Wow, not a bad song but the singer sounds a little wrong for this one, anyhow:
All with Grid Level 3 and no Distance Snapping if not stated to be with Distance Snapping.
[Al's Difficulty]
00:08:838 (6) - Moving this and everything up to first spinner 1 grid up looks better angle-wise.
00:21:459 (1,2) - Move these 2 grids to the right.
00:24:770 (4,5,6) - Move these 1/2 (half) a grid to the left, without GS of course.
00:26:425 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Not sure about this shape, at least make it more symmetrical,
maybe like this.
00:28:494 (1,2,3) - Move these 1 grid to the right, better angle to 4 that way.
00:30:563 (5,8) - "Opt" - Maybe move the second last (second first for (8)) control point a little down/left (down/right for (8)) to make the end/start of the curvature have a more horizontal approach.
00:36:356 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - Move these down a little without GS to align (4) better horizontally with (3) end point circle (EPC) and (9)'s EPC better with start of next combo.
01:06:976 (5,6,7) - *Opt* - Move these first 1 grid up, then move (5) 1 grid the the right to make angle of them better.
[Wojjan's Insane]
00:54:045 (4,5) - First snap (4) to the grid at (-2,2), then move (5) without GS and align it perfectly below EPC of (4).
[Normal]
00:04:907 (2) - First, if you could move the red and yellow combo following the blue 1 grid down that would be awesome, then move from this, (2) of blue combo, up to and including the yellow combo slightly down without GS to align (2) better with EPC of (1) in blue combo.
00:17:735 (2) - Moving this slightly up and right without GS looks better to me, so it becomes a consistent angle from (2) into (3)'s starting angle.
00:19:804 (4) - Moving this 1-2 "ticks" to the left without GS looks a little better.
00:25:597 (9) - First move the 3 last control points of this slider 1 grid to the left and then move the second and third control points 1 more grid to the left and finish it off with snapping it to (8) with 0.4x distance snap.
00:55:390 (1,6) - Move these two of the same combo about 2 "ticks" to the right without GS to align them better with (2) and (5).
00:59:528 (2,3,4,5,6) - Move these about 1-2 tick to the left without GS to align (6)'s EPC better with (7)'s start.
*Dilemma Found*01:07:597 (6) - Start by moving the first control point of this 1 grid down.
01:07:597 (6-yellow) - Move this and up to including yellow combo 1 grid to the right.
01:07:597 (6,1,2) - Move these to the right without GS to align (2)'s EPC better with (3) vertically.
01:08:425 (1,2) - Move these 1 grid up.
*Dilemma Fixed*01:11:942 (1) - Move this about 2 "ticks" without GS to the right to align it's EPC better with (2).
01:13:597 (2) - Move the last control point of the slider 2 grids down to better approximate the angle of it in correspondence to (3).
01:14:425 (3) - Move this 1 grid up.
01:14:838 (4) - Move this 4 grids up and 1 grid right.
01:15:252 (5) - Move this 3 grids up and 2 grids left.
(The last 4 circle changes really does well with the slowing down of the last part of song and the fix in angles makes me come.)