[New butler]
1:15:637 (2) This slider is better end at 1:16:167 so the lyric "hayate~" could finish.
1:29:226 (8) This slider listens better end at 1:29:402 since the "ri~" sound didn't fully finished at 1:29:579.
1:30:637 (1) Make this slider a go-back slider which starts at 1:30:637,goes back at 1:30:814 and ends at 1:30:990.
1:57:814 I think add a note here make it listen better .
And at last,maybe the circle size should be a bit larger for a new butler(just my opinion)
[Butler]
2:09:284(6) Not really good with this long slider,try to change it to notes and short sliders and follow the rhythm like what you do a second before it.
Star~
1:15:637 (2) This slider is better end at 1:16:167 so the lyric "hayate~" could finish.
1:29:226 (8) This slider listens better end at 1:29:402 since the "ri~" sound didn't fully finished at 1:29:579.
1:30:637 (1) Make this slider a go-back slider which starts at 1:30:637,goes back at 1:30:814 and ends at 1:30:990.
1:57:814 I think add a note here make it listen better .

And at last,maybe the circle size should be a bit larger for a new butler(just my opinion)

[Butler]
2:09:284(6) Not really good with this long slider,try to change it to notes and short sliders and follow the rhythm like what you do a second before it.
Star~