[Light]
There's some missing clap I gave it to you

[Dark]
There's some missing clap I gave it to you

Hello!
[Overall]
Не видно курсора во время спина D: Поменяй его.
[Light]
Убери 1,2,3 countdown - no.
Размеры кружков можно и самые большие поставить - fixed
Overall Difficulty где то на 4 сделай, а то с таким спейсингом ничо не понять. fixed
1/2 биты (типа 00:39:329 (1,2) - ) лучше заменить на слайдеры. no.
00:42:960 (1,2,3,4) - сделай это ближе к центру. fixed
00:25:008 (1,2,3) - spacing fixed
00:27:110 (2) - ^ fixed
00:28:639 (6) - ^ .... fixed
в общем проверь спейсинг. fixed
[Dark]
00:15:836 (1) - spacing fixed
00:21:569 (1) - mb new combo? fixed
00:31:696 (2) - 1 вверх fixed
00:32:843 (1,2,3,4) - ^ fixed
00:42:970 (1) - add 1 more repeat fixed
00:44:499 (1) - remove new combo fixed
00:49:467 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - не спамь 1-комбами D: fixed D: XD
00:56:346 (2,3,4,1) - spacing fixed
[... tha last one]

00:47:174 (5) - unexpected x0.5 fixed
остальное гуд.

KIA wrote:

[... tha last one]

00:47:174 (5) - unexpected x0.5
остальное гуд.

- Why don't add MV?

- Hitcircles are hard to read.

~Light~
Add some Kiai times. Added
00:31:123 (1,2) - too far fixed
00:37:237 (1,2,1) - too close fixed

~Dark~
Add some Kiai times. Added

~SadKangaroo's Flower~
00:41:060 (5,6,7) - too far
00:52:525 (3) - remove clap at middle note
00:58:448 (6) - add clap
01:05:901 (5) - add clap at last note
01:21:187 (3) - ^
01:27:684 (1) - silence it
I will tell him, it will be fixed soon!

DJPop wrote:

~SadKangaroo's Flower~
00:41:060 (5,6,7) - too far
00:52:525 (3) - remove clap at middle note
00:58:448 (6) - add clap
01:05:901 (5) - add clap at last note
01:21:187 (3) - ^
01:27:684 (1) - silence it

• • Delete the osb file, then "Full Submission"
  • Move the preview point here 01:01:696
  • Why don't you add the video?

• • Slider Velocity: 0,80
  • Distance Spacing: 1,0x (and fix the spacing)
  •

• •

• Delete the osb file, then "Full Submission" done.
• Move the preview point here 01:01:696 done

• Why don't you add the video?

• Slider Velocity: 0,80 fixed
• Distance Spacing: 1,0x (and fix the spacing) fixed too

[Light]
slider tick rate: 1 or 2 Agreed
need more hitsounds imo. X
use some sliders instead of 1/2 circles. I don't think that it is necessary :3
00:25:008 (1,2,3) - use a slider instead. ^
00:31:123 (1,2,3) - ^ ^
01:05:327 (1) - remove new combo. removed
01:08:384 (4) - end 1/4 earlier. O_O
01:13:161 (1,1) - spacing. fixed
01:13:925 (1) - remove new combo.removed

...this diff is a Normal or a Hard? it's even harder than most of the hards. <--- This is Dark LoL :3 It is in the middle of Hard and Insane.
make the circle size larger. HP drain Rate -2, Overall -1... If someone said the same, i'll down HP and Overall.
Slider velocity:1.4 Slider tick rate: 1 and fix spacing then. I think it's good :3
00:04:180 (4) - break after this note is too short, remove plz. No problem, removed!
need more hitsounds imo. =/
00:52:524 (5) - new combo oke
00:55:199 (1) - remove new combo why?

NatsumeRin wrote:

[SadKangaroo's Flower]
[color=#0000FF]00:38:958 (2,3) - mirror fixed
00:44:881 (1,2,3,4,5) - i don't like them stood
00:48:703 (4) - remove. stood
00:59:786 (1) - remove new combo fixed
01:15:455 (1) - 1 grid right. fixed

[General]
- If you don't mind please add Audio Lead In at last 500.

Louis Cyphre wrote:

About SadKangaroo's Diff, i'll fix it, if he want :3

Thanks for modding <3

Of course,i don't mind.You may increase.

[Dark]:
Add an audio lead-in of about 1-2 seconds. Added
00:14:116 (x) - Make a note here? The combo underspacing is a bit odd. Added
00:20:804 (1,2,1) - I'm not going to be really harsh on this, but to me, it doesn't feel very...smooth. You have a large jump, yeah. I like that. But then we're going into the next (1), and the gap between the time, not to mention the close spacing makes it feel...kind of weird. Its not wrong, but it just feels funny. Fixed.
00:25:008 (5) - Nazi: Move 1 Grid Level Right on Level 3? XD Moved
00:53:289 (2) - Suggestion: Horizontal Flip? You are wright
01:06:091 (1,2) - The spacing is here too close. ): They're spaced like 1/2 notes, but they are actually 1/1. Fixed

[Snowy taiko]:
(Maybe it's best to ask Chris about what to do here, if you are unsure)
Perhaps capitalize the t in "taiko"?
Maybe lower the Slider Velocity by .1 or .2? If everyone can read it fine and all, then all right, you don't need to. This is only a mere suggestion. XD

[SadKangaroo's Flower]:
01:12:588 (1,2,3) - Somehow I don't feel a slowdown fits in an action-filled area here. It's a bit unexpected. XD What do you think? :s

Pretty good, pretty good. Lovely spinner, as well; it plays just nicely. Star.

Starrodkirby86 wrote:

[SadKangaroo's Flower]:
01:12:588 (1,2,3) - Somehow I don't feel a slowdown fits in an action-filled area here. It's a bit unexpected. XD What do you think? :s

Lizbeth wrote:

SadKangaroo's Flower
Nice map.. there s some change in spacing in the first part of the song, some ppl my complain, but in game play it turn easy to read for me.. so i guess is fine
these spots are: 00:18:894 (1,2) - 00:23:671 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 00:34:945 (3,4) - 00:41:251 (6,7)

Dark
there's a couple of objects unsnapped acording to Aimod, please resnap all notes..

Use same offset for all diffs

Song Setup
White combo color is a bit hard to see ;_;

00:20:996 (2,1) - these two are too close in the chart, make it proportional with timeline Fixed
00:26:155 (6,1) - same Fixed
01:07:620 (3,4,5) - should have the same distance between circle, cuz that is what timeline reflect Fixed
theres a few more problems in spacing like this, try to recheck spacing with distance snap. for example?

Real1 wrote:

Real1 modding as requested... except it's bubbled. And I don't think I will find any errors since Sir Starrodkirby86 has bubbled this.

Sorry but I have to pop bubble.<_<

Overall nothing wrong but ahhhh...The map with this overall difficulty and this note distance is really hard to read and first player hit 100s.

Notes aren't all snapped, also what's 2nd red line for?

Louis Cyphre wrote:

Т__Т You killed my mood

James wrote:

I aim my maps to be the best one submitted upon ranking.
Not because of "I submit maps just for it to get ranked."

Louis Cyphre wrote:

Are you kidding? =_=

SPOILER

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Don't say, that i'm not "first player" in osu!.

Louis Cyphre wrote:

Nah... resnapped some unsnapped notes, check it =_=
And fixed 2nd red line.

Louis Cyphre wrote:
Т__Т You killed my mood


James wrote:
I aim my maps to be the best one submitted upon ranking.
Not because of "I submit maps just for it to get ranked."


Think as this way and be happy.

Nvm, this isn't unrankable stuff, just make a map newer friendly.

You forgot [Snowy taiko] one. >_>

deepsea wrote:

Louis Cyphre wrote:

Т__Т You killed my mood

James wrote:

I aim my maps to be the best one submitted upon ranking.
Not because of "I submit maps just for it to get ranked."

Think as this way and be happy.

Louis Cyphre wrote:

Man, if it isn't unrankable, why you pop my bubble? =_=

SadKangaroo wrote:

deepsea wrote:

Think as this way and be happy.

Excuse me for my insolence,but I'd like to check out first map by James,and I am pretty sure it wasn't that good.And James won't be ever become James the Hall of Famer,if he had that pressed as we are.All of us are learning,and making mistakes.Step by step making better and better.But we won't get any progres,if our first attempts will be rejected.

Man, it isn't but UNSNAPPED NOTE IS.

If there isn't unsnapped issue I will keep the bubble, I hate to pop so I won't pop unless its necessary.


OK, everything need to fixed are all fixed. Bubble back. O_o

Excuse me for my insolence,but I'd like to check out first map by James,and I am pretty sure it wasn't that good.And James won't be ever become James the Hall of Famer,if he had that pressed as we are.All of us are learning,and making mistakes.Step by step making better and better.But we won't get any progres,if our first attempts will be rejected.

James wrote:

and yeah its not good. i admit it. but it sounds FAR better than most new maps there~~~

p.s. that was 2+ years ago