Shinzo- wrote:

Saudari elektrik jalank

ikin5050 wrote:

Sorry just got back from my holiday, i'll mod as soon as possible!

Verniy_Chan wrote:

Shinzo- wrote:

Saudari elektrik jalank

game rock wrote:

Hi Shinzo- !

Request from PM

d
k
D (Big d)
K (Big k)

[ Kantan]

HP: 8

1. 00:07:945 (11,12) - Remove to put a break for what the player to prepare to the next notes.
2. 00:11:512 (18) - Move this note here 00:10:864 - to keep consistency with 00:03:404 (3,4,5,6,7,8) -
3. 00:16:539 (24) - Here sounds weird, so I recommend change to k and move here 00:16:377 -
4. 00:19:134 (26) - Here too, change to k and move to 00:18:972 -
5. 00:21:728 (1) - The same, change to k and move here 00:21:566 -
6. 00:22:864 (2) - Change to d to keep the consistency with 00:17:674 (25) -
7. 00:29:837 (8) - Remove to keep a similar rhythm or consistency with 00:25:458 (3,4,5,6) -
8. 00:32:918 (12) - Change to d because to follow the balance of d 00:24:161 (2,3,4,5,6,7,9,10,11) -
9. 00:35:512 (1) - If you want can you remove that and put a finish D here 00:35:837 (2) - to emphasize the finish what can hear in that part.
10. 00:35:837 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - This is repetitive and those parts equal are very boring to play, so I recommend Ctrl G 00:37:134 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - and change to k 00:39:728 (11) - Also, sounds very good!
11. If you apply the previous suggestion, Ctrl G 00:42:323 (15,16,17,18,19,20) - and change to K 00:44:918 (21) - to keep consistency with 00:35:837 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) -
12. You have here ddd d 00:46:215 (22,23,24,25) - So in the next should have kkk k, but you have kkk d 00:48:809 (26,27,28,29) - Why? You have to make parts equal or invested, for that reason change to k here 00:50:106 (29) -
13. 00:54:323 - Add a d to keep the consistency with 00:35:837 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21) -
14. 00:59:188 (42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56,57,58) - This is so long for Kantan, move this note 01:03:728 (50) - here 01:03:404 - to put a break.
15. If you apply the previous suggestion, can you move this note 01:08:918 (59) - here 01:08:593 - to put a break, or simply move this note 01:08:107 (58) - here 01:08:269 - and this 01:08:918 (59) - here 01:08:593 - to keep consistency with 00:59:188 (42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50) -
16. 01:10:215 (61) - Change to k to keep consistency with 01:12:161 (63,64,65) - or change to d 01:12:809 (64) - to keep consistency in both.
17. You have here ddd d 01:35:512 (102,103,104,105) - So in the next should have kkk k, but why you have kkk d here? 01:38:106 (106,107,108,109) - Change to k 01:39:404 (109) - to make parts equal or invested and to keep cosnsitency with 00:48:809 (26,27,28,29) -
18. 01:40:376 (110) - Change to d and move 01:41:026 - to keep consistency with 00:51:404 (30,31,32,33,34,35,36) -
19. 01:44:268 (118) - Remove and change to K 01:44:593 (119) - to keep consistency with 00:51:404 (30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38) -
20. 01:45:891 (120) - Change to K Because can hear a sound of a finish and to emphasize the previous finish 01:44:593 (118) -
21. 01:47:188 (122,123,124) - Change that to K because can hear a sound of same and to emphasize and have rhythm wit the preious finish 01:44:593 (118) - , 01:45:891 (120) - and with the next finish 01:48:485 (125) -

[ Futsuu]

1. 00:07:945 (18,19,20) - Remove to keep consistency with 00:03:404 (5,6,7,8,9) -
2. 00:08:431 (20) - Remove to keep the rhythm and consistency with 00:03:404 (5,6,7,8,9) -
3. 00:16:539 (41) - Move this note here 00:16:377 - sounds good and in this position is better with the others notes 00:13:782 (37,38,39,40,42,43,44) -
4. 00:19:134 (45) - Move this note here 00:18:972 - the same previous reason^
5. 00:21:728 (1) - Move this note here 00:21:566 - the same previous reason^
6. 00:35:837 (2) - Put a finish K because this is the start of kiai, also this part must be exciting. And to emphasize the finish remove this note 00:35:512 (1) -
7. 00:35:512 (1) - Remove this note to make the break more longer because this pattern is long 00:35:837 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - so you make to put a long break to break and for the player are attentive for the next patterns 00:41:026 (19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33) -
8. 00:41:674 (21) - Change to d to keep consistency with 00:36:485 (4) - or change to k here 00:36:485 (4) - to keep consistency with both.
9. 00:41:026 (19) - Change to k to keep consistency with 00:35:837 (2) - and if you want can you put a finish K because in this part can hear a sound of same.
10. 00:42:161 (23) - Change to d, Ctrl G here 00:43:296 (27,28) - and add a k here 00:44:755 - to keep consistency and drums with 00:35:837 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) -
11. 00:47:188 (39,40,41) - You have a kdd here, later you have a kkd here 00:51:080 (48,49,50) - the same on 00:36:809 (5,6,7) - , 00:39:404 (15,16,17) - But you forgot apply this 00:38:107 (10,11,12) - here 00:49:782 (46,47) - to keep consistency with all those. So for that reason I recommend change to d 00:49:782 (46) - and add a k 00:49:945 -
12. 00:52:053 (52) - Change to k or d depending on what you did in the eighth suggestion to keep rhythm and consistency with those.
13. 00:52:377 (53,54) - Ctrl G, change to d here 00:53:026 (56) - and here 00:53:837 (59) - , 00:54:323 (61) - , 00:54:972 (63) - to keep a rhythm similar with 00:35:837 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33) -
14. 00:55:296 (64,65,66) - If you want can you put finish because this parts can hear a high drums.
15. 01:13:620 (104,105) - Remove to put a break and to have a balance with 01:09:566 (96,97,98,99) -
16. 01:17:349 (1) - Change to k to keep consistency with 01:00:809 (74,75,76,77) - , 01:05:999 (87,88,89,90) -
17. 01:21:242 (9) - , 01:22:539 (11) - these parts can hear a sound of a finish, the more recommended is finish D.
18. 01:27:728 (24) - Put a finish K because, how I said previously, this parts is the start of kiai, so this part is exciting. Also to keep consistency with 00:35:837 (2) -
19. 01:30:971 (36) - , 01:31:458 (38) - , 01:32:593 (42) - Change those to d to keep consistency with 00:35:837 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33) -
20. 01:32:755 (43) - Change to k and add a k here 01:34:053 - the same previous reason.
21. 01:34:215 (48,49,50) - If you want can you put finish because this parts can hear a high drums.
22. 01:39:404 (63) - Change to d to keep the rhythm and the consistency with 00:46:215 (36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50) -
23. 01:41:350 (68) - Change to k or d depending on what you did in the eighth suggestion
24. 01:42:971 (74) - Change to k and add a k here 01:44:431 - to keep rhythm and consistency with 00:35:837 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33) - and a similar rhythm with 01:27:728 (24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48) -
25. 01:44:593 (80,81,82,83,84,85,86,87,88) - This part is very exciting, put finish please. Also this part have a very high sound and can hear a sound of a finish.

[ Muzukashii]

HP: 6

1. 00:21:242 (32) - Sounds good if you move this note to 00:21:404 -
2. 00:27:566 (52) - , 00:27:566 (52) - Change to k to have more rhythm.
3. 00:35:837 (2) - Put a finish K because this is the start of kiai, also this part must be exciting.
4. 00:41:026 (25) - The same^
5. 00:43:296 (35,36) - Change to d to keep cosnsitency with 00:38:107 (12,13,14) -
6. 00:44:917 (42,43,44,45) - In this part have a high sound, also can hear a finish sound, so put a finish in these parts.
7. 00:49:134 (60,61,62,63,64,65,66) - This part have much rhythm but in this Not that much 00:50:269 (67,68,69,70) - so I recommend to manifest that remove 00:50:269 (67) - and change to k 00:50:431 (68) - to follow the rhythm "Clap"
8. 00:51:891 (76) - , 00:52:701 (80) - Change to k in those parts and change to d here 00:52:701 (80) - to have a similar rhythm or consistency with 00:35:837 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22) -
9. 01:24:809 (186) - This have the same sound with 01:24:161 (182,183) - So to have a balance and sense I recommend change to k 01:24:809 (186) -
10. 01:27:728 (194) - Put a finish K because this is the start of kiai, also this part must be exciting.
11. 01:32:755 (217) - Change to k to have a similar rhythm or consistency with 00:39:404 (18,19,20,21,22) - , 00:40:701 (23,24,25,26,27,28) -
12. 01:38:431 (241,242,243,244,245,246,247) - This part have much rhythm but in this Not that much 01:39:566 (248,249,250,251) - So for that reason remove 01:39:566 (248) - and change to k 01:39:728 (249) - to follow the rhythm "Clap"
13. 01:44:593 (5,1,2,3) - , 01:45:891 (6,7,8,9,10) - , 01:47:188 (11) - Those parts hace a high sound, perfect to put a finish, so put a finish because that part is a part exciting.

[ Oni]

HP: 5
OD: 5

1. 00:03:242 (16) - This note is not necessary because interferes with the finish 00:03:404 (17) - and don't really listening the rhythm.
2. 00:11:999 (76,77,78,79,80,81) - This drums is the same of 00:11:188 (70,71,72,73,74,75) - so change to d that these parts 00:11:999 (76,77,78,79,80,81) -
3. 00:35:837 (174,175,176,177,178,179,180,181,182,183,184,185,186,187,188,189,190,191,192,193) - You do make this rhythm but you are cuting that rhythm here 00:38:269 (194) - so to follow the rhythm change to k 00:38:269 (194) -
4. 00:38:026 (192,193) - Ctrl G to keep consistency with 00:43:052 (227,228,229,230,231) -
5. 01:23:674 (29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38) - If you want change this to --> to have more rhythm.
6. 01:44:593 (6,1,2,1) - 01:45:890 (4,1,2,3,4) - Those parts hace a high sound, perfect to put a finish, so put a finish because that part is a part exciting.

[ Inner Oni]

1. 00:28:377 (116, 118) - Ctrl G to have sense the rhythm and to have a inverted pattern with 00:27:566 (111,112,113) -
2. 00:39:809 - Add a d to follow the rhythm with 00:39:891 (40,41,42,43,44) -
3. 00:43:296 (23) - Change to d, change to k 00:43:458 (24) - and remove this 00:43:539 (25) - to keep consistency with 00:37:134 (11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24) -
4. 00:47:837 (30,31) - Ctrl G, sounds good!
5. 00:50:269 (49,50) - ^
6. 00:53:431 - Add a k to keep a similar rhythm and consistency with 00:37:134 (11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24) -
7. 01:32:593 (23) - Change to d, change to k 01:32:755 (24) - and remove this 01:32:836 (25) - to keep consistency with 00:37:134 (11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24) -
8. 01:37:134 (30) - Change to k to follow the rhythm "Clap"
9. 01:39:566 (51,52) - Ctrl G to keep rhythm and cnsistency with 00:49:782 (46,47,48,49,50,51,52,53,54) -

Great Beatmap! I hope my mod has been helpful you, Good luck!

1. 00:59:188 - remove kiai di sini ? personally ga ngepas banget, kepanjangan pula

1. 00:00:972 - ganti ke dkk ? biar konsisten sama 00:01:296 - vocalnya sama loh
2. 00:11:188 - gimana kalo mulai dari sini sampe 00:12:323 - itu 1/2 aja ? suara drumnya lebih menonjol ke 1/2 soalnya
3. kalo ngelakuin yg atas, gimana kalo sv changenya diubah kaya gini ? lebih rapih
4. 00:24:485 - kayaknya di sini lebih sedikit nurun nadanya, ganti ke d ? biar konsisten sama 00:29:674 - juga
5. 00:25:458 - add d here ? musiknya berhenti di sini
6. 00:55:782 (92,93) - change to K ? biar struktur patternnya bagus sama semua K K K K K K
7. 01:25:134 - mending ini lebih baik diganti slider deh sampe 01:26:269 - dibanding kosong

1. 00:03:242 - delete ? buat nekenin note sebelum ini
2. 00:11:593 - delete aja ? biar 1/2 doang di sini ngikutin drumnya
3. 00:12:242 - ^
4. 00:12:485 to 00:13:134 - add some triplets and 1/2
5. timingnya lebih rapih gini imo http://puu.sh/o46Ue/2df3de8c4c.png
6. 00:24:485 - sama kaya inner
7. 00:25:458 - add d here ? musiknya berhenti di sini
8. 00:27:891 - delete ? buat sedikit membedakan sama inner, sama" long note sampe 00:28:701
9. 00:35:674 - mending delete aja ? as i mentioned
10. 00:39:566 - delete here ? kepanjangan buat oni
11. 01:28:864 - ^
12. 01:31:458 - ^
13. 01:34:053 - sama kaya 00:03:242

1. 00:25:458 - sama kaya inner
2. 00:51:404 - change to D ? for better flows imo
3. 01:40:701 - ^
4. 01:48:161 (18,19) - mending ganti ke k aja ?

Surono wrote:

Shin-chan.. You are so lazy >_>
please if theres has wall of modlong words/Reason. you should explain your Applied or Rejected lol

1. 00:12:485 - I recommend removing the lines you don't need on Oni.

1. 00:11:593 (29,35) - Both of these k? Fits the melody much more.
2. 00:40:539 - Add k? And change 00:40:864 (49) - to k? It flows much better this way.
3. 01:29:674 (76,77,78,79,80) - ^
4. 00:43:458 (24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38) - ddkddkddkkdkkdk? Flows nicer and fits the song.
5. 01:32:755 (24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38) - ^
6. 00:46:296 (16) - Delete this note? I know you want to map to the background kddkddkddkddk rhythm, but I think for this part it's nicer to make different rhythms. You can also make 00:46:215 (15) - into K if you do this, which is nice.
7. 01:35:512 (15,16,17,18,19) - ^
8. 00:51:891 (63,64,65,66,67,68) - k dkddk? Similar reason as above, but a little harder.
9. 01:41:188 (65,66,67,68,69,70) - ^
10. 01:11:026 (8,9,10,11) - k ddd ddd k? Or at least someting different, because the background has some sounds.
11. 01:23:837 (39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47) - I think it's neater if you use K K D D K K D D K instead. It gives the whole section more emphasis, especially the last note!
12. 01:47:188 (6) - I think it should be a big note too! And 01:48:323 (15) - would be nice as K, so the final note can be a D with good emphasis.

1. 00:40:864 (210) - Delete for a small break. You will need breaks like this to make spread with Muzukashii.
2. 01:35:350 (96) - ^
3. 00:51:566 (282,283) - Change to dd, with a space after the kkkkd? Since it's probably better to be consistent.
4. 01:40:864 (131,132) - ^
5. 01:11:188 (8,9) - d d d k? If you apply my change in Inner Oni.
6. 01:23:674 (29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38) - d k k d d k k d d k if you apply Inner Oni change.

• 
  ^ Change to 1.4 in .osu!

1. 00:05:188 - Add d? Still seems too easy, since Oni has 1/4.
2. 00:07:620 (29,30) - d d k? Then delete 00:08:269 (31,32) - for a break. You can use longer patterns if you feel it's still too easy (it might be a good idea)
3. 00:27:891 (55,56,57) - I think it's better to follow the 1/1 rhythm and delete 00:28:864 (58) - .
4. 00:30:647 (64) - Delete? This part is harder than Oni.
5. 00:36:323 (4,5) - Adding doubles seems to be a very good option for this diff. kk k?
6. 00:37:620 (10,11) - ^
7. 00:38:918 (16,17) - ^
   Repeat for every time it happens! 00:51:891, the ending, etc.
   
8. 00:47:026 - Add d? Since Oni has some hard stuff here.
9. 01:36:323 - ^
10. 01:23:026 (176,177,178,179,180,181,182,183,184,185,186,187) - k k d k k d d k k d d k? (Same as other suggestions)
11. 01:45:728 (5) - Delete just to be easier than Oni?
12. 01:47:918 (16) - Delete? ^

1. 00:32:593 (8) - k? So it's not d k d again.
2. 00:49:296 - d or k? Seems empty.
3. 01:38:593 - ^
4. 01:23:837 (15,16,17,18,19) - k d k d k?

1. 01:24:485 (81) - Delete? Since it's kinda close to Futsuu.
2. 01:47:512 (5) - Delete? Seems to make more sense.

OzzyOzrock wrote:

[Muzukashii]
00:29:837 (61,62,63) - Match Oni's pitch?
01:40:701 (264,265,266,267,268,269,270,271,272,273,274) - You are missing the doubles here.

EDIT:
Bubbled!

Verniy_Chan wrote:

Jangan lupa add Rido amat di tag XD

ajeemaniz wrote:

kapan kapan ngemap ctb & std juga shin, biar greged!

1. hitsound seems bit too small. I recommend 90%
2. 00:13:782 - smaller volume is better for such calm parts.

1. 00:07:945 (11) - How about making triplet (kkd) from here? 4/1 isn't needed.
2. 00:16:539 (23) - 00:19:134 (25,1) - Should be moved to 1/2 tick left to be more simple. the rhythm seems too complicated.
3. 00:40:377 - Consider adding a kat here, it fits to the flow well and break isn't needed here.
4. 01:03:728 - missing note?
5. 01:08:918 - ^
6. 01:19:945 (75,76,77) - How about adding Finishers?
7. 01:29:674 (90) - see above.

1. 00:16:539 (39) - etc. refer to Kantan. still seems complicated, could be more simple imo.
2. 00:40:377 (17) - Consider adding a note. same reason as K. (then adjustment color)
3. 00:59:188 (70) - Why not finisher? You used it in Kantan.
4. 01:27:404 (23) - missing note?
5. In 3~4th kiai time, refer to first.

1. 00:23:350 (37) - should be moved to right for consistency.
2. 00:42:972 (38,39,40) - Why not xx--x rhythm? I recommend using it for consistent, or making such rhythm once more for avoiding to be out of place.
3. 00:46:540 (55,56,57,58,59,60,61) - This color is weird to me. follow the pitch of melody?
4. 00:51:647 (81,82,83,84,85,86,87,88,89,90,91,92) - doublets shouldn't be used for consistency with first half kiai time.
5. In 3~4th kiai time, refer to first.

1. 00:35:674 (173) - Consider deleting this note to emphasize the sound.
2. 00:59:188 - from here, any 1/4 patterns? difficulty gap between kiai and non-kiai parts seems bit too huge. Consider adding some notes (or delete some notes from kiai parts)

1. 00:47:512 (27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34) - Could have triplets. etc: d-d-k-ddk-d-kkk
2. 00:50:674 (51) - consisder adding a note, since voice sounds here.
3. 00:59:188 - from here, consider adding some 1/4 patterns. same reason as oni
4. 01:42:809 (80) - How about making kdk from here? it fits to the melody and flow well. And you followed melody at end of 2nd kiai, so it also works for consistency.

Surono wrote:

GOBLOG.wav

Verniy_Chan wrote:

Soon~

1. 00:07:945 - woops, I forgot deleting (11) from timestamp.

tasuke912 wrote:

Muzukashii 3.8* okay

tasuke912 wrote:

[ Kantan]

1. 00:07:945 - woops, I forgot deleting (11) from timestamp.

Muzukashii 3.8* okay

1. Don't forget setting BG's coordinate. Try 0,80
   
   0,0

   
   0,80

   

1. 00:08:593 (13,14,15,16,17,18) - make d-k-d-kdd pattern for consistency? (00:03:404 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - )

tasuke912 wrote:

[ General]

1. Don't forget setting BG's coordinate. Try 0,80
   
   0,0

   
   0,80

   

[Kantan]

1. 00:08:593 (13,14,15,16,17,18) - make d-k-d-kdd pattern for consistency? (00:03:404 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - )

OzzyOzrock wrote:

Re-bubbled!

tasuke912 wrote:

Qualified!

Surono wrote:

AKKHIIIIIRRRRRRRRNYAAAAAAAAAAaaaaaa!

SELAMAT DEK SHIN CHAN!
anda telah masuk di kalangan TAI kok `L_`

Julie wrote:

Woah shinzo map taiko !
Congratz!

Rizqy wrote:

more taiko sdvx

what

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

wow, congratulation

DixonBlackwing wrote:

Wah zozo taikonya kequali juga
congrats ya ^^
bersamaan ama map ane :3

KittyAdventure wrote:

Gratzz :3

game rock wrote:

Congrats!

Charlotte wrote:

gratz

SpectorDG wrote:

Congratz shin ♥

Volta wrote:

selamat!

[Baim] wrote:

muah muah gratzz~

Nwolf wrote:

nice map, spread looks way nicer now too. Gratz!

PatZar wrote:

Surono wrote:

PatZar wrote:

edit:
grats, ranked!