[General]
The mp3 is pretty low quality. Try this one. Use offset 12,876. Don't forget to resnap all notes/timing sections. I'd check the offset just in case too. Also, you'll have to rename the file to the name of the MP3 in your folder currently unless you want to do some .osu editing.
Note that all the times I give on the mods are from the offset I gave here.
Try using claps on the snare hits later on in the song (maybe around 1 minute in) to raise the intensity of the song a bit. It feels kind of subdued with only whistles and finishes.
Try to end the songs with a spinner instead of normal beats. It tends to feel anti-climactic otherwise.
Use the same combo colors throughout all of your difficulties.
[Easy]
Overall, the use of soft whistle feels over-done. Try using it as an emphasis of the note instead of just a way to make it louder.
The two spinners at the beginning is kind of weird. Maybe only use the second one?
00:27:777 (2,3) - Try to not have these covered up by the slider.
The way the song goes, it feels that the slider should start at 00:41:110 (4) instead of 00:40:718.
[Normal]
Run through this difficulty with distance snap on and check your spacing. It varies occasionally and makes for some confusing feeling rhythms. (Like at 00:42:679 (3,4,5) - )
[Hard]
There's that double spinner start again. Bleh.
00:44:248 (1,2,3,6) - These triplet rhythms really don't fit at this part of the song at all. =
00:51:502 (4) - Line this up with the rest of the combo
[Kurai's Hard]
00:37:973 - This is a really weird spot to have a kiai section.
01:03:071 - This one is better, but considering you turn it off when the song repeats that section exactly (with some flutes, I guess) right afterward... Eh.
Why so many combo changes at 01:47:188 but not for 01:47:188?
Keep it up!
The mp3 is pretty low quality. Try this one. Use offset 12,876. Don't forget to resnap all notes/timing sections. I'd check the offset just in case too. Also, you'll have to rename the file to the name of the MP3 in your folder currently unless you want to do some .osu editing.
Note that all the times I give on the mods are from the offset I gave here.
Try using claps on the snare hits later on in the song (maybe around 1 minute in) to raise the intensity of the song a bit. It feels kind of subdued with only whistles and finishes.
Try to end the songs with a spinner instead of normal beats. It tends to feel anti-climactic otherwise.
Use the same combo colors throughout all of your difficulties.
[Easy]
Overall, the use of soft whistle feels over-done. Try using it as an emphasis of the note instead of just a way to make it louder.
The two spinners at the beginning is kind of weird. Maybe only use the second one?
00:27:777 (2,3) - Try to not have these covered up by the slider.
The way the song goes, it feels that the slider should start at 00:41:110 (4) instead of 00:40:718.
[Normal]
Run through this difficulty with distance snap on and check your spacing. It varies occasionally and makes for some confusing feeling rhythms. (Like at 00:42:679 (3,4,5) - )
[Hard]
There's that double spinner start again. Bleh.
00:44:248 (1,2,3,6) - These triplet rhythms really don't fit at this part of the song at all. =
00:51:502 (4) - Line this up with the rest of the combo
[Kurai's Hard]
00:37:973 - This is a really weird spot to have a kiai section.
01:03:071 - This one is better, but considering you turn it off when the song repeats that section exactly (with some flutes, I guess) right afterward... Eh.
Why so many combo changes at 01:47:188 but not for 01:47:188?
Keep it up!