[general]

1. Source should be "Hayate no Gotoku!!" only
2. remove "anime" from tags, since this will be added as genre
3. try 5.916 ms as offset and resnap all notes afterwards
4. max size for SB elements is 800x600, resize your elements and full-submit
5. maybe add an easier diff

[Butler]

1. 03:09:461 (5,1) - switch new combo
2. 03:17:931 (9,1) - ^
3. 03:19:343 (8,1) - ^

fumoffu star :3

My final mod as for your diffs, no kudosu please (I'm afraid I've too much from a single map lol).

[New Butler]
00:55:327 (1,2,3,4) - not equally spaced
01:01:680 (3,4,1,2,3) - hmm, I think making these into a triangular pattern (like "<") will be better
01:03:798 (1,2,3,4) - spacing suddenly so small? Hmm... I'm not sure.
01:08:033 (1,2,3) - spacing suddenly becomes small! Hmm, not sure either.
01:10:857 (1,1,1,1,1) - in general make the geometry better
02:31:151 (1,1,1,1,1) - ^
02:59:739 (5) - one grid left

[Butler]
01:00:798 (1~9) - make the geometry better
01:07:680 (7) - spacing, too close from (6)
I'd like to say the last part of the map IS hard lol~

Although IMO there are still some minor spacing issues in [Butler], but I think it isn't that bad.

Now I am happy to give a star

[New butler]
01:02:033(4)-move 1 grid right

[yongtw123's Ojou-sama]
02:11:563(x)-add a note,set up new combo,and remove new combo at 02:11 739(1)
03:25:327(2)-move 1 grid up?
03:25:680(4,5)-move 1 grid right?

[Butler]
02:12:798(3)-move 1 grid left
02:12:974(4)-spacing
02:24:284(8)-move 1 grid down

Star~~
Great SB~

Haii,

[Overall]
01:12:268 SB looks ugly. The exclamation mark strikes through "dai". bah.
02:52:504 ~ 03:03:798 I don't see why there should be a Kiai Time here.
Kiai Time should be the same on ALL difficulties.
Tags: buttler -> butler ? dunno if it's correct

[Easy]
01:52:857 (1- and following notes) - 1 tick up

[Guest Diff.]
03:25:151 (Whole Combo) - Look at the screenshot. You can stack the 5 too if you want so.


[Hard]
03:14:386 (5, [7]) - Spacing

+star

I was asked to mod this, so here's a very short list of some minor stuff... You can just ignore this post if you don't agree with it ;p

[Ojou-sama]
Add proper Kiai timing sections from other difficulties

[Butler]
01:21:798 (9) - inconsistent spacing (too far), may look pretty but it was confusing because the rest of the map has almost perfect consistent spacing


*

Xero_HT wrote:

+star

creo que se le olvido la estrella...

All fixed! (ﾉ>ω<)ﾉ

creo que se le olvido la estrella...

LOL

lulz..

creo que se le olvido la estrella...

good thing i translated that

there is your star ^^

Estrellita ^^ , ta bonito el mapita ;3

Argh, for one, the SB elements after 01:57:79 - in this map move way too fast. Please, slow them down. It makes it disorientating for the player.

You've also put "moe 87915 sample.jpg" in the fail section when it should really be in the Background. You definitely need to change this.

Also, your difficulty spread is H I I. Please, if it's possible, map an easier difficulty.

[New Butler]
Capitalize the B, please.

01:02:03 (4) - Too far from the previous circle.
01:36:26 - Uninherited Section not needed. Please remove.
01:38:73 (2,3,4,5) - Kinda unexpected, move them closer to each other.
02:11:91 (8,9,10) - Align them with 2,3 and move the consecutive objects in regards to spacing.

[yongtw123]
Alright.

[Butler]
01:04:32 (5) - That's such cheap spacing, bring it closer to 4.

Hmm...

Hi hi!

Here are some suggestions for your map, you don't have to change them if you don't agree with me
Let's go!!

~All Diffs~
- You need an easier diff, this map is unrankable without a diff with less than 3 stars.
- The text images have a lot of "blank space" around them. You should reduce it =x
- The spinnercircle image size must be 666x666. Resize it.
- Uhhh... what? you're using spinnermetre on storyboard? Unfortunately, SB images can't exceed 800x600px, so you'll have to make a new image for this :/
- Make sure you fix what MarioBros777 said.

~New butler~
- As MB777 said, capitalize the B on Butler.

00:45:445 (1,2,3,4,5) - Fix spacing.
00:57:974 (2,3) - ^
01:00:974 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:08:386 (2,3) - ^
01:14:033 (2,3) - ^
01:23:739 (1,1,2,3,4) - ^
01:33:092 (7) - New Combo.
02:01:680 (1,2,3,4) - Fix spacing.

~yongtw123's Ojou-sama~
- No Kiai time? I LOVE YOU

03:26:386 (1) - Finish it on 03:33:798?

~Butler~
01:33:092 (8) - New Combo.
02:12:974 (4) - Fix spacing.
02:23:563 (5,6,7,8) - ^
02:30:974 (3) - New Combo.
02:40:504 (5) - Fix spacing.
02:51:798 (1) - Not sure if this spinner is rankable or not... maybe get a second opinion? oxo
02:54:974 (4) - New Combo.

Nice map ^^ *star*

Beuchi-chan wrote:

~yongtw123's Ojou-sama~
- No Kiai time? I LOVE YOU (ﾉﾟωﾟ)ﾉ

03:26:386 (1) - Finish it on 03:33:798? sure, slightly modified timing sections too

~Butler~
02:51:798 (1) - Not sure if this spinner is rankable or not... maybe get a second opinion? oxo IMO replace this spinner with something else may be better

Updated. And with some xBubu's suggestions.

Thanks for the modding!

Download: KOTOKO - Daily-daily Dream (Kotomi-chan) [yongtw123's Ojou-sama].osu

I was asked to mod this, but refrained to since it was WIP and waiting for guest diffs when asked~
Now I see it in Pending... so.. lessee..
Wobbly spinner ;-;


New Butler- eh, yea, definitely map something easier to follow, basically, don't map to the vocal
hmm delete all unused timing panels, theres quite a few
01:25:680 (2) - ... maybe shift this left a tick, so 1,2,3,4 looks like a slanted square?
01:39:092 (4) - down a tick please, so the spacing looks more even here
meh, won't ask for any more changes unless you're not ganna map something easier

yongtw123's-
umm.. mmm... maybe add .25 second lead in time, just for the sake of this map having the Skip button there, might ruin the sb a tiny bit though (just a flash of the bg at the start)
00:33:268 (2) - this slider sounds odd since it doesn't have the whistle slider sound like the other sliders around it
00:58:857 (7,9) - make both of these with slider slide sound or not
02:11:563 - preferred you added a note here, since you're following instrumental
Good, the claps come out kinda odd though..

Butler-
follow a constant clap usage or don't use it at all... @.@ the claps come and go, sounds kinda odd (like the start and 01:58:327 on...)
same timing panels as Normal .-.
02:51:798 (1) - its not unrankable, but very uncomfortable to play, don't think ninja spinner works well on the map, would replace
the map is a bit messy... @.@ don't wanna point every little thing...

I find it odd that you storyboarded lyrics on a few parts instead of all...
Needs more mods >.>

Shinxyn wrote:

yongtw123's-
umm.. mmm... maybe add .25 second lead in time, just for the sake of this map having the Skip button there, might ruin the sb a tiny bit though (just a flash of the bg at the start)
I'll leave this to Kotomi-chan I guess...

00:33:268 (2) - this slider sounds odd since it doesn't have the whistle slider sound like the other sliders around it
Well, I can't explain it well but this stanza sounds a little different from the others... Hmm, like more quiet, less important that kind of feeling. Well, I add whistle to both ends with no slider slide sound. Hope that's ok.

00:58:857 (7,9) - make both of these with slider slide sound or not Made them both not
02:11:563 - preferred you added a note here, since you're following instrumental
Err, like I said this part feels a bit different from the others. Aw, if more modders spot this then I'll change maybe :S :

Good, the claps come out kinda odd though..
I tried some combinations but subject to my rather novice hitsound abilities I find the current one okay. Suggestions welcome~

Thanks for the suggestions~ Updated.

Download: KOTOKO - Daily-daily Dream (Kotomi-chan) [yongtw123's Ojou-sama].osu

All fixed, added easiier diff and skin changes (ﾉﾟωﾟ)ﾉ

[General]

- Resnap the green timing sections on every diff
- The MP3 is too soft. here is a better mp3: http://www.mediafire.com/?n0mmnztwx4r
- Nice skin :3

[SB]

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7219 make it fade out completely at this point
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7220 'Dou' should zoom out in the beginning just like haku ryo ku dai?
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7221 remove this keyframe in 'fade'
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7222 remove 2 scale keyframes, it should look like the screenshot
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7223 Make it completely fade out at this point, also I think it looks the best when you fade out 'Dai' and '!' at the same time

Sakura big.png The sakura feels unnatural, it looks better when you remove some keyframes from 'rotate', keep as little as possible.

[New Butler]

You have to look out with the spacing, like at 00:53:916 (1,2,1,2) -
However, it's still easy to read. But prevent spacing like this in the future, it could get bad.

01:37:327 (2,3) - move these 1 grid right, you might want to move 01:38:210 (1,2,3,4,5) - 1 grid to the right aswell.

[Butler]

Nothing wrong, pretty good map, but also here you must look out.
00:56:739 (1,2,3) - (1) and (2) aren't overlapped, but (2) and (3) are. It kind of gives the feeling the beat is earlier when it's overlapped.
either you make all beats which are 1/2 from eachother overlap eachother, or make them not overlap eachother.

01:38:210 (1,2,3,4,5) - good example which can confuse people.

[yongtw123's Ojou-sama]

good, fun map :3

[Combat Butler]

the jumps aren't really good.
01:07:151 (4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - I lost my grip on the map when I played this part, and I missed serveral beats.

Jumps should be predictable, shouldn't be confusing, shouldn't break the flow of the map, and should fit in your rhythm.
When your jumps meet that, you can make them as hard as you want xD

01:26:386 (5,6,1) - restack, this looked wrong in playmode.

Real1 modding as requested. Sorry for the delay!
Keep in mind that these are only suggestions.

[General]
Maybe map something before the lyrics? The intro sure is long otherwise. Seems strange. This does not apply to yongtw's difficulty.

[New Butler]
- Maybe increase the circle size. This is the easiest difficulty, and noobs have big problems with small hitcircles.
- 1/2 beat stacks... I'd avoid many of these in something easy. Perhaps make some of them sliders instead? All for the noobs!
- It ends pretty boring. A repeating slider? maybe end it with a spinner instead?
02:56:033 (1) - Maybe end this spinner at 02:57:798 then add a beat on the next white tick that appears?

[Butler]
02:54:092 (4) - Sounds better and is easier to read if you remove one repeat from this, just making it a normal slider, THEN adding a note on 02:54:798.
02:56:033 (1) - Maybe end this spinner at 02:57:798 then add a beat on the next white tick that appears?

[yongtw123's ojou-sama]
02:11:563 (x) - Add a note here.

[Combat Butler]
02:56:033 (1) - Maybe end this spinner at 02:57:798 then add a beat on the next white tick that appears?



Good work. Star.

Real1 wrote:

[yongtw123's ojou-sama]
02:11:563 (x) - Add a note here.

Hm, if this specific mod comes out one more time (that makes it five times I believe...), then I'll change it immediately.

Thanks for the suggestion though~

Bivuendo!

[SB]
1) As, Derekku Chan said, your SB is waaaaaaay too transparent, if you do this, this is gonna be low performance for ancient system
Example mune ni yuunagi....png :


If you see the black space, you have to cut off. You have to fix all of SB Items in SB Folder.

2) Really, I don't like the SAKURA BIG is overlap the mune ni yuunagi.... If you do this, it would be bad looking!
Look below:


If you already seen this, move the word of EffectsSAKURA BIG to Background Layer. Just drag the word of EffectsSAKURA BIG, and then move to Background Layer

3) Some the SB size is make this make is UNRANKABLE!!!!!! You have to resize to 640x480
This is the list the SB is unrankable:

1. BG effect (1024x768)
2. SAKURA BIG (1000x800)
3. Konachan.com - 55281 sample (800x600)
4. Konachan.com - 55283 sample (800x600)
5. moe 74768 sample (800x300)
6. moe 87915 sample (800x600)

[New butler]
Rename this diff to New Butler?
00:19:327 (1) - Move the new combo to 00:20:033 (2)?
00:21:445 (1) - Move the new combo to 00:22:857 (3)?
00:40:504 (2) - Move 1 grid down?
01:09:268 (5,6) - ^
01:10:857 (1,1,1,1) - I think this is a combo spammer, IMO. Remove one of them?

[Butler]
00:51:621 (2) - Spacing?
02:07:680 (3,4) - ^
02:09:092 (4,5) - ^

[yongtw123's Ojou-sama]
00:17:210 (8) - I don't like when this object is stack with 7
01:30:621 (3) - New combo

[Combat Butler]
Fine~

Not bad
STAR

Thanks for the modding!

My diff updated:

Download: KOTOKO - Daily-daily Dream (Kotomi-chan) [yongtw123's Ojou-sama].osu

Combat Butler:
00:39:798 (1) - that jumps not obvious , i suggest you that make it more close to 00:39:621 (7) ...
02:51:621 (1) - no new combo
03:34:151 inherit timing section with volume 0 for the absolutely silence the end of spinner

others fine ^^
beautiful job well done (storyboard pretty good )

[combat Butler]
00:59:563 (1) - move up 1 grid
01:00:798 (1,3) - distance
02:12:445 (1,2,3,4) - distance
02:13:504 (5) - move left 1 grid
02:48:268 (4) - move down 1grid
02:50:386 (2) - move down 1grid
03:08:033 (3) - distance
03:21:798 (3) - jump is ok,but the distance.replace it plz.
03:26:563 (1) - this spinner is too long you can finish it in 03:31:680 - (it decide to you

star

Combat Butler

nc = new combo

[00:22:504] nc ?
[00:22:857] remove nc
[00:34:151] nc
[00:34:327] remove nc
[00:37:151] too short break,remove
[00:46:504] bad spacing , try move 1 grid up?
[00:47:563] move 4 grids up
[00:51:798] remove finish
[00:54:621] ^
[01:04:327] bad Location.. break the neat spacing
[01:19:857] unrankable problem


i found Several same like this , fix all plz
[02:01:680] Silent the slidertick
[02:03:092] ^
[02:05:033] ^
[02:05:915] ^
[02:13:680] remove finish
[02:16:504] ^
[02:24:974] ^
[02:27:798] ^
[03:00:621] nc

star have been shooted...

All fixed (ﾉﾟωﾟ)ﾉ

New Butler:
Normal mod:
Personally I think it is annoying to start a map with a single note followed by a 5s break. This means that every time you restart the map, you have to go through this 5s break.

Combo mod:
01:28:151 (5) - remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to 5 because you seem to add new combos for lyrics and those notes are part of the same line of lyrics
01:33:092 (3) - new combo to be consistent with 01:31:680 (1)
01:37:327 (2,1,2,3) - personally I would remove the new combo and add new combo to the 2 2s

Timing section mod:
01:36:268 - unneeded timing section, please remove

Butler:
Normal mod:
same as New Butler

Combo mod: (Sorry if I am pushing my style of adding combos to your map)
00:18:798 (4,1,2) - remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to 4 and 2 to make the beginning follow a consistent pattern?
00:36:974 (5) - remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to make 2 consistent patterns
01:20:563 (3) - new combo for new line of lyrics and to be consistent with 01:15:092 (1)
01:28:151 (5) - new combo for new line of lyrics?
01:38:210 (1,2) - remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to 2 for the same line of reasoning as the previous line
02:59:210 (2) - ^
03:00:621 (6) - new combo for new line of lyrics?

Timing section mod:
01:36:268 - unneeded timing section, please remove

yongtw123's Ojou-sama:
Combo mod:
00:48:798 (1) - this new combo was sort of random to me
00:49:857 (4) - new combo to be consistent with 00:47:033 (1)
01:10:857 (4,1) - remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to 4 to follow the sb?
01:16:504 (5) - new combo for new line of lyrics
02:32:739 (4,1) - remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to 4 to follow the sb?

Combat Butler:
The slow slider speed in comparison to the spacing between the notes made this diff annoying to play at times

Normal mod:
03:26:563 (1) - make this end at the same time as the spinner in yongtw123's Ojou-sama

Combo mod:
00:21:445 (4) - new combo to be consistent with 00:20:033 (1)
00:35:563 (5) - ^
01:38:739 (7) - new combo to be consistent with 01:33:092 (1)

Timing section mod:
01:36:268 - unneeded timing section, please remove
02:01:680 - Why is there a custom hitsound sections when there are no custom hitsounds in the folder? If you don't add the custom hitsounds back, remove this and the next timing section

========================================
Nice map. Mostly just combo issues on my side. Star.

blissfulyoshi wrote:

yongtw123's Ojou-sama:
Combo mod:
00:48:798 (1) - this new combo was sort of random to me hmm, I find it visually balanced lol
00:49:857 (4) - new combo to be consistent with 00:47:033 (1) done
01:10:857 (4,1) - remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to 4 to follow the sb? done
01:16:504 (5) - new combo for new line of lyrics done
02:32:739 (4,1) - remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to 4 to follow the sb? done

Thanks for the modding!

Download: KOTOKO - Daily-daily Dream (Kotomi-chan) [yongtw123's Ojou-sama].osu

Halo

[General]
- "mune ni yuunagi..." png is still 710x101, lower the size to 640
- it's too bad you only SB some of the lyrics, I would be happy if you SB all of them
- Butler have a different in the 2nd kiai time (it end on different time), it's better to make it same with other

[New Butler]
01:39:268 (2) - this 1/2 spacing is different than the other it's confusing, better fix it
02:13:504 (2) - ^
Combo mod
02:33:268 (1) - NC

[Butler]
Some spacing change is confusing like in 00:51:092 (1,2) where the spacing is a bit wide, but then in 00:53:916 (1,2) there is no space between the notes, there are more issue like this through the map, here some of them
00:56:739 (1,2)
01:15:092 (1,2)
You should make them the same

[yongtw 123's Ojou-sama]
Nice

[Combat Butler]
Nice
- Decrease circle size by 1?

Nice map, the only thing that feels bad for me is the SB lyric
Other is good
Star~

Sallad4ever wrote:

Nice map, the only thing that feels bad for me is the SB lyric

Ok... I going to SB the rest of the lyrics after finish the rest of the mod xD
Thanks for the star! (ﾉ>ω<)ﾉ

Hello.
I like this song.

New Butler
00:56:033 (4) right 1 grid?
00:56:386 (5) ^
00:56:739 (1,2,3,1,2,3) ^
01:04:151 (3) ^
01:04:857 (5) ^
01:05:210 (1) right 1 grid and down 1 grid?
01:08:033 (1,2) down 2 grid?
01:23:563 (1) left 1 grid?
01:28:857 (3,4) right 1 grid?
01:50:386 (1,2,1,2,1) down 1 grid?
02:00:268 (1) ^
02:01:680 (3) ^
02:07:327 (1,2,1,2,3,4) ^

Butler
01:05:739 (2) up 1 grid?
01:06:268 (1) down 1 grid?
01:26:386 (4) left 1 grid?

yongtw123's
03:25:151 (1) left 1 grid?

Combat Butler
I think , OK

Thismap is nice , skin and SB too!
star☆

banvi wrote:

yongtw123's
03:25:151 (1) left 1 grid?

Eh, Kotomi-chan, can you fix this for me? It's only a small fix. Thanks!!

Thanks for the modding!

All fixed (ﾉﾟωﾟ)ﾉthe lyrics may be finished today [/bad english]
Edit: Lyrics finished (oh god that's fast xD)

Really liked the skin and the SB xD

But spacing is a little strange here:
[Butler]
02:10:347 (5) until 02:12:785 (10) D:

Star +

Bne-chan wrote:

[Butler]
02:10:347 (5) until 02:12:785 (10)

Fixed! (ﾉﾟωﾟ)ﾉ

<Hitsounds>
i don`t think random claps fit the song,if you guys feel like to use claps,you can create a stable clap pattern
i suggest remove all claps in all diffs

<New Butler>
02:10:857 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ugly XD

<Butler>
HP Drain -2 Overall diff +2 (easier to read)
00:20:210 (2) - a bit too far from (1)

<yongtw123's Ojou-sama>
01:26:386 (3,4,5,6) - FINISH ATTACK!!!
02:48:268 (1,2,3,4) - ^
03:30:63 has 2 green lines , remove one of them

<Combat Butler>
pretty nice diff
some parts have too many whistles XD ,
01:07:327 (5) - remove this whistle it will sound better for me the whistle pattern will be 0 0 0 0 0 (old one is 0 0 0 0 0 0 )
you can try tofix other whistle parts, i will recheck this mapset

Minor fixes~

Thanks for the modding!

Download: KOTOKO - Daily-daily Dream (Kotomi-chan) [yongtw123's Ojou-sama].osu

[Mod Infos]

Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.
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[New Butler]

• • 01:17:916 (2,3) - Spacing (keep "Distance Snap" active and fix it)

[Butter]

• • 00:47:563 (5,1) - Spacing
  • 01:07:680 (4,1) - ^
  • 02:09:268 (5,1) - ^

[yongtw123's Ojou-sama]

• • 02:11:563 (x) - Add a circle

[Combat Butler]

• • 00:37:680 (x) - Add a circle
  • 00:38:386 (x) - ^

xxheroxx wrote:

[yongtw123's Ojou-sama]

• • 02:11:563 (x) - Add a circle

(fanfare) lol, this is the fifth time this specific mod comes out

As I've promised earlier, I will change it immediately.

Thanks for the modding!

Download: KOTOKO - Daily-daily Dream (Kotomi-chan) [yongtw123's Ojou-sama].osu

xxheroxx wrote:

[New Butler]

• • 01:17:916 (2,3) - Spacing (keep "Distance Snap" active and fix it)It's better without this change

The rest is fixed! (ﾉﾟωﾟ)ﾉ

Remod?

New Butler
01:01:680 (2,1) - umm, I would say no to stacking these
01:23:210 (2) - xD I got tricked to thinking this note was following vocal, since the map mostly does
01:52:504 (2,1,2,1) - preferred the stacks weren't so timed apart
02:07:327 (1,2,1,2,1) - ^
02:29:915 (1,2,1,2) - ^
02:52:504 (1) - space this note a bit farther...?

Butler-
02:09:092 (4,5) - up a tick for spacing
That's all... can't say I like the slider tick sounds for those sliders on vocal

yongtw123's-
01:00:621 - whiste on this repeat? x.x
01:41:563 (6) - whistle? (sorta following that slow whistle pace...)
02:08:739 (1) - right a tick, its closer compared 2,3,4 x.x
02:20:563 (6,7) - left a tick, (so 3 and 6 are same apart, AND 7,1,2,3 are too)
02:32:386 - whistle?
the whistle pace comes and goes near the end, but that's fine, assuming its on purpose
>.<

Combat Butler-
I see a lot of spacing inconsistencies... or is that on purpose, can't tell well...
This diff is fine, not too sure of all the hitsound patterns, but they don't sound bad
Still can't say I like the slider tick sound too much for vocal

romanji sb :( would be nice if it was English translation or in hiragana/katakana, oh well~
>_< I'm not good at remods

Shinxyn wrote:

yongtw123's-
01:00:621 - whiste on this repeat? x.x hmm, prefer not 'cause the vocal is holding a "ru~~~" sound there
01:41:563 (6) - whistle? (sorta following that slow whistle pace...) ok, but I lower the volume a tiny bit
02:08:739 (1) - right a tick, its closer compared 2,3,4 x.x oh yes
02:20:563 (6,7) - left a tick, (so 3 and 6 are same apart, AND 7,1,2,3 are too) ohhh yes
02:32:386 - whistle? ok
the whistle pace comes and goes near the end, but that's fine, assuming its on purpose
>.< I believe so >w<

Thanks for the, uh, remod~!

Download: KOTOKO - Daily-daily Dream (Kotomi-chan) [yongtw123's Ojou-sama].osu

Thanks for the re-mod! all is fixed, and is added a normal-slidertick for silence the tick in [butler] and [combat butler] (ﾉﾟωﾟ)ﾉ

Recheck Time

[Storyboard]
NO NO NO NO! moe 74768 sample.jpg is way too large (Not the dimensions)! You have to scale them right now or find the bg that same as them!

[New Butler]
00:19:327 (1) - Remove new combo??
00:20:033 (2) - New combo??
01:14:033 (2) - Finish at the start is silly, remove them
01:20:563 (1) - Move forward to white tick and cut short? And add note at 01:20:651?
02:10:857 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Overwhistle D:

[Butler]
01:10:857 (1,1,1) - Make a jump?
02:29:210 (3) - Move 3 grid left?
02:54:092 (4) - I think it's a 25% hidden.....

[yongtw123's Ojou-sama]
00:38:386 (1) - Delete this?
01:51:445 (x) - Add note? The guitar are misbleeding
01:51:621 (x) - ^
02:35:563 (x) - Add note with finish?

[Combat Bulter]
Fine~

Good job

Leorda wrote:

[yongtw123's Ojou-sama]
00:38:386 (1) - Delete this? hmm, I prefer not...
01:51:445 (x) - Add note? The guitar are misbleeding Ok, but I introduced a little jump here. Hope it feels right.
01:51:621 (x) - ^ same
02:35:563 (x) - Add note with finish? sure thing

Thanks for the recheck!

Download: KOTOKO - Daily-daily Dream (Kotomi-chan) [yongtw123's Ojou-sama].osu

Leorda wrote:

[Storyboard]
NO NO NO NO! moe 74768 sample.jpg is way too large (Not the dimensions)! You have to scale them right now or find the bg that same as them!

But is fine, with rezise not... And this is the original bg if is really necesary, i can search for other image

The other is fixed...

[General]

1. +4~5 to the offset, maybe?

[Skin]

1. You must add an approach circle...

As far as the osz and timing goes, it's fine. Sadly, I can't test the beatmaps right now, but I will make sure to do so later. In the meanwhile please fix this!

Nice song and map~ :3

[Butler]
01:28:151 (5) - New combo?

[yongtw123's Ojou-sama]
02:46:504 (4) - 1 grid right?
01:50:915 (4,1) - The jump is a little far ;(
01:51:621 (2,1) - ^
01:52:327 (4,1) - ^
01:53:033 (2,1) - ^

Well done~
Have a star~

kino77 wrote:

[yongtw123's Ojou-sama]
02:46:504 (4) - 1 grid right? done
01:50:915 (4,1) - The jump is a little far ;(
01:51:621 (2,1) - ^
01:52:327 (4,1) - ^
01:53:033 (2,1) - ^ oooh, just as i feared. Ok, re-arranged.

Removing the jump, I make it somewhat a stream like those at the beginning of song.

Hope that feels fine.

Updated! and thanks for the modding!

Download: KOTOKO - Daily-daily Dream (Kotomi-chan) [yongtw123's Ojou-sama].osu

•Offset•
The notes are unsnapped. Resnap All Notes on all diffs.

•Combat Butler•
Good.

•yongtw123's Ojou-sama•
00:42:621 (8) - New combo.

•Butler•
02:47:210 (1) - Place this note on the centre-grid.

•New Butler•
02:58:151 (1) - This circle should be closer to the centre-grid since there is a spinner previously.

Star~

I just mod offest

offset :5,930

and

[Insane]
03:26:563 (1) - How about turn the volume down at finish



SP is not sepcially
If your SP is more than +8
you just call BAT

Star >A</
nice

New Butler:
01:37:341 (1) - I suggest leave this slider until the next white tick (01:37:694) with 1 repetition only
01:38:753 (1) - ^
02:27:106 (1) - this is really necessary? '>_> suggestion: enlarge the slider, take off the reverse.
02:31:341 (1) - 02:35:577 (4) - someone has something against the distance snap. All right, but this is too confuse in the easiest diff. of the song. At least make some space in 02:31:341 (1).


Butler:
Not my kind of map, but I don't found anything =)

yongtw123's Ojou-sama:
fine

Combat Butler:
fine

Star.

All fixed! (ﾉﾟωﾟ)ﾉ
I'm waiting your mod, Gens ;-;

Hum, all difficulties played fine to me.

Harder difficulties had some interesting patterns.

Star~

Nice sb
Volume feels a bit loud (too much louder than the music). Reduce a bit o.o

<New Butler>

01:12:635 (1) - remove new combo
01:17:930 (2,3,1) - bad spacing :/
01:25:341 (1,2,3) - ^
01:28:165 (1,2,3) - ^
01:57:812 (2,3) - up one grid in lv3
02:21:106 (6) - move right a bit

<Butler>
00:30:988 (4) - up one grid in lv3
00:32:047 (1) - left

<youngtw123's Ojou-sama>
This difficulty has a different offset from the others, fix it!
oa +1~2?

01:56:563 (3,4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/16268 <- this is better imo, same for later ones.

<Combat Butler>
00:39:812 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - add clap for this combo set
btw only the following part has been added clap, why not do the same for other parts?
02:00:812 (6,7,8) - move left a bit
02:59:400 (4) - left a bit

nice

ignorethis wrote:

Nice sb
Volume feels a bit loud (too much louder than the music). Reduce a bit o.o

<New Butler>

01:12:635 (1) - remove new combo
01:17:930 (2,3,1) - bad spacing :/
01:25:341 (1,2,3) - ^
01:28:165 (1,2,3) - ^
01:57:812 (2,3) - up one grid in lv3
02:21:106 (6) - move right a bit

<Butler>
00:30:988 (4) - up one grid in lv3
00:32:047 (1) - left

<Combat Butler>
00:39:812 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - add clap for this combo set
btw only the following part has been added clap, why not do the same for other parts?
02:00:812 (6,7,8) - move left a bit
02:59:400 (4) - left a bit

nice

Fixed this! (ﾉﾟωﾟ)ﾉ
And added moar claps for [Combat Butler], hope that sounds fine

Soooryy!

Fixed the offset and took the suggestion from ignorethis

OD+1 (and DR-1, lol, no effect on score but looks better on star rating XD)

Thanks for the modding!

Download: KOTOKO - Daily-daily Dream (Kotomi-chan) [yongtw123's Ojou-sama].osu

[Combat Butler]
00:47:050 (4) - Quita el clap al final del slider
01:50:408 - 02:10:338 - No crees que seria mejor si juegas con el whistle en esta parte XD

Star

Vicho-kun wrote:

[Combat Butler]
00:47:050 (4) - Quita el clap al final del slider
01:50:408 - 02:10:338 - No crees que seria mejor si juegas con el whistle en esta parte XD

Star

A la horita que ves mi map LOL eh xD gracias por el mod~ jugue con el whistle ahi y quedo cool creo yo xD

star~

Blue: Sugestion. Not necessary, but should take good effects.
Green: Notification or cosmetic thing. May, but don't have to be fixed.
Orange: Should be fixed.
Red: Have to be fixed.

General
Everything looks fine.

[New Butler]

1. Set stack leniency to 3rd bar. First notes look more tidy then.
2. 02:27:106 (3) - New combo here. In case to follow combos pattern used in this map.

[Butler]
Fine.

[yongtw123's Ojou-sama]

1. 01:09:282 (1) - Remove new combo here.
2. 02:31:165 (1) - Same here.

[Combat Butler]
Cool.

Good map. Sometimes there is a little too many new combos in my opinion, but it's minor issue.
Starrr'd.

ShaggoN wrote:

[yongtw123's Ojou-sama]

1. 01:09:282 (1) - Remove new combo here.
2. 02:31:165 (1) - Same here.

Hmm, I prefer not to change them though.

Still thanks for modding!

star:Dnice map

do you have high quality mp3?
this mp3 file suck , and hitsound are too noisy , others are really good.
just try change your mp3 file.

Mp3 change, hope that sounds much better now >w<

good .

I think offset needs +13.
Why is "combat butler" in tags? They're already a difficulty name, and it would pop up when searching~

[Butler]

02:56:047 (1,1) - Baaaad move. No notes right after the spinner please...


[Combat Butler]

03:26:590 (1) - Isn't this supposed to be silenced? The current inherited section is useless.

I guess that's it. Not a bad map.
I'm going to pop for the offset though...

Fixed ;w;

[Combat Butler]

03:26:590 - ...the hell happened? D=

Gens wrote:

[Combat Butler]

03:26:590 - ...the hell happened? D=

... Omai-...
A friend has a copy of the file x__x ( Vicho, you save the map! ;w; ) how lucky! now REALLY fixed

That's better. Rebubbled.

[New butler]
02:58:178 (1) - This note is too close to the end of the spinner for the easiest difficulty.

[Butler]
01:12:295 (1) - This jump could be confusing for a normal-ish difficulty.

[yongtw]
00:05:929 (1) - Not snapped.

Fixed... Two bubble pop's in a day ;w;U

Rebubbled :3

inb4rank :3

(estrellita donde estas =o? Ah, así que te quieres quedar con Kotomin <_<? pues bien por mi >_<)

lol Hayate~

Check by Request >x<

1.tsunette mo > tsunettemo (this is not wrong but this is 1 vocabulary I think write like this is better ^^b up to you)
2.jume janai > yume janai
3.yume o miyou > yume o miyo

00:56:766 ~ 01:02:060 where is Lyric ?? Ovo""

sorry for my first Mod is not perfect xd


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http://j-lyric.net/artist/a001fe4/l01af69.html
http://aquabutler.exblog.jp/11798056/
http://www.utamap.com/showkasi.php?surl=S05655

i asked SiRiRu to check SB
Fix it and full upload again

<New Butler+Butler>
I suggest roving all claps, they sound so random

<Combat Butler>
02:57:648 (1,2,3,1) - those jumps don`t fit the song at all

Fiiiixed all (ﾉﾟωﾟ)ﾉ

EDIT : SB is repaired d=(´▽｀)=b ♪

WOW it sounds much better now

Ranked

I go blind from kiai D::::::