SadKangaroo wrote:

Hi.

[Easy]
Delete first Timing Section with different BPM.
00:33:869 (3) - No way for using 0.5x(2x) in Easy.OK change
00:58:042 (2) - ^fixed

[Normal]
00:04:710 (3) - Copy from 00:01:257 (1) and use horizontally flip.fixed
00:33:869 (3) - Well,not sure about using 0.5x in Normal difficulties,probably it could be accepted,but still:my suggestion is to change to a spinner.But it's up to you.^Changed to spinner
01:45:092 (4) - Just move you cursor to the end of slider.It will place automatically.fixed


[Hard]
01:36:891 (2,3,4) - Allign them better.fixed

Good luck,star~

NatsumeRin wrote:

Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
因为有了hitcircle和hitcircleoverlay，你还需要一个approachcircle.png。如果不想做也可以从其他皮肤里抓一个。 已加
第一offset:+10, 另外重音应在长白线处所以是 (1268)，第二offset大概+6。另外我觉得不需要两红线，而是应该统一139BPM，第一段用0.5x BPM改好了~谢谢timing方面的援助
要在slider音上加whistle的时候请注意不要点slider加而是点slider上每个音加，如果点slider加的话会影响slider滑动音，这个我估计你很长一段时间都不会有用的机会= =以后会注意的..
video offset是不是差了点。。？我不确定这个。但前几个音每个音点出来时画面已经出了。因为之前转过VIDEO，所有有点偏差= =现在改了..

[Easy]
00:29:768 (1,2) - spacing
00:39:912 (3,4,5) - 这里的spacing与其他地方不同，看下是否需要改
我不建议Easy用很多3/2= =所以我已经打算remap或者大工程改改了...

[Normal]
圈小一号。fixed
01:10:775 (6) - 要和之前对齐的话我想是右上一格？fixed
01:23:509 (6,7) - 我想可以更美观一点吧？见图
[attachment=0:c617b]Snap7.jpg[/attachment:c617b]
01:29:768 (1,2) - 同理了解..
01:31:279 (3) - 这里明明是3/4却被直接三下1/2过了总感觉怪。改成了3/4了...自己一时间也没发现

[Hard]
Stack Lenienc开到满即always stack是不能rank的，而且也真的不好看。比如这里00:40:128 (7,8,9)改了...怪不得自己总觉得有点不舒服
排列太直线和对称了，希望可以有提升。
01:10:344 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这一类的来回刷circle不建议用。改成其他方式了..
01:14:444 (5,1..这一串) - spacingfixed
01:36:243 (1,2) - 1拉开一点吧，现在这个像1/2fixed

……star.

arsrun wrote:

General
这歌应该是两段bpm,后面一段比较严格的话 offset应设在“重音”上，即20:692.前面一段要另测。
bpm1: 92.00 offset:377
bpm2: 139.00 offset:20692

另外一般绿线应提前1/4拍放置，好处可以在各mapper的经验帖找到，主要就是为了hitsound “不走音".
由于第一段清唱特殊，beat snap divsior应选1/8方便下notes.
hard难度前面已改好，其他两个难度可参照^（bpm已减小的情况下是否还需要0.5x你可以再考虑一下，不过这个总的影响不大）
[attachment=0:fe1c9]YURIA - UNDER-HANDED GIRL (abcben001) [Hard1].osu[/attachment:fe1c9]

Colin Hou wrote:

[General]:

1. hitcircleoverlay.png 这个中心部分的高亮有点过了 可以考虑降下中心部分的透明度 现在看数字不太清楚
2. spinner-approachcircle.png 缺一个这个 可能会有BAT指出
3. 绿线下完后改过offset吧? 现在的都全部稍微偏移了点 最好修复下.

[Easy]:

1. 前半部分完全没有压重音呐... 不过属于个人喜好问题 可以无视

[Normal]:

1. 00:29:341 (2) - clap
2. 00:29:772 (4) - 去掉clap
3. 00:30:204 (5) - clap
4. 00:31:931 (3) - 末尾clap去掉
5. slider tick rate 改成 0.5会更好点

[Hard]:

1. 00:24:593 (8) - new combo

不同难度的hitsound方案都不一样 lol 比较喜欢normal的.
第一次做图有这样的完成度已经很厉害了 :3

star已经给过了 所以kds star~

kiddly wrote:

ok back

[Easy]
00:22:866 (2) - end at 00:23:945
00:24:808 - add a note.
^这样的话note的间隔就是一拍整，好听又好打^^对于easy的难度我比较推荐这样比较固定的节奏.

01:11:211 (4) - 我更建议移到 01:10:780 和前面对称.

就这样，还是不错的了.

[Hard]
resnap all notes/.

顺便说下 soft clap我觉得一般……
不用kudo了

roflninja wrote:

Hi,

[easy]
00:32:795 (1) - line up with (3)? no
00:41:427 (3) - new combo? fixed
01:01:500 (4) - ^ fixed

just those suggestions, great map

impossiblexu wrote:

Hi!

以下只是建议：

[Easy]

• 00:46:608(1,3):+Whistle
  00:50:061(6):结尾处+Finish
  01:02:362(3,4):距离太近
  01:08:333(1):结尾处+Finish我找不到这个..你打错了吗..
  01:38:837(5):^

[Normal]

• 00:31:931(3):开头+Clap 结尾去掉Clap
  00:54:377(1):结尾处Clap换成Finish
  01:04:736(4):对称一下 对称了
  01:18:981(1):开头处+Finish
  01:31:067(2):开头和结尾处+Clap
  01:39:485(5):Finish

[Hard]

• 00:02:578:加一Circle no
  00:40:996(9):Finish
  00:51:356(5):^
  00:54:809(7):^no
  01:05:169(4):开头处+Finish
  01:08:622(4):^
  01:18:982(1):Finish

第一个图做到这样已经不容易了~

~STAR~

Slanox wrote:

Hello,

[Overall]

- Delete .osb in your folder. deleted

[Easy]

- 01:08:621(3) : New combo ? fixed

[Normal]

- 01:46:607(1) : Add finish ? no

[Hard]

- 01:46:607(1) : Add finish ? no


Okay.Good.
Star.

xxheroxx wrote:

[Mod Infos]

Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.
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[General]

• • Source: Otome wa Boku ni Koishiteru 2
  • Tags: otoboku hentai harem visual novel opening theme[/color]
  • Normal Slider Velocity: 1,30 // Hard Slider Velocity: 1,50

Kurai_ wrote:

Hi~ Sorry for the late :<Hi

[Easy]
00:22:866 (2) - Reduce by 1/1 and add 1 reverseSorry I think it's not fit in the music
00:24:377 (3,4,5) - Move 1/2 later^
00:32:795 (1) - Remove New combofixed

[Hard]
00:54:809 (7) -Add Finishfixed

[Skin]
The spinner-background.png and spinner-metre.png must be 1024x768, Your map can't be ranked else :/
(Fix that and fullsubmit)but i find many ranked maps have the same size

The song is awesome and the map too :3
You got my STAR~
^________^

Pokie wrote:

General

• - 統一各難度的tags, source跟stack leninecy...

Easy

• - easy純打拍子會比較適合新手..喔..

00:27:183 (2) - 結尾用finish, 取消clap
00:48:334 (5,6) - 在1,3拍取消whistle
00:52:651 (2) - whistle
00:54:378 (4,5,6) - 建議換換擺法, easy出現陷阱是不好的其实这个不算陷阱吧._.
01:15:529 (4) - new combo
01:18:333 (1) - 結尾finish
01:34:089 (2) - whistle


Normal

• - OAD+1, 現在這樣note好難讀;_;, 順便命名為Normal+?

+就算了
00:33:872 (1) - 拖到00:37:542 - 結束, 加finish
00:37:543 (1) - 刪掉這個._.


Hard

• - 把lead-in second改成1996

看的有點懶XD
嘛..star