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Afgan - Jodoh Pasti Bertemu [OsuMania]

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Hotaru-
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Hotaru-
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Thursday, August 18, 2016 at 3:56:00 PM

Artist: Afgan
Title: Jodoh Pasti Bertemu
Tags: L1ve To Love Afgansyah Reza Cut Version Trinity Optima Production Bahasa Indonesia Indonesian
BPM: 68
Filesize: 2654kb
Play Time: 01:35
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy - 4Key (0.94 stars, 196 notes)
  2. Normal - 4Key (1.51 stars, 381 notes)
Download: Afgan - Jodoh Pasti Bertemu
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
Finally!!!!! i'm still single :>>

1st installment of low bpm series

Hotaru's Indonesian Song Series









I know I'm not perfect... even I can't give you something because I don't have anything to gift for you..I just have my love for you..but.. if I'm not your ways.. I'll stop looking for you.. But please remember.. the true love Must Be Meet at the time


By [ A v a l o n ]
By Kawawa


I Wont Give Up Coz I Have My Dream In this Mapset
Thanks To all Modder :D Love You all
i'll try my best

9/4/2016 Diff name Changed and applying new HS Re DL Plzz :D
12/4/2016 Difff name Changed (again orz :"D )
5/29/2016 Diff Name Changed (Again -3-)

jika kamu yakin
jika kamu percaya
Jodoh Pasti berhumu Bertemu pada akhirnya


HS 100% done :D

Oke Sesuai janji oeg sama mas Ajee gw bakal beli sekali lagi albumnya kalo ini map Qually :>>> album dari KFC gw ilang orzz


Metadata and Mp3 taken stolen From STD Ver by Mako Sakata's Hope You see Her STD Mapset Really Beautiful owo)b
check out CTB Ver too By Xinely

Cintai Produk Indonesia >>:V<< jangan Nge Map Lagu Jejepangan Mulu >>:V<<

#2 Armada - Buka Hatimu


Hello
Good Bye..
Wish You Happy There :D
I'll Be Here
Come back anytime :D
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Surono
7,196 posts
Joined November 2013
Surono
cecete BG :P
Hotaru-
806 posts
Joined March 2015
Topic Starter
Hotaru-

Surono wrote:

cecete BG :P
masih BG sementara <(")
Crusts
259 posts
Joined October 2015
Crusts
bpmnya selaw sekali 68 napa gk 69 aj :v
Hotaru-
806 posts
Joined March 2015
Topic Starter
Hotaru-

Crusts wrote:

bpmnya selaw sekali 68 napa gk 69 aj :v
yaela kan lagunya slow emang <(") kalo soal knapa 68 tanya aja sama afgan sono <(")
erlinadewi-
1,074 posts
Joined November 2013
erlinadewi-
Hi Hotaru~ Saya boleh numpang ngemod kah? '-')a

4K Coloum 1|2|3|4


[Easy]
00:16:412 (16412|0,17294|3) - coloum 2 3 keknya enak nih :3
00:25:677 (25677|1,26118|0) - swap coloum dess
00:36:265 (36265|3) - ghost note owo
00:41:559 (41559|3) - coloum 3
kalau misal disini 00:51:706 - 00:53:471 - 00:54:353 - dikasih note kayak yang di 00:49:941 (49941|2) - suaranya mirip btw
00:52:588 (52588|1,53030|2) - swap dess then 00:53:471 (53471|1) - to 4
00:56:118 (56118|1,57000|1) - pindah salah satu note itu ke kolom lain :3
01:00:971 (60971|2) - gimana kalau note ini pindah ke blue line yg diatasnya. ada suara guitar yg cukup loud disana ?

[Normal]
00:11:559 (11559|1) - move coloum 3 to avoid jack with dis 00:11:118 (11118|1) -
gimana kalau note yang ini 00:32:294 (32294|0,32294|2,32294|1) - dan 00:34:941 (34941|1,34941|3,34941|2) - ini jadiin double aja baru yang 00:35:824 (35824|1,35824|0,35824|2) - ini jadi triple. soalnya itu suara guitar + cymbal dibagian sana :3
01:00:088 (60088|0,61412|0) - gak dibuat beda kolom aja? :3
01:03:618 - better add note here. serasa kosong
01:20:603 (80603|2,80824|3) - ctrl j

goodluck owo)/

Error 404: Jodoh still not found.
LigerZero
2,429 posts
Joined August 2013
LigerZero
Nanti BGnya yang loli ya.... :p
Surono
7,196 posts
Joined November 2013
Surono
penyakit
Hotaru-
806 posts
Joined March 2015
Topic Starter
Hotaru-

erlinadewi- wrote:

Hi Hotaru~ Saya boleh numpang ngemod kah? '-')a

4K Coloum 1|2|3|4


[Easy]
00:16:412 (16412|0,17294|3) - coloum 2 3 keknya enak nih :3
00:25:677 (25677|1,26118|0) - swap coloum dess
00:36:265 (36265|3) - ghost note owo
00:41:559 (41559|3) - coloum 3
kalau misal disini 00:51:706 - 00:53:471 - 00:54:353 - dikasih note kayak yang di 00:49:941 (49941|2) - suaranya mirip btw
00:52:588 (52588|1,53030|2) - swap dess then 00:53:471 (53471|1) - to 4
00:56:118 (56118|1,57000|1) - pindah salah satu note itu ke kolom lain :3
01:00:971 (60971|2) - gimana kalau note ini pindah ke blue line yg diatasnya. ada suara guitar yg cukup loud disana ?

[Normal]
00:11:559 (11559|1) - move coloum 3 to avoid jack with dis 00:11:118 (11118|1) -
gimana kalau note yang ini 00:32:294 (32294|0,32294|2,32294|1) - dan 00:34:941 (34941|1,34941|3,34941|2) - ini jadiin double aja baru yang 00:35:824 (35824|1,35824|0,35824|2) - ini jadi triple. soalnya itu suara guitar + cymbal dibagian sana :3
01:00:088 (60088|0,61412|0) - gak dibuat beda kolom aja? :3
01:03:618 - better add note here. serasa kosong
01:20:603 (80603|2,80824|3) - ctrl j

goodluck owo)/

Error 404: Jodoh still not found. sooo sad :"
all applied thanks mba owo

LigerZero wrote:

Nanti BGnya yang loli ya.... :p
masih nyari <(") tapi kalo boleh bantuin '3'

Surono wrote:

penyakit
yhaa :"
Surono
7,196 posts
Joined November 2013
Surono
yha ja da

Lolis/cewek galaw/lewd BG = nonsense
see below of this

oke, buat saran nih. sejak si lagu itu laki dan bukan cover perempuan (cecede why I say like this)
BGnya harus tokoh laki-laki.. kalau situ masih suka yang berbau webos stuf.. (ya.. pikirkan mayoritas orang orang di ni game)

Contoh dari saya

dan coba cari yg lebih bagus, kalau ga ada. pake itu aja lol
Gluck

EDIT:
jangan lupa buat ngilangin watermarknya itu kawkawkawk
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Hotaru-
806 posts
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Topic Starter
Hotaru-

Surono wrote:

yha ja da

Lolis/cewek galaw/lewd BG = nonsense
see below of this

oke, buat saran nih. sejak si lagu itu laki dan bukan cover perempuan (cecede why I say like this)
BGnya harus tokoh laki-laki.. kalau situ masih suka yang berbau webos stuf.. (ya.. pikirkan mayoritas orang orang di ni game)

Contoh dari saya

dan coba cari yg lebih bagus, kalau ga ada. pake itu aja lol
Gluck
Gambarnya bagus '3' Besok update pake yang itu thanks mas owo /
Hilmi Ghazian
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Joined August 2013
Hilmi Ghazian
Hasil mod w

tolong offset diganti 550

Normal
00:12:441 (12441|2) - jadiin single note sama kayak sebelumnya
00:15:971 (15971|3) - sama
00:30:088 (30088|0) - sama pula.. :v
00:31:963 (31963|1,32074|2) - delete
00:32:184 (32184|3,32239|2) - 1/16 please
00:34:610 (34610|2,34721|1) - delete
00:34:831 (34831|0,34886|1) - 1/16 please
00:35:493 (35493|1,35603|2) - delete
00:35:713 (35713|3,35768|2) - 1/16 please :v
00:39:243 (39243|2,39298|3) - 1/16.... sisanya pasti tau lah... yang penting ada suara jreng dibuat 1/16 :v
00:40:677 (40677|3) - jadiin single note
00:40:897 (40897|2) - tambahin note dong
00:47:956 (47956|3,48838|0) - delete

sekian MOD dari saya kalo ada kata yang kurang berkenan saya minta maaf... :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :)
Hotaru-
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Topic Starter
Hotaru-

[1st GCorp] wrote:

Hasil mod w

tolong offset diganti 550 // offset udah tepat '3' source nya dari map ranked sebelumnya

Normal
00:12:441 (12441|2) - jadiin single note sama kayak sebelumnya // noo :> soalnya bunyi cymbal kedengeran
00:15:971 (15971|3) - sama //^
00:30:088 (30088|0) - sama pula.. :v //^
00:31:963 (31963|1,32074|2) - delete // Keep For Some Reason :3
00:32:184 (32184|3,32239|2) - 1/16 please // wah kalo di 1/16 bakal Over banget di versi sebelumnya 1/16 soalnya jadinya xD lagian ini kan Diff Normal '3'
00:34:610 (34610|2,34721|1) - delete // keep For some reason '3'
00:34:831 (34831|0,34886|1) - 1/16 please // alsan masih sama dengan topik sebelunya
00:35:493 (35493|1,35603|2) - delete // keep
00:35:713 (35713|3,35768|2) - 1/16 please :v // sama juga
00:39:243 (39243|2,39298|3) - 1/16.... sisanya pasti tau lah... yang penting ada suara jreng dibuat 1/16 :v // sama juga :3
00:40:677 (40677|3) - jadiin single note // sure owo
00:40:897 (40897|2) - tambahin note dong // my mistake xD
00:47:956 (47956|3,48838|0) - delete // keep owo

sekian MOD dari saya kalo ada kata yang kurang berkenan saya minta maaf... :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) // santai aja atuh :3


Thanks Modnya ^w^
Aras
827 posts
Joined September 2014
Aras
bangke, kenak amat T^T
NIH AMBIL BINTANG GUA
Hotaru-
806 posts
Joined March 2015
Topic Starter
Hotaru-

Aras25 wrote:

bangke, kenak amat T^T
NIH AMBIL BINTANG GUA
Thankss owo
-[ AmiShici ]-
-[ AmiShici ]-
E-E-ET
Hotaru-
806 posts
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Hotaru-

-[ AmiShici ]- wrote:

E-E-ET
Tidak senpai :"
lenpai
1,780 posts
Joined December 2014
lenpai
ez map noooooooooo

NM
01:04:500 (64500|3,64721|2,64941|3,64941|1,65382|0,65382|2,65824|1,65824|3,66265|0) - ctrl h to avoid right hand bias

yeah just that I'm bad at modding HD stuff and easier
Crusts
259 posts
Joined October 2015
Crusts
M4M via pm
map ane : https://osu.ppy.sh/s/412644
selaw skali agak rada" neh ama bpm slow :v

NM
00:35:824 (35824|2) - delete ? di sebelumnya anya makek 2 note tuh
01:11:118 (71118|1,71118|2,71118|0) - sini suaranya gk terlalu keras lo ? kok pakek 3 ? delete 1 ?
ini map banyak pakek jump 1 tangan :v ntar para newbie rada susah mungkin ditindak lanjuti


kgk bisa ktemu banyak nih ya jadi anya itu deh
btw BGnya asli BG jones :v
Hotaru-
806 posts
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Topic Starter
Hotaru-

Lenfried- wrote:

ez map noooooooooo

NM
01:04:500 (64500|3,64721|2,64941|3,64941|1,65382|0,65382|2,65824|1,65824|3,66265|0) - ctrl h to avoid right hand bias// Fixed in other ways owo

yeah just that I'm bad at modding HD stuff and easier // this is soo helpfull owo
Thanks :3

Crusts wrote:

M4M via pm
map ane : https://osu.ppy.sh/s/412644
selaw skali agak rada" neh ama bpm slow :v

NM
00:35:824 (35824|2) - delete ? di sebelumnya anya makek 2 note tuh // ada cymbal makanya 3 ;;
01:11:118 (71118|1,71118|2,71118|0) - sini suaranya gk terlalu keras lo ? kok pakek 3 ? delete 1 ? // fixed in other ways ;;
ini map banyak pakek jump 1 tangan :v ntar para newbie rada susah mungkin ditindak lanjuti // bener xD kesalahan ku xD tapi BPMnya rendah ko jadi menurut ku gak gitu problem '3'


kgk bisa ktemu banyak nih ya jadi anya itu deh
btw BGnya asli BG jones :v // wah kebetulan ane jones juga :v M4Mnya Entar Ku kerjain masih ada Urusan IRL xD
thanks banget loh :*
Protastic101
1,170 posts
Joined July 2015
Protastic101
Hello~ From my queue.

Easy
00:47:956 (47956|3,48838|0) - These both begin at 00:48:177 and 00:49:059, respectively. They also last for 1/2 beat each.
00:49:721 (49721|3) - Suggest removing because the guitar doesn't actually start until 00:49:941
Normal
00:31:853 (31853|0,31963|1) - These are ghost notes. The pickup doesn't start until 00:32:074, and it's a 1/16th snap. I'd just remove the notes I highlighted and keep the 1/8 snap you have though.
00:34:500 (34500|3,34610|2) - ^^
00:35:382 (35382|0,35493|1) - ^^
00:49:721 (49721|3) - I would remove because the sustained guitar note doesn't start until 00:49:941
Hotaru-
806 posts
Joined March 2015
Topic Starter
Hotaru-

Protastic101 wrote:

Hello~ From my queue.

Easy
00:47:956 (47956|3,48838|0) - These both begin at 00:48:177 and 00:49:059, respectively. They also last for 1/2 beat each. // keep
00:49:721 (49721|3) - Suggest removing because the guitar doesn't actually start until 00:49:941 // okay owo
Normal
00:31:853 (31853|0,31963|1) - These are ghost notes. The pickup doesn't start until 00:32:074, and it's a 1/16th snap. I'd just remove the notes I highlighted and keep the 1/8 snap you have though. // keep it's has a loud sound right there
00:34:500 (34500|3,34610|2) - ^^ // ^^
00:35:382 (35382|0,35493|1) - ^^// ^^
00:49:721 (49721|3) - I would remove because the sustained guitar note doesn't start until 00:49:941 // Keep For Now

Thanks :3
Sies
Global Moderator
1,909 posts
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Sies
anjerr baper :'
Hotaru-
806 posts
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Topic Starter
Hotaru-

hikikuman wrote:

anjerr baper :'
Aku lagi baper :"
Leonita
488 posts
Joined December 2012
Leonita

Mod request dari mana.

Kolom
1 | 2 | 3 | 4

Easy
00:08:471 (8471|2) - 00:10:235 (10235|2) - 00:12:000 (12000|3) - 00:13:765 (13765|0) - dst double note, ikutin suara snare.
01:09:574 (69574|3) - remove
01:21:265 (81265|3) - move to 1
demi apa gw sambil nyanyi nge modding nya:'D
bonus
GLHF :)
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Sies
Global Moderator
1,909 posts
Joined May 2015
Sies

Mod request dari mana.

Kolom
1 | 2 | 3 | 4


Normal
00:08:030 (8030|3) - pindah ke 2
00:08:471 (8471|1) - ^1
00:08:250 (8250|2) - delete
00:08:912 (8912|0,9353|3) - ctrl H
00:12:000 (12000|3) - pindah ke1
00:12:441 (12441|2,12882|3) - ctrl G
00:13:765 - tambh note di 4
00:14:537 (14537|2) - delete
00:17:074 (17074|1) - ^
00:16:853 (16853|3) - pindah ke 3
00:21:706 (21706|1) - ^3
00:22:588 (22588|2) - ^2
00:25:235 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4725155
00:30:088 (30088|0,30530|3) - ctrl H
00:30:971 (30971|0) - pindah ke 3
00:31:412 (31412|2) - ^2
00:31:853 (31853|0,31963|1) - delete. ini ghost note
00:32:074 (32074|2,32184|3) - ctrl G
00:34:500 (34500|3,35382|0) - delete
00:34:610 (34610|2,34721|1,34831|0) - ctrl G
00:34:941 (34941|2) - pindah ke 1
00:35:493 (35493|1,35603|2,35713|3) - ctrl G
00:35:824 (35824|1) - pindah ke4
00:39:353 (39353|1) - ^1
00:39:794 (39794|0,39794|3) - pindah ke 2 sama 3
00:40:235 (40235|0) - pindah ke 4
00:42:882 (42882|2) - ^4
00:46:412 (46412|1) - delete
00:46:853 (46853|0) - pindah ke 2
00:51:265 (51265|1) - delete
00:54:794 (54794|1,55235|2) - ctrl G
00:56:118 (56118|0) - pindah ke 3
00:57:000 (57000|2,57441|0) - ctrl G
00:57:882 (57882|2) - pindah ke 4
00:58:765 (58765|3) - ^3
00:59:206 (59206|2) - ^4
00:59:647 (59647|1,59647|3) - geser 1x ke kiri
01:02:294 (62294|1) - delete.
01:03:177 (63177|1) - ^
01:02:735 (62735|3) - pindah ke 2
01:03:618 (63618|2,64059|1) - ctrl G
01:11:118 (71118|0) - delete
01:11:559 (71559|1,72000|0) - ctrl G
01:21:706 (81706|1,82588|0) - delete
Makasih udh bikin baper. Makasih udh request. Gudlak bm nyaa><
Hotaru-
806 posts
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Topic Starter
Hotaru-

yuleee wrote:


Mod request dari mana.

Kolom
1 | 2 | 3 | 4

Easy
00:08:471 (8471|2) - 00:10:235 (10235|2) - 00:12:000 (12000|3) - 00:13:765 (13765|0) - dst double note, ikutin suara snare.
01:09:574 (69574|3) - remove
01:21:265 (81265|3) - move to 1
demi apa gw sambil nyanyi nge modding nya:'D
bonus
GLHF :)
Thanks Mod nya owo dan nais bonus xD

hikikuman wrote:


Mod request dari mana.

Kolom
1 | 2 | 3 | 4


Normal
00:08:030 (8030|3) - pindah ke 2
00:08:471 (8471|1) - ^1
00:08:250 (8250|2) - delete
00:08:912 (8912|0,9353|3) - ctrl H
00:12:000 (12000|3) - pindah ke1
00:12:441 (12441|2,12882|3) - ctrl G
00:13:765 - tambh note di 4
00:14:537 (14537|2) - delete
00:17:074 (17074|1) - ^
00:16:853 (16853|3) - pindah ke 3
00:21:706 (21706|1) - ^3
00:22:588 (22588|2) - ^2
00:25:235 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4725155
00:30:088 (30088|0,30530|3) - ctrl H
00:30:971 (30971|0) - pindah ke 3
00:31:412 (31412|2) - ^2
00:31:853 (31853|0,31963|1) - delete. ini ghost note
00:32:074 (32074|2,32184|3) - ctrl G
00:34:500 (34500|3,35382|0) - delete
00:34:610 (34610|2,34721|1,34831|0) - ctrl G
00:34:941 (34941|2) - pindah ke 1
00:35:493 (35493|1,35603|2,35713|3) - ctrl G
00:35:824 (35824|1) - pindah ke4
00:39:353 (39353|1) - ^1
00:39:794 (39794|0,39794|3) - pindah ke 2 sama 3
00:40:235 (40235|0) - pindah ke 4
00:42:882 (42882|2) - ^4
00:46:412 (46412|1) - delete
00:46:853 (46853|0) - pindah ke 2
00:51:265 (51265|1) - delete
00:54:794 (54794|1,55235|2) - ctrl G
00:56:118 (56118|0) - pindah ke 3
00:57:000 (57000|2,57441|0) - ctrl G
00:57:882 (57882|2) - pindah ke 4
00:58:765 (58765|3) - ^3
00:59:206 (59206|2) - ^4
00:59:647 (59647|1,59647|3) - geser 1x ke kiri
01:02:294 (62294|1) - delete.
01:03:177 (63177|1) - ^
01:02:735 (62735|3) - pindah ke 2
01:03:618 (63618|2,64059|1) - ctrl G
01:11:118 (71118|0) - delete
01:11:559 (71559|1,72000|0) - ctrl G
01:21:706 (81706|1,82588|0) - delete
Makasih udh bikin baper. Makasih udh request. Gudlak bm nyaa>< // makasih owo makasih juga atas modnya 40% apply xD


maaf gabisa balas modnya :" lagi keadaan sibuk buat sekarang :"3
ALfarris
76 posts
Joined February 2015
ALfarris
salam baper~

irc mod yang tadi hot.

curahan hati seorang hot
2016-03-16 14:03 ALfarris: yaudah entar aku benerin. abis ini mau irc mod mapmu? gk enak rasanya kalo map indo mania yg bgs gk dimod :'v
2016-03-16 14:04 -[Hotaru]-: boleh lah owo
2016-03-16 14:04 -[Hotaru]-: post di forum ku kasih kudos :3
2016-03-16 14:04 -[Hotaru]-: ACTION is playing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/830294 gems - Gems Pack 4 - LN Master [15 - senya, Tsuki ni Murakumo Hana ni Kaze]] <osu!mania> +Flashlight |4K|
2016-03-16 14:04 -[Hotaru]-: mau panasin jari dulu wkwkwk
2016-03-16 14:04 ALfarris: okok. :3 bentar yak benerin mapku bentar :3
2016-03-16 14:04 ALfarris: ok :3
2016-03-16 14:04 -[Hotaru]-: :3
2016-03-16 14:15 ALfarris: ACTION is playing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/924789 Afgan - Jodoh Pasti Bertemu [Normal]] <osu!mania> |4K|
2016-03-16 14:15 -[Hotaru]-: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/924789 Afgan - Jodoh Pasti Bertemu [Normal]]
2016-03-16 14:16 ALfarris: 00:31:853 (31853|0,31963|1,32074|1,32184|0,32294|0,32294|1) -  ini apaan :'v
2016-03-16 14:17 -[Hotaru]-: eh anjr lupa ku benerin :"v
2016-03-16 14:17 ALfarris: benerin gih :v
2016-03-16 14:17 -[Hotaru]-: udah
2016-03-16 14:17 ALfarris: dah di update?
2016-03-16 14:18 -[Hotaru]-: belom
2016-03-16 14:18 -[Hotaru]-: selesaikan dulu aja :v
2016-03-16 14:18 ALfarris: ok :3
2016-03-16 14:18 ALfarris: pertama yg diff normal dulu yak
2016-03-16 14:18 -[Hotaru]-: :3
2016-03-16 14:19 -[Hotaru]-: oke oke '3' /
2016-03-16 14:20 ALfarris: untuk yg double itu, kau fokus instrumen kick atau bunyi "tak" gitu?
2016-03-16 14:20 ALfarris: gak tau nama instrumennyalah :'v
2016-03-16 14:20 -[Hotaru]-: dua duanya
2016-03-16 14:20 ALfarris: ho gitu.
2016-03-16 14:20 huahahaha *ketawa jahat*
2016-03-16 14:20 ALfarris: sedangkan untuk gitar satu note kan?
2016-03-16 14:21 -[Hotaru]-: iya
2016-03-16 14:21 ALfarris: bentar cek lg
2016-03-16 14:22 -[Hotaru]-: oke oke ;3
2016-03-16 14:23 ALfarris: ok lanjut.
2016-03-16 14:23 ALfarris:  column 1|2|3|4 00:16:853 (16853|3) - mending ini kolom 3 /?
2016-03-16 14:24 -[Hotaru]-: sip
2016-03-16 14:24 -[Hotaru]-: hmm tadi si hiki nyaranin hal yang sama... oke kolom tiga owo
2016-03-16 14:24 ALfarris: :3
2016-03-16 14:26 ALfarris: 00:34:500 (34500|3,34610|2) - ini del terus 00:34:721 (34721|1,34831|0) - ini ctrl+j jd lebih natural gitu.
2016-03-16 14:26 -[Hotaru]-: :3
2016-03-16 14:26 -[Hotaru]-: jadi aneh kalo di delet :'v
2016-03-16 14:27 ALfarris: coba dulu deh.
2016-03-16 14:27 ALfarris: kalo mau reject juga gpp namanya juga mod :v
2016-03-16 14:27 -[Hotaru]-: eh ku coba dulu deng :v
2016-03-16 14:27 ALfarris: yowes :3
2016-03-16 14:28 -[Hotaru]-: siip :3
2016-03-16 14:28 ALfarris: enak gak?
2016-03-16 14:29 -[Hotaru]-: enak ko owo
2016-03-16 14:29 ALfarris: :3
2016-03-16 14:29 -[Hotaru]-: ayoo lagi >w< /
2016-03-16 14:29 ALfarris: 00:35:382 (35382|0,35493|1) - ini del juga terus 00:35:603 (35603|2,35713|3) - ini ctrl+j
2016-03-16 14:30 -[Hotaru]-: hmmm yang itu gitarnya mulai dari situ
2016-03-16 14:30 -[Hotaru]-: emang rada samar" sih...
2016-03-16 14:30 ALfarris: eh bnr. yaudah jgn diubah. 00:35:824 (35824|2,35824|1,35824|0) - yg ini knp triple?
2016-03-16 14:30 -[Hotaru]-: lebih dalem suaranya
2016-03-16 14:30 -[Hotaru]-: plus ada cymbal disitu owo
2016-03-16 14:31 ALfarris: penandaan beda pitch :v juga sering kok ngelakuin itu :'v
2016-03-16 14:31 ALfarris: ho begitu yowes. tetep 3 aj
2016-03-16 14:31 -[Hotaru]-: sip owo
2016-03-16 14:32 ALfarris: 00:49:721 (49721|3) - ini ngapain nyempil :'v?
2016-03-16 14:32 -[Hotaru]-: delet owo
2016-03-16 14:32 ALfarris: ok.
2016-03-16 14:33 ALfarris: 00:51:265 (51265|1,51265|0,51265|3) - yg ini knp triple?
2016-03-16 14:33 ALfarris: ki
2016-03-16 14:33 -[Hotaru]-: salah denger aku :'3
2016-03-16 14:34 ALfarris: jiah :'
2016-03-16 14:34 ALfarris: :'v
2016-03-16 14:34 -[Hotaru]-: :'v
2016-03-16 14:34 -[Hotaru]-: awkawkawk xD
2016-03-16 14:34 ALfarris: kalo gitu, ini aja yg di del00:51:265 (51265|3) - 
2016-03-16 14:34 -[Hotaru]-: yang 2 yang di delet
2016-03-16 14:35 -[Hotaru]-: soalnya ngindarin jack '3'
2016-03-16 14:35 ALfarris: atau, 00:51:265 (51265|1) - ini del trs 00:51:265 (51265|3) - in pindahin ke col 3
2016-03-16 14:35 ALfarris: terserah juga sih kau juga sih :3
2016-03-16 14:36 -[Hotaru]-: hu hu hu leh uga'
2016-03-16 14:36 ALfarris: tp kalo yg 2 diilanginjd gk konsisten itu kan suara kicknya atau apalah itu.
2016-03-16 14:38 -[Hotaru]-: gapapa :3 aku re arrange tadi
2016-03-16 14:38 ALfarris: ok kao begitu :3. 01:17:074 (77074|1) - ini del. ghost
2016-03-16 14:38 ALfarris: 01:18:618 (78618|3) - ^
2016-03-16 14:39 ALfarris: atau dua itu sengaja buat enak dimaininnya :3?
2016-03-16 14:40 -[Hotaru]-: ada bunyi di sini 01:18:618 (78618|3) -  tapi rada samar
2016-03-16 14:40 -[Hotaru]-: sama biar enak
2016-03-16 14:40 ALfarris: ok jika begitu. modnya udh :'v dikit bgt kan :'v. 
2016-03-16 14:40 ALfarris: atau mau lanjut ke easy?
2016-03-16 14:41 -[Hotaru]-: easynya udah yakin bagus '3' tinggal sedikit self mod aja
2016-03-16 14:41 ALfarris: coba aku liat dulu. menurutku map normalnya bagus. tp saranku LNnya :'v coba rearrange lg :'v
2016-03-16 14:42 ALfarris: njir 0,95* :v
2016-03-16 14:42 -[Hotaru]-: wkwkwk xD
2016-03-16 14:42 ALfarris: gak nyampe 1
2016-03-16 14:42 -[Hotaru]-: 0.95 are the best :3
2016-03-16 14:43 ALfarris: kamu ga papa kalo buat note 1/4 di diff easy?
2016-03-16 14:43 -[Hotaru]-: bpmnya rendah
2016-03-16 14:43 -[Hotaru]-: 1/4 bakal kerasa kaya 1/2
2016-03-16 14:44 ALfarris: bnr juga sih :3
2016-03-16 14:44 ALfarris: keajaiban o!m :v

jangan terlalu dipikirkanlah :'0 dianya yang begitu :"^
Hotaru-
806 posts
Joined March 2015
Topic Starter
Hotaru-

ALfarris wrote:

salam baper~

irc mod yang tadi hot.

curahan hati seorang hot
2016-03-16 14:03 ALfarris: yaudah entar aku benerin. abis ini mau irc mod mapmu? gk enak rasanya kalo map indo mania yg bgs gk dimod :'v
2016-03-16 14:04 -[Hotaru]-: boleh lah owo
2016-03-16 14:04 -[Hotaru]-: post di forum ku kasih kudos :3
2016-03-16 14:04 -[Hotaru]-: ACTION is playing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/830294 gems - Gems Pack 4 - LN Master [15 - senya, Tsuki ni Murakumo Hana ni Kaze]] <osu!mania> +Flashlight |4K|
2016-03-16 14:04 -[Hotaru]-: mau panasin jari dulu wkwkwk
2016-03-16 14:04 ALfarris: okok. :3 bentar yak benerin mapku bentar :3
2016-03-16 14:04 ALfarris: ok :3
2016-03-16 14:04 -[Hotaru]-: :3
2016-03-16 14:15 ALfarris: ACTION is playing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/924789 Afgan - Jodoh Pasti Bertemu [Normal]] <osu!mania> |4K|
2016-03-16 14:15 -[Hotaru]-: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/924789 Afgan - Jodoh Pasti Bertemu [Normal]]
2016-03-16 14:16 ALfarris: 00:31:853 (31853|0,31963|1,32074|1,32184|0,32294|0,32294|1) -  ini apaan :'v
2016-03-16 14:17 -[Hotaru]-: eh anjr lupa ku benerin :"v
2016-03-16 14:17 ALfarris: benerin gih :v
2016-03-16 14:17 -[Hotaru]-: udah
2016-03-16 14:17 ALfarris: dah di update?
2016-03-16 14:18 -[Hotaru]-: belom
2016-03-16 14:18 -[Hotaru]-: selesaikan dulu aja :v
2016-03-16 14:18 ALfarris: ok :3
2016-03-16 14:18 ALfarris: pertama yg diff normal dulu yak
2016-03-16 14:18 -[Hotaru]-: :3
2016-03-16 14:19 -[Hotaru]-: oke oke '3' /
2016-03-16 14:20 ALfarris: untuk yg double itu, kau fokus instrumen kick atau bunyi "tak" gitu?
2016-03-16 14:20 ALfarris: gak tau nama instrumennyalah :'v
2016-03-16 14:20 -[Hotaru]-: dua duanya
2016-03-16 14:20 ALfarris: ho gitu.
2016-03-16 14:20 huahahaha *ketawa jahat*
2016-03-16 14:20 ALfarris: sedangkan untuk gitar satu note kan?
2016-03-16 14:21 -[Hotaru]-: iya
2016-03-16 14:21 ALfarris: bentar cek lg
2016-03-16 14:22 -[Hotaru]-: oke oke ;3
2016-03-16 14:23 ALfarris: ok lanjut.
2016-03-16 14:23 ALfarris:  column 1|2|3|4 00:16:853 (16853|3) - mending ini kolom 3 /?
2016-03-16 14:24 -[Hotaru]-: sip
2016-03-16 14:24 -[Hotaru]-: hmm tadi si hiki nyaranin hal yang sama... oke kolom tiga owo
2016-03-16 14:24 ALfarris: :3
2016-03-16 14:26 ALfarris: 00:34:500 (34500|3,34610|2) - ini del terus 00:34:721 (34721|1,34831|0) - ini ctrl+j jd lebih natural gitu.
2016-03-16 14:26 -[Hotaru]-: :3
2016-03-16 14:26 -[Hotaru]-: jadi aneh kalo di delet :'v
2016-03-16 14:27 ALfarris: coba dulu deh.
2016-03-16 14:27 ALfarris: kalo mau reject juga gpp namanya juga mod :v
2016-03-16 14:27 -[Hotaru]-: eh ku coba dulu deng :v
2016-03-16 14:27 ALfarris: yowes :3
2016-03-16 14:28 -[Hotaru]-: siip :3
2016-03-16 14:28 ALfarris: enak gak?
2016-03-16 14:29 -[Hotaru]-: enak ko owo
2016-03-16 14:29 ALfarris: :3
2016-03-16 14:29 -[Hotaru]-: ayoo lagi >w< /
2016-03-16 14:29 ALfarris: 00:35:382 (35382|0,35493|1) - ini del juga terus 00:35:603 (35603|2,35713|3) - ini ctrl+j
2016-03-16 14:30 -[Hotaru]-: hmmm yang itu gitarnya mulai dari situ
2016-03-16 14:30 -[Hotaru]-: emang rada samar" sih...
2016-03-16 14:30 ALfarris: eh bnr. yaudah jgn diubah. 00:35:824 (35824|2,35824|1,35824|0) - yg ini knp triple?
2016-03-16 14:30 -[Hotaru]-: lebih dalem suaranya
2016-03-16 14:30 -[Hotaru]-: plus ada cymbal disitu owo
2016-03-16 14:31 ALfarris: penandaan beda pitch :v juga sering kok ngelakuin itu :'v
2016-03-16 14:31 ALfarris: ho begitu yowes. tetep 3 aj
2016-03-16 14:31 -[Hotaru]-: sip owo
2016-03-16 14:32 ALfarris: 00:49:721 (49721|3) - ini ngapain nyempil :'v?
2016-03-16 14:32 -[Hotaru]-: delet owo
2016-03-16 14:32 ALfarris: ok.
2016-03-16 14:33 ALfarris: 00:51:265 (51265|1,51265|0,51265|3) - yg ini knp triple?
2016-03-16 14:33 ALfarris: ki
2016-03-16 14:33 -[Hotaru]-: salah denger aku :'3
2016-03-16 14:34 ALfarris: jiah :'
2016-03-16 14:34 ALfarris: :'v
2016-03-16 14:34 -[Hotaru]-: :'v
2016-03-16 14:34 -[Hotaru]-: awkawkawk xD
2016-03-16 14:34 ALfarris: kalo gitu, ini aja yg di del00:51:265 (51265|3) - 
2016-03-16 14:34 -[Hotaru]-: yang 2 yang di delet
2016-03-16 14:35 -[Hotaru]-: soalnya ngindarin jack '3'
2016-03-16 14:35 ALfarris: atau, 00:51:265 (51265|1) - ini del trs 00:51:265 (51265|3) - in pindahin ke col 3
2016-03-16 14:35 ALfarris: terserah juga sih kau juga sih :3
2016-03-16 14:36 -[Hotaru]-: hu hu hu leh uga'
2016-03-16 14:36 ALfarris: tp kalo yg 2 diilanginjd gk konsisten itu kan suara kicknya atau apalah itu.
2016-03-16 14:38 -[Hotaru]-: gapapa :3 aku re arrange tadi
2016-03-16 14:38 ALfarris: ok kao begitu :3. 01:17:074 (77074|1) - ini del. ghost
2016-03-16 14:38 ALfarris: 01:18:618 (78618|3) - ^
2016-03-16 14:39 ALfarris: atau dua itu sengaja buat enak dimaininnya :3?
2016-03-16 14:40 -[Hotaru]-: ada bunyi di sini 01:18:618 (78618|3) -  tapi rada samar
2016-03-16 14:40 -[Hotaru]-: sama biar enak
2016-03-16 14:40 ALfarris: ok jika begitu. modnya udh :'v dikit bgt kan :'v. 
2016-03-16 14:40 ALfarris: atau mau lanjut ke easy?
2016-03-16 14:41 -[Hotaru]-: easynya udah yakin bagus '3' tinggal sedikit self mod aja
2016-03-16 14:41 ALfarris: coba aku liat dulu. menurutku map normalnya bagus. tp saranku LNnya :'v coba rearrange lg :'v
2016-03-16 14:42 ALfarris: njir 0,95* :v
2016-03-16 14:42 -[Hotaru]-: wkwkwk xD
2016-03-16 14:42 ALfarris: gak nyampe 1
2016-03-16 14:42 -[Hotaru]-: 0.95 are the best :3
2016-03-16 14:43 ALfarris: kamu ga papa kalo buat note 1/4 di diff easy?
2016-03-16 14:43 -[Hotaru]-: bpmnya rendah
2016-03-16 14:43 -[Hotaru]-: 1/4 bakal kerasa kaya 1/2
2016-03-16 14:44 ALfarris: bnr juga sih :3
2016-03-16 14:44 ALfarris: keajaiban o!m :v

jangan terlalu dipikirkanlah :'0 dianya yang begitu :"^ // iya ris :"3
thanks Buat IRCnya >w<) b
Etsu
1,240 posts
Joined October 2013
Etsu
Hello!

My modding

Key: 1|2|3|4

Easy
00:09:794 - I think you should put a note on the and 00:49:500 - at key 1
00:22:147 - add note?
00:36:706 - this note should delete
01:02:735 - add key 3
01:01:412 - add key 4
01:02:956 (62956|2) - does not fit must remove
01:03:618 - add key 4
01:35:824 - better finish to hold not you think?

Normal
00:13:765 (13765|3,13985|2,14206|1,14427|0,14647|2,14647|0) -
you would be better that way:


00:49:941 (49941|0) - delete
00:56:559 (56559|3) - delete?
01:27:441 (87441|0,87882|1,87882|3,88765|2) -
and if you change it better?

This was the basics I saw good luck and good map ;)
-BANGKE-
958 posts
Joined July 2015
-BANGKE-
:)

Surono wrote:

yha ja da

Lolis/cewek galaw/lewd BG = nonsense
see below of this

oke, buat saran nih. sejak si lagu itu laki dan bukan cover perempuan (cecede why I say like this)
BGnya harus tokoh laki-laki.. kalau situ masih suka yang berbau webos stuf.. (ya.. pikirkan mayoritas orang orang di ni game)

Contoh dari saya

dan coba cari yg lebih bagus, kalau ga ada. pake itu aja lol
Gluck

EDIT:
jangan lupa buat ngilangin watermarknya itu kawkawkawk
ngehe
-BANGKE-
958 posts
Joined July 2015
-BANGKE-
mark
Hotaru-
806 posts
Joined March 2015
Topic Starter
Hotaru-

Etsu wrote:

Hello!

My modding

Key: 1|2|3|4

Easy
00:09:794 - I think you should put a note on the and 00:49:500 - at key 1
00:22:147 - add note?
00:36:706 - this note should delete
01:02:735 - add key 3
01:01:412 - add key 4
01:02:956 (62956|2) - does not fit must remove
01:03:618 - add key 4
01:35:824 - better finish to hold not you think?

Normal
00:13:765 (13765|3,13985|2,14206|1,14427|0,14647|2,14647|0) -
you would be better that way:


00:49:941 (49941|0) - delete
00:56:559 (56559|3) - delete?
01:27:441 (87441|0,87882|1,87882|3,88765|2) -
and if you change it better?

This was the basics I saw good luck and good map ;)
thanks for the mod owo UPDATED
-BANGKE-
958 posts
Joined July 2015
-BANGKE-
IRC
14:07 *-BANGKE- is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/924789 Afgan - Jodoh Pasti Bertemu [Normal]]
14:07 -BANGKE-: irc ki
14:08 -[Hotaru]-: oki
14:08 *-[Hotaru]- is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/924789 Afgan - Jodoh Pasti Bertemu [Normal]]
14:08 -BANGKE-: nih enak di ganti aja nama diffnya
14:08 -BANGKE-: soalnya cuma 2
14:09 -BANGKE-: bikin agak nge feel
14:09 -[Hotaru]-: ganti kaya mana .-.
14:09 -[Hotaru]-: contohnya?? rada bingung xD
14:10 -BANGKE-: yg normal ganti "Loneliness"
14:10 -[Hotaru]-: oke oke
14:10 -[Hotaru]-: bagus juga
14:10 -BANGKE-: yg satunya ganti terserah aja
14:10 -BANGKE-: contoh
14:11 -BANGKE-: "Gw Galau Anjing"
14:11 -[Hotaru]-: awawoawkawokawawk oke oke xD
14:11 -BANGKE-: 00:05:382 (5382|1,5824|3,6706|2) -
14:11 -BANGKE-: ini jelek btw
14:12 -BANGKE-: 00:05:824 (5824|3) - ini delete aja
14:12 -BANGKE-: soalnya efek yg itu udh di cover sama ini 00:05:382 (5382|1) -
14:12 -[Hotaru]-: oke
14:12 -BANGKE-: 00:07:588 - trs tambahin 1 di sini
14:13 -[Hotaru]-: done
14:13 -BANGKE-: 00:13:838 - missing
14:13 -BANGKE-: missing*
14:13 -BANGKE-: di 1/12
14:13 -BANGKE-: 00:14:537 (14537|2) - ini delete aja
14:13 -BANGKE-: ghost
14:14 -[Hotaru]-: sip
14:14 -BANGKE-: 00:21:265 (21265|0) - ln nya pecah jadi 2
14:14 -BANGKE-: 00:21:485 - pendekin sampe sini
14:14 -BANGKE-: trs tambahin 1 lagi
14:15 -BANGKE-: LN nya
14:15 -[Hotaru]-: done
14:15 -BANGKE-: 00:26:118 (26118|0) - pendekin sampe 00:26:559 -
14:15 -BANGKE-: soalnya udh di cover jg sama ini 00:26:559 (26559|2) -
14:15 -BANGKE-: 00:31:963 (31963|1) - delete
14:16 -BANGKE-: 00:32:184 (32184|2) - ini bukan 1/8 btw
14:16 -BANGKE-: 1/12
14:16 -BANGKE-: jadi kek gini ntar
14:16 -BANGKE-: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4893672
14:17 -[Hotaru]-: whee 1/12 toh ;w;
14:17 -BANGKE-: 00:34:721 (34721|0,34831|1,34941|3,34941|2) - ini juga
14:17 -BANGKE-: 1/12
14:18 -BANGKE-: 00:35:382 (35382|0,35493|1) - ini delete , soalnya di mulai di sini suaranya
14:18 -BANGKE-: 00:35:603 -
14:18 -BANGKE-: trs sama masih 1/12
14:19 -BANGKE-: 00:39:132 (39132|1,39243|2,39353|3,39353|1) - 1/12
14:19 -BANGKE-: 00:42:662 (42662|2,42772|1,42882|2,42882|0) - sama
14:19 -BANGKE-: 00:47:956 (47956|3,48066|2,48177|0,48177|1) - sama
14:19 -[Hotaru]-: done
14:19 -BANGKE-: 00:48:838 (48838|0,48949|1,49059|3,49059|2) -
14:20 -BANGKE-: 00:49:721 (49721|3) - ini delete aja
14:20 -BANGKE-: gk ada suara di situ
14:20 -[Hotaru]-: udah
14:20 -BANGKE-: 01:00:530 (60530|1) - pindahin ke 1
14:20 -[Hotaru]-: done
14:21 -BANGKE-: 01:17:294 - tambahin 1
14:21 -BANGKE-: kek ini01:16:412 (76412|2,76412|3) -
14:21 -[Hotaru]-: i see
14:21 -BANGKE-: 01:35:713 (95713|1) - delete aja
14:21 -BANGKE-: biar impact
14:22 -BANGKE-: 01:35:603 (95603|0) - pindahin ke 2
14:22 -[Hotaru]-: done
14:22 *-BANGKE- is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/924788 Afgan - Jodoh Pasti Bertemu [Easy]]
14:23 -BANGKE-: 00:23:912 (23912|3) - pindahin ke 2
14:23 -BANGKE-: 00:24:353 (24353|1) -
14:23 -BANGKE-: ke 1
14:23 -[Hotaru]-: oke
14:24 -BANGKE-: 00:47:956 (47956|3) - delete
14:24 -BANGKE-: diff gampang kalo ada 1/2 ln kecil itu jelek
14:24 -BANGKE-: 00:48:838 (48838|0) - sama
14:24 -[Hotaru]-: oke oke
14:25 -BANGKE-: 01:09:574 (69574|3,69794|2,70015|1) - terlalu spike
14:25 -BANGKE-: 01:09:574 (69574|3,70015|1) - delete aja
14:25 -BANGKE-: jadiin 1/2 doang
14:25 -BANGKE-: 01:11:559 (71559|0) - pindahin ke 3
14:25 -[Hotaru]-: woke
14:25 -BANGKE-: 01:18:177 (78177|3) - ke 1
14:26 -[Hotaru]-: sip
14:26 -BANGKE-: 01:34:059 (94059|1,94500|0) - ctrl j
14:26 -BANGKE-: 01:34:941 (94941|1) - ke 3
14:26 -BANGKE-: 01:35:824 (95824|2) - ke 1
14:26 -BANGKE-: sip
14:26 -BANGKE-: dah bagus kok mapnya
14:27 -[Hotaru]-: maksih modnya owo
14:27 -BANGKE-: yoi
Rivals_7
Beatmap Nominator
2,979 posts
Joined July 2014
Rivals_7

Mod Request


Afgan - Jodoh Pasti Bertemu[OsuMania]



You are not forced to applied all, if there's any suggestion that doesn't fit your mapping style, you can freely reject it

hmm. typical indon songs. not my type actually. i'm still expecting people to mapping a songs from "KOTAK" lel.

[General]
Background: No problem
Metadata: No problem.
Mapset:
SPOILER

Ranking Criteria wrote:

A difficulty's name must indicate its level of difficulty, with the exception of the hardest level of difficulty in a set. The mapset's hardest difficulty may use an appropriate custom difficulty name, unrelated to a username. Mapsets may also use a complete set of custom difficulty names that clearly indicate their level of difficulty to the player. Marathon maps with a single difficulty may use free naming.
"Galau" and "Loneliness" aren't indicate the level of the diff.

Loneliness=Kesendirian => sepi, tidak bersama.
Galau(Adj./kata sifat)=ramai, tidak karuan.

Dah mendingan namain diffnya "EZ, NM" "Easy, Normal" atau "Mudah, Sedang" aja. Lebih gampang dimengerti :^)

Difficulty Spread:Cool
AiMod (Ctrl+Shift+A): Fine
MP3: Fine
Hitsound: Fine.
Timing: Nice
Other Stuff: None

Column:
1|2|3|4|


Galau


Might want to raise this diff to 1*.

00:10:677 (10677|0) - uhh, what's this follows? if you follow vocals, should be splitted into 2 lines. If this follows guitar, well.... there is no guitar.

00:34:721 - seems the guitar actually start here. cut the LN?
00:35:382 (35382|0) - same thing.

01:02:956 (62956|2,63177|3) - move to 4|1 respectively, kinda bugging me that this is hitted on the same hand.

01:04:059 (64059|0) - F

01:17:735 (77735|1) - i dont think this is really needed. it only represent pitch change. might want to delete this.

Loneliness


00:09:353 (9353|1) - W pls

00:10:677 (10677|0) - again, wut is this?

00:11:118 (11118|1) - W

00:12:441 (12441|1,12882|0) - W

00:21:706 (21706|2) - W

00:26:559 (26559|1) - W
And still a lot of missing Hitsound, compare with your easiest diff.

kinda illustrate what i meant about missing Hitsound, right?


00:39:353 (39353|1,39794|0) - 1|3 respectively, this pattern...

...i dont think this is fit on the really low BPM songs

00:42:735 (42735|2,42809|1,42882|0,42882|2) - do something similar like above, i guess...

01:02:294 (62294|2) - delete, faint impact shouldnt be 3 notes.

01:04:059 (64059|0) - F

kiai time section:
You missing a lot of potentially mapped noise. such as guitar string at - 01:06:044 - , a clap-like noise - 01:07:368 - and else. Do not limit your mapping here, since this is the hardest diff.

01:21:706 (81706|0) - F maybe?
01:25:235 (85235|3) - here as well

cant say this is a bad map nor a good map tho. This is like an average 2 diff TV size mapping. After all, its not bad :D

well then. good luck :)
Hotaru-
806 posts
Joined March 2015
Topic Starter
Hotaru-

Rivals_7 wrote:


Mod Request


Afgan - Jodoh Pasti Bertemu[OsuMania]



You are not forced to applied all, if there's any suggestion that doesn't fit your mapping style, you can freely reject it

hmm. typical indon songs. not my type actually. i'm still expecting people to mapping a songs from "KOTAK" lel. maybe soon :D

[General]
Background: No problem
Metadata: No problem.
Mapset:
SPOILER

Ranking Criteria wrote:

A difficulty's name must indicate its level of difficulty, with the exception of the hardest level of difficulty in a set. The mapset's hardest difficulty may use an appropriate custom difficulty name, unrelated to a username. Mapsets may also use a complete set of custom difficulty names that clearly indicate their level of difficulty to the player. Marathon maps with a single difficulty may use free naming.
"Galau" and "Loneliness" aren't indicate the level of the diff. I'll Change it

Loneliness=Kesendirian => sepi, tidak bersama.
Galau(Adj./kata sifat)=ramai, tidak karuan.

Dah mendingan namain diffnya "EZ, NM" "Easy, Normal" atau "Mudah, Sedang" aja. Lebih gampang dimengerti :^)

Difficulty Spread:Cool
AiMod (Ctrl+Shift+A): Fine
MP3: Fine
Hitsound: Fine.
Timing: Nice
Other Stuff: None

Column:
1|2|3|4|


Galau


Might want to raise this diff to 1*. I'm Not Sure I can do It ....

00:10:677 (10677|0) - uhh, what's this follows? if you follow vocals, should be splitted into 2 lines. If this follows guitar, well.... there is no guitar.

00:34:721 - seems the guitar actually start here. cut the LN? hmm... at first i was thinking like that but.. i'll consider it later :3
00:35:382 (35382|0) - same thing. ^

01:02:956 (62956|2,63177|3) - move to 4|1 respectively, kinda bugging me that this is hitted on the same hand.

01:04:059 (64059|0) - F

01:17:735 (77735|1) - i dont think this is really needed. it only represent pitch change. might want to delete this.

Loneliness


00:09:353 (9353|1) - W pls

00:10:677 (10677|0) - again, wut is this?

00:11:118 (11118|1) - W

00:12:441 (12441|1,12882|0) - W

00:21:706 (21706|2) - W

00:26:559 (26559|1) - W
And still a lot of missing Hitsound, compare with your easiest diff.

kinda illustrate what i meant about missing Hitsound, right?


00:39:353 (39353|1,39794|0) - 1|3 respectively, this pattern...

...i dont think this is fit on the really low BPM songs

00:42:735 (42735|2,42809|1,42882|0,42882|2) - do something similar like above, i guess...

01:02:294 (62294|2) - delete, faint impact shouldnt be 3 notes.

01:04:059 (64059|0) - F

kiai time section:
You missing a lot of potentially mapped noise. such as guitar string at - 01:06:044 - , a clap-like noise - 01:07:368 - and else. Do not limit your mapping here, since this is the hardest diff.

01:21:706 (81706|0) - F maybe?
01:25:235 (85235|3) - here as well

cant say this is a bad map nor a good map tho. This is like an average 2 diff TV size mapping. After all, its not bad :D

well then. good luck :) Thanks >w<

No reply = Fixed
Thanks owo
Verniy_Chan
2,321 posts
Joined May 2014
Verniy_Chan

Hi Afgan Ninja Hotaru

Mod Via ♡ Верный Mania Queue ♡

4K = |1|2|3|4|

(Focus : Pattern , Pitch, Hitsounds)
General
  1. Uncheck widescreen support on Sedang diff since there no SB in your map
  2. Inconsistent Audio volume on Sedang & Mudah difficult

    Make sure you're check each diff volume, and make both of that are same audio with volume 40% or 30%
Mudah

OD : 6,5 or 7
HP : 6
  1. 00:23:912 (23912|1) - pitchnya sangat rendah, karena dari awal anda hanya mengikuti suara kick, snare & cimbal. Agar lebih konsisten dengan pitch, Saran mending dihapus aja karena disini hanya terdengar suara low hat
  2. 00:25:677 (25677|0) - sama halnya seperti diatas, walaupun disini juga terdengar low piano, tapi untuk consistency mending dihapus. Tapi boleh dipertimbangkan, kalau sendainya itu disengaja agar pattern gak terlihat empty
  3. 01:02:956 (62956|0) - wah.. penempatan note disini terlihat canggung dengan rhytim yang anda ikutin, lebih baik pindah ke red tick 1/4 snap 01:02:735 - agar lebih ngefeel ke sentuhan vocal, dan juga boleh dipasang note disini 01:03:618 -
  4. 01:04:059 - mulai dari kiai sampai selesai, spertinya pattern kurang ngefeel, lel karena banyak bagian yang terlihat kosong. saranku sih coba ngemap suara lain.. mungkin low hat atau low piano contoh untuk suara ini 01:09:794 (69794|2)
Sedang

OD : 7
HP : 7
  1. 00:39:132 - apakah hotaru yakin ngak tambah note disini? karena ada suara loud di blue tick 1/4, sama halnya dengan :
    00:42:662 -
  2. 00:46:412 - overmapped, hapus 1 note karena ada 3 alasan :
    1) pitch yang terdengar hanya suara piano dan kick
    2) pattern terkesan dipaksakan kecuali untuk bagian Kiai section
    3) penyetaraan dengan diff sebelumnya yaitu easy diff yang hanya memasang 1 note, akan tetapi untuk diff ini memasang lebih dari 2.
    ok.. jangan lupa coba cek bagian ini :
    00:49:941 -
    01:03:177 -
    01:11:118 -
    01:21:706 -
    01:22:588 -
    01:23:471 -
    01:25:235 -
  3. 00:47:294 - tambah note di |4| karena disitu ada suara piano + kick seperti yang saya jelaskan diatas dan ditambah lagi untuk konsistensi
  4. 01:01:412 (61412|0) - untuk suara electric guitar mengapa harus LN kalau normal note 1/4 bisa dibuat lel, saran LN diganti jadi normal note.. otomatis note disemua blue tick dipasang 01:01:632 - 01:02:074 - berhubung ini diff paling akhir/susah
  5. 01:17:294 (77294|2) - potong LN dibagian red tick 01:17:735 - karena disitu juga terdengar suara piano yang sama dengan 01:17:294 -
  6. 01:35:382 - sampai 01:35:603 - bagian penutupan juga boleh dibuat lebih sulit patternya, coba bagian LN diganti jadi stair pattern 1/12 untuk suara stream guitar seperti 00:39:206 (39206|0,39280|1,39353|2) - mungkin ini bisa meningkatkan stars untuk diff normal

Verniy_Chan wrote:

My Rating
82,5

(1-100)

just for fun only, don’t take it seriously
Hue~ akibat tiba-tiba padam listrik, jadinya mengulang dari awal mod mapmu :(
Хорошо~ Good Luck..
Hotaru-
806 posts
Joined March 2015
Topic Starter
Hotaru-

Verniy_Chan wrote:


Hi Afgan Ninja Hotaru haiii >w< /

Mod Via ♡ Верный Mania Queue ♡

4K = |1|2|3|4|

(Focus : Pattern , Pitch, Hitsounds)
General
  1. Uncheck widescreen support on Sedang diff since there no SB in your map
  2. Inconsistent Audio volume on Sedang & Mudah difficult

    Make sure you're check each diff volume, and make both of that are same audio with volume 40% or 30%
Mudah

OD : 6,5 or 7
HP : 6
  1. 00:23:912 (23912|1) - pitchnya sangat rendah, karena dari awal anda hanya mengikuti suara kick, snare & cimbal. Agar lebih konsisten dengan pitch, Saran mending dihapus aja karena disini hanya terdengar suara low hat
  2. 00:25:677 (25677|0) - sama halnya seperti diatas, walaupun disini juga terdengar low piano, tapi untuk consistency mending dihapus. Tapi boleh dipertimbangkan, kalau sendainya itu disengaja agar pattern gak terlihat empty emang bener rada kecil suaranya.. cuma bakal kosong kalau ga di isi
  3. 01:02:956 (62956|0) - wah.. penempatan note disini terlihat canggung dengan rhytim yang anda ikutin, lebih baik pindah ke red tick 1/4 snap 01:02:735 - agar lebih ngefeel ke sentuhan vocal, dan juga boleh dipasang note disini 01:03:618 -
  4. 01:04:059 - mulai dari kiai sampai selesai, spertinya pattern kurang ngefeel, lel karena banyak bagian yang terlihat kosong. saranku sih coba ngemap suara lain.. mungkin low hat atau low piano contoh untuk suara ini 01:09:794 (69794|2)
Sedang

OD : 7
HP : 7
  1. 00:39:132 - apakah hotaru yakin ngak tambah note disini? karena ada suara loud di blue tick 1/4, sama halnya dengan :
    00:42:662 - di tambah owo /
  2. 00:46:412 - overmapped, hapus 1 note karena ada 3 alasan :
    1) pitch yang terdengar hanya suara piano dan kick
    2) pattern terkesan dipaksakan kecuali untuk bagian Kiai section
    3) penyetaraan dengan diff sebelumnya yaitu easy diff yang hanya memasang 1 note, akan tetapi untuk diff ini memasang lebih dari 2.
    ok.. jangan lupa coba cek bagian ini :
    00:49:941 -
    01:03:177 -
    01:11:118 -
    01:21:706 -
    01:22:588 -
    01:23:471 -
    01:25:235 -
  3. 00:47:294 - tambah note di |4| karena disitu ada suara piano + kick seperti yang saya jelaskan diatas dan ditambah lagi untuk konsistensi
  4. 01:01:412 (61412|0) - untuk suara electric guitar mengapa harus LN kalau normal note 1/4 bisa dibuat lel, saran LN diganti jadi normal note.. otomatis note disemua blue tick dipasang 01:01:632 - 01:02:074 - berhubung ini diff paling akhir/susah
  5. 01:17:294 (77294|2) - potong LN dibagian red tick 01:17:735 - karena disitu juga terdengar suara piano yang sama dengan 01:17:294 -
  6. 01:35:382 - sampai 01:35:603 - bagian penutupan juga boleh dibuat lebih sulit patternya, coba bagian LN diganti jadi stair pattern 1/12 untuk suara stream guitar seperti 00:39:206 (39206|0,39280|1,39353|2) - mungkin ini bisa meningkatkan stars untuk diff normal

Verniy_Chan wrote:

My Rating
82,5

(1-100)

just for fun only, don’t take it seriously
Hue~ akibat tiba-tiba padam listrik, jadinya mengulang dari awal mod mapmu :( Huee :(
Хорошо~ Good Luck..
thanks >w<

thanks modnya V-Chan owo /
no reply = Fixed
Hotaru-
806 posts
Joined March 2015
Topic Starter
Hotaru-
yep... i didn't know what i should do next :'D
Hotaru-
806 posts
Joined March 2015
Topic Starter
Hotaru-
NEED BN CHECK :"



plzz notice my map senpai" tachi ;w;
Nivrad00
556 posts
Joined October 2012
Nivrad00
From Nivrad00's Mania Queue

Sorry for the delay ;n; Fun fact, this is now the second-slowest song I have on osu

General
I asked -Kamikaze- about your diff names and he says they have to indicate the difficulty in English so the majority of people can understand it :?

Mudah
00:49:941 - if you're following the guitar with this LN, why not put LNs at 00:51:706 - and 00:53:471 - ?

Sedang
01:01:853 (61853|3,62074|2,62294|3,62735|3,62956|2,63177|3,63618|2,64059|3,64500|3,64721|2,64941|3) - this pattern is oddly repetitive on the right hand

I think this is a wonderful simple map and I would be totally missing the point if I tried to nitpick technical details. Good luck!
Rivals_7
Beatmap Nominator
2,979 posts
Joined July 2014
Rivals_7

Nivrad00 wrote:

General
I asked -Kamikaze- about your diff names and he says they have to indicate the difficulty in English so the majority of people can understand it :?


Its not a big deal it seems. Its quite similar to https://osu.ppy.sh/s/316390 case about diff naming, but in Latin
Nivrad00
556 posts
Joined October 2012
Nivrad00
I didn't say it was a big deal because of the ranking criteria, I asked a BN. He said that it doesn't count as "clearly indicated" because it's not English. That map with diff names in Latin certainly suggests it's okay though, so I wouldn't blame you if you wanted to leave it until the BN check.
Hotaru-
806 posts
Joined March 2015
Topic Starter
Hotaru-

Nivrad00 wrote:

From Nivrad00's Mania Queue

Sorry for the delay ;n; Fun fact, this is now the second-slowest song I have on osu Yeayyy \ (>w<) /

General
I asked -Kamikaze- about your diff names and he says they have to indicate the difficulty in English so the majority of people can understand it :? Hmm... I see.. I'll Change It owo.. Actually The Meaning Of Mudah is Easy and Sedang it's Normal taken From Indonesian/Melayu Language Since Soo Much People Did't Understand It so i change it

Mudah
00:49:941 - if you're following the guitar with this LN, why not put LNs at 00:51:706 - and 00:53:471 - ? whoa.. My Mistake XD

Sedang
01:01:853 (61853|3,62074|2,62294|3,62735|3,62956|2,63177|3,63618|2,64059|3,64500|3,64721|2,64941|3) - this pattern is oddly repetitive on the right hand Whoaa.. That's Why I Feel Bad when i play That Part

I think this is a wonderful simple map and I would be totally missing the point if I tried to nitpick technical details.Whoaa Thanks :D Good luck!

Thanks For The Mod Nivrad

UPDATED!
[-Star_Lenz-]
583 posts
Joined September 2014
[-Star_Lenz-]
BAPER MZ ? Bukannya udah punya cewe sekarang mah haha *run

Random mod nanti saya mod pass malam hari.
Hotaru-
806 posts
Joined March 2015
Topic Starter
Hotaru-

[-Star_Lenz-] wrote:

BAPER MZ ? Bukannya udah punya cewe sekarang mah haha *run

Random mod nanti saya mod pass malam hari.

Wahhh Thanks Banget >w<
tapi masalahnya Oeg Gak punya cewe :'<
[-Star_Lenz-]
583 posts
Joined September 2014
[-Star_Lenz-]
Hi mz hotaru ^^

Random mod

Col : 1|2|3|4

Easy
00:15:530 (15530|1,15971|3) - ctrl+g serasa berat maen'in tangan jika 00:14:206 (14206|3,14647|2) - 3-4 tangan kanan lalu 00:15:088 (15088|0,15530|1) - 1-2 di tangan kiri.
^ jika di ctrl+g 00:15:971 (15971|1) - ini pindah ke col 3
00:19:059 (19059|1) - move col 3 lebih kerasa flownya
00:25:235 (25235|2) - move col 2 00:24:794 (24794|3,25235|2) - my feeling berat asli u,u lalu jika di acc 00:26:118 (26118|1) - ini pindah ke 4
^ accept atas 00:27:882 (27882|3,28765|0) - ctrl+g
00:34:059 - my recomended pattern biar ada variasi dikit http://puu.sh/p93TB/9f99c625d7.jpg
00:39:353 (39353|1) - move col 4 ^
00:45:530 (45530|2) - move col 2 00:45:971 (45971|3) - single dan LN tidak di 3-4 lebih enak example 00:42:000 (42000|0,42221|1,42441|3,42882|2) - 00:20:824 (20824|3,21044|2,21265|0,21706|1) - stslenya gitukan xD
00:48:177 (48177|2) - move col 4 lalu jadikan LN itu karena ada suara lel suara gitar atau piano sih itu 00:49:059 - stop
dan 00:49:059 (49059|1) - jadikan LN stop 00:49:941 - well soalya jika tidak di buat LN 00:49:941 (49941|2) - LN ini gantung kan ikut itu suara.
00:51:706 (51706|2,53471|3,56559|3) - wew LNnya maen 3-4 terus baby :D
00:51:706 (51706|2) - ini LN pindah ke 1 sama kamu pass in lagi okay
00:56:559 (56559|3) - move col 3 00:57:000 (57000|1) - pindah ke col 4
00:57:441 - recomended http://puu.sh/p94DA/2c24ff8e4e.jpg
01:02:294 (62294|1,62735|1) - aww man ini jack ganggu LN di col 1 jack di col 2 01:02:294 (62294|1,62735|1) - jack pindah ke col 4 dan 01:03:177 (63177|3,63618|2,64059|0,64059|1) - ctrl+h hindari jack kembali
01:04:941 (64941|3) - move col 1
01:11:118 (71118|1,71559|2,72000|3) - ini stairs 1/2 jangan di col 2-3-4 tapi 4-3-2 singkatnya 01:11:118 (71118|1,71559|2,72000|3) - ctrl+g lalu 01:12:882 (72882|1) - ini move col 1
01:23:912 - gak banget deh jika LN + stairs ada di easy :v recomended http://puu.sh/p95Oj/9ee5be38ce.jpg

Normal
00:09:353 (9353|1,9353|3,10235|1,10235|3,11118|1,11118|3) - so i'am boring pattern xD 00:10:235 (10235|1) - move col 1
00:13:838 (13838|2) - mau nanya ini ngikut suara apa btw ? 00:13:765 (13765|3,13765|0,13985|1,14206|0,14427|3) - ini kan suara piano yah ? 00:13:838 (13838|2) - lalu ini apa ? delete saja
00:23:912 (23912|0,24353|1) - ctrl+g wall terus dari tadi 00:22:588 (22588|2,22588|3,23030|1,23030|0,23471|2,23471|3) - biasa gak balanced ke tangan
00:45:530 (45530|2,45530|1) - geser kekanan 1 baris lalu 00:45:971 (45971|3) - move col 2
00:49:941 (49941|2) - LN ikut suara instrumen kan ? bukan nya stop sampai sini ? 00:51:265 -
00:57:000 (57000|1,57000|2,57882|1,57882|2) - gampang boring wall kek gini ssaran saya sama ke kamu dikit re-pattern buat note wallnya
00:59:647 (59647|1) - move col 1
01:02:735 (62735|3,62956|2) - geser kek kiri 1 baris keep balanced 01:02:294 (62294|3) -
01:06:485 - missing note 01:05:824 (65824|1,65824|3,66044|2,66265|1) - same
01:07:588 (67588|3,67588|2,68030|1,68250|0,68471|1,68471|2,68912|1,68912|0,69353|2) - gak enak banget ini LNnya :3 recomended http://puu.sh/p96as/c840a7e422.jpg
01:15:088 (75088|2,75088|3,75530|1,75530|2,75971|0,75971|1,76412|2,76412|3) - kurang ngeh banget ini LN xD recomended http://puu.sh/p96sJ/1d3b54f9d3.jpg
01:29:647 (89647|2,89647|3,90088|1,90088|2,90530|0,90530|1,90971|3,90971|2,91412|1,91412|0,91853|3,91853|2,92074|1,92294|0,92294|2) - sama ini nya kurang ngehh xD recomended http://puu.sh/p96yz/eb655f851f.jpg

Diff name mungkin bisa seperti ini :
EZ 'Baper'
NM 'Putus cinta' // 'Php' // 'Galau' dll :v sebaiknya tanya BN saja.

Maaf jika modnya tidak membantu :)

Good luck mz :)
Hotaru-
806 posts
Joined March 2015
Topic Starter
Hotaru-

[-Star_Lenz-] wrote:

Hi mz hotaru ^^

Random mod

Col : 1|2|3|4

Easy
00:15:530 (15530|1,15971|3) - ctrl+g serasa berat maen'in tangan jika 00:14:206 (14206|3,14647|2) - 3-4 tangan kanan lalu 00:15:088 (15088|0,15530|1) - 1-2 di tangan kiri.
^ jika di ctrl+g 00:15:971 (15971|1) - ini pindah ke col 3
00:19:059 (19059|1) - move col 3 lebih kerasa flownya
00:25:235 (25235|2) - move col 2 00:24:794 (24794|3,25235|2) - my feeling berat asli u,u lalu jika di acc 00:26:118 (26118|1) - ini pindah ke 4
^ accept atas 00:27:882 (27882|3,28765|0) - ctrl+g
00:34:059 - my recomended pattern biar ada variasi dikit http://puu.sh/p93TB/9f99c625d7.jpg keep Since it was Easy owo
00:39:353 (39353|1) - move col 4 ^
00:45:530 (45530|2) - move col 2 00:45:971 (45971|3) - single dan LN tidak di 3-4 lebih enak example 00:42:000 (42000|0,42221|1,42441|3,42882|2) - 00:20:824 (20824|3,21044|2,21265|0,21706|1) - stslenya gitukan xD
00:48:177 (48177|2) - move col 4 lalu jadikan LN itu karena ada suara lel suara gitar atau piano sih itu 00:49:059 - stop
dan 00:49:059 (49059|1) - jadikan LN stop 00:49:941 - well soalya jika tidak di buat LN 00:49:941 (49941|2) - LN ini gantung kan ikut itu suara.
00:51:706 (51706|2,53471|3,56559|3) - wew LNnya maen 3-4 terus baby :D
00:51:706 (51706|2) - ini LN pindah ke 1 sama kamu pass in lagi okay
00:56:559 (56559|3) - move col 3 00:57:000 (57000|1) - pindah ke col 4
00:57:441 - recomended http://puu.sh/p94DA/2c24ff8e4e.jpg
01:02:294 (62294|1,62735|1) - aww man ini jack ganggu LN di col 1 jack di col 2 01:02:294 (62294|1,62735|1) - jack pindah ke col 4 dan 01:03:177 (63177|3,63618|2,64059|0,64059|1) - ctrl+h hindari jack kembali
01:04:941 (64941|3) - move col 1
01:11:118 (71118|1,71559|2,72000|3) - ini stairs 1/2 jangan di col 2-3-4 tapi 4-3-2 singkatnya 01:11:118 (71118|1,71559|2,72000|3) - ctrl+g lalu 01:12:882 (72882|1) - ini move col 1
01:23:912 - gak banget deh jika LN + stairs ada di easy :v recomended http://puu.sh/p95Oj/9ee5be38ce.jpg

Normal
00:09:353 (9353|1,9353|3,10235|1,10235|3,11118|1,11118|3) - so i'am boring pattern xD 00:10:235 (10235|1) - move col 1
00:13:838 (13838|2) - mau nanya ini ngikut suara apa btw ? 00:13:765 (13765|3,13765|0,13985|1,14206|0,14427|3) - ini kan suara piano yah ? 00:13:838 (13838|2) - lalu ini apa ? delete saja Nah.. Sebenernya itu bunyi string Gitar.. jadi saya ngikutin itu xD
00:23:912 (23912|0,24353|1) - ctrl+g wall terus dari tadi 00:22:588 (22588|2,22588|3,23030|1,23030|0,23471|2,23471|3) - biasa gak balanced ke tangan
00:45:530 (45530|2,45530|1) - geser kekanan 1 baris lalu 00:45:971 (45971|3) - move col 2
00:49:941 (49941|2) - LN ikut suara instrumen kan ? bukan nya stop sampai sini ? 00:51:265 - Nope i guess owo
00:57:000 (57000|1,57000|2,57882|1,57882|2) - gampang boring wall kek gini ssaran saya sama ke kamu dikit re-pattern buat note wallnya
00:59:647 (59647|1) - move col 1
01:02:735 (62735|3,62956|2) - geser kek kiri 1 baris keep balanced 01:02:294 (62294|3) -
01:06:485 - missing note 01:05:824 (65824|1,65824|3,66044|2,66265|1) - same
01:07:588 (67588|3,67588|2,68030|1,68250|0,68471|1,68471|2,68912|1,68912|0,69353|2) - gak enak banget ini LNnya :3 recomended http://puu.sh/p96as/c840a7e422.jpg
01:15:088 (75088|2,75088|3,75530|1,75530|2,75971|0,75971|1,76412|2,76412|3) - kurang ngeh banget ini LN xD recomended http://puu.sh/p96sJ/1d3b54f9d3.jpg
01:29:647 (89647|2,89647|3,90088|1,90088|2,90530|0,90530|1,90971|3,90971|2,91412|1,91412|0,91853|3,91853|2,92074|1,92294|0,92294|2) - sama ini nya kurang ngehh xD recomended http://puu.sh/p96yz/eb655f851f.jpg

Diff name mungkin bisa seperti ini :
EZ 'Baper'
NM 'Putus cinta' // 'Php' // 'Galau' dll :v sebaiknya tanya BN saja.

Maaf jika modnya tidak membantu :) wiiihh bantu banget ko >w<)/

Good luck mz :) thanks :3

No Reply Means Fixed thanks Star_Lenz Senpai >w<
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semoga bisa bergelembung deh
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erlinadewi- wrote:

semoga bisa bergelembung deh


aaaaaaaaa Susah mau nyari gelembung buat map ini ;w;
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