[-Star_Lenz-] wrote:

Hi mz hotaru ^^

Random mod

Col : 1|2|3|4

Easy

00:15:530 (15530|1,15971|3) - ctrl+g serasa berat maen'in tangan jika 00:14:206 (14206|3,14647|2) - 3-4 tangan kanan lalu 00:15:088 (15088|0,15530|1) - 1-2 di tangan kiri.
^ jika di ctrl+g 00:15:971 (15971|1) - ini pindah ke col 3
00:19:059 (19059|1) - move col 3 lebih kerasa flownya
00:25:235 (25235|2) - move col 2 00:24:794 (24794|3,25235|2) - my feeling berat asli u,u lalu jika di acc 00:26:118 (26118|1) - ini pindah ke 4
^ accept atas 00:27:882 (27882|3,28765|0) - ctrl+g
00:34:059 - my recomended pattern biar ada variasi dikit http://puu.sh/p93TB/9f99c625d7.jpg keep Since it was Easy owo
00:39:353 (39353|1) - move col 4 ^
00:45:530 (45530|2) - move col 2 00:45:971 (45971|3) - single dan LN tidak di 3-4 lebih enak example 00:42:000 (42000|0,42221|1,42441|3,42882|2) - 00:20:824 (20824|3,21044|2,21265|0,21706|1) - stslenya gitukan xD
00:48:177 (48177|2) - move col 4 lalu jadikan LN itu karena ada suara lel suara gitar atau piano sih itu 00:49:059 - stop
dan 00:49:059 (49059|1) - jadikan LN stop 00:49:941 - well soalya jika tidak di buat LN 00:49:941 (49941|2) - LN ini gantung kan ikut itu suara.
00:51:706 (51706|2,53471|3,56559|3) - wew LNnya maen 3-4 terus baby
00:51:706 (51706|2) - ini LN pindah ke 1 sama kamu pass in lagi okay
00:56:559 (56559|3) - move col 3 00:57:000 (57000|1) - pindah ke col 4
00:57:441 - recomended http://puu.sh/p94DA/2c24ff8e4e.jpg
01:02:294 (62294|1,62735|1) - aww man ini jack ganggu LN di col 1 jack di col 2 01:02:294 (62294|1,62735|1) - jack pindah ke col 4 dan 01:03:177 (63177|3,63618|2,64059|0,64059|1) - ctrl+h hindari jack kembali
01:04:941 (64941|3) - move col 1
01:11:118 (71118|1,71559|2,72000|3) - ini stairs 1/2 jangan di col 2-3-4 tapi 4-3-2 singkatnya 01:11:118 (71118|1,71559|2,72000|3) - ctrl+g lalu 01:12:882 (72882|1) - ini move col 1
01:23:912 - gak banget deh jika LN + stairs ada di easy :v recomended http://puu.sh/p95Oj/9ee5be38ce.jpg

Normal

00:09:353 (9353|1,9353|3,10235|1,10235|3,11118|1,11118|3) - so i'am boring pattern xD 00:10:235 (10235|1) - move col 1
00:13:838 (13838|2) - mau nanya ini ngikut suara apa btw ? 00:13:765 (13765|3,13765|0,13985|1,14206|0,14427|3) - ini kan suara piano yah ? 00:13:838 (13838|2) - lalu ini apa ? delete saja Nah.. Sebenernya itu bunyi string Gitar.. jadi saya ngikutin itu xD
00:23:912 (23912|0,24353|1) - ctrl+g wall terus dari tadi 00:22:588 (22588|2,22588|3,23030|1,23030|0,23471|2,23471|3) - biasa gak balanced ke tangan
00:45:530 (45530|2,45530|1) - geser kekanan 1 baris lalu 00:45:971 (45971|3) - move col 2
00:49:941 (49941|2) - LN ikut suara instrumen kan ? bukan nya stop sampai sini ? 00:51:265 - Nope i guess owo
00:57:000 (57000|1,57000|2,57882|1,57882|2) - gampang boring wall kek gini ssaran saya sama ke kamu dikit re-pattern buat note wallnya
00:59:647 (59647|1) - move col 1
01:02:735 (62735|3,62956|2) - geser kek kiri 1 baris keep balanced 01:02:294 (62294|3) -
01:06:485 - missing note 01:05:824 (65824|1,65824|3,66044|2,66265|1) - same
01:07:588 (67588|3,67588|2,68030|1,68250|0,68471|1,68471|2,68912|1,68912|0,69353|2) - gak enak banget ini LNnya :3 recomended http://puu.sh/p96as/c840a7e422.jpg
01:15:088 (75088|2,75088|3,75530|1,75530|2,75971|0,75971|1,76412|2,76412|3) - kurang ngeh banget ini LN xD recomended http://puu.sh/p96sJ/1d3b54f9d3.jpg
01:29:647 (89647|2,89647|3,90088|1,90088|2,90530|0,90530|1,90971|3,90971|2,91412|1,91412|0,91853|3,91853|2,92074|1,92294|0,92294|2) - sama ini nya kurang ngehh xD recomended http://puu.sh/p96yz/eb655f851f.jpg

Diff name mungkin bisa seperti ini :
EZ 'Baper'
NM 'Putus cinta' // 'Php' // 'Galau' dll :v sebaiknya tanya BN saja.

Maaf jika modnya tidak membantu wiiihh bantu banget ko >w<)/

Good luck mz thanks :3

erlinadewi- wrote:

semoga bisa bergelembung deh

Adinata28 wrote:

Semangat!

One Miss wrote:

M4M from your que lol o/
|1|2|3|4|

i mainly focus on pitch relevance feel free to ignore what you dont feel is important.

Easy

1. 00:00:530 (530|0) - move to 1
2. 00:00:971 (971|1) - move to 2 for
3. 00:01:412 (1412|2) - move to 3
4. 00:04:059 (4059|2) - move to 3
5. 00:04:500 (4500|3) - move to 4
6. 00:04:941 (4941|2) - move to 3
7. 00:13:765 (13765|3) - move to 4
8. 00:13:985 (13985|2) - move to 3
9. 00:14:206 (14206|1) - move to 2
10. 00:14:647 (14647|0) - move to 1
11. 00:15:088 (15088|2) - move to 3
12. 00:20:824 (20824|3,21044|2) - ctr+g
13. 00:34:941 (34941|3) - move to 00:34:059
14. 00:35:824 (35824|0) - move to 00:35:824 the holds should be placed on the guitar, there are no long notes where you currently have these LN start.
15. 00:42:000 (42000|3,42221|2,42441|0,42882|1) - ctr+h
16. 00:43:324 (43324|2) - move to 3 if you accept prior change.
17. 00:48:177 (48177|0,49059|1) - make holds?
18. 01:11:118 (71118|0,71559|1,72000|2,72441|3) - ctr+g and move 01:10:677 (70677|0) - to 2
19. 01:24:353 (84353|2,84794|1) - should not be holds, there are not drawn out sounds here.

Normal

• 00:01:412 (1412|3) - move to 4

1. 00:04:941 (4941|3) - move to 4
2. 00:42:441 (42441|2) - make a hold?
3. 00:42:662 (42662|1) - ghost note if following the guitar.
4. maby increase hitsound volume on kai time(do for both diffs if you do it.)

GL on rank!

• 
  [General]

1. Song Setup & Metadata
   Oke, song setup ga ada masalah, plus jg metadatanya oke https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MV_euZ_lKH8 official youtube (wkwkwk buat menyakinkan QAT aja ini)
2. Audio & Hitsounds
   Sip semua, cuman soft-hitnormalnya terlalu rendah volumenya, coba ganti sama ini aja http://puu.sh/pZ5Ur/5a1e0d4245.wav
3. BPM & Timing
   Oke
4. Background
   Resolusinya bermasalah gan, direkomendasikan rasio resolusinya 16:9 atau 4:3 ==> ini udah ane fix jadi 16:9 http://puu.sh/pZ5w7/32ffced203.jpg tinggal diubah aja BG semula
   
   |1|2|3|4|
   
   Hehe agak sedikit malas penjelasan modnya, tapi intinya ya untuk bisa memperbaiki kualitas mapnya
   
   [Easy]
5. Cek AIMOD (ctrl + shift + a) berbahaya dan tolong di fix
6. 00:07:588 - coba ditambahin aja 1 note di kolom 4 . . . lumayan keras kok soft-impactnya buat intro
7. 00:15:971 - tambah note buat kick nya gan . . . masa suara yg sejelas gitu nggk dimap owo . . . sekalian tambahin hitsoundnya juga
8. 00:28:324 (28324|2) - hapus notenya gan, ga ada suara disana (ghost note) coba bikin break aja disini, sekalian 00:27:882 (27882|0) - jadikan LN karena ada suarayg sama seperti LN sebelumnya . . . contoh http://puu.sh/pZ6dc/b1ecc27e13.jpg
9. 00:40:897 - ini cukup jelas kok gitarnya, tambah note aja
10. 00:27:000 (27000|1) - 00:34:941 (34941|1,35824|2) - 00:39:353 (39353|3) - 00:42:882 (42882|2) - 00:46:412 (46412|2) - 00:48:177 (48177|0,49059|1,49941|2) - 00:51:706 (51706|0) - 00:57:000 (57000|3) - 01:04:059 (64059|1) - 01:07:588 (67588|3) - 01:08:912 (68912|1) - 01:18:177 (78177|0) - 01:21:706 (81706|2) - 01:22:588 (82588|1,83471|3) - 01:28:765 (88765|2) - 01:35:824 (95824|0) - tambah whistle gan, ketinggalan wado cek aja lagi sendiri gan klo emang ada kick ya kasi whistle aja, jangan ditinggal
11. 01:08:471 (68471|2) - 01:31:412 (91412|2) - tambah clap, ketinggalan
12. 01:34:059 (94059|0,94500|1) - kebalik, seharusnya yg punya hitsound whistle dibawah
    
    [Normal]
13. 00:13:324 - mungkin lebih enaknya begini aja http://puu.sh/pZ7om/49b0487da1.jpg LN nya fokus seutuhnya ke instrumen gitar
14. 00:17:735 (17735|3) - pindah ke kolom 3 biar lebih balance, qm kebanyakan pakai kolom 4 masalahnya 00:17:294 (17294|3,18177|3) -
15. 00:20:824 (20824|3,21044|2) - ubah jadi LN, selaraskan sama ini 00:21:265 (21265|0,21485|1) - contoh http://puu.sh/pZ7Pw/04f8740277.jpg
16. 00:23:912 (23912|2) - pindahin ke kolom 1, balancing
17. 01:02:294 - http://puu.sh/pZ8aV/a8628e091f.jpg
18. 01:06:265 (66265|1,66485|0) - Ctrl G 01:07:147 (67147|0,67368|1) - Ctrl G juga
19. 01:26:118 (86118|1) - ke kolom 1, balancing
20. sisanya tinggal hitsound aja lagi yg masih banyak ketinggalan . . . klo udah di fix semua panggil balik aja lagi saya

[ A v a l o n ] wrote:

RIP my 2 kudos

Bubble Check

|1|2|3|4|

• 
  [General]

1. Song Setup & Metadata
   Oke, song setup ga ada masalah, plus jg metadatanya oke https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MV_euZ_lKH8 official youtube (wkwkwk buat menyakinkan QAT aja ini)
2. Audio & Hitsounds
   Sip semua, cuman soft-hitnormalnya terlalu rendah volumenya, coba ganti sama ini aja http://puu.sh/pZ5Ur/5a1e0d4245.wav
3. BPM & Timing
   Oke
4. Background
   Resolusinya bermasalah gan, direkomendasikan rasio resolusinya 16:9 atau 4:3 ==> ini udah ane fix jadi 16:9 http://puu.sh/pZ5w7/32ffced203.jpg tinggal diubah aja BG semula
   
   |1|2|3|4|
   
   Hehe agak sedikit malas penjelasan modnya, tapi intinya ya untuk bisa memperbaiki kualitas mapnya
   
   [Easy]
5. Cek AIMOD (ctrl + shift + a) berbahaya dan tolong di fix
6. 00:07:588 - coba ditambahin aja 1 note di kolom 4 . . . lumayan keras kok soft-impactnya buat intro
7. 00:15:971 - tambah note buat kick nya gan . . . masa suara yg sejelas gitu nggk dimap owo . . . sekalian tambahin hitsoundnya juga
8. 00:28:324 (28324|2) - hapus notenya gan, ga ada suara disana (ghost note) coba bikin break aja disini, sekalian 00:27:882 (27882|0) - jadikan LN karena ada suarayg sama seperti LN sebelumnya . . . contoh http://puu.sh/pZ6dc/b1ecc27e13.jpg
9. 00:40:897 - ini cukup jelas kok gitarnya, tambah note aja
10. 00:27:000 (27000|1) - 00:34:941 (34941|1,35824|2) - 00:39:353 (39353|3) - 00:42:882 (42882|2) - 00:46:412 (46412|2) - 00:48:177 (48177|0,49059|1,49941|2) - 00:51:706 (51706|0) - 00:57:000 (57000|3) - 01:04:059 (64059|1) - 01:07:588 (67588|3) - 01:08:912 (68912|1) - 01:18:177 (78177|0) - 01:21:706 (81706|2) - 01:22:588 (82588|1,83471|3) - 01:28:765 (88765|2) - 01:35:824 (95824|0) - tambah whistle gan, ketinggalan wado cek aja lagi sendiri gan klo emang ada kick ya kasi whistle aja, jangan ditinggal
11. 01:08:471 (68471|2) - 01:31:412 (91412|2) - tambah clap, ketinggalan
12. 01:34:059 (94059|0,94500|1) - kebalik, seharusnya yg punya hitsound whistle dibawah
    
    [Normal]
13. 00:13:324 - mungkin lebih enaknya begini aja http://puu.sh/pZ7om/49b0487da1.jpg LN nya fokus seutuhnya ke instrumen gitar
14. 00:17:735 (17735|3) - pindah ke kolom 3 biar lebih balance, qm kebanyakan pakai kolom 4 masalahnya 00:17:294 (17294|3,18177|3) -
15. 00:20:824 (20824|3,21044|2) - ubah jadi LN, selaraskan sama ini 00:21:265 (21265|0,21485|1) - contoh http://puu.sh/pZ7Pw/04f8740277.jpg
16. 00:23:912 (23912|2) - pindahin ke kolom 1, balancing
17. 01:02:294 - http://puu.sh/pZ8aV/a8628e091f.jpg
18. 01:06:265 (66265|1,66485|0) - Ctrl G 01:07:147 (67147|0,67368|1) - Ctrl G juga
19. 01:26:118 (86118|1) - ke kolom 1, balancing
20. sisanya tinggal hitsound aja lagi yg masih banyak ketinggalan . . . klo udah di fix semua panggil balik aja lagi saya

[ A v a l o n ] wrote:

Bubbled selamat ya !

erlinadewi- wrote:

first bubble.. gratz jakiiiieeehhh....

>w<)/

leoudel wrote:

jodoh ga kemana

yuleee wrote:

akhirnya dapet balon juga yaa jodoh:'>

-[ AmiShici ]- wrote:

Lagu indo :v

ajeemaniz wrote:

jodoh pasti berhumu uwu

leoudel wrote:

ajeemaniz wrote:

jodoh pasti berhumu uwu

1-8000 uwu

[ A v a l o n ] wrote:

jodoh masih belum bertemu

hikikuman wrote:

404 jodoh not found.

Surono wrote:

ciee yg ngebet2 pengen di reng mapnya.

dibilangin, jodoh pasti berhumu.

Xinely wrote:

andaikan saya mania bn

someone should teach me mania now </3

Surono wrote:

HEHHEheHEHEH#h3eh3h3e sykur lu masih waras V: kirain ke E&an ni osssshh HAHAHAhah

ajeemaniz wrote:

> cintai produk indonesia

inb4 ranked kudu beli albumnya :^)

Frim4503 wrote:

Afgan - jodoh pasti bercumbu

Kawawa wrote:

Hello!

[Easy]
00:16:412 (16412|0) - Remove this one. fixed
when I saw arround structure fully, did not use 2note for these rhythm.

00:35:382 (35382|0) - 00:34:500 (34500|3) - I'm not sure about this two LN
There is a guitar sound in this part.(There's no vocal sample, any long sounds. so It needs to attention.)
so If you can use this as LN bundle, then I think It should be started from 6snap. http://puu.sh/qEt3I/8803de8153.jpg
I realy don't feel the rhythm from 4snap section. at first i think about this too.. i taught it was hard for easy diff.. but after you point it out once again i think it's okay

For example :: 00:31:853 (31853|1) - these LN is fine. There are open hihat or vocal sample

00:50:382 (50382|3) - Remove this one, And 00:49:941 - Add at 4.
will be ehmhasized on cymbal section. also, 00:50:382 - these sounds can't feel much than thinking. on easy diffs.Fixed

01:18:177 - Add a note.
for cymbal sounds. and It will be helped for notes consistency with other diffs. whoaa it's my fault qwq

01:25:235 - Add a note. Same reason with above. ^

[Normal]
00:31:853 - I recommend you to use the LN at here like your easy diffs.
Since It shows vague snap, It is better to use as a bundle. And It will be better for make sure.
Sample :: http://puu.sh/qEsVV/900cafcaa4.jpg oki oki

00:34:500 - 00:35:382 - same with above. and I think It also should be 6snapped as LN bundle.
Sample :: http://puu.sh/qEtag/5fd53e2db3.jpg Fixed

00:48:177 - ~ 00:49:941 - what do you think about?
Sample :: http://puu.sh/qEtfH/310441022a.jpg whoaa good pattern owo)b apply

01:35:382 - Add at 3. It does not need to ignore. when I considered your pattern. ahhh~ now i'm understand owo)b

Kawawa wrote:

Qualified!
Congratz!

ajeemaniz wrote:

next armada project ikut nge GD weh pokonya :^)

wee mapnya ena pake NC, grats!

LigerZero wrote:

kalau ada duit cukup mau beli albumnya lalu kirim ke rumahmu..... jadi sebagai ganti osu support kirim saja albumnya

ajeemaniz wrote:

next armada project ikut nge GD weh pokonya :^)

wee mapnya ena pake NC, grats!

KittyAdventure wrote:

Gratzz :3

Verniy_Chan wrote:

telat 1 hari dari kemerdekaan >w<

Verniy_Chan wrote:

Akhirnya jodoh...tetap tdk bertemu XD

Selamat ya~
walaupun telat 1 hari dari kemerdekaan >w<

[ A v a l o n ] wrote:

beatmapnya udah bertemu jodoh . . . yang punya map masih jomblo wkwkwk
selamat ya ~

Verniy_Chan wrote:

telat 1 hari dari kemerdekaan >w<

iya, sayang sekali ;w;

Leonita wrote:

Asik ditunggu jodohnya:'3
sekalian jodoh buat aku yaa

leoudel wrote:

jomblo pasti bertemu, tenang.

-[Hotaru]- wrote:

Tenang saja *16 years later still single*

Surono wrote:

-[Hotaru]- wrote:

Tenang saja *16 years later still single*

amin, ya robbalamin~ verkoh bin jidad

ini mah tinggal nunggu Genocide PatZar ngepost di ni thread biar kena DQ :^)

Mako Sakata wrote:

Grats kak🎉

MG_Prakusanata wrote:

Njerrrrr.......... kena Ranked ............. WTF kwkwkwkwkkw Naisu Naisu

Adot wrote:

cie skg punya map renked... gretz

DikaSangga wrote:

wow nice

-[Hotaru]- wrote:

Jembat sur jembatMAN

LigerZero wrote:

ya moga saja ada dikotamu....... lebih beruntung lagi kalau dapat di KFC yang masih nyimpen nih lagu......

karena diwikipedia indonesia nyebut "Distribusi album ini dibantu oleh restoran KFC di Indonesia"

Surono wrote:

-[Hotaru]- wrote:

Jembat sur jembatMAN

:^) wohh kata2nya, otw silet 69jam

kwkwkw, gw panggilin tu dukun lejendre tai-kos Indon yg Warbyazah dgn kata2 terkenalnya

" ntar juga dq lagi"

-NanoRIPE- wrote:

Grats ~~ atas Beatmap pertamamu yg ranked
semoga selanjutnya gw :>

Surono wrote:

ajeemaniz wrote:

Surono wrote:

aq tbh uwu

Xinely wrote:

Yey grats \:D/