James2250 wrote:

-you should only need 1 timing section so delete all the others and put
bpm:177.96 (this is doubled bpm so half slider velocity and fix them)
offset:323 (don't forget to resnap all notes) Okay.
-delete osb file in folder and do full submit Okay.
-set preview points on all difficulties (under timing)
-needs hitsounds (clap, whistle, finish)I'll add them when I finish the map
-I don't think Crawl needs to be in all caps? It goes all in caps, in the video it is all in caps.

Miharu:
you don't need hp drain and overall diff so low you can raise them by 2 ticks each Okay.
00:01:686 (1) - remove new combo No, it's a new instrumental combo.
01:01:349 (7) - long repeating sliders like this are often boring...I wouldn't use too many of them and try to think of more interesting ways to map it Okay.

Yoite:
00:26:996 (1,2) - stack the endpoints? Okay.
00:45:173 (4,5,6) - keep spacing equal No, is intentional.
00:54:270 (4,1) - switch new combo Okay.
01:23:935 (6) - new combo Okay.

Shinrabansho:
remove all kiai times on this difficulty apart from the last one (they dont fit) No, they're intentional and they fit with the double voice D:
00:05:394 (3) - stack over fading 2 Okaay.
01:16:536 (1,2,3,4,5) - spacing (put new combo on 3 if you are going to do jumps) Okay.
01:19:570 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ Okay.
I would also use shift+ctrl+A on this diff and check for any mistakes

*star*

YGOkid8 wrote:

General:
You should only use Kiai Time in the chorus (for this song). All other places are unsuitable.

Kecco wrote:

•King of Nabari•
00:29:667 (9) - Spacing sbagliato. JUMP
00:32:027 (7) - ^ JUMP
00:35:399 (8) - ^ è giusto lol
01:02:877 (5,6,7) - Lo trovo alquanto inutile questo uso di tre note da 1/4 è parallelo a 01:04:057 (10,11,12)

•Shinrabansho•
00:20:901 (6) - Spacing sbagliato. JUMP
00:40:456 (6) - Non ho capito se questa diff è una normal. Se lo è, questo salto è troppo grande per questa diff. è scirtto nel messaggio della mappa cos'è, se non leggi non sono fatti che mi riguardano °°
00:51:582 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Se vale il discorso della normal, in queste combo ci sono dei jumps troppo grandi per questa diff. -.-"
01:17:206 (1) - Un salto troppo grande per una normal, se lo è.-.-""
01:20:240 (1) - ^-.-"""
01:22:263 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^MA HAI FETTE DI PROSCIUTTO SUGLI OCCHI!? LEGGI I MESSAGGI, CHE CI STANNO.

James2250 wrote:

make all tags the same as on Miharu (and add any others if you can)..not anime or Nabari
End the section of kiai time at 01:15:857 on all difficulties (that atm ends at 01:14:593)AWFUL

Yoite:
00:50:571 - remove break and map itno, no no no no no!
00:52:762 (5) - add noteabslolutely no! i know there's a "ohoh" lyrics, but i find it a bit ugly D:
too much use of finish hitsounds during kiai timei think they're okay D:

tieff wrote:

[King of Nabari]
00:20:227 (6) - Oh no! Hidden slider.

Bubbled. Feel free to pop.

tmokb93 wrote:

tieff wrote:

[King of Nabari]
00:20:227 (6) - Oh no! Hidden slider.

Bubbled. Feel free to pop.

Why? XD

awp wrote:

don't strive for a ranked map, strive for the best damn map possible

ztrot wrote:

really Insane is very cramped.
I highly suggest you do something about that.

yaya wrote:

NICE hitsound
NICE placement

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

What the hell.

Instead of complaining about appearance, look, or whatever is insignificant for gameplay, look at the timing, because it's so bad i wonder how this is bubbled.

Timing:
Offset: 324; BPM: 177,8
Offset: 11122; BPM: 177,5
Offset: 31403; BPM: 178
Offset: 32721; BPM: 178,1
Offset: 54281; BPM: 177,85
Offset: 83954; BPM: 178,15

It might require some really little adjustments because i couldn't testplay it (tmokb93 should be the one to do that), but i'm sure it's better than the previous one.

Also, about the last difficulty:
00:15:678 (8) - one square up to fix the shape
00:29:429 (8,9) - what. this is not a "decreased spacing" like 00:30:442 (2,3,4,5,6,7), because (9,10,1) make another different thing.
01:15:619 (6,7,8) - move (8) under (7), (7) under (6), (6) under (2)
01:27:261 (3,4) - ugly as hell and hard to read

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

What the hell.

Instead of complaining about appearance, look, or whatever is insignificant for gameplay, look at the timing, because it's so bad i wonder how this is bubbled.

Timing:
Offset: 324; BPM: 177,8
Offset: 11122; BPM: 177,5
Offset: 31403; BPM: 178
Offset: 32721; BPM: 178,1
Offset: 54281; BPM: 177,85
Offset: 83954; BPM: 178,15

It might require some really little adjustments because i couldn't testplay it (tmokb93 should be the one to do that), but i'm sure it's better than the previous one.

Also, about the last difficulty:
00:15:678 (8) - one square up to fix the shape
00:29:429 (8,9) - what. this is not a "decreased spacing" like 00:30:442 (2,3,4,5,6,7), because (9,10,1) make another different thing.
01:15:619 (6,7,8) - move (8) under (7), (7) under (6), (6) under (2)
01:27:261 (3,4) - ugly as hell and hard to read

ztrot wrote:

Still it's not right plus the bpm is wrong and doubled I got 89 flat for the bpm

Ephemeral wrote:

The timing is right, the kiai is fun and the map is really not of the quality that one would expect from a ranked map these days. But i don't care.

tieff wrote:

[King of Nabari]
00:34:060 (1,2,3,4) - Don't use random streams just becouse it's insane.
00:35:408 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:39:439 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:40:786 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:44:829 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:46:176 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:59:504 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:00:852 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:10:285 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^
01:11:632 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^

Sushi971 wrote:

Eeeeeew seriously, THAT was ranked?

inconsistent spacing, some timing wrong, awful streams, some random combo.... There's a problem here.

Really, the King of nabari diff is awful, how could you rank that, both of you???

Sushi971 wrote:

Eeeeeew seriously, THAT was ranked?

inconsistent spacing, some timing wrong, awful streams, some random combo.... There's a problem here.

tmokb93 wrote:

Sushi971 wrote:

Eeeeeew seriously, THAT was ranked?

inconsistent spacing, some timing wrong, awful streams, some random combo.... There's a problem here.

Really, the King of nabari diff is awful, how could you rank that, both of you???

Uhm, is an insane, uhm...so:
inconsistent spacing: i don't care, is an insane;
some timing wrong: by the fact you can get SS? -.-;
awful streams: their normally streams °°
random combo: don't you like graphic chooses?
"king of nabari is awful": Ok but is awful for you or the noobs who rated 1 -.-

ouranhshc wrote:

you don't have to be able to pass a map to be able to tell if that map isn't good

Krisom wrote:

Oh, and the streams DO are random, they follow a pattern but don't fit the music. Want a map with non-random streams? Go here, I'm sure you will find at least one.

tmokb93 wrote:

Krisom wrote:

Oh, and the streams DO are random, they follow a pattern but don't fit the music. Want a map with non-random streams? Go here, I'm sure you will find at least one.

I will know if streams are randoms or they don't fit the music. And this isn't the case. So stop complaining around and take care of your maps =D

tmokb93 wrote:

So stop complaining around and take care of your maps =D

Krisom wrote:

tmokb93 wrote:

So stop complaining around and take care of your maps =D

Ok, I'll stop complaining and take care of my maps. But take notice, my only ranked map has more star score than your maps, all of them. So I suppose I'll just focus on my maps and won't give you more advise, wich is a shame considering that you could do MUCH better than this, but you don't care about quality, looks like you care about ranking speed.

Blue Dragon wrote:

Oh, and the streams DO are random, they follow a pattern but don't fit the music. Want a map with non-random streams? Go here, I'm sure you will find at least one.

yeahyeahyeahhh wrote:

starred for retardedededness. osu!drama ftw!

Ephemeral wrote:

Unranked.

King of Nabari difficulty is absolutely retarded - there are streams for the sake of having streams, the overall layout of the map is pretty poor, the hitsounds are terrible and as Gens stated - the spacing is completely bonkers.

Either delete the difficulty or make it better. If it's such a huge problem to fix, have somebody do a guest difficulty for you - if you can find someone that can withstand your appalling attitude, that is.

If I were you, I'd think about doubling the slider velocity and upping the spacing to like 1.5x. You'll have a lot more freedom with what formations you can use to make the map more enjoyable whilst still retaining difficulty. Having the map so clumped up like this limits what you can feasibly do with it.

Contact any BAT which has had their fingers in this map (including myself) when you feel that you've improved upon it somewhat. We'll keep this unranked for as long as it is not up to scratch.

tmokb93 wrote:

yeahyeahyeahhh wrote:

starred for retardedededness. osu!drama ftw!

Shut up.

yeahyeahyeahhh wrote:

Wow, screw you guy! If this is the way you treat people, you got what you deserved!

Ephemeral wrote:

Unranked.

King of Nabari difficulty is absolutely retarded - there are streams for the sake of having streams, the overall layout of the map is pretty poor, the hitsounds are terrible and as Gens stated - the spacing is completely bonkers.

Either delete the difficulty or make it better. If it's such a huge problem to fix, have somebody do a guest difficulty for you - if you can find someone that can withstand your appalling attitude, that is.

If I were you, I'd think about doubling the slider velocity and upping the spacing to like 1.5x. You'll have a lot more freedom with what formations you can use to make the map more enjoyable whilst still retaining difficulty. Having the map so clumped up like this limits what you can feasibly do with it.

Contact any BAT which has had their fingers in this map (including myself) when you feel that you've improved upon it somewhat. We'll keep this unranked for as long as it is not up to scratch.

banvi wrote:

I wish thismap become reranked.

YGOkid8 wrote:

General:
- BPM: 177.96
Remember to Resnap all notes.
Also best to reposition when the inherited timing sections come in

- Delete all other red timing sections.

Yoite:
00:00:997 (3,1,1) - Spacing confused me.
00:54:619 (1) - Fix this up afterward however you like
01:05:400 (1) - Ugly slider ._.
01:14:833 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Change this... I uh, don't like it for some reason

Haneii wrote:

Just a suggestion:

Armin No Jutsu- end Kiai time at 01:14:580

Mok No Jutsu- end Kiai time at 01:15:254

tmokb93 wrote:

Haneii wrote:

Just a suggestion:

Armin No Jutsu- end Kiai time at 01:14:580

Mok No Jutsu- end Kiai time at 01:15:254

Why? xD

Garven wrote:

As per Armin's request:

[Easy]
00:32:543 - This break just feels awkward. Please map it. Done.
00:39:439 (1) - Waay too soon after a spinner for an easy. I'd just simply map through the spinner. No.
00:44:829 (1) - ^ No.
00:50:219 (1) - ^ No.
00:50:219 (1,1) - Consecutive short repeating sliders on an easy aren't very good - especially when they have different repeat values. It's hard to feel when they are going to stop when you're new. This will only cause frustration. Added a repeat on the second slider.
00:54:283 - Start kiai here No.
01:07:758 (1,2) - Stuff like this are really iffy for an easy too. :/ There are also at the begin of the map.
01:09:106 (1) - This spinner doesn't fit very well to me. Changed.
01:15:843 (3) - Set the uninherited timing section to be the soft hit sound set. No, I did it on purpose.
01:23:937 (1,1) - What? Just end the first one at 01:27:813. No.


I think the weirdest thing to me is that normal is slower velocity-wise than easy. There are songs ranked that have this thing, so it shouldn't be a problem XD

Kuroneko-sHerald wrote:

01:07:758 (1,2) - Stuff like this are really iffy for an easy too. :/ There are also at the begin of the map.

Yeah, I just didn't feel like going back and pointing them all out, thus why I kept it kind of general. I still don't like 'em on an easy, but it's up to you.

I think the weirdest thing to me is that normal is slower velocity-wise than easy. There are songs ranked that have this thing, so it shouldn't be a problem XD

Yeah, I don't see it as problematic... just kind of weird, hehe.

Ephemeral wrote:

Unranked.

King of Nabari difficulty is absolutely retarded - there are streams for the sake of having streams, the overall layout of the map is pretty poor, the hitsounds are terrible and as Gens stated - the spacing is completely bonkers.

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