Anxient wrote:

double reply. i dont care.

Xexxar's Epilogue
00:09:068 (2,3) - there are no beats here. remove them. you used the correct rhythm in 00:09:950 (1,2,3) - so i expect you to do the same for that one. I talked to you about this, there are beats here, I feel that, even though they're weak beats, the low spacing fits their low volume and the clickableness of them matches the feel well.
00:21:068 (5,6,7,8) - cursor speed change imo is way too drastic. this is what i did http://puu.sh/ncrqR/15f6ac45e7.jpg i dont really think that this change is that drastic. By making the triplet not stacked it makes it so that they speed actually changes more. By keeping it stacked its a stopped point for the cursor, otherwise you have to adjust your aim an additional time to fit the speed of the off stack triplet.
00:23:185 (2,3) - dont you think that the distance here is too wide? I brought this up earlier, the slider leniancy here makes it so that this isn't that difficult to play, especially because the low note density.
00:30:420 (1) - overmap nein note exists. quiet bass clef of piano
00:36:950 (5,6) - ctrl g'ing this would make more sense to me because 00:36:950 (5) - this doesnt need alot of spacing to work with. emphasis not powerful enough. 00:37:126 (6) - this on the other hand has emphasis, so ctrl g these two. if youre worried about the stack in 00:38:009 (1) - dont be. youve been doing non-stacks in the diff for quite a while now. I wanted to make 5 have a sharp angle jump onto 6 to make the acceleration moving to 6 greater. Plus this does disrupt the overlap. I'll consider it but I don't really think it's problematic as is.

00:45:068 (4,5) - ctrl g this so that 4 is in the bottom and 5 is in the top. 4 has less emphasis that 5 coz unlike 5, it only has vocal emphasis rather than 5, which has instrumental emphasis and vocal emphasis. fix any spacing and flow issues that may occur from this change. vocal emphasis is there and I want to focus it with two jumps.
00:46:832 (5) - overmap. make it a regular hitcircle. equalize the DS between 00:46:126 (3,4,5) - while youre at it. applied, I kinda interpretated that one to begin with.


00:52:568 - silence sliderend applied

01:04:479 (3,4) - lower distance spacing. no emphasis on 4, just use regular DS. http://puu.sh/ncsPY/3cb6d591df.jpg theres no need to emphasize the 5 more than you need to. I actually really appreciate this one, thanks
01:07:656 - map this beat lol. just stack it to 01:08:185 (2) - and it should be a ok. focus is vocals, pauses are intentional for emphasis.
01:09:068 - this as well. ^
01:09:244 (1) - get rid of the finish hitsound you dont need it. theres nothing in the song that suggests a finish hitsound. 01:09:597 - place it here instead. goooood catch, much better.

im prepared to have this 75% declined.

Glyphic wrote:

on xexxar's epilogue i noticed that 00:46:656 (4) - was not perfectly snapped under the beginning of 00:45:597 (1) -
really minor but if it matters theres that

Xexxar wrote:

You can go ahead and adjust that for me. Thx Anxient.

1. Prologue Insane is considered a custom name since it's no regular difficulty name. And since only the highest difficulty of a set may have one, this is unrankable. Just name it Insane.
2. Video on Xexxar's Diff missing.

1. 00:00:509 (1,1) - Leniency is too low, at least 2 beats are necessary. Extend the spinner to 00:03:244 -
2. 00:08:891 (1,2,1) - Would be advisable to space these out instead of stacking them. It's just confusing for beginners compared to the previous ones at 00:03:244 (1,2,3,1) -
3. 00:29:715 (4,1) - Same here, this is hard to catch for beginners due to polarity switch.
4. 00:44:185 - Man, you're really creative with your rhythm here. You could like 00:44:185 (1,2,3) - switch the rhythm here via ctrl+g.
5. 00:49:832 (3,1) - NC switch.
6. 00:54:773 (5) - 00:51:950 (3) - 00:57:597 (4) - Having cymbals on the tails is not what I'd recommend here... try to rework this.
7. 01:13:832 (1) - Delete NC to make it uniform for this segment of the music.
8. Try to use less stacks in the easiest diff of a set even if it's a normal difficulty.

1. 00:12:420 (2) - Slider+circle here
2. 00:15:950 (2) - NC?
3. 00:53:891 (3) - Would shift this 1/2 to the left and add a circle at the current end as it follows the prominent beats better imo.
4. 00:48:068 (1,2) - 00:49:126 (1,2) - Switch NCs and delete 00:50:538 (1) - this one
5. 00:55:832 (6,1) - Switch NC
6. 00:58:303 (4,1) - ^

1. 00:11:362 (1,2) - NC switch and delete 00:12:597 (1) - this one.
2. 01:29:009 (2) - I'd prefer 2 circles here for the cymbal at the end.
3. Neat!

1. 00:04:656 (3,1) - 00:06:068 (6,1) - 00:30:068 (7,1) - 00:35:362 (1,2) - NC switch.
2. 00:26:891 (3,4) - As 00:26:538 (1,2) - follow strings I feel these should be kicksliders too.
3. 00:29:009 (2,3) - Missing the motion for this one, 3 needs better emphasis.

1. 00:09:420 (4) - Extend by 1/2 would fit better to the main vocal.
2. 00:26:891 (4,5) - As this combo seems to represent the violin strings, these should be 1/4 sliders as well.
3. 00:30:420 (1,2) - Don't make such huge jumps in a calm section of a song.
4. 00:35:538 (5,1) - Feels overly spaced as well when you compare it to 00:36:950 (5,6) - which has a stronger emphasis.
5. 00:33:420 (2,3) - This spacing's pretty confusing considering 00:33:244 (1,2) - is of equal distance
6. 00:55:303 (1) - Circle+slider here please, there's certainly a cymbal on that offbeat and you do not want a slidertail go over it.
7. Okay. Calmer sections could be represented better by lowering the spacing on your jumps at them.

Pho wrote:

Bold: Fix quickly/unrankable issues
Purple: Questionable
Red: Highly recommend

[General]

1. Video on Xexxar's Diff missing. applied

[Xexxar]

1. 00:09:420 (4) - Extend by 1/2 would fit better to the main vocal. I REALLY dont like this but if you desire it I will keep it. Applied but I dont like it
2. 00:26:891 (4,5) - As this combo seems to represent the violin strings, these should be 1/4 sliders as well. I dont agree here, the violin has much more intensity at the start with the triplet and dies down quickly. thats why it goes from 1/4th to 1/4th slider to 1/2 notes
3. 00:30:420 (1,2) - Don't make such huge jumps in a calm section of a song. cleaned up
4. 00:35:538 (5,1) - Feels overly spaced as well when you compare it to 00:36:950 (5,6) - which has a stronger emphasis. changed
5. 00:33:420 (2,3) - This spacing's pretty confusing considering 00:33:244 (1,2) - is of equal distance applied
6. 00:55:303 (1) - Circle+slider here please, there's certainly a cymbal on that offbeat and you do not want a slidertail go over it. applied
7. Okay. Calmer sections could be represented better by lowering the spacing on your jumps at them. I think with some altering that I have done thanks to your suggestions, most overdone jumps in the slower parts have been fixed. If you see anything else let me know.

Not bad, I liked the lower difficulties in this set. Call me back when you think it's ready (metadata conf. would be nice too, i'm not good at these)

Pho wrote:

Bold: Fix quickly/unrankable issues
Purple: Questionable
Red: Highly recommend

[General]

1. Prologue Insane is considered a custom name since it's no regular difficulty name. And since only the highest difficulty of a set may have one, this is unrankable. Just name it Insane. - oh.
2. Video on Xexxar's Diff missing. - OH.

[Normal]

1. 00:00:509 (1,1) - Leniency is too low, at least 2 beats are necessary. Extend the spinner to 00:03:244 - - gotcha.
2. 00:08:891 (1,2,1) - Would be advisable to space these out instead of stacking them. It's just confusing for beginners compared to the previous ones at 00:03:244 (1,2,3,1) - - gotcha
3. 00:29:715 (4,1) - Same here, this is hard to catch for beginners due to polarity switch. - i decided to something similar to 00:32:009 (2,1) - since you didnt write anything about it.
4. 00:44:185 - Man, you're really creative with your rhythm here. You could like 00:44:185 (1,2,3) - switch the rhythm here via ctrl+g. - i was told to put consistency or whatever. i guess ill switch the rhythm up a bit.
5. 00:49:832 (3,1) - NC switch. - gotcha fam
6. 00:54:773 (5) - 00:51:950 (3) - 00:57:597 (4) - Having cymbals on the tails is not what I'd recommend here... try to rework this. - remapped
7. 01:13:832 (1) - Delete NC to make it uniform for this segment of the music. - gotcha
8. Try to use less stacks in the easiest diff of a set even if it's a normal difficulty. - i didnt use stacks for the remapping

[Advanced]

1. 00:12:420 (2) - Slider+circle here - ok
2. 00:15:950 (2) - NC? - ok
3. 00:53:891 (3) - Would shift this 1/2 to the left and add a circle at the current end as it follows the prominent beats better imo. - nng i think its fine as it is atm
4. 00:48:068 (1,2) - 00:49:126 (1,2) - Switch NCs and delete 00:50:538 (1) - this one
5. 00:55:832 (6,1) - Switch NC - gotcha
6. 00:58:303 (4,1) - ^ - applied

[Hard]

1. 00:11:362 (1,2) - NC switch and delete 00:12:597 (1) - this one. - switched the NC and continued the combo for (1)
2. 01:29:009 (2) - I'd prefer 2 circles here for the cymbal at the end. - gotcha.
3. Neat! - tanks

[Insane]

1. 00:04:656 (3,1) - 00:06:068 (6,1) - 00:30:068 (7,1) - 00:35:362 (1,2) - NC switch. - applied
2. 00:26:891 (3,4) - As 00:26:538 (1,2) - follow strings I feel these should be kicksliders too. - not applied. i dont think itll suit the song lol ;a;
3. 00:29:009 (2,3) - Missing the motion for this one, 3 needs better emphasis. - i tried.

Not bad, I liked the lower difficulties in this set. Call me back when you think it's ready (metadata conf. would be nice too, i'm not good at these)

metadata confirmation

source: http://www.monogatari-series.com/owarimonogatari/music/


source: http://www.takigawaalisa.com/disco/archive/?SECL-1812

N0thingSpecial wrote:

OMG HAVE MY KUDOSU WHEN I GET ONE

<3 MONOGATARI

==metadata==

==god tier naziing==

PERFECT

22:59 -M4x: you want testplay right?
23:00 Anxient: yep
23:00 -M4x: aight
23:00 -M4x: which diff?
23:00 Anxient: https://osu.ppy.sh/b/883126 or https://osu.ppy.sh/s/415910
23:00 Anxient: pick your poison
23:00 *-M4x is playing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/901096 KISIDA KYODAN & THE AKEBOSI ROCKETS - GATE II ~Sekai wo Koete~ [Beyond the Extra]]
23:01 -M4x: LOOL
23:01 -M4x: better put NF
23:01 Anxient: :LL
23:03 -M4x: holy mother
23:03 Anxient: killer ending ;d
23:03 -M4x: yea
23:03 -M4x: wuhuu
23:03 -M4x: was fun tho
23:03 -M4x: nice flow and great pattering
23:03 Anxient: im not gonna push this map forward yet tho :l
23:05 -M4x: its like the nightmare of every pp player xD
23:05 Anxient: xD
23:05 Anxient: but i dont map for pp? .-.
23:05 -M4x: great work tho
23:05 Anxient: yeah i wont push this map YET tho :l
23:05 Anxient: not until i get sayonara no yukue ranked
23:06 -M4x: uuuh
23:08 -M4x: rip
23:08 Anxient: LOOOL
23:08 -M4x: well i said i like the map before
23:08 -M4x: i definatly LOVE this one
23:08 Anxient: oh
23:09 Anxient: so higher score than gate 2?
23:09 -M4x: even tho i suck
23:09 Anxient: ;D
23:09 -M4x: xD
23:09 -M4x: personally i would say yes
23:09 Anxient: well youre not the first to say that lol
23:09 -M4x: i really like that cs you chose
23:09 Anxient: i find gate 2 more fun to play but aLOT of people like sayonara no yukue better lol
23:09 Anxient: cs 4.4
23:09 Anxient: ar 8.8
23:10 Anxient: od 7.7
23:10 -M4x: yea im one of those
23:10 Anxient: hp 6.6
23:10 Anxient: NICE.
23:10 -M4x: i see what you did there
23:10 -M4x: xD
23:10 Anxient: well once xxr sends me his fix, ill try pushing it agian
23:10 -M4x: if just the sr was like 4.4
23:10 Anxient: xD
23:10 Anxient: yeah it would be perfect
23:11 -M4x: i have to take a look at that ending tho
23:11 Anxient: oh the jumps on the end?
23:11 -M4x: yea
23:12 -M4x: ok
23:12 -M4x: 01:27:068 (3,4,5) - i read these as a triple
23:12 -M4x: and after that i couldnt find back into the map
23:13 Anxient: xD
23:13 Anxient: but you know why i put antijump right
23:13 -M4x: yes i do
23:13 Anxient: sweet
23:13 -M4x: but
23:14 -M4x: thttp://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4670682
23:14 -M4x: technicaly it would fit in some way
23:14 -M4x: not as good as it does now
23:14 Anxient: that would be overmapping tho :l
23:14 -M4x: but i see why i missread it
23:15 -M4x: thats right
23:15 -M4x: and i dont want you to change it
23:15 -M4x: hell no
23:16 -M4x: well whatever ^^ nice map with great flow!!
23:16 -M4x: #highquality
23:18 Anxient: \;d/
23:19 -M4x: what the heck is that \;d/ xD
23:19 -M4x: like the most derped smiley ive ever seen lol
23:19 Anxient: \:D/
23:20 Anxient: \;D/
23:20 Anxient: \;p/
23:20 -M4x: _(:3 」∠)_
23:20 -M4x: thats the only one i know ^^
23:21 -M4x: out of these pro emoijs
23:22 -M4x: yo do you think piano hitsounds would fit in this map?
23:22 *-M4x is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/858578 Feint - The Journey ft. Veela]
23:22 Anxient: keysounds?
23:22 Anxient: absolute not lol
23:23 -M4x: 05:12:771 (1) -
23:23 -M4x: from here on
23:25 Anxient: ok gimme a moment
23:25 Anxient: im super obsessed with making this perfect rn xd
23:26 -M4x: you mean the part i failed?
23:27 Anxient: 01:27:420 (5,7,2) - making this a perfect http://puu.sh/nwWw6/5c3686e60b.jpg triangle
23:27 Anxient: 01:28:126 (1,2,1,2) - realligning them http://puu.sh/nwWxo/b654f38a0a.jpg
23:29 -M4x: o
23:30 Anxient: ok im done
23:30 -M4x: no modder saw that before?
23:30 Anxient: i wouldnt be surprised
23:30 Anxient: coz im like
23:31 Anxient: super sensitive when it comes to these sorta things
23:31 -M4x: ok i think i have another one then
23:31 Anxient: btw
23:31 -M4x: 00:26:538 (1,2,3) -
23:31 Anxient: drain time must be 5 mins+ if you want single diff
23:31 -M4x: yea feelsbadman
23:33 -M4x: 00:31:479 (1,2,3) - this one too i think
23:33 Anxient: fixed http://puu.sh/nwWPL/86a687801b.jpg
23:35 -M4x: well but thats naziing at its finest
23:36 Anxient: LOL
23:36 -M4x: 00:49:479 (7,8,1) -
23:36 Anxient: perfected http://puu.sh/nwWX4/6fb73dd118.jpg
23:36 Anxient: oh i can confirm that that one is fine
23:36 -M4x: nahhh
23:36 Anxient: uh
23:36 -M4x: do the 240 thing
23:37 Anxient: nah
23:37 -M4x: 00:56:185 (3,4,1) - what is that :OOOOO
23:37 Anxient: naw seems fine to me
23:37 -M4x: its not a triangle xD
23:37 Anxient: LOL
23:37 -M4x: wait
23:38 -M4x: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4670829
23:38 -M4x: confirmed?
23:38 -M4x: i dont think so xD
23:39 -M4x: this one too 01:01:479 (2,3,4) -
23:41 -M4x: aaaaaand this one 01:15:244 (1,3,7) - ^^
23:41 Anxient: http://puu.sh/nwXf2/87685e1ce3.jpg
23:41 Anxient: oh my god xD
23:42 Anxient: 00:54:773 (5,6,1) - im sacrificing this
23:42 Anxient: im not doing those two
23:42 Anxient: the 1st one i personally checked them
23:42 Anxient: and the 2nd is too far apart to be relevant
23:44 Anxient: this is some god tier naziing tho :l
23:44 Anxient: anything else?
23:44 -M4x: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4670862
23:44 -M4x: xD
23:45 Anxient: naw i think theyre fine
23:45 Anxient: i personally checked them
23:45 -M4x: OKOKK
23:45 Anxient: lOL
23:45 Anxient: okay im updating
23:45 Anxient: is this even worth kds?
23:45 -M4x: but thats all i found
23:45 Anxient: xD
23:45 -M4x: NO
23:46 Anxient: LMAOOOO
23:46 -M4x: it isnt
23:46 Anxient: well have you tried playing xxr's epilogue yet?
23:46 -M4x: not yet
23:46 -M4x: GD's
23:46 Anxient: xd
23:48 -M4x: oh gawd
23:48 Anxient: o-o
23:48 -M4x: lot of triangles
23:48 Anxient: LOL XD
23:48 -M4x: lets adolf them
23:49 Anxient: anyway xxr will be sending me with a fixed version of his diff very soon
23:49 -M4x: ok
23:49 -M4x: thats nice
23:49 Anxient: yeah
23:49 Anxient: good night o/
23:49 -M4x: yea cya

1. Still missing video...
2. 00:33:950 (4,5) - Well you fixed the previous spacing somehow so it's easier to read, but now this is a jump that doesn't complement the music since 5 is no emphasized vocal beat. Make the spacing equal:
3. 00:35:185 (3) - Forgot to mention last time, this beat shouldn't really be clicked, it's just the vocalist holding breath for the next note. So just delete this object or make 00:34:832 (2) - a 1/1 slider for the vocal.
   
   SPOILER

   

Pho wrote:

Some final mentions:

-0.2OD and -0.1HP on the Insane for cleaner setting spread. These decimals don't do anything noticeable in gameplay. - can i keep them pls

[Xexxar]

1. Still missing video... - added. i swear to god fffffffffffff

Pho wrote:

k

Kroytz wrote:

Placeholding wallmod concerning a particular diff.

Haruto wrote:

Tuhkan bener Karen mau rank mapnya kaka owo
Grats Anx-san owo

Kroytz wrote:

~

mod

Gratz on Beatmap #2! - thank [color=transparent Now stop ranking maps before me :Vcolor] - shut up and rank ascension to heaven

o/

1. 00:26:891 (2,3,4,5) - please tone down 1/4s here, it feels overdone and does not work with the difficulty context. Besides, the Insane difficulty has a easier pattern at this moment of the song, which makes this pattern feel overdone here.

Bakari wrote:

Greetings, just one thing we have to consider before this goes forward.

[Hard]

1. 00:26:891 (2,3,4,5) - please tone down 1/4s here, it feels overdone and does not work with the difficulty context. Besides, the Insane difficulty has a easier pattern at this moment of the song, which makes this pattern feel overdone here. - turned to a 1/2 slider and due to paranoia, i changed the double in the kiai to DS 0.8x
   

Feel free to get back to the qualifying BNs afer changes. In case you won't be able to conact them, ask me to bubble or re-qualify.