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-Lemons wrote:

Look out you disgusting approval length mapset mappers time to have your mod cherries popped

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1. Fix your aimod thnx also crowdsound has to stay it's the shit
2. Make your spinners or ending notes or whatever you use in each difficulty end at the same point please, some end on that downbeat others end on the blue tick before just make it all the same ya know, it may be inconsistent and that's gross, but the gds do what they want lol
3. Nice tags, just use all your gders or something since I have no idea who ito is but if it's a vocaloid put vocaloid or something, use tag of Cover should probably work idk l8r once haru's diff is done
4. You might want to move the redline to somewhere else at the beginning since a few diffs put a note before it and I have no idea if that matters or not so ask someone who will kno lol It doesn't really matter since having notes before the red line is rankable
   
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5. Hey can you learn to use slidertick hitsounds when you're making lower diffs that ignore your downbeats so they don't make my ears hurt thnx slider ticks are hard, maybe later
6. 00:28:033 (4) - dis angle is kinda sour compared to the other ones you used, it's such a small directional change yano compared to like 00:20:301 (2,3,4) - sharper
7. 00:38:549 (1) - i'd have this end on the downbeat just to make sure newbies aren't gonna overspin and lose their cursor when 1 comes up on them I mean, it's a pretty high end normal (not really but high end as in, it's basically 2 stars) so ending it 2 beats before is allowed, plus you'd have to have a decent amount of skill to play this kinda lol
8. 00:47:209 (3,4) - nice striaight line I like it
9. 00:48:446 (1) - tfw you could really easily make this a blanket but I know you won't because you hate your circles being warm and cozy you punk u right
10. 01:50:920 (3) - this might be too confusing for your lowest difficulty idk, you might just want to make this a 1/1 slider even though it ignores quite a bit of stuff for difficulties sake we'll see what other people say in the futureurerere
11. 02:00:817 (3) - I think you can cut the last repeatIf it would be like, semi-structure to keep this to make ^ make more sense then i'll keep 4 nowww
12. 02:50:147 (1) - although this makes sense I think it needs to be stacked differently (like the normal way you stack things with breaks but idk i think people are just in general gonna mess this up) another thing that probably needs multiple opinions, personally, I can see where they could mess up, but if they're tapping slow or sth, they can see that the approach circle isn't moving fast at all lol
13. 03:17:982 (1) - same as other spinner, end on downbeat strong independent normal players who don't need no downbeat of recovery time
14. 03:26:178 (4,5) - ctrl-j these and resnap them for bettar flow http://puu.sh/nB9uR/9c01f466f6.jpg
    
    
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15. 03:42:105 (2,3,4,5,6) - Tidy up this spacing for me thnx fixed spacing to have the 1.4x ds where the vocals are or w/e
16. 04:22:775 (3,4) - Maybe make these symmetrical? naw
    
    
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17. 00:49:064 (4,5) - make deez into a 1/2 slider since he holds a vocal and I'm a nazi do it thanks
18. 02:03:291 (1) - 02:03:755 (2) - ctrl g these slider heads and tails so that way there's a cuter flow and it puts the emphasis on 3 I think current emphasis is fine, mainly due to the fact that 3 is more of a passive note, since the guitar is played slower here plus ctrl g isn't really to my liking flow-wise cuz sharp
19. 02:05:147 (1) - Ctrl g for consistancy in flow
20. 02:27:260 (10) - I hate this note so much it breaks your flow so bad aaaaAAAAA please make this less harsh to play it hurts so much scaled down .9
21. 02:39:786 (1) - so from here onward I really dunno if it needs to be so intense, yeah there's the cymbal crashing over and over but I don't think it needs to be so fast paced since it really isn't super explosive musically so u might need to do the ol remappening here More subjectivity conflict w/es. So, basically the reason why I think that the section deserves something like this is because it's a guitar solo lmao, the music is pretty intense here imo, and whether or not that goes the same for everyone is of course, different, for everyone. I don't really see a reason to slow it down, the guitar solo makes it feel much more fast paced compared to some of the other stuff in the song imo.
22. 02:59:580 (1) - can this note be upward so that way the motion doesn't make me want to die? http://puu.sh/nBgBd/06877383f1.jpg Place it upward so the motion stays the same also so the angle isn't BAD the only blanket you don't like asdfasdf
23. 04:23:703 (1) - from this point onward
24. More indepth reasoning is WHY IS THIS THE HARDEST PART OF THE MAP YOU'RE SO MEAN RIGHT AT THE ENDING especially since the first time this musical pattern happens it's pretty tame 01:30:508 (1) - see here for details (also i mean the whole map isn't tame but it's tame for what you've done so far) but then you go and throw this here on me battle ur so mean pls don't do this baby. pls just take the hit star rating wise and make this more like the rest of the map danksszszszssss<3 Okay, so I knew that this was probably going to be the most controversial thing in the entire mapset (after all, aren't all mapsets with jumps contraversial? /me stares at My Hero!). So basically, I personally feel like the drums are more accented in the version with ito kashitaro than in cilia. Whether or not this justifies the jumps, that's really just up to other to decide, however, I have no reason to believe that they are not justified, seeing that things like Kuchizuke Diamond are capable of pulling off these jumps without being berated, cuz style. I know it's NOT at all good to use other maps to justify your own map, "x map did this so why can I?". In terms of structure though, for the Diamond map (I know I keep comparing, bear with me), the only really intense part comes at the kiai, where there's 1/2 jumps and all. So to this map, there's some structure to the jumps, where in the guitar solo, there's a less intense version of the jumps, same somewhat applies to 01:30:508 - . You can see the similarities, the places where the drums and guitar are prominent contain these jumps, having the last section where the guitar and drums play together being the most intense is very reasonable in my opinion since the section itself is intense. Another thing that I should mention is the fact that I made it very obvious that there was something going to happen imo. So, what I did is that I made sure the player knew that something was coming, since right after the kiai, the difficulty seems to drop heavily in intensity, then building back up the intensity toward the jump part. I think that the biggest issue that people have with this is due to the fact that this occurs in the last portion of the map, but honestly, with it's SR I'll be surprised if people who got this far without breaking would be able to fc it to the end. Not that my intentions are to make it so people will be miserable trying to fc the end, the jumps themselves are pretty enjoyable when I can hit them, whether or not that makes any difference, objectively, there is sounds that can be argued that justify the large jumps, subjectively, it's awful to have these at the very end of a roughly 5 minute song, but ya know, I'm not the one who made the song B). I hope that's enough justification toward it, but let's see if future modders will actually open this box ya know?