time at the white tick, not blue (same for second) ---on whichever difficulties do this
03:11:814 - kind of odd place to end last kiai
What is with the strange looking border on Tae, cut it off if possible? It looks really odd...
Normal:
mmmmm this passing for the easiest difficulty...looking at star rating/triplets/notes close after spinners
You need to either replace most triplets with sliders, lower AR/OD and in general makes the patterns more simple or make an Easy, people won't be happy if you leave it like this
00:20:412 (6) - move so it is aligned with 4,5 (they don't look aligned to me)
00:53:542 (5,6) - move up to align with end of slider more?
01:01:890 (5,6) - ^
01:15:716 (2,4) - align?
01:29:803 (6) - slant more to the right to align with notes next to it
01:51:977 (2) - wouldn't have this touch slider so much (move down)
02:54:325 (1) - sounds like it should have a hitsound at the end of it maybe just me
Lizbeth's Hard:
could prob nazi some stuff but looks nice
Hard:
00:33:977 (1,2) - odd place for jump
01:00:064 (3,4) - ^
02:24:325 (9,10) - ^
SimplistiC's Hard:
Name this Insane >_>
This difficulty doesn't have a countdown, the others do, make them all the same
On a side note I would prefer if you got a few more modders/MAT's to look at this map before I think about a bubble
But you can have a star~
Not sure if I really like the countdown, I guess it can stay
End the first kiai time at the white tick, not blue (same for second) ---on whichever difficulties do this
03:11:814 - kind of odd place to end last kiai
What is with the strange looking border on Tae, cut it off if possible? It looks really odd...
Normal:
mmmmm this passing for the easiest difficulty...looking at star rating/triplets/notes close after spinners
You need to either replace most triplets with sliders, lower AR/OD and in general makes the patterns more simple or make an Easy, people won't be happy if you leave it like this
00:20:412 (6) - move so it is aligned with 4,5 (they don't look aligned to me)
00:53:542 (5,6) - move up to align with end of slider more?
01:01:890 (5,6) - ^
01:15:716 (2,4) - align?
01:29:803 (6) - slant more to the right to align with notes next to it
01:51:977 (2) - wouldn't have this touch slider so much (move down)
02:54:325 (1) - sounds like it should have a hitsound at the end of it maybe just me
Lizbeth's Hard:
could prob nazi some stuff but looks nice
Hard:
00:33:977 (1,2) - odd place for jump
01:00:064 (3,4) - ^
02:24:325 (9,10) - ^
SimplistiC's Hard:
Name this Insane >_>
This difficulty doesn't have a countdown, the others do, make them all the same
On a side note I would prefer if you got a few more modders/MAT's to look at this map before I think about a bubble
But you can have a star~
support k-pop~ 
~
[General/All Difficulties]
* remove 'Letterbox during breaks' like simplistiC's Insane? look better with those sb ><;
* delete Thumbs.db in /Storyboard, Also viewtopic.php?p=291718#p291718 and do a full submit
[Normal]
* look fine o.o
[Hard]
02:24:586 (10) - look weird, spacing?
[Lizbeth's Hard]
* nice ~
[simplistiC's Insane]
01:54:325 (9) - sound weird =3=! remove sound clap at end of silder?
02:37:629 (8) - remove sound clap?
* remove 'Letterbox during breaks' like simplistiC's Insane? look better with those sb ><;
* delete Thumbs.db in /Storyboard, Also viewtopic.php?p=291718#p291718 and do a full submit
SPOILER
awp wrote:
it's possible you can't see it if you're somehow restricted, so I think a workaround for this is to go again into Tools > Folder Options, and from there, Files and Folders > Make sure "Do not cache thumbnails" is checked. Once it is, select "Apply to All Folders", then hit OK. Then, hopefully, when you delete and re-create the folder, Windows doesn't create another Thumbs.db
I see the rest of the SB has been fixed, though.
So let's kill that Thumbs.db file. Worst comes to worst, try
Run > cmd.exe
del %path-to-song-directory%SBThumbs.db
though I strongly suspect, if you can't see it, it's a permissions error.
[Normal]
* look fine o.o
[Hard]
02:24:586 (10) - look weird, spacing?
[Lizbeth's Hard]
* nice ~
[simplistiC's Insane]
01:54:325 (9) - sound weird =3=! remove sound clap at end of silder?
02:37:629 (8) - remove sound clap?
Topic Starter
Thanks for modding all done ^_^orioncomet wrote:
[General/All Difficulties]
* remove 'Letterbox during breaks' like simplistiC's Insane? look better with those sb ><;
* delete Thumbs.db in /Storyboard, Also viewtopic.php?p=291718#p291718 and do a full submitSPOILERawp wrote:
it's possible you can't see it if you're somehow restricted, so I think a workaround for this is to go again into Tools > Folder Options, and from there, Files and Folders > Make sure "Do not cache thumbnails" is checked. Once it is, select "Apply to All Folders", then hit OK. Then, hopefully, when you delete and re-create the folder, Windows doesn't create another Thumbs.db
I see the rest of the SB has been fixed, though.
So let's kill that Thumbs.db file. Worst comes to worst, try
Run > cmd.exe
del %path-to-song-directory%SBThumbs.db
though I strongly suspect, if you can't see it, it's a permissions error.
[Normal]
* look fine o.o
[Hard]
02:24:586 (10) - look weird, spacing?
[Lizbeth's Hard]
* nice ~
[simplistiC's Insane]
01:54:325 (9) - sound weird =3=! remove sound clap at end of silder?
02:37:629 (8) - remove sound clap?
Offset: +6
Simplistic's Insane:
Andrew, your combos are dumb I'm modding them.
00:54:064 (13) - New combo
00:54:325 (1) - Remove New combo
00:58:238 (15,16,1) - ^
01:02:412 (14,15,1) - ^
01:44:151 (14,15,1) -
01:48:586 (1) - Remove new
01:48:846 (2) - make new
02:01:107 (1) - Remove new
02:01:368 (2) - Make new
02:05:020 (10,11,1) - Remove New combo
02:09:194 (13,14,1) - ^
02:11:281 (10,11,1) - ^
02:15:455 (12,13,1) - ^
02:15:977 (2) - New combo
02:59:293 (7,8,1) -
03:07:640 (7,8,1) -
Get at me on vent if u need halp andrew. Also, WTF son, where are the claps? Don't get the music do em for you, you suck.
Hard:
Just wanna comment on how I don't like the silent notes, you should make the a quiet normal hit. Ask simplistic :<
02:25:890 (13,14,1) -
This is a real pointless mod other than the offset change, so don't kudo
Simplistic's Insane:
Andrew, your combos are dumb I'm modding them.
00:54:064 (13) - New combo
00:54:325 (1) - Remove New combo
00:58:238 (15,16,1) - ^
01:02:412 (14,15,1) - ^
01:44:151 (14,15,1) -
01:48:586 (1) - Remove new
01:48:846 (2) - make new
02:01:107 (1) - Remove new
02:01:368 (2) - Make new
02:05:020 (10,11,1) - Remove New combo
02:09:194 (13,14,1) - ^
02:11:281 (10,11,1) - ^
02:15:455 (12,13,1) - ^
02:15:977 (2) - New combo
02:59:293 (7,8,1) -
03:07:640 (7,8,1) -
Get at me on vent if u need halp andrew. Also, WTF son, where are the claps? Don't get the music do em for you, you suck.
Hard:
Just wanna comment on how I don't like the silent notes, you should make the a quiet normal hit. Ask simplistic :<
02:25:890 (13,14,1) -
This is a real pointless mod other than the offset change, so don't kudo
patrick u suckkk. makin me do work n such. still need hitsound halp on change.
Download: Taeyang - I Need A Girl (Feat. G-Dragon) (_llkey_18) [simplistiC's Insane].osu
Download: Taeyang - I Need A Girl (Feat. G-Dragon) (_llkey_18) [simplistiC's Insane].osu
star~ 
Garven wrote:
[Storyboard]
L8b: I'm not familiar with the language, but does it really start with two "k"s? No idea... oxo; Maybe we need another opinion about the lyrics...
L9a and L9a are the same thing pretty much. Please try to reduce the size a bit by reusing similar files.
L9b and L18b
L9c and L18c
There are a few others too but with color changes. See if you can optimize this a little bit, please.
The problem with this is that the images aren't a plain colour, so the colour event doesn't work. I've tried to make the images on grayscale, but I still can't get the same colour x_x
You get this weird border around a lot of your lyrics too:
I'm not sure if it's the same thing that I had issues with, but it may be that you'll need to add a semi-transparent border around each character. :/
I don't think it's really needed for all the images, I can only see it when the background is black, but it's fixed :3
Sorry for being a bit late xwx; All is fixed! Replace this with your atual Storyboard folder :3James2250 wrote:
What is with the strange looking border on Tae, cut it off if possible? It looks really odd... Lol, you mean the white border, right? Deleted D:
Download: StoryboardFix.rar
Hmmm...
General-
- Why is "K-pop" on tags? Remove please, this goes on the Genre section.
- Can someone check the mp3's kbps please? My computer says 439 kbps...
- Everything else seems to be ok on the osz. x;
- Tags, countdown, offset, preview and letterbow seems to be the same on all difss, ok then, let's see the diffs!
Normal-
Just suggestions, good job.
00:57:461 (6,7) - Make this an slider, just like00:55:374 (3) ?
02:38:157 (4) - Add a little curve here to avoid the small overlap (and make it look better)?
03:28:771 (1) - Add more timing sections here to make this slowly fade away. Right now it's too sudden.
Liz Hard-
00:37:635 (1,2,3) - /Nazi/ move (3) one grid closer to (2) to make the distances between the three sliders the same.
01:56:939 (3) - Kiinda hard to see this under (5)'s hitsplash. Some mappers do use this technique (I'm staring at you, shinxyn), but usually on Insane difficultier or harder. You might want to horizontal flip everything?
03:28:771 (1) - Add more timing sections here to make this slowly fade away. Right now it's too sudden.
Flows really well!! Good use of the slowdowns!
Hard-
00:39:461 (7,8) - Unexpected jump, doesn't flows very well with the music, you might want to place (8) closer to (7) x_x
03:28:771 (1) - Same as on every other diff~
It's ok, though you use too many linear patterns outside the kiai time, and then at the chorus, boom, curves. I'd like to see them mixed a bit next time, ok?
simp Insane-
03:28:771 (1) - Same as on every other diff~
Though I didn't like some streams, this diff is great.
Uhhh, why don't you create an orange hitcircle overlay to match the sliderslides?
General-
- Why is "K-pop" on tags? Remove please, this goes on the Genre section.
- Can someone check the mp3's kbps please? My computer says 439 kbps...
- Everything else seems to be ok on the osz. x;
- Tags, countdown, offset, preview and letterbow seems to be the same on all difss, ok then, let's see the diffs!
Normal-
Just suggestions, good job.
00:57:461 (6,7) - Make this an slider, just like00:55:374 (3) ?
02:38:157 (4) - Add a little curve here to avoid the small overlap (and make it look better)?
03:28:771 (1) - Add more timing sections here to make this slowly fade away. Right now it's too sudden.
Liz Hard-
00:37:635 (1,2,3) - /Nazi/ move (3) one grid closer to (2) to make the distances between the three sliders the same.
01:56:939 (3) - Kiinda hard to see this under (5)'s hitsplash. Some mappers do use this technique (I'm staring at you, shinxyn), but usually on Insane difficultier or harder. You might want to horizontal flip everything?
03:28:771 (1) - Add more timing sections here to make this slowly fade away. Right now it's too sudden.
Flows really well!! Good use of the slowdowns!
Hard-
00:39:461 (7,8) - Unexpected jump, doesn't flows very well with the music, you might want to place (8) closer to (7) x_x
03:28:771 (1) - Same as on every other diff~
It's ok, though you use too many linear patterns outside the kiai time, and then at the chorus, boom, curves. I'd like to see them mixed a bit next time, ok?
simp Insane-
03:28:771 (1) - Same as on every other diff~
Though I didn't like some streams, this diff is great.
Uhhh, why don't you create an orange hitcircle overlay to match the sliderslides?
All done, thanks for moddingKrisom wrote:
Liz Hard-
00:37:635 (1,2,3) - /Nazi/ move (3) one grid closer to (2) to make the distances between the three sliders the same.
01:56:939 (3) - Kiinda hard to see this under (5)'s hitsplash. Some mappers do use this technique (I'm staring at you, shinxyn), but usually on Insane difficultier or harder. You might want to horizontal flip everything?
03:28:771 (1) - Add more timing sections here to make this slowly fade away. Right now it's too sudden.
Flows really well!! Good use of the slowdowns!
Fixed version~
Download: Taeyang - I Need A Girl (Feat. G-Dragon) (_llkey_18) [Lizbeth's Hard].osu
[General]
*Peach/Orange-colored sliders eh? Hmm... I wonder if matching colored hitcircle-overlays would be too much or not :p
*Second uninherited section makes me nervous since Lizbeth's diff uses a bpm changing slider with the exact same timing as it. Moving the uninherited section a measure early (so 173,294) would be a better thing to do (of course fix the kiai and resnap--although resnapping shouldn't be needed).
*Timing feels slightly off at 02:38:679 on all difficulties since that's when the slow down starts, so perhaps silence the ends of the sliders/spinners there (except for Insane since it's already silent).
*E-cookie.png is slightly off (you can tell by checking the end of the storyboard) and A-cookie.png is noticeably off (throughout the sb).
*lighting.png is very flashy *-*
*First offset feels a bit early. Looks like I said 16,780 worked better before, but you currently have 16,766. I might've been a bit late before, but could you at least go up to 16,770?
[Normal]
03:07:901 (1,2,3) - spacing?
*This is fine as a Normal difficulty, but I think that it's a bit too tricky to be the easiest map in the set. The constant streams of 1/2 beats are my main concern, but even a larger circle size wouldn't make them that much easier. I really suggest that you map/find an easier difficulty, but if not, I'd be happy to give more suggestions on how to make this diff a bit easier.
[Lizbeth's Hard]
Looks fine.
[Hard]
Looks fine.
[simplistiC's Insane]
*A lower drain than the two "Hard" difficulties? o-o;
*Perhaps raise the approach rate a tick?
*I see that kiai is broken into two on the second chorus, but why not the other choruses (or was this a mistake)?
*Peach/Orange-colored sliders eh? Hmm... I wonder if matching colored hitcircle-overlays would be too much or not :p
*Second uninherited section makes me nervous since Lizbeth's diff uses a bpm changing slider with the exact same timing as it. Moving the uninherited section a measure early (so 173,294) would be a better thing to do (of course fix the kiai and resnap--although resnapping shouldn't be needed).
*Timing feels slightly off at 02:38:679 on all difficulties since that's when the slow down starts, so perhaps silence the ends of the sliders/spinners there (except for Insane since it's already silent).
*E-cookie.png is slightly off (you can tell by checking the end of the storyboard) and A-cookie.png is noticeably off (throughout the sb).
*lighting.png is very flashy *-*
*First offset feels a bit early. Looks like I said 16,780 worked better before, but you currently have 16,766. I might've been a bit late before, but could you at least go up to 16,770?
[Normal]
03:07:901 (1,2,3) - spacing?
*This is fine as a Normal difficulty, but I think that it's a bit too tricky to be the easiest map in the set. The constant streams of 1/2 beats are my main concern, but even a larger circle size wouldn't make them that much easier. I really suggest that you map/find an easier difficulty, but if not, I'd be happy to give more suggestions on how to make this diff a bit easier.
[Lizbeth's Hard]
Looks fine.
[Hard]
Looks fine.
[simplistiC's Insane]
*A lower drain than the two "Hard" difficulties? o-o;
*Perhaps raise the approach rate a tick?
*I see that kiai is broken into two on the second chorus, but why not the other choruses (or was this a mistake)?
irc modded
- deleted 2nd offset, cuz it was just like about 1ms late from 1st
- offset: 16,776. i saw that offset might sound alway off if you try get offset with custom-hitsound
- fix some hitsound on Hard
- add approachcircle.png, since mapper added hitcircleoverlay.png
simplistiC's diff was fun
bubbled
- deleted 2nd offset, cuz it was just like about 1ms late from 1st
- offset: 16,776. i saw that offset might sound alway off if you try get offset with custom-hitsound
- fix some hitsound on Hard
- add approachcircle.png, since mapper added hitcircleoverlay.png
simplistiC's diff was fun
bubbled
Topic Starter
orioncomet wrote:
irc modded
- deleted 2nd offset, cuz it was just like about 1ms late from 1st
- offset: 16,776. i saw that offset might sound alway off if you try get offset with custom-hitsound
- fix some hitsound on Hard
- add approachcircle.png, since mapper added hitcircleoverlay.png
simplistiC's diff was fun
bubbled
Thank you so much orioncomet ^_^
Rebubble? Uhh... Beuchi hasn't gotten to fix the storyboard yet. Also, you're missing a regular hitcircle (add the default or make one).
Normally, approachcircles are gray-scaled to match the current combo color, but the pink can still be partially seen even though it still changes color. Not sure if you should just grayscale it or not (also the shadow on the left side is partially cut off).
I'll do my full remod in a bit, as promised.
Normally, approachcircles are gray-scaled to match the current combo color, but the pink can still be partially seen even though it still changes color. Not sure if you should just grayscale it or not (also the shadow on the left side is partially cut off).
I'll do my full remod in a bit, as promised.
Was about to check bubble but nvmmmm
lol
lol
Topic Starter
Derekku wrote:
Rebubble? Uhh... Beuchi hasn't gotten to fix the storyboard yet. Also, you're missing a regular hitcircle (add the default or make one).
Normally, approachcircles are gray-scaled to match the current combo color, but the pink can still be partially seen even though it still changes color. Not sure if you should just grayscale it or not (also the shadow on the left side is partially cut off).
I'll do my full remod in a bit, as promised.
SB fixed and added hitcircle and new approachcircle
rawwwr ~ I'm sorry that I was missed many things.. myuuu ;w;
but something like this will not happen again, i promise
Let Derekku mod it and rebubble stuff! go go ~
Fighto!
but something like this will not happen again, i promise
Let Derekku mod it and rebubble stuff! go go ~
Fighto!
Topic Starter
Thanksorioncomet wrote:
rawwwr ~ I'm sorry that I was missed many things.. myuuu ;w;
but something like this will not happen again, i promise
Let Derekku mod it and rebubble stuff! go go ~
Fighto!
irc modding to fix some weird spacing in Normal and a hidden slider in Lizbeth's Hard.
Mapper is making an easier difficulty (THANK YOU), so I'll edit this post if needed with that.
EDIT: Just noticed the artist and title are incorrect. They should be "Taeyang feat. G-Dragon" and "I Need a Girl" respectively.
Also, I mentioned to the mapper that the title text when the song first plays can be changed. I suggested an orange/peach color to go with the slider borders/hitcircleoverlays if a BAT wouldn't mind changing it. o:
EDIT 2: Modded Easy, helped with the title/artist change, and helped remove half a dozen .osbs from the folder (no joke). I've triple checked, and I think everything is fine. I wish that Easy was mapped 100%, but half an easy is better than no easy at all.
So...
TO THE NEXT BAT THAT CHECKS THIS: PLEASE CHANGE THE TITLE TEXT TO A PEACH/ORANGE COLOR TO MATCH THE SKIN ELEMENTS. Thank you.
Mapper is making an easier difficulty (THANK YOU), so I'll edit this post if needed with that.
EDIT: Just noticed the artist and title are incorrect. They should be "Taeyang feat. G-Dragon" and "I Need a Girl" respectively.
Also, I mentioned to the mapper that the title text when the song first plays can be changed. I suggested an orange/peach color to go with the slider borders/hitcircleoverlays if a BAT wouldn't mind changing it. o:
EDIT 2: Modded Easy, helped with the title/artist change, and helped remove half a dozen .osbs from the folder (no joke). I've triple checked, and I think everything is fine. I wish that Easy was mapped 100%, but half an easy is better than no easy at all.
So...
TO THE NEXT BAT THAT CHECKS THIS: PLEASE CHANGE THE TITLE TEXT TO A PEACH/ORANGE COLOR TO MATCH THE SKIN ELEMENTS. Thank you.
Topic Starter
lolDerekku wrote:
TO THE NEXT BAT THAT CHECKS THIS: PLEASE CHANGE THE TITLE TEXT TO A PEACH/ORANGE COLOR TO MATCH THE SKIN ELEMENTS. Thank you.
Thank you so much ^^ , and sry for took that long to mod this map ;P
Thanks, Beuchi! :3
Colour hax added and thread title changed.
Congrats for the bubble <3
EDIT: Silly me, now it's all right :3
Congrats for the bubble <3
EDIT: Silly me, now it's all right :3
Some IRC Modding.
- Capitalized Lizbeth into the tags on every difficulty just for the sake of make them perfect.
- Fixed an hidden slider repeat on Hard difficulty.
Ranked~
- Capitalized Lizbeth into the tags on every difficulty just for the sake of make them perfect.
- Fixed an hidden slider repeat on Hard difficulty.
Ranked~
yey congratz~!