1. Easy (1.52 stars, 193 notes)
2. Hard (4.86 stars, 481 notes)
3. Normal (3.78 stars, 304 notes)
4. Wmf's Taiko (4.94 stars, 1000 notes)

• Use the same offset for every difficulty (8400 is ok)

• .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
  Slidertick rate 4 fits the best here imho. If you don't like it, at least try slidertick rate 2. slidertick rate 1 feels empty... D:
  Some spinners are too short for a Easy, i think.
  Anyway, it's great ^^

• .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
  Same slidertick matter as Easy.
  .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
  00:50:250 (1) - move it a tiny bit farther
  02:01:800 (6) - move farther

• .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
  .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
  03:12:600 (7) - new combo (due to change of slider speed)
  03:36:600 (8) - stack correctly?
  .Errors/Mistakes: (Bad gameplay issues or badly applied changes)
  04:24:600 (1,2,3) - WHY? ;_; fix the spacing between 1 and 2 please.

OH THIS IS NICE.

- General: (Considerations and things you need to check/fix for the whole map)

Use the same offset for every difficulty (8400 is ok)

- Easy:

.Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
Slidertick rate 4 fits the best here imho. If you don't like it, at least try slidertick rate 2. slidertick rate 1 feels empty... D:
Some spinners are too short for a Easy, i think.
Anyway, it's great ^^

- Normal:

.Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
Same slidertick matter as Easy.
.Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
00:50:250 (1) - move it a tiny bit farther
02:01:800 (6) - move farther

- Hard:

.Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
.Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
03:12:600 (7) - new combo (due to change of slider speed)
03:36:600 (8) - stack correctly?
.Errors/Mistakes: (Bad gameplay issues or badly applied changes)
04:24:600 (1,2,3) - WHY? ;_; fix the spacing between 1 and 2 please.

New Combo เป็นแค่ ความเห็น ทาง Style ถ้าไม่ชอบหรือ อะไรก็ผ่านๆไปละกันครับ

-Easy-

โดยรวม น่าจะทำให้สไลด์เด้อ ช้าลงนิดนึงนะ อาจยากไปสำหรับเด็กใหม่เพิ่งเล่น
แต่ ถ้าปรับก็ต้องปรับทั้ง map ไม่เป็นไรมั้ง แค่พูดให้ความเห็น XD


-Normal-

01:33:600 (7,8,9) - เปลี่ยน 7 เป็นสไลด์ 1/4 รีเทินถึง 01:34:050 น่าจะเข้านะ
02:00:600 (5,6) - ระยะแปลกครับ


-Hard-

00:57:450 (5,6,7,8) - Spacing , ใช้ระยะเดียวกับ 1-3 ครับ
00:59:700 (9,10,11) - ใช้ระยะ เดียวกับ 4-6
01:04:500 (9,10,11) - ขยับไปขวา ให้ระยะห่างโน๊ตเท่ากับ ท้ายไสลด์ 1 กับ ต้นสไลด์ 2
01:24:000 (1) - new combo ออก ไปใส่ ที่ 01:24:900 (2) - น่าจะดูเข้ากันนะครับ
01:32:100 (1) - new combo
02:06:300 (7,8) - spacing ให้เท่าๆกันกับตัวก่อนครับ
02:11:100 (7) - เลื่อนมา 02:11:250 (7) - แล้ว ไม่ต้อง รีเทิร์นสไลด์
02:11:700 (8) - เลื่อนมา 02:11:850 (8) - แล้ว ^
02:21:600 (1) - new combo ออก
02:22:500 (3) - new combo
02:24:000 (1) - new combo ออก
02:24:900 (3) - new combo
02:26:400 (1) - new combo ออก
02:27:300 (3) - new combo
03:03:900 (9) - ^
03:04:950 (1) - new combo ออก
03:21:900 (10) - new combo
03:36:600 (8) - ท้ายสไลด์ ซ้อนไม่ตรงกันครับ
03:43:200 (1) - new combo ออก
03:44:100 (3) - new combo
03:45:600 (1) - new combo ออก
03:48:000 (1) - ^
03:48:600 (2) - new combo
03:51:300 (12) - ^
03:51:600 (1) - new combo ออก
04:00:000 (1) - new combo ออก
04:00:900 (3) - new combo
04:03:300 (7) - ^
04:04:800 (1) - new combo ออก
04:06:900 (11) - new combo
04:21:300 (8) - ^

** ส่วนตัวว่าถ้าปรับสีน้ำเงินให้มันเห็นชัดๆแบบข้างบนก็โอเคแล้ว แต่ขอให้ระวังการแสบตา เพราะสีกลมกลืนกันจนมองไม่เห็นโน๊ต หรือ cursor

EASY
*** + 3 overall difficult ( เพราะสไลด์ไว เล่นยากพอตัว ) +2 hp drain (น่าจะทำให้สนุกขึ้นบ้าง ไม่ต้องกลัวคนเล่นไม่ได้)
00:31:800 (1) - เริ่มที่เดิม ให้จบที่ 00:34:800
00:35:400 (x) - addnote
00:36:000 (x) - ^
00:40:800 (x) add note and (clap) sounds?
00:51:000 (1) - let's this spinner end at 00:54:000
00:54:600 (x) - add note
00:55:200 (x) - add note and clap
01:01:200 (x) - ^
01:09:600 (1) - make return (may be add whistle sound add end of slider )
01:13:200 (x) - add note and whistle
01:20:700 (2) - สไลเดอร์ตรงนี้ ขยับ เลื่อนมา ที่ 01:20:400 พร้อมทำ return　ให้จบที่ 01:21:000 พร้อมใส่ clap ที่หัว whistle ที่หาง
01:26:700 (3) - ＾ เหมือนข้างบน เลื่อนมา เริ่มที่เส้นขาวข้างหน้า
01:29:100 (1) - ＾
01:30:300 (2) - ^
01:32:400 (x) - addnote
01:33:600 (1) - ทำเป็น สไลเดอร์ รีเทิน เริ่มจบที่เดิม
01:46:200 มันดูโหรงเหรง เล็กน้อย เพิ่มโน๊ตเข้าไปดีกว่า หลังจากจบ สปิน

[Normal]
01:33:600 (7) - โดยส่วนตัวผมว่าไม่น่าทำลงเส้นสีฟ้านะครับ น่าจะลงเส้นขาวมากกว่า

01:45:000 (x) - เติมslider จบ 01:45:600 ใส่ whistle ที่ปลาย
01:46:200 (x) - add note +whistle
01:46:800 (x) - add note
01:47:400 (x) - เติมslider จบ 01:48:000 ใส่ whistle ที่ปลาย

01:49:800 (x) - เติมslider จบ 01:50:400 ใส่ whistle ที่ปลาย
01:51:000 (x) - add note + whistle
01:51:600 (x) - add note
01:52:200 (x) - เติมslider จบ 01:52:800 ใส่ whistle ที่ปลาย

01:54:600 (x) - เติมslider จบ 01:55:200 ใส่ whistle ที่ปลาย
01:55:800 (x) - add note + whistle
01:56:400 (x) - add note
01:57:000 (x) - เติมslider จบ 01:57:600 ใส่ whistle ที่ปลาย

02:29:400 (8,1) - ตรงนี้ติดกันมากไป ลง เส้นฟ้าแล้วต่อด้วยขาว ไม่ควรทำนะ (เริ่มมาหมุนไม่ทัน)

General:

-- The transparent hitcircle is a little hard to see.
-- White color + kiai can be hard to see for some people (I found it okay, but just saying ~)
-- You might want to consider using a silent slider slide for parts of this song.
-- Move the offset to 34,200 to put it on the right tick.
-- Not sure what "hitcirclesb" is doing ?_?
-- Actually it might be a good idea to try and find a softer spinnerspin, the default doesn't really fit the song.

Easy:

-- Well the slider velocity is kinda fast, but the long sliders make it easy so I guess its okay =P

00:31:800 (1) - Silence this and end at 00:35:400? (Instead of a circle)
00:41:400 (1) - Creative, it would be nice to see more sliders like this ^_^
01:05:400 (1) - Align this with the previous slider?
01:07:800 (5) - New combo.
01:09:600 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:32:400 (5) - New combo.
01:33:600 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:30:600 (1) - Move this back to 02:30:300? I get the feeling this spinner is a bit too short for an Easy >_>

Normal:

-- The slider velocity is pretty fast for a Normal. Not a big issue but the slider velocity is usually slower than the hardest difficulty =P
-- Map to the end? In my opinion you should have at least 2 full length (or same length) difficulties.

00:31:800 (1) - Silence this spinner it's too noisy.
01:33:600 (8) - Add a return.
02:30:600 (1) - Might want to start this earlier (02:30:300)?

Hard:

-- Remove the countdown?

00:34:500 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - The claps here don't fit the song, imo remove them or use a custom hitsound?
02:27:000 (6) - New combo here.
02:27:300 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:30:600 (1) - Might want to start this earlier, 02:30:300 maybe? End it at same place if you do this.
03:00:600 (1) - This is a very strange place for kiai, remove this kiai time section imo.
03:06:900 (8) - New combo here.
03:12:600 (1) - Again, imo this is a strange place to put kiai.
03:34:200 -- Start kiai here instead of 03:34:800
03:34:500 (x) - Add note?
03:48:600 (7) - New combo?
03:48:600 (7) - New combo.
04:05:700 (8) - ^
04:06:900 (1) - Remove new combo.

Some of the combo's are too long and you might have overused kiai just a little. But overall it's a pretty nice map ^_^

Looks good overall ~ star ~
General:

-- The transparent hitcircle is a little hard to see.
-- White color + kiai can be hard to see for some people (I found it okay, but just saying ~)
-- You might want to consider using a silent slider slide for parts of this song.
-- Move the offset to 34,200 to put it on the right tick.
-- Not sure what "hitcirclesb" is doing ?_?
-- Actually it might be a good idea to try and find a softer spinnerspin, the default doesn't really fit the song.

Easy:

-- Well the slider velocity is kinda fast, but the long sliders make it easy so I guess its okay =P

00:31:800 (1) - Silence this and end at 00:35:400? (Instead of a circle)
00:41:400 (1) - Creative, it would be nice to see more sliders like this ^_^
01:05:400 (1) - Align this with the previous slider?
01:07:800 (5) - New combo.
01:09:600 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:32:400 (5) - New combo.
01:33:600 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:30:600 (1) - Move this back to 02:30:300? I get the feeling this spinner is a bit too short for an Easy >_>

Normal:

-- The slider velocity is pretty fast for a Normal. Not a big issue but the slider velocity is usually slower than the hardest difficulty =P
-- Map to the end? In my opinion you should have at least 2 full length (or same length) difficulties.

00:31:800 (1) - Silence this spinner it's too noisy.
01:33:600 (8) - Add a return.
02:30:600 (1) - Might want to start this earlier (02:30:300)?

Hard:

-- Remove the countdown?

00:34:500 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - The claps here don't fit the song, imo remove them or use a custom hitsound?
02:27:000 (6) - New combo here.
02:27:300 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:30:600 (1) - Might want to start this earlier, 02:30:300 maybe? End it at same place if you do this.
03:00:600 (1) - This is a very strange place for kiai, remove this kiai time section imo.
03:06:900 (8) - New combo here.
03:12:600 (1) - Again, imo this is a strange place to put kiai.
03:34:200 -- Start kiai here instead of 03:34:800
03:34:500 (x) - Add note?
03:48:600 (7) - New combo?
03:48:600 (7) - New combo.
04:05:700 (8) - ^
04:06:900 (1) - Remove new combo.

Some of the combo's are too long and you might have overused kiai just a little. But overall it's a pretty nice map ^_^

Looks good overall ~ star ~

There's nothing I can do.star

[General]

Maybe you should add "KEY".

[BS Style]

00:45:450~ (11.12) 1grid down or (12) 1grid up
01:14:400~ (11.12) 1grid right
01:21:600 (6) 1grid right?
01:30:300~ (3) 1grid down, (4) 1grid down 1grid right
02:05:700~ (6.7.8) 0.5grid right
02:08:700~ (3.4.5.6.7.8) spacing
02:28:950~ (7.8) 1grid right , (10) 1grid down , 1grid right
03:24:000 (6) 1grid left
03:348:000 (1) remove new combo
04:03:300 (1) 0.5gird right
04:20:100 (4.5.6.7) 0.5grid right

& star
[General]

Maybe you should add "KEY".

[BS Style]

00:45:450~ (11.12) 1grid down or (12) 1grid up
01:14:400~ (11.12) 1grid right
01:21:600 (6) 1grid right?
01:30:300~ (3) 1grid down, (4) 1grid down 1grid right
02:05:700~ (6.7.8) 0.5grid right
02:08:700~ (3.4.5.6.7.8) spacing
02:28:950~ (7.8) 1grid right , (10) 1grid down , 1grid right
03:24:000 (6) 1grid left
03:348:000 (1) remove new combo
04:03:300 (1) 0.5gird right
04:20:100 (4.5.6.7) 0.5grid right

& star

sorry,

[General]

Maybe you should add "KEY" to the tags.
"AIR" as Source. remove "AIR KEY"

ganba!!

☆ミ

Hello
Easy
01:13:200 (4) 1 grid right?(grid lv3)
Normal
01:11:100 (5) 1 grid right?
01:20:100 (3) 1 grid up?
01:32:400 (7,8) ^
03:15:300 (2) 1 grid left?
03:16:200 (4) 1 grid down?
03:47:400 (5) 1 grid up?
04:04:500 (1) 1 grid left?
SB Style
00:38:100 (4,5) 1 grid left?
00:46:200 (1) 1 grid down?
00:59:700 (9,10,11) spacing a bit close than others.
01:18:600 (9) 1 grid right?
01:18:900 (10,11,12) 1 grid right&1 grid down?
01:49:500 (2) 1 grid left?
01:59:850 (4) ^
03:15:300 (3,4) 1 grid right?
03:40:500 (3,4,5) ^
04:07:350 (7,8,9) 1 grid up?

Oh, sorry for only nazi mod...
Very nice map & skin & SB
star & gl

Hi there!

Easy
00:43:950 (4) Distance is too far from (3)

Normal
02:10:811 (8) Move up 1 grid? (Grid level 3)
03:44:541-3:45:000 (4,5,6) I think this is a bit confusing for normal... Change by bringing the slider down, perhaps?

BS Style
00:59:850 (10,11) Use distance snap on these.
01:20:700 (1,2,3) Too close, distance snap.
02:25:350 (2) Over 1 grid to the right

Very good map! I couldn't find much that bothered me enough to mention it I love the skin and clouds too, good luck~ Starred!

หลังจากนั่งเพ่งอยู่ เกือบๆ 1 ชม.จนเจอวิธี ทำแสงที่ว่า (ตอนแรกหาเกือบ ครึ่งชม ไฟล์ไหน ว้าาา ทำเอฟเฟคกระพริบหาไม่เจอ ใน OSB ก็ไม่มี OTL แย่แล้ว.

*** เทคนิคที่ว่า คือการ เปิดปิด kiai ในช่วงเวลา kiai mode สั้นๆ ให้มีแสงกระพริบ (ใช่ทีเหอะ ไม่ใช่หน้าแหกหมอไม่รับเย็บ)

มันมีกฎ ตรงนี้อยู่
Do not overuse kiai time (general rule is one toggle per minute of playable length). Do not use kiai time just for fountains unless you are doing this extremely rarely. Kiai time is meant to accent chorus sections. You can toggle it off and on halfway through the chorus if that looks good, but using it constantly every 4-8 beats is just stupid.

ไอ้เปิดปิด kiai แต่ ไม่เคยเห็นเคสนี้ ถาม BAT ก่อนดีกว่ามั้ง

ส่วนเรื่อง SB

คำว่า backstep มันทึบๆๆ ดูแล้วไม่ค่อยเ้ข้ากับBG สักเท่าไหร่

นี่ลองทำมาดู ไม่สวยเท่าไหร่ ยังงงว่าทำไม มันมืดมากๆ

SPOILER (click to toggle)
Image


ถ้าทำแล้วก่อนส่งตรวจ เอา bs.png ให้เหลือสักอันเดียวไฟล์ไหนที่ไม่ใช้ลบทิ้งด้วยนะ

Goodluck


******** ทำ สตอรี่บอร์ดพิเศษ กับ DIFF easy เพราะ โน๊ตหมดแล้วแต่เพลงยังรันต่อไปเพราะ Storyboard ติดต่อหลังไมค์โลด เดี๋ยวสอน

Hi!! regenz told me to check this map, and ah~ such a nice song he gave me xP

Let's see... really nice map overall, those clouds are so beautiful (and maybe you'd like to disable letterboxes on breaks to not to ruin the atmosphere xP) The map flows really well, but I'd say to get rid of all those 1/4 notes on Normal and maybe make them sliders...

Also about the kiai, someone probably will tell you to reduce it a bit, and maybe reducing the star2 size and brightness will make the fountains a bit less confusing, because if they cover the hitcircles it will be hard to see, since they're transparent. Also don't make too many stacks with this kind of hitcircles, it will be confusing to follow too xP

Not going to get more deep modding on this because I don't take requests for now but I just wanted to give you some advices :3 Hope it helps.

Take a star, this s looking so nice so far

Title: Natsukage (Instrumental)
other: HP Bar looks not full at startingline lol
not give me kudosu.

Oh thank ,but Natsukage translate in English is Summer Light

• • Source: Air

• • HP Drain Rate: 3
  • Overall Difficulty: 3

• • Offset: 34.200

Quick Recheck.

A really good job, to be honest o.o
I only have a request about the SB in Easy: when the map ends, every object just disappears from the screen. Can you add some fade transitions? (The description says you're going to fix the SB, so i hope this is what you mean)
Tiny SB error in 03:06:975 [Hard] too. Oh thank,sorry I'm not add some fade in Easy. (I mean check SB wrong.)

Other things:
[Normal] 01:47:100 (5) - 01:51:900 (5) - 01:56:700 (8) - stack correctly
[Normal] 01:50:100 (3) - this slider is not snapped. It's too long and goes over the white line, please remake it. Since i feel this may have been happened to other sliders, please do a "Timing - Recalculate slider lenghts" and recheck everything.
[Hard] Why is the offset different from the other sections?
[Hard] 03:36:600 (9) - stack correctly Some fixed. ^^"

Nice nice, it's good to see this map improving so much ^^

[Mod Infos]

Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.
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[General]

• Source: Air

[Easy]

• HP Drain Rate: 3
• Overall Difficulty: 3

[Hard]

• Offset: 34.200

All fixed. Thank for mod & 7 stars.

เจ๋งเลย สวย + สนุกมาก > w <b

จะ Rank แล้วสู้ๆน้อ~

 F,0,139200,139800,1,0.01999985
 F,0,139800,140400,0.01999985,1

 F,0,139200,139800,1,0
 F,0,139800,140400,0,1

Hi~
Here a little mod

[SB]
-Open u .osb file and fix lines like the next:
Code:
F,0,139200,139800,1,0.01999985
F,0,139800,140400,0.01999985,1

lines like that need be something like this
Code:
F,0,139200,139800,1,0
F,0,139800,140400,0,1


Only that :3
Nice song =)
Star~

according to these

the general translate should be "summer lights"xD

สไลเดอร์ด้วยกันเองยังห่างไม่เท่ากัน ความเร็วของสไลด์ไม่เท่ากันเลยห่างกันคับ

ช่วยเลือกตัวอย่างที่ดีแล้วเอาไปปรับแก้ให้เหมือนกันให้หมดทั้งเพลงเน่อ คือจะ mod ให้แก้ไม่รู้จะใช้แพทเทิร์นไหน(ห่าง 1 ห่าง 2 รึว่าให้ติดกัน เพราะมันเดี๋ยวใกล้เดี๋ยวไกล)

01:47:100 - disable grid snap แล้วก็ซ้อนให้มันเนียนๆ เด้อ
01:51:900 - ^
02:04:800 - spacing(ใกล้ไป)
04:10:425 - (แซว)ทำไมเสียงปรบมือมันมาตอนนี้ละเนี่ย(ปล่อยเม้าส์เรียบร้อย นึกว่าจบแล้ว T^T)
All fixed.

[General]
Diff lengths are inconsistent!

[StoryBoard]
You should probably finish cloud-02.png movement when it exits the screen
cloud-02.png stops movement abruptly and looks like it freezes on:02:31:800 intentional?
at: 02:31:800 more clouds magically appear on top of the previous ones overriding their fade values, intentional?
your osb contains a lot of code, try using loops to reduce the ammount of lines?

[Hard]
Nice, i like it!

[Normal]
Looks fine

[Easy]
This diff is too short!

Well i'll give the star, i hope you take in mind the SB stuff i pointed out, nice map

Thank all fixed. ^^" (I'm sorry for new rule this.I don't know. )