6k HYPE
here some check
[General]
timing : good
folder : i saw all hitsound utilized correctly
pattern :
[Normal]
00:05:065 (5065|4) -
until 00:11:386 (11386|3) - if i was you i wont layer the vocal in the opening, its sightly not snapped everywhere..
i suggest you to follow the flute / background synth sound instead, in 00:05:815 - 00:07:221 - 00:08:947 - 00:10:260 - , following previous ranked map.
why? 00:09:980 (9980|5) - this one is absolutely unsnapped .. :T
01:03:545 (63545|2,63545|3,63732|0,63920|3,63920|2,64107|0) -
http://puu.sh/jsiNd.png01:04:670 (64670|5) - remove, then don't forget to put the hitsound in sample (tab)
01:31:107 (91107|5) - shouldn't this stop at 01:31:670 (91670|2) - ?
01:33:357 (93357|5) - change to finish
01:42:545 (102545|5) - remove
01:42:732 (102732|4,102920|2,103107|3) - 6 5 4
01:50:420 (110420|0) - add 1 more note, i hear some bump by cymbal here
02:10:482 (130482|2,130763|0) - eh, these should be snapped at 02:10:670 - & 02:10:857 -
[Hard]
00:05:065 (5065|4) - same as normal, i suggest you to follow the flute / background synth sound instead, in 00:05:815 - 00:07:221 - 00:08:947 - 00:10:260 - , following previous ranked map
00:05:065 (5065|4,16154|3,16248|1) - introducing 1/8 pattern in hard might be not suitable, i suggest you to remove
00:29:701 you can add something in 4th col since previously you layers the drum
00:35:420 (35420|2) - remove? since i only see you uses 3 notes for finisher / down beat only
00:40:529 (40529|3,40623|1) - same reason about 1/8 above, remove?
01:05:607 (65607|1) - remove, then optionally you can move 01:05:795 (65795|4) - to 3
01:23:045 (83045|0,83420|2) - i cant hear any sound that you follow for these LNs, you can turn this into normal note instead
01:25:107 (85107|0) - you can shorten & rearrange this LN into
http://puu.sh/jsjOm.png since there's a bg sound in 01:25:670 -
01:33:357 (93357|4) - you can add 1 more note in 6 here, with finish hitsound
01:43:295 (103295|4,103857|1,104232|4) - are you sure to introduce triplets LNs in hard? i suggest to remove though
02:07:295 (127295|0,127857|3,128232|0) - ^
[Insane]
00:05:065 (5065|5) - hmm same as normal & hard, about vocal
00:23:701 (23701|2,23748|3) - ghost notes
00:26:795 (26795|1) - i don't get why should be 4 notes here.. remove
01:17:795 (77795|1,77795|4,77795|0,77795|5,77982|0,77982|4,77982|5,77982|1) - i cant see any reason why you put 4 notes here, while 01:18:170 (78170|2,78170|3,78357|3,78357|2) - has 2.. reduce the chord
01:22:107 (82107|1) - remove, i see you only use 3 notes at the spot where there's a piano chord
01:23:045 (83045|1) - ^
01:33:357 (93357|4) - same as hard, add 1 more note with finish
01:34:107 (94107|5) - i don't see the reason you use 4 notes here.. remove one
01:44:795 (104795|4) - add one, OR
http://puu.sh/jskvF.png01:50:326 - optionally add something here, the 3/4 beat from the vocal & backing vocal has nice spot to spice up the flow
01:57:357 (117357|4) - add 1 more note
02:05:795 (125795|2,125795|1,125982|1,126076|2,126263|2,126357|1,126545|2,126732|1,126826|2,127013|2,127107|1) - previous stream has same pattern, i suggest you to change this one
http://puu.sh/jskDN.pnghitsound :
00:48:170 - 00:48:920 - 00:49:670 - 00:50:420 - 00:51:170 - 00:51:920 - 00:52:670 - 00:53:420 -
01:00:170 - 01:00:920 - 01:01:670 - 01:02:420 - 01:03:170 - 01:03:920 -
you forgot to put soft-hitclap5.wav in all diffs..
01:12:920 - 01:14:420 - 01:15:920 - add some soft-hitclap1.wav in all diffs..
call me again later after you fix these..