1. Offset: 1704. Current fit to music, but doesn't fit to time signature (4/4)

1. 03:00:550 (1) - Maybe start this spinner on 03:00:780.

Starrodkirby86 wrote:

Daaaaaaaaaaaaamn.

SPOILER

Also, I downloaded Gonzvlo's .osb pack in advance. This mod takes Gonzvlo's latest SB, so download that .rar and update the SB to see where I'm going off of.

01:37:936: In the lyrics, he says, "'cause every girl in here wanna be her" (her her her) etc. Perhaps you should reuse one of your Her.png files? (Similar to 00:09:00 and 01:34:00)

There's a lot of duplicate files in the beatmap. I don't see any differences between (this is in the Lyrics folder) 2.png, 4.png, and 9.png; 20.png and 20a.png. You're able to reuse the same image for multiple objects o.o...So this seems a little redundant. Not to mention, there are also Lyrics files in the Song Folder, not in the Lyrics folder. Are these perhaps 'duplicates' too? (The duplicates are 20.png, 20a.png, etc. etc. all the way to 29.png).

Moving on...to the Effects Folder. The maximum dimensions for SB elements is 800x600. Could you perhaps resize purple.jpg and purple2.jpg and change the Scale sizes to compensate for that? oxo

The dark red, crimson combo color might be a little dark (Combo color 4) . It can get real hard to read them on higher difficulties. Maybe making it brighter would do.

With all that aside, this is a great map! It's the usual darck style I remember :R~ Smooth curves, smooth curves. And nice storyboard, Gonzvlo! You managed to make this map appealing without it being jailbait. Excellent job guys.Star.

Ok

[Colours]
Combo1 : 86,248,196
Combo2 : 128,0,255
Combo3 : 130,245,255
Combo4 : 148,40,255
SliderBorder : 192,192,192

James2250 wrote:

SB comments:
the lyrics go
"cause every girl in here wanna be *her*" but you missed off the her, look at 01:37:00 (and make it repeat the word her like the other ones?) -- unless the picture there takes the place of the lyrics

Antu Villegas wrote:

2 cosas para decir:

1-La letra dice "nothing you can compare to your neighborhood HOE", y es: "nothing you can compare to your neighborhood WHORE".

Sorry, I think you are wrong.

2-Las chicas en el SB están pixeleadas, excepto la s3.png :

[attachment=1:6644f]s1.png[/attachment:6644f]

[attachment=0:6644f]s2.png[/attachment:6644f]
(Ok, Thanks)
Eso es todo, es un buen mapa con una buena canción, Buena suerte.

1. Timing looks good to me
2. You could remove the "." and "-" from the tags. Just putting spaces between each word works fine.
3. Make a Normal? Having an Easy, and then Hard with a Normal feels weird. A Normal would complete the map.

DJPop wrote:

00:02:xxx - the word "town!" is a bit delay. (X)
02:31:936 - No "Damn! Girl!" SB?

Larto wrote:

The mp3 is cut off at the end. What happened?

darck360 wrote:

Larto wrote:

The mp3 is cut off at the end. What happened?

It's a Mp3 So Long.

Guessing that means you cut the mp3 cuz it was too long, you can use audacity to fade out the ending to make it sound better though

Fixed

• Offset +5/6ms to me.
  Remove " , " and " - " from the tags please.
  Some difficulties (Insane) have letterboxing on, others (Easy, Hard) don't. Please make an equal choice for all of them (since the SB is the same).

• .Errors/Mistakes: (Bad gameplay issues or badly applied changes)
  00:31:242 (3,4) - HOW HOW HOW HOW could this happen? Two beats on the same spot, remove one! (and 3 is not snapped because of this)

• .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
  Feels like a "bit intense" Normal, to me.
  But nice ^^

• .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
  Seems a nice "Hard" to me, but oh well...
  .Errors/Mistakes: (Bad gameplay issues or badly applied changes)
  01:35:282 (5,6) - I swear i always misread this... Please move them a bit farther or add a beat in 01:35:167.
  02:52:936 (7,8) - 1/2 spacing when the slider actually starts after 1/1... :<

CheeseWarlock wrote:

"I'm trying to find the words" (he says 'tryna', but I think the full words work best)
"hoe" Fixed
"so I can pull up her close" (Fixed)

01:37:948 - Missing "her"(The picture is replacing the word "HER")

1. "Finish.png" (Main folder)
2. "27.png" & "15.png" (Main Folder/Lyrics)

Gonzvlo wrote:

CheeseWarlock wrote:

"I'm trying to find the words" (he says 'tryna', but I think the full words work best)
"hoe" (X)
"so I can pull up her close" (X)

01:37:948 - Missing "her"(Picture Replaces the word "HER")

1. "Finish.png" (Main folder)
2. "27.png" & "15.png" (Main Folder/Lyrics)

Fixed & Thanks Gonz

Krisom wrote:

Ok, let's see...


-General.
· Mp3 seems rankeable...
· TAGS are not the same on all diffs.
· Why are "Electro house hop dancepop" in tags? Shouldn't that go on the genre section when ranked? Meh, not a big deal though.
· Insane is the only diff with Letterboxing during breaks enabled, fix that :/
· Kiai time sections are not snapped. They should land exactly on the beat.
· Everything else seems to be ok.

-Easy
00:34:948 (x) - Add a note?
02:02:641 (1) - Add a finish at the end?
02:08:179 (2) - Hitcircle being buried by a slider might be hard for an Easy diff. It's up to you if you'll move it or not though.
From 02:16:948 (1) - to 02:29:871 (4). - Add claps like what you did from 00:49:718 to 01:04:487.
02:33:102 (x) - Add a note...
I'd personalyl like to see those small breaks mapepd to keep the consistency between all the diffs.

-Hard
02:13:487 (2) - It's hard to tell that this is a slider, it's buried under 02:12:333 (7,8)'s hitsplashes. Your call, I've seen shinx-sama using this in his Insane diffs, but imo it doesn't fits a Hard one.
Nothing much to poke at here.

-Insane
00:46:256 (6) - This spacing is weird. Maybe you wanna try something different here.
02:03:564 (1) - Add a finish at the start
02:48:218 (4) - Why is this clap here?


I'm tryin to find the words to describe this SB wihout saying distractiiiiiiing~!

Hmr, fix these and I'll bubble (considering that this has been cheked by, what, 5 BATs?). Quality wise, your sliders can improve (I guess I should teach you the sliderart secrets... o_O) and your beat placement is not intuitive enough, but it's a refreshing style and a nice map.

Krisom wrote:

-Easy
02:08:179 (2) - Hitcircle being buried by a slider might be hard for an Easy diff. It's up to you if you'll move it or not though.
I'd personalyl like to see those small breaks mapepd to keep the consistency between all the diffs.
-Hard
02:13:487 (2) - It's hard to tell that this is a slider, it's buried under 02:12:333 (7,8)'s hitsplashes. Your call, I've seen shinx-sama using this in his Insane diffs, but imo it doesn't fits a Hard one.

Krisom wrote:

Krisom wrote:

-Easy
02:08:179 (2) - Hitcircle being buried by a slider might be hard for an Easy diff. It's up to you if you'll move it or not though.
I'd personalyl like to see those small breaks mapepd to keep the consistency between all the diffs.
-Hard
02:13:487 (2) - It's hard to tell that this is a slider, it's buried under 02:12:333 (7,8)'s hitsplashes. Your call, I've seen shinx-sama using this in his Insane diffs, but imo it doesn't fits a Hard one.

So sad that you decided not to fix these : /
My only worry is that the SB load goes above x5.0 sometimes, but there are no transparent pixels so it should be fine...

Anyways, everything seems in order, so...

Starrodkirby86 wrote:

Something seems a little unright. Gonzvlo corrected the lyrics that CheeseWarlock requested, yes? If that's the case, then why do I still see those same errors within the beatmap? I did a fresh download after deleting my old version as well, so it can't be an error like that. It sounds like maybe you didn't make a Full Submission...

Also, it seems the Storyboard doesn't use 20.png, 21.png, 22.png (...), 27.png, 28.png, and 29.png inside the root folder (Not the lyrics folder). These root folder lyrics files seem a little useless to have, so maybe removing it would make things a little easier on everyone.

[Insane]:
00:26:410 (1) - 00:25:256 (4) - 's slider seems to partially block this particular one. You'd need good reflexes to catch that. It doesn't seem to be truly a hidden slider, but it does seem a little too close for comfort in how the previous'll hide the other...

Gogogo!

Fixed

mrtn wrote:

[insane]
Unfortunately I have to pop . SB is so feaking awesome . But you have a lot of stupid sounding 1/4 triples. The song has quite a few opportunities for them. Fix that stuff (I gave an example on IRC) and let me know .

edit:
possible 1/4 locations:
18:38 <mrtn> : 00:49:833 (2) -
18:38 <mrtn> : 00:50:294 (5) -
18:38 <mrtn> : 00:52:141 (8) -
18:38 <mrtn> : 00:53:756 (2) -
18:38 <mrtn> : 00:54:448 (5) -
18:41 <mrtn> : 02:05:294 (5) -
18:43 <mrtn> : 02:18:448 (6) -
18:43 <mrtn> : 02:22:371 (7) -
18:43 <mrtn> : 02:23:064 (10) -
18:45 <mrtn> : 02:52:833 (6) -
18:05 <mrtn> : 02:54:679 (2) -

edit2: bubbled

Thanks for all mrtn, You are a great man

strager wrote:

Overall I found these maps rather boring. The storyboard is interesting but I think it's missing a lot of potential due to a limited colour scheme and a small number of actual text effects. The song sucks, too, so that may have something to due with my dislike of this set.

General
Nice Arial... =|
Spinner isn't centred properly.

Easy
Felt more like a Normal than an Easy.

Hard
02:54:564 (4,1) - This doesn't play right.

Insane
Almost all of the 1/4's don't work.

I like how there are slow-down parts in an already-slow map.

darck360 wrote:

You know, I think you should get away because nobody asked you mod so here, bye.

darck360 wrote:

You know, I think you should get away because nobody asked you mod so here, bye. ;)

Ephemeral wrote:

on top of that, your attitude is appalling. fix that too while you're at it

Roddie wrote:

Why isn't this ranked yet.

Come on, get this ranked, already! >_<

mrtn wrote:

ranked

Roddie wrote:

I TOLD YOU SO IT WAS GOING TO GET RANKED

congrats by the way.