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Hatsune Miku - Kusari no Shoujo -Short ver.-

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climbb65588
435 posts
Joined August 2008
climbb65588
先 mod 著一個難度 >_>

[Unchained]

00:13:816 (3) 拉到 00:14:149?
00:17:372 (2) 拉到 00:17:705?

00:20:483 (1) 拉到 00:20:927?
00:21:149 (2) 加一次回彈然後將 (3) 放到 00:21:816
00:23:149 (x) add a note?
00:23:594 (x) add a note?
00:23:816 換成 circle，然後在 00:24:038 加個拉到 00:24:489，刪掉 00:24:260
00:25:371 (x) add a note?
00:25:816 (x) 加個拉到 00:26:260 的 slider，刪掉 00:26:038 (7)
00:28:038 (x) add a note?
00:28:260 (4) 加一次回彈 or 在00:28:927 (x) 加個 note
00:29:149 (6) 加一次回彈 or 在00:29:816 (x) 加個 note

00:30:260 (x) add a note?
00:31:149 (2) 換成一個拉到 00:31:549 的 slider，然後刪掉 00:31:371 (3)
00:38:038 (1) 加一次回彈 or 在00:38:483 (x) 加個 note
00:38:927 (1) 加一次回彈 or 在00:39:371 (x) 加個 note

00:40:483 (x) add a note?
00:42:038 (1) 放到 00:42:260
00:42:927 (4) 放到 00:43:149
00:44:038 (x) add a note?
00:44:705 (10) 放到 00:44:483
00:44:927 (x) add a note?

00:50:705 (3) 拉長 1/2 拍 ( 即拉到 00:51:149 )
00:51:594 (5) 同上
00:52:483 (7) 加一次回彈 or 拉長 1/2 拍
00:53:371 (9) 同上
00:58:160 (1) remove new combo
00:59:149 (1) ^

01:00:927 (1) ^
01:05:371 (1) spinner 拉到 01:06:260 就好了，然後在 01:06:705 加個 note

01:13:816 (1) 拉長 1/4 拍 ( 即拉到 01:14:260 )
01:15:038 (3) 放到 01:14:927 並拉長 1/4 拍
01:18:260 (1) 拉長 1/4 拍

01:42:260 (1) 拉長 1/2 拍 ( 即拉到 01:42:705 )
01:43:149 (3) 拉長 1/2 拍
Amethyst Wolf
184 posts
Joined April 2010
Topic Starter
Amethyst Wolf

Pokie wrote:

Amethyst Wolf wrote:

THX FOR kodomonoyume's suggestion.

TO Pokie:
就是那個圖太多了 :D
那我該如何壓它呢? 請指教 :D
8-) ... 匯出音樂時, 選192kbps的mp3檔
完成後,把mp3放到檔案裡,再full-submit

不用kds

--------------------------

EDIT: >_> 你有習慣使用的音樂編輯程式嗎?
一般把mp3丟進去後, 匯出時再選音質, 就可以進行壓縮了

-------------------------

EDIT2: 各個難度不斷出現"Update to latest version"字眼
而Being Chained難度更是寫著"Not yet submitted"
檢查檔案後再傳上一次如何?

Offset : 20,500 , 更改後 Resnap all notes
各個種度的Preview time不一致._.
還有"song.png"和"thank.png"檔案大小太過份了, 請把他縮小至800*600的範圍以內再full-submit

先star :) 完成了再回來詳細mod, 加油
謝謝! 你是我的明燈!
那明燈先生, 我決定今天內把你和米指出的問題都先解決了~~
Amethyst Wolf
184 posts
Joined April 2010
Topic Starter
Amethyst Wolf

Pokie wrote:

Amethyst Wolf wrote:

THX FOR kodomonoyume's suggestion.

TO Pokie:
就是那個圖太多了 :D
那我該如何壓它呢? 請指教 :D
8-) ... 匯出音樂時, 選192kbps的mp3檔
完成後,把mp3放到檔案裡,再full-submit

不用kds

--------------------------

EDIT: >_> 你有習慣使用的音樂編輯程式嗎?
一般把mp3丟進去後, 匯出時再選音質, 就可以進行壓縮了

-------------------------

EDIT2: 各個難度不斷出現"Update to latest version"字眼
而Being Chained難度更是寫著"Not yet submitted"
檢查檔案後再傳上一次如何?

Offset : 20,500 , 更改後 Resnap all notes
各個種度的Preview time不一致._.
還有"song.png"和"thank.png"檔案大小太過份了, 請把他縮小至800*600的範圍以內再full-submit

先star :) 完成了再回來詳細mod, 加油
對了, 明燈先生, 你可以推介音樂編輯程式給我嗎@@?
wmfchris
osu! Alumni
5,072 posts
Joined March 2008
wmfchris
-A bit too long
-Take away countdown?
-The htisound maybe a bit too loud

[unchained]
0:20:260 (6) slider -> single note?
0:37:371 (7) up + left 1 grid
0:52:816 (x) add 1 note?
1:14:483 (2) can't fit to the lyrics/music
1:16:483 (2) minor spacing

[begin chained] HP, drain rate +1? It should be hard...?
-Sliders' end and another slider's begining place shouldn't be totallt stacked
1:50:705 (2) up 1 grid?
2:00:927 This diff don't gives 2xBPM, apply the SB only for the [unchained] diff.
2:02:260 Start 2x warning here?
2:41:594 (1) right 1 grid

star~
wmfchris
osu! Alumni
5,072 posts
Joined March 2008
wmfchris
對了, 明燈先生, 你可以推介音樂編輯程式給我嗎@@?
Audacity/any video converter ?
Amethyst Wolf
184 posts
Joined April 2010
Topic Starter
Amethyst Wolf

wmfchris wrote:

-A bit too long
-Take away countdown?
-The htisound maybe a bit too loud

[unchained]
0:20:260 (6) slider -> single note?
0:37:371 (7) up + left 1 grid
0:52:816 (x) add 1 note?
1:14:483 (2) can't fit to the lyrics/music
1:16:483 (2) minor spacing

[begin chained] HP, drain rate +1? It should be hard...?
-Sliders' end and another slider's begining place shouldn't be totallt stacked
1:50:705 (2) up 1 grid? Fixed.
2:00:927 This diff don't gives 2xBPM, apply the SB only for the [unchained] diff. I'm not position this map for Hard. ammm... you may position it is a Hard+ map(or Insane-)
2:02:260 Start 2x warning here? Just tell player to prepare it. The warning is start at 02:02:706.
2:41:594 (1) right 1 grid Fixed.

star~
Thank for ur helping! Very Very Thx!
Vikon
343 posts
Joined December 2008
Vikon
As you are HongKonger and designing the logo of hongkongosu!association, that's why I am here.

ok，講返中文-_-
畀住粒星先，遲下完成晒d難度再返黎mod~
Amethyst Wolf
184 posts
Joined April 2010
Topic Starter
Amethyst Wolf
ORZ
呢排忙左, 好多野都要等過排先做得完 囧
Pokie
osu! Alumni
2,630 posts
Joined December 2009
Pokie

Amethyst Wolf wrote:

對了, 明燈先生, 你可以推介音樂編輯程式給我嗎@@?
請叫我小姐(pia)

我在用的貌似不怎麼受歡迎, audacity
Amethyst Wolf
184 posts
Joined April 2010
Topic Starter
Amethyst Wolf

Pokie wrote:

Amethyst Wolf wrote:

對了, 明燈先生, 你可以推介音樂編輯程式給我嗎@@?
請叫我小姐(pia)

我在用的貌似不怎麼受歡迎, audacity
啊.....

那明燈先...小姐, 我不會用啊...(逃
Torran
724 posts
Joined November 2008
Torran
OSU! Timing Help!
  • Checking...
    1. BPM 135 , Offset 12038 OK!
Starred~!
Amethyst Wolf
184 posts
Joined April 2010
Topic Starter
Amethyst Wolf

soradg123 wrote:

OSU! Timing Help!
  • Checking...
    1. BPM 135 , Offset 12038 OK!
Starred~!
Thx for ur help~

feed u kds~
jameskong1
403 posts
Joined December 2008
jameskong1
star~
...
Vikon
343 posts
Joined December 2008
Vikon
[General]
2幅背景都唔岩尺寸阿.... 最好係1024 x 768, 搵過幅or 改改佢好d
4個diff只有relaxing有countdown, 不如disable左佢?

[Being Chain]
冇hitsound 囧? 刺激我聽覺的只有不悅耳的sliderside, 可考慮slience佢
d slider.... 如果唔係直線ge話.. 最好拉成對稱和圓滑( 美觀問題 )
01:03:593 (9) 大囧
01:07:593 (8) 拉佢落黎好d?
02:30:260 kiai設係02:30:704會唔會好d?

[CBB's]
冇hitsound ge CBB's difficulty，我肯定呢個未完成-_-
暫時未有問題搵到.. 可能太夜-_-
climbb65588
435 posts
Joined August 2008
climbb65588
OK all finlished ( I'm lazy to use the custom hitsound >_> )

Download: Hatsune Miku - Chain Girl (Amethyst Wolf) [Climbb's Another].osu
Tonoko
507 posts
Joined June 2009
Tonoko
:oops:
matthewhln
408 posts
Joined March 2010
matthewhln
Star~~ :)
Vikon
343 posts
Joined December 2008
Vikon
Full Mod !

[General]
1) 你張BG係865 X767, 最好整到佢係1024 x 768 , 再唔係800x600啦-_-
2) 你ge diff 分佈係 [E,I,I,I]。
首先， 如果將E變做N，會平均D，或者你可以考慮加個Normal 。
其次，因為osu rating 顯示有3個[I], 所以相信你搵人MOD時，有d人可能會叫做將一個I剔除... 但呢個「剔除」ge建議可以唔駛理，因為連我玩你果個[Being Chain]都pass到，證明佢肯定係hard,所以，你個map都只係有2個[I], 問題唔大

[Relaxing]
有點缺乏hitsound.. 可以考慮下在每2條白線，就加一個clap。 (e.g.在以下hitobject加clap : 00:32:926(1), 00:33:815 (2), 00:34:704 (3), 00:35:593 (5), 00:36:482 (6,2), 如此類推... )
00:29:815 (3) 囧, 你可以保留住呢個slider先... 再有modder話要改的話，就改返正常佢-_-。

[Being Chain]
00:13:371 (5) 因為(3)未消失，而且又一樣色，所以無人會睇到呢個係slider定note, 有可能成為unrankable slider的危機。
00:15:149 (4) ^
01:06:482 (3至11) 呢下真係忍唔到-_-，頭先果d都還可接受... 但呢個真係好難閱讀，唔好重疊得咁亂-_-，成堆圈都唔知想點
01:54:482 (6,1) 呢種spacing明陰人，我唔多鐘意，但你可以等第二個modder批評你先改..
02:16:482 (5,6) spacing ( you should fix this)
03:20:704 (4,5) 因為(2)完成果下，爆左個300出黎，遮住晒(4,5) ge end，攪到我認唔到(4,5)個slider有幾長-_-。

[Unchain!]
加「!」係diff裏面，我曾經被人話過好awful-_-
你變成BPM 2X前, 最好加返個2x warning... 而且你有時加姐速淨係作用於一個slider, 跟住又降返速，好難適應-_-。
00:23:815 (4,5,6) spacing
01:00:037 (1) unrankable spinner(因為太短), spinner一定要係auto mod入面，最少有bonus 2000分
01:30:482 (2,3,1,1,1,1) 2x個spinner仲要咁長...insane真恐怖，我被秒了-_- (或者係我個人問題)
02:47:815 (1,2,3,4,5) hard to read.

[CBB's Another]
我唔明點解要用normal-whistle, 可唔可以考慮將佢地轉晒做soft- finish -_-?
無其他建議了-_- 同平時一樣
Amethyst Wolf
184 posts
Joined April 2010
Topic Starter
Amethyst Wolf

Vikon wrote:

Full Mod !

[General]
1) 你張BG係865 X767, 最好整到佢係1024 x 768 , 再唔係800x600啦-_- [it will be fix]
2) 你ge diff 分佈係 [E,I,I,I]。
首先， 如果將E變做N，會平均D，或者你可以考慮加個Normal 。
其次，因為osu rating 顯示有3個[I], 所以相信你搵人MOD時，有d人可能會叫做將一個I剔除... 但呢個「剔除」ge建議可以唔駛理，因為連我玩你果個[Being Chain]都pass到，證明佢肯定係hard,所以，你個map都只係有2個[I], 問題唔大

[Relaxing]
有點缺乏hitsound.. 可以考慮下在每2條白線，就加一個clap。 (e.g.在以下hitobject加clap : 00:32:926(1), 00:33:815 (2), 00:34:704 (3), 00:35:593 (5), 00:36:482 (6,2), 如此類推... ) fixed
00:29:815 (3) 囧, 你可以保留住呢個slider先... 再有modder話要改的話，就改返正常佢-_-。我唔知有咩問題=.=...

[Being Chain]
00:13:371 (5) 因為(3)未消失，而且又一樣色，所以無人會睇到呢個係slider定note, 有可能成為unrankable slider的危機。fixed
00:15:149 (4) ^ fixed
01:06:482 (3至11) 呢下真係忍唔到-_-，頭先果d都還可接受... 但呢個真係好難閱讀，唔好重疊得咁亂-_-，成堆圈都唔知想點fixed
01:54:482 (6,1) 呢種spacing明陰人，我唔多鐘意，但你可以等第二個modder批評你先改..
02:16:482 (5,6) spacing ( you should fix this) fixed
03:20:704 (4,5) 因為(2)完成果下，爆左個300出黎，遮住晒(4,5) ge end，攪到我認唔到(4,5)個slider有幾長-_-。 呢個會唔會係SKIN既問題=.=

[Unchain!]
加「!」係diff裏面，我曾經被人話過好awful-_- fixed
你變成BPM 2X前, 最好加返個2x warning... 而且你有時加姐速淨係作用於一個slider, 跟住又降返速，好難適應-_-。 咁先叫insane嘛=.=...
00:23:815 (4,5,6) spacing [color=FF0000]?[/color]
01:00:037 (1) unrankable spinner(因為太短), spinner一定要係auto mod入面，最少有bonus 2000分
01:30:482 (2,3,1,1,1,1) 2x個spinner仲要咁長...insane真恐怖，我被秒了-_- (或者係我個人問題)
02:47:815 (1,2,3,4,5) hard to read.特登...用黎做欺騙之用...fixed
[CBB's Another]
我唔明點解要用normal-whistle, 可唔可以考慮將佢地轉晒做soft- finish -_-?
無其他建議了-_- 同平時一樣
Colin Hou
osu! Alumni
4,456 posts
Joined November 2009
Colin Hou
[General]:
  1. 需要一个Star Rating在3以下而且简单的难度
  2. chain-a.png chain-b.png chain-c.png 分辨率需要调整到800x600或以下
  3. 建议把不需要半透明等效果的png(除了皮肤)换成jpg, 这样会减小很多空间
  4. SB做的不错
  5. 看上去你把.osb的东西都拷进.osu了? 那么就把.osb删掉吧 然后针对不同的diff的时间长度做些调整
  6. 比如Relaxing在没有note可打的时候SB就也应该随后停止 否则不按空格不会结束...
  7. 把climbb65588添加到所有难度的tags里
[Relaxing]:
  1. 00:33:815 (2) - clap
  2. Open.osu in notepad.然后用下列段落替换掉原有的[TimingPoints]
  3. [TimingPoints]
    12038,444.444444444444,4,2,1,69,1,0
    39149,-200,4,2,1,69,0,0
    39593,-100,4,2,1,69,0,0
    40815,-100,4,2,2,69,0,0
    41037,-100,4,2,1,69,0,0
    41704,-100,4,2,2,69,0,0
    41926,-100,4,2,1,69,0,0
    42593,-100,4,2,2,69,0,0
    42815,-100,4,2,1,69,0,0
    43482,-100,4,2,2,69,0,0
    43704,-100,4,2,1,69,0,0
    64260,-100,4,1,1,80,0,1
    79149,-100,4,1,1,80,0,0
  4. 之后把Download: soft-slidertick2.rar这个文件解压放到文件夹里就可以了
  5. 这就是常用的slidertick2替换法...我只是做了一段示例 其他地方/难度就可以应用一下 hitsounds会好很多
  6. 上面那条slider原有的clap都要消掉哦...
  7. 02:04:037 (T) - SB里这张图片突然就消失了, 虽然是要删掉的 但是这里本该有个渐变的吧
[Being Chain]:
  1. OA很低 所以刚开始那里很难判断出先后...不知道能不能rank ._.
  2. OA +3
  3. 01:32:926 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 这堆stack刚出来时都碰到左边的slider了,可以适当右移（不用担心spacing...)
  4. 02:37:593 (2,3) - 很有迷惑性...
[Climbb's Another]:
  1. Fine
[Unchain]:
  • 00:17:371 (1) - 移除new combo
  1. 00:18:260 (2) - new combo
  2. 01:32:926 (1) - 这个估计会有人疯掉的...
  3. 02:29:815 (1) - unrankable spinner 必须在test模式下能出2000分才行
Star~
banvi
1,793 posts
Joined June 2009
banvi
Hello.
I llke this song!!! :)
Thismap is quite nice!

General
Add "Vocaloid" in Source.
Fix "roboru" → "noboru" in Tags.
Delete "Miku" in Tags.

Being Chain
00:58:482 (5,6,7) down 1 grid?

Amethyst Wolf
00:18:593 (5) up 1 grid and left 1 grid?
00:26:037 add note?
00:27:593 ^
00:29:371 ^
00:56:482 (1,1,1,1) Make these all one combo?
00:58:260 (1,1,1,1) ^
01:40:926 (3) remove whistle or finish
02:16:482 (1,1,1,1,1) Make these all one combo?
02:29:815 (1) This spinner time is too short. This is bad in rule.(Spinner must put forth more than 2,000 points by auto.)
I think, Add 2 jump note(02:29:815 and 02:30:260).
But this diff is Insane. So maybe okay...
02:42:482 (1) delete?
02:53:815 add note or slider or spinner?(Other diff too.)
I think best is spinner.

star☆
Amethyst Wolf
184 posts
Joined April 2010
Topic Starter
Amethyst Wolf

Colin Hou wrote:

[General]:
  1. 需要一个Star Rating在3以下而且简单的难度 Relaxing就是簡單的...可是為什麼他會是HARD的=.=...?可以解決的嗎?
  2. chain-a.png chain-b.png chain-c.png 分辨率需要调整到800x600或以下fix soon
  3. 建议把不需要半透明等效果的png(除了皮肤)换成jpg, 这样会减小很多空间 fix soon
  4. SB做的不错thx :D
  5. 看上去你把.osb的东西都拷进.osu了? 那么就把.osb删掉吧 然后针对不同的diff的时间长度做些调整我會記住的了
  6. 比如Relaxing在没有note可打的时候SB就也应该随后停止 否则不按空格不会结束...fixed
  7. 把climbb65588添加到所有难度的tags里
fixed

[Relaxing]:
  1. 00:33:815 (2) - clapfixed
  2. Open.osu in notepad.然后用下列段落替换掉原有的[TimingPoints]
    [TimingPoints]
    12038,444.444444444444,4,2,1,69,1,0
    39149,-200,4,2,1,69,0,0
    39593,-100,4,2,1,69,0,0
    40815,-100,4,2,2,69,0,0
    41037,-100,4,2,1,69,0,0
    41704,-100,4,2,2,69,0,0
    41926,-100,4,2,1,69,0,0
    42593,-100,4,2,2,69,0,0
    42815,-100,4,2,1,69,0,0
    43482,-100,4,2,2,69,0,0
    43704,-100,4,2,1,69,0,0
    64260,-100,4,1,1,80,0,1
    79149,-100,4,1,1,80,0,0
    之后把[attachment=0:939d0]soft-slidertick2.rar[/attachment:939d0]这个文件解压放到文件夹里就可以了
    这就是常用的slidertick2替换法...我只是做了一段示例 其他地方/难度就可以应用一下 hitsounds会好很多
    上面那条slider原有的clap都要消掉哦...
    這有什麼用?
  3. 02:04:037 (T) - SB里这张图片突然就消失了, 虽然是要删掉的 但是这里本该有个渐变的吧 可能是copy from txt時的bug. fixed
[Being Chain]:
  1. OA很低 所以刚开始那里很难判断出先后...不知道能不能rank ._. OA是什麼?.?
  2. OA +3
  3. 01:32:926 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 这堆stack刚出来时都碰到左边的slider了,可以适当右移（不用担心spacing...)fixed
  4. 02:37:593 (2,3) - 很有迷惑性...那我要那不 :(
[Climbb's Another]:
  1. Fine
太傷心了 :oops:

[Unchain]:
  • 00:17:371 (1) - 移除new combo
  1. 00:18:260 (2) - new combo
  2. 01:32:926 (1) - 这个估计会有人疯掉的...
  3. 02:29:815 (1) - unrankable spinner 必须在test模式下能出2000分才行
all fixed

Star~
thinks!
Amethyst Wolf
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Topic Starter
Amethyst Wolf

banvi wrote:

Hello.
I llke this song!!! :)
Thismap is quite nice!Thx :D

General
Add "Vocaloid" in Source.
Fix "roboru" → "noboru" in Tags.
Delete "Miku" in Tags.
All fixed

Being Chain
00:58:482 (5,6,7) down 1 grid?fixed

Amethyst Wolf
00:18:593 (5) up 1 grid and left 1 grid?fixed
00:26:037 add note? think for your suggestion
00:27:593 ^ think for your suggestion
00:29:371 ^ think for your suggestion
00:56:482 (1,1,1,1) Make these all one combo?fixed
00:58:260 (1,1,1,1) ^fixed
01:40:926 (3) remove whistle or finishfixed
02:16:482 (1,1,1,1,1) Make these all one combo?fixed
02:29:815 (1) This spinner time is too short. This is bad in rule.(Spinner must put forth more than 2,000 points by auto.)
I think, Add 2 jump note(02:29:815 and 02:30:260).it told by Colin Hou. and thank for your suggestion.
But this diff is Insane. So maybe okay...
02:42:482 (1) delete? just like 02:49:371. and thank for your suggestion.
02:53:815 add note or slider or spinner?(Other diff too.)
I think best is spinner. for time to make the better sb. and thank for your suggestion.

star☆
thx! feed u kd
Curisu
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Curisu
Star^_^

明橙先……小姐 自重吧(pia飞
Colin Hou
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Colin Hou
OA 是指按F4 -> Difficulties -> Overall Difficulty.

因为在下载页上是Accuracy 所以也叫OA(Overall Accuracy)...也可能是Overall的缩写 lol

那个什么用你自己试一下就知道了
Amethyst Wolf
184 posts
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Topic Starter
Amethyst Wolf

Colin Hou wrote:

OA 是指按F4 -> Difficulties -> Overall Difficulty.

因为在下载页上是Accuracy 所以也叫OA(Overall Accuracy)...也可能是Overall的缩写 lol

那个什么用你自己试一下就知道了
我就是試不了什麼 囧
climbb65588
435 posts
Joined August 2008
climbb65588

Amethyst Wolf wrote:

Colin Hou wrote:

OA 是指按F4 -> Difficulties -> Overall Difficulty.

因为在下载页上是Accuracy 所以也叫OA(Overall Accuracy)...也可能是Overall的缩写 lol

那个什么用你自己试一下就知道了
我就是試不了什麼 囧
...

Overall Difficulty 即是控制 map 的整體難度，如判定、圈的速度、note 出現的速度等

拉愈高難度則隨之提升，就這樣 :?
Pokie
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Pokie
General
- EIII D:

Being Chain
01:04:260 (T) - 這個section移到01:05:260
01:05:371 (3) - kiai在這裡開始
01:54:482 (6) - 設成0.5x BPM
02:03:815 (4) - slider開始whistle
02:05:815 (2) - ^
02:07:593 (1) - 結尾whistle
02:10:926 (1,2,3) - 這三個後移至長白線開始, 記得要修spacing
02:12:260 (7) - 1 grid down
02:25:371 (1,2,3,4) - 這段的音量嘗試降低點? 跟BGM不搭
02:30:260 (T) - 移到02:30:704
02:37:593 (2,3,4) - 換換位置吧..白色combo加上hidden的放置方式不太適合
02:53:371 (1) - slider開始去掉whistle

climbb
- 參考Being Chain Kiai&Normal部份, 其餘問題不大

Unchain
- 參考Being Chain Kiai&Normal部份
- 嗯...clap多的有點吵D:
02:13:815 (5,6,7) - ..lol, 這個是1/4拍不是1/2啊(淚目
02:43:149 (3,1,2,3) - ^


下次做圖的時候可以留意一下自己下的節奏夠不夠統一,
因為一直在節奏和跟歌詞之間換來換去的話,
玩家可受不了orz

不過以圖來說是蠻不錯的, 就只是最後兩個I難度太相近了...
可能會被BAT挑刺... 這點需要注意一下

大致上沒什麼大問題了o.o 星也丟過了...嗯...那丟粉星吧:P
Amethyst Wolf
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Topic Starter
Amethyst Wolf

Pokie wrote:

General
- EIII D:
但第2個I是HARD吧...囧

Being Chain
01:04:260 (T) - 這個section移到01:05:260 fixed
01:05:371 (3) - kiai在這裡開始 fixed
01:54:482 (6) - 設成0.5x BPM 有點怪...?
02:03:815 (4) - slider開始whistle fixed
02:05:815 (2) - ^ fixed
02:07:593 (1) - 結尾whistle fixed
02:10:926 (1,2,3) - 這三個後移至長白線開始, 記得要修spacing 這個是match背景的drum's sound, 如果放到後面的話, 那就變成在match歌聲了...
02:12:260 (7) - 1 grid down fixed
02:25:371 (1,2,3,4) - 這段的音量嘗試降低點? 跟BGM不搭 fixed
02:30:260 (T) - 移到02:30:704 fixed
02:37:593 (2,3,4) - 換換位置吧..白色combo加上hidden的放置方式不太適合 fixed
02:53:371 (1) - slider開始去掉whistle fixed

climbb
- 參考Being Chain Kiai&Normal部份, 其餘問題不大

Unchain
- 參考Being Chain Kiai&Normal部份
- 嗯...clap多的有點吵D: fixed
02:13:815 (5,6,7) - ..lol, 這個是1/4拍不是1/2啊(淚目 fixed
02:43:149 (3,1,2,3) - ^ fixed


下次做圖的時候可以留意一下自己下的節奏夠不夠統一,
因為一直在節奏和跟歌詞之間換來換去的話,
玩家可受不了orz

不過以圖來說是蠻不錯的, 就只是最後兩個I難度太相近了...
可能會被BAT挑刺... 這點需要注意一下

大致上沒什麼大問題了o.o 星也丟過了...嗯...那丟粉星吧:P
我會注意的了...
而兩個I...下次我也會注意的說

謝你的粉星~!
vincerio
687 posts
Joined April 2009
vincerio
Is the song title is really correct?
I think it's a"Hatsune Miku - Kusari no Shoujo" :shock:
Source: Vocaloid(delete from tag)

Relaxing
00:56:037 - move right 1 grid lv3
01:31:701 - remove new combo
01:32:371 - remove new combo
01:32:704 - remove clap

nice map~*
wmfchris
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wmfchris
[CBB] resnap 1/4 streams with two difference spacing
0:29:371 (5) right 1 grid
0:33:037 (1,2,3) spacing
1:10:482 (6) down+left 1 grid
1:18:037 (4,5) left 1 grid
1:29:149 (7) left 1 grid?
1:32:037 (1) spacing
1:33:037 (2) left 1 grid (remember re-snap the following notes
2:32:482 (1,3,4,5) down 1 grid?
3:05:593 (3) down+right 1 grid
3:05:815 (5) down 1 grid

Other difficulties was modded before so I can skip others :3
pink star :3
Amethyst Wolf
184 posts
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Topic Starter
Amethyst Wolf

vincerio wrote:

Is the song title is really correct?
I think it's a"Hatsune Miku - Kusari no Shoujo" :shock:
Source: Vocaloid(delete from tag)

Relaxing
00:56:037 - move right 1 grid lv3
01:31:701 - remove new combo
01:32:371 - remove new combo
01:32:704 - remove clap for

nice map~*
some fix
Amethyst Wolf
184 posts
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Topic Starter
Amethyst Wolf

wmfchris wrote:

[CBB] resnap 1/4 streams with two difference spacing
0:29:371 (5) right 1 grid
0:33:037 (1,2,3) spacing
1:10:482 (6) down+left 1 grid
1:18:037 (4,5) left 1 grid
1:29:149 (7) left 1 grid?
1:32:037 (1) spacing
1:33:037 (2) left 1 grid (remember re-snap the following notes
2:32:482 (1,3,4,5) down 1 grid?
3:05:593 (3) down+right 1 grid
3:05:815 (5) down 1 grid

Other difficulties was modded before so I can skip others :3
pink star :3
Done~
Thinks for ur pink star^~^
Pokie
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Pokie
o.o 為什麼不是short ver.?
Amethyst Wolf
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Topic Starter
Amethyst Wolf

Pokie wrote:

o.o 為什麼不是short ver.?
因為這歌沒有SHORT VER,
而這CLIP VER是我剪出來的
Pokie
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Pokie

Amethyst Wolf wrote:

Pokie wrote:

o.o 為什麼不是short ver.?
因為這歌沒有SHORT VER,
而這CLIP VER是我剪出來的
clip ver怪怪的呢 :(
沒有map 全部/剪掉了也可以命名成short ver.的..

另外你的帖子subject少了miku的名字o.o
Amethyst Wolf
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Topic Starter
Amethyst Wolf

Pokie wrote:

Amethyst Wolf wrote:

因為這歌沒有SHORT VER,
而這CLIP VER是我剪出來的
clip ver怪怪的呢 :(
沒有map 全部/剪掉了也可以命名成short ver.的..

另外你的帖子subject少了miku的名字o.o
那我改
subject?
明白了
al2e10
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al2e10
=3= STAR ...
Amethyst Wolf
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Topic Starter
Amethyst Wolf

al2e10 wrote:

=3= STAR ...
多謝你...粒星 :P
[DBF]
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[DBF]
Star~
ZLOdeuka-
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ZLOdeuka-
a map weighs 19kb...

you will excuse not able to look over it.

no star~
Amethyst Wolf
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Topic Starter
Amethyst Wolf

ZLOdeuka wrote:

a map weighs 19kb...

you will excuse not able to look over it.

no star~
what you mean?.?
Mok
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Mok
Updated Mod's Info:
Mine are all suggestions. You're free to follow or not this mod :3
If I found a beat who must be added, i'll write it.
Remember to check spacing after all modfies :3

[General]
Vocaloid2 can be the Source. If you use this, remove Vocaloid from Tags.

[Relaxing]
00:20:926 (3) - 1 grid left.
00:36:927 (1) - Stack it under 00:35:593 (5) start.
00:44:482 (1,2,3) - Flip vertically.
00:45:815 (1) - Make this finish at 00:47:593.
00:49:371 (1) - 4 grids down and 4 left.
01:20:037 (2,3,4) - Move those 3 to make (3) stacks under 01:19:148 (3).
01:22:260 (6) - Stack under 01:20:482 (3).

[Being Chain]
Theorically, the title can be: "Be in Chain" or "Being Chained".
00:44:926 (3) - Offscreen.
00:59:593 (1) - ^.
01:28:037 (4) - ^.

[Climb's]
As you asked, I won't mod this.

[Unchain]
Nothing for this one!

Wow it's pretty good to be your second map! =D
Amethyst Wolf
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Topic Starter
Amethyst Wolf

tmokb93 wrote:

Updated Mod's Info:
Mine are all suggestions. You're free to follow or not this mod :3
If I found a beat who must be added, i'll write it.
Remember to check spacing after all modfies :3

[General]
Vocaloid2 can be the Source. If you use this, remove Vocaloid from Tags.

[Relaxing]
00:20:926 (3) - 1 grid left.
00:36:927 (1) - Stack it under 00:35:593 (5) start.
00:44:482 (1,2,3) - Flip vertically.
00:45:815 (1) - Make this finish at 00:47:593.
00:49:371 (1) - 4 grids down and 4 left.
01:20:037 (2,3,4) - Move those 3 to make (3) stacks under 01:19:148 (3).
01:22:260 (6) - Stack under 01:20:482 (3).

[Being Chain]
Theorically, the title can be: "Be in Chain" or "Being Chained".
00:44:926 (3) - Offscreen.
00:59:593 (1) - ^.
01:28:037 (4) - ^.

[Climb's]
As you asked, I won't mod this.

[Unchain]
Nothing for this one!

Wow it's pretty good to be your second map! =D
Thx for ur help~
deepsea
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deepsea
[Relaxing]
00:39:14(5) This speed down is wierd.


[Being Chained]

01:32:92(1) - (9)
A 9 1/4 stack for a normal?D:

[Unchain]
01:00:92(1)(2)......
This combo is hard to read, also I feel speed up of (5) and (7) don't fit the music.>_>

01:30:48(1)(2)(3)(1)(2)

The pattern is fine but I don't like how they placed.

02:47:81(1)-(6) (1) Really eggpain lol. But yea this is insane after all.
Cecilia
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Cecilia
<3 vocaloid :3~ good luck!
Saturio
339 posts
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Saturio
well...
Saturio
339 posts
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Saturio
my diff... done

Download: Hatsune Miku - Kusari no Shoujo -Short ver.- (Amethyst Wolf) [Sharon's].osu
owl13
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owl13
star
deepsea
osu! Alumni
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deepsea
Hmmmm so bubbled.

For people may yell at the Is: The difficulty and eggpainess of those insanes are different.
KanaRin
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KanaRin
狼仔~~~星星送給你~~~
jyjdia
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jyjdia
star :)
aesopl19193
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aesopl19193
哎
Orkel
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Orkel
Star! Good map.
Alace
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Alace
I think softclap doesn`t fit the song at all
claps are too loud on red ticks. you can use softwhistles to replace all of claps in soft parts
Climbb's Another sounds better in the soft part. also 70~80% volume is better (50% is too soft to hear)
If you feel like to fix hitsounds
i can do some online help
Kotone
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Kotone
:shock:
Alace
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Alace
Sounds better
Amethyst Wolf
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Amethyst Wolf

Alace wrote:

Sounds better
:D
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
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Andrea
You should seriously do something about the difficulty spread.

"E I I I I"
Alace
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Alace
The second diff is not really hard. but ir is still I mark as well
I`s a hard situation here
2 guest diffs and the hardest diff are I and they are almost the same hard to me XD
I won`t ask you remove guest diffs.I suggest make the second diff easier
Firo Prochainezo
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Firo Prochainezo
Star~
Amethyst Wolf
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Topic Starter
Amethyst Wolf

Alace wrote:

The second diff is not really hard. but ir is still I mark as well
I`s a hard situation here
2 guest diffs and the hardest diff are I and they are almost the same hard to me XD
I won`t ask you remove guest diffs.I suggest make the second diff easier
okay, I'll do that after I back to HK 8-)
Alace
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Alace
So let me star it for now
Amethyst Wolf
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Topic Starter
Amethyst Wolf

Alace wrote:

The second diff is not really hard. but ir is still I mark as well
I`s a hard situation here
2 guest diffs and the hardest diff are I and they are almost the same hard to me XD
I won`t ask you remove guest diffs.I suggest make the second diff easier
I'll make it easier now.
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Kite
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Kite
lovely..
great song and great map

~star and faved
kanpakyin
Global Moderator
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kanpakyin
做得好好...
star~
希望你可以被rank
加油^_^
swish
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swish
nice :D
Alace
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Alace
back to wip
i will take care of it
Amethyst Wolf
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Amethyst Wolf

Alace wrote:

back to wip
i will take care of it
:D
Pasonia
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Pasonia
[Sharon's]

1/4 from spinner end to slider-start. Very little time left to react. This is too insane even for Insane, please change.

Edit: Fixed, so bub bub bubble.
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
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Andrea
[Overall]

You need an "approachcircle.png" into the folder. Add it and do a full submission.

[Difficulties]

[Sharon's]

Stack leniency is unrankable. Increase it by 1 or 2 ticks at least.

02:50:260 (6,1,1) - Too many kiai fountains here. Remove them.

[Climbb's Another]

Stack leniency is unrankable. Increase it by 1 or 2 ticks at least.

Popped for now.
Last edited by Andrea , edited 1 time in total.
Saturio
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Saturio
FIXED!

Download: Hatsune Miku - Kusari no Shoujo -Short ver.- (Amethyst Wolf) [Sharon's].osu
Andrea
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Andrea
Looks good enough now to go.

Re-Bubbled~
abalee
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abalee
Errr... score balance?
Larto
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Larto
Overall:
Add "Vocaloid" to the source and remove it from the tags.

Level 1:
01:04:260 - Make this Kiai start at 01:05:371 -
Please, please map more of this difficulty.

Level 2:
01:04:260 - Make this Kiai start at 01:05:371 -
Please, please map more of this difficulty.

Sharon's:
01:04:371 - Make this Kiai start at 01:05:371 -
02:02:926 - This sudden speed up is very irritating.
02:15:149 (3,4) - What's with the spacing here =(
02:23:593 (1,2,3,4) - These speed changes really do not work. The sliders don't even have anything to do with the song. Please change them.
02:30:260 - Make this Kiai start at 02:30:704 -
02:47:704 (1) - Do you have to use such a ninja spinner?
02:50:371 (1,1) - ^

Climbb:
02:30:260 - Make this Kiai start at 02:30:704 -
Zekira
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Zekira
So I finally spotted it.

Some hax there, op111, lol
Amethyst Wolf
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Amethyst Wolf
I'm sorry that my computer was crashed...
So I can just look at your reply and do nothing :?
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star
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Amethyst Wolf
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Amethyst Wolf
=.=
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