Vikon wrote:

Full Mod !

[General]
1) 你張BG係865 X767, 最好整到佢係1024 x 768 , 再唔係800x600啦-_- [it will be fix]
2) 你ge diff 分佈係 [E,I,I,I]。
首先， 如果將E變做N，會平均D，或者你可以考慮加個Normal 。
其次，因為osu rating 顯示有3個[I], 所以相信你搵人MOD時，有d人可能會叫做將一個I剔除... 但呢個「剔除」ge建議可以唔駛理，因為連我玩你果個[Being Chain]都pass到，證明佢肯定係hard,所以，你個map都只係有2個[I], 問題唔大

[Relaxing]
有點缺乏hitsound.. 可以考慮下在每2條白線，就加一個clap。 (e.g.在以下hitobject加clap : 00:32:926(1), 00:33:815 (2), 00:34:704 (3), 00:35:593 (5), 00:36:482 (6,2), 如此類推... ) fixed
00:29:815 (3) 囧, 你可以保留住呢個slider先... 再有modder話要改的話，就改返正常佢-_-。我唔知有咩問題=.=...

[Being Chain]
00:13:371 (5) 因為(3)未消失，而且又一樣色，所以無人會睇到呢個係slider定note, 有可能成為unrankable slider的危機。fixed
00:15:149 (4) ^ fixed
01:06:482 (3至11) 呢下真係忍唔到-_-，頭先果d都還可接受... 但呢個真係好難閱讀，唔好重疊得咁亂-_-，成堆圈都唔知想點fixed
01:54:482 (6,1) 呢種spacing明陰人，我唔多鐘意，但你可以等第二個modder批評你先改..
02:16:482 (5,6) spacing ( you should fix this) fixed
03:20:704 (4,5) 因為(2)完成果下，爆左個300出黎，遮住晒(4,5) ge end，攪到我認唔到(4,5)個slider有幾長-_-。 呢個會唔會係SKIN既問題=.=

[Unchain!]
加「!」係diff裏面，我曾經被人話過好awful-_- fixed
你變成BPM 2X前, 最好加返個2x warning... 而且你有時加姐速淨係作用於一個slider, 跟住又降返速，好難適應-_-。 咁先叫insane嘛=.=...
00:23:815 (4,5,6) spacing [color=FF0000]?[/color]
01:00:037 (1) unrankable spinner(因為太短), spinner一定要係auto mod入面，最少有bonus 2000分
01:30:482 (2,3,1,1,1,1) 2x個spinner仲要咁長...insane真恐怖，我被秒了-_- (或者係我個人問題)
02:47:815 (1,2,3,4,5) hard to read.特登...用黎做欺騙之用...fixed
[CBB's Another]
我唔明點解要用normal-whistle, 可唔可以考慮將佢地轉晒做soft- finish -_-?
無其他建議了-_- 同平時一樣

1. 需要一个Star Rating在3以下而且简单的难度
2. chain-a.png chain-b.png chain-c.png 分辨率需要调整到800x600或以下
3. 建议把不需要半透明等效果的png(除了皮肤)换成jpg, 这样会减小很多空间
4. SB做的不错
5. 看上去你把.osb的东西都拷进.osu了? 那么就把.osb删掉吧 然后针对不同的diff的时间长度做些调整
6. 比如Relaxing在没有note可打的时候SB就也应该随后停止 否则不按空格不会结束...
7. 把climbb65588添加到所有难度的tags里

1. 00:33:815 (2) - clap
2. Open.osu in notepad.然后用下列段落替换掉原有的[TimingPoints]

3. [TimingPoints]
   12038,444.444444444444,4,2,1,69,1,0
   39149,-200,4,2,1,69,0,0
   39593,-100,4,2,1,69,0,0
   40815,-100,4,2,2,69,0,0
   41037,-100,4,2,1,69,0,0
   41704,-100,4,2,2,69,0,0
   41926,-100,4,2,1,69,0,0
   42593,-100,4,2,2,69,0,0
   42815,-100,4,2,1,69,0,0
   43482,-100,4,2,2,69,0,0
   43704,-100,4,2,1,69,0,0
   64260,-100,4,1,1,80,0,1
   79149,-100,4,1,1,80,0,0

4. 之后把Download: soft-slidertick2.rar这个文件解压放到文件夹里就可以了
5. 这就是常用的slidertick2替换法...我只是做了一段示例 其他地方/难度就可以应用一下 hitsounds会好很多
6. 上面那条slider原有的clap都要消掉哦...
7. 02:04:037 (T) - SB里这张图片突然就消失了, 虽然是要删掉的 但是这里本该有个渐变的吧

1. OA很低 所以刚开始那里很难判断出先后...不知道能不能rank ._.
2. OA +3
3. 01:32:926 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 这堆stack刚出来时都碰到左边的slider了,可以适当右移（不用担心spacing...)
4. 02:37:593 (2,3) - 很有迷惑性...

1. Fine

• 00:17:371 (1) - 移除new combo

1. 00:18:260 (2) - new combo
2. 01:32:926 (1) - 这个估计会有人疯掉的...
3. 02:29:815 (1) - unrankable spinner 必须在test模式下能出2000分才行

Colin Hou wrote:

[General]:

1. 需要一个Star Rating在3以下而且简单的难度 Relaxing就是簡單的...可是為什麼他會是HARD的=.=...?可以解決的嗎?
2. chain-a.png chain-b.png chain-c.png 分辨率需要调整到800x600或以下fix soon
3. 建议把不需要半透明等效果的png(除了皮肤)换成jpg, 这样会减小很多空间 fix soon
4. SB做的不错thx
5. 看上去你把.osb的东西都拷进.osu了? 那么就把.osb删掉吧 然后针对不同的diff的时间长度做些调整我會記住的了
6. 比如Relaxing在没有note可打的时候SB就也应该随后停止 否则不按空格不会结束...fixed
7. 把climbb65588添加到所有难度的tags里

fixed

[Relaxing]:

1. 00:33:815 (2) - clapfixed
2. Open.osu in notepad.然后用下列段落替换掉原有的[TimingPoints]
   

   [TimingPoints]
   12038,444.444444444444,4,2,1,69,1,0
   39149,-200,4,2,1,69,0,0
   39593,-100,4,2,1,69,0,0
   40815,-100,4,2,2,69,0,0
   41037,-100,4,2,1,69,0,0
   41704,-100,4,2,2,69,0,0
   41926,-100,4,2,1,69,0,0
   42593,-100,4,2,2,69,0,0
   42815,-100,4,2,1,69,0,0
   43482,-100,4,2,2,69,0,0
   43704,-100,4,2,1,69,0,0
   64260,-100,4,1,1,80,0,1
   79149,-100,4,1,1,80,0,0
   之后把[attachment=0:939d0]soft-slidertick2.rar[/attachment:939d0]这个文件解压放到文件夹里就可以了
   这就是常用的slidertick2替换法...我只是做了一段示例 其他地方/难度就可以应用一下 hitsounds会好很多
   上面那条slider原有的clap都要消掉哦...

   這有什麼用?
3. 02:04:037 (T) - SB里这张图片突然就消失了, 虽然是要删掉的 但是这里本该有个渐变的吧 可能是copy from txt時的bug. fixed

[Being Chain]:

1. OA很低 所以刚开始那里很难判断出先后...不知道能不能rank ._. OA是什麼?.?
2. OA +3
3. 01:32:926 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 这堆stack刚出来时都碰到左边的slider了,可以适当右移（不用担心spacing...)fixed
4. 02:37:593 (2,3) - 很有迷惑性...那我要那不

[Climbb's Another]:

1. Fine

太傷心了

[Unchain]:

• 00:17:371 (1) - 移除new combo

1. 00:18:260 (2) - new combo
2. 01:32:926 (1) - 这个估计会有人疯掉的...
3. 02:29:815 (1) - unrankable spinner 必须在test模式下能出2000分才行

all fixed

Star~

banvi wrote:

Hello.
I llke this song!!!
Thismap is quite nice!Thx

General
Add "Vocaloid" in Source.
Fix "roboru" → "noboru" in Tags.
Delete "Miku" in Tags.
All fixed

Being Chain
00:58:482 (5,6,7) down 1 grid?fixed

Amethyst Wolf
00:18:593 (5) up 1 grid and left 1 grid?fixed
00:26:037 add note? think for your suggestion
00:27:593 ^ think for your suggestion
00:29:371 ^ think for your suggestion
00:56:482 (1,1,1,1) Make these all one combo?fixed
00:58:260 (1,1,1,1) ^fixed
01:40:926 (3) remove whistle or finishfixed
02:16:482 (1,1,1,1,1) Make these all one combo?fixed
02:29:815 (1) This spinner time is too short. This is bad in rule.(Spinner must put forth more than 2,000 points by auto.)
I think, Add 2 jump note(02:29:815 and 02:30:260).it told by Colin Hou. and thank for your suggestion.
But this diff is Insane. So maybe okay...
02:42:482 (1) delete? just like 02:49:371. and thank for your suggestion.
02:53:815 add note or slider or spinner?(Other diff too.)
I think best is spinner. for time to make the better sb. and thank for your suggestion.

star☆

Colin Hou wrote:

OA 是指按F4 -> Difficulties -> Overall Difficulty.

因为在下载页上是Accuracy 所以也叫OA(Overall Accuracy)...也可能是Overall的缩写 lol

那个什么用你自己试一下就知道了

Amethyst Wolf wrote:

Colin Hou wrote:

OA 是指按F4 -> Difficulties -> Overall Difficulty.

因为在下载页上是Accuracy 所以也叫OA(Overall Accuracy)...也可能是Overall的缩写 lol

那个什么用你自己试一下就知道了

我就是試不了什麼 囧

Pokie wrote:

General
- EIII D:
但第2個I是HARD吧...囧

Being Chain
01:04:260 (T) - 這個section移到01:05:260 fixed
01:05:371 (3) - kiai在這裡開始 fixed
01:54:482 (6) - 設成0.5x BPM 有點怪...?
02:03:815 (4) - slider開始whistle fixed
02:05:815 (2) - ^ fixed
02:07:593 (1) - 結尾whistle fixed
02:10:926 (1,2,3) - 這三個後移至長白線開始, 記得要修spacing 這個是match背景的drum's sound, 如果放到後面的話, 那就變成在match歌聲了...
02:12:260 (7) - 1 grid down fixed
02:25:371 (1,2,3,4) - 這段的音量嘗試降低點? 跟BGM不搭 fixed
02:30:260 (T) - 移到02:30:704 fixed
02:37:593 (2,3,4) - 換換位置吧..白色combo加上hidden的放置方式不太適合 fixed
02:53:371 (1) - slider開始去掉whistle fixed

climbb
- 參考Being Chain Kiai&Normal部份, 其餘問題不大

Unchain
- 參考Being Chain Kiai&Normal部份
- 嗯...clap多的有點吵D: fixed
02:13:815 (5,6,7) - ..lol, 這個是1/4拍不是1/2啊(淚目 fixed
02:43:149 (3,1,2,3) - ^ fixed


下次做圖的時候可以留意一下自己下的節奏夠不夠統一,
因為一直在節奏和跟歌詞之間換來換去的話,
玩家可受不了orz

不過以圖來說是蠻不錯的, 就只是最後兩個I難度太相近了...
可能會被BAT挑刺... 這點需要注意一下

大致上沒什麼大問題了o.o 星也丟過了...嗯...那丟粉星吧:P

vincerio wrote:

Is the song title is really correct?
I think it's a"Hatsune Miku - Kusari no Shoujo"
Source: Vocaloid(delete from tag)

Relaxing
00:56:037 - move right 1 grid lv3
01:31:701 - remove new combo
01:32:371 - remove new combo
01:32:704 - remove clap for

nice map~*

wmfchris wrote:

[CBB] resnap 1/4 streams with two difference spacing
0:29:371 (5) right 1 grid
0:33:037 (1,2,3) spacing
1:10:482 (6) down+left 1 grid
1:18:037 (4,5) left 1 grid
1:29:149 (7) left 1 grid?
1:32:037 (1) spacing
1:33:037 (2) left 1 grid (remember re-snap the following notes
2:32:482 (1,3,4,5) down 1 grid?
3:05:593 (3) down+right 1 grid
3:05:815 (5) down 1 grid

Other difficulties was modded before so I can skip others :3
pink star :3

Pokie wrote:

o.o 為什麼不是short ver.?

Amethyst Wolf wrote:

Pokie wrote:

o.o 為什麼不是short ver.?

因為這歌沒有SHORT VER,
而這CLIP VER是我剪出來的

Pokie wrote:

Amethyst Wolf wrote:

因為這歌沒有SHORT VER,
而這CLIP VER是我剪出來的

clip ver怪怪的呢
沒有map 全部/剪掉了也可以命名成short ver.的..

另外你的帖子subject少了miku的名字o.o

al2e10 wrote:

=3= STAR ...

ZLOdeuka wrote:

a map weighs 19kb...

you will excuse not able to look over it.

no star~

tmokb93 wrote:

Updated Mod's Info:
Mine are all suggestions. You're free to follow or not this mod :3
If I found a beat who must be added, i'll write it.
Remember to check spacing after all modfies :3

[General]
Vocaloid2 can be the Source. If you use this, remove Vocaloid from Tags.

[Relaxing]
00:20:926 (3) - 1 grid left.
00:36:927 (1) - Stack it under 00:35:593 (5) start.
00:44:482 (1,2,3) - Flip vertically.
00:45:815 (1) - Make this finish at 00:47:593.
00:49:371 (1) - 4 grids down and 4 left.
01:20:037 (2,3,4) - Move those 3 to make (3) stacks under 01:19:148 (3).
01:22:260 (6) - Stack under 01:20:482 (3).

[Being Chain]
Theorically, the title can be: "Be in Chain" or "Being Chained".
00:44:926 (3) - Offscreen.
00:59:593 (1) - ^.
01:28:037 (4) - ^.

[Climb's]
As you asked, I won't mod this.

[Unchain]
Nothing for this one!

Wow it's pretty good to be your second map! =D

Alace wrote:

Sounds better

Alace wrote:

The second diff is not really hard. but ir is still I mark as well
I`s a hard situation here
2 guest diffs and the hardest diff are I and they are almost the same hard to me XD
I won`t ask you remove guest diffs.I suggest make the second diff easier

Alace wrote:

The second diff is not really hard. but ir is still I mark as well
I`s a hard situation here
2 guest diffs and the hardest diff are I and they are almost the same hard to me XD
I won`t ask you remove guest diffs.I suggest make the second diff easier

Alace wrote:

back to wip
i will take care of it