1. Void Genome (5.8 stars, 1444 notes)

Mystyk wrote:

Hitsoundok

1. 00:21:474 (1) - 00:42:807 - ezen a szakaszon soft hitsound-okat használj (timing panelben állítsd át), a zene "finomabb" ezen a részen tehát a Normal hitsoundok nagyon durvák hangosak (főleg a sípolás), azokat (a normal hitsoundokat) inkább az "erősebb" részekre tartogasd Javitva
2. 04:00:136 (1) - 04:26:802 - erre a szakaszra ugyanaz vonatkozik, mint amit fent leírtam ^ (soft hitsounds) indok ugyanaz Javitva

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  A dolgok nagyrésze a blanketekből fog állni, szóval ne számíts semmi durvára, de ha ezekre figyelsz, már sokkal szebb lesz a maped! Legtöbb blanket javitva lett ami ki lett elemve és ahol észrevettem a mapon a lehetőséget

1. egyébként hosszú streameket úgy a legegyszerűbb csinálni, ha csinálsz szép slidereket és convert slider to stream o/ akkor lehet ez is szebben nézne ki (kerekebb lenne) 00:17:724 (4,5,6) - meg így a távolság is nagyjából egyenlő lesz a note-ok között, bár nem tudom amúgy lehet ezt a funkciót használtad de lehet rajta még mit csiszolni Nem, nem azt használtam de kerekitettem rajta igy már egész jól néz ki.
2. 00:20:641 (7) - ez is valahogy fentebb van mint kéne (bár lehet direkt), inkább rakd egy picit lentebb --> http://puu.sh/jRzry/bbb6fa1a87.jpg Javitva
3. 00:24:141 (1) - ezt direkt szántad ilyen "elferdült egyenes"-nek? - http://puu.sh/jRzud/537131afea.jpg - ott a végén a piros pont miatt olyan furán néz ki a slider, se nem hullám se nem egyenes, szóval vagy az egyiket vagy a másikat használd látványosan, mert úgy mutat jól - http://puu.sh/jRzy1/830b021013.jpg Javitva
4. 00:21:474 (1) - 00:41:141 (7) - ezen a részen pedig úgy tűnik, hogy össze-vissza használtál távolságokat, tehát ha pl. 00:22:474 (1,2,3) - itt kb. 1,4 a távolság a note-ok között, akkor 00:33:307 (3) - itt miért csak kb. 1,00? egységesen használd a távolságot (hiszen ettől megint csak redezettebbnek fog kinézni a map, és egyébként szerintem sokkal szebb ha 1,00-es távolságot használsz de ez csak személyes vélemény) Nem tudom itörtént itt, újra elhelyeztem a hangokat a teljes szakasz alatt, mostmár egységes
5. 00:43:807 (5) - ezt rakd ugyanoda, ahol 00:43:307 (3) - ez van, így megint csak egy blanket lesz és szépen fog kinézni - http://puu.sh/jRzU9/9e1afd89bd.jpg Javitva
6. 00:43:807 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - itt amúgy nem tudom, hogy direkt nő-e a távolság a note-ok között, de a zene nem nagyon "kér" ilyesmit, szóval szerintem lehetne egyenlő távolság, ha viszont nem akarod akkor is szépítsd kicsit a patternt, pl. egy kisháromszög meg egy nagyháromszög: http://puu.sh/jRA5s/18f7993e1d.jpg - és ha nehéz egyenlő távolságra rakni a (7)-től a (8,9)-et, akkor állítsd kisebbre a grid levelt (nagyobb kockák lesznek) és úgy egyszerűbb átrakosgatni Egyenlő távolságot választottam jobban illik
7. 00:45:807 (4) - nem muszáj mindig ilyen görbéket használni, néha használhatnál egyenes slidereket vagy hullámokat, vagy raksz bele piros pontot, szóval pl.:
   http://puu.sh/jRAmJ/4c3a46be8f.jpg (ja és ilyen slidereket úgy az egyszerűbb csinálni, ha a középső tengelyek valamelyikéhez rakod, a két legszélső pontját a sliderenek ráhelyezed a tengelyre, a slider belsejét pedig megpróbálod szimmetrikusra rakni és így szép hullámod lesz, utána meg nyilván el tudod forgatni ahogy neked tetszik (ctrl+shift+r))
   https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3599612 vagy
   https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3599613 vagy
   https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3599615 etc. Pár helyen kicseréltem egy-egy hosszú görbe slidert egyenes tört sliderekre, jobban illenek mint a hullámok szerintem
8. 00:46:307 (5,6,7,8,9) - ezeket is lehetne rendezettebben rakni kicsit, az első két note-ot rakd le úgy ahogy akarod, aztán copy paste, és arréb rakod: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3599654 (körülbelül ilyenre, de én a következő pattern miatt kicsit fentebb is raktam) Ez rendezettnek készült bár lehet nem egyertélmű ezért szépitettem rajta, remélem mostmár tisztább mit akartam ott elérni
9. 00:47:140 (1,2,3,4,5) - itt is lehetne egyenletesebb a távolság az objectek között, hiszen ezeket szerintem pont nem jumpnak szántad, tehát sokkal szebb és rendezettebb, ha egy távolságot használsz közöttük, pl.: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3599655 Javitva, kicsit máshogy mint a példa
10. 00:48:140 (5) - ha esetleg követed a példámat (de úgy egyébként is) megint görbét használtál, és ilyen sokszor már kicsit unalmas és nem túl esztétikus, szóval szerintem jobban illene megint csak valami más forma: http://puu.sh/jRB7b/d26afc8f38.jpg
    a piros háromszöget pedig azért raktam oda, hogy megmutassam, hogy én személy szerint erre is figyelni szoktam, hogy normális alakzatja legyen (és ezt is az approach circle segítségével) - http://puu.sh/jRBaq/a7ad074306.jpg - mert pl. így látni, hogy az (5)-ös approach circle-je nagyjából a (3,4) körnek a külső szélénél van A blanket javitások után ez a pattern teljesen szimmetrikus lett és a zenére is illik szerintem, nem szeretném megtörni

[Colours]
Combo1 : 200,119,173
Combo2 : 230,230,230
Combo3 : 255,191,228
Combo4 : 189,34,38

Mystyk wrote:

1. 00:58:807 (5) - ehelyett igazán kitalálhatnál valami jobb formát, ez eléggé...nem esztétikus, de ha most nem hallgatsz rám később mások is úgyis mondani fogják szóval xD szerintem ha nagyon hosszú slidereket akarsz csinálni akkor legalább legyenek szimmetrikusak, vagy nem tudom de ez így ;_; Javitva
2. 01:13:140 (2) - ugyanez mint fent, bár nekem az se nagyon tetszik amit én csináltam xD - http://puu.sh/jSyzi/203a149181.jpg Javitva
   A blanketeken is van még mit javítani, az a baj te nem nagyon nézted hozzá az approach circle-t és most még ugyanúgy "nem szép", de egy-két helyen már tényle sokkal jobb lett! Mégtöbb blanket javitva
3. 00:47:807 (4,5) - az ilyen elrendezés pl. szerintem nem annyira szép mert mindkét slider úgy mond..."egy irányba mutat" szóval: http://puu.sh/jSyId/b1cc74ceff.jpg - így jobb a flow is hiszen --> http://puu.sh/jSyJP/8eb916540f.jpg ehelyett http://puu.sh/jSyKN/4388d5938f.jpg
   ezt igazából nehéz elmagyarázni, meg annyira talán nem is érződik de mégis jobb lenne így szerintem Javitva
4. 00:50:807 (3,4,5,1,2) - úgy láttam hogy ezen a részen van még mit javítani amúgy xD a mostani állapotában nagyon eltérnek: http://puu.sh/jSyNz/74628cbaa3.jpg ezen pedig http://puu.sh/jSySG/08fcba726e.jpg tisztán látszódik hogy jobban illeszkednek a görbék Javitva
5. 00:51:140 (4,5) - ennél is az a baj, hogy a te slidereid túl görbék így nem tudnak "egymáshoz simulni" xD de ha kicsit is változtatsz rajta már rögtön jó lesz:
   http://puu.sh/jSyVr/a23dc676c1.jpg
   ezen a képen látszódik jól. hogy nem illeszkedik szépen: http://puu.sh/jSyXl/e398194d15.jpg Javitva
6. 00:51:807 (1,2) - ezeket picit arréb kell rakni meg alakítani rajtuk és jó lesz - http://puu.sh/jSz1j/085910bdbf.jpg - persze még ez a kép sem tökéletes csak a TE slidereidhez képest közelebb áll, mert nem változtattam rajta sokat X_X Javitva
7. 01:05:807 (3,5) - itt csúnyán mutat ha ennyire közel rakod őket egymáshoz ráadásul ez is csúnya 01:05:140 (1,3) - hogy (3) nincs pontosan az (1)-es alatt
   szóval próbáld meg úgy, hogy az előzőek helyére rakod az új jumpnak megfelelő noteokat, így --> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3603523
   utána pedig a (5)-öst tedd távolabb és úgy próbálj meg blanket-et csinálni, mert tényleg nem néz ki jól, ha ennyire közel teszed őket: http://puu.sh/jSzbU/60d90c8264.jpg Javitva
8. 00:26:808 (1,2) - itt is ugyanez, túl közel rakod őket és így "össze-visszának" néz ki --> http://puu.sh/jSz6h/3b6918bdb0.jpg Javitva
9. 01:07:307 (3,6) - blanket, megint túl görbe a slidered - http://puu.sh/jSzfv/afd92340fb.jpg Javitva
10. 01:08:140 (1,4) - az (1)-es görbéjén van még mit szépíteni, és a 4-est próbáld még laposabbra, így jobban fog illeszkedni az (1)-eshez (és ahogy elnézem az is volt a célod) - http://puu.sh/jSzi4/47488dd9e7.jpg Javitva
11. 01:12:140 (5,2) - ezeket meg próbáld úgy rendezni/formázni, hogy ne érjenek egymásba, mert az sem mutat jól - http://puu.sh/jSzn3/61004a7e53.jpg
12. 01:17:473 (4) - fura sliderek Ezt nem érzem furának, játszani sem az
13. 01:36:139 (1,2,3,4) - ennél azért szebben is menne ez a pattern 01:36:806 (3) - ezt pedig egyenesre vagy görbére akartad? ha ilyen kis görbét akarsz neki akkor már inkább egyenes legyen >.< --> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3603556 és https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3603557
    meg persze a távolságra ne felejts el figyelni! Javitva
14. 01:37:806 (7,8) - ezeket miért nem rakod pontosan ezek közé 01:37:473 (5,6) - középre? valahogy így: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3603563 - és akkor mehetne a (8)-as slider vége arra a helyre, ahol a (4)-es slider vége van Javitva
15. 01:38:473 (1,3) - ez ilyen félig blanket félig nem, melyiket akartad? ha nem blanket akkor látványosan ne legyen az, ha az akkor meg szép legyen, tehát:
    https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3603572 és https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3603576 (a (4,1) blanketre is figyelj, mert úgy láttam azt annak szántad csak nem lett elég szép)
    VAGY
    https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3603582
    akármelyiket is választod, használd a distance snap-et, mert attól egységesebb lesz köztük a távolság (hiszen ezeket nem szántad jumpnak) és szebb lesz Javitva

UI.:
Combo színek: http://puu.sh/jSDRY/c91ab11521.png

[Colours]
Combo1 : 200,119,173
Combo2 : 230,230,230
Combo3 : 255,191,228
Combo4 : 189,34,38

Javitva

KASUM1 wrote:

Little thing : your bg should be 1366x768 Fixed

00:00:142 (1,5) - overlap I don't think overlaps are issues in extra difficulties if they are that far on the timeline.
00:51:807 (1,2,5,6) - stack the circles with sliders head I would have to break that line pattern, it plays well how it's placed now.
01:07:307 (3,1) - stack Done
01:10:973 (9,2) - ^ Done
01:52:806 (5,3) - stack with the slider trail Done
02:02:139 (9,1) - stack with the slider head Fixed that part in another way.
02:34:305 (2,6) - stack these if possible Done
02:57:804 (6,8) - overlap, try to blanket (8) Done
03:07:471 (3,5) - overlap try to stack them Done
03:19:804 (4,6) - overlap blanket (6) Done
03:20:804 (1,3) - stack (3) trail with (1) head Fixed that part in another way.
03:36:303 (2,5) - stack with (5) trail Done

[ Another ] wrote:

KASUM1 wrote:

Little thing : your bg should be 1366x768 Fixed

00:00:142 (1,5) - overlap I don't think overlaps are issues in extra difficulties if they are that far on the timeline.
00:51:807 (1,2,5,6) - stack the circles with sliders head I would have to break that line pattern, it plays well how it's placed now.
01:07:307 (3,1) - stack Done
01:10:973 (9,2) - ^ Done
01:52:806 (5,3) - stack with the slider trail Done
02:02:139 (9,1) - stack with the slider head Fixed that part in another way.
02:34:305 (2,6) - stack these if possible Done
02:57:804 (6,8) - overlap, try to blanket (8) Done
03:07:471 (3,5) - overlap try to stack them Done
03:19:804 (4,6) - overlap blanket (6) Done
03:20:804 (1,3) - stack (3) trail with (1) head Fixed that part in another way.
03:36:303 (2,5) - stack with (5) trail Done

Lumael wrote:

[General]

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  Folder:

1. LeadIn: Add some Time LeadIn on the diff file because the song starts on the beginning of the mp3 (Around 1500~2000 should be fine) Done
   
   Other Stuff:
2. Combo Color: Bad... They don't fit at all the background, here I have some suggestions:
   
   collapsed text

   [Colours]
   Combo1 : 129,145,188
   Combo2 : 230,230,230
   Combo3 : 0,64,128
   Combo4 : 22,16,135

   Done
3. Storyboard: Some pictures have dimentions more than the allowed by ranking criteria
   Fixed

[Void Genome]

1. 00:03:308 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - It is a bit odd to play something so hard (kind of) whith lots of singletapping, when the pattern used right before on the same rhythm was very calm and easy to play 00:00:142 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - You have to be consistent with the spread of difficulty through a same section of the song Fixed that part
2. 00:08:141 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This jump feels unecessary and random to my eyes, the rhythm is the same from the beginning which you didn't use any 00:05:475 (1) - With this slider a new section starts in he music but the 1/1 slider fits more than a jump not like the part you mentioned, that jumos fits well on that part
3. 00:46:307 (5,6,7,8,9) - Any reason for jump here too? You didn't use it here 00:43:807 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - and it is the same rhythm 00:43:807 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - Changed on that part a bit
4. 00:48:140 (5) - NC here sounds good imo Done
5. 00:51:807 (1,3) - Very minor but they overlap 00:51:807 (1,3) - it is possible to see Done
6. 01:06:640 (1,2) - Increase DS here to make a jump Done
7. This part feels a bit random 01:04:140 - to 01:24:223 - some parts you are following vocals and the other the drums from the remix, it is a bit hard to guess what you will follow next, I suggest you going for the drums all the time These are 2 triangle jumps embedded to each other, polished it to make it more clear
8. 01:46:139 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - This long stacked stream may be too hard to read, don't you think? I don't think so and it fits better than a spaced stream
9. 01:57:972 (5,6) - Flow here is a bit awful , doing Control H on 01:58:139 (6) - will help a bit Done
10. 02:00:140 (2,4) - Minor: overlap here Fixed
11. 02:21:138 (7,1) - ^ Fixed
12. 02:22:138 (3,5) - ^ this one is a bit ugly imo Fixed
13. 02:42:805 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - and on: This is such a very long streamy section lol, are you sure you want people to keep streaming all this long? the beginning of the stream is very calm on the song and it's even hard to hear, I think should spam more 1/4 sliders with reverse arrows It's very easy to play, low spacing and it's not even that long, should be okay
14. 02:56:138 (1,3,4) - Triple kill overlap :3 02:56:138 (1,4) - These 2 sliders are far enough on the timeline to not be a problem, 3-4 fixed
15. 02:57:138 (4,6) - ^ Fixed
16. 02:59:471 (3,5) - ^ Fixed that part
17. 03:00:138 (5,7) - Try a blanket here to make the pattern prettier? ^Fixed
18. 03:02:137 (4,6) - Tiny overlap here Fixed
19. 03:13:971 (3,5) - ^ Fixed
20. 03:39:470 (3,1) - ^ Fixed
21. 03:39:803 (4,2) - ^ (I am only linking overlaps that I found ugly, the good ones I didn't) Fixed
22. 03:49:803 (2,4) - ^ Fixed
23. 04:07:469 (1,2,3,4,5) - What about Distance Snap here ? :3 Fixed
24. 04:09:136 (8,1) - Overlap here Fixed
25. 04:10:136 (4,5,6) - Try a 1/1 slider at 04:10:136 - this will follow the rhythm much better The circles are good there imo
26. 04:27:136 (2,4) - Overlap here Fixed
27. 05:05:801 (7,1) - ^ Fixed
28. 05:37:467 (5,7) - ^ Stacking will solve this problem Fixed
29. 05:39:801 (4,6) - Overlap again here :3 Fixed
30. 05:56:967 (7,9) - NC here will work nicely Fixed

1. seems like you're using images from the sb of https://osu.ppy.sh/b/544993 in here, with pretty similar graphic stuff, did you ask Ashasaki for them or is that unintentional?
2. most of your normal whistles are a bit too loud for my tastes, p/4492818 charles explains the problem i currently have with them pretty well in that post
3. the volume for most of the beginning is a bit very loud, the normal sampleset nearly overpowers everything else
4. most of your streams and patterns look really messy, I assume you drew the streams by h hand while activating distance snap or something, at least that's the only way i can explin shapes like 02:08:139 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - where just placing sliders and then going to compose -> convert slider to stream would easily make fore a much neater streamshape (see the random space at around 02:09:805 (1,2,3) - )
5. generally a lot of your jumps feel out of place with a song as steady as this, to explain this a bit better I'll explain what happens when you place a jump
   -> when placing a jump betwen 2 notes, you obviously have to move faster in order to hit the note that is jumped to, thus it puts pressure on the player that has to play the pattern. Logically Jumps would make sense at places that are stressed in the song, and with a song as constant as this one you could try to be more consistent about their usage (e.g. you make one sound instance a jump while making another instance of the same sound an antijump it leads to your map being messy as hell pretty quickly because the song has a really strict system while your map does not)
   examples of this:
   00:08:141 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - why is this so drastically different than the 2 previous patterns
   01:04:140 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i can't really see what you're focusing here, it's neither instruments nor vocals because for that 01:04:473 (3,1) - should have more spacing than the whole rest if it was instruments and if it was vocals 01:03:807 (4,1) - should have more space as well as 01:04:973 (6) - in relation to 01:04:640 (4,5,6) - so yes it seems like you're placing 2 trianglepatterns for the sake of placing triangle patterns
   01:09:473 (5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - what exactly is building up here to make you use a buildup spacing pattern?
   01:13:140 (2) - if this is supposed to follow the vocal... uhh that vocal you may want to follow starts in 01:13:307 - ????
   01:20:140 (1,2,3,4) - oh look a place where you could use buildup spacing circle patterns because that's what the bass in the song does and you placed sliders all over them :/
   01:54:806 (1) - judging by the way you spaced patterns for vocals i don't get why this doesn't get space but has vocals
   01:59:472 (7) - this plays more like a stop than an actual motion
   02:32:138 - why doies this part get much higher overall spacing than 00:42:807 - onwards while being the same kind of thing repeating?
   so ya, overall i don't have that much a clue of what's going on and what isn't, spacing could make more sense overall this aren't like the only thing, it's all over the place i just decided that this is enough to show you the idea
6. starting from 02:32:138 - inori's hand will be cut off in 4:3 resolution is that intended?
7. overlapping patterns like 02:56:138 (1,3,4) - look unappealing visually, especially when only sliderborders touch, there are a few other instances of these kinda pattern 03:22:804 (1,3) - 03:27:137 (1,3) - etc etc :/

Okoratu wrote:

1. seems like you're using images from the sb of https://osu.ppy.sh/b/544993 in here, with pretty similar graphic stuff, did you ask Ashasaki for them or is that unintentional? No, all of the SB elements were found by me or created by me, havent touched any other SB for it.
2. most of your normal whistles are a bit too loud for my tastes, p/4492818 charles explains the problem i currently have with them pretty well in that post Decreased the volumes by 5%, i dont know if it will fix the problem since on my setup it wasnt that loud
3. the volume for most of the beginning is a bit very loud, the normal sampleset nearly overpowers everything else Decreased the volume of the first 3 sections from 55% to 45%
4. most of your streams and patterns look really messy, I assume you drew the streams by h hand while activating distance snap or something, at least that's the only way i can explin shapes like 02:08:139 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - where just placing sliders and then going to compose -> convert slider to stream would easily make fore a much neater streamshape (see the random space at around 02:09:805 (1,2,3) - ) Fixed that stream and some other to be more consistent
5. generally a lot of your jumps feel out of place with a song as steady as this, to explain this a bit better I'll explain what happens when you place a jump
   -> when placing a jump betwen 2 notes, you obviously have to move faster in order to hit the note that is jumped to, thus it puts pressure on the player that has to play the pattern. Logically Jumps would make sense at places that are stressed in the song, and with a song as constant as this one you could try to be more consistent about their usage (e.g. you make one sound instance a jump while making another instance of the same sound an antijump it leads to your map being messy as hell pretty quickly because the song has a really strict system while your map does not)
   examples of this:
   00:08:141 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - why is this so drastically different than the 2 previous patterns Remapped that part
   01:04:140 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i can't really see what you're focusing here, it's neither instruments nor vocals because for that 01:04:473 (3,1) - should have more spacing than the whole rest if it was instruments and if it was vocals 01:03:807 (4,1) - should have more space as well as 01:04:973 (6) - in relation to 01:04:640 (4,5,6) - so yes it seems like you're placing 2 trianglepatterns for the sake of placing triangle patterns I think that pattern fits that part of the song as it is, i tried different possibilites but none of them were better
   01:09:473 (5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - what exactly is building up here to make you use a buildup spacing pattern? Remapped to be more consistent
   01:13:140 (2) - if this is supposed to follow the vocal... uhh that vocal you may want to follow starts in 01:13:307 - ???? Fixed
   01:54:806 (1) - judging by the way you spaced patterns for vocals i don't get why this doesn't get space but has vocals Fixed(? im not sure what you mean)
   01:59:472 (7) - this plays more like a stop than an actual motion Fixed
   02:32:138 - why doies this part get much higher overall spacing than 00:42:807 - onwards while being the same kind of thing repeating?
   so ya, overall i don't have that much a clue of what's going on and what isn't, spacing could make more sense overall this aren't like the only thing, it's all over the place i just decided that this is enough to show you the idea Remapped that part a bit
6. starting from 02:32:138 - inori's hand will be cut off in 4:3 resolution is that intended? Fixed
7. overlapping patterns like 02:56:138 (1,3,4) - look unappealing visually, especially when only sliderborders touch, there are a few other instances of these kinda pattern 03:22:804 (1,3) - 03:27:137 (1,3) - etc etc :/ Fixed most unintentional overlaps

ZLOdeuka- wrote:

[General]

• I found no gross violations! The only thing that can prevent rank this colors new combos: they should not merge with the background and to be almost identical. I suggest that instead of 4 colors add shade of pink or red... SB also present in other colors. Readded the colours from Mystyk's mod.

Kiai time

• 2nd kiai time You can ends here 03:57:470 - because the music here has calmed down sharply Fixed

[Void Genome]

• 00:18:474 (5,6) - Why are there different spacings? This confuses. can do the same spacing as in the rest of the stream Fixed
• 00:23:974 (7,8) - This is a very sudden jump - Mark it with a new combo ( as here 00:26:808 (1) ) Done
• 00:29:474 (8) - ^ Done
• 00:52:140 (2,6) - overlap. Try to remove the imposition of a curve Fixed
• 00:58:807 (5) - new combo I dont really think that this should be a NC
• 01:05:140 (1,2) - blanket (Make neater blanket) that's what you have now and this is something that will look better Fixed
• 01:19:640 (3) - move here x:364 y:145 -that to maintain a smooth flow of the game after the slider and will look neater Fixed
• 01:20:140 (1,2,3,4) - I propose to increase a little distance between them. in order to avoid overlapping of. that's what you have now and and this is something that will look better Fixed
• 01:21:473 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this 01:21:473 (1,3,5) - must be a copy of the 01:21:640 (2,4,6) - . But here 01:21:640 (2,4,6) - direct flow. Make the same side 01:21:473 (1,3,5). and 01:22:140 (5,1) - remove overlap Fixed
• 01:37:473 (5) - new combo: here it is necessary to allocate the change spacings. Fixed
• 01:49:472 (1,2) - blanket Fixed
• 02:34:138 (1,2,3,4) - Do it in a rhombus or square. it looks bad . it will be better this way Fixed
• 02:53:471 (1,2,3) - do the same spacings Fixed
• 03:26:804 (6,1,2) - sliders do the same. and make it so that the circle was exactly between them Fixed
• 03:28:137 (6) - new combo Fixed
• 03:29:137 (10) - move here 03:29:470. Otherwise lost rhythm with the large white teak Remapped that part a bit.
• 03:57:553 (1) - move end here 03:59:803 . suitable for vocals and music. because the spinner to finish on a blue tick strange Fixed
• 04:54:135 (1,2) - blanket Fixed
• 04:58:635 (3,4) - ^ Fixed
• 05:14:385 (4,1,2,3,4,1,2) -It looks very crooked :< Better to do something like this Fixed
• 05:57:466 (3) - new combo. because after a sharp jump is hard to understand Fixed
• 05:57:550 (1) - ends here 06:00:300 Fixed

Maakkeli wrote:

[Void Genome]

I didnt agree with the kickslider suggestions because i think they are more boring to play than a normal stream and i didnt agree woth most of the ctrl+g suggestions so i wont commentate them one by one.

Tried to add more diversity to the jump patterns but the ones that i used fit the music the most imo so i wont commentate them one by one.

00:02:141 (7) - http://puu.sh/kki4w/78492275a7.jpg ? Thats one of the rare places where a reverse slider fits the music imo, so i dont agree
00:04:475 (7) - Fix blanket Fixed
00:05:308 (10) - Hmm... maybe just make 00:05:141 (9) - a 1/2 slider it just feels better imo since there's really nothing playing at 00:05:308 (10) - except some random super silent kick Done
00:05:975 (2,3,4,5,6) - This does not sound right to my ear. Remapped that part a bit
00:23:974 (7,1) - Idk about this. This spacing feels too big (5,53 distance) 00:26:641 (7,1) - and then this jump which is inconsistent with the spacing of the latter. I feel like the more you do these the bigger the spacing should get. Maybe start from something like 3,00 and the last jump could maybe be at 5,00 or more distance but you should experiment this yourself and see what feels the best. Also this 00:40:141 (1) - slider is too round. Yea I got infected with Azer's buttslider thing. Okay now I'm done with this part Decreased few spacings and fixed that slider
00:50:140 (2) - Should the red controlpoint be on the center or something? Anyways I feel like when you do these kind of sliders you make them too sharp but that is just my preference. Fixed
00:58:807 (5) - This just feels too fast. Idk maybe take the sv a bit down It would cause some readability/playability problems i think
01:14:807 (1,2,3) - You can give these more space Done
01:20:140 (1,2,3,4) - These too Done
01:38:973 (2) - I feel like this would be better when stacked to 01:39:139 (3) - Done
01:40:473 (4,5) - This feels very awkward when you transition from a huge jump to this kind of super small jump Fixed
02:12:139 (4) - This whistle sounds random Fixed, probably it was a misclick
02:48:804 (1,2,3,4) - You can give kicksliders more space I dont want them to be to hard but i gave them a bit more spacing
02:50:804 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ ^
03:13:471 (7,8,9) - This triple just sounds awkward Fixed
03:25:470 (1,2,3) - Space more Done
03:52:136 (1,2,3,4) - Spaced inconsistently and you can again give these more space Fixed
04:00:136 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - You could still put more slower sv Yeah this is the slowest part of the music but the vocal is strong enough to keep this SV i think
04:16:136 (4) - This is ugly. Too wiggly that might be the case. Fixed
05:15:635 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - Now this is just lazy repeating the same pattern over and over but just increasing the spacing Remapped that part a bit
05:25:801 (3,4,5) - Space more. Now these overlap a bit and look dumb Done
05:30:801 (1,2,3,4) - ^ Done
05:32:134 (1,2,3,4) - ^ Done
05:38:133 (7) - http://puu.sh/klxEU/f5989531cf.jpg ? Like the first one
05:43:801 (3) - This maps nothing I think you mean 05:43:634 (2) - but without that circle its sounds weird to me

Asserin wrote:

Void Genome

1. 00:46:807 (9) - It look nice but i think it will be better if CTRL+G :3 It will have nice flow Done
2. 00:00:142 (1,2,3) - Correct blanket cus its uneven a little if u will see this AR on circle u will see that one overlaps the slider and the second not http://puu.sh/krpft/a57208cb9a.jpg Fixed
3. 00:06:641 (4) - CTRL+G ? Its just sugestion Done
4. 00:51:140 (5) - CTRL+G work nice with song :3 But i know what u wanted to make but i think its not bad thats all That would break the pattern and it plays well as it is
5. 02:04:972 (6,7,8) - I think it will be better to play if u will stack this on slider 02:05:305 (1) I dont really like when there is a triplet on a slider start but there is an unmapped blue tick between them, i dont know i just dont like it at all, if you refering to the slider end it wouldnt look so good
6. 02:21:472 (1,2) - Uneven blanet a little Fixed
7. 02:22:138 (3,4,5) - Correct blanket cus its uneven a little if u will see this AR on circle u will see that one overlaps the slider and the second not Fixed
8. 02:24:805 (3) - CTRL+G make nice flow :3 Done
9. 02:40:805 (7) - ^ Done
10. 03:02:471 (5) - CTRL+G pls :3 Same with the same patten above
11. 03:03:471 (8) - ^ ^

riktoi wrote:

[Void Genome]

00:01:475 (5,3) - these could be converted to hitcircles Done with 00:01:475 (5) -

00:09:475 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I think the spacing could be lower for these as they act like bursts Imo they fit the music and the style of the map so they should be okay with that spacing

I will on list the ones that i agree withˇ
01:07:723 -
01:12:057 -
03:19:720 -
03:23:720 -
03:42:720 -
05:03:385 -

02:48:804 (1,2,3,4) - you could make these a bit prettier (02:48:804 (1,1) - follow the same angle and 02:48:971 (2,2) - follow the same angle) Done
02:50:804 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ (maybe increase sv?) Adjusted a bit on the notes, increased SV from .70 to .80

02:52:138 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - following the vocals might be better here

03:13:471 (7,8,1,2,3) - I think you should make this pattern follow the drum better The music strong here and the vocal too, i will stick with the stream

05:33:467 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - make the spacing really small in the start and then make it gradually increase (to maybe to the ds where it's currently) It wouldnt fit the music that well i think
also you should totally lower the hitsounds on these Done

1. 00:00:142 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this spacing is weird, you use random, 1.00, 1.40. etc..., I don't feel this song have "high" or "quiet", fix all spacing 1.20x ? because this number, I can see other parts is 1.40x. So you must fix your consistency
2. 00:02:808 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^ same
3. 00:14:975 (7) - should be NC because you style, you put NC in 00:10:975, but other parts not, if you don't wanna NC in 00:14:975 (7), I would said remove nc 00:09:475 (1) and 00:12:141 (1), you really be carefully by you style consistency
4. 00:22:474 (1) - I don't feel need NC, the song is like "continue" prefer remove nc IMO
5. 00:25:141 (1) - ^ same
6. 00:30:474 (1) - ^ same
7. 00:33:141 (1) - ^ same
8. 00:35:807 (1) - ^ same
9. 00:36:807 (1) - you shouldn't NC this, because is inconsistency with you style, example in part 00:34:141 that is not NC, so in 00:36:807 (1) remove nc
10. 00:38:474 (1) - ^ same
11. 00:39:474 (1) - ^ same
12. 00:25:474 (3) - I don't like this curve, try improve curve like you did in 00:22:474 (1)
13. 00:30:807 (3) - ^ same curve
14. 00:32:474 (2) - ^ same
15. 00:38:807 (3) - ^ same
16. 00:46:640 (8,9) - inconsistency spacing, the spacing should 1.40x
17. 00:48:140 (5,6,7,8,9) - ^ same
18. 00:42:807 at 01:04:140 - you spacing is kindy random, lot spacing doesn't make sense, lt me give example 00:50:807 (4,5,6) - this spacing you make 1.20x but in part similiar like this in 00:51:807 (1,2) is 1.40x. I suggest recheck your spacing and fix spacing all objects ith DS 1.40x (expect jump and anti-spacing)
19. 01:16:473 (1,2,3) - the shape are different, try use same shape curve ?
20. 01:20:140 (1,2,3,4) - is unsysmentric, if fix symentric is better like this http://puu.sh/kHLkM/c897aee759.jpg
21. 01:22:473 (1) - this should keep same place like 01:21:473 (1,3,5), I mean move place to x:304 y:104 and fix spacing stream, http://puu.sh/kHLuI/d3b5ed074a.jpg
22. 01:56:139 (5,6,7) - this flow is weird the 01:56:472 (6) - should be CTRL+G then in 01:56:806 (7) - make jump or normal spacing like this http://puu.sh/kHLSQ/98dcae6a25.jpg better flow IMO
23. 02:15:472 (1) - shouldn't NC
24. 03:20:470 (8,9) - CTRL + G better flow

Pereira006 wrote:

[Void Genome]

Gameplay:

1. 00:00:142 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this spacing is weird, you use random, 1.00, 1.40. etc..., I don't feel this song have "high" or "quiet", fix all spacing 1.20x ? because this number, I can see other parts is 1.40x. So you must fix your consistency Fixed most of the spacing problems on the entire map
2. 00:14:975 (7) - should be NC because you style, you put NC in 00:10:975, but other parts not, if you don't wanna NC in 00:14:975 (7), I would said remove nc 00:09:475 (1) and 00:12:141 (1), you really be carefully by you style consistency Fixed
3. 00:22:474 (1) - I don't feel need NC, the song is like "continue" prefer remove nc IMO Fixed
4. 00:25:141 (1) - ^ same Fixed
5. 00:30:474 (1) - ^ same Fixed
6. 00:33:141 (1) - ^ same Fixed
7. 00:35:807 (1) - ^ same Fixed
8. 00:36:807 (1) - you shouldn't NC this, because is inconsistency with you style, example in part 00:34:141 that is not NC, so in 00:36:807 (1) remove nc Fixed
9. 00:38:474 (1) - ^ same Fixed
10. 00:39:474 (1) - ^ same Fixed
11. 00:25:474 (3) - I don't like this curve, try improve curve like you did in 00:22:474 (1) Fixed
12. 00:30:807 (3) - ^ same curve Fixed
13. 00:32:474 (2) - ^ same Fixed
14. 00:38:807 (3) - ^ same Fixed
15. 01:16:473 (1,2,3) - the shape are different, try use same shape curve ? Fixed
16. 01:20:140 (1,2,3,4) - is unsysmentric, if fix symentric is better like this http://puu.sh/kHLkM/c897aee759.jpg Fixed
17. 01:22:473 (1) - this should keep same place like 01:21:473 (1,3,5), I mean move place to x:304 y:104 and fix spacing stream, http://puu.sh/kHLuI/d3b5ed074a.jpg Fixed
18. 01:56:139 (5,6,7) - this flow is weird the 01:56:472 (6) - should be CTRL+G then in 01:56:806 (7) - make jump or normal spacing like this http://puu.sh/kHLSQ/98dcae6a25.jpg better flow IMO Fixed
19. 02:15:472 (1) - shouldn't NC Fixed
20. 03:20:470 (8,9) - CTRL + G better flow Fixed