Surono wrote:

Shin-chan.. You are so lazy >_>
please if theres has wall of modlong words/Reason. you should explain your Applied or Rejected lol

1. 00:12:485 - I recommend removing the lines you don't need on Oni.

1. 00:11:593 (29,35) - Both of these k? Fits the melody much more.
2. 00:40:539 - Add k? And change 00:40:864 (49) - to k? It flows much better this way.
3. 01:29:674 (76,77,78,79,80) - ^
4. 00:43:458 (24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38) - ddkddkddkkdkkdk? Flows nicer and fits the song.
5. 01:32:755 (24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38) - ^
6. 00:46:296 (16) - Delete this note? I know you want to map to the background kddkddkddkddk rhythm, but I think for this part it's nicer to make different rhythms. You can also make 00:46:215 (15) - into K if you do this, which is nice.
7. 01:35:512 (15,16,17,18,19) - ^
8. 00:51:891 (63,64,65,66,67,68) - k dkddk? Similar reason as above, but a little harder.
9. 01:41:188 (65,66,67,68,69,70) - ^
10. 01:11:026 (8,9,10,11) - k ddd ddd k? Or at least someting different, because the background has some sounds.
11. 01:23:837 (39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47) - I think it's neater if you use K K D D K K D D K instead. It gives the whole section more emphasis, especially the last note!
12. 01:47:188 (6) - I think it should be a big note too! And 01:48:323 (15) - would be nice as K, so the final note can be a D with good emphasis.

1. 00:40:864 (210) - Delete for a small break. You will need breaks like this to make spread with Muzukashii.
2. 01:35:350 (96) - ^
3. 00:51:566 (282,283) - Change to dd, with a space after the kkkkd? Since it's probably better to be consistent.
4. 01:40:864 (131,132) - ^
5. 01:11:188 (8,9) - d d d k? If you apply my change in Inner Oni.
6. 01:23:674 (29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38) - d k k d d k k d d k if you apply Inner Oni change.

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  ^ Change to 1.4 in .osu!

1. 00:05:188 - Add d? Still seems too easy, since Oni has 1/4.
2. 00:07:620 (29,30) - d d k? Then delete 00:08:269 (31,32) - for a break. You can use longer patterns if you feel it's still too easy (it might be a good idea)
3. 00:27:891 (55,56,57) - I think it's better to follow the 1/1 rhythm and delete 00:28:864 (58) - .
4. 00:30:647 (64) - Delete? This part is harder than Oni.
5. 00:36:323 (4,5) - Adding doubles seems to be a very good option for this diff. kk k?
6. 00:37:620 (10,11) - ^
7. 00:38:918 (16,17) - ^
   Repeat for every time it happens! 00:51:891, the ending, etc.
   
8. 00:47:026 - Add d? Since Oni has some hard stuff here.
9. 01:36:323 - ^
10. 01:23:026 (176,177,178,179,180,181,182,183,184,185,186,187) - k k d k k d d k k d d k? (Same as other suggestions)
11. 01:45:728 (5) - Delete just to be easier than Oni?
12. 01:47:918 (16) - Delete? ^

1. 00:32:593 (8) - k? So it's not d k d again.
2. 00:49:296 - d or k? Seems empty.
3. 01:38:593 - ^
4. 01:23:837 (15,16,17,18,19) - k d k d k?

1. 01:24:485 (81) - Delete? Since it's kinda close to Futsuu.
2. 01:47:512 (5) - Delete? Seems to make more sense.

OzzyOzrock wrote:

[Muzukashii]
00:29:837 (61,62,63) - Match Oni's pitch?
01:40:701 (264,265,266,267,268,269,270,271,272,273,274) - You are missing the doubles here.

EDIT:
Bubbled!

Verniy_Chan wrote:

Jangan lupa add Rido amat di tag XD

ajeemaniz wrote:

kapan kapan ngemap ctb & std juga shin, biar greged!

1. hitsound seems bit too small. I recommend 90%
2. 00:13:782 - smaller volume is better for such calm parts.

1. 00:07:945 (11) - How about making triplet (kkd) from here? 4/1 isn't needed.
2. 00:16:539 (23) - 00:19:134 (25,1) - Should be moved to 1/2 tick left to be more simple. the rhythm seems too complicated.
3. 00:40:377 - Consider adding a kat here, it fits to the flow well and break isn't needed here.
4. 01:03:728 - missing note?
5. 01:08:918 - ^
6. 01:19:945 (75,76,77) - How about adding Finishers?
7. 01:29:674 (90) - see above.

1. 00:16:539 (39) - etc. refer to Kantan. still seems complicated, could be more simple imo.
2. 00:40:377 (17) - Consider adding a note. same reason as K. (then adjustment color)
3. 00:59:188 (70) - Why not finisher? You used it in Kantan.
4. 01:27:404 (23) - missing note?
5. In 3~4th kiai time, refer to first.

1. 00:23:350 (37) - should be moved to right for consistency.
2. 00:42:972 (38,39,40) - Why not xx--x rhythm? I recommend using it for consistent, or making such rhythm once more for avoiding to be out of place.
3. 00:46:540 (55,56,57,58,59,60,61) - This color is weird to me. follow the pitch of melody?
4. 00:51:647 (81,82,83,84,85,86,87,88,89,90,91,92) - doublets shouldn't be used for consistency with first half kiai time.
5. In 3~4th kiai time, refer to first.

1. 00:35:674 (173) - Consider deleting this note to emphasize the sound.
2. 00:59:188 - from here, any 1/4 patterns? difficulty gap between kiai and non-kiai parts seems bit too huge. Consider adding some notes (or delete some notes from kiai parts)

1. 00:47:512 (27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34) - Could have triplets. etc: d-d-k-ddk-d-kkk
2. 00:50:674 (51) - consisder adding a note, since voice sounds here.
3. 00:59:188 - from here, consider adding some 1/4 patterns. same reason as oni
4. 01:42:809 (80) - How about making kdk from here? it fits to the melody and flow well. And you followed melody at end of 2nd kiai, so it also works for consistency.

Surono wrote:

GOBLOG.wav

Verniy_Chan wrote:

Soon~

1. 00:07:945 - woops, I forgot deleting (11) from timestamp.

tasuke912 wrote:

Muzukashii 3.8* okay

tasuke912 wrote:

[ Kantan]

1. 00:07:945 - woops, I forgot deleting (11) from timestamp.

Muzukashii 3.8* okay

1. Don't forget setting BG's coordinate. Try 0,80
   
   0,0

   
   0,80

   

1. 00:08:593 (13,14,15,16,17,18) - make d-k-d-kdd pattern for consistency? (00:03:404 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - )

tasuke912 wrote:

[ General]

1. Don't forget setting BG's coordinate. Try 0,80
   
   0,0

   
   0,80

   

[Kantan]

1. 00:08:593 (13,14,15,16,17,18) - make d-k-d-kdd pattern for consistency? (00:03:404 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - )

OzzyOzrock wrote:

Re-bubbled!

tasuke912 wrote:

Qualified!

Surono wrote:

AKKHIIIIIRRRRRRRRNYAAAAAAAAAAaaaaaa!

SELAMAT DEK SHIN CHAN!
anda telah masuk di kalangan TAI kok `L_`

Julie wrote:

Woah shinzo map taiko !
Congratz!

Rizqy wrote:

more taiko sdvx

what

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

wow, congratulation

DixonBlackwing wrote:

Wah zozo taikonya kequali juga
congrats ya ^^
bersamaan ama map ane :3

KittyAdventure wrote:

Gratzz :3

game rock wrote:

Congrats!

Charlotte wrote:

gratz

SpectorDG wrote:

Congratz shin ♥

Volta wrote:

selamat!

[Baim] wrote:

muah muah gratzz~

Nwolf wrote:

nice map, spread looks way nicer now too. Gratz!

PatZar wrote:

Surono wrote:

PatZar wrote:

edit:
grats, ranked!