Rhodanthe* - Yumeiro Parade‬ · forum‬

Euny

Joined January 2014

Electoz wrote:
[Euny's Normal]

00:20:750 (1,2) - 00:36:749 (1,2) - Inconsistent spacings due to stack. ✔fixed

Ovoui wrote:
[Euny's Insane]

00:42:917 (3) - this slider sounds weird ✔fixed

Kaifin wrote:
Euny Normal
00:00:917 (1,1) - parallel or make 00:00:917 (1) a more defined different angle? just looks really off to me, like you wanted to make it parallel but just were off a little ✔fixed
00:24:917 (1,1) - they aren't parallel ✔fixed
00:45:583 (2,1) - i think it would be cute if these were the same slider, but there's a lot of very similar sliders in the map that don't have matched angles, so maybe its a part of your aesthetic not to, accept this only if it doesn't break your aesthetic !i did similar for my past ranked maps was fine. i think its enough for play.

interesting diff never saw a Normal with this kind of aesthetics before

Len wrote:
Euny:
00:00:917 (1,1) - not perfect parallel sliders✔fixed
00:02:083 (1,1) - just avoid overlap with✔fixed
00:18:750 (3,4) - try this timeline? http://puu.sh/qfrel/e37163e7e0.jpg지금꺼가 더 보컬이랑 잘맞는거같아요. 더군다나 25~50%로 들으심 퉁 하고 분명 클리커블 한 부분이 제게는 들려요.
00:21:417 - same as above, for me its better than before for play and rhythm! also 00:29:416 (3,4) - and 00:32:083 (3,4) - 같은이유에요 보컬에 맞다고 느껴지는부분들은 킵할게요!
00:22:250 (1,2) - i felt awkward here; just remove sliders reverse one and map this section or try it http://puu.sh/qfriw/1a166dafe1.jpg i prefer 2nd suggestion. also 00:32:916 (1,2) - ^
00:24:917 (1) - if it was me, i would do for this section like this: remove 1's reverse and delete 00:25:750 (2) - , then add 1/1 silder on 00:25:417 - like this: http://puu.sh/qfshc/506efa6080.jpg also 00:35:583 - . imo, 00:25:417 - and 00:36:083 - should be emphasized....^
00:26:750 (3) - this slider should end on 00:27:083 - i think✔fixed
00:29:416 (3,4) - save as abovwe. if you do, you can emphasize 00:29:750 - and 00:29:917 - imo!거절 해 온 부분들이랑 같은이유에요
00:30:749 (2,1) - too curved?✔fixed
00:38:750 - feels so empty. just add note here but idk 음.. 제안주신 방법두 좋은데 노멀에 모든 음을 다 채울 필요는 없다고 생각해요~
00:47:417 (1,1) - im not sure about this stackin✔fixed

Kyle Y wrote:
[Normal]
nice map.
For the ending slider 01:27:583 - , I think it is better to end at 01:27:583 - as it is the start of the triple sound with is strong sound.
I think the combo chain here is too short. I suggest you can set nc every two white ticks instead of one, like what Easy diff did.good suggestion. but i want to let it keep for fill the music until perfect end of song.

Doormat wrote:
[Euny]
00:24:917 (1,2) – this rhythm feels really weird to me since it doesn’t really match with the vocals or instrumentals all that well.. maybe try something like this? this suggestion could also be used at 00:35:583 (1,2) - listen with 25~50% you will feels vocal accents are there.
SPOILER
00:41:917 – 00:45:417 – if you’re going to be following vocals during the bridge I don’t think you should ignore the vocal notes here; it feels kind of weird how there’s this sudden gap in the rhythm since there’s no gap in the vocals and it feels a bit weird i dont think its weird your points are weak than my object points. i think its fine to keep.
00:52:750 (1) – 00:55:417 (1) – 01:03:417 (1) – 01:06:083 (1) – i think that if you divided these longer sliders up into a 1/1 slider followed by a circle on the white tick it would give some more emphasis to the clap. it’d also help emphasize vocals since the vocals aren’t held for this long. maybe give it a try?we cant bit ignore for weak rhythm parts? i cant feels its annoying for play.

Mako Sakata wrote:
Eun Normal ✔applied all
00:36:749 (1,2,3,4) - Missing some hitsound, can add clap on following beat 00:37:250 - 00:37:417 - and 00:37:917 -
00:58:750 (3) - Somehow that rhythm sounds weird, the beat on 00:59:417 - not necesarry to emphsize imo, yet you ignore the trumpet sound on 00:59:250 - . I think you can slightly have a better rhythm like http://puu.sh/qmTpK/cdacae511c.jpg , and the placement can be like this http://puu.sh/qmTry/6fe42831a5.jpg or something else better
01:27:750 - Try volume 10-20%? there still drum sound at the end and I think a sudden 5% volume not good on that one

Rose Pacifica wrote:
Euny's Normal ✔applied all
00:00:917 (1,1) - 조그만한 이유지만 이거 각도맞춰도 좋지않을까요?
00:21:417 (3) - 스택오류

Kencho wrote:
[Euny's Normal] ✔applied all
00:21:250 (2,3) - Stack carefully
00:37:250 (2,3) - ^

@modders : thanks for mod<3 host checked before Electoz's mods. sorry for late!

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Kawashiro

1,537 posts

Joined April 2012

Kawashiro 9 years ago

[Insane]
00:38:250 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 이 박자가 더 낫지 않나 싶네요. 지금은 박자를 너무 대충 박았다는 느낌이 강함 http://puu.sh/qv7qH/22ef1065cf.jpg
00:40:917 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - ^ http://puu.sh/qv7tX/eba4656158.jpg
00:43:583 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^ http://puu.sh/qv7xc/3c4a5bd2cc.jpg
01:08:750 (1,2) - 2를 지우고 1을 1/1 슬라로 만들어서 보컬도 맞춰주는게 좋다고 봅니다

박자는 매우 중요하다고 생각되니 깔거라도 일단 따라해보시고 까주시길

00:48:083 (5) - 492 76 정도로 움직여서 그냥 삼각형 점프로 만드는게 낫다고 봅니다. 어째서 저렇게 디스턴스 차이를 두는지 모르겠음
00:59:416 (9) - 서클 2개로 바꿔서 5연타로 만드는 것도 00:59:583 (1) - 이걸 강조하게 되고 좋지 않을까요.
01:07:583 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 조금만 더 창의로운 패턴을 시도해보시는건 어떤가요, 너무 루즈하네요. 점점 디스턴스가 커지는 서클점프도 좋을듯
01:23:916 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^

뭔가 Doyak 님이 떠오르는 맵이네요. GL

Affirmation

2,550 posts

Joined March 2015

Topic Starter

Affirmation 9 years ago

UnLock- wrote:
[Insane]
00:38:250 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 이 박자가 더 낫지 않나 싶네요. 지금은 박자를 너무 대충 박았다는 느낌이 강함 http://puu.sh/qv7qH/22ef1065cf.jpg
00:40:917 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - ^ http://puu.sh/qv7tX/eba4656158.jpg
00:43:583 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^ http://puu.sh/qv7xc/3c4a5bd2cc.jpg세개는 패턴 유지
01:08:750 (1,2) - 2를 지우고 1을 1/1 슬라로 만들어서 보컬도 맞춰주는게 좋다고 봅니다

박자는 매우 중요하다고 생각되니 깔거라도 일단 따라해보시고 까주시길

00:48:083 (5) - 492 76 정도로 움직여서 그냥 삼각형 점프로 만드는게 낫다고 봅니다. 어째서 저렇게 디스턴스 차이를 두는지 모르겠음00:47:417 (2,3,5) - 흐름
00:59:416 (9) - 서클 2개로 바꿔서 5연타로 만드는 것도 00:59:583 (1) - 이걸 강조하게 되고 좋지 않을까요. 00:47:417 (2,3,5) - 뭔가 이친구가 큰 리듬이 아닌것 같아서요
01:07:583 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 조금만 더 창의로운 패턴을 시도해보시는건 어떤가요, 너무 루즈하네요. 점점 디스턴스가 커지는 서클점프도 좋을듯끄앙 제가 창의력이 없고 일단 생각은 해볼게요. 근데 어떻게 고쳐질지는 저도 모름
01:23:916 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^^

뭔가 Doyak 님이 떠오르는 맵이네요. GL

Thanks for mod
nocomment=-fixed

riffy

osu! Alumni

8,061 posts

Joined December 2010

riffy 9 years ago

As per your request.

[General]

You don't really need widescreen support as the map has no storyboard.
Since you shorten your username as NeoSL you might want to add it to the tags. Those who enjoyed your guest diffs will probably use it to search for your maps.

[Del's Easy]

00:00:917 (1) - the overlap with the score-metre looks a bit untidy. Why not place the slider higher to prevent it? Overlap
00:17:250 (2) - a suuden direction change here feels pretty foced. Try to make the angle softer, making the slider feel more "natural" and beginner-friendly.
Note: 00:34:083 (3) - 00:38:250 (1,3) - 00:43:583 (1,3) - 01:26:750 (2) - same here.

It's a neat difficulty, I only disagre with the usage of extreme cuves that go way over the edge with the sliders like 01:26:750 (2).

[Euny's Normal]

00:24:083 (2,1) - minor - probably making them parallel would make the flow a bit better here. Give it a try and see if it works.
00:42:917 (3,2) - personally, I feel a bit uncomfortable with the stack. Would prefer to have these two unstacked, forming a triangle with 00:43:583 (1) - for better readability.
00:44:750 (1) - would finish this one 1/2 earlier as this is where the vocals fade. And then add 00:45:417 - a circle here for the vocals and because polarity would require us to have a circle here.
01:13:917 (3,4,1) - to make the 3/2 gap between 4 and 1 more obvious, I would move (1) somewhere lower. It is definitely gives a more clear hint that the gap here is a lot bigger than it was between the previous beats. example

Great difficulty, I enjoyed this one a lot!

[Hard]

00:49:583 (3,5) - after 00:48:917 (1,2) - this pattern it is very easy to misread 00:49:583 (3,5) - these as a 1/4 pattern.

Awesome!

[Insane]

00:15:084 (5,1) - I would place (1) somewhere else, it does not belong to the previous combo, as it has a lot stronger instruments. Unstacking it to make flow more dynamic sounds like a good idea. example
00:28:083 (2) - you don't use many sliders like this one, in fact, I haven't seen any before. It looks pretty random, so try a slider with a regular shape insntead?
Note: 01:06:083 (1) - 01:08:750 (1) - you use only two more sliders like the one above. They feel pretty inconsistent, so I'd recommend to make a less agressive curve for them.
00:40:250 (4,5,6) - the spacing change here can be easily misread as 1/4. Try to keep it more consistent and avoid antijumps? Or place a new combo on (4) or (5) for better readability of the antijump.

Pretty neat. Good job.

[-Neipezi's Insane]

00:06:583 (2,3) - this is literally the only place in the intro where a 3/4 slider is used for mapping the instruments. IT feels very inconsistent, so either apply 3/4s later on or make this an 1/1 slider.
00:26:750 (4,5) - the stack here feels somewhat flow-breaking as it creates an artificial slowdown before the jumpy part.

Nice one.

Looks like the set is quite a solid one.

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Best of luck!

Beomsan

1,890 posts

Joined November 2013

Beomsan 9 years ago

키리토님 팬입니다
노티스 미 센파이~~~~~~~

Affirmation

2,550 posts

Joined March 2015

Topic Starter

Affirmation 9 years ago

Beomsan wrote:
키리토님 팬입니다
노티스 미 센파이~~~~~~~

헐 이분을 아시는...?

Beomsan

1,890 posts

Joined November 2013

Beomsan 9 years ago

저 플레이어때는 구곡 많이해서 ㅎ,,

Mafumafu

Nomination Assessment Team

3,394 posts

Joined August 2013

Mafumafu 9 years ago

Hi!

It seems you've requested a mod from my queue!
Sadly it doesn't meet my standard of nomination. So I would just post some major issues with suggestions.

[Del's Easy]
Lack of rhythm consistency:
00:19:583 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - For this part, you are following completely 1/2 yet it looks quite differentiated from previous sections.
00:25:250 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3)
The two parts mentioned above are all vocal-oriented parts, yet they owns completely different rhythm. They need to be consistent.

Additionally:
00:17:250 (2) - Having variety in slider shapes is a nice idea, however this is too much.

[-Neipezi's Insane]
00:03:667 (1) - This slider is too old, better to follow the vocal here.
00:16:917 (1) - Lower SV works better here.
The spacings of your smooth and intense parts are almost the same. You need more variety and ups and downs during a map!
00:42:417 (3) - This stack is pretty hard to read due to current AR setting.

===================
Good luck!

Affirmation

2,550 posts

Joined March 2015

Topic Starter

Affirmation 9 years ago

Bakari wrote:
[Hard]
00:49:583 (3,5) - after 00:48:917 (1,2) - this pattern it is very easy to misread 00:49:583 (3,5) - these as a 1/4 pattern.
Awesome!
[Insane]
00:15:084 (5,1) - I would place (1) somewhere else, it does not belong to the previous combo, as it has a lot stronger instruments. Unstacking it to make flow more dynamic sounds like a good idea. exampleBut I want make 00:14:750 (3,5,1) - same flow.
00:28:083 (2) - you don't use many sliders like this one, in fact, I haven't seen any before. It looks pretty random, so try a slider with a regular shape insntead?
Note: 01:06:083 (1) - 01:08:750 (1) - you use only two more sliders like the one above. They feel pretty inconsistent, so I'd recommend to make a less agressive curve for them. I'll think about it if others are say.
00:40:250 (4,5,6) - the spacing change here can be easily misread as 1/4. Try to keep it more consistent and avoid antijumps? Or place a new combo on (4) or (5) for better readability of the antijump. OMG I made triangle, I don't know why this triangle is error....fixed..

Pretty neat. Good job.

No comment=fixed.
Thanks

Affirmation

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Joined March 2015

Topic Starter

Affirmation 9 years ago

-Neipezi wrote:
Bakari wrote:
As per your request.

[-Neipezi's Insane]
00:06:583 (2,3) - this is literally the only place in the intro where a 3/4 slider is used for mapping the instruments. IT feels very inconsistent, so either apply 3/4s later on or make this an 1/1 slider. 1/1 slide to change
00:26:750 (4,5) - the stack here feels somewhat flow-breaking as it creates an artificial slowdown before the jumpy part. change. x228,192 to move

Nice one. thanks
thank u for moding

Euny

2,274 posts

Joined January 2014

Euny 9 years ago

Bakari wrote:
[Euny's Normal]
00:24:083 (2,1) - minor - probably making them parallel would make the flow a bit better here. Give it a try and see if it works. ✔fixed
00:42:917 (3,2) - personally, I feel a bit uncomfortable with the stack. Would prefer to have these two unstacked, forming a triangle with 00:43:583 (1) - for better readability. ✔fixed
00:44:750 (1) - would finish this one 1/2 earlier as this is where the vocals fade. And then add 00:45:417 - a circle here for the vocals and because polarity would require us to have a circle here. 00:45:250 - this sound feels strong for me and i think its nice to end of slider.
01:13:917 (3,4,1) - to make the 3/2 gap between 4 and 1 more obvious, I would move (1) somewhere lower. It is definitely gives a more clear hint that the gap here is a lot bigger than it was between the previous beats. example ✔fixed

Great difficulty, I enjoyed this one a lot!

thanks for mod bakaring<3

업뎃해주세요~

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208,315,24917,6,0,L|177:203,2,110,0|8|0,3:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
261,343,25750,1,0,3:0:0:0:
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357,159,26583,1,8,0:0:0:0:
357,159,26750,2,0,P|305:181|240:190,1,110
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36,226,28416,2,0,L|49:288,1,55,0|8,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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234,358,29249,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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423,271,31917,1,8,0:0:0:0:
423,271,32083,2,0,L|397:340,1,55,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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200,45,34750,2,0,L|271:59,1,55,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
313,68,35083,2,0,P|292:121|300:178,1,110,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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398,227,36416,1,0,3:0:0:0:
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378,6,37250,1,8,0:0:0:0:
378,6,37417,2,0,P|326:26|272:24,1,110,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
213,12,37917,1,8,0:0:0:0:
185,130,38250,6,0,L|177:257,1,110,4|0,3:2|3:0,0:0:0:0:
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454,57,39917,1,0,3:0:0:0:
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412,341,41417,2,0,B|354:363|354:326|292:345,1,110,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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250,93,47250,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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116,29,48583,1,4,3:0:0:0:
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440,137,51250,2,0,L|423:81,1,55,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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33,127,65250,2,0,L|48:179,1,55,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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339,177,66750,2,0,P|325:254|369:324,1,165,0|8,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
490,333,67583,6,0,L|481:270,1,55,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,227,67917,2,0,L|475:163,1,55,8|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
471,115,68250,2,0,P|485:91|493:65,2,55,8|0|8,0:0|3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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128,29,69917,1,8,0:0:0:0:
51,122,70250,6,0,L|64:240,1,110,4|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
82,288,70750,2,0,P|107:277|134:271,1,55,0|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
246,317,71250,2,0,L|253:194,1,110,0|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
283,155,71750,2,0,P|316:173|346:174,1,55,0|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
447,135,72250,2,0,L|447:249,1,110,8|8,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
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114,195,73917,1,8,3:0:0:0:
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275,208,80084,2,0,L|279:84,1,110,0|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
387,45,80751,6,0,B|384:159,1,110,4|0,3:2|3:0,0:0:0:0:
382,215,81251,1,8,0:0:0:0:
449,315,81584,2,0,L|504:334,2,55,0|0|8,3:0|3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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224,327,82584,2,0,P|219:299|209:274,1,55,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
89,257,83084,2,0,L|21:266,1,55,0|8,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
12,207,83417,6,0,P|72:154|72:74,1,165,4|8,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
186,31,84251,2,0,L|252:48,1,55,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,64,84584,1,8,0:0:0:0:
296,64,84751,6,0,P|268:110|269:165,1,110,0|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
355,250,85417,2,0,L|255:306,1,110,4|0,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
209,338,85917,1,8,0:0:0:0:
123,253,86250,6,0,L|226:197,1,110,8|0,0:2|3:0,0:0:0:0:
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HelloSCV

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HelloSCV 9 years ago

m4m

[Del's Easy]

00:05:417 (4) - consider adding a whistle on slider start, it is in harmony with 00:04:750 (3) - this
00:17:250 (2) - need Normal sampleset on slider end for consistency
00:22:917 (2) - i think current rhythm feels quite weird because the vocal sound takes main portion of this part, so try changing that like this
00:51:250 (5) - add normal sampleset
01:04:583 (5) - ^

[Euny's Normal]

00:42:083 (1,3) - 드럼소리 맞춰서 클랩 넣으셨는데 여기 두개 슬라이더에도 적절하게 넣으시는건 어떨까요?
00:48:917 - 키아이 부분도 같은 볼륨으로 유지되는게 좀 아쉬운데 60%정도로 키우시면 좋을거같아요

[Hard]

00:05:417 (5) - 슬라이더 머리에 휘슬들어가면 잘 어울리네요
00:17:917 (3) - 노말 샘플셋 까먹으신듯
01:04:583 (7) - ^ 슬라이더 머리쪽
01:26:750 (3) - 노래 마지막부분이기도 하고 강조도 되고있어서 마지막 노트는 점프를 좀 주시는게 더 좋을거 같아요 http://puu.sh/qEhwo/ebf5075067.jpg 이런거나 http://puu.sh/qEhxA/19a0108fef.jpg 이런식으로?

[Insane]

00:08:083 (3) - 노말 휘슬 적절하게 사용하셨는데 여기만 빠져있으니 좀 어색한거같아요, 에디션 바꾸셔서 노말휘슬 넣으시는건 어떨까요?
00:16:917 - 이런 초록색선은 딱히 아무런 역할을 안하는거 같은데 지우시는게 좋을거같아요, 뒤에도 몇개 더 있는데 필요하시면 다 집어드릴게요 (귀찮은건아니고...)
00:40:583 (6) - 노말보다는 드럼샘플셋이 더 나을거같아요
01:04:583 (4) - 노말 샘플셋 빠진거같네요

[-Neipezi's Insane]

00:03:667 (1) - 노래 도입부이기도하고 보컬소리가 명확한데 스피너로 처리하는건 좀 어색하지 싶어요 http://puu.sh/qBOOy/6788d6d58e.jpg 이런식으로 스피너대신 다른 오브젝트들로 리듬 맞춰주시는게 좋을거같아요 스피너도 뒤쪽에 하나만 있는게 더 나은거같구요
00:13:417 (3,1) - 음이 갑자기 높아지는 부분인데 스택은 좀 어색한느낌이 드는거같아요 차라리 1.0으로 두시거나 점프를 조금 넣으시는건 어떨까요?
00:14:083 (3) - 머리쪽에 노말 피니시 추가하시면 좋을거같아요 뒤쪽에서도 넣으셨고 노래하고도 잘 맞아서 추천드려요
00:16:417 (1) - 뉴콤보를 여기 두시는 것 보다 00:16:083 (5) - 여기 슬라이더에 넣으시는게 리듬하고도 잘맞고 새로운 패턴을 보여준다 하기에도 무리가 없어보여서 더 나아보여요
00:22:583 (1) - 딱히 강조되는 부분도 아니고 해서 뉴콤보가 굳이 들어갈 필요는 없어보여요
00:51:083 (2,3) - 여기두개 샘플셋이 바뀐거같아요
01:06:083 (1) - 이 뉴콤보는 그다지 필요해보이지 않는데 지우시는건 어떨까요?
01:06:750 (1) - ^

~~아귀찮닫ㄷㄷㄷㄷㄷㄷㄷㄷ나머지는 나중에 마무리할게요~~ 끗

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할거없어서 네피지님 맵 구경중

[Neipezi's Insane]
00:02:917 (1,2,3,4) - 정삼각형 만들어주시면 예쁠듯?
00:10:750 (3,2) - 이렇게 두개가 대칭이면 좋을 것 같네얌
00:17:750 (4,2) - 스택 에러 같은데 스택 해주세얌
00:33:417 (2,3,4,5,6) - 이런 두배 디스턴스가 헷갈릴 것 같은 느낌이 듭니다. 뭐 저는 아니지만 인세인 입문자들이 보기엔 상당히 힘들수도
00:32:750 (5,1) - 스택에러
00:37:750 (1,1) - 블랭킷 해주시면 예쁠것 같네염 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5897246
00:42:417 (3,4,5) - ^00:33:417 (2,3,4,5,6) -
00:48:583 (1) - 1/8?1/6? 이건 리듬 잘 모르겠...ㅠ
00:56:917 (1,2,3,4) - 뭔가 플레이하기 상당히 어려운것 같은데염... 많이 꼬여있어서...
01:09:917 (3,4) - 아니 님ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ간격ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5897259 이렇게만 해줘도 될듯 한뎁
01:12:583 (5,1) - 조금 어색해보이는 스택이에요.
01:23:417 (1,2,3,4) - 얘랑 00:14:083 (3,4,1,2) - 얘랑 같은 음악 파트인데 리듬이 달라서 조금 이상하다는 느낌이 들었습니다. 00:14:750 - 여기는 비트가 없는데 01:24:083 - 여기 비트가 있다는게 좀 어색하네얌.
01:25:750 (2,1) - 스택 에러

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@SCV fixed all.

GugUCorn

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GugUCorn 9 years ago

From ingame pm

[General]

Song Setup에서 Design탭에 Enable countdown 체크해제(모든 난이도에 해당)
Song Setup에서 Design탭에 Widescreen support 체크해제(Del's Easy,Euny's Normal,Insane 난이도에 해당)
비디오 오프셋이 살짝 안 맞는 것 같아요. design탭에서 오른쪽 상단에 비디오 오프셋을 -417ms 정도로 고쳐주세요.(이건 구지 안 고쳐도 상관없어요ㅎㅎ)

[Del's Easy]

00:17:250 (2) - Add Sampeset Normal on slider of tail.
00:37:750 (4) - Swap hitsound like slider head is Sampleset Drum Finish and Slider tail is Sampleset Normal NoHitsound.
00:51:250 (5) - It is good that SampleSet Normal than Additions Normal.
00:55:583 (3) - Change it to Curve Slider like this. https://puu.sh/qI1j3/a5ba61b164.png
01:04:583 (5) - Sampleset Normal
01:06:917 (5) - Curve Slider than Straight Slider
01:08:583 (2) - Change SampleSet drum to Normal(Additions is Auto)
01:10:250 (1) - Add Additions Soft finish on slider head. and Sampleset drum is not bad, but I recommend change addition auto.
01:12:250 (3,1) - Emphasizing as whistle and Sampleset Normal and additions is auto.
01:15:417 (1) - finish on slider head
01:26:750 (2) - Sampleset normal and expand it to 01:27:750.

[Euny's Normal]

00:08:750 (1,2) - 블랭킷 수정해주세요 요런 식으로요 https://puu.sh/qIZzk/eefbcf5bf7.png
00:22:250 (1) - 00:16:917 (1) / 00:19:583 (1)에 피니쉬 넣은 것처럼 여기도 피니쉬 넣는게 낫지 않을까요?
00:42:917 (3) - 다음 슬라이더 모양에 따라서 곡선 슬라이더가 낫지 않을까 싶어요
00:45:583 (2) - 머리하고 리버스 부분에 드럼 피니쉬 괜찮을 것 같아요
00:48:583 (2) - 드럼 피니쉬보단 소프트 피니쉬가 강조시키는데 좋을 것 같아요
00:54:250 (1) - 심벌즈 소리가 살짝 나는데, 애디션 노말으로 피니쉬넣는게 좋을 것같습니다
01:10:250 (1,2,3,4) - (1)번 슬라이드 머리에 피니쉬보단 클랩, (2), (3)번 슬라이드 머리엔 클랩을 넣어주시고, (4)번 슬라이드에는 앞뒤 순서대로 클랩과 피니쉬를 넣는게 나을 듯 합니다. 5번 슬라이드 까지 힛사가 없어서 약간 허전한 느낌이 없진않네요
01:14:250 (4) - 머리하고 리버스에 피니쉬 넣으셨는데, 클랩이 낫지 않을까 싶습니다. 잇차오! 할때 음이 다르니까요..
01:26:750 (2) - 이부분은 볼륨이 10%라서 넣으나 마나겠지만, 끝에 드럼 피니쉬 넣는것도 나쁘지 않아요

[Hard]

00:16:083 (7) - 뉴콤보?
00:38:083 (8) - (7)번에 피니쉬 넣었듯이 여기도 드럼 피니쉬넣는것도 좋아요
00:38:917 (3,4) - 00:41:583 (3,4)에 휘슬 넣었듯이 휘슬 넣어주세요
00:50:917 (7) - 뉴콤?
00:59:917 (2) - Crtl+G 추천
01:01:583 (7) - 뉴콤?
01:04:583 (7) - 애디션을 오토로 해주시고, 샘플셋을 노말로 해주세요
01:10:250 (1) - 슬라이더 머리에 소프트 피니쉬
01:12:250 (5,6,1) - 똑같이 애디션을 오토, 샘플셋을 노말로 하는게 좋아요
01:14:250 (4) - 뉴콤보
01:15:417 (1) - 머리에 노말 피니쉬

[-Neipezi's Insane]

00:38:083 (3) - 드럼 피니쉬
00:42:917 (7) - 뉴콤보?
01:07:917 (3,3) - 샘플셋 노말로 해주세요 00:46:250 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1)나 01:23:917 (2,3,4) 처럼..

[Insane]

00:04:250 (2,3) - 00:01:583 (2,3,1) 이 부분에 휘슬을 넣은 것을 고려해서, 2번 서클에 휘슬, (3) 슬라이더 머리에 휘슬 넣어주세요.
00:05:417 (1,2) - 휘슬 넣는 거 추천 드려요. 슬라이더 부분은 앞에만요.
00:08:250 (4) - 간격 일정하게 하기위해 이 노트를 (192,88) 으로 옮겨주세요. (3)부터 (6) 사이 간격이 1.30x가 되도록해주세요.
00:14:750 (3) - 드럼 힛사 피니쉬 넣어주세요
00:17:917 (3) - 샘플셋 노멀해주세요
00:20:083 (2) - 뒤에 휘슬을 넣으신게 드럼 소리를 강조시키려는 의도인 것 같은데, 00:17:417 (2,1,2) 부분에 소프트 휘슬을 넣었으니까 소프트 힛사로 넣는게 통일되고 좋을 것 같아요..
00:27:250 (1) - 샘플셋 노멀해주세요
00:38:083 (5) - 드럼 피니쉬 추천 드립니다^^
00:38:917 (3,4) - 뒷부분에 휘슬 넣어주세요. 00:41:583 (3,4) 에 휘슬을 넣었으므로..
00:45:833 (6) - 드럼 피니쉬
00:45:917 (7) - 이건 그대로 피니쉬 넣어주세요
00:47:250 (1,2) - 뉴콤보 바꾸는 게 좋을 것 같아요
00:48:583 (1) - 클랩보단 피니쉬 추천드려요(동시에 넣으셔도되고요ㅎㅎ;)
00:58:917 (4) - 뉴콤보..?
01:08:583 (7) - 샘플셋을 노멀로 바꿔주세요
01:10:250 (1) - 머리에 샘플셋 소프트 피니쉬 넣어주세요
01:12:917 (1) - ^
01:15:417 (1) - 머리에 노멀 피니쉬
01:17:917 (5) - 드럼 힛사보단 노멀 힛사가 낫다고 생각합니다
01:27:639 (2) - 맨 끝에 드럼 피니쉬

힛사 위주로 모딩해봤습니다...조금이나마 도움이 됬으면 좋겠네요ㅎㅎ

Good Luck!

SnowNiNo_

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SnowNiNo_ 9 years ago

k here is your mod :>

[-Neipezi's Insane]

00:03:417 (4,1) - i would say make the spacing a bit bigger for more emphasis
00:06:083 - make this clickable makes more sense cuz is rly intense
00:13:417 (3,1) - stack here seems inconsistent to your whole structure.. cuz the gap is not 1/1 and you do stack on 1/1 after 00:14:583 (4,1) -
00:16:583 (2,3) - spacing here should be maller cuz the trump pitch on 3 is rather low
00:21:417 (3,4) - 00:23:417 (6,7) - same here
00:42:083 (1) - if you nc here then 00:42:083 (1,2) - should be a slider instead cuz the vocal that you NC it
00:51:250 (3,4) - spacing here should be the same as 00:50:917 (1,2) - cuz the vocal sound the same, makes no snese to decreased here
00:52:417 (4,5) - i would say the flow is better if ctrl + g and fix the shape a bit xdd
00:52:250 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - try this instead, flow is much better and the spacing is more consist
01:05:250 (3,4) - 01:08:416 (2,3) - stack here makes no sense to me lol

[Insane]

00:08:750 (1) - should get more emphasized
00:10:750 (3,4) - looks nicer if you spaced more xd
00:24:750 - 00:30:083 - add a notes make the flow more smooth imo
00:42:917 (4,5) - rhythm should be like this
01:26:750 (1) - this could be more nicer lol

k

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-Neipezi wrote:
TaMul wrote:
From ingame pm
[-Neipezi's Insane]

00:38:083 (3) - 드럼 피니쉬 okay fixed
00:42:917 (7) - 뉴콤보? 야다
01:07:917 (3,3) - 샘플셋 노말로 해주세요 00:46:250 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1)나 01:23:917 (2,3,4) 처럼.. 야다
Good Luck!
SnowNiNo_ wrote:
k here is your mod :>

[-Neipezi's Insane]
00:03:417 (4,1) - i would say make the spacing a bit bigger for more emphasis
00:06:083 - make this clickable makes more sense cuz is rly intense Integrated into one
00:13:417 (3,1) - stack here seems inconsistent to your whole structure.. cuz the gap is not 1/1 and you do stack on 1/1 after 00:14:583 (4,1) - okay slider to change
00:16:583 (2,3) - spacing here should be maller cuz the trump pitch on 3 is rather low
00:21:417 (3,4) - 00:23:417 (6,7) - same here
00:42:083 (1) - if you nc here then 00:42:083 (1,2) - should be a slider instead cuz the vocal that you NC it
00:51:250 (3,4) - spacing here should be the same as 00:50:917 (1,2) - cuz the vocal sound the same, makes no snese to decreased here
00:52:417 (4,5) - i would say the flow is better if ctrl + g and fix the shape a bit xdd
00:52:250 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - try this instead, flow is much better and the spacing is more consist good
01:05:250 (3,4) - 01:08:416 (2,3) - stack here makes no sense to me lol
k

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TaMul wrote:
From ingame pm

[General]

Song Setup에서 Design탭에 Enable countdown 체크해제(모든 난이도에 해당)
Song Setup에서 Design탭에 Widescreen support 체크해제(Del's Easy,Euny's Normal,Insane 난이도에 해당)
비디오 오프셋이 살짝 안 맞는 것 같아요. design탭에서 오른쪽 상단에 비디오 오프셋을 -417ms 정도로 고쳐주세요.(이건 구지 안 고쳐도 상관없어요ㅎㅎ)
[Hard]

00:16:083 (7) - 뉴콤보?2틱 기준으로 뉴콤보를 일정하게 넣었습니다. 필요 없을것 같습니다.
00:38:083 (8) - (7)번에 피니쉬 넣었듯이 여기도 드럼 피니쉬넣는것도 좋아요
00:38:917 (3,4) - 00:41:583 (3,4)에 휘슬 넣었듯이 휘슬 넣어주세요
00:50:917 (7) - 뉴콤?
00:59:917 (2) - Crtl+G 추천스택 의도
01:01:583 (7) - 뉴콤?
01:04:583 (7) - 애디션을 오토로 해주시고, 샘플셋을 노말로 해주세요
01:10:250 (1) - 슬라이더 머리에 소프트 피니쉬
01:12:250 (5,6,1) - 똑같이 애디션을 오토, 샘플셋을 노말로 하는게 좋아요
01:14:250 (4) - 뉴콤보
01:15:417 (1) - 머리에 노말 피니쉬
[Insane]

00:04:250 (2,3) - 00:01:583 (2,3,1) 이 부분에 휘슬을 넣은 것을 고려해서, 2번 서클에 휘슬, (3) 슬라이더 머리에 휘슬 넣어주세요.
00:05:417 (1,2) - 휘슬 넣는 거 추천 드려요. 슬라이더 부분은 앞에만요.
00:08:250 (4) - 간격 일정하게 하기위해 이 노트를 (192,88) 으로 옮겨주세요. (3)부터 (6) 사이 간격이 1.30x가 되도록해주세요.흠...00:08:250 (4) - 뭔가 여기를 강조하고 싶기도 하고 00:08:250 (4,5,6) - 삼각형 흐름을 잡아놓을거라 패스합니다.
00:14:750 (3) - 드럼 힛사 피니쉬 넣어주세요
00:17:917 (3) - 샘플셋 노멀해주세요
00:20:083 (2) - 뒤에 휘슬을 넣으신게 드럼 소리를 강조시키려는 의도인 것 같은데, 00:17:417 (2,1,2) 부분에 소프트 휘슬을 넣었으니까 소프트 힛사로 넣는게 통일되고 좋을 것 같아요..
00:27:250 (1) - 샘플셋 노멀해주세요
00:38:083 (5) - 드럼 피니쉬 추천 드립니다^^
00:38:917 (3,4) - 뒷부분에 휘슬 넣어주세요. 00:41:583 (3,4) 에 휘슬을 넣었으므로..
00:45:833 (6) - 드럼 피니쉬
00:45:917 (7) - 이건 그대로 피니쉬 넣어주세요
00:47:250 (1,2) - 뉴콤보 바꾸는 게 좋을 것 같아요? 뭘 바꿔염...?
00:48:583 (1) - 클랩보단 피니쉬 추천드려요(동시에 넣으셔도되고요ㅎㅎ;)
00:58:917 (4) - 뉴콤보..?
01:08:583 (7) - 샘플셋을 노멀로 바꿔주세요
01:10:250 (1) - 머리에 샘플셋 소프트 피니쉬 넣어주세요
01:12:917 (1) - ^
01:15:417 (1) - 머리에 노멀 피니쉬
01:17:917 (5) - 드럼 힛사보단 노멀 힛사가 낫다고 생각합니다
01:27:639 (2) - 맨 끝에 드럼 피니쉬

힛사 위주로 모딩해봤습니다...조금이나마 도움이 됬으면 좋겠네요ㅎㅎ

Good Luck!

일단 힛사는 냅두겠습니다...
제너럴은 몰아서 고칠게욤

SnowNiNo_ wrote:
k here is your mod :>

[list:1337][Insane]
00:08:750 (1) - should get more emphasizedI think h\now is okay.
00:10:750 (3,4) - looks nicer if you spaced more xdumm... 00:11:083 (4,1) - but this spacing....XD
00:24:750 - 00:30:083 - add a notes make the flow more smooth imoI want to stop flow
00:42:917 (4,5) - rhythm should be like this00:43:250 - I think this part has drum
01:26:750 (1) - this could be more nicer lol?
k

Len

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Len 9 years ago

no kds recheck

Hard:

하드에 적합한 난이도인것같네요.

Insane:

잘만드셨네요 잡을곳이 없습니다.

나머지 난이도도 완벽한것같습니다. 아무리 체크해도 나쁜것같은 패턴은 없네요 굿럭

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Gloria Guard

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??????????????

Edit : 닉네임 밑에 노미네이터 뱃지가 없었다면 단순한 장난일텐데, 노미네이터라는 뱃지가 붙어있으니 매퍼 두번 죽이기. ㅋㅋ 사스가 렌쨩

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Gloria Guard wrote:
??????????????

넹?

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ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ

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웃지마욧ㅠㅠ

HelloSCV

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HelloSCV 9 years ago

Gloria Guard wrote:
??????????????

Edit : 닉네임 밑에 노미네이터 뱃지가 없었다면 단순한 장난일텐데, 노미네이터라는 뱃지가 붙어있으니 매퍼 두번 죽이기. ㅋㅋ 사스가 렌쨩

일단 화가나시더라도 조금만 냉정하게 판단을 해주시고. 모쪼록 잘 해결 됐으면 좋겠네요

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ㅋㅋ

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-NanoRIPE-

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-NanoRIPE- 9 years ago

hi as promised

[Metadata]
looks fine

[General]

Disable Countdown for Easy diff
Add special hitsound? like "Soft-sliderslide" to make the slider slient? or something ~
Can you use another bg? because your bg just 1024x768,i know its rankable but the size still low imo
also maybe Put the Character name (Rhodante* member) in Tags?

[Easy]
01:26:750 (2) - saya rasa slidertailnya harus di 01:27:750 karena suara drumnya nggk dpt gitu

well diff ini udah bagus banget

[Normal]
00:08:750 (1,2) - blanket is kinda off here

nice diff bro

[Hard]
00:02:917 (1) - i think here should be nc because the word "Mada-Mada" looks strong here
00:13:250 (5,7,8) - this pattern make me confuses xd
00:14:083 (1) - blanket is kinda off here
00:21:750 (7) - can you move this to (340,189)? so it will make flow better with slider (6) and (7)
00:26:917 (6) - move this little bit down for good flow
00:40:917 (1,2,3) - i'm not really like the pattern here xd looks odd imo (maybe ctrl j slider (2) or make straight slider all of that slider)
00:45:417 (6) - curve slider here? because too edgy imo
01:22:583 (2,4,5) - ohh not this again xd

[Insane]
00:16:083 (4,6) - imperfect blanket
00:19:083 (5) - move to (256,132)? to make the flow better imo
00:21:417 (4,5) - i'm just curious,why you make this pattern a jump and then you follow ds at 00:18:750 (4,5) (they have same rhythm and same vocal to emphatize it but you make a jump here)
00:55:917 (2) - move to (256,36) for better placement?
01:23:917 (2,3,4,5,6) - make the pattern same as 00:14:583 (2,3,4,5,6) for consitency?

[Neipezi]
00:03:667 (1) - Questionable spinner (I Suggest map something around here and start the spinner at 00:04:750)
00:13:750 (1) - stack this with 00:13:250 (2) or somewhere so it make the circle see clearly
00:26:417 (2,4) - blanket would be great
00:32:417 (4,5) - swap it (it looks awkward rhythm imo)
01:03:417 (1,3) - can you avoid this overlap? for consistency
01:06:083 (1) - unnecessary nc
01:21:417 (2,4) - what about stacked?
01:22:750 (4) - move to (380,240) then blanket it with 01:23:250 (6) ?
01:23:417 (1,3) - overlap
01:24:583 (4) - move to (200,208) for better flow imo
01:25:250 (2) - unstack it and move to 01:25:250 (384,304) because i think stack not a good choice here
01:27:639 (2) - move little bit down? so the slidertail (1) immediatelty below sliderhead (2)

ok thats it from me~
GL!

Gloria Guard

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HelloSCV wrote:
Gloria Guard wrote:
??????????????

Edit : 닉네임 밑에 노미네이터 뱃지가 없었다면 단순한 장난일텐데, 노미네이터라는 뱃지가 붙어있으니 매퍼 두번 죽이기. ㅋㅋ 사스가 렌쨩
일단 화가나시더라도 조금만 냉정하게 판단을 해주시고. 모쪼록 잘 해결 됐으면 좋겠네요

흠..... 말투때문인지는 모르겠지만 저글이 화난걸로 보이면 저는 조금 의외네여;; 저건 100% 장난식으로 쓴글인데 남들이 보기엔 비꼬면서 화내는글로 보였나본데.. 저 글에 대해서 별의미 없어요 따로 오해는 안했으면 좋겠네요 개인적으로 렌님이랑 사이가 안좋은게 아니라서 조흔 결과가 있기를 빠람

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-NanoRIPE- wrote:
hi as promised

[Metadata]
looks fine

[General]
Disable Countdown for Easy diff
Add special hitsound? like "Soft-sliderslide" to make the slider slient? or something ~
Can you use another bg? because your bg just 1024x768,i know its rankable but the size still low imo
also maybe Put the Character name (Rhodante* member) in Tags?
[Easy]
01:26:750 (2) - saya rasa slidertailnya harus di 01:27:750 karena suara drumnya nggk dpt gitu

well diff ini udah bagus banget

[Normal]
00:08:750 (1,2) - blanket is kinda off here

nice diff bro

[Hard]
00:02:917 (1) - i think here should be nc because the word "Mada-Mada" looks strong herefor pattern.
00:13:250 (5,7,8) - this pattern make me confuses xdfor emphasize,
00:14:083 (1) - blanket is kinda off here
00:21:750 (7) - can you move this to (340,189)? so it will make flow better with slider (6) and (7)for stack
00:26:917 (6) - move this little bit down for good flowUmmm..Just followed distance and Ctrl+G
00:40:917 (1,2,3) - i'm not really like the pattern here xd looks odd imo (maybe ctrl j slider (2) or make straight slider all of that slider)It's okay enough. I think
00:45:417 (6) - curve slider here? because too edgy imoalready curved...?
01:22:583 (2,4,5) - ohh not this again xd ^

[Insane]
00:16:083 (4,6) - imperfect blanket
00:19:083 (5) - move to (256,132)? to make the flow better imofor stack.
00:21:417 (4,5) - i'm just curious,why you make this pattern a jump and then you follow ds at 00:18:750 (4,5) (they have same rhythm and same vocal to emphatize it but you make a jump here)
00:55:917 (2) - move to (256,36) for better placement?for distance and symmetry.
01:23:917 (2,3,4,5,6) - make the pattern same as 00:14:583 (2,3,4,5,6) for consitency?

[Neipezi]
00:03:667 (1) - Questionable spinner (I Suggest map something around here and start the spinner at 00:04:750)
00:13:750 (1) - stack this with 00:13:250 (2) or somewhere so it make the circle see clearly
00:26:417 (2,4) - blanket would be great
00:32:417 (4,5) - swap it (it looks awkward rhythm imo)
01:03:417 (1,3) - can you avoid this overlap? for consistency
01:06:083 (1) - unnecessary nc
01:21:417 (2,4) - what about stacked?
01:22:750 (4) - move to (380,240) then blanket it with 01:23:250 (6) ?
01:23:417 (1,3) - overlap
01:24:583 (4) - move to (200,208) for better flow imo
01:25:250 (2) - unstack it and move to 01:25:250 (384,304) because i think stack not a good choice here
01:27:639 (2) - move little bit down? so the slidertail (1) immediatelty below sliderhead (2)

ok thats it from me~
GL!

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DeRandom Otaku 9 years ago

alright
[General]

Seems Fine

[Neipezi]

00:07:750 (2) - u could copy the same shape as 00:07:417 (1) - , visuals would look nicer that way
00:08:083 (3,4,1) - use consistent spacing here? There is no spacial sound at 00:08:583 - that u need to emphasize so giving it higher spacing makes no sense
00:15:250 (2,3) - The transition is kinda awkward since 2 doesnt flow well towards 3 , its kinda messed up
00:17:750 (4) - the vocal at the repeat of the slider 00:18:083 - is actually louder than the vocal that the slider head supports so u should make it clickable
00:27:417 (2,2) - the overlap looks kinda bad , would be cool if u avoid it
00:36:750 - consider adding a soft addition finish on slider start since heres a cymbal sound in the song
00:47:417 (1) - u dont need this nc
01:08:416 (2,3) - This is not a good idea since 01:08:583 (3) - Supports a loud vocal which is stacked under (2) that way its getting no emphasis at all . a jump here would be a lot cooler
01:12:917 (1) - why is this stacked under 01:12:583 (5) - ? there should be a jump here aswell like i said in the above suggestion
01:14:917 - i dont see a reason for u to decrease SV here since the pitch here is same as 01:15:417 - or is there any spacial reason for that?
01:26:750 (1) - the slider start of this slider supports one of the loudest sound of the song which is a must to be emphasized so i would suggest u to rather put a jump here aswell just like in the "Insane" difficulty , u can see theres a big jump in that diff which gives proper emphasis to the cymbal sound
also could u set the tickrate to 1? i dont think u need tick rate 2 and since other diffs have tickrate 1 also so u should change that in your difficulty to be consistent with the rest of the set

[Insane]

00:13:917 (4,1) - This jump is abit too spaced compared to the spacing between 00:12:750 (1,2,3,4) - . it does look nice but it feels like the jump is forced
00:21:750 (5,1) - could fix stack
00:27:417 (2,1) - spacing between these two should be same or higher than 00:27:250 (1,2) - since there is a cymbal sound at 00:27:583 - which u need to emphasize more
00:29:750 (4) - The sliderend supports a pretty loud sound . its louder than the sound which the sliderhead supports so i would suggest u make it clickable
00:36:750 - there is a cymbal sound in the background and u could use a soft addition finish hitsound to represent it
00:47:750 (3) - add nc to emphasize the instrument more
00:51:250 (5,6) - 00:50:917 (3,4) - i highly suggest u to use same spacing between both jumps since the pitch of the song is same
00:52:417 (4,5) - ctrl+g'ing this plays much better
00:59:416 (6,1) - spacing between these should be higher than 00:59:083 (3,4) - because the kiai starts there and there is loud cymbal sound which needs emphasis
01:17:917 (5) - remove finish

[Hard]

00:11:417 (1) - Need more emphasis for this because of the cymbal
00:13:917 (8,1) - spacing between these should be higher or same as 00:13:750 (7,8) - since the pitch at 00:14:083 - is more intense
00:15:417 (5,7) - could u probably overlap these a bit more the current one looks messy
00:22:250 (1,4) - They slightly touch each other which look uuugly af :< please avoid this overlap
00:27:583 (1,4) - stack error
00:35:083 (7,1) - stack these for consistency? its not really a big deal but u stacked patterns like these before such as 00:32:417 (7,1) - 00:24:417 (7,1) - etc so i think u should stack 00:35:083 (7,1) - also but its really not that big of a deal
01:15:917 (2,3) - This kinda threw me off . the spacing is a bit too high compared to the rest and there is no spacial sound or instrument at 01:16:250 - which u need to emphasize so nerf this spacing a little

[Euny]

00:22:750 - 00:23:083 - These are some pretty important vocals i think they should be supported by some kind of object , even a sliderend would work but sliderslider isnt enough for these
00:33:417 - 00:33:750 - same goes for these
00:42:583 (2) - replace with 1/2 slider instead ? because theres a vocal at red tick which shouldnt be ignored
00:47:417 (1) - it shouldnt be stacked under 00:47:250 (4) - since the song is getting more intenser fastly i would rather use DS for 00:47:250 (4,1) - because stacking them dont give any emphasis to the loud vocal at 00:47:417 -

[Del]

00:02:083 - unnecessary green timing point
00:11:417 (1,2,3) - for these i would suggest u to copy 00:11:417 (1) - and paste it at 00:12:250 - since they are both same in length and they support almost the same sound while for 00:13:083 (3) - u could use some variation since it supports 3 1/2 sounds in a row~ i hope u got my point
01:26:750 (2) - u can end this slider at 01:27:750 - so that it would support the drums also . it kinda feels empty right now since there is no object right now for those fdum sounds

ok thats it i guess. gl

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Kencho 9 years ago

Umm…… check DeRandom Otaku's mod first?

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Kencho wrote:
Umm…… check DeRandom Otaku's mod first?

Oh. I forgot fixing That mod....
@NanoRipe, Derandom otaku
Neipezi said "didn't fixed anything."

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Electoz 9 years ago

Neoskylove wrote:
Kencho wrote:
Umm…… check DeRandom Otaku's mod first?
Oh. I forgot fixing That mod....
@NanoRipe, Derandom otaku
Neipezi said "didn't fixed anything."

Please reply to the mods properly, rather than saying "didn't fix anything"
At least providing reasons why those suggestions aren't helpful to him will help us BNs a lot in the future so we can know mapper's intrepretation/intention on each part of the song.
Not to mention that modders need your reply as well so they can improve themselves.

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Electoz wrote:
Please respond to the mods properly, rather than saying "didn't fix anything"
At least providing reasons why those suggestions aren't helpful to him will help us BNs a lot in the future so we can know mapper's intrepretation/intention on each part of the song.

Sorry. But I'm not Neipezi, and Neipezi is banned mapper. So I got messenger from Neipezi, He said "Say Nanoripe And Derandom otaku that I didn't fixed anything." Anyway, I'll say it to Neipezi.

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Electoz 9 years ago

Neoskylove wrote:
Sorry. But I'm not Neipezi, and Neipezi is banned mapper. So I got messenger from Neipezi, He said "Say Nanoripe And Derandom otaku that I didn't fixed anything." Anyway, I'll say it to Neipezi.

Please make him reply and quote his reply here.
Sry Kencho if this looked like I'm butting in I think this is needed, I'm still monitoring this set so I might recheck this again if you decided to bubble this.

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Electoz wrote:
Neoskylove wrote:
Sorry. But I'm not Neipezi, and Neipezi is banned mapper. So I got messenger from Neipezi, He said "Say Nanoripe And Derandom otaku that I didn't fixed anything." Anyway, I'll say it to Neipezi.
Please make him reply and quote his reply here.
Sry Kencho if this looked like I'm butting in I think this is needed, I'm still monitoring this set so I might recheck this again if you decided to bubble this.

Yes. I quoted all Neipezi's Reply mods. I got .osu file and .txt file.
But this time, Neipezi jusy said this one.....I'm Talkkng to him.
@Derandon otaku
I'll fix your mods asap.

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Len 9 years ago

i just came for his request but woohoo

here are some of the details:

he didnt fix everything of my mod stuffs when im normal modder not bn. he rejected and said ITS MY CONCEPT
but recently he came for recheck it and he said im gonna consider to fix them if those patterns is bad.
when i heard that im so upset cuz break his concept for icons? or fix BNs mods only? well
it means if im not BN he will never consider or think about my mod and he didnt ask for recheck.... (acutally icons cuz he said if it has bubble or someone give a bubble on this, someone will rank it)

his attitude~~personality~~ speaks for itself..

its about mapsets creators story obviously not about neipezi xd

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Len wrote:
i just came for his request but well..

here are some of the details:

he didnt fix everything of my mod stuffs when im normal modder not bn
but recently he came for recheck it and he said im gonna consider to fix them if those patterns is bad
it means if im not BN he will never consider or think about my mod and he didnt ask for recheck.... (acutally icons cuz he said if it has bubble or someone give a bubble on this, someone will rank it)

his attitude~~personality~~ speaks for itself..

It is about Neipezi, Not me.

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Len 9 years ago

Neoskylove wrote:
위에 문제는 네피지님 문제라서 저랑 관련은 크게 없...

i was disappointed ur personality
thats all no drama xd

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Len wrote:
Neoskylove wrote:
위에 문제는 네피지님 문제라서 저랑 관련은 크게 없...
i was disappointed ur personality

그건 죄송하긴 한데 굳이 여기까지 와서 공개적으로 사람 힘들게 하실 필요는 없다고 봅니다.
제가보기에는 그냥 와봤다 라기 보단 저 저격하러 온것밖에 안보이는데 말이죠.

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DeRandom Otaku wrote:
[Hard]
00:11:417 (1) - Need more emphasis for this because of the cymbal00:10:750 (6,7,1) - for making triangle, I'll consider about that.
00:13:917 (8,1) - spacing between these should be higher or same as 00:13:750 (7,8) - since the pitch at 00:14:083 - is more intense00:14:083 (1) - I don't think it doesn't need to emphasize..
00:15:417 (5,7) - could u probably overlap these a bit more the current one looks messy
00:22:250 (1,4) - They slightly touch each other which look uuugly af :< please avoid this overlap
00:27:583 (1,4) - stack errorNo, It's not stack error...?
00:35:083 (7,1) - stack these for consistency? its not really a big deal but u stacked patterns like these before such as 00:32:417 (7,1) - 00:24:417 (7,1) - etc so i think u should stack 00:35:083 (7,1) - also but its really not that big of a dealFirst, I stacked, But stack was Hard to read because two sliders was stacked perfectly.
01:15:917 (2,3) - This kinda threw me off . the spacing is a bit too high compared to the rest and there is no spacial sound or instrument at 01:16:250 - which u need to emphasize so nerf this spacing a little01:18:583 (2,3) - =00:06:583 (2,3) - . It is okay, I think

No comment=fixed.
Sorry, I deleted My insane diff:(

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riffy 9 years ago

If you think that the mapper's attitude is going way too wrong just notify us and we'll handle this. There is no need to start flaming in the beatmap's thread. This is also a reminder to keep irrelevant comments to yourselves, these are not welcome here.

Stay on topic, be polite.

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Doyak 9 years ago

@Len: 네오님의 고집 + 귀차니즘 + 위선적인 모습에 다소 실망하신 걸로 보이는데 굳이 여기서 공개적으로 공격하는 발언까지 하실 필요는 없습니다. 그보다는 매퍼에게 이것저것을 고쳐야 할 이유를 잘 설명해서 납득시키는 게 BN의 역할입니다. 마음에 안 든다면 노미를 안 해주면 됩니다.

@Neoskylove: 여러 차례 말씀드렸지만 맵을 랭크시키는 데에만 급급해서 모딩 들어온 거 고침/안 고침으로 끝낼 게 아니라 모더가 설명해주는 이유를 잘 듣고 왜 그런 모딩들이 들어오는지 생각해봐서 자신의 맵에 도움이 될 수 있다면 적극적으로 고쳐나가는 게 좋습니다. 딱 모더가 하라는 대로만 바꿔야 된다는 법도 없고, 같은 지적을 맵 전체에 걸쳐서 받게 된다면 단순 '컨셉'이 어떤가 이전에 그것이 다른 문제를 야기하고 있지는 않은지 생각해보고 받아들여야 하고요. BN 모딩이라고 해서 특별할 것 없습니다. 보다 자신의 확고한 생각이 있다면 BN한테도 자신의 의도를 잘 설명해주면 됩니다.
그리고 렌님 발언에 대해서 오해를 하신 것 같은데 렌님이 지적하는 건 렌님이 "자신이 BN이 아니었을 때와 BN이 된 후"의 네오님의 태도가 180도 뒤바뀌어서 위선적이라는 느낌을 받으신 거에요. 다시 말씀드리지만 좋은 맵이 먼저 있고 그것을 BN이 노미해주는 거지, BN의 입맛에 맞추기 위해 맵을 바꿔야 하는 게 아닙니다. 모더가 BN인가 여부가 중요한 게 아니라 그 모딩이 얼마나 유효한가가 중요한 거고요.

두 분 서로 감정 풀고 다시 차근차근 대화를 해보셨으면 좋겠습니다. 좁은 매핑 커뮤니티에서 두 사람이 싸우면 본인들은 물론이고 모두가 불편합니다.

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Kencho 9 years ago

Actually I don't know what you guys say.

Electoz wrote:
Please make him reply and quote his reply here.
Sry Kencho if this looked like I'm butting in I think this is needed, I'm still monitoring this set so I might recheck this again if you decided to bubble this.

No, you are right. We need to confirm that is mapper has been fixed the mods or rejected the mods and their reasons. So Neoskylove you should make Neipezi reply and quote his reply here.

Len wrote:
it means if im not BN he will never consider or think about my mod and he didnt ask for recheck.... (acutally icons cuz he said if it has bubble or someone give a bubble on this, someone will rank it)

I know your feeling because I also tried. People always look forward to BN's mods and never consider the mods if we are not BNs. They maybe think only BN's mods is important. But it is true cause BNs are more convincing and reliable, more importantly is that BNs can nomination their maps, even they may not think we will become BNs.
Well, maybe some people like that are really bad, but in my opinion, everyone has made mistakes and look down on others. Give him a chance to turn over if he is wrong.

Neoskylove wrote:
It is about Neipezi, Not me.

I don't know it is about Neipezi or you, but I would believe Len's said. It doesn't mean I don't believe you because I think you are not that bad. So if you think you are wrong, we will give a change to you. If you think you didn't wrong then continue to do things that you think right.

Bakari wrote:
If you think that the mapper's attitude is going way too wrong just notify us and we'll handle this. There is no need to start flaming in the beatmap's thread. This is also a reminder to keep irrelevant comments to yourselves, these are not welcome here.

Stay on topic, be polite.

Sorry Bakari, that is all I want to say because I think it is very important and I am try to be very polite.

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Kencho wrote:
Actually I don't know what you guys say.
Electoz wrote:
Please make him reply and quote his reply here.
Sry Kencho if this looked like I'm butting in I think this is needed, I'm still monitoring this set so I might recheck this again if you decided to bubble this.
No, you are right. We need to confirm that is mapper has been fixed the mods or rejected the mods and their reasons. So Neoskylove you should make Neipezi reply and quote his reply here.Yes, I'm saying to Neipezi.

Len wrote:
it means if im not BN he will never consider or think about my mod and he didnt ask for recheck.... (acutally icons cuz he said if it has bubble or someone give a bubble on this, someone will rank it)
I know your feeling because I also tried. People always look forward to BN's mods and never consider the mods if we are not BNs. They maybe think only BN's mods is important. But it is true cause BNs are more convincing and reliable, more importantly is that BNs can nomination their maps, even they may not think we will become BNs.
Well, maybe some people like that are really bad, but in my opinion, everyone has made mistakes and look down on others. Give him a chance to turn over if he is wrong.

Neoskylove wrote:
It is about Neipezi, Not me.
I don't know it is about Neipezi or you, but I would believe Len's said. It doesn't mean I don't believe you because I think you are not that bad. So if you think you are wrong, we will give a change to you. If you think you didn't wrong then continue to do things that you think right.

Bakari wrote:
If you think that the mapper's attitude is going way too wrong just notify us and we'll handle this. There is no need to start flaming in the beatmap's thread. This is also a reminder to keep irrelevant comments to yourselves, these are not welcome here.

Stay on topic, be polite.
Sorry Bakari, that is all I want to say because I think it is very important and I am try to be very polite.

I don't think only BN's mod is important.
Sorry about it, I want to finish arguing about this anyway.

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그리고 혹시나 해서 하는 말이지만 렌님한테 악감정 같은거 없습니다.
오해하지 마시길.

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-Neipezi wrote:
Neipezi's modding answer
-NanoRIPE- wrote:
[Neipezi]
00:03:667 (1) - Questionable spinner (I Suggest map something around here and start the spinner at 00:04:750) Not change. There have been previous to the press, it says again.(That part is stepped on sound FX Uplifter.)
00:13:750 (1) - stack this with 00:13:250 (2) or somewhere so it make the circle see clearly I could not understand the words.
00:26:417 (2,4) - blanket would be great It was already applied.
00:32:417 (4,5) - swap it (it looks awkward rhythm imo) hmm.. I seem fine.
01:03:417 (1,3) - can you avoid this overlap? for consistency ^
01:06:083 (1) - unnecessary nc hmm... okay..
01:21:417 (2,4) - what about stacked? move to the x224 y180
01:22:750 (4) - move to (380,240) then blanket it with 01:23:250 (6) ? It is not a good idea by the pattern.
01:23:417 (1,3) - overlap
01:24:583 (4) - move to (200,208) for better flow imo np
01:25:250 (2) - unstack it and move to 01:25:250 (384,304) because i think stack not a good choice here
01:27:639 (2) - move little bit down? so the slidertail (1) immediatelty below sliderhead (2)
DeRandom Otaku wrote:
[Neipezi]
00:07:750 (2) - u could copy the same shape as 00:07:417 (1) - , visuals would look nicer that way okay, fixed
00:08:083 (3,4,1) - use consistent spacing here? There is no spacial sound at 00:08:583 - that u need to emphasize so giving it higher spacing makes no sense 00:08:583 - of the lowered distance snap.
00:15:250 (2,3) - The transition is kinda awkward since 2 doesnt flow well towards 3 , its kinda messed up 00:15: 250 - of the lowered distance snap.
00:17:750 (4) - the vocal at the repeat of the slider 00:18:083 - is actually louder than the vocal that the slider head supports so u should make it clickable 00:17:750 - added to the slide 1/2, 00:18:083 - to slide 1/1 change
00:27:417 (2,2) - the overlap looks kinda bad , would be cool if u avoid it 00:27:583 (1,2,3) - is the symmetry. And it is not related.
00:36:750 - consider adding a soft addition finish on slider start since heres a cymbal sound in the song fixed
00:47:417 (1) - u dont need this nc okay, fixed
01:08:416 (2,3) - This is not a good idea since 01:08:583 (3) - Supports a loud vocal which is stacked under (2) that way its getting no emphasis at all . a jump here would be a lot cooler Moving the coordinates of (1) to
01:12:917 (1) - why is this stacked under 01:12:583 (5) - ? there should be a jump here aswell like i said in the above suggestion
01:14:917 - i dont see a reason for u to decrease SV here since the pitch here is same as 01:15:417 - or is there any spacial reason for that? fixed
01:26:750 (1) - the slider start of this slider supports one of the loudest sound of the song which is a must to be emphasized so i would suggest u to rather put a jump here aswell just like in the "Insane" difficulty , u can see theres a big jump in that diff which gives proper emphasis to the cymbal sound 01: 26: 583 (2) - between the widened more.
also could u set the tickrate to 1? i dont think u need tick rate 2 and since other diffs have tickrate 1 also so u should change that in your difficulty to be consistent with the rest of the set Your opinion is recommended. However, you can hear a clap or other sounds in between 1/1 of the slider. So we apply the sticks 2
p.s 이런말 안할려고 했는데 한마디로 좀 하겠습니다. 요새 바뻐서 모딩온거 체크도 못하고 있는데 와서 이래저래좀 하지맙시다. 저도 사람인데 안바쁜가요ㅡㅡ
뒷글보니까 저도 기분안좋고 욕할려다 말았습니다. 븡이면 븡답게 일하시던지 와서 저격같은 글로 사람 짜증나게 하지마세요. 짜증나니까..;;
벤유저도 포럼글 못보는 줄아나.. 그리고 리체크 해줄꺼면 제대로 해주던지 대충하는 티가 나고 그런 븡들 제일 마음 안듭니다ㅡㅡ

Kencho

952 posts

Joined August 2013

Kencho 9 years ago

Black is Personal comments.
Bold Black is Highly recommended to fix.
Red is Unrankable that you should fix.

[General]

Countdown :
Del's Easy: 0
Euny's Normal: 0
Hard: 0
G.G's Light Insane: 0
-Neipezi's Insane: 1
Wave hitsounds with possible delay > 5ms :
soft-hitclap10.wav
Download this : soft-hitclap10.wav

[Del's Easy]

Looks good.

[Euny's Normal]]

Using HP3.5?

[Hard]

00:13:917 (8) - I don't think here should be using bigger DS, so you may try this.
SPOILER
00:15:917 (6,7) - Stack it carefully.
00:20:583 (3,4) - ^
01:22:083 (1) - Cancel NC
01:24:750 (1) - ^

[G.G's Light Insane]

Using HP5.5?
00:12:250 (3) - I don't like the radian of this slider, you may try this.
SPOILER
00:23:917 (2) - Change to one circle + one 1/2 slider? Just like this.
SPOILER
00:24:417 (4,5) - Blanket this clearly
00:26:583 (2,3) - ^
00:53:750 (4) - Change to one circle + one 1/2 slider? Because I not recommend you to ignore 00:53:917 - .

[-Neipezi's Insane]

Using HP6?
00:14:583 (4) - Stack with 00:15:250 (2) - ? Because now 00:14:083 (3,4) - looks too far.
00:22:583 (1) - No need to NC.
00:23:917 (8,1) - Swap NC
00:31:417 (1,3) - Stack it carefully.
00:32:083 (3) - Also I don't like the radian of this slider, you may try this.
SPOILER
00:55:250 (5) - Just like the first time I mod this map, can you put this one far away? like x105 y79.
01:10:250 (1,3) - Don't overlap, just try to make another slider sharp here.
01:20:083 (1) - 01:25:417 (1) - No need to NC these.

Don't forget to make Neipezi reply and quote his reply here. Call me back when you are ready.

Enon

Beatmap Nominator

2,705 posts

Joined November 2012

Enon 9 years ago

-Neipezi wrote:
이런말 안할려고 했는데 한마디로 좀 하겠습니다. 요새 바뻐서 모딩온거 체크도 못하고 있는데 와서 이래저래좀 하지맙시다. 저도 사람인데 안바쁜가요ㅡㅡ 뒷글보니까 저도 기분안좋고 욕할려다 말았습니다. 븡이면 븡답게 일하시던지 와서 저격같은 글로 사람 짜증나게 하지마세요. 짜증나니까..;; 벤유저도 포럼글 못보는 줄아나.. 그리고 리체크 해줄꺼면 제대로 해주던지 대충하는 티가 나고 그런 븡들 제일 마음 안듭니다ㅡㅡ

일단 화가나시더라도 조금만 냉정하게 판단을 해주시는 게 어떨까요?

Beomsan

1,890 posts

Joined November 2013

Beomsan 9 years ago

Len wrote:
its about mapsets creators story obviously not about neipezi not about neipezi not about neipezi not about neipezi not about neipezi xd xd xd xd

Rizia

3,114 posts

Joined January 2012

Rizia 9 years ago

[-Neipezi's Insane]

disable countdown
00:03:667 (1) - better map something here, not spinner only

[G.G's Light Insane]

dissable widescreen support
00:42:917 (3) - maybe reverer this slider
01:27:583 (1) - 1/6

[Del's Easy]

00:04:750 (3) - reverse it to avoid too rapid rhythm on slow part

call me back if you nned me

Affirmation

2,550 posts

Joined March 2015

Topic Starter

Affirmation 9 years ago

-Neipezi wrote:
Neipezi's modding answer
Kencho wrote:
Black is Personal comments.
Bold Black is Highly recommended to fix.
Red is Unrankable that you should fix.

[General]
Countdown :
-Neipezi's Insane: 1 fixed

[notice][-Neipezi's Insane]
Using HP6? fixed
00:14:583 (4) - Stack with 00:15:250 (2) - ? Because now 00:14:083 (3,4) - looks too far.
00:22:583 (1) - No need to NC. fixed
00:23:917 (8,1) - Swap NC fixed
00:31:417 (1,3) - Stack it carefully. fixed
00:32:083 (3) - Also I don't like the radian of this slider, you may try this. fixed
SPOILER
00:55:250 (5) - Just like the first time I mod this map, can you put this one far away? like x105 y79. np
01:10:250 (1,3) - Don't overlap, just try to make another slider sharp here. fixed
01:20:083 (1) - 01:25:417 (1) - No need to NC these. fixed
Don't forget to make Neipezi reply and quote his reply here. Call me back when you are ready.
Rizia wrote:
[-Neipezi's Insane]
disable countdown completed in Kencho's modding
00:03:667 (1) - better map something here, not spinner only no change(That part is stepped on sound FX Uplifter.)
call me back if you nned me
thank you for modding

Kencho wrote:
[Hard]
00:13:917 (8) - I don't think here should be using bigger DS, so you may try this.I think 00:13:750 (7,8) - should be emphasized..
SPOILER
00:15:917 (6,7) - Stack it carefully.
00:20:583 (3,4) - ^
01:22:083 (1) - Cancel NC
01:24:750 (1) - ^

No comment=fixed.

Gloria Guard

2,277 posts

Joined May 2011

Gloria Guard 9 years ago

Kencho wrote:

[G.G's Light Insane]
Using HP5.5? k
00:12:250 (3) - I don't like the radian of this slider, you may try this. k
SPOILER
00:23:917 (2) - Change to one circle + one 1/2 slider? Just like this. I don't like that patterns. but I change to one circle+one 1/2slider this rhythm.
SPOILER
00:24:417 (4,5) - Blanket this clearly k
00:26:583 (2,3) - ^ ^
00:53:750 (4) - Change to one circle + one 1/2 slider? Because I not recommend you to ignore 00:53:917 - . Okay

Rizia wrote:
[G.G's Light Insane]
dissable widescreen support k
00:42:917 (3) - maybe reverer this slider k
01:27:583 (1) - 1/6 k

SPOILER

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Euny

2,274 posts

Joined January 2014

Euny 9 years ago

HelloSCV wrote:
[Euny's Normal]
00:42:083 (1,3) - 드럼소리 맞춰서 클랩 넣으셨는데 여기 두개 슬라이더에도 적절하게 넣으시는건 어떨까요?
00:48:917 - 키아이 부분도 같은 볼륨으로 유지되는게 좀 아쉬운데 60%정도로 키우시면 좋을거같아요

✔applied all 고마워요!

TaMul wrote:
[Euny's Normal]

00:08:750 (1,2) - 블랭킷 수정해주세요 요런 식으로요 https://puu.sh/qIZzk/eefbcf5bf7.png✔fixed
00:22:250 (1) - 00:16:917 (1) / 00:19:583 (1)에 피니쉬 넣은 것처럼 여기도 피니쉬 넣는게 낫지 않을까요?✔fixed
00:42:917 (3) - 다음 슬라이더 모양에 따라서 곡선 슬라이더가 낫지 않을까 싶어요✔fixed
00:45:583 (2) - 머리하고 리버스 부분에 드럼 피니쉬 괜찮을 것 같아요✔fixed
00:48:583 (2) - 드럼 피니쉬보단 소프트 피니쉬가 강조시키는데 좋을 것 같아요✔fixed
00:54:250 (1) - 심벌즈 소리가 살짝 나는데, 애디션 노말으로 피니쉬넣는게 좋을 것같습니다✔fixed
01:10:250 (1,2,3,4) - (1)번 슬라이드 머리에 피니쉬보단 클랩, (2), (3)번 슬라이드 머리엔 클랩을 넣어주시고, (4)번 슬라이드에는 앞뒤 순서대로 클랩과 피니쉬를 넣는게 나을 듯 합니다. 5번 슬라이드 까지 힛사가 없어서 약간 허전한 느낌이 없진않네요✔fixed
01:14:250 (4) - 머리하고 리버스에 피니쉬 넣으셨는데, 클랩이 낫지 않을까 싶습니다. 잇차오! 할때 음이 다르니까요..여긴 킵할게요 셋 다 보컬 강조음이라 쎄게 살리고 싶어요.
01:26:750 (2) - 이부분은 볼륨이 10%라서 넣으나 마나겠지만, 끝에 드럼 피니쉬 넣는것도 나쁘지 않아요✔fixed

고마워요!!

-NanoRIPE- wrote:
[Normal]
00:08:750 (1,2) - blanket is kinda off here✔fixed

nice diff bro thanks sis?

lololol thanks.

DeRandom Otaku wrote:
[Euny]
00:22:750 - 00:23:083 - These are some pretty important vocals i think they should be supported by some kind of object , even a sliderend would work but sliderslider isnt enough for thesei believe you can listen drum sounds. i try to merge with vocal too. but i dont think current one will be big problem for play c:
00:33:417 - 00:33:750 - same goes for these^same
00:42:583 (2) - replace with 1/2 slider instead ? because theres a vocal at red tick which shouldnt be ignoreddont need to take all rhythm for normal i guess. thats enough
00:47:417 (1) - it shouldnt be stacked under 00:47:250 (4) - since the song is getting more intenser fastly i would rather use DS for 00:47:250 (4,1) - because stacking them dont give any emphasis to the loud vocal at 00:47:417 - i dont think so they so fit for original music and cant feels hard for play.

sorry for didnt apply. i wanted keep my style for normal. anyways thanks for mod!

Kencho wrote:
[Euny's Normal]]
Using HP3.5?✔fixed

thanks for mod~

모두모두 사이좋게 동실동실 지내요. 업뎃부탁드려요~

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398,227,36416,1,0,3:0:0:0:
473,132,36749,6,0,P|422:111|395:64,1,110,4|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
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I updated all diff, and I fixed some Del's stuff(I said to del.)
I'm ready.
[Del's Easy]
◾00:04:750 (3) - reverse it to avoid too rapid rhythm on slow partIt's okay, I thiink.

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[Del's Easy update]
00:02:083 - deleted greenline.
00:20:917 (3) - changed rhythm.
00:22:250 (1,2,3) - changed some pattern.
00:49:250 (2) - changed iinto straigght sliider.
01:26:750 (2) - changed some pattern,.

Kencho

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Kencho 9 years ago

Looks fine.

Bubbled!

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Len 9 years ago

wait

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wait

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sahuang

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sahuang 9 years ago

Easy

:<

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Sahuang

<Neoskylove> http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/5464810
<Neoskylove> Which part?
<sahuang> beginning,i forgot,but it's a minor issue and you can ignore if u want
<Neoskylove> I think It's fine.
<Neoskylove> Because it followed vocal
<Neoskylove> maybe
<Neoskylove> And Del's Easy is totally hard.
<sahuang> k

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Waiting for Qualify.....

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Qualified

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Kalibe 9 years ago

grats !!

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grats!

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Enon 9 years ago

o mar gad

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Euny 9 years ago

수고하셨어요. Sky Future님 오시면 노멀 새거로 만들어드려야겠네요. 큰 문제 없다면 꼭 다시 복귀하시길 바라며 이 맵을 바칩시다 ㅋ. 퀄 축하드립니다.

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Kalibe wrote:
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Where's S.F.???????????

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Banned.

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Grats owo

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