The BG pic is very nice~I like it~

Some quick mod~
[Easy]
00:51:137 (5) - New combo?
01:29:099 (1) - Clap sounds odd to me
01:37:067 (5) - Line with 3,4?

[Normal]
00:15:517 (7) - New combo?
00:19:267 (4) - ^
00:21:141 (7) - ^
00:23:953 (3,4) - Right 1 grid?
00:36:139 (4) - Down 1 grid?
00:40:357 (2) - Right 1 grid?
00:49:731 (4) - Clap too loud here
01:29:099 (6,7) - Add finish or remove finish from 5?
00:53:011 (6) - Left 1 grid?
01:44:214 (8) - Why not finish here?

[Hard]
Slider tick rate 1 plz~
00:02:160 (1) - Up 1 grid?
00:07:550 (5) - Put right under 4?
00:19:267 (7) - New combo?
00:22:547 (5) - Put right under 4?
00:23:016 (7) - New combo?
00:23:953 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:24:539 (2) - New combo?
01:42:691 (5) - Down 2 grid and left 1 grid?
01:42:808 (6) - Down 1 grid?

Its a well done for your first map~
Work hard and it will be ranked~
Have my star~

star

Hi.
I guess this is very good for the first try.
Btw, got the permission to use the skin?

Remember - these are only my thoughts and opinions.


[Generally]
At least BPM and offset sound good to me. But I might not be right.

[Light]
Everything looks fine.


[Light+]
00:49:262 (3) - Doesn't it stay a bit far from 2 comparing to 1? Well, this is not that important.
The rest looks fine.


[Real]
00:42:115 (3) - I don't like how you've put this into the stream.
00:46:215 (2,3) - ^
00:59:690 (1,2) - ^
01:01:330 (3) - ^
01:05:197 (1) - mby move closer to rhe previous circle?
01:44:097 (5,6) - isn't it too far away? It's hard to pass this moment.

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

sonnyc: Your tips were good. However, the design of the beatmap over Light and Light+ was planned to be simple instead of follow the rhythm perfectly.

Example:

sonnyc wrote:

00:42:700 (2) Increase 1 more reverse?

I didn't add another reverse to give the player time to click the other circle.

Anyway, the intention was good. Thanks ^_^

BPM: 128.00 flat
Offset: 500

Resnap, fix inherited timing sections, etc. Can't mod on faulty timing.

Apply Zekira's timing. please.

[Light+]
00:19:267 (4,7) - new combo on these.

[Real]
00:07:081 (4,5) - stack better
00:15:517 (1,3) - align
01:06:603 (6,1) - maybe sudden. but ok
01:11:758 (12,13) - stack better
01:14:570 (2,3) - align
01:43:863 (4,5) - this jump is sudden, at least put a new combo.

* Light:
>>Sounds fine.

* Light+:
>>Sounds fine.

* Real:
>>Sounds fine.

*Try to put a harder diff, that follow the sound exactly.(sounds interesting )

Nice beatmap.
Star*

-Real-
nice mapset. And here'are some hitsounds suggestion
so many random hitsounds here and you should make them fit the music.
such as:
00:08:000 (1) - +finish?
00:08:937 (5) - +whistle?
00:09:875 (1) - ^
00:10:812 (5) - ^
00:11:750 (1) - +finish?
00:12:453 (4) - +whistle at the slider's end?
00:14:445 (4) - +whistle at the slider's repeat?
00:19:250 (7) - +finish&new combo
00:21:125 (1) - +finish
00:26:398 (10,11) - remove whistles
00:42:687 (8,9) - use the "normal-hitnormal" hitsound?
00:46:906 (8,9) - ^
01:02:375 (12) - +whistle
01:05:890 (4) - +whistle at the slider's end
01:07:062 (1) - +whistle
01:07:765 (4) - +whistle at the slider's end
etc.

and 01:01:437 (4) - move it 1 grid left.

Good luck.

~Light~
Fine.

~Light+~
01:40:362 (3) - new combo

~Real~
00:35:539 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - move down 1 grid (Lv3)
01:12:218 (13) - stack with (12)


+Star

[Light]


[Light+]


[Real]


[General Thoughts]

Not bad, I enjoyed it. But, it lacks a proper hard. The difficulty jump between [Light+] and [Real] is quite big. My suggestion would be to make [Light+] a tiny bit easier and then map a decent hard, or to ask someone to do it for you ( a guest diff ) then I will give this a 10/10.

But have a star

Teara wrote:

Not bad, I enjoyed it. But, it lacks a proper hard. The difficulty jump between [Light+] and [Real] is quite big. My suggestion would be to make [Light+] a tiny bit easier and then map a decent hard, or to ask someone to do it for you ( a guest diff ) then I will give this a 10/10.

Neo Adonis wrote:

Real: On first instance, I wanted to do a hard map and not jump directly to Insane. But I though: "Hey, this song is so difficult on Keyboardmania and, anyway, other beatmaps offer harder challenges".

Other way to say "I wasn't creative enough to do a hard diff" ^^' . And I didn't want to destroy the map with a unaccurated hard. I know if lacks of a Hard, but anyway Real isn't as insane as a 'real' insane, I think. Let's say "Real" is only harder than a hard, but easier than a insane.

If I find somebody who creates a hard, I'll add it. Else, the map will have to be let on that way.

Because of this, I've reduced the difficulty on "Real", to make the jump smaller.

CIAO!

[General]
1) Add "konami" because KEYBOARDMANIA 3rdMix made from konami, maybe?

[Light]
00:11:750 (1) - Move 2 grid right?
00:16:906 (5,4) - DO NOT PLACE 2 CIRCLE AT THE SAME TICK!!! DELETE (4) OR (5)
01:02:375 (1) - Add a finish hitsound
01:20:187 (1) - ^
01:33:312 (3) - Move it to the right place, overlapped by 01:31:437 (1) is bad

[Light+]
00:27:218 (1) - Add a finish hitsound
01:02:375 (1) - ^

[Real]
00:02:140 (1) - Move 1 grid up?
00:18:312 (3) - Offscreen
00:29:914 (12) - ^
00:38:234 (B) - The breaks are too short, remove it
01:24:992 (4,5,6,7) - Offscreen

Good map
STAR

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

General:

-- The sound effects of this skin (e.g. retry, skip etc) sound awful on this piano piece.
-- Why the time signature changes?

Light:

00:56:750 (1) - Too high top is covered by HP bar.
01:02:375 (1) - Finish.
01:39:289 (1,1,1,2,3,4) - Stacking looks awful and hard for new players to know when to click, sliders imo or at least space the beats around the map (not center).

Light +

-- The difficulty name sounds somewhat silly, think of something else. Idk "Moderate"

01:02:375 (1) - Finish.
01:43:156 (5) - Remove finish.
01:43:859 (7) - ^
01:44:210 (8) - Finish.

Real:

00:13:859 (x) - Beat?
00:14:328 (x) - ^
00:24:406 (x) - ^
00:24:875 (x) - ^
00:25:343 (x) - ^
00:25:812 (x) - ^
00:26:281 (x) - ^ Triples fit the music so well.
00:59:445 (11,1) - Needs more distance between the stream imo or like earlier.
01:00:851 (11,1) - ^
01:11:515 (10,11,12) - Messy, just stack 10 onto the slider it looks better.
01:13:039 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Sounds weird 1/2 would be better imo.
01:29:210 (5) - Not necessary imo and disrupts the flow of the stream.
01:31:437 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - This is messy, especially 01:32:023 (4,5,6,7,8,9) -
01:44:093 (2,3) - Jump is rather weird.

That's all pretty nice overall. ~ Star

Shulin wrote:

General:

-- The sound effects of this skin (e.g. retry, skip etc) sound awful on this piano piece.
Note to myself: DON'T USE a theme just to make the map look "prettier"

Light:

01:39:289 (1,1,1,2,3,4) - Stacking looks awful and hard for new players to know when to click, sliders imo or at least space the beats around the map (not center).
I thought it was easier ^^' . Anyway, I modified

Light +

-- The difficulty name sounds somewhat silly, think of something else. Idk "Moderate"
I followed the names of the diffs on KEYBOARDMANIA.

01:02:375 (1) - Finish.
01:43:156 (5) - Remove finish.
01:43:859 (7) - ^
01:44:210 (8) - Finish.
I think it sounds good the way I did it. If not, notify me.

Real:

00:13:859 (x) - Beat?
00:14:328 (x) - ^
00:24:406 (x) - ^
00:24:875 (x) - ^
00:25:343 (x) - ^
00:25:812 (x) - ^
00:26:281 (x) - ^ Triples fit the music so well.
Do you know? yesterday I thought in that ^^. You won me the idea!
01:13:039 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Sounds weird 1/2 would be better imo.
Your opinion was correct!
01:44:093 (2,3) - Jump is rather weird.
Changed!

I modified many things, too. But these are the most important. Thanks!!


At this point, I think the map is taking its decisive form. However, must be some details which need to be corrected. Thanks to all who modded, and keep it up!! ^^

[General]
Please inspect the green timing points and make sure they're snapped to where you want them snapped.

[Light]
Hitsound work needed IMO.
01:37:062 (5) - Symmetry

[Light+]
Hitsound work needed IMO.

[Heavy]
Hitsound work needed IMO.
01:12:218 (13) - you see the problem here, right? Make an effort to stack to the tail with Grid Snap turned off.

Basic map, I understand that, I but I feel that Light and Light+ should be spiced up a bit.

Zekira wrote:

[General]
Please inspect the green timing points and make sure they're snapped to where you want them snapped.

The timing points on Light and Light+ are only used to ensure the correct spacing of the bars in Taiko, using 3/4 and 4/4 compasses. However, on Real, they change the speed, and those were checked correctly (as same as on Light(+)).

Zekira wrote:

Hitsound work needed IMO.

On Light, I don't use so many hitsounds to make the map easier on Taiko. I hope you can understand. On the other diffs, I think I did all I could with the hitsounds.

Zekira wrote:

[General]
[Heavy]
01:12:218 (13) - you see the problem here, right? Make an effort to stack to the tail with Grid Snap turned off.

LOL. Heavy. XD
Fixed. I was terrified at not using the Grid Snap.

[Real]

1. 00:24:464 (2) - why 1/8 snap?
2. 00:27:096 - 00:37:765 - Feel off, I tried a new timing, but still off :/ Need some more timing expert to check
3. 00:56:867 (1) - start at 00:56:984 imo, there's no piano sound at 00:56:867

Just take a quick look at it
no need to give me kds

I don't know about the preferred skin. It doesn't fit the song and background at all.

Resnap all of the timing sections (or at least kiai starts/ends), example: 01:23:937 - the start of the kiai section is not centrainly on the tick.

[Light+]

01:30:500 (3) - Move right a tick.


[Real]

Set slider tick value to 2. 4 is too much.

00:07:531 (5) - Stack this note properly with the Grid Snap turned off.
00:18:781 (5) - ^
00:20:656 (11) - ^
00:22:531 (5) - ^
00:16:906 (4) - End on the previous blue tick (00:17:257).
00:28:507 (6) - New combo (it's not necessary in this case, but it is in the next pattern which has 16 notes in the combo and I think it would be nice to have here the same combo value).
00:32:257 (6) - ^
00:36:007 (8) - ^
00:39:875 (1,2) - Spacing. (2) is a bit too close to (1).
[00:41:867] - Add a note here? I know, it fits the rhythm in the current case, but sounds better if you add a note. You don't have to do this, it's only a suggestion.
[00:45:968] - ^
00:59:796 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Move them a bit right and a bit down to make them similar to previous streams.

Good piece of work. +star

fartownik wrote:

I don't know about the preferred skin. It doesn't fit the song and background at all.
I could swear I did it before. But I checked that and now it's fixed!!

Resnap all of the timing sections (or at least kiai starts/ends), example: 01:23:937 - the start of the kiai section is not centrainly on the tick.
Not necesary, but anyway fixed (I won't move the sections on Real. They work as I want (osu! spacing and Taiko notes speed).

[Light+]

01:30:500 (3) - Move right a tick.
Done.


[Real]

Set slider tick value to 2. 4 is too much.
If I did that, the notes over Taiko sound awful. And I don't see any problem with that.

00:07:531 (5) - Stack this note properly with the Grid Snap turned off.
I won't use Grid Snap so often ^^
00:28:507 (6) - New combo (it's not necessary in this case, but it is in the next pattern which has 16 notes in the combo and I think it would be nice to have here the same combo value).
Done
00:39:875 (1,2) - Spacing. (2) is a bit too close to (1).
Done
[00:41:867] - Add a note here? I know, it fits the rhythm in the current case, but sounds better if you add a note. You don't have to do this, it's only a suggestion.
But it has a note already. Are you reffering to a note BEFORE this one? I don't think it sounds well. But let the public choose
00:59:796 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Move them a bit right and a bit down to make them similar to previous streams.
Done

Thanks for modding!!

[Heavy]

Oh god, did I just fail so hard? O_O

Hi hi

Here are some suggestions for your map, you don't have to change them if you don't agree with me
Let's go!!

~All Diffs~
- Yeah, Konami made the game so... add it to Tags

~Light~
No problems, good job!!

~Light+~
- Why Light+? Find a better name... maybe Medium? I don't know xD

01:30:031 (2,3,4) - Fix Spacing.
01:33:078 (6,7) - ^
01:43:859 (7,8) - Delete Finish hitsound on (7) and add it to (8)?

~Real~
00:39:875 (x) - I understand why the slow down... but I think it would look a lot less messier if you space the circles a bit more oxo
00:45:265 (2,3,4,5,6) - Fix Spacing.
01:31:671 (2,3) - (2) is a bit hard to see in gameplay, invert the positions :3
01:44:210 (6) - Finish hitsound? o.o

Great map Neo ^^ *star*

Beuchi-chan wrote:

- Yeah, Konami made the game so... add it to Tags

When I read Leorda, I understood "as the source" ^^'. Done

Beuchi-chan wrote:

- Why Light+? Find a better name... maybe Medium? I don't know xD

Atfer serious discussions with my mind, I decided to name it Light+ (as on KEYBOARDMANIA) and between brackets "Medium". And I won't do changes except to the word "medium" maybe.

Beuchi-chan wrote:

00:39:875 (x) - I understand why the slow down... but I think it would look a lot less messier if you space the circles a bit more oxo

The most important part. Well, I'm deciding between remap the map with x1 spacing or let it on that way. While then, to avoid problem with the diff, I'll let the spacing on x0.5

Thanks!!

Overall
Delete the .osb file and full submit
The combo colors blend in with the video at certain points. Change them. (to default maybe?)

Light+(Medium)
Just change it into Medium...

Real
The slowdown part looks very compressed. It doesn't look very neat...

As your request.

Read this first for the icon explanation.
- [?] Asking for a second thought.
- [!] Fatal error. You have to fix this for sure.
- [No icon] Only a suggestion.

Star. Call me back for pubble.

NoHItter wrote:

Delete the .osb file and full submit

I'll do it... Someday XD
Well, when I have time and nobody is using Internet, I'll do that.

NoHItter wrote:

The combo colors blend in with the video at certain points. Change them. (to default maybe?)

Which points, per example? I see it good, but maybe I could be wrong. Anyway, I won't use again the default colors.

NoHItter wrote:

Just change it into Medium...

No, sorry. The most I can do is change "Medium", no more.

NoHItter wrote:

The slowdown part looks very compressed. It doesn't look very neat...

Remapped that part. I hope you like it ^^ as same as the players.

VanMoNky wrote:

2. I recommend you to use the Cantabile skin by LuigiHann. It fits to this song.

It fits, perhaps. But it doesn't like me by any reason... Should I use it as a preferred skin?

VanMoNky wrote:

01:24:406 - This not may be too close with the end of the spinner.

Fixed with the spinner (I hope so...)

VanMoNky wrote:

01:39:289 (1,1,1,2,3,4) - This is an easy diff, right? Why there are blue ticks in the diff?

Remapped. I didn't know how to remap it, but your tips helped me ^^

VanMoNky wrote:

00:56:867 (1) - Remove this. The melody starts one 1/4 beat after this note.

Really? I heard a note, but I've read many suggestions like this one, so I've removed the note.


The tips are good, but I don't know if too much changes like the remapping of the slow part are useful. I hope that. And so many thanks for your modding. ^^

[General]
*Perhaps chop up the source into individual tags such as "key" "board" "mania"?
*Offset feels kinda early. Try 508 and resnap on all diffs.

[Light]
01:20:187 (1) - I find it odd that kiai starts in the middle of this spinner, so perhaps end the spinner one white tick earlier? :V
01:31:437 (1) - try not to overlap sliders, so maybe angle this downward instead?
01:33:312 (3) - then, move the end of this over so that it doesn't overlap (1) and extend to the white tick (sounds awkward ending on the blue)
01:42:453 (2,4) - These felt awkward and confusing to hit, so maybe try...


[Light+ (Medium)]
*Does "(Medium)" really need to be in diff's name? :S
00:59:562 (1,2) - again, try not to overlap sliders. It looks sloppy =(
01:31:437 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - unpredictable triplets. At least turn (1,2,3) into a repeating slider so that the pattern can be heard
01:34:601 (8) - unpredictable offbeat
01:35:539 (2) - ^
01:36:125 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - bahhh more offbeats that are hard to sightread, let alone hit correctly. Try to change this section so that it's not so tricky @.@
01:38:937 (1,2) - I'd make this a slider so that the pattern can be heard and expected for the ending
01:40:343 (1,2) - maybe these too, but it doesn't matter

[Real]
*tickrate 4 seems too high
00:41:875 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - streams like this are very hard to read, so I highly suggest that you change it.
00:45:273 (8,9,10,11,12) - ^ not as bad, but still...
00:46:093 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - hard to read
00:53:242 (8,9,10,11,12,13,1) - Hard to read, but it's in a straight line, and I kind of like these types of streams, so I suppose it's okay.
00:56:875 - add a note here
*argh deathstreams
01:20:187 (1) - Nice effort, but the ticks make it look really sloppy.
01:29:218 (5) - NO. Change this.

Not bad; Some confusing/hard parts in [Real], but eh... Also, I'd like to see some more hitsounds in all diffs, since some parts felt a little "stale", but overall they weren't bad. Nice job for your first map~

Also I want to reiterate something...

NoHItter wrote:

The combo colors blend in with the video at certain points. Change them. (to default maybe?)

Making the approach circles hard to see

Forgot to suggest "keyboard" as a separate tag, too, since it's just one word.

no kd for this post, obviously ;p

Contradictions. Who understand mods? XD

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Derekku Chan wrote:

01:36:125 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - bahhh more offbeats that are hard to sightread, let alone hit correctly. Try to change this section so that it's not so tricky @.@

VanMoNky wrote:

Well, it's not a big problem since I can see that by the approach circle.

I let that section the way it is because I didn't see how to change it and it follow well the rhythm. The other tricky sections were changed, though.

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VanMoNky wrote:

01:24:406 - This not may be too close with the end of the spinner.

To fix the problem, I decided to end the spinner one white tick after, but...

Derekku Chan wrote:

01:20:187 (1) - I find it odd that kiai starts in the middle of this spinner, so perhaps end the spinner one white tick earlier? :V

So I decided not to revert the spinner.

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VanMoNky wrote:

00:56:867 (1) - Remove this. The melody starts one 1/4 beat after this note.

Derekku Chan wrote:

00:56:875 - add a note here

This is going me nuts! I followed Derekku's tip.

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About the Derekku mod, I fixed all I could as I could. Waiting further modding...

And note this was just a joke. Don't take it personal because I'm reallly grateful with you. Thanks!! ^^

Nothing has to be modded here, for me~
Nice map~
Star~

Light:
Increase Circle Size by 1.

Light+ (Medium):
Increase Circle Size by 1.
Also, just rename to Medium.

Real:
Fine.

[Light+ (Medium)]

1. Ese es un nombre extraño para una dificultad. Es como usar "Easy+", lo cual sólo significa Normal. ¿No piensas cambiarlo? O_o

[Real]

1. No estoy seguro si deberías utilizar esa stack leniency... la verdad no veo ningún problema grave si lo aumentas. o:

01:29:218 (5,6,7) - Creo que este triple no queda con la dificultad... si, es la más difícil, pero la verdad todo está muy fácil excepto esto. Sería mejor si lo cambiaras a un slider o algo. =/

~ ~ ~

Excellente beatmap... para ser tu primero está magnífico.

star.

Osamu Kubota rockz.

waiting 4th forever , and only played 10times this 5 years cuz almost every km3rd are gone from my living area...
spent more than 500dollers for km3rd , much more for km2nd at arcade :p

Hai

Light
00:16:914 (4) - Add hitsound whistle

Medium
00:13:633 (3,5) - Remove hitsound whistle
01:08:476 (7) - Add hitsound whistle

Real
00:24:531 (5,6) - Fix spacing


Ok starrr**

[Mod Infos]

Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.

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[Light]

• • 00:45:976 (x) - Add a circle

[Medium]

• • 00:29:101 (5,1) - Spacing (keep "Distance Snap" active and fix it)

[Real]

• • 00:41:758 (x) - Add a circle
  • 00:45:976 (x) - ^
  • 00:56:875 (1) - Delete this circle
  • 00:58:047 (4) - ^
  • 00:59:453 (4) - ^
  • 00:59:687 (1) - ^
  • 01:00:859 (4) - ^

xxheroxx wrote:

• • 00:45:976 (x) - Add a circle - No. Thanks.

[Medium]

• • 00:29:101 (5,1) - Spacing (keep "Distance Snap" active and fix it) - Fixed!

[Real]

• • 00:41:758 (x) - Add a circle
  • 00:45:976 (x) - ^
  • 00:56:875 (1) - Delete this circle
  • 00:58:047 (4) - ^
  • 00:59:453 (4) - ^
  • 00:59:687 (1) - ^
  • 01:00:859 (4) - ^
  • I'm following the rhythm of the piano, so I won't change that

Thanks so much for your modding!! (Although I wished a pubble )

Neo Adonis wrote:

Thanks so much for your modding!! (Although I wished a pubble )

Pubbles dont exist anymore, just so u know, ehh anywas on to the modding

Red = Major issue, you should fix this
Purple = Issue, It's better if you fix this, and can sometimes pass if justified
Blue = Minor issue, you can ignore if you dont want to change
Green = Feedback / Comments
Black = Suggestion

[General]
I have an intuition that kiai should begin here: 01:24:883

[Light]
Looks ok

[Medium]
01:41:758 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Uhh triplets on Meduim? well not like Medium isnt a hard anyways

[Real]
Use of 1/8 snap is not recommended unless you are an experienced beatmapper... i guess you are then, since it looks fine.
I dunno, this diff looks weird to me on the timeline but i dont know why

Well, cant find any problems so yeah +Star

Updated Mod's Info:
Mine are all suggestions. You're free to follow or not this mod :3
If I found a beat who must be added, i'll write it.
Remember to check spacing after all modfies :3
I'll check with AImod (Ctrl+Shift+A) too, so, if there's something found on it for your difficulties, i'll write "AImod!"

[General]
Why Background is in your map folder but it isn't present in the diffs?

[Light]
00:09:883 (5) - New Combo.
00:49:726 (4) - Flip it vertically.
00:52:539 (4) - ^.

[Medium]
AImod!
Check all map spacing.

[Real]
Fine.

And that's all! *star*

Feedback time!

tmokb93 wrote:

Why Background is in your map folder but it isn't present in the diffs?

I checked that, but I didn't found any problem. I can see the BG on all the diffs.

tmokb93 wrote:

AImod!
Check all map spacing.

No. AImod didn't say nothing.

Sakura301 wrote:

I have an intuition that kiai should begin here: 01:24:883

Not really. But I changed it near almost you said me. Thanks!!

Neo Adonis wrote:

Thanks so much for your modding!! (Although I wished a pubble )

Just joking! I thank all the modding.

Medium
01:38:359 (7) - Unstack? ._,

All I can say is... WOW! Such a great job with your first map, and with such a hard to map song too!

Sorry for the reaaaally late mod. I was super busy.

Light:
00:22:070 - (2,1) Unstack maybe?

Medium:
00:21:133 - (1) One space to the left.

Real:
fine.

I see this map getting ranked pretty soon. I see pratically no flaws in the map. Great JOb on the map. Star~

Oh nvm...maybe its just the song that felt weird...



Real

00:04:023 (1) - Remove New Combo
00:04:258 (3) - Add New Combo


<3 Pretty Good~

Modding time. I actually love this song. However, there are things that annoy me. Sorry, but it's nazimod time. Most of these notes are purely for polish reasons.

Sorry if this counts as abusing spoilerboxes, but I'd rather you look at each difficulty in easier-to-read fragments than overwhelm you with a gigantic uberpost.

My only major difficulty-wide complaint is the lack of any substantial breaks, but you know what? The map is short and a long break for this length of song would probably interfere with the flow of the map. There are tiny breaks that you've put in, and those sufficed while I was playing this mapset.

Light:

Medium:

Real:

What you've got here is a mostly competent mapset that has a lot of potential, but needs a lot of fixing/polishing before it can be fully realized. As far as first maps are concerned, this is really nice, keep up the good work. I apologize if this overwhelms you, I'm just trying to help you as much as I can.

To make my point: a lot of things to polish, but a very good map for your first time around, and on such a difficult song to map. I'm looking forward to seeing more of your work!

When you fix this, I'll look at it again.

Mod taken. Sorry the delay, but well... Almost all the tips were taken (I kept some things like these were because I think they well on the way they are).

Thanks Mogsworth!

Only a few things left to mention. Don't worry about the delays, I'm just glad you fixed it. :)

General:

1. That gradual volume increase (you know which one I'm talking about)...oh my god, I LOVE it. Fantastic job.
2. This is definitely looking and playing better than before.
3. Remember that ending kiai recommendation I made and the stuff associated with it? Please do them. Those were definitely not suggestions, they help the map look a lot less awkward.

Light:

1. 00:27:695 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - This is less awkward than it was. HOWEVER, it still feels awkward. Maybe try one last thing? I can't think of anything else, but if you or anyone else comes up with something, that'd be superb.

Fix these and a bubble will be heading your way!

Done Mogsworth! I hope it'll fine...

No more problems with this. Well-deserved bubble.

No pop because the issues were rather minor, but please look at these:

Light:

1. Set tick rate to 2 like the other diffs.
2. 00:42:695 (2) - An easy player shouldn't be expected to read approach circles after kick sliders.

Medium:

1. Lower stacking leniency by one notch so that 01:07:539 (5) - isn't off-center.
2. 00:08:359 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - These play much more naturally if they're lengthened by 1/2 and moved back by a 1/4.
3. 00:59:570 (1,2) - Spacing. Move further apart.

Real:

1. 00:32:265 (6,7,8,9) - Confusing.
2. 00:35:781 (7,8,9,10) - ^
3. 00:41:875 (1) - I want to hit this a 1/4 early. Consider replacing 00:41:523 (5,1) - with a slider?
4. 00:46:093 (1) - ^
5. 00:48:320 (1,2) - Covered up and hard to see
6. 00:53:242 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - This plays like a regular stream but looks super odd. Space them normally?
7. 01:20:195 (1) - lol it's been so long since I've seen spiral sliders. Widen it just a bit so it doesn't touch itself? (my fix)

MetalMario201 wrote:

No pop because the issues were rather minor, but please look at these:

Light:

1. Set tick rate to 2 like the other diffs. Done. I didn't wanted to spoil Taiko mode, but well... It's more important osu!
2. 00:42:695 (2) - An easy player shouldn't be expected to read approach circles after kick sliders. Lowered difficulty of the sliders. i won't do anymore for these.

Medium:

1. Lower stacking leniency by one notch so that 01:07:539 (5) - isn't off-center. OK
2. 00:08:359 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - These play much more naturally if they're lengthened by 1/2 and moved back by a 1/4. NO
3. 00:59:570 (1,2) - Spacing. Move further apart. I didn't noticed that

Real:

1. 00:32:265 (6,7,8,9) - Confusing. That's the purpose, but lowered diff of these.
2. 00:35:781 (7,8,9,10) - ^ OK.. Of this not.
3. 00:41:875 (1) - I want to hit this a 1/4 early. Consider replacing 00:41:523 (5,1) - with a slider? They follow well the piano rhythm, so I won't replace them.
4. 00:46:093 (1) - ^
5. 00:48:320 (1,2) - Covered up and hard to see Fixed.
6. 00:53:242 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - This plays like a regular stream but looks super odd. Space them normally? Fixed.
7. 01:20:195 (1) - lol it's been so long since I've seen spiral sliders. Widen it just a bit so it doesn't touch itself? (my fix) Thanks!

My bubble...
Well, at least I'm now satisfied with the map Thanks so much!
(Please, unless it's very important, don't pop or make me pop my bubble again)

:3

Ranked.