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Evanescence - Lacrymosa

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Taeyang
Elite Mapper
1,209 posts
Joined June 2013
Taeyang
  • General
  1. be careful this gray colour

    similar colour with BG is unrankable issue
  2. how do you add KIAI time?

  • LP's Normal
  1. this is normal diff , your map DS is not same (Easy,Normal diff rule of one ; use same DS)
  2. 00:05:244 (3,1) - 1.58 DS fix to 1.7 DS
  3. 00:06:777 (1,2) - ^
  4. 00:11:157 (3,4) - make slide nor 00:08:091 (3) - like this two circle is too hard
  5. 00:13:127 (1) - remove NC i recommend downbeat NC and 00:12:689 (2,1) - 00:14:222 (2,1) - stack is really not good
  6. 00:22:543 (4) - NC here is downbeat
  7. 00:28:456 (3,4) - slide and flow suggest ;like this looks fine
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  8. 00:54:086 (1,2,3,4) - rhythm too Easy
  9. 01:10:509 (2,3) - 1.84 DS ->1.7


  • Advanced
  1. 00:09:405 (1,2) - blanket 'you can be better like this :D
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  2. 00:38:758 (2,3,4) - rhythm and flow suggest ; why you only stack? you can make more funny so i recommend like this
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  3. 01:02:407 (2,3,4) - same
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  4. 01:31:312 (2,3,4) - sound is really big how do you make jumps?
  5. i think 3 stacks make more funny but your idea not bad anyway good luck~!

  • Hard
  1. 00:09:843 (2,4) - blanket really near ; a least like this
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  2. 00:10:719 (5,6) - ctrl+g flow better to me
  3. 00:15:536 (4,6) - blanket
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  4. 00:16:850 (8,9,1) - half stack lock better
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  5. 00:19:916 (1,2) - 2.0 DS too far
  6. 00:35:692 (1,2,3,4) - same pattern at 'Advanced' diff you can make funny 00:38:101 (4,1) - if you make like that fix here DS
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  7. 00:40:291 (9,10,1) - rhythm ;more fit this rhythm
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  8. 01:37:443 (3,4,5,6) - that 3 and 4 circle stack make readable avoid satck plz
  9. 01:57:809 - here exist durm sound
  10. 02:01:750 (5,6,7,8) - make more jump ; i think boring to me how do you like this?
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Sieg
3,981 posts
Joined February 2012
Topic Starter
Sieg
@Regraz thanks I applied things for normal
fixed blankets for advanced
as for overmapped notes on hard - they stresses transfers to new stanza or really strong vocal\music notes so I don't see as issue
Sieg
3,981 posts
Joined February 2012
Topic Starter
Sieg
@Taeyang thanks
fixed all blankets and nc things, and some flow suggestions
jumps for this not advanced is not really what I want to use
KASUM1
336 posts
Joined December 2013
KASUM1
hi from my queue

I would like to say that you don't need any mods after bakari mod xD

[Hard]
00:42:918 (5,6) - I think (6) breaks the flow

no kds

Your map is just perfect I couldn't find anything maybe that break flow isn't issue too

why did you request so perfect mapset like this? :(
Sieg
3,981 posts
Joined February 2012
Topic Starter
Sieg
@KASUM1 ;w;
changed a bit, thank you
Myxo
osu! Alumni
3,103 posts
Joined December 2012
Myxo
[LP's Normal]

01:27:371 (4,1) - The spacing looks veeeery much like your average 1/2-spacing. I would make it bigger so it appears more visually consistent. 00:35:035 (4,1) - Here you have used bigger spacing too before the slow sliders (even though it is an 1/2-gap here)

[Advanced]

In my opinion increasing AR to 5.5 and OD to 4.5 would be a bit more reasonable for this difficulty level. Even though the change is not big, it will kinda even the setting-wise spread and will fit better to this intense difficulty.

That's literally it. Call me~
Sieg
3,981 posts
Joined February 2012
Topic Starter
Sieg
@Desperate-kun everything applied, thanku
Myxo
osu! Alumni
3,103 posts
Joined December 2012
Myxo
my mom told me that speedranking is a bad thing
good thing i only bubble hue
Mafumafu
Beatmap Nominator
3,367 posts
Joined August 2013
Mafumafu
wow so fast xD
Mao
Elite Mapper II
2,963 posts
Joined December 2012
Mao
<3
Sieg
3,981 posts
Joined February 2012
Topic Starter
Sieg
;w;
meii18
3,577 posts
Joined October 2013
meii18
Hello!

[General]
  1. From tags 'english' musnt' be included since it could be setted at 'language' after the map get qualified.Also,I guess this is the cut version of this song because the original one have the lenght 3:37 and this one have only 2:07 just saying so adding to tags 'cut version' would be good.
[LP's Normal]
  1. 00:26:485(4,1)- Instead having an 3/2 slider + note which doesn't sound to nice to me,I suggest to remove the note to snap 00:26:485(4)- to a 2/1 slider.Having the slider snapped to 2/1 instead having it to 3/2 will follow the piano much better and also that note seemed to be useless even if there is the vocals' breath :D
  2. 00:47:517(3)- This one seems it isn't snapped correctly if you listen the music carefully.Seems there's a beat on 00:48:174- but you ignore it snapping the slider to 2/1 slider.To end the slider on that beat,you have to snap the slider from 2/1 to 3/2.Having it as an 3/2 slider you will follow the music much properly and also the beat wouldn't be ignored
  3. 00:49:488(2,3)- Honestly this rhythm doesn't follow the music really well if you listen the vocals,instruments carefully.00:49:488(2)- needs to be an 1/1 slider (starting and ending from red tick) and the next slider should start from 00:50:145- for following the 'aaa' vocals more properly.It should be like here !Click!
  4. 01:07:664(2,3)- I would like to make an ctrl+G between those objects as you did with the previous pattern from this part.If you do that,you have to move the circle I mean 3 to 01:08:101- for avoiding letting piano's beat empty
  5. 01:33:940(5,6)- Minor spacing error
  6. 01:34:816(1)- Honestly this slider feels a bit strange because seems it is supposed to be snapped to 1/1 and not to 3/2 because on 01:35:254- I hear a beat which is ignored.Snapping the slider to 1/1 you will follow that beat.Also if you do that,you have to move 01:35:692(2)- to 01:35:473- and then 01:30:316(3)- to 01:35:911-.After that you can add a note on 01:36:130- to not leave the cymbal sound unclickable and unemphasized.That rhythm which I suggested with you will follow the vocals and others much properly in my opinion
  7. 01:57:152(1)- It will feel more natural if the slider would be snapped to 1/1 instead having it snapped to 3/2 to follow the vocals and the instruments much better in my opinion
[Advanced]
  1. 00:23:638- I hear a beat here but seems you letted it empty.Adding a note here would make this beat clickable and also emphasized
    Great diff!
That's all!
Call me back!
Sieg
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Joined February 2012
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Sieg
@ByBy13 thanku ByBy, I applied things
English in tags is not useless, people can use it for ingame search
Kenezz
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Joined September 2009
Kenezz
This is... love <3
Sieg
3,981 posts
Joined February 2012
Topic Starter
Sieg

Kenezz wrote:

This is... love <3
and that is true <3
meii18
3,577 posts
Joined October 2013
meii18
We made some changes in LP's Normal.I believe this is ready to go now!

Rebubbled!
Secretpipe
3,316 posts
Joined December 2012
Secretpipe
Done an IRC modding with Sieg :

We fixed some small things like

→DS issues
→Spinners in timeline and crap
→minor shapes

Call me back!
Sieg
3,981 posts
Joined February 2012
Topic Starter
Sieg
thanku bby <3
SPOILER
13:14 *Secretpipe is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/793726 Evanescence - Lacrymosa [LP's Normal]]
13:14 *Sieg is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/793726 Evanescence - Lacrymosa [LP's Normal]]
13:15 Secretpipe: woooow
13:15 Secretpipe: that song <3
13:15 Sieg: yeah
13:15 Secretpipe: 01:00:655 (3) -
13:15 Secretpipe: fix that lil spacing issue:D
13:15 Sieg: oups
13:15 Sieg: sure
13:17 Secretpipe: 02:02:517 (1) -
13:17 Secretpipe: the spinner start too earlier here
13:17 Secretpipe: at least, start it ion the next red tick
13:17 Secretpipe: 02:02:626 -
13:17 Sieg: removed repeat
13:17 Sieg: moved spiner
13:17 Secretpipe: Normal diff is pretty simple
13:17 Secretpipe: let's head to Advanced :D
13:17 Sieg: guess this sohuld fine?
13:17 Secretpipe: sure
13:17 *Secretpipe is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/793115 Evanescence - Lacrymosa [Advanced]]
13:18 Secretpipe: it should be fine ye :3
13:18 Sieg: for sure xD
13:18 Secretpipe: that song is really beautiful owo
13:19 Secretpipe: *^*
13:19 Sieg: so sad tho ;_;
13:20 Secretpipe: 01:30:874 - a kiai could be rly awesome here
13:20 Sieg: kiai is way too positive thing for this song imo ) :
13:20 Secretpipe: yea right
13:20 Sieg: this stars and flashig shit
13:20 Secretpipe: atmosphere is kinda sad
13:21 Secretpipe: doesn't reflects the song
13:21 Secretpipe: Advanced diff is fine also
13:21 *Secretpipe is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/792345 Evanescence - Lacrymosa [Hard]]
13:21 Secretpipe: great work
13:21 *Sieg is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/792345 Evanescence - Lacrymosa [Hard]]
13:21 Sieg: thanks :3
13:21 Secretpipe: I love that bell hitsound <3
13:22 Sieg: I feel like this one of my best tbh
13:22 Secretpipe: this is truly awesome :D
13:22 Secretpipe: 00:23:200 (4,5,6,7,1) - amg <3
13:22 Sieg: (:
13:24 Secretpipe: 01:00:656 (3,4) - Flow is kinda weird here
13:24 Secretpipe: but well , that should be fine
13:24 Sieg: kind of round flow
13:24 Secretpipe: yea
13:24 Secretpipe: transition could be better but well xD
13:25 Secretpipe: 01:29:561 (2) - rly nazi ; you could improve that shape
13:25 Secretpipe: rly nazi though xD
13:25 Sieg: sure, I'll try to fix
13:25 Secretpipe: once applied
13:25 Secretpipe: update and boom
13:25 Secretpipe: recheck :D
13:26 Sieg: done :3
13:26 Secretpipe: c:
13:27 Secretpipe: alright
13:27 Secretpipe: this is pretty gud to go :D
13:27 Secretpipe: can you post savelog ? c:
13:27 Secretpipe: im lazy ww
13:27 Sieg: sure
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Secretpipe
3,316 posts
Joined December 2012
Secretpipe
This is pretty good to go!

Qualified !
Mao
Elite Mapper II
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Joined December 2012
Mao
Grats :3
Namki
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Joined November 2014
Namki
поздравляю, брат ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥
Sieg
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Joined February 2012
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Sieg
thanks :3
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