Yun*chi - Wonderful Wonder World*‬ · forum‬

Sky Trias

Sky Trias 2015-05-23T17:15:59+00:00

CloudSplash16 wrote:
M4M

[General]
I strongly recommend adding a storyboard. I think the song really deserves one.
[Easy]
Trias' Easy is the correct way to write the difficulty name in English. (Without the second 's') okie change to Trias' Easy
I think HP4 is too high for this map. I recommend HP3. set
00:15:446 - The combos before this are not matching the musical phrasing. You're starting the new combos in the middle of the phrase... remove NC ~
00:07:477 (2,2) - Your use of sliders here doesn't fit the music, as it completely skips the downbeat, making it weird to play, especially for beginners. Consider changing the rhythm to put something on the downbeat. short slider , then add a not.
00:18:727 (1) - I recommend shortening this to a 1/2 slider, because there is a release on 00:19:196 in the music. Also, why did you use so many nodes on the slider? You only need 5 nodes to make this shape: http://puu.sh/hXBH5/5d000ac288.jpg i can't make better slider , soo i use many nodes there. anyway , short the slider 1/2 then and change the slider shape to tight shape.
00:33:258 (3,1) - Make a clean blanket? The map will look better if you make all the blankets even. okie
00:34:664 (2,4) - Why overlap like this? I think it may look better if you stack them. I think it would better if I make like that stack then.
00:35:133 (3,5) - This isn't acceptable in Easy difficulty. (5) is hidden under (3), only two beats apart, and makes it difficult for the player to read. It also looks really messy. re-map this part then.
00:42:164 (4,3) - New combos should be here instead. fixed
01:14:508 (2,4) - Stack? okie
01:17:789 - Combos in this section are inconsistent. Please try to make them eight beat combos. how about now?
01:54:821 (1,2) - Avoid overlapping like this. It's hard to read for beginners. re-map this part then.
01:58:571 (1,2) - It'd be nice if you could make the inner shape more circular. i'm trying..
02:00:914 (2,1) - Make a more even blanket. okie
02:09:821 (1,1,1) - Too many combos. Would also look better if you blanketed the first two. 02:11:227 (1) - remove NC also make blanket there.
02:37:946 (1,3) - Don't stack like this. It's too hard for the player to see (3). re-map this part then.
03:11:696 - I think it's better to map out this part. It's such a waste to skip this nice build-up. okie~ map this part.
03:22:477 (3) - Weird to skip the strong downbeat. Try a different rhythm? re-map this part then
04:41:696 (1) - I recommend removing this. There's no note starting on this beat. remove..
Some rhythms don't seem to fit the music well. err
Nice song.

Update #1

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: 01. Wonderful Wonder World.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 62321
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 0.4999999

[Metadata]
Title:Wonderful Wonder World*
TitleUnicode:Wonderful Wonder World*
Artist:Yun*chi
ArtistUnicode:Yun*chi
Creator:lit120
Version:Trias' Easy
Source:ログ・ホライズン
Tags:log horizon 2 second season full ending euny sky_trias
BeatmapID:700184
BeatmapSetID:311832

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:0.9
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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zj0924

309 posts

Joined November 2014

zj0924 2015-05-24T04:50:23+00:00

Hi!From my queue~M4M

Default = Normal mods(suggestions)
Blue = Strongly recommended
Red = Unrankable issue

[General]

It seems that you tend to map symmetry pattern,but flow is kinda boring imo(move in circle mostly),consider adding variety for more fun feeling

[Hard]

00:02:321 (1,2) - The visual spacing is inconsistent,despite using ds it feels so close when playing,move one of them(or both) out of that diamond
00:22:946 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - why they touched a bit?It doesn't seem good imo
00:41:227 (6) - try oval flow?
01:04:430 (1,2,3,4) -
01:06:071 (1,2,3) - I can't understand why you don't map on red tick,If the reason is for variety,I think it comes into no effect,cuz this part of melody is as similar as previous one,so I'd suggest map sth here or it'll feel void
01:15:211 (2) - finish you dit it on 01:13:571 (1) -
01:14:274 (3,1) - I have some question with this transition,If I were you I'll stack 1 on 3(anti-jump),well,seems hard to move objects I'd suggest extend slider ....Anti jump is the best choice here
01:16:852 (1) - NC for sv change(I can't understand why slow down here though)
03:45:446 (1,2,3,4) - not a fan of this kind of pattern,It seems so cramped
04:40:992 (6) - remove the last finish...
04:49:196 (1) - volume 5%

[Insane]

00:32:321 (6) - add a circle here to make it clickable
01:06:540 (3,4,1) - I don't like this flow...
01:16:852 (1) - NC for sv change
01:24:352 (7) -192 284 for better flow of 781
01:31:383 (1,2,3,4) - It's hard to read the rhythm and doesn't play good
04:41:461 (4) - remove this finish

Sorry for my short mod,I'm not good at modding symmetry style map and I'm afraid many suggestion I give will ruin the structure of your map so just keep it short

GL~

Euny

2,274 posts

Joined January 2014

Euny 2015-05-24T04:52:18+00:00

CloudSplash16 wrote:
M4M

[Normal]
00:19:196 - I'm a bit disappointed that you mapped this part with such dense rhythm. I think it would be a lot better if you simplified this section, so you can make contrast with 00:34:196 when drums come in. It will have a nice effect, and fit the music better. Also, the claps don't fit with this section. I'd recommend removing them. Actually, if you switched the rhythm between the two sections at 00:19:196 and 01:47:321 it would be perfect.
01:30:914 (1,1) - I recommend adding a repeat to the slider, and starting the spinner one beat later.
02:07:008 (3,1) - Just a minor thing, move the red node on (1) down so parts of (3,1) are parallel: http://puu.sh/hXD8w/27fd1a64ed.jpg
02:59:039 (1,1) - Same suggestion here as the previous part. Also, why is the spinner end different from 01:31:852
04:40:524 (7,8) - Flow here is just a bit awkward. Can you make it smoother? http://puu.sh/hXDnl/aad1ae8f23.jpg
Good job.
Nice song.

applied all. thanks for nice mod Cloud!

here is fixed

osu file format v14

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AudioFilename: 01. Wonderful Wonder World.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 62321
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.4

[Metadata]
Title:Wonderful Wonder World*
TitleUnicode:Wonderful Wonder World*
Artist:Yun*chi
ArtistUnicode:Yun*chi
Creator:lit120
Version:Euny's Normal
Source:ログ・ホライズン
Tags:log horizon 2 second season full ending euny sky_trias
BeatmapID:704112
BeatmapSetID:311832

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:3.5
OverallDifficulty:5
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.1
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lit120

3,276 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

lit120 2015-05-24T05:44:16+00:00

zj0924 wrote:
Hi!From my queue~M4M

Default = Normal mods(suggestions)
Blue = Strongly recommended
Red = Unrankable issue

[General]
It seems that you tend to map symmetry pattern,but flow is kinda boring imo(move in circle mostly),consider adding variety for more fun feeling i need to think about this. also, it's a random one

[Hard]
00:02:321 (1,2) - The visual spacing is inconsistent,despite using ds it feels so close when playing,move one of them(or both) out of that diamond (2) will be stack with (4)
00:22:946 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - why they touched a bit?It doesn't seem good imo better remade then
00:41:227 (6) - try oval flow? done

01:04:430 (1,2,3,4) - done
01:06:071 (1,2,3) - I can't understand why you don't map on red tick,If the reason is for variety,I think it comes into no effect,cuz this part of melody is as similar as previous one,so I'd suggest map sth here or it'll feel void no. this will be enough for me
01:15:211 (2) - finish you dit it on 01:13:571 (1) - not really fitable
01:14:274 (3,1) - I have some question with this transition,If I were you I'll stack 1 on 3(anti-jump),well,seems hard to move objects I'd suggest extend slider ....Anti jump is the best choice here i guess not
01:16:852 (1) - NC for sv change(I can't understand why slow down here though) did that from Cloud's
03:45:446 (1,2,3,4) - not a fan of this kind of pattern,It seems so cramped idk, but i will stick on this
04:40:992 (6) - remove the last finish... nahhh
04:49:196 (1) - volume 5% ok

[Insane]
00:32:321 (6) - add a circle here to make it clickable fine...
01:06:540 (3,4,1) - I don't like this flow... need to think about this
01:16:852 (1) - NC for sv change did that from Cloud's
01:24:352 (7) -192 284 for better flow of 781 ok
01:31:383 (1,2,3,4) - It's hard to read the rhythm and doesn't play good did that from Cloud's
04:41:461 (4) - remove this finish nope
Sorry for my short mod,I'm not good at modding symmetry style map and I'm afraid many suggestion I give will ruin the structure of your map so just keep it short it's a mix. non-symmetrical and symmetrical. it's fine anyway
GL~

well thx for mod

. UPDATE FOR ALL DIFFS!!!

Shurelia

Global Moderator

2,816 posts

Joined December 2013

Shurelia 2015-05-27T16:09:35+00:00

おっす!やったよ!

~ From Lovely Modding Quest! ~

[General]

- http://puu.sh/i14yF.png , Check the .osu files to fix it. or just pm me if you don't know how.

[Trias' Easy]

OD = 3 , 4 is a bit too much for Easy.
00:56:696 (1) - This NC is unnecessary i think. Should be removed.
01:11:227 (1) - ^^^
02:54:352 (1) - ^^^
02:59:977 - How about to add an object at here? Don't forget to add finish if you do.
03:23:414 (4) - ^^^ feels really empty and did not plays well ww
03:38:414 (1) - This spins is too long and makes the next part really awkwardly plays. I mean, starting the next part at 03:43:571 (1) - is really not fits well with the song because there's a strong vocal at 03:41:696 (1) - Which is where you should start the new part. I suggest you to reduce the spinner lenght to 03:40:758 (1) - it'll fit the songs more.
03:49:196 (3) - Add finish on the head.
04:04:196 (2) - ^^^
04:11:227 (4) - Feels really empty, Add an object maybe?
04:11:696 (1) - This spinner also didn't fit well with the music, i would prefer you move this into 04:11:930 (1) - and add a circle at the previous spinner's position. and add the finish on the new object too.

[Euny's Normal]

00:20:602 (2) - You may able to add a circle here. It fits more imo
00:26:696 (1) - Add finish on the head.
01:32:086 (1) - I prefer this spinner to start at 01:32:321 - and you can add a circle at the previous spinner's spot. (You might have to reduce the spinner's lenght to do this)
03:36:071 (5) - Missing finish at here. (on the head
04:03:727 (1) - Finish on the tails
04:06:071 (2) - ^^^
04:30:446 (1) - ^^^ on the head
04:40:289 (6,7) - it's quite to read for a normal diff, better to unstack these.

[Hard]

02:25:758 (5) - This slider is kinda bad. Should be changed.

[Insane]

00:54:352 (4) - this have quite a bad distance (Anti-jump)

tbh , this Insane should be more improved because it's still lacking of "Enjoyment" for me. (Still looks very similar with Hard diff)

That's all for me, Hope this help. And good luck!

lit120

3,276 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

lit120 2015-05-28T04:38:33+00:00

Shurelia wrote:
おっす!やったよ!

~ From Lovely Modding Quest! ~

[General]
- http://puu.sh/i14yF.png , Check the .osu files to fix it. or just pm me if you don't know how. don't worry. i know how

[Hard]
02:25:758 (5) - This slider is kinda bad. Should be changed. no

[Insane]
00:54:352 (4) - this have quite a bad distance (Anti-jump) done. just changed the sides

tbh , this Insane should be more improved because it's still lacking of "Enjoyment" for me. (Still looks very similar with Hard diff) i better wait for other mods for this

That's all for me, Hope this help. And good luck!

thx for mod

. waiting for Trias and Euny now...

EDIT: ~~Trias is remaining now~~ done for all diffs now

Last edited by lit120 2015-05-28T11:48:38+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Euny

2,274 posts

Joined January 2014

Euny 2015-05-28T05:01:36+00:00

Shurelia wrote:
おっす!やったよ!

~ From Lovely Modding Quest! ~

[General]
- http://puu.sh/i14yF.png , Check the .osu files to fix it. or just pm me if you don't know how.

[Euny's Normal]
00:20:602 (2) - You may able to add a circle here. It fits more imo
00:26:696 (1) - Add finish on the head.
01:32:086 (1) - I prefer this spinner to start at 01:32:321 - and you can add a circle at the previous spinner's spot. (You might have to reduce the spinner's lenght to do this) - fixed but dont add other note.
03:36:071 (5) - Missing finish at here. (on the head
04:03:727 (1) - Finish on the tails
04:06:071 (2) - ^^^
04:30:446 (1) - ^^^ on the head
04:40:289 (6,7) - it's quite to read for a normal diff, better to unstack these. - i think its fine cause i using stack for other parts too.

tbh , this Insane should be more improved because it's still lacking of "Enjoyment" for me. (Still looks very similar with Hard diff)[/list][/notice]

That's all for me, Hope this help. And good luck!

no reply = fixed

thanks for mod!

@lit120 : i added audio lead in +2000ms.

here is fixed

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: 01. Wonderful Wonder World.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 62321
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.4

[Metadata]
Title:Wonderful Wonder World*
TitleUnicode:Wonderful Wonder World*
Artist:Yun*chi
ArtistUnicode:Yun*chi
Creator:lit120
Version:Euny's Normal
Source:ログ・ホライズン
Tags:log horizon 2 second season full ending euny sky_trias
BeatmapID:704112
BeatmapSetID:311832

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:3.5
OverallDifficulty:5
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.1
SliderTickRate:1

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//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,94864,106121
2,182521,190496
2,199395,201746
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Combo2 : 255,114,9
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Sky Trias

Sky Trias 2015-05-28T11:17:27+00:00

Shurelia wrote:
おっす!やったよ!

~ From Lovely Modding Quest! ~

[General]
- http://puu.sh/i14yF.png , Check the .osu files to fix it. or just pm me if you don't know how.

[Trias' Easy]
OD = 3 , 4 is a bit too much for Easy. set
00:56:696 (1) - This NC is unnecessary i think. Should be removed.
01:11:227 (1) - ^^^
02:54:352 (1) - ^^^ fixed NC
02:59:977 - How about to add an object at here? Don't forget to add finish if you do. nope.
03:23:414 (4) - ^^^ feels really empty and did not plays well ww added
03:38:414 (1) - This spins is too long and makes the next part really awkwardly plays. I mean, starting the next part at 03:43:571 (1) - is really not fits well with the song because there's a strong vocal at 03:41:696 (1) - Which is where you should start the new part. I suggest you to reduce the spinner lenght to 03:40:758 (1) - it'll fit the songs more. excuse me? i don't get it. but i tried to change some part.
03:49:196 (3) - Add finish on the head.
04:04:196 (2) - ^^^ added
04:11:227 (4) - Feels really empty, Add an object maybe? nope.
04:11:696 (1) - This spinner also didn't fit well with the music, i would prefer you move this into 04:11:930 (1) - and add a circle at the previous spinner's position. and add the finish on the new object too. Again , i don't get it. Anyway , keep this.

That's all for me, Hope this help. And good luck!

Update #2

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: 01. Wonderful Wonder World.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 62321
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
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[Metadata]
Title:Wonderful Wonder World*
TitleUnicode:Wonderful Wonder World*
Artist:Yun*chi
ArtistUnicode:Yun*chi
Creator:lit120
Version:Trias' Easy
Source:ログ・ホライズン
Tags:log horizon 2 second season full ending euny sky_trias
BeatmapID:700184
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:0.9
SliderTickRate:1

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Yunona

103 posts

Joined May 2014

Yunona 2015-05-28T21:06:23+00:00

Trias' Easy

SPOILER

00:06:071 (1) - Can try to do something like:

00:09:821 (1) - ^
00:11:227 (2) - something like:

00:13:571 (1) - as 00:06:071 (1)
00:22:477 (4) - delete
00:28:102 (3,4) - to move the slider 3 to not overlap with the 4
00:58:571 (1,2) - something like:

02:33:727 (4) - copy 02:32:321 (3),paste,ctrl+J,ctrl+H,delete reverse,to put in place
02:59:977 - can put a circle
03:56:227 (2) - something like (not forget to move)

04:11:227 - can you put a circle
04:41:696 - ^

Euny's Normal

SPOILER

Delete in Design Widescreen Support
00:23:649 (2,3) - 2 in place 3,and 3 in place 2
03:00:211 (1) - it is better to put at 03:00:446
04:40:758 (8) - end to put on the red tick

Hard

SPOILER

01:14:508 (4) - try to put a circle
04:11:461 (4,1) - ctrl+H

Insane

SPOILER

00:02:321 (1) - on x:196 y:184
00:02:555 (2) - on x:248 y:32
00:03:024 (3) - on x:444 y:192
00:21:539 (7) - ctrl+> and to put in place
00:22:711 (8) - on x:212 y:272
00:41:227 (7,8) - ctrl+G
01:32:438 (1) is better to put the end at 01:34:664
01:56:461 (4,1) - 4 put on x:118 y:337 and 1 slider ctrl+G
02:50:836 (4) - ctrl+G
03:21:305 (1,2,3,4) - on x:392 y:36

Good Luck~

Euny

2,274 posts

Joined January 2014

Euny 2015-05-29T03:30:24+00:00

Chamue wrote:

Euny's Normal

SPOILER
Delete in Design Widescreen Support - this is general thing. but i fixed
00:23:649 (2,3) - 2 in place 3,and 3 in place 2 - i think this more fit for music not for vocal.
03:00:211 (1) - it is better to put at 03:00:446 - fixed
04:40:758 (8) - end to put on the red tick - no its right timing,

Good Luck~[/centre]

fixed code

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lit120

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lit120 2015-05-29T03:33:04+00:00

Chamue wrote:

Hard

SPOILER
01:14:508 (4) - try to put a circle slider is enough
04:11:461 (4,1) - ctrl+H hmmm...

Insane

SPOILER
00:02:321 (1) - on x:196 y:184no
00:02:555 (2) - on x:248 y:32 no
00:03:024 (3) - on x:444 y:192 no
00:21:539 (7) - ctrl+> and to put in place it's an easy part. can't make that kind of jump for that part
00:22:711 (8) - on x:212 y:272 bad idea
00:41:227 (7,8) - ctrl+G nope
01:32:438 (1) is better to put the end at 01:34:664 need to think about this
01:56:461 (4,1) - 4 put on x:118 y:337 and 1 slider ctrl+G no
02:50:836 (4) - ctrl+G no
03:21:305 (1,2,3,4) - on x:392 y:36 bad idea

Good Luck~

take 1 mod only. thx for mod anyway. waiting for Trias and Euny now

Shiranai

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Joined August 2012

Shiranai 2015-05-29T17:30:11+00:00

Helloooo as requested~
Some small sugestion from me,

[General]

Consider to add "Version and ver"? since you put "Full" on tags

[Trias' Easy]

Audio LeadIn conflict with the other diffs, and tbh I think it's no need to add audio leadin: 2000, because the beginning time is suficient enough for preparation, so you can change back the code into audio leadin: 0
00:00:446 - Consider to delete that green line since the SV doesn't change, so I think it's not necesary
00:17:321 (5,1) - Swap NC I guess to make it consistent on two measurment NC, then NC this one 00:20:133 (3) -
00:19:196 - Duplicate green line, doesn't give effect anything on hitsound, volume, kiai, SV, or anything, so better delete that
00:19:664 - I guess that green line should be put here instead 00:19:196 -
00:24:821 (3) - Change the rhythm? it's somehow not fit with the reverse since you miss really strong piano sound here 00:25:758 - so maybe you can try this rhythm instead http://puu.sh/i4uyk/fc0d59fa73.jpg
00:37:008 (5) - The shape doen't really appealable, maybe something like this flows better http://puu.sh/i4uFE/298a1d54a7.jpg
01:16:852 - Better turn off the kiai efect on that part, so it'll produce the kiai flash on 01:17:321 - but it's your choice
01:28:571 (1,2,3) - Move all to x:88 y:60? for neater blanketing reason
01:36:071 - Duplicate green line, doesn't give effect anything on hitsound, volume, kiai, SV, or anything, so better delete that
01:47:321 - Duplicate green line, doesn't give effect anything on hitsound, volume, kiai, SV, or anything, so better delete that, or you can reduce the volume into 50~55%
02:44:039 (2) - How about make the rhythm same as 01:14:977 (3,4,5) - Put a long slider, somewhat not fit imo
02:45:446 - Duplicate green line, doesn't give effect anything on hitsound, volume, kiai, SV, or anything, so better delete that, unless you want to make kiai flash, then you need another green line here 02:44:977 - with no kiai effect
03:15:446 - Duplicate green line, doesn't give effect anything on hitsound, volume, kiai, SV, or anything, so better delete that, or you can reduce the volume into 50~55%
04:09:352 (2,3) - For better flow, move both to x:224? y:121?
04:49:196 - Better set the volume there 10~15%? to fit the ending music, because 40% hitsound still sound too loud

Overall hitsoundnya kurang ngena kak, jadi kaya kurang impact gitu, untuk struktur sih udah lumayan bagus terus untuk hal-hal kecil lainnya coba diperhatikan lg deh

[Euny's Normal]

For consistency on whole diff you can consider to untick the widescreen support
00:00:446 - Consider to delete that green line since the SV doesn't change, so I think it's not necesary
00:00:446 (1) - For consistency, why don't you add whistle also on the slider body? like this three 00:01:383 (2,3,4) -
00:02:321 (3) - Consider to make an NC there? for consistency reason while you always make NC on every one downbeat
00:19:664 - That green line is S:C2 but there's no custom soft-sliderslide2 to silence and it's just too awkward and distracting when we can hear the sliderslide sound, while this sliderslide part 00:19:196 - is silence, so how about to add soft-sliderslide2.wav for consistency in using silence sliderslide, there's some of this kind of issue maybe you can find the others
00:33:258 (1) - The whistle sound should be on head instead the tail imo, as you can hear the piano sound is stronger here 00:33:258 - so maybe you can add whistle on head and delete whistle on tail
00:34:664 - Forget clap?
00:46:617 - 00:46:852 - 00:54:586 - 00:54:821 - 00:58:336 - 00:58:571 - Maybe you can consider to set the sampleset and additions (located on up-left) into something like this http://puu.sh/i4UkI/2cd1cf7422.jpg So the drum sound on those is more emphsized better and sound nice, try it yourself and if there by anychance other beat that sound same you can try to apply on them
00:57:164 (3) - Why not NC? for consistency on NCing on every one downbeat or white big tick
01:00:446 (5,1) - Swap NC? for consistency also
01:11:227 (4,5) - Move them to x:392 y:72? and adjust the first node on this slider 01:11:461 (5) - to x:392 y:72, so it'll make the slider neater http://puu.sh/i4V1A/26e78dada1.jpg
02:14:742 - 02:14:977 - 02:22:711 - 02:22:946 - Maybe you can consider to set the sampleset and additions (located on up-left) into something like this http://puu.sh/i4UkI/2cd1cf7422.jpg So the drum sound on those is more emphsized better and sound nice, try it yourself and if there by anychance other beat that sound same you can try to apply on them
02:27:633 (3,1,2) - The flow betwen the is too cramped, maybe you can try to move this 02:28:571 (1,2) - to x:408 y:300, so it'll give more space when moving
03:00:446 - Why the volume on this one 100%?
03:36:071 (5) - How about t move that to x:168 y:156? then you can rotate -60degree this 03:36:540 (6) - so overall it'll produce a better circular flow that more near to the center before the spinner http://puu.sh/i4VUV/857f3631f2.jpg
03:56:696 (1) - Just a minor, the curent is a bit too plain imo, how about making that slider into something like this? http://puu.sh/i4W3x/9b9ae6eaa6.jpg or something better?
04:05:133 (3) - Move one grid up to x:236 y:228 for better straight flow, this one too 04:05:602 (1) - move up one grid up to x:364 y:204 for better straight flow?
04:21:071 (4) - Should be NC I guess?
04:22:946 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - In my opinion that's way too confusing imo, while there's stacked circle then followed by slider repeat, so how about making the circles not stacking? or make it into slider instead? but it's up to you, I've been try and yes that pattern and flow hard to follow
04:40:758 (8) - What's that? based on musicality the slider end should be ended at that white big tick here 04:41:696 - and maybe you can add green line and adjust the volume 10~20% so it'll fit when the music ending
04:49:196 - Set the volume 10~20%? volume 40% is still too loud as you can hear the music ended

I'm more consider about some circles stacking, but play good so far, very good job Eun~

[Hard]

00:00:446 - Consider to delete that green line since the SV doesn't change, so I think it's not necesary
00:47:321 - Spacing mulai bagian itu aneh terlalu deket 0.9 kan? di mana lit coba konsisten pake ds kan di sana? tapi ada satu bagian lain di sini 02:15:446 - Di mana ritme musiknya sama dan pengaturan SVnya dan lainnya serupa tapi jarak ds nya beda lebih jauh di sini jaraknya 1.20 dan konsisten ngikutin ds, hal itu buat agak kurang nyaman sebenernya pas dimainin, coba deh diperiksa ulang
01:16:852 (1) - Kalo SVnya diset jadi 0.7 atau 0.75 bagaimana lit? kayanya kalo 0.5 terlalu pelan kesannya pas main jadi kebanting gitu flownya
02:22:008 (2) - Add whistle? kinda too empty
Beberapa green line/inherited points unsnapped, coba deh diperiksa lagi, contohnya ga snapped ini 02:22:962 - Coba deh lebih cermat lagi
02:44:977 (1) - Sama kasusnya SVnya terlalu lambat, Kalo SVnya diset jadi 0.7 atau 0.75 bagaimana lit? kayanya kalo 0.5 terlalu pelan kesannya pas main jadi kebanting gitu flownya
04:49:196 - Set the volume 10~20%? volume 5% too quite soalnya ga recomended buat suara soft sampleset, beberapa orang bilangnya inaudible, jadi mungkin bisa dinaikin sedikit volumenya jadi 10%

[]
Aku cape, ga suka sama lagunya jadi kurang semangat modnya,
Goodluck lit, bagus banget udah banyak perkembangan, kalo bingung tanya aja

bibilicu

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bibilicu 2015-05-29T18:41:33+00:00

Reply to Mako Sakata's mod and then I will mod :3

lit120

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lit120 2015-05-30T04:01:38+00:00

Mako Sakata wrote:
Helloooo as requested~
Some small sugestion from me,

[General]
Consider to add "Version and ver"? since you put "Full" on tags idk, but whatever. added for all diffs
[Hard]
00:00:446 - Consider to delete that green line since the SV doesn't change, so I think it's not necesary k
00:47:321 - Spacing mulai bagian itu aneh terlalu deket 0.9 kan? di mana lit coba konsisten pake ds kan di sana? tapi ada satu bagian lain di sini 02:15:446 - Di mana ritme musiknya sama dan pengaturan SVnya dan lainnya serupa tapi jarak ds nya beda lebih jauh di sini jaraknya 1.20 dan konsisten ngikutin ds, hal itu buat agak kurang nyaman sebenernya pas dimainin, coba deh diperiksa ulang ganti yg 00:47:321 - jadi 1.2x DS
01:16:852 (1) - Kalo SVnya diset jadi 0.7 atau 0.75 bagaimana lit? kayanya kalo 0.5 terlalu pelan kesannya pas main jadi kebanting gitu flownya remade
02:22:008 (2) - Add whistle? kinda too empty no
Beberapa green line/inherited points unsnapped, coba deh diperiksa lagi, contohnya ga snapped ini 02:22:962 - Coba deh lebih cermat lagi rechecking the green line and fixed it
02:44:977 (1) - Sama kasusnya SVnya terlalu lambat, Kalo SVnya diset jadi 0.7 atau 0.75 bagaimana lit? kayanya kalo 0.5 terlalu pelan kesannya pas main jadi kebanting gitu flownya ok. remade juga
04:49:196 - Set the volume 10~20%? volume 5% too quite soalnya ga recomended buat suara soft sampleset, beberapa orang bilangnya inaudible, jadi mungkin bisa dinaikin sedikit volumenya jadi 10% set ke 10%
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Aku cape, ga suka sama lagunya jadi kurang semangat modnya,
Goodluck lit, bagus banget udah banyak perkembangan, kalo bingung tanya aja

santai aj mako. kan kamu perlu mod diff yg kamu perlu mod aj sihh

. thx for mod! waiting for Trias and Euny before uploading this + calling ByBy_ChAn

Euny

2,274 posts

Joined January 2014

Euny 2015-05-30T07:22:35+00:00

Mako Sakata wrote:
Helloooo as requested~
Some small sugestion from me,

[Euny's Normal]
For consistency on whole diff you can consider to untick the widescreen support - i fixed 3 times. lol ..lit update my diff T,T
00:00:446 - Consider to delete that green line since the SV doesn't change, so I think it's not necesary -✔fixed
00:00:446 (1) - For consistency, why don't you add whistle also on the slider body? like this three 00:01:383 (2,3,4) - ✔fixed
00:02:321 (3) - Consider to make an NC there? for consistency reason while you always make NC on every one downbeat - ✔fixed
00:19:664 - That green line is S:C2 but there's no custom soft-sliderslide2 to silence and it's just too awkward and distracting when we can hear the sliderslide sound, while this sliderslide part 00:19:196 - is silence, so how about to add soft-sliderslide2.wav for consistency in using silence sliderslide, there's some of this kind of issue maybe you can find the others - ✔fixed
00:33:258 (1) - The whistle sound should be on head instead the tail imo, as you can hear the piano sound is stronger here 00:33:258 - so maybe you can add whistle on head and delete whistle on tail - i want to keep on tail. but, yeah you are right seems so. i added whistle to head too.
00:34:664 - Forget clap? - ✔fixed
00:46:617 - 00:46:852 - 00:54:586 - 00:54:821 - 00:58:336 - 00:58:571 - Maybe you can consider to set the sampleset and additions (located on up-left) into something like this http://puu.sh/i4UkI/2cd1cf7422.jpg So the drum sound on those is more emphsized better and sound nice, try it yourself and if there by anychance other beat that sound same you can try to apply on them - i think its enough
00:57:164 (3) - Why not NC? for consistency on NCing on every one downbeat or white big tick - ✔fixed
01:00:446 (5,1) - Swap NC? for consistency also - ✔fixed
01:11:227 (4,5) - Move them to x:392 y:72? and adjust the first node on this slider 01:11:461 (5) - to x:392 y:72, so it'll make the slider neater http://puu.sh/i4V1A/26e78dada1.jpg - ah, okay,, later!!
02:14:742 - 02:14:977 - 02:22:711 - 02:22:946 - Maybe you can consider to set the sampleset and additions (located on up-left) into something like this http://puu.sh/i4UkI/2cd1cf7422.jpg So the drum sound on those is more emphsized better and sound nice, try it yourself and if there by anychance other beat that sound same you can try to apply on them - i know but i think its enough.
02:27:633 (3,1,2) - The flow betwen the is too cramped, maybe you can try to move this 02:28:571 (1,2) - to x:408 y:300, so it'll give more space when moving - its for blanket also i think its fine.
03:00:446 - Why the volume on this one 100%? - ✔fixed
03:36:071 (5) - How about t move that to x:168 y:156? then you can rotate -60degree this 03:36:540 (6) - so overall it'll produce a better circular flow that more near to the center before the spinner http://puu.sh/i4VUV/857f3631f2.jpg - nice suggestion, but i want to keep this cause its for blanket with previous slider
03:56:696 (1) - Just a minor, the curent is a bit too plain imo, how about making that slider into something like this? http://puu.sh/i4W3x/9b9ae6eaa6.jpg or something better? - xD... hmm.. i think its fine
04:05:133 (3) - Move one grid up to x:236 y:228 for better straight flow, this one too 04:05:602 (1) - move up one grid up to x:364 y:204 for better straight flow? - hmm,~ told you its for blanket with previous slider..
04:21:071 (4) - Should be NC I guess? - ✔fixed
04:22:946 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - In my opinion that's way too confusing imo, while there's stacked circle then followed by slider repeat, so how about making the circles not stacking? or make it into slider instead? but it's up to you, I've been try and yes that pattern and flow hard to follow - i dont know what is better. i think its fine.
04:40:758 (8) - What's that? based on musicality the slider end should be ended at that white big tick here 04:41:696 - and maybe you can add green line and adjust the volume 10~20% so it'll fit when the music ending - listen and carefully it is right tempo.
04:49:196 - Set the volume 10~20%? volume 40% is still too loud as you can hear the music ended - ✔fixed

I'm more consider about some circles stacking, but play good so far, very good job Eun~
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Aku cape, ga suka sama lagunya jadi kurang semangat modnya,
Goodluck lit, bagus banget udah banyak perkembangan, kalo bingung tanya aja

thanks for mod, mako♥

@lit:i dont want to anymore hear about "check out widescreen support blabla~~" why that always check inxDDDDD... anyways....

here is 'check out widescreen support' to my diff... lol

osu file format v14

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Sky Trias

Sky Trias 2015-05-30T22:39:43+00:00

Chamue

Chamue wrote:

Trias' Easy

SPOILER
00:06:071 (1) - Can try to do something like: re-map a bit

00:09:821 (1) - ^
00:11:227 (2) - something like:

00:13:571 (1) - as 00:06:071 (1) re-map a bit some pattern look good right now.
00:22:477 (4) - delete
00:28:102 (3,4) - to move the slider 3 to not overlap with the 4 re-map this pattern then.
00:58:571 (1,2) - something like: keep.

02:33:727 (4) - copy 02:32:321 (3),paste,ctrl+J,ctrl+H,delete reverse,to put in place fix
02:59:977 - can put a circle added then.
03:56:227 (2) - something like (not forget to move) re-map with my other ways.

04:11:227 - can you put a circle added.
04:41:696 - ^ nope.

Good Luck~

Mako Sakata

Mako Sakata wrote:
Helloooo as requested~
Some small sugestion from me,

[General]
Consider to add "Version and ver"? since you put "Full" on tags
[Trias' Easy]
Audio LeadIn conflict with the other diffs, and tbh I think it's no need to add audio leadin: 2000, because the beginning time is suficient enough for preparation, so you can change back the code into audio leadin: 0 set
00:00:446 - Consider to delete that green line since the SV doesn't change, so I think it's not necesary delete.
00:17:321 (5,1) - Swap NC I guess to make it consistent on two measurment NC, then NC this one 00:20:133 (3) - okie
00:19:196 - Duplicate green line, doesn't give effect anything on hitsound, volume, kiai, SV, or anything, so better delete that delete.
00:19:664 - I guess that green line should be put here instead 00:19:196 - yeah fixed.
00:24:821 (3) - Change the rhythm? it's somehow not fit with the reverse since you miss really strong piano sound here 00:25:758 - so maybe you can try this rhythm instead http://puu.sh/i4uyk/fc0d59fa73.jpg re-map this part then.
00:37:008 (5) - The shape doen't really appealable, maybe something like this flows better http://puu.sh/i4uFE/298a1d54a7.jpg yeah . And re-map some part there
01:16:852 - Better turn off the kiai efect on that part, so it'll produce the kiai flash on 01:17:321 - but it's your choice delete kiai there , put on 01:17:321 - instead
01:28:571 (1,2,3) - Move all to x:88 y:60? for neater blanketing reason fixed , better for now
01:36:071 - Duplicate green line, doesn't give effect anything on hitsound, volume, kiai, SV, or anything, so better delete that
01:47:321 - Duplicate green line, doesn't give effect anything on hitsound, volume, kiai, SV, or anything, so better delete that, or you can reduce the volume into 50~55% reduce to 50% cause song sound slow here
02:44:039 (2) - How about make the rhythm same as 01:14:977 (3,4,5) - Put a long slider, somewhat not fit imo re-map with my way
02:45:446 - Duplicate green line, doesn't give effect anything on hitsound, volume, kiai, SV, or anything, so better delete that, unless you want to make kiai flash, then you need another green line here 02:44:977 - with no kiai effect add kiai flash instead
03:15:446 - Duplicate green line, doesn't give effect anything on hitsound, volume, kiai, SV, or anything, so better delete that, or you can reduce the volume into 50~55% 55%
04:09:352 (2,3) - For better flow, move both to x:224? y:121? fixed. better for now
04:49:196 - Better set the volume there 10~15%? to fit the ending music, because 40% hitsound still sound too loud 10% ending

Overall hitsoundnya kurang ngena kak, jadi kaya kurang impact gitu, untuk struktur sih udah lumayan bagus terus untuk hal-hal kecil lainnya coba diperhatikan lg deh I'm trying
Aku cape, ga suka sama lagunya jadi kurang semangat modnya,
Goodluck lit, bagus banget udah banyak perkembangan, kalo bingung tanya aja

Update #3

osu file format v14

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TitleUnicode:Wonderful Wonder World*
Artist:Yun*chi
ArtistUnicode:Yun*chi
Creator:lit120
Version:Trias' Easy
Source:ログ・ホライズン
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lit120

3,276 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

lit120 2015-05-31T05:22:45+00:00

changed the Audio Lead In for all diffs

Blizs

898 posts

Joined November 2013

Blizs 2015-06-08T13:00:29+00:00

Argh....
I've mod this...
and when I post, Attention Required! appear T.T
I'll mod tomorrow for M4M T.T T.T
sorry for delay

edit : I'll edit this post again after I finish my mod

Cerulean Veyron

2,090 posts

Joined August 2012

Cerulean Veyron 2015-06-08T16:25:08+00:00

M4M from your queue~

[> General <]

- Seems fine here.

[> Trias' Easy <]

00:21:071 (2,1) - Why would you change spacing in this kind of diff? Beginners would be much confused for this... so it's best you reconsider using only one DS for the whole diff, I prefer 1.0x.
00:26:696 (4) - Add NC, already on a new track.
00:28:571 (6) - Add whistle on head.
00:39:352 (2) - The rhythm here sounds a little weird, since the reverse arrow hits the strong part, i don't feel this would make sense. So maybe you should make a downbeat at least, or try to make the head on the white long tick and remake the pattern.
00:45:446 (5) - Add whistle on head.
01:04:664 (4) - How about this circle be blanketed between (3) and (5)? it might improve flow here, instead of a straight one.
01:27:633 (4,1) - The distance spacing is kinda too big for this diff! Rearrange the spacing here, please.
02:04:196 (3) - I think you can do sth neater here, as for this slider. You've also done that previously on 01:23:414 (3) - , so why don't you try here as well? ofc for consistency!
02:22:477 (4,1,2) - I'm not sure, but recorrect some blankets here? They seem off a little imo.
02:28:571 (2) - Well, continue adding the finish, on head. It might sound gratifying while emphasizing with the song track.
02:33:727 (4) - Swap clap from tail to head.
02:41:227 (4) - Add clap on tail.
02:44:508 (2) - Add finish on tail, start of kiai time.
03:23:414 (4) - Since there's a downbeat, and passed by two tracks, i guess you need to add NC here.
03:41:696 (1) - Add clap on tail.
03:43:102 (3) - Same as above.
03:56:227 (2) - On head, clap. On tail, finish.
04:04:196 (2,3) - These sliders look a little awkward when the flow straight down and come back up on a different position straightly, seems really odd. Try to remake this pattern neater than the current one.
04:37:477 (3) - Move this slider to x:460, or nearby, to recorrect the blanket.
- The diff seems fine! But actually, the rhythm/flow needs some check for improvements. Kinda needs more mods imo.

[> Euny's Nomal <]

00:12:633 (3) - I prefer this slider is curved, not sharpen.
00:23:883 (3,1) - Idk, but maybe recorrect this blanket. I'm not sure...
00:37:946 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Well, the rhythm seems to be repeated again and again. I know it's for consistency, but not to overuse it. Try to differ the pattern here.
00:54:586 (3) - Ehh, I prefer (3) stacked on (1), not (2). It fits for the flow imo.
01:03:258 (3) - I think moving the red anchor downwards would fit much better, probably on x:88|y:304 or nearby.
01:10:289 (3,5) - Parallel? just my suggestion.
01:18:258 (3,4,5) - The spacing here is much different... (3) and (4) is 1.24x away, (4) and (5) is 1.17x away. Try to balance this spacing here.
01:22:477 (5) - Almost the same issue as 00:54:586 (3) -, stack on sliderhead.
02:06:071 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Same as 00:37:946 (1,2,3,1,2,3) -
02:38:414 (3,5) - Same as 01:10:289 (3,5) -
04:26:696 (1,2,3,4) - Make symmetry here?
04:40:758 (8) - Is this slider snapped to 1/8??! You should snap the tail on 1/2 instead.
- The mapping is quite fine, especially in the middle of the game play. There are some patterns needed to check for flow, but it's acceptable and fine imo.

[> Hard <]

00:17:321 (1,2,3) - You have a weird spacing here, from 1.0x to 1.2x then came back to 1.0x. Spacing looks odd.
00:28:571 (3,4,1) - Almost similar to above, but the spacing got a little shorter. Maybe you should check this as well.
00:36:071 (5,7) - Why not try a double blanket here? you could've done that already.
00:39:117 (4) - Move to x:196|y:340 or nearby? for a back-and-forth flow to keep the player's cursor active instead of stacks.
01:00:446 (1,1) - What i prefer, the circle should hit the kiai, not the spinner's end. Because the rhythm sounds very intense for a "click on a circle". So maybe you should reconsider this.
01:17:789 (2,3,4) - Spacing~
01:27:633 (3,4,5) - Well, as before, try back-and-forth flow here. But this time, try to place (4) anywhere you can.
01:57:633 (3,1) - I guess this spacing is likely above ^2.0x, which would look like a jump in my view. It's best you reduce the spacing here.
02:23:883 (2,3,4) - Try a symmetry here, would fit this track better.
02:28:571 (1,1) - Same as 01:00:446 (1,1) -
03:11:696 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe you might need to split their tails up, it pretty looks odd. Somehow, an old mapping or sth.
03:45:446 (1,2,3,4) - Ehh, it's kiai time, you should make patterns' movement/placement almost anywhere, alike making the player's cursor active. So try to stick with it.
03:56:578 (10) - I don't think any beats on the song track hit at this part, which means this circle is overmapped. Remove it for avoiding overmaps?
04:11:227 (3) - Move to x:256 for the best symmetry here.
04:34:196 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Too much stacking, similar to the issue on 00:39:117 (4) -
- This diff looks okay, but the mapping lacks aesthetics. Maybe this also lacks of mods as well, try to find them and check their opinions at least. Sometimes, it might help you improve your mapping process.

Well, an acceptable map, i'm sure you have potential to move this map to the ranking process. But if you only made this map with greater aesthetic mapping. Maybe that's all for now.
Good luck!

lit120

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Topic Starter

lit120 2015-06-08T17:14:44+00:00

Thx for mod Gray. Will handle that later at afternoon

Euny

2,274 posts

Joined January 2014

Euny 2015-06-09T00:25:47+00:00

Gray Veyron wrote:
M4M from your queue~

[> Euny's Nomal <]
00:12:633 (3) - I prefer this slider is curved, not sharpen.- ✔fixed
00:23:883 (3,1) - Idk, but maybe recorrect this blanket. I'm not sure...- ✔fixed
00:37:946 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Well, the rhythm seems to be repeated again and again. I know it's for consistency, but not to overuse it. Try to differ the pattern here.- hmm, i think its fine tempo. or if you have good timeline suggest, tell me please > <
00:54:586 (3) - Ehh, I prefer (3) stacked on (1), not (2). It fits for the flow imo.- ✔fixed
01:03:258 (3) - I think moving the red anchor downwards would fit much better, probably on x:88|y:304 or nearby.- ✔fixed
01:10:289 (3,5) - Parallel? just my suggestion. - still playful imo
01:18:258 (3,4,5) - The spacing here is much different... (3) and (4) is 1.24x away, (4) and (5) is 1.17x away. Try to balance this spacing here.- ✔fixed
01:22:477 (5) - Almost the same issue as 00:54:586 (3) -, stack on sliderhead. - yeah, i agree case by 00:54:586 (3). but this pattern is fit for vocal.
02:06:071 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Same as 00:37:946 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - - also same as above
02:38:414 (3,5) - Same as 01:10:289 (3,5) - - this too.
04:26:696 (1,2,3,4) - Make symmetry here? - its trapezoid
04:40:758 (8) - Is this slider snapped to 1/8??! You should snap the tail on 1/2 instead. - ✔fixed
- The mapping is quite fine, especially in the middle of the game play. There are some patterns needed to check for flow, but it's acceptable and fine imo. thanks for nice mod:D
Well, an acceptable map, i'm sure you have potential to move this map to the ranking process. But if you only made this map with greater aesthetic mapping. Maybe that's all for now.
Good luck!

fixed

osu file format v14

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PreviewTime: 62321
Countdown: 0
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Mode: 0
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TitleUnicode:Wonderful Wonder World*
Artist:Yun*chi
ArtistUnicode:Yun*chi
Creator:-Hakurei-
Version:Euny's Normal
Source:ログ・ホライズン
Tags:log horizon 2 second season full ver version ending euny sky_trias pop lit120
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Sky Trias

Sky Trias 2015-06-09T02:43:30+00:00

Gray Veyron wrote:
M4M from your queue~

[> General <]
- Seems fine here.
[> Trias' Easy <]
00:21:071 (2,1) - Why would you change spacing in this kind of diff? Beginners would be much confused for this... so it's best you reconsider using only one DS for the whole diff, I prefer 1.0x. changing slider 00:21:071 (2)
00:26:696 (4) - Add NC, already on a new track. okie
00:28:571 (6) - Add whistle on head. added
00:39:352 (2) - The rhythm here sounds a little weird, since the reverse arrow hits the strong part, i don't feel this would make sense. So maybe you should make a downbeat at least, or try to make the head on the white long tick and remake the pattern. re-map this part
00:45:446 (5) - Add whistle on head. added
01:04:664 (4) - How about this circle be blanketed between (3) and (5)? it might improve flow here, instead of a straight one. okie fixed that.
01:27:633 (4,1) - The distance spacing is kinda too big for this diff! Rearrange the spacing here, please. my bad .. fixed
02:04:196 (3) - I think you can do sth neater here, as for this slider. You've also done that previously on 01:23:414 (3) - , so why don't you try here as well? ofc for consistency! hmm okie
02:22:477 (4,1,2) - I'm not sure, but recorrect some blankets here? They seem off a little imo. re-map then
02:28:571 (2) - Well, continue adding the finish, on head. It might sound gratifying while emphasizing with the song track.
02:33:727 (4) - Swap clap from tail to head.
02:41:227 (4) - Add clap on tail.
02:44:508 (2) - Add finish on tail, start of kiai time.
03:23:414 (4) - Since there's a downbeat, and passed by two tracks, i guess you need to add NC here.
03:41:696 (1) - Add clap on tail.
03:43:102 (3) - Same as above.
03:56:227 (2) - On head, clap. On tail, finish. ^ fixed all of them
04:04:196 (2,3) - These sliders look a little awkward when the flow straight down and come back up on a different position straightly, seems really odd. Try to remake this pattern neater than the current one. re-map part then
04:37:477 (3) - Move this slider to x:460, or nearby, to recorrect the blanket. yeah fixed placement
- The diff seems fine! But actually, the rhythm/flow needs some check for improvements. Kinda needs more mods imo. I'm trying

Well, an acceptable map, i'm sure you have potential to move this map to the ranking process. But if you only made this map with greater aesthetic mapping. Maybe that's all for now.
Good luck!

Update #4

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Blizs

898 posts

Joined November 2013

Blizs 2015-06-09T03:40:17+00:00

~~reply to Gray Veyron's mod and then I'll mod :3~~

Okay Here is it :3

Tiras' Easy

00:11:227 (2) - finish on the tail to improve the emphasis.
00:18:727 (2,1) - Not sure about this pattern. i hear a long vocal started at 00:19:196 - . So I think it's better to put a slider started at 00:19:196 - . Try this pattern => http://puu.sh/igPKh/1e7bccfb5c.jpg
00:58:571 (1,2,3,1) - Not sure about this pattern too. You ignored 01:00:446 - that have a big effect in the song. This part has a transition from 1/2 to 1/4 in the song and has an emphasis too. And 01:02:321 - . Since this part was a Kiai's start so I think here should be a click. Try this pattern => http://puu.sh/igRWX/01ac1e92be.jpg
01:30:446 (3) - I think finish on the head wasn't fit to the song here because the emphasis was on 01:30:211 - . But if you want to keep the finish, try this pattern for 01:28:571 (1,2,3) - instead => http://puu.sh/igSDs/dfdcaa0728.jpg . same to 03:54:352 (3) - (on the tail) and 04:09:352 (2) - (on the tail)
03:38:414 (1) - I think you misplaced the spinner's end. I hear nothing special at 03:40:289 - . But I will understand if you put the spinner's end at 03:40:524 - because there was an instrument. But I won't suggest this XD. I'lll suggest to put the spinner's end at 03:39:821 - because here is the main point of the pitch increasing and decreasing. So this point have an effect in the song.
I'm Sorry, maybe the screenshots wasn't fit with your combo colour now because I use my screenshot yesterday

Euny's Normal

Euny~~~ >w<

00:54:352 (2,3,1) - I suggest to stack them all or don't stack them at all. I think this point need consistency.
01:22:242 (4,5) - When I play it, I think it's just like 01:21:305 (2) - . So I click it just 1 time and I've missed T.T. To avoid this confusion, try to change 01:22:242 (4,5) - to a 1/2 slider. same to 02:50:367 (4,5) - and 04:01:617 (4,5) -
01:47:321 (1,1,1,1,2,1,1,2,1,1) - I like this :3
I see you've play the volume on the grren lines at 03:37:477 - to 03:40:758 - . I Like it :3. But, I see a little mistake on the volume play here. I hear that 03:39:821 - was the main poin on the pitch increasing and decreasing. So, the volume play should be : volume increasing until 03:39:821 - and decreasing after it. I see you keep it increasing until the end of volume play.
You have missed the consistency of NC start from 04:26:696 - . from 04:26:696 - to 04:33:961 - you used 4 beat NC but from 04:34:196 - to 04:41:696 - you used 8 beat NC. Why did they different when they have a same effect in the song ?

Hard

Just one thing that bother me in this diff. There is some parts that I think didn't really fit with the parts around it. It's some parts like 01:21:071 (1,2,3,4) - (especially for kiais). the parts before it have a neutral pattern and flow but suddenly the difficulty decreased so far. this part has a slow pattern just like Normal diff. And it makes a big spread between this diff and Insane. I see Insane in this part have jump singletaps that pretty hard. That's why I said this part have a big spread between it and the Insane diff's. I suggest to continue the natural flow and pattern that you did on the parts around it. (This one is applied for 01:06:071 (1,2,3,4) - , 02:49:196 (1,2,3,4) - ). Oh and I've search the parts like this and you did it right on 02:34:196 - .
and the rest looks fine for me :3

Insane

00:00:446 (1,2,3,4) - I think put a jump in the song's start isn't a good idea. Atleast let people know the beat before they play the jump. And I think jumps isn't really fit for this low pitch part.
00:16:383 (3,4) - switch their position. It's a bit weird if the spacing suddenly decreased on 00:15:914 (2,3) -
01:31:383 (1,2,3,4,5) - To be honest, this pattern is a bit unreadable. I don't know how to fix it. Maybe you can find it yourself. same to 02:59:508 (3,4,5,6,7) - and 04:10:758 (1,2,3,4,5) -

That's all I can find for now :3...
maybe I'll catch you or your GDer in game if I found something again :3
Hope it help

Good Luck \(>w< )~~~

edit : Oh and for the M4M, I've post my mapset for mod on the thread => p/4231462#p4231462

Last edited by Blizs 2015-06-10T15:29:55+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

lit120

3,276 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

lit120 2015-06-09T12:59:55+00:00

Gray Veyron wrote:
M4M from your queue~

[> Hard <]
00:17:321 (1,2,3) - You have a weird spacing here, from 1.0x to 1.2x then came back to 1.0x. Spacing looks odd. done
00:28:571 (3,4,1) - Almost similar to above, but the spacing got a little shorter. Maybe you should check this as well. ^ + Remade
00:36:071 (5,7) - Why not try a double blanket here? you could've done that already. i'll think about this
00:39:117 (4) - Move to x:196|y:340 or nearby? for a back-and-forth flow to keep the player's cursor active instead of stacks. ok
01:00:446 (1,1) - What i prefer, the circle should hit the kiai, not the spinner's end. Because the rhythm sounds very intense for a "click on a circle". So maybe you should reconsider this. i'll think about this
01:17:789 (2,3,4) - Spacing~ didn't notice that
01:27:633 (3,4,5) - Well, as before, try back-and-forth flow here. But this time, try to place (4) anywhere you can. aye aye
01:57:633 (3,1) - I guess this spacing is likely above ^2.0x, which would look like a jump in my view. It's best you reduce the spacing here. done. i changed the scale of the star anyway
02:23:883 (2,3,4) - Try a symmetry here, would fit this track better. ohh well...
02:28:571 (1,1) - Same as 01:00:446 (1,1) - need to think about this
03:11:696 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe you might need to split their tails up, it pretty looks odd. Somehow, an old mapping or sth. nope
03:45:446 (1,2,3,4) - Ehh, it's kiai time, you should make patterns' movement/placement almost anywhere, alike making the player's cursor active. So try to stick with it. well, it's fine for me anyway
03:56:578 (10) - I don't think any beats on the song track hit at this part, which means this circle is overmapped. Remove it for avoiding overmaps? there's a note there. listen to it carefully
04:11:227 (3) - Move to x:256 for the best symmetry here. done
04:34:196 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Too much stacking, similar to the issue on 00:39:117 (4) - back and forth will do
- This diff looks okay, but the mapping lacks aesthetics. Maybe this also lacks of mods as well, try to find them and check their opinions at least. Sometimes, it might help you improve your mapping process. will do my best for that

Well, an acceptable map, i'm sure you have potential to move this map to the ranking process. But if you only made this map with greater aesthetic mapping. Maybe that's all for now.
Good luck!

thx for mod, once again

. and updated hitsound that i missed on Hard and Insane

Neil Watts

osu! Alumni

1,843 posts

Joined July 2013

Neil Watts 2015-06-10T08:51:26+00:00

Hi Hakurei

[General]
You should put 5% on hitsound volume for the last timing point of all your diffs, since nothing can be heard in the song at this point 04:49:196 - (your volume for each of your diffs here is 10/20/10/10)

[Trias' Easy]
- 00:21:071 (2,1) - Please fix your distances here edit: nvm, fixed in the last mod
Nice diff.

[Euny's Normal]
- 01:32:438 - what's the purpose of this timing point ?
- 02:58:336 (3) - I suggest you to replace it with a circle, to fit better with the song.
- 03:11:930 (1,1) - not sure if there's enough time between these two elements, this may be risky. You should ask a BN
- 03:15:680 (1) - I feel this item a bit off, I suggest you to remove the circle just after and move this item here 03:15:914 -

[Hard]
- 00:22:946 (1,2,3,4) - I don't feel these items fitting with the rhythm. try to map the vocals ?
- 00:30:914 (2) - check your distances here
- 00:49:899 (4) - You may remove this circle, it will fit much better with the song imo
- 02:19:196 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this part isn't instinctive. The first combo can be ok, but the second doesn't follow the song at all. http://puu.sh/ijjwq/aacb30faf3.jpg - The blue bookmarks are placed where you should put an element to make this part instinctive. Since it's on a blue tick, I suggest you to use a slider, like this http://puu.sh/ijjNF/2f9df3bcee.jpg

The diff is nice, but I think it would be much better if you didn't have used so much ctrl+c ctrl+v ctrl+g ctrl+h ctrl+j etc.

[Insane]
- 00:00:446 - You should put less volume for hitsounding here.
- 00:22:946 (1,2,3,4) - same comment as the Hard diff

Same comment about copy-pasting here.

Good luck for ranking, nice song!

Euny

2,274 posts

Joined January 2014

Euny 2015-06-10T10:41:36+00:00

Neil Watts wrote:
Hi Hakurei

[Euny's Normal]
- 01:32:438 - what's the purpose of this timing point ?
- 02:58:336 (3) - I suggest you to replace it with a circle, to fit better with the song.
- 03:11:930 (1,1) - not sure if there's enough time between these two elements, this may be risky. You should ask a BN
- 03:15:680 (1) - I feel this item a bit off, I suggest you to remove the circle just after and move this item here 03:15:914 -

Good luck for ranking, nice song!

applied all thanks

fixed

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lit120

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Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

lit120 2015-06-10T10:58:36+00:00

Neil Watts wrote:
Hi Hakurei

[General]
You should put 5% on hitsound volume for the last timing point of all your diffs, since nothing can be heard in the song at this point 04:49:196 - (your volume for each of your diffs here is 10/20/10/10) well ok

[Hard]
- 00:22:946 (1,2,3,4) - I don't feel these items fitting with the rhythm. try to map the vocals ? let me think about this
- 00:30:914 (2) - check your distances here ohh shit
- 00:49:899 (4) - You may remove this circle, it will fit much better with the song imo note + vocal
- 02:19:196 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this part isn't instinctive. The first combo can be ok, but the second doesn't follow the song at all. http://puu.sh/ijjwq/aacb30faf3.jpg - The blue bookmarks are placed where you should put an element to make this part instinctive. Since it's on a blue tick, I suggest you to use a slider, like this http://puu.sh/ijjNF/2f9df3bcee.jpg fine for me

The diff is nice, but I think it would be much better if you didn't have used so much ctrl+c ctrl+v ctrl+g ctrl+h ctrl+j etc. i'm trying...

[Insane]
- 00:00:446 - You should put less volume for hitsounding here. well that's fine for me
- 00:22:946 (1,2,3,4) - same comment as the Hard diff i think it's fine

Same comment about copy-pasting here. same thing what i said before

Good luck for ranking, nice song! aye sir!

thx for mod Neil

. btw, i deleted the .osb file since i noticed that few minutes ago

Sky Trias

Sky Trias 2015-06-10T14:11:21+00:00

Neil Watts wrote:
Hi Hakurei

[General]
You should put 5% on hitsound volume for the last timing point of all your diffs, since nothing can be heard in the song at this point 04:49:196 - (your volume for each of your diffs here is 10/20/10/10) set

[Trias' Easy]
- 00:21:071 (2,1) - Please fix your distances here edit: nvm, fixed in the last mod fixed there.
Nice diff.

Same comment about copy-pasting here.

Good luck for ranking, nice song!

Update #5

osu file format v14

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 62321
Countdown: 0
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[Editor]
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Title:Wonderful Wonder World*
TitleUnicode:Wonderful Wonder World*
Artist:Yun*chi
ArtistUnicode:Yun*chi
Creator:-Hakurei-
Version:Trias' Easy
Source:ログ・ホライズン
Tags:log horizon 2 second season full ver version ending euny sky_trias pop lit120
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Btw Hakurei , coba cek di folder map deh..
Disitu ada .osb coba dihapus deh?

lit120

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Topic Starter

lit120 2015-06-10T14:38:03+00:00

@Sky Trias udah w delete brapa jam yg lalu

Blizs

898 posts

Joined November 2013

Blizs 2015-06-10T15:44:46+00:00

I've edit my last post...
check it

Sky Trias

Sky Trias 2015-06-10T22:32:41+00:00

Fantastica wrote:
:idea: ~~reply to Gray Veyron's mod and then I'll mod :3~~

Okay Here is it :3

Tiras' Easy ( Trias' Easy ><)
00:11:227 (2) - finish on the tail to improve the emphasis.added
00:18:727 (2,1) - Not sure about this pattern. i hear a long vocal started at 00:19:196 - . So I think it's better to put a slider started at 00:19:196 - . Try this pattern => http://puu.sh/igPKh/1e7bccfb5c.jpg remade
00:58:571 (1,2,3,1) - Not sure about this pattern too. You ignored 01:00:446 - that have a big effect in the song. This part has a transition from 1/2 to 1/4 in the song and has an emphasis too. And 01:02:321 - . Since this part was a Kiai's start so I think here should be a click. Try this pattern => http://puu.sh/igRWX/01ac1e92be.jpg remade them..
01:30:446 (3) - I think finish on the head wasn't fit to the song here because the emphasis was on 01:30:211 - . But if you want to keep the finish, try this pattern for 01:28:571 (1,2,3) - instead => http://puu.sh/igSDs/dfdcaa0728.jpg . same to 03:54:352 (3) - (on the tail) and 04:09:352 (2) - (on the tail) keep there, I like that..
03:38:414 (1) - I think you misplaced the spinner's end. I hear nothing special at 03:40:289 - . But I will understand if you put the spinner's end at 03:40:524 - because there was an instrument. But I won't suggest this XD. I'lll suggest to put the spinner's end at 03:39:821 - because here is the main point of the pitch increasing and decreasing. So this point have an effect in the song. ahh sure, fixed ..
I'm Sorry, maybe the screenshots wasn't fit with your combo colour now because I use my screenshot yesterday

That's all I can find for now :3...
maybe I'll catch you or your GDer in game if I found something again :3
Hope it help
Good Luck \(>w< )~~~

edit : Oh and for the M4M, I've post my mapset for mod on the thread => p/4231462#p4231462

Update #6

osu file format v14

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-Hakurei- wrote:
@Sky Trias udah w delete brapa jam yg lalu

Ohh iyaa.. sudah diliat barusan .. tinggal tunggu update saja ^^

Fantastica wrote:
I've edit my last post...
check it

Trias' Easy please

not Tiras' Easy

anyway , thanks mod ^^

Alarido

1,744 posts

Joined September 2012

Alarido 2015-06-11T01:12:13+00:00

Hi (:

Modding this map at next saturday.

lit120

3,276 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

lit120 2015-06-11T06:41:56+00:00

Fantastica wrote:
:idea: ~~reply to Gray Veyron's mod and then I'll mod :3~~

Okay Here is it :3

Hard
Just one thing that bother me in this diff. There is some parts that I think didn't really fit with the parts around it. It's some parts like 01:21:071 (1,2,3,4) - (especially for kiais). the parts before it have a neutral pattern and flow but suddenly the difficulty decreased so far. this part has a slow pattern just like Normal diff. And it makes a big spread between this diff and Insane. I see Insane in this part have jump singletaps that pretty hard. That's why I said this part have a big spread between it and the Insane diff's. I suggest to continue the natural flow and pattern that you did on the parts around it. (This one is applied for 01:06:071 (1,2,3,4) - , 02:49:196 (1,2,3,4) - ). Oh and I've search the parts like this and you did it right on 02:34:196 - .
and the rest looks fine for me :3 tbh, i prefer to make it like that

Insane
00:00:446 (1,2,3,4) - I think put a jump in the song's start isn't a good idea. Atleast let people know the beat before they play the jump. And I think jumps isn't really fit for this low pitch part. that's fine for me
00:16:383 (3,4) - switch their position. It's a bit weird if the spacing suddenly decreased on 00:15:914 (2,3) - need more opinion
01:31:383 (1,2,3,4,5) - To be honest, this pattern is a bit unreadable. I don't know how to fix it. Maybe you can find it yourself. same to 02:59:508 (3,4,5,6,7) - and 04:10:758 (1,2,3,4,5) - it is like that. i found something that belongs to 1/8 tbh

That's all I can find for now :3...
maybe I'll catch you or your GDer in game if I found something again :3
Hope it help
Good Luck \(>w< )~~~

edit : Oh and for the M4M, I've post my mapset for mod on the thread => p/4231462#p4231462

thx for mod!

Blizs

898 posts

Joined November 2013

Blizs 2015-06-11T10:52:18+00:00

Sky Trias wrote:
Trias' Easy please
not Tiras' Easy anyway , thanks mod ^^

sori... salah ketik. Maklum efek ngemod malem malem XD

-Hakurei- wrote:
Insane
00:16:383 (3,4) - switch their position. It's a bit weird if the spacing suddenly decreased on 00:15:914 (2,3) - need more opinion

Jadi maksudya gini...
dari (1) ke (2) itu spacingnya cukup besar (mungkin malah agak jump). Tapi dari (2) ke (3) itu spacingnya kecil banget. Jadi perbedaannya jauh banget. Nah untuk membuat flow nya lebih kerasa makannya aku saranin untuk tukar posisinya (3) sama (4). (3) taruh di (4) dan (4) taruh di (3). Jadi spacingnya bisa seimbang dan flownya makin kerasa. That's all :3

lit120

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lit120 2015-06-11T11:20:50+00:00

double post -_-

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lit120

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lit120 2015-06-11T11:21:18+00:00

-Hakurei- wrote:
Insane
00:16:383 (3,4) - switch their position. It's a bit weird if the spacing suddenly decreased on 00:15:914 (2,3) - need more opinion

Jadi maksudya gini...
dari (1) ke (2) itu spacingnya cukup besar (mungkin malah agak jump). Tapi dari (2) ke (3) itu spacingnya kecil banget. Jadi perbedaannya jauh banget. Nah untuk membuat flow nya lebih kerasa makannya aku saranin untuk tukar posisinya (3) sama (4). (3) taruh di (4) dan (4) taruh di (3). Jadi spacingnya bisa seimbang dan flownya makin kerasa. That's all :3

ya sudah. FIXED!!!

Euny

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Euny 2015-06-11T16:49:13+00:00

Fantastica wrote:
:idea: ~~reply to Gray Veyron's mod and then I'll mod :3~~

Euny's Normal

Euny~~~ >w<
00:54:352 (2,3,1) - I suggest to stack them all or don't stack them at all. I think this point need consistency.
01:22:242 (4,5) - When I play it, I think it's just like 01:21:305 (2) - . So I click it just 1 time and I've missed T.T. To avoid this confusion, try to change 01:22:242 (4,5) - to a 1/2 slider. same to 02:50:367 (4,5) - and 04:01:617 (4,5) -
01:47:321 (1,1,1,1,2,1,1,2,1,1) - I like this :3
I see you've play the volume on the grren lines at 03:37:477 - to 03:40:758 - . I Like it :3. But, I see a little mistake on the volume play here. I hear that 03:39:821 - was the main poin on the pitch increasing and decreasing. So, the volume play should be : volume increasing until 03:39:821 - and decreasing after it. I see you keep it increasing until the end of volume play.
You have missed the consistency of NC start from 04:26:696 - . from 04:26:696 - to 04:33:961 - you used 4 beat NC but from 04:34:196 - to 04:41:696 - you used 8 beat NC. Why did they different when they have a same effect in the song ?

That's all I can find for now :3...
maybe I'll catch you or your GDer in game if I found something again :3
Hope it help
Good Luck \(>w< )~~~

edit : Oh and for the M4M, I've post my mapset for mod on the thread => p/4231462#p4231462

thanks for mod!

E's

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Backstep

1,007 posts

Joined September 2009

Backstep 2015-06-13T13:25:18+00:00

Hi from Terra's Modding Queue and here M4M as you want :3

General
- I think your mp3 had a bit low quality orz... try this new mp3 here :3
- About metadata artist should be "ユンチ" (Reference jp wiki here) <Wait some JP BN confirm!?>
- Easy difficulty name should be "Trias's Easy" ?

Trias' Easy

00:07:477 (2) - Move 1 grid up to make parallel with (1)
00:14:977 (2,3) - Move to 204:112 to make blanket with (1) if you fix move (4) to 292:376 and 00:17:321 (1) - 380:356 (don't worry about out screen.)
00:19:196 (1) - Empty sound here? NO pls add some finish here.
00:45:446 (5) - End slider add some whistle here to fit background music.
01:29:977 (2) - Missing clap here.
01:30:446 (3) - End slider use addition drum-finish here.
01:32:321 (1) - Use addition drum-finish here too imo :3
02:00:914 (2) - Move 2nd waypoint to 432:212 and 3rd waypoint to 384:296 to make more smooth circle.
02:02:321 (1,2,3) - If you fix above move these notes too, (1) 344:212 (2) 272:300 (3) 184:208
02:28:571 (2) - At reverse combine whistle and clap together?
02:43:102 (1) - Missing clap at start and end slider orz.
02:59:977 (4) - Clap please.
03:37:008 (2) - End slider add finish?
03:52:946 (2) - End slider change clap to drum-finish :3 (follow clap pattern.)
03:56:227 (2) - Add finish combine clap?

Euny's Normal

00:11:696 (1) - Use finish and whistle together?
00:58:102 (2) - End slider add whistle here for vocal?
01:10:289 (3) - Swap clap and whistle of this slider orz..
01:11:227 (4) - You miss clap here.
02:34:664 (3) - You forget clap at start and end slider.
02:38:414 (3) - Move your clap to start slider (for clap pattern.)
02:56:227 (5,1) - Swap NC here?

Hard

01:13:102 (5) - Add whistle to follow vocal.
01:25:289 (3) - Same above reason.
02:53:414 (3) - ^
03:42:633 (5,6) - Re-arrange these note like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3249058
03:49:664 (3) - Add whistle to follow vocal.
03:51:305 (2) - End slider add whistle for same reason above.
04:04:664 (3) - Add whistle to follow vocal.
04:06:539 (4) - ^

Solid map

Insane

00:30:914 (2) - Add whistle at end slider to follow vocal?
00:31:617 (4) - Add whistle here for same above reason.
00:31:852 (5) - Add whistle at end slider for same above reason.
01:03:258 (4,5,6,7) - Remove this notes then copy (1,2,3) and scale by 1.20x selection centre use (1,2) in same position like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3249128 After that NC at (4)
01:04:196 (1,2,3,4) - If you fix above move all notes to 268:104 or something that you think it's your best choice :3
01:08:180 (2) - Move this note to 436:104 to make trapezoid shape.
01:10:289 (3) - Add whistle.
01:25:289 (3) - ^
01:27:164 (3) - ^
01:55:758 (3) - You forget whistle at start slider to follow vocal.
02:52:711 (7) - Move to 304:128 to make centre between (5,6)
03:13:571 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - You need to improve your stream arrange notes here, I suggest use spinner at 03:13:453 then re-arrange your note by use spinner bolder... your notes will look more beautiful circle shape (oh don't remove your spinner after you finished re-arrange notes.)
03:27:399 (1,2,3) - Move to 356:72
03:27:867 (1,2,3) - If you fix above move this note to 188:72 you will see pentagon shape here imo :3
03:37:946 (3) - Finish sound break here oops! use soft-finish here pls :3
03:42:164 (3) - Add whistle here to follow vocal?
03:45:914 (3) - ^
03:49:664 (3) - ^
03:52:477 (3) - ^
04:04:664 (3) - ^
04:07:477 (3) - ^

Addition suggest.

You need to do some more creative notes specific at Insane, It have many things to re-arrange note pattern like triangle, square, pentagon, hexagon, star or something like this Ex. If you want to do symmetry triangle notes, use rotate tools with 120 degree for these three notes. You will get perfect triangle shape now :3

Good luck!

Euny

2,274 posts

Joined January 2014

Euny 2015-06-13T14:53:54+00:00

Backstep wrote:
Euny's Normal

00:11:696 (1) - Use finish and whistle together?- ✔fixed
00:58:102 (2) - End slider add whistle here for vocal?- ✔fixed
01:10:289 (3) - Swap clap and whistle of this slider orz..- ✔fixed
01:11:227 (4) - You miss clap here.- ✔fixed
02:34:664 (3) - You forget clap at start and end slider.- ✔fixed
02:38:414 (3) - Move your clap to start slider (for clap pattern.)- ✔fixed
02:56:227 (5,1) - Swap NC here? no this is correct.

Good luck!

thanks for mod

fixed

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lit120

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Topic Starter

lit120 2015-06-13T15:30:02+00:00

Backstep wrote:
Hi from Terra's Modding Queue and here M4M as you want :3

General
- I think your mp3 had a bit low quality orz... try this new mp3 here :3 kinda having a download speed problem here. will take that once it's fine
- About metadata artist should be "ユンチ" (Reference jp wiki here) <Wait some JP BN confirm!?> applied for all diffs
- Easy difficulty name should be "Trias's Easy" ? according to english, i don't think "s" + "'s" is correct for that. better wait for Trias about this

Hard

01:13:102 (5) - Add whistle to follow vocal. i don't think whistle for vocal is ok for that
01:25:289 (3) - Same above reason. ^
02:53:414 (3) - ^ ^
03:42:633 (5,6) - Re-arrange these note like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3249058 ok
03:49:664 (3) - Add whistle to follow vocal. no
03:51:305 (2) - End slider add whistle for same reason above. no
04:04:664 (3) - Add whistle to follow vocal. no
04:06:539 (4) - ^ no

Solid map

Insane

00:30:914 (2) - Add whistle at end slider to follow vocal? i don't feel like i want to use that, since it's for instrumental one
00:31:617 (4) - Add whistle here for same above reason. ^
00:31:852 (5) - Add whistle at end slider for same above reason. ^
01:03:258 (4,5,6,7) - Remove this notes then copy (1,2,3) and scale by 1.20x selection centre use (1,2) in same position like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3249128 After that NC at (4) done
01:04:196 (1,2,3,4) - If you fix above move all notes to 268:104 or something that you think it's your best choice :3 done
01:08:180 (2) - Move this note to 436:104 to make trapezoid shape. that's not even trapezoid shape. ohh, i changed it to somewhere
01:10:289 (3) - Add whistle. nope
01:25:289 (3) - ^ nope
01:27:164 (3) - ^ nope
01:55:758 (3) - You forget whistle at start slider to follow vocal. why would i need that?
02:52:711 (7) - Move to 304:128 to make centre between (5,6) done
03:13:571 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - You need to improve your stream arrange notes here, I suggest use spinner at 03:13:453 then re-arrange your note by use spinner bolder... your notes will look more beautiful circle shape (oh don't remove your spinner after you finished re-arrange notes.) ummm, i don't need spinner. and the stream one is fine for me (ohh, there is 1/8 part there)
03:27:399 (1,2,3) - Move to 356:72 done
03:27:867 (1,2,3) - If you fix above move this note to 188:72 you will see pentagon shape here imo :3 done
03:37:946 (3) - Finish sound break here oops! use soft-finish here pls :3 done
03:42:164 (3) - Add whistle here to follow vocal? no. not even fitable for me
03:45:914 (3) - ^ ^
03:49:664 (3) - ^ ^
03:52:477 (3) - ^ ^
04:04:664 (3) - ^ ^
04:07:477 (3) - ^

Addition suggest.
You need to do some more creative notes specific at Insane, It have many things to re-arrange note pattern like triangle, square, pentagon, hexagon, star or something like this Ex. If you want to do symmetry triangle notes, use rotate tools with 120 degree for these three notes. You will get perfect triangle shape now :3 yeah. but i have my own style for that tbh

Good luck!

Alarido

1,744 posts

Joined September 2012

Alarido 2015-06-13T16:19:43+00:00

Hi (:

Today doing it now instead of you replying and applying other mods. Don't forget them.

[General]
* After mp3 change, make sure of resnapping all objects on every diff (use AiMod to check)
* Make sure of resnapping every green lines (checking and fixing by hand).
* Timing will be rechecked soon.
* Metadata feels fine, in accord with latest ranked versions.

[Insane]
* Would be good just a bit more work here. Liked so very much the symmetries.
03:20:836 (4,1) - Almost unrankable. Move 03:20:836 (4) - to x:276 y:124 and 03:21:305 (1) - to x:316 y:52 to make the (1) a bit more visible under (4).
04:26:696 (1) - You could enhance the "basssssh" sound of the cymbal here... by raising its volume to 80~85% (just for this note), restoring the 70% volume by adding a green line on 04:26:930. (As a suggestion, the same would be fitting on other parts alike, as like as in 04:42:164 (1) - )

[Hard]
* Nothing to point.

[Normal by Euny]
* Pleasant to the eyes in a post-modern perspective. Flow in some parts not so amazing as it could be, but still good.
02:28:571 (1) - Move its tail dot to x:357 y:320, so any confusion for newbies may be washed up.
03:17:321 (1) - Rotate (around itself) by 12 degrees CCW and then move it by 1 grid to right, so blanket better.
03:36:540 (6) - Could position it in a manner to follow alike the previous ones. Move to x:124 y:252 and set the tail node to x:84 y:300. Image > http://puu.sh/inluZ/17a7b661a2.jpg]

[Easy by Sky Trias]
00:11:227 (2) - Move to x:48 y:332 and the middle node to x:24 y:292 and the tail to x:20 y:244 to better blanket and flow.

Also... let me know when you changed the mp3 to check timing.
Also... let me know with what anime is this song related to (I'd like to watch)
Also... that beautiful gal on bg...

lit120

3,276 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

lit120 2015-06-13T16:36:30+00:00

Alarido wrote:
Hi (:

Today doing it now instead of you replying and applying other mods. Don't forget them.

[General]
* After mp3 change, make sure of resnapping all objects on every diff (use AiMod to check)
* Make sure of resnapping every green lines (checking and fixing by hand).
* Timing will be rechecked soon.
* Metadata feels fine, in accord with latest ranked versions.

[Insane]
* Would be good just a bit more work here. Liked so very much the symmetries.
03:20:836 (4,1) - Almost unrankable. Move 03:20:836 (4) - to x:276 y:124 and 03:21:305 (1) - to x:316 y:52 to make the (1) a bit more visible under (4). ok
04:26:696 (1) - You could enhance the "basssssh" sound of the cymbal here... by raising its volume to 80~85% (just for this note), restoring the 70% volume by adding a green line on 04:26:930. (As a suggestion, the same would be fitting on other parts alike, as like as in 04:42:164 (1) - ) aye, that'll do

[Hard]
* Nothing to point.

Also... let me know when you changed the mp3 to check timing.
Also... let me know with what anime is this song related to (I'd like to watch)
Also... that beautiful gal on bg...

thx for mod! i'll call you once i changed the mp3

ohh, i'll answer your question about that too

Last edited by lit120 2015-06-13T17:05:37+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Euny

2,274 posts

Joined January 2014

Euny 2015-06-13T16:43:34+00:00

Alarido wrote:
Hi (:

Today doing it now instead of you replying and applying other mods. Don't forget them.

[notice][General]
* Metadata feels fine, in accord with latest ranked versions.

>>

seems we need to add that tag too. >> + ' crcp-10328 '

and i what is that ' pop ' in tag? its need to tag??

[Normal by Euny]
* Pleasant to the eyes in a post-modern perspective. Flow in some parts not so amazing as it could be, but still good.
02:28:571 (1) - Move its tail dot to x:357 y:320, so any confusion for newbies may be washed up.
03:17:321 (1) - Rotate (around itself) by 12 degrees CCW and then move it by 1 grid to right, so blanket better.
03:36:540 (6) - Could position it in a manner to follow alike the previous ones. Move to x:124 y:252 and set the tail node to x:84 y:300. Image > http://puu.sh/inluZ/17a7b661a2.jpg]

- ✔applied all check it again

Also... let me know when you changed the mp3 to check timing.
Also... let me know with what anime is this song related to (I'd like to watch)
Also... that beautiful gal on bg...

thanks ala<3

and i think we need to fix tag

anyways,

here is fixed

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: 01. Wonderful Wonder World.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 62321
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.4

[Metadata]
Title:Wonderful Wonder World*
TitleUnicode:Wonderful Wonder World*
Artist:Yun*chi
ArtistUnicode:ユンチ
Creator:-Hakurei-
Version:Euny's Normal
Source:ログ・ホライズン
Tags:log horizon 2 second season full ver version ending euny sky_trias pop lit120
BeatmapID:704112
BeatmapSetID:311832

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:3.5
OverallDifficulty:5
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.1
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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
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Sky Trias

Sky Trias 2015-06-14T03:02:14+00:00

Backstep

Backstep wrote:
Hi from Terra's Modding Queue and here M4M as you want :3

General
- I think your mp3 had a bit low quality orz... try this new mp3 here :3 ask mapper then
- About metadata artist should be "ユンチ" (Reference jp wiki here) <Wait some JP BN confirm!?> add on
- Easy difficulty name should be "Trias's Easy" ? keep there, thanks

Trias' Easy

00:07:477 (2) - Move 1 grid up to make parallel with (1) fixed
00:14:977 (2,3) - Move to 204:112 to make blanket with (1) if you fix move (4) to 292:376 and 00:17:321 (1) - 380:356 (don't worry about out screen.) sure change placement there
00:19:196 (1) - Empty sound here? NO pls add some finish here.
00:45:446 (5) - End slider add some whistle here to fit background music.
01:29:977 (2) - Missing clap here.
01:30:446 (3) - End slider use addition drum-finish here.
01:32:321 (1) - Use addition drum-finish here too imo :3 added all of them
02:00:914 (2) - Move 2nd waypoint to 432:212 and 3rd waypoint to 384:296 to make more smooth circle. I'm trying
02:02:321 (1,2,3) - If you fix above move these notes too, (1) 344:212 (2) 272:300 (3) 184:208 better there, fixed
02:28:571 (2) - At reverse combine whistle and clap together? um i think soo.. added there
02:43:102 (1) - Missing clap at start and end slider orz.
02:59:977 (4) - Clap please.
03:37:008 (2) - End slider add finish?
03:52:946 (2) - End slider change clap to drum-finish :3 (follow clap pattern.)
03:56:227 (2) - Add finish combine clap? add all they

I'm very bad in Hitsounding ..

Alarido

Alarido wrote:
Hi (:

Today doing it now instead of you replying and applying other mods. Don't forget them.

[General]
* After mp3 change, make sure of resnapping all objects on every diff (use AiMod to check)
* Make sure of resnapping every green lines (checking and fixing by hand).
* Timing will be rechecked soon.
* Metadata feels fine, in accord with latest ranked versions. ask mapper about that

[Easy by Sky Trias]
00:11:227 (2) - Move to x:48 y:332 and the middle node to x:24 y:292 and the tail to x:20 y:244 to better blanket and flow. I'm trying

Also... let me know when you changed the mp3 to check timing.
Also... let me know with what anime is this song related to (I'd like to watch)
Also... that beautiful gal on bg...

Update #7

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: 01. Wonderful Wonder World.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 62321
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 0.4999999

[Metadata]
Title:Wonderful Wonder World*
TitleUnicode:Wonderful Wonder World*
Artist:Yun*chi
ArtistUnicode:ユンチ
Creator:-Hakurei-
Version:Trias' Easy
Source:ログ・ホライズン
Tags:log horizon 2 second season full ver version ending euny sky_trias crcp-10328 lit120
BeatmapID:700184
BeatmapSetID:311832

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:0.9
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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//Break Periods
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2,184396,190256
2,255646,261506
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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lit120

3,276 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

lit120 2015-06-14T08:42:13+00:00

ok, updated new mp3 quality sound

SMALL ANNOUNCEMENT
Trias won't be online until 25 July since he is now in his hometown village, so I will be responsible for his diff now

Alarido

1,744 posts

Joined September 2012

Alarido 2015-06-15T01:30:49+00:00

Since timing is quite perfect
-- for me, at least --
and no more things bother me
_____ at the present time...

Haruto

1,815 posts

Joined December 2013

Haruto 2015-06-15T13:23:51+00:00

Oh Im late

sorry Rei

Im Hoping This Ranked
Good Luck Rei!

Rukaru

831 posts

Joined April 2012

Rukaru 2015-06-19T17:00:06+00:00

hello, mod this for fun.
I'll try to give my best in modding this map.

[Trias's Easy]

00:15:446 (3,4,1) - uneven spacing in (4) looks ugly imo.
01:13:102 (1,2,3) - this rhythm could be better imo. I'm thinking about this rhythm, this way you can emphasize the music better (they follow catchy music) and also give some variation to the map. *ignore my placement in the screenshot
SPOILER
- you can also do this to similar part in kiai time. e.g 02:41:696 - or this 02:56:696
01:49:196 (3) - don't do this. you are not following any music here. it's just feel like random 3/2 reverse slider in order to make variation to the map imo. use plain 2/1 slider please.
02:00:914 (2) - you might be trying to follow the vocal here, but I don't think this is a good place to do so. I strongly recommend you to follow the music. try to add 1/2 slider or a note in 02:01:383. my reason is simply to give easier object to read for beginner and also it covers a strong music back there.
02:23:414 (1,2,3) - try this rhythm, I personally think this is better *ignore my placement
SPOILER
02:27:164 (1,2) - slightly feel awkward imo. can you do something about this? maybe change what did you use here? try to use circle + slider combi or something that fits more. reverse slider is just, feel awkward. imo
03:49:196 (3,1) - I think you should add a small break here by changing (3) into a plain slider and start (1) in 03:51:071 and make it a plain 1/1 slider too. try it!
03:52:946 to 03:56:696 - if you do that ^, maybe you can spice things a bit here by this one *ignore my placement ofc.
SPOILER
- or, you could try to experiment a bit in this part! it has many possible rhythm. go try this, but this is not a necessary change.
04:07:946 (1) - remove clap in the slider tail.

that's all. nice and neat map. I like it.
[Euny's Normal]

00:23:649 (2,3) - hmm....I see you here trying both vocal and music. I have an idea here, makes the slider start in 00:23:649 and change the circle into 1/2 slider and put it in 00:24:352. of course you have to alter the position of the notes after this. try it~
01:09:352 (1,2,3) - you did this wrong. you should make it like this instead. your current rhythm follows nothing imo, especially in (2). it sounds bad tbh. try this
SPOILER
01:12:164 (7) - maybe do the similar thing as above? ^
01:24:352 (1,2,3,4) - OMGOMGOMG!!! this is wonderful! I love this one. <3
02:37:477 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - well, I already gave you an idea about this one. it's similar to 01:09:352 (1,2,3) - I highly recommend to change this. | as well as this 03:48:727 (1,2,3,4,5,6)

not fond of this diff. it's just my taste, nothing to worry about. good enough in terms of technical skill and structure I guess.
[Hard]

00:19:899 - you could add a note here if you want. I opened insane first before hard and I think this is a good place to add a note.
00:22:946 (1,2,3,4) - tbh, I don't know what are you trying to follow here. it was neither vocal nor music. if you go for the music, it is enough if you just emphasized 00:22:946 to 00:24:586 , but if you were following vocal, this is the better way to do so *see the glowing notes in timeline
SPOILER
in entire 00:22:946 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) -
00:24:821 (1) - if you didn't do above, still I think you should change this to a slider. fits better with the music. idk what sound it called but that's it. you can hear a long noise uh, instrument I mean.
00:30:446 (1,2,3,4) - this too same as 00:22:946 (1,2,3,4)
00:39:821 (1) - same with 00:24:821 (1)
01:04:899 (3,4,5) - this flow feels awkward. especially from (4) to (5).
01:07:242 and 01:07:711 - I recommend to add a note here to balance your rhythm with previous one. also, the music support this. it has a lot of sound back there even strong vocal too.
01:13:571 (1,2,3) - nazi, having a circular flow all the way in the map is fine, but you should use more variation to the pattern. try this pattern with your rhythm. note that the last note (2), is stacked with 01:14:039 (2) *now ignore the timeline
SPOILER
01:22:242 and 01:22:711 - same with above. it's just feels weird that you skip the vocal here imo.
01:27:164 (2) - this is inconsistent, it plays bad imo. why don't you make this one same as 01:25:992 (5) ?
01:28:571 (1,2,3,4) - oh man, you could make this better. this one is an example of how. *see timeline
SPOILER
01:30:914 (6,7,8,9,10) - try this
SPOILER
02:03:258 (3,4) - okay, this stacked notes is bad tbh. does not fit well with either vocal or music. please move one of them somewhere.
02:06:071 to 02:13:336 - well, this might be intended but I think you should make it similar with previous part in 00:34:196 to 00:45:211 . in previous part, you use long slider before the spinner and that works very well but you did otherwise in here 02:06:071. I recommend to do the same thing.
02:20:602 (4) - hmm....I have an idea. try it, you might like it
SPOILER
02:22:477 (3) - get it off from the stack. only (4) deserve to be stacked there.
02:34:196 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I don't understand why did you stack these notes even though the music doesn't support it imo. and oh, if you want to add some notes, it should be around here 02:32:321 (1,2,3,4) - instead of stacking 3 notes for 2 times in a row.
02:54:821 (1,2,3,4) - why not do the same with 02:52:946 (1,2,3,4,5,6) ? it fits perfectly! though, I understand you want to make some variation so this is not that important.
03:25:758 (4) - I think this one should be better if you do something similar to 03:18:024 (4,5,6,7) *I mean the rhythm. it is useful to give player a warning before they enter the next part.
03:43:102 (6,1) - this one kinda unexpected. because most of the times, you use a plain circular motion. some players will startled if you do this imo. do this instead
SPOILER
04:07:946 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1) - do the same thing as 01:28:571 (1,2,3,4) - let the map have A-B-A pattern. I mean, you have 2 same rhythm in 3 kiai's part so there is one part that is different, and it is in the second kiai. A-B-A, right? xD
04:28:102 (5) - nope. you should make this a plain 1/2 slider then add another 1/1 slider in 04:28:571

I think that's it. frankly speaking this quite boring in terms of creativity. I mean, look....you have used the same curved slider here and there most of the times. it's just boring, at least for me. I'm sure this could be much improved, try to modify some long slider. that's where you should start first because it /relatively/ easy to make an interesting shape with long slider.

--to be continued.

Last edited by Rukaru 2015-06-20T11:01:01+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Euny

2,274 posts

Joined January 2014

Euny 2015-06-19T17:38:59+00:00

Rukaru wrote:
hello, mod this for fun.
I'll try to give my best in modding this map.

[Euny's Normal]
00:23:649 (2,3) - hmm....I see you here trying both vocal and music. I have an idea here, makes the slider start in 00:23:649 and change the circle into 1/2 slider and put it in 00:24:352. of course you have to alter the position of the notes after this. try it~
01:09:352 (1,2,3) - you did this wrong. you should make it like this instead. your current rhythm follows nothing imo, especially in (2). it sounds bad tbh. try this
SPOILER
01:12:164 (7) - maybe do the similar thing as above? ^
01:24:352 (1,2,3,4) - OMGOMGOMG!!! this is wonderful! I love this one. <3
02:37:477 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - well, I already gave you an idea about this one. it's similar to 01:09:352 (1,2,3) - I highly recommend to change this. | as well as this 03:48:727 (1,2,3,4,5,6)
let me continue this later. I need to sleep. ;_;

fixed timeline stuffs. it was really nice point thanks for mod

E'sN

osu file format v14

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JJ Rie

JJ Rie 2015-06-19T19:51:53+00:00

good

Alarido

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Joined September 2012

Alarido 2015-06-19T22:13:13+00:00

Don't be afraid on applying mods. Just let me fix the bubble as needed.

lit120

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Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

lit120 2015-06-20T08:35:55+00:00

~~I'll get that work done later. Currently away here~~

where was i...

Rukaru wrote:
hello, mod this for fun.
I'll try to give my best in modding this map.

[Trias's Easy]
00:15:446 (3,4,1) - uneven spacing in (4) looks ugly imo.
01:13:102 (1,2,3) - this rhythm could be better imo. I'm thinking about this rhythm, this way you can emphasize the music better (they follow catchy music) and also give some variation to the map. *ignore my placement in the screenshot
SPOILER
- you can also do this to similar part in kiai time. e.g 02:41:696 - or this 02:56:696
01:49:196 (3) - don't do this. you are not following any music here. it's just feel like random 3/2 reverse slider in order to make variation to the map imo. use plain 2/1 slider please.
02:00:914 (2) - you might be trying to follow the vocal here, but I don't think this is a good place to do so. I strongly recommend you to follow the music. try to add 1/2 slider or a note in 02:01:383. my reason is simply to give easier object to read for beginner and also it covers a strong music back there.
02:23:414 (1,2,3) - try this rhythm, I personally think this is better *ignore my placement
SPOILER
02:27:164 (1,2) - slightly feel awkward imo. can you do something about this? maybe change what did you use here? try to use circle + slider combi or something that fits more. reverse slider is just, feel awkward. imo
03:49:196 (3,1) - I think you should add a small break here by changing (3) into a plain slider and start (1) in 03:51:071 and make it a plain 1/1 slider too. try it!
03:52:946 to 03:56:696 - if you do that ^, maybe you can spice things a bit here by this one *ignore my placement ofc.
SPOILER
- or, you could try to experiment a bit in this part! it has many possible rhythm. go try this, but this is not a necessary change.
04:07:946 (1) - remove clap in the slider tail.
that's all. nice and neat map. I like it.

[Hard]
00:19:899 - you could add a note here if you want. I opened insane first before hard and I think this is a good place to add a note. done
00:22:946 (1,2,3,4) - tbh, I don't know what are you trying to follow here. it was neither vocal nor music. if you go for the music, it is enough if you just emphasized 00:22:946 to 00:24:586 , but if you were following vocal, this is the better way to do so *see the glowing notes in timeline
SPOILER
in entire 00:22:946 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - remade by myself rather than yours
00:24:821 (1) - if you didn't do above, still I think you should change this to a slider. fits better with the music. idk what sound it called but that's it. you can hear a long noise uh, instrument I mean. no
00:30:446 (1,2,3,4) - this too same as 00:22:946 (1,2,3,4) remade by myself
00:39:821 (1) - same with 00:24:821 (1) no
01:04:899 (3,4,5) - this flow feels awkward. especially from (4) to (5). there. but no change for (3) and (4)
01:07:242 and 01:07:711 - I recommend to add a note here to balance your rhythm with previous one. also, the music support this. it has a lot of sound back there even strong vocal too. done
01:13:571 (1,2,3) - nazi, having a circular flow all the way in the map is fine, but you should use more variation to the pattern. try this pattern with your rhythm. note that the last note (2), is stacked with 01:14:039 (2) no *now ignore the timeline
SPOILER
01:22:242 and 01:22:711 - same with above. it's just feels weird that you skip the vocal here imo. done
01:27:164 (2) - this is inconsistent, it plays bad imo. why don't you make this one same as 01:25:992 (5) ? i don't feel like want to do that
01:28:571 (1,2,3,4) - oh man, you could make this better. this one is an example of how. *see timeline no, sorry
SPOILER
01:30:914 (6,7,8,9,10) - try this ^
SPOILER
02:03:258 (3,4) - okay, this stacked notes is bad tbh. does not fit well with either vocal or music. please move one of them somewhere. no
02:06:071 to 02:13:336 - well, this might be intended but I think you should make it similar with previous part in 00:34:196 to 00:45:211 . in previous part, you use long slider before the spinner and that works very well but you did otherwise in here 02:06:071. I recommend to do the same thing. i don't think so
02:20:602 (4) - hmm....I have an idea. try it, you might like it no change
SPOILER
02:22:477 (3) - get it off from the stack. only (4) deserve to be stacked there. why would i?
02:34:196 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I don't understand why did you stack these notes even though the music doesn't support it imo. and oh, if you want to add some notes, it should be around here 02:32:321 (1,2,3,4) - instead of stacking 3 notes for 2 times in a row. i moved (2) and (5) only. just that
02:54:821 (1,2,3,4) - why not do the same with 02:52:946 (1,2,3,4,5,6) ? it fits perfectly! though, I understand you want to make some variation so this is not that important. no
03:25:758 (4) - I think this one should be better if you do something similar to 03:18:024 (4,5,6,7) *I mean the rhythm. it is useful to give player a warning before they enter the next part. no
03:43:102 (6,1) - this one kinda unexpected. because most of the times, you use a plain circular motion. some players will startled if you do this imo. do this instead ok
SPOILER
04:07:946 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1) - do the same thing as 01:28:571 (1,2,3,4) - let the map have A-B-A pattern. I mean, you have 2 same rhythm in 3 kiai's part so there is one part that is different, and it is in the second kiai. A-B-A, right? xD no
04:28:102 (5) - nope. you should make this a plain 1/2 slider then add another 1/1 slider in 04:28:571 nope
I think that's it. frankly speaking this quite boring in terms of creativity. I mean, look....you have used the same curved slider here and there most of the times. it's just boring, at least for me. I'm sure this could be much improved, try to modify some long slider. that's where you should start first because it /relatively/ easy to make an interesting shape with long slider.

--to be continued.

i did a fix for Hard diff for slider since it WAS fucked up. so that'll make it more neat. i'll continue the mod later once you're done with Insane diff. also, i fixed some of them in Trias' Easy + Hitsounds since he is away (INACTIVE) until 25th July

Okoayu

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Okoayu 2015-06-21T22:29:33+00:00

almost done, posting this soonnn

Rukaru

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Joined April 2012

Rukaru 2015-06-22T06:09:04+00:00

nope. that was the end of the mod. I can't edit the post because online from my phone right now.

Alarido

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Joined September 2012

Alarido 2015-06-22T23:23:09+00:00

Fixed bbl. (:

Okoayu

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Okoayu 2015-07-04T12:24:57+00:00

not popping the bubble because i would 100% not rebubble
not saying that i don't like your style or anything but you tend to reuse the same ideas over and over and over to the point where this might become boring to play even with dt.
I think your diffs could be polished further before trying to push them into qualified, I'll elaborate on that point below

[insane]
mostly things about spacing will follow because there are times when your spacing does something different than the song

00:00:446 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - first pattern is first example lol: The way you arranged these puts way more pressure on 00:00:914 (2) - in comparison to 00:01:383 (3) - because you have to move more in order to catch it, but honestly the same sound just repeats 4 times and that would better represented by using more or less consistent spacing throughout this pattern instead of jumps from 00:00:446 (1,2) - and 00:01:383 (3,4) -
00:01:852 (4,1,2,3) - btw through stack leniency these 2 things barely touch each other ingame and that looks eww http://puu.sh/itMFK/1a4c5bd537.jpg
00:20:602 (5) - dunno but i would try to catch the downbeat by using this rhythm
if you don't want to do the above then at least you could tidy up their arrangement by using symmetry or something http://puu.sh/iM910/2b2f3e85ee.jpg dunno current arrangement looks real sloppy
00:22:946 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this is uhh. you previously followed the vocals, and the vocals are the stronges thing in this whole section, using only white tick 1/2 sliders like these to represent them is meh because then you wont have vocals like 00:23:649 - or 00:24:117 - as clickable objects which means the player gets strong vocals and no feedback for them ingame like they do for 00:28:336 (4,1) - etc.
00:25:758 (3,1) - because this didn't fully disappear yet this arrangement looks pretty sloppy
00:26:227 (4,1) - 00:28:336 (4,1) - compare how they are spaced, after jumping for one of those things it'd make sense and would actually be expected to jump for similar things again. it'd also give off a feeling of consistent spacing and not like "i'm doing this because i feel like it"
00:30:914 (2,3,4,5,6) - 00:30:914 (2) - it's end is a held vocal, 00:31:383 (3) - has basically not really much of a background sound so it'd make way more sense to start a slider on the red tick instead 00:31:852 (5) - same goes for this oneakldsjf;
http://puu.sh/iM9s5/3419653849.jpg
00:34:196 - to 00:41:696 - why did you decide to follow instruments only here, they have like the most boring rhythm ever and you end up playing the same thing for like 8 seconds before something changes and you decide to follow vocals
also certain things like 00:37:008 (3,4) - could be cleaner by doing the same kind of slider again and again because right now it just looks like you didn't really care about how this pattern looks so it overall loses some of it's style
00:37:946 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - why exactly are those stacked??? you didn't have stacks in the previous pattern and to be honest it doesn't make this any more interesting so i dunno why you decided to use these
00:39:352 (6,1) - compare this spacing to 00:35:836 (7,1) - 00:37:477 (4,1) - , both are jumps this one isn't and just when i thought you had a system behind things you break it ;_;
00:39:821 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - what do you base this increasing spacing or the bigger spacing in general of this jump pattern on? compared to other points in the same section there isn't anything special about it so i don't know why you made the choice to do this here, it makes the whole section look more of a random experiment and of patterns while disregarding what the songs/vocals really do, and that isn't what you do
00:45:446 (1,2,3) - this is like the perfect place to use some symmetry or some stuff for 1 and 3 because the way you arranged them suggests yyou wanted to do that but then you drew that one slider differently and the whole thing i reasoned behind it falls apart
00:50:016 (4) - the stronger sound in this weak stream is iin 00:50:250 - so why would you ignore the stronger one but map the weaker one ?
00:51:071 (1,2,3,1) - why does density decrease suddenly? there's nothing in the song that would indicate a more calm atmosphere so
00:54:352 (4) - uhh you have 3 strong kicks but not only decide to skip one but also put the most important part of this pattern on the sliderend so uhh for these reasons i deem this rhythm inappropriate and you should try 3 circles snapped to 1/2 and 1/1 instead because that would reflect the actual song way better
00:57:633 (2) - if i interpret that correctly 00:55:289 (1,2,3,1) - have been following the important vocals only which happen to be 1/1 but then you have this slider ignoring 00:57:867 - and also 00:58:336 - :/
00:58:571 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - you could stress vocals better if you actually increased spacing for 00:58:805 (2,4,1,4) - because that's where the repeating vocal is so more spacing for those would make more sense
01:01:383 (1) - very weird choice because spinners and their ends are the weakest elements in this game so startiing the kiai with them is kind of very questionable and i think it'd be better to just map it out as that would allow you to actually represent the buildup that's going on here
01:02:321 - to 01:36:071 - except for 01:13:571 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - i don't really know what's going on in this whole kiai, at all
it just looks like a variety of patterns taken and thrown at the screen without actually trying to go with what the song emphasises
01:02:555 (1,2) - why are those circles, they could be an 1/2 slider to follow vocals, which would make sense with 01:03:024 (3,4,5,6,7) - which all have a single syllable in the vocals for it (i still don't get the increasing spacing though because if it's vocals they have different pitches, but not increasing and instruments are accented in 01:02:790 (2) - 01:03:727 (6,7) - for both a crash and the piano so their spacing should be higher to accentuate that, but you just do neither and go with increasing spacing :/)
01:04:196 (1) - if you follow instruments this should have higher spacing
01:04:196 (1,2,3) - why are those different spacings, if you follow instruments each of those should be spaced the same because the iinstruments don't change while 01:05:602 (4) - should have higher spacing since it got the piano as well
01:07:946 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - i don't really understand this at all because it follows neither vocals or instruments really well (if following vocals so many circles wouldn't be necessary and if following instruments spacing would make no sense / emphasise random things)
01:16:735 - i don't really get why you would ignore this, this is a clearly audible stream and you just do nothing but a triplet with it also 01:16:852 (1) - an 1/2 slider with higher SV would fit way better than a super slow slider which ignores the melody and vocal in 01:17:086 -
01:18:727 (5,6,1) - why a stack now ?
01:21:071 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - why is spacing so small here?
01:22:946 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - i don't really see what spacing follows here either
01:25:524 (4) - oh suddenly you decide to follow vocals?? i don't know you mapped instruments only for the most part of this and now switch to vocals. if you did this thing more often it would seem more natural but now it has the exact opposite effect and looks kinda out of place in all that instrument mapping
01:43:571 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - the music does not do the same thing the whole time here so i don't get why you do the same thing the whole time here
ok i guess from this point onwards it doesn't make much sense to continue it because you consistently did this stuff in its entirety, basically you keep throwing patterns out which either have no base in the song and thus seem random or could have followed what you apparently follow better. I can't give you a very detailed mod on this diff because in most cases i'm not even sure what you intend to follow and what not, or if you had any intention at all behind certain patterns or not so i can't really help you with making them better unless you get a clear structure into this diff which follows either instruments and accentuates them wherever they are in the song or follows vocals or a mix of both depending on which you deem to be stronger at any given moment but the current stuff in most places does neither so i can't tell you how to make them better without telling you to follow the song better.
Also polishing certain patterns and arrangements using more mods would be cool because right now things like 02:16:852 (5,1) - 02:18:727 (3,1) - 02:21:071 (1,2,3) - 03:44:508 (3,1) - 04:00:914 (3,4,5,6) - etc look just plain sloppy because the way they are arranged either overlaps directly or uses angles that look suboptimal in combination making this diff lose not only its general concept but also its looks

[hard]

00:03:141 (1) - tbh the reaction time requited in order to realise this is a spinner is so lon that it'd almost over by the time you realise it, it'd probably be better off if it was mapped out in all diffs
00:17:321 (1,2,3) - you have alot of those kind of patterns that could be cleaned up a bit because most of them appear that they are intended to be to be symmetrical but aren't
00:18:258 (3,4) - also due to stacking these overlap and it looks kinda me h
00:30:211 - switching to vocals her e by adding a circle would make sense idk because the things after that are constructed to follow vocals and i think switching there would make more sense
00:41:696 (1,2,3) - reducing density there makes sense but only because the vocals are less dense there but you reduce the density based on instruments which do not change there ;_;
00:47:321 (1,2,3) - blablah this looks like it could be better off as a symmetric pattern like a lot of your other things
00:54:352 (4,1) - 00:56:227 (2,3) - i don't see why you'd simplify this or on what basis, both vocals and instruments do more complesx things here and you stick to 1/1 which is - even for a hard - rather boring lol
01:03:727 (5,3) - ehh
the way you simplify some rhythms in this kai and don't or do circle only patterns doesn't seem to follow a system i can clearly pinpoint which is la;sdkjf;
01:10:055 (2) - 01:12:633 (3,4,5) - like why do you have to map the triplets all of a sudden, these are everywhere and in most places you choose to ignore but not in thedse 2 because they aren't any different than the rest
01:54:821 (1,2) - 01:56:696 (1,2) - you mainly follow vocals and those could fit the vocals much better if 01:57:399 - and 01:55:524 - were clickable
02:02:321 (1,2,3,4,5) - arrangements like this somehow look kinda sloppy dkjas
i don't know how to mod these diffs because most things i have are more general complaints and i can't pinpoint that to certain patterns only because a whole lot of the diff follows the same ideas which i don't understand

[enuy]

out of kiai your 1 measure NCs give you oddly short combos i would go with 2 measure combos all the way to avoid stuff like 00:15:446 (1,2,1,2,3,1) -
00:22:946 (1,2,3,1,2) - why did you suddenly switch to instruments from following vocals it makes 00:23:649 (2) - feel weird because it follows vocals and the rest follows instruments
00:31:149 (2,1) - stacks under sliderends in lowdiffs are kinda known for confusing newbs so uhhhhhm
01:01:617 (2) - the 2nd sound is strunger than the first sound so it being a sliderend is kinda odd how about http://puu.sh/iMTXp/15d0d2ac46.jpg
01:02:321 (1,2,3) - is this supposed to be symmetrical? i think it is supposed to be symmetrical
01:13:571 (1) - random blezier slider xD
01:27:164 (4,1) - angles of these makes this arrangement look a bit sloppy
02:00:446 (1) - according to how you simplify stuff to the piano this should be 2 1/1 sliders like 01:56:696 (1,2) -
02:07:008 (3,1) - not saying this looks me but ye this looks meh
02:36:071 (5) - could look better if crtl+h'd dunno
03:11:696 (1,1) - spinnerrecoverytimespinnerrecoverytimespinnerrecoverytime
04:22:946 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - this is a bit confusing because you either expect to click 04:24:117 - or can easily panic because of 04:22:946 (1,2,4,5) - , woulc use a more sliderheavy rhythm instead http://puu.sh/iMUkz/341c143dee.jpg (note the 4 circles could also sliders)
04:32:321 (1,2,3,4,1) - the way those are arranged could look a biit better if you ask me

some mods aimed at polishing this diff a little more wouldn't hurt

[tria]

00:22:946 (1,2) - this rhythm, mainly the 2nd slider feels a bit empty because it doesn't obviously follow vocals and iinstruments are so weak that i recommend doing http://puu.sh/iMUvW/b9f597d6d3.jpg instead so that every object's beginning follows vocals somewhat
01:00:446 (3,4) - are missing hitsounds ?
01:04:664 (4) - this looks like you wanted to blanket it with 01:03:727 (3,5) - but it's kinda done in an odd way
01:05:133 (5) - also a thing to note is that the instrument on its end is much stronger than the one on its head so doing http://puu.sh/iMUCV/6a6ba3b969.jpg as a rhythm instead here would also make sense
01:24:821 (1,2,3,4) - contrary to 01:09:352 (1,2,3,4) - these all start on the weaker vocal and end in the stronger one, you could shorten 01:23:414 (3) - down to 1/1 and do the more fitting version here as well and then add a circle in 01:28:102 - ?
01:58:571 (1,2) - i think using two 3/1 sliders would fit the instruments better here
02:06:071 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - why are combos so short suddenly and only in this part o.o
uhh 02:44:508 - you flashed the first kiai 01:16:852 - which would be equivalent to 02:44:977 - so uhh do the same for both instances ?
02:37:946 (1,2,3) - uhh i liked how you did 02:52:477 (1,2,3,4) - 01:09:352 (1,2,3,4) - a bit better than this but doesn't matter much

really nice

Euny

2,274 posts

Joined January 2014

Euny 2015-07-19T14:21:29+00:00

Okoratu wrote:
[enuy]
out of kiai your 1 measure NCs give you oddly short combos i would go with 2 measure combos all the way to avoid stuff like 00:15:446 (1,2,1,2,3,1) - - ✔fixed
00:22:946 (1,2,3,1,2) - why did you suddenly switch to instruments from following vocals it makes 00:23:649 (2) - feel weird because it follows vocals and the rest follows instruments - because, its changes in vocal turning point
00:31:149 (2,1) - stacks under sliderends in lowdiffs are kinda known for confusing newbs so uhhhhhm - ✔fixed
01:01:617 (2) - the 2nd sound is strunger than the first sound so it being a sliderend is kinda odd how about http://puu.sh/iMTXp/15d0d2ac46.jpg- ✔fixed
01:02:321 (1,2,3) - is this supposed to be symmetrical? i think it is supposed to be symmetrical- ✔fixed
01:13:571 (1) - random blezier slider xD - for make perfect blanket with 01:12:164 (7) - this. i think it looks fine. or you have a nice suggestion, tell me i'll accept.
01:27:164 (4,1) - angles of these makes this arrangement look a bit sloppy- ✔fixed
02:00:446 (1) - according to how you simplify stuff to the piano this should be 2 1/1 sliders like 01:56:696 (1,2) - ✔fixed
02:07:008 (3,1) - not saying this looks me but ye this looks meh- ✔fixed
02:36:071 (5) - could look better if crtl+h'd dunno - i think, it looks good with 02:37:477 (1,2) - these. so i want to keep this.
03:11:696 (1,1) - spinnerrecoverytimespinnerrecoverytimespinnerrecoverytime - ✔fixed
04:22:946 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - this is a bit confusing because you either expect to click 04:24:117 - or can easily panic because of 04:22:946 (1,2,4,5) - , woulc use a more sliderheavy rhythm instead http://puu.sh/iMUkz/341c143dee.jpg (note the 4 circles could also sliders) - ✔fixed but i found other way. i think its more easy too play
04:32:321 (1,2,3,4,1) - the way those are arranged could look a biit better if you ask me - ✔fixed
some mods aimed at polishing this diff a little more wouldn't hurt

thanks for mod

fixed

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54,135,234586,2,2,L|113:236,1,110,2|2,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
148,285,235289,2,0,B|203:295|252:260|252:260|270:194|328:171,1,220,8|8,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
381,291,236696,6,8,L|421:180,1,110,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
449,127,237399,1,0,0:0:0:0:
467,63,237633,2,0,P|414:65|357:36,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
297,43,238336,1,2,0:0:0:0:
245,84,238571,2,0,L|148:148,2,110,6|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,97,239977,6,0,L|484:153,1,110,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
508,201,240680,1,2,0:0:0:0:
483,260,240914,2,0,B|446:286|446:286|415:348,1,110,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,347,241617,1,2,0:0:0:0:
352,347,241852,1,8,0:0:0:0:
301,307,242086,2,0,B|252:277|232:210,2,110,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
269,111,243727,6,0,P|207:110|154:139,1,110,8|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
105,248,244664,1,8,0:0:0:0:
236,233,245133,1,2,0:0:0:0:
365,207,245602,1,8,0:0:0:0:
323,332,246071,1,6,0:0:0:0:
451,299,246539,2,0,P|482:254|491:200,1,110,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
403,101,247477,1,8,0:0:0:0:
278,57,247946,6,0,P|223:64|170:103,2,110,4|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
270,188,249352,2,0,L|320:224,2,55,8|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
142,221,250289,2,0,P|128:271|81:322,1,110,8|2,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
26,302,250992,1,2,3:0:0:0:
11,237,251227,2,0,P|28:188|78:140,1,110,8|4,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
180,78,252164,5,8,0:0:0:0:
310,96,252633,1,2,0:0:0:0:
391,199,253102,1,8,0:0:0:0:
347,323,253571,2,0,L|228:312,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,298,254274,1,2,0:0:0:0:
172,298,254508,2,0,L|123:192,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
189,82,255446,6,0,P|256:68|313:81,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
346,117,256149,1,2,0:0:0:0:
346,117,256383,2,0,L|369:233,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
286,329,257321,2,0,P|219:343|162:330,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
129,294,258024,1,2,0:0:0:0:
129,294,258258,2,0,L|106:178,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
166,66,259196,6,0,P|220:78|273:65,1,110,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
405,56,260133,1,2,0:0:0:0:
404,188,260602,1,8,0:0:0:0:
333,299,261071,2,0,P|281:279|227:273,2,110,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,188,262477,1,8,0:0:0:0:
316,89,262946,5,2,0:0:0:0:
316,89,263180,1,2,0:0:0:0:
250,80,263414,2,0,L|178:86,1,55,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
141,122,263883,2,0,P|151:160|152:200,1,55,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,220,264352,1,8,0:0:0:0:
200,220,264586,1,2,0:0:0:0:
253,180,264821,2,0,P|315:185|367:229,1,110,2|8,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
338,342,265758,2,0,P|276:333|226:286,1,110,2|8,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
114,261,266696,5,4,0:0:0:0:
123,129,267164,1,8,0:0:0:0:
250,93,267633,1,2,0:0:0:0:
363,161,268102,1,8,0:0:0:0:
472,87,268571,2,0,L|425:47,1,55,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,43,269039,2,0,L|296:68,1,55,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
250,93,269508,2,0,L|183:77,1,55,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
130,82,269977,2,0,L|67:120,1,55,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
28,148,270446,6,0,P|39:221|72:253,1,110,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
193,250,271383,1,2,0:0:0:0:
314,198,271852,1,8,0:0:0:0:
391,304,272321,2,0,L|423:240,1,55,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
446,196,272789,2,0,L|429:129,1,55,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
402,83,273258,2,0,L|344:66,1,55,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
283,74,273727,2,0,L|208:100,1,55,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
165,83,274196,6,0,P|119:48|53:37,1,110,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,168,275133,1,2,0:0:0:0:
167,254,275602,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,351,276071,2,0,P|279:301|350:274,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,331,277008,1,2,0:0:0:0:
434,199,277477,1,8,0:0:0:0:
396,72,277946,5,4,0:0:0:0:
266,96,278414,2,0,L|199:133,1,55,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
154,141,278883,2,0,L|159:211,1,55,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
141,259,279352,2,0,L|188:323,1,55,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
235,327,279821,2,0,L|303:322,1,55,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
353,305,280289,1,8,0:0:0:0:
353,305,280524,1,2,3:0:0:0:
409,271,280758,2,0,P|403:168|323:200,1,220,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,282164,12,0,289196,0:0:0:0:

lit120

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lit120 2015-10-08T14:33:24+00:00

well, i have abandoned this map for few months and i kinda feel bad about this, so i decided to remap my insane diff for now...

also, updated Euny's diff. will think about my hard diff and the easy diff for this

KASUM1_old

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KASUM1_old 2015-10-09T15:08:42+00:00

hihi

[Insane]
00:37:711 (5) - x:8 y:188 better flow
00:42:399 (3) - how about move this right ? o.o
00:45:211 (4) - on x:48 y:120
00:45:446 (1) - x:4 y:220
00:52:008 (4,5) - something like this for better flow http://puu.sh/kE3Gx/f93c52f1d2.jpg (4) on x:159 y:321 and (5) on x:376 y:314
00:57:399 (3,4,5) - move these down a bit for better flow http://puu.sh/kE3LM/fe7f668881.jpg
02:08:414 (2,3) - I think (3) breaks the flow if that's not intentional
03:43:571 (1) - on x:220 y:164 , you don't have to stack it with the other slider :p

GL!

lit120

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lit120 2015-10-09T15:17:07+00:00

KASUM1 wrote:
hihi

[Insane]
00:37:711 (5) - x:8 y:188 better flow that will be too far for 00:37:946 (1) - , but i did something a bit different here
00:42:399 (3) - how about move this right ? o.o seems ok for me
00:45:211 (4) - on x:48 y:120 using DS instead
00:45:446 (1) - x:4 y:220 keep
00:52:008 (4,5) - something like this for better flow http://puu.sh/kE3Gx/f93c52f1d2.jpg (4) on x:159 y:321 and (5) on x:376 y:314 i don't want to ruined those blanket parts D:
00:57:399 (3,4,5) - move these down a bit for better flow http://puu.sh/kE3LM/fe7f668881.jpg i guess not
02:08:414 (2,3) - I think (3) breaks the flow if that's not intentional it's like zig zag stuff, and it's ok for me
03:43:571 (1) - on x:220 y:164 , you don't have to stack it with the other slider :p i did it on purpose, and this seems fine for me

GL!

thx for mod

lit120

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lit120 2015-10-14T08:20:39+00:00

Deleted easy diff (sorry trias

), and added f ant's hard. Ready for mod now!

Avishay

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Avishay 2015-10-14T13:46:01+00:00

Hi.

[Insane]

00:15:446 (1,2,3,4) - I'd recommend using the more curvy pattern (Ctrl+G on 2 and 3 individually), but this pattern is fine as well, your choice.
00:38:649 (2) - The incosistent spacing here is kinda noticeable, any reason for it? I'd keep it the same from both sides.
00:51:071 (1,2) - Any reason for the inconsistency with 00:47:321 (2,3) - and 00:49:196 (1,2) - ?
00:53:414 (2) - ^ Same and I'l prefer it to be stacked on 00:52:946 (1) - regardless.
01:04:196 (1,2,3) - This rhythm would be better imo: http://puu.sh/kJX0H/46f1b1fb24.jpg
01:47:321 (1,2) - The blanket is really really ugly, use more than one anchor on the curve to make it look better.
03:11:696 (1,2,3,4) - The finishes here are kinda loud, tune them down.
04:30:914 (2) - I'd add whistles on the sliders ticks here, feels really weird when everything except the long sliders are using them.

Other's difficulties seem just fine to me so I don't really have much to say, just try to cut some of the randomness at the Insane difficulty and the set is great.

GL.

lit120

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lit120 2015-10-14T13:56:52+00:00

Avishay wrote:
Hi.

[Insane]
00:15:446 (1,2,3,4) - I'd recommend using the more curvy pattern (Ctrl+G on 2 and 3 individually), but this pattern is fine as well, your choice. keep this
00:38:649 (2) - The incosistent spacing here is kinda noticeable, any reason for it? I'd keep it the same from both sides. ohh shit. made it into the same spacing
00:51:071 (1,2) - Any reason for the inconsistency with 00:47:321 (2,3) - and 00:49:196 (1,2) - ? same thing from 02:15:446 - here, and as you can see, the blue and the white tick has a note on there, so i have to set it into that
00:53:414 (2) - ^ Same and I'l prefer it to be stacked on 00:52:946 (1) - regardless. well you're right of course, but i prefer to set the (2) closer to (1) for blanket, so it will be more easier to get it
01:04:196 (1,2,3) - This rhythm would be better imo: http://puu.sh/kJX0H/46f1b1fb24.jpg nice idea for following the vocal, but i didn't follow the vocal part on this, sadly
01:47:321 (1,2) - The blanket is really really ugly, use more than one anchor on the curve to make it look better. did something in my way
03:11:696 (1,2,3,4) - The finishes here are kinda loud, tune them down. i'll wait for other opinion about this. if anyone complains about this one, i'll do something on it
04:30:914 (2) - I'd add whistles on the sliders ticks here, feels really weird when everything except the long sliders are using them. well, this slider is for vocal of course, so that's why i didn't even focus on the instrument one
Other's difficulties seem just fine to me so I don't really have much to say, just try to cut some of the randomness at the Insane difficulty and the set is great.

GL.

well thx for mod

Avishay

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Avishay 2015-10-14T14:08:12+00:00

-Hakurei- wrote:
[Insane]
00:51:071 (1,2) - Any reason for the inconsistency with 00:47:321 (2,3) - and 00:49:196 (1,2) - ? same thing from 02:15:446 - here, and as you can see, the blue and the white tick has a note on there, so i have to set it into that I know, I was talking abonut the spacing.
00:53:414 (2) - ^ Same and I'l prefer it to be stacked on 00:52:946 (1) - regardless. well you're right of course, but i prefer to set the (2) closer to (1) for blanket, so it will be more easier to get it2's placement is fine even if you move 1, the movement from the previous slider to 1 is awkward.
well thx for mod

Just making some stuff clear.

lit120

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lit120 2015-10-14T14:28:16+00:00

Avishay wrote:
-Hakurei- wrote:
[Insane]
00:51:071 (1,2) - Any reason for the inconsistency with 00:47:321 (2,3) - and 00:49:196 (1,2) - ? same thing from 02:15:446 - here, and as you can see, the blue and the white tick has a note on there, so i have to set it into that I know, I was talking abonut the spacing. yaa, but it should be suit for jumps of course
00:53:414 (2) - ^ Same and I'l prefer it to be stacked on 00:52:946 (1) - regardless. well you're right of course, but i prefer to set the (2) closer to (1) for blanket, so it will be more easier to get it2's placement is fine even if you move 1, the movement from the previous slider to 1 is awkward. you have your point there. did something different
well thx for mod
Just making some stuff clear.

Lily Bread

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Lily Bread 2015-10-16T03:56:16+00:00

[insane]
i noticed that you have a lot of spinners in this diff.try to delete some?too much spinner is boring imo.
00:19:196 (1,2) - fix blanket.

02:00:563 (1) - end at - 02:02:086 -.
03:19:899 - what about this? this break time is not necessary imo.(of course,position is free.just a example)

SPOILER

04:00:446 (1) - ctrl + g?

good luck!

Sc4v4ng3r

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Sc4v4ng3r 2015-10-16T12:45:24+00:00

Hello~ NM as requested in my queue~
Not sure if you need mods on other difficulties, if you need it I'll come back.

Unrankable issues
My opinion which I highly recommend changing it
Small suggestions/nazi

[General]

On F Ant's Hard, 04:35:601 (4) - this note's end isn't snapped.

[Insane]

The break time spread is kind of weird in this set, as the easier difficulty doesn't have a break while this has many. You know, it should be the other way around lol.
00:51:071 (1,2) - I don't see the intentional part of this stack, others weren't unstacked like this.
00:58:571 (1) - I don't get why this note doesn't have a jump in it as it is a downbeat which will be good to emphasize using a jump, when 00:58:805 (2,3) - these 2 notes had a jump while it was on a lower strength.
03:19:196 - Ok the break here is really weird. It follows the same musical section like all the previous notes, yet leaving this as a break really does break off the consistency. If you insist on keeping the break here, starting it back at 03:22:711 (1) - this red tick seems really weird, there is not really a strong beat there either.
I tried my best modding a low BPM Insane, sorry if this didn't help that much ;-;

Yea all looks good in my eyes. Like above just call me back if you need mods for the lower difficulties.
GL!

lit120

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lit120 2015-10-16T14:07:42+00:00

Lily Bread wrote:
[insane]
i noticed that you have a lot of spinners in this diff.try to delete some?too much spinner is boring imo.
00:19:196 (1,2) - fix blanket. a little bit is fine though

02:00:563 (1) - end at - 02:02:086 -. good point there, but i didn't even want to end it on that instrument sound
03:19:899 - what about this? this break time is not necessary imo.(of course,position is free.just a example) nope
SPOILER

04:00:446 (1) - ctrl + g? why not?

good luck!

[Sc4v4ng3r] wrote:
Hello~ NM as requested in my queue~
Not sure if you need mods on other difficulties, if you need it I'll come back.

Unrankable issues
My opinion which I highly recommend changing it
Small suggestions/nazi

[General]
On F Ant's Hard, 04:35:601 (4) - this note's end isn't snapped. fixed that for him
[Insane]
The break time spread is kind of weird in this set, as the easier difficulty doesn't have a break while this has many. You know, it should be the other way around lol. that's a different story for the other GD stuff, but i prefer this tbh
00:51:071 (1,2) - I don't see the intentional part of this stack, others weren't unstacked like this. stacked
00:58:571 (1) - I don't get why this note doesn't have a jump in it as it is a downbeat which will be good to emphasize using a jump, when 00:58:805 (2,3) - these 2 notes had a jump while it was on a lower strength. made it a bit far. same goes to 02:26:863 -
03:19:196 - Ok the break here is really weird. It follows the same musical section like all the previous notes, yet leaving this as a break really does break off the consistency. If you insist on keeping the break here, starting it back at 03:22:711 (1) - this red tick seems really weird, there is not really a strong beat there either. well, it's fine for me. and about that red tick note, it should be fitable
I tried my best modding a low BPM Insane, sorry if this didn't help that much ;-;
Yea all looks good in my eyes. Like above just call me back if you need mods for the lower difficulties.
GL!

thx for mod guys

Sc4v4ng3r

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Sc4v4ng3r 2015-10-17T11:14:54+00:00

You've asked me back, so here I am.

[Euny's Normal]

01:22:242 (4,5,6) - Not entirely sure if you want to have 3 consecutive hits when the whole combo followed 1/2, as it may be hard for beginners to play. And considering this is the easiest difficulty in the set, this probably will force a break on newbies, consider to make this at least an 1/2 slider.
03:00:211 (1) - This spinner, compared to 01:32:321 (1) - this spinner is out of consistency, as the first spinner emphasized the instrument rather than the vocals. I don't think rhythmic varieties should be used on this difficulty in particular, as it is the easier difficulty in the set and beginners won't really be able to adapt to many varieties of rhythms.
04:03:727 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Hmm... If you are intending to follow 1/1 here, I feel that the rhythm should be constant so that beginners won't get confused over it. So 04:05:602 (4,5) - these 2 notes should be a 1/1 slider, instead of 04:06:539 (6) - .
I didn't really find much things on this difficulty, everything seems fine

[F Ant's Hard]

Well...
01:16:852 (4) - This kick slider should be ending at 01:17:203 - this point instead of the point right now, as the instrument that you are following with this slider is ending at 01:17:203 - , or I'm just hearing things wrong.
01:32:438 (1) - Ehh, any reason why is this ending at the upbeat? Like, ending this spinner at the big white tick is much more obvious to follow which is intuitive, and it goes well with 03:00:563 (1) - this spinner as it creates consistency.
Cool difficulty, I love this so much lol

That is all from me. Well the set is already really nice, couldn't point out that much. Hopefully this helped ;-;
GL!

Euny

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Euny 2015-10-17T11:56:43+00:00

[Sc4v4ng3r] wrote:
You've asked me back, so here I am.

[Euny's Normal]
01:22:242 (4,5,6) - Not entirely sure if you want to have 3 consecutive hits when the whole combo followed 1/2, as it may be hard for beginners to play. And considering this is the easiest difficulty in the set, this probably will force a break on newbies, consider to make this at least an 1/2 slider.
03:00:211 (1) - This spinner, compared to 01:32:321 (1) - this spinner is out of consistency, as the first spinner emphasized the instrument rather than the vocals. I don't think rhythmic varieties should be used on this difficulty in particular, as it is the easier difficulty in the set and beginners won't really be able to adapt to many varieties of rhythms.
04:03:727 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Hmm... If you are intending to follow 1/1 here, I feel that the rhythm should be constant so that beginners won't get confused over it. So 04:05:602 (4,5) - these 2 notes should be a 1/1 slider, instead of 04:06:539 (6) - .
I didn't really find much things on this difficulty, everything seems fine
That is all from me. Well the set is already really nice, couldn't point out that much. Hopefully this helped ;-;
GL!

my map was for 'normal' for spread there was easy diff too. but he removed easy diff and my diff dont fit to 'lowest diff'
also he and me agreemant with remove my diff. so yeah. but i really appreciate you. thanks for mod Sc4v4ng3r!

lit120

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lit120 2015-10-17T12:11:42+00:00

so, as far as i can see from here, looks like Euny has decided not to do a GD Normal anymore. well, damn... going back to WIP

Blizs

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Blizs 2015-10-17T13:18:24+00:00

[Sc4v4ng3r] wrote:
You've asked me back, so here I am.

[F Ant's Hard]
Well...
01:16:852 (4) - This kick slider should be ending at 01:17:203 - this point instead of the point right now, as the instrument that you are following with this slider is ending at 01:17:203 - , or I'm just hearing things wrong. Nope. I follow the drum here. I make an exception on 04:26:227 (2) - because the sound heard more clearer than the drum.
01:32:438 (1) - Ehh, any reason why is this ending at the upbeat? Like, ending this spinner at the big white tick is much more obvious to follow which is intuitive, and it goes well with 03:00:563 (1) - this spinner as it creates consistency. Frankly I made it ended there because there was the point where the vocal ended. But it looks pointless in gameplay so changed XD
Cool difficulty, I love this so much lol Hey Thanks >w<
That is all from me. Well the set is already really nice, couldn't point out that much. Hopefully this helped ;-;
GL!

Thanks for the mod >w<
Update :
F Ant's Hard : http://pastebin.com/raw.php?i=JWQG5d3E

Kyle Y

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Kyle Y 2015-10-18T05:51:10+00:00

#M4M request
Insane diff as requested.

[Insane]
00:00:446 (1,2,3,4) - I don't know what 3/4 slider is used here. I just hear a clear 1/2 sound but not 1/4. When I playtest it, really weird becasue of the 1/4 beat. Just change it to 1/2 slider.

00:04:196 - ~00:15:446 - I don't think the break is suitable. First it is not the calm part of the song, also it is not necessary to have a break as it is the beginning part of the song.

00:17:321 (1) - it is better to map for the beats. As there is some 1/4 and 1/8 sound, it is more fun to play them instead of just a spinner.
00:19:196 - In fact it is not a must to use constant ds for calm part. or I should say it doesn't like 3.6 stars standard for this part. (maybe my mapping is much more difficult)
00:32:438 (1,1) - Although Insane do not require any on the recovery time, but I still suggest make at least 1/2 beat for the recovery. Most of the map did it, even if >5 stars Insanes.
00:36:774 - beat sound skipped. just like misleading player to play a 1/2 slider but actually it is 3/4. I know there is a sound on 00:36:891 - , but it is not obvious for the vocal sound change. I think better to change to 1/2 slider, or you can add circle at 00:36:891 -
00:59:274 - In fact this part not like 3.6 stars standard. it is more hard than that since low rank player cannot play a steady stream. Just like asking them not to play this diff. Also, low bpm song usually use slider instead of circle. it is more easy to catch a slider rather than a circle.
01:14:508 - missing seems weird. I think you intend to do so, but why? For me, it is missing a vocal sound/ beat. it is weird to skip a sound for no reasons, not for emphasising sth, nor the music playing like this.
01:17:321 (1,2) - ctrl+g, this vocal sound 01:17:555 - better using a slider.
01:19:430 - for this part, it is full of triple. As I mention earlier, circle triple/ stream is not that easy to caught in low bpm sound, maybe you can make a slider jump for most of the triple/ streams.
01:29:508 - missing vocal again. same reason.
01:49:899 - missing beat sound, same reason.
01:43:571 (1,2,3,4) - I suggest you use 1→3→4→2 becasue it is more fun for the flowing. Optional.
01:45:446 (1) - spinner again. If you want the map fun, then I think you can remove the slider and place circle and slider, as there is 1/4 sounds.
01:49:664 (3) - missed 01:49:899 - , this timing is the ending for vocal, and then another at 01:50:016 - . better seperate it.
02:08:883 (3,4) - ctrl+g for flowing, please consider the flowing in red and blue. Red flow broke at the tail of slider (2), but then blue flow is follow oval flow.

SPOILER

03:00:563 (1) - This is a good breaking time, but then I suggest removing the spinner becasue 03:04:196 - this beat is not quite strong. Why this spinner end at here but not 03:02:321 - 03:03:727 - or sth like that. The ending position is not the unique one, there I suggest you delete it.
03:07:946 - Here is a strong beat, I think you can add a circle here and then continue for the break.
03:13:571 (1) - this spinner also waste the beats. A lot of 1/4 beat, or even 1/8 beat sound. Suggest mapping it. I hate wasting beats sound.
03:19:196 - Not a suitable break here. you just have a break time finished at 03:11:696 - , but then after 8 sec, you make another break? it is quite weird to do so. I suggest you can map for the music sound.

03:23:649 (4) - 03:24:586 (6) - I suggest you can del it. becasue it can emphasis 03:23:883 (5) - and 03:24:821 (1) - more.

03:34:196 - This stream is quite hard for 3.6 stars standard. becasue of the long stream, and slider and circle overlapping making the stream hard to read for 3.6 stars.
04:00:446 (1,2) - same direction slider for this is not a good flowing. But then if ctrl+g 04:00:914 (2) - is not a good flow for 2,3,4,5. I suggest you can ctrl+g and change the order to 2→4→5→3, then snap the ds you think it is suitable. it is better in flowing for me. Example:

SPOILER

04:30:914 (2) - 04:34:664 (2) - 04:38:414 (2) - same rhythm as 04:27:164 - better keep it the same.

In fact there is a lot of repeated modding, just like
why leaving blank at 01:14:508 - 01:15:446 -

00:59:274 (1,2,3) - triple/ stream is not quite suitable in low bpm song, maybe <140 bpm and >100bpm song. Less than 100bpm triple, not like a triple, but single clicks. Hope you can change some of stream/triple to slider.

03:34:664 (5,1) - stream problem, really hard to play for relatively new/ #10m players. I think good map should be player-friendly. Just change to a easy to play pattern?

Above 3 is not the single case, but for the same rhythm in the following parts

Last, hope you like my modding and it can help you improve your map

lit120

3,276 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

lit120 2015-10-18T07:07:02+00:00

Kyle Y wrote:
#M4M request
Insane diff as requested.

[Insane]
00:00:446 (1,2,3,4) - I don't know what 3/4 slider is used here. I just hear a clear 1/2 sound but not 1/4. When I playtest it, really weird becasue of the 1/4 beat. Just change it to 1/2 slider. 1/2 --> not even fitable for the rhythm, but i'll just mute it instead

00:04:196 - ~00:15:446 - I don't think the break is suitable. First it is not the calm part of the song, also it is not necessary to have a break as it is the beginning part of the song. well epic intro break stuff

00:17:321 (1) - it is better to map for the beats. As there is some 1/4 and 1/8 sound, it is more fun to play them instead of just a spinner. will consider about this
00:19:196 - In fact it is not a must to use constant ds for calm part. or I should say it doesn't like 3.6 stars standard for this part. (maybe my mapping is much more difficult) calm part --> DS one. well, that's just a personal taste :/
00:32:438 (1,1) - Although Insane do not require any on the recovery time, but I still suggest make at least 1/2 beat for the recovery. Most of the map did it, even if >5 stars Insanes. nope
00:36:774 - beat sound skipped. just like misleading player to play a 1/2 slider but actually it is 3/4. I know there is a sound on 00:36:891 - , but it is not obvious for the vocal sound change. I think better to change to 1/2 slider, or you can add circle at 00:36:891 - got your point there. did some change here
00:59:274 - In fact this part not like 3.6 stars standard. it is more hard than that since low rank player cannot play a steady stream. Just like asking them not to play this diff. Also, low bpm song usually use slider instead of circle. it is more easy to catch a slider rather than a circle. if i set it into a slider, that will be way too easy
01:14:508 - missing seems weird. I think you intend to do so, but why? For me, it is missing a vocal sound/ beat. it is weird to skip a sound for no reasons, not for emphasising sth, nor the music playing like this. i didn't focus on vocal tbh. i focused on instrument on this one hehehe
01:17:321 (1,2) - ctrl+g, this vocal sound 01:17:555 - better using a slider. good point there, but i better keep this one, cuz i didn't even focus on vocal to make it better on it
01:19:430 - for this part, it is full of triple. As I mention earlier, circle triple/ stream is not that easy to caught in low bpm sound, maybe you can make a slider jump for most of the triple/ streams. listen to this song again by using Playback Rate 25%, then you will get it for sure
01:29:508 - missing vocal again. same reason. same reason from what i said about this
01:49:899 - missing beat sound, same reason. done
01:43:571 (1,2,3,4) - I suggest you use 1→3→4→2 becasue it is more fun for the flowing. Optional. nope
01:45:446 (1) - spinner again. If you want the map fun, then I think you can remove the slider and place circle and slider, as there is 1/4 sounds. will consider about this
01:49:664 (3) - missed 01:49:899 - , this timing is the ending for vocal, and then another at 01:50:016 - . better seperate it. you have mentioned this one before
02:08:883 (3,4) - ctrl+g for flowing, please consider the flowing in red and blue. Red flow broke at the tail of slider (2), but then blue flow is follow oval flow. there you go
SPOILER
03:00:563 (1) - This is a good breaking time, but then I suggest removing the spinner becasue 03:04:196 - this beat is not quite strong. Why this spinner end at here but not 03:02:321 - 03:03:727 - or sth like that. The ending position is not the unique one, there I suggest you delete it. not gonna delete that, but i'll just change the spinner duration for following the vocal instead
03:07:946 - Here is a strong beat, I think you can add a circle here and then continue for the break. well why not?
03:13:571 (1) - this spinner also waste the beats. A lot of 1/4 beat, or even 1/8 beat sound. Suggest mapping it. I hate wasting beats sound.
03:19:196 - Not a suitable break here. you just have a break time finished at 03:11:696 - , but then after 8 sec, you make another break? it is quite weird to do so. I suggest you can map for the music sound. lazy to do this, but i'll take of this one someday if i made up my mind

03:23:649 (4) - 03:24:586 (6) - I suggest you can del it. becasue it can emphasis 03:23:883 (5) - and 03:24:821 (1) - more. no, because i focused on instrument + vocal on this part. same goes to the other parts

03:34:196 - This stream is quite hard for 3.6 stars standard. becasue of the long stream, and slider and circle overlapping making the stream hard to read for 3.6 stars. looks readable for me. and yeah, i asked someone for testplay this one, and seems readable
04:00:446 (1,2) - same direction slider for this is not a good flowing. But then if ctrl+g 04:00:914 (2) - is not a good flow for 2,3,4,5. I suggest you can ctrl+g and change the order to 2→4→5→3, then snap the ds you think it is suitable. it is better in flowing for me. Example: no change for that, but i'll just 04:00:446 (1) - ctrl+g this instead
SPOILER
04:30:914 (2) - 04:34:664 (2) - 04:38:414 (2) - same rhythm as 04:27:164 - better keep it the same. i followed the vocal only there, except 04:27:164 -

In fact there is a lot of repeated modding, just like
why leaving blank at 01:14:508 - 01:15:446 - i told you. same reason

00:59:274 (1,2,3) - triple/ stream is not quite suitable in low bpm song, maybe <140 bpm and >100bpm song. Less than 100bpm triple, not like a triple, but single clicks. Hope you can change some of stream/triple to slider. again, about this

03:34:664 (5,1) - stream problem, really hard to play for relatively new/ #10m players. I think good map should be player-friendly. Just change to a easy to play pattern? meh, i don't want to do that

Above 3 is not the single case, but for the same rhythm in the following parts

Last, hope you like my modding and it can help you improve your map

ok, thx for mod

also, here's my changes on my diff:

all those spinners are now following the vocal after the KIAI parts
01:01:969 (4,5) - removed clap
02:04:664 (3,4) - yeah, i added 1 note there due to missing beat

Nerova Riuz GX

1,413 posts

Joined April 2012

Nerova Riuz GX 2015-10-18T12:29:03+00:00

Insane diff only
not really need to be fixed so i just mention something.
i remember i did sth on this map before in modhelp so i'll skip them as well

00:32:438 (1,1) - Mute that is a good idea, but spinner end should be also contained as a note, and it makes this place really hard to recognize. "You can't hear it" doesn't mean "it's not there." In this case, that circle replaced spinner end, with a 1/4 small gap, but that spinner end won't be ignored because it's not "well-covered" by that circle. It will be a great idea if they are at the same time, but it's not allowed in rules.

00:34:196 (1,2,3,4,5) - I'll tend to use a hexagon jump instead of a back'n'forth triangle. Well back'n'forth here is quite awkward, especially there's no special downbeats, no distance change, and no unique patterns. http://puu.sh/kOyCb/70ae9dee02.jpg

01:05:602 (4,1,2) - This might be the strangest flow in this map. A clockwise flow is twisted suddenly and make that pattern become pretty strange. I'll use something like this. just saying, it's up to you. http://puu.sh/kOyRT/0c7c25c493.jpg

01:09:821 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - In general, these triplets are quite inconsistent. the voice goes in a similar way, but triplets are pretty random. starting triplets on 01:10:055 - 01:10:992 - 01:11:930 - 01:12:867 - will be a good choice as far as i saw. it happens on other places as well, especially every parts they go in different ways and hard to catch a stable beat.

01:32:438 (1) - k spinners for vocal. just a little bit random, but it won't cause trouble. lol. still up to you.

01:49:664 (3,4,5) - that slider end on 01:49:899 - seems pretty useless to me :V

01:52:946 (1,2,3,1,2) - That NC change obviously depends on the midi sounds, but it shows its inconsistency when it compares with 00:24:821 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - .

Most of them appear in the diff for more than once, If you decide to fix them, they can be found pretty easily.
nice one.
GL

Bara-

11,980 posts

Joined April 2013

Bara- 2015-10-31T19:41:50+00:00

Insane

00:00:914 (2,4) - There is a sound at the 3/4 here, so a silence is quite inappropriate, set it to 15-20%
00:22:008 (7,1) - Why is there a jump here, while there is no jump at 00:26:227 (6,1) - ?
00:32:321 (3) - NC please. It feels better to have a NC on the latest note of a part (but this is just personale preference)
00:34:196 (1) - Why is this here, while you silence the spinner beforehand? Better remove this, and extend the spinner by 1/4
00:58:102 (6,1) - The low spacing here is quite awkward
00:59:274 (1,3) - Switch NC (listen to your finishes)
01:24:117 (6) - 01:25:992 (7) - Stack?
02:02:321 (1) - Why is this here, while you silence the spinner beforehand? Better remove this, and extend the spinner by 1/4
02:15:446 (2) - NC, start of new stanza
02:27:399 (1,3) - Switch NC (listen to your finishes)
02:59:977 (10) - Add finish at the start? There is a really strong sound here, weaker then 03:00:446 (1) - though
03:19:899 - Start the break here?

Diff is decent, but it needs more work, especially on slidershapes (blankets are not that great, but I don't like nazi modding anymore)
Good luck!

Beomsan

Beatmap Nominator

1,910 posts

Joined November 2013

Beomsan 2015-11-02T15:13:38+00:00

Yun*chi <3
Log Horizon <<3

Good luck on ranking!

lit120

3,276 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

lit120 2015-11-05T17:04:15+00:00

Nerova Riuz GX wrote:
Insane diff only
not really need to be fixed so i just mention something.
i remember i did sth on this map before in modhelp so i'll skip them as well

00:32:438 (1,1) - Mute that is a good idea, but spinner end should be also contained as a note, and it makes this place really hard to recognize. "You can't hear it" doesn't mean "it's not there." In this case, that circle replaced spinner end, with a 1/4 small gap, but that spinner end won't be ignored because it's not "well-covered" by that circle. It will be a great idea if they are at the same time, but it's not allowed in rules. did that on some spinners

00:34:196 (1,2,3,4,5) - I'll tend to use a hexagon jump instead of a back'n'forth triangle. Well back'n'forth here is quite awkward, especially there's no special downbeats, no distance change, and no unique patterns. http://puu.sh/kOyCb/70ae9dee02.jpg keep

01:05:602 (4,1,2) - This might be the strangest flow in this map. A clockwise flow is twisted suddenly and make that pattern become pretty strange. I'll use something like this. just saying, it's up to you. http://puu.sh/kOyRT/0c7c25c493.jpg it's fine for me

01:09:821 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - In general, these triplets are quite inconsistent. the voice goes in a similar way, but triplets are pretty random. starting triplets on 01:10:055 - 01:10:992 - 01:11:930 - 01:12:867 - will be a good choice as far as i saw. it happens on other places as well, especially every parts they go in different ways and hard to catch a stable beat. looks ugly as shit. changed that

01:32:438 (1) - k spinners for vocal. just a little bit random, but it won't cause trouble. lol. still up to you. LOL

01:49:664 (3,4,5) - that slider end on 01:49:899 - seems pretty useless to me :V wat. i heard a note there :/

01:52:946 (1,2,3,1,2) - That NC change obviously depends on the midi sounds, but it shows its inconsistency when it compares with 00:24:821 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - . woops

Most of them appear in the diff for more than once, If you decide to fix them, they can be found pretty easily.
nice one.
GL

Baraatje123 wrote:
Insane

00:00:914 (2,4) - There is a sound at the 3/4 here, so a silence is quite inappropriate, set it to 15-20% done
00:22:008 (7,1) - Why is there a jump here, while there is no jump at 00:26:227 (6,1) - ? did something on 00:22:008 (7) - , but i'll keep them, since it's not even that far
00:32:321 (3) - NC please. It feels better to have a NC on the latest note of a part (but this is just personale preference) nope

00:34:196 (1) - Why is this here, while you silence the spinner beforehand? Better remove this, and extend the spinner by 1/4 previous mod
00:58:102 (6,1) - The low spacing here is quite awkward asdf wtf
00:59:274 (1,3) - Switch NC (listen to your finishes) done
01:24:117 (6) - 01:25:992 (7) - Stack? no
02:02:321 (1) - Why is this here, while you silence the spinner beforehand? Better remove this, and extend the spinner by 1/4 previous mod
02:15:446 (2) - NC, start of new stanza not gonna do that, and also, you missed 00:47:086 (1,2) -
02:27:399 (1,3) - Switch NC (listen to your finishes) done
02:59:977 (10) - Add finish at the start? There is a really strong sound here, weaker then 03:00:446 (1) - though i don't think finish is suitable on that
03:19:899 - Start the break here?
Diff is decent, but it needs more work, especially on slidershapes (blankets are not that great, but I don't like nazi modding anymore)
Good luck!

thx for mod

Beomsan wrote:
Yun*chi <3
Log Horizon <<3

Good luck on ranking!

i will!

K i A i

662 posts

Joined March 2011

K i A i 2015-12-02T16:37:03+00:00

here is normal for you

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108,48,210446,2,0,L|228:48,3,120,4|4|4|4,0:1|0:3|0:1|0:3,0:0:0:0:
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lit120

3,276 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

lit120 2015-12-02T16:44:16+00:00

welcome to GD club! added K i A i's normal diff!

~~also, i have to set this map to WIP for some reason~~

ok it's good to go now

Kalibe

2,068 posts

Joined October 2013

Kalibe 2015-12-05T16:48:04+00:00

Hellu. M5M

general:

http://puu.sh/lKixV/861f3f9cd8.png - Fix this thingy.

Looks cool.

[K i A i's Normal]

00:22:711 (5) - Mayb put here NC? Nice place, before downbeat and blabla.
00:27:633 (2,3) - Fix blanket. ~ Try move (3) to x: 192 y: 56 ?
00:30:446 (5) - Move this a little to down. It should be more flowness imo, x: 304 y: 256 is cool.
00:46:852 (6) -02:14:977 (7) - 03:13:571 (1,2,3) - 04:25:758 (3) - Is these sliders allowed on Normal? o.o
01:05:602 (1,2) - Swap NC.
01:12:399 (4) - Hm i did this slider looks otherwise. For me it's nicer, but idk : http://puu.sh/lKj0j/13d3ed1d2e.jpg
02:33:727 (1,2) - Swap NC. Better to put NC on rhythm, not vocal.

[Insane]

AR 8,5 ?

00:28:571 (1) - How about move this slider to x: 480 y: 196 to emphasise this NC and better flow imo.
01:03:258 (4) - Make this slider straight instead of curved.
01:09:352 (7,8,9) - Sounds weird for me. I don't hear sound on blue ;w;
01:27:399 (4,5,6,8) - Better blanket buddy.
03:00:446 (1,1) - 04:11:696 (1,1) - These NC are ok, but looks weird - 2 NC in 1/1 snap.. nah.

Ok, that's all. Good map -Haku- o/

lit120

3,276 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

lit120 2015-12-05T17:59:13+00:00

Kalibe wrote:
Hellu. M4M FTFY

general:

http://puu.sh/lKixV/861f3f9cd8.png - Fix this thingy. done

Looks cool.

[Insane]

AR 8,5 ? nope

00:28:571 (1) - How about move this slider to x: 480 y: 196 to emphasise this NC and better flow imo. this is ok for me
01:03:258 (4) - Make this slider straight instead of curved. it'll look shit if i make it curve. don't want to ruin the flow tbh
01:09:352 (7,8,9) - Sounds weird for me. I don't hear sound on blue ;w; i heard something there
01:27:399 (4,5,6,8) - Better blanket buddy. it is better. just take a look at 01:27:633 (6,8) - closely if you removed 01:27:399 (4,5) - and 01:27:633 (6,7) - ctrl+g
03:00:446 (1,1) - 04:11:696 (1,1) - These NC are ok, but looks weird - 2 NC in 1/1 snap.. nah. fixed that

Ok, that's all. Good map -Haku- o/

thx for mod

@K i A i i confirmed from QATs that 1/4 is unacceptable for some reason like despy said to me here and here

K i A i

662 posts

Joined March 2011

K i A i 2015-12-06T08:31:27+00:00

fixed

D

osu file format v14

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Cryptic

551 posts

Joined December 2013

Cryptic 2015-12-07T04:52:13+00:00

Heyaa~ M4M.

General:

Consider changing Insane to Light Insane based on the difficulty.

F Ant's Hard:

All seems good.

Insane:

AR 8.3? - I found the streams to read better when I moved it a teeny bit
00:17:321 (1) - Map here instead of a spinner? It has a fairly basic rhythm and keep the flow of the map.
00:47:321 (2,3) - Looks and works better like you have here 00:51:071 (1,2) In my opinion.
01:45:446 (1) - Like I mentioned earlier, I feel like this should be mapped out.
02:15:446 (2,3) and 02:24:821 (1,2) - Like what I mentioned earlier?
02:34:664 (2) - This can circle that 6 better.
03:13:571 (1) - I'm going to sound like a broken record probably...
03:21:071 (1,2) and 03:24:821 (1,2) - I feel like its bad that I'm pretty much just picking out the same minor thing thats really just a flow change.
04:30:914 (2) - Was really jarring on my first play through, it feels under-mapped comparatively speaking.
04:34:664 (2) and 04:38:414 (2) - Same as above.

Other than that, this looks really good! Sorry for my nitpicking...

Wishmaker980

238 posts

Joined October 2013

Wishmaker980 2015-12-07T06:27:11+00:00

Hello~ M4M Request~

INSANE

00:38:649 (2) - The slider should be here and the circle at 00:39:117 (3) -
00:48:258 (4) - I only hear the vocal at this part,before that the slider start was hitting at no vocal
-01:12:399 (5,6,7) - This should be a triplet
-01:12:867 (8) - The slider should be brought forward here
-01:13:336 (9) - Then just place a circle here,this three changes sounds alot better to me
01:52:711 (4) - The slider should be here and then the circle at 01:53:180 (2) -
02:32:789 (2) - Place a circle here and put the slider at 02:33:024 (3) - sounds nicer
02:39:117 (7,8,9,10,11,1) - Instead of just using triples all the way,you can use the same rhythm as 02:37:711 (6,7,1,2,3) - then maybe just place a note after it,sounds more better than just constant triplets

Thats about it,this map is quite alright,hitsoundings couldnt find much,the flow was alright

Good luck with your map!

lit120

3,276 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

lit120 2015-12-07T08:50:39+00:00

CrypticMech wrote:
Heyaa~ M4M.

General:
Consider changing Insane to Light Insane based on the difficulty. wait, what? why would i set the name of the difficulty into "Light Insane"?

F Ant's Hard:
All seems good.

Insane:
AR 8.3? - I found the streams to read better when I moved it a teeny bit no thanks. i want to keep AR8 for now
00:17:321 (1) - Map here instead of a spinner? It has a fairly basic rhythm and keep the flow of the map. nope
00:47:321 (2,3) - Looks and works better like you have here 00:51:071 (1,2) In my opinion. didn't want to make it same, so i decided to make it different
01:45:446 (1) - Like I mentioned earlier, I feel like this should be mapped out. lazy to make that, sorry haha
02:15:446 (2,3) and 02:24:821 (1,2) - Like what I mentioned earlier? same answer
02:34:664 (2) - This can circle that 6 better. nahhh. this slider belongs to the vocal one
03:13:571 (1) - I'm going to sound like a broken record probably... same answer
03:21:071 (1,2) and 03:24:821 (1,2) - I feel like its bad that I'm pretty much just picking out the same minor thing thats really just a flow change. the flow is ok for me here. and yes, i did that cuz i'm following the instrument
04:30:914 (2) - Was really jarring on my first play through, it feels under-mapped comparatively speaking. why? i didn't map for instrument on this slider
04:34:664 (2) and 04:38:414 (2) - Same as above. ^

Other than that, this looks really good! Sorry for my nitpicking...

Wishmaker980 wrote:
Hello~ M4M Request~

INSANE

00:38:649 (2) - The slider should be here and the circle at 00:39:117 (3) - sounds boring for following a vocal here
00:48:258 (4) - I only hear the vocal at this part,before that the slider start was hitting at no vocal oh really? please listen to that part one more time, since there is a instrument sound
-01:12:399 (5,6,7) - This should be a triplet wait, what? it is a triplet ._.
-01:12:867 (8) - The slider should be brought forward here that's intentional
-01:13:336 (9) - Then just place a circle here,this three changes sounds alot better to me hoho. this part inspired me from the ranked version, cuz why not? i followed the instrument sound only
01:52:711 (4) - The slider should be here and then the circle at 01:53:180 (2) - no
02:32:789 (2) - Place a circle here and put the slider at 02:33:024 (3) - sounds nicer no
02:39:117 (7,8,9,10,11,1) - Instead of just using triples all the way,you can use the same rhythm as 02:37:711 (6,7,1,2,3) - then maybe just place a note after it,sounds more better than just constant triplets sounds no fun and i wanted to give them a challenge on this one. it's pretty ok here

Thats about it,this map is quite alright,hitsoundings couldnt find much,the flow was alright

Good luck with your map!

thx for mod

. and i fixed stuff that doesn't mention from your mods

Iceskulls

1,612 posts

Joined February 2012

Iceskulls 2015-12-08T14:21:51+00:00

m4m
don't forget my map https://osu.ppy.sh/s/383242

[insane]

lol a bit more jumps here would be nice

00:02:321 (1,2) - thinking that a jump would be nice here , if you concerned about spacing thing for (2) to (3) just stack them imo they play much better when stacking
00:39:352 (4,1) - increase spacing here would be good since that make this consistent with 00:37:711 (7,1) - which you do a jumps there but this one it's just the same spacing as previous note
00:45:563 (1,1) - how about this rhythm ? sound better imo or if you don't like 1/4 slider just change them to circles lol
SPOILER
00:52:008 (4,5) - why spacing decrease here the clap here 00:52:477 - sound pretty emphasized so I would use higher spacing
01:05:602 (4,1) - lol same ^^^^^^ (1) sound pretty emphasized that jumps would sound better
01:11:227 (9,10,1) - just wondering why you stop stack 1/4 at tail like 01:09:821 (1,2,3) - ,01:07:477 (6,7,1) - they look pretty nice when stacked imo xdd
01:13:805 (2,3) - would prefer this to have more spacing than 01:13:571 (1,2) - beat here 01:14:039 (3) - sound very emphasized , you even do it here 01:14:977 (2,3) -
02:13:688 (1,1) - same as 00:45:563 (1,1) - I think that rhythm make thing looks/sound more intresting
02:52:242 (7,8) - should have higher spacing than 02:52:008 (6,7) - , (8) sound the most emphasized here
03:22:711 (5,1) - play a bit awkward here , spacing should be bigger since (1) sound really strong imo , try this ?
SPOILER
03:25:992 (6,7) - should have bigger spacing ddd
04:27:867 (5,6) - ^dd , might as well 04:27:633 (4,5) - consider this too somehow spacing looks a bit weird for me
04:29:039 (3,4) - lol I think spacing here should be lower than 04:28:805 (2,3) -
04:29:977 (3,4) - pretty smiliar ^^^
04:33:492 (6,7) - spacing should be higher than 04:33:258 (5,6) - d
04:37:477 (6,7) - xxxss should be lower

would be better to consider some spacing here a bit

[f ant]

00:24:586 (1) - the sliderend for downbeat there sound weird I would map that downbeat clickable , same goes for 00:25:524 (4) -
SPOILER
00:39:586 (1,4) - ,01:52:711 (1,4) - ,02:07:711 (1,4) - lol ^ woudl be better to consider since the vocal that you try to follow isn't sound that strong like instrument here
04:35:601 (4) - not snapped
04:42:164 - how about add circle here then start spinner here 04:42:281 - instead , make rhythm sound better imo

clean

[k i a i]

00:22:711 (5,6) - try this rhythm instead ? sound better imo
SPOILER
02:05:602 (6,1) - I would use 1.0x spacing so that make spacing a bit more consistent here
03:14:508 (3) - lol I'm not sure if multi reverse 1/4 slider is ok for beginners here but I think it might be a bit too hard for them imo , I would do this instead
SPOILER
04:25:758 (3) - similiar to above

good luck

lit120

3,276 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

lit120 2015-12-09T06:03:56+00:00

CelsiusLK wrote:
m4m
don't forget my map https://osu.ppy.sh/s/383242 i still remember that, don't worry

[insane]
lol a bit more jumps here would be nice
00:02:321 (1,2) - thinking that a jump would be nice here , if you concerned about spacing thing for (2) to (3) just stack them imo they play much better when stacking well that makes sense
00:39:352 (4,1) - increase spacing here would be good since that make this consistent with 00:37:711 (7,1) - which you do a jumps there but this one it's just the same spacing as previous note i moved 00:39:352 (4) - instead
00:45:563 (1,1) - how about this rhythm ? sound better imo or if you don't like 1/4 slider just change them to circles lol nice idea, but i'll just use 1/4 reverse slider instead, cuz i don't want to make something hard, so i decided to use it for more easier \o/
SPOILER
00:52:008 (4,5) - why spacing decrease here the clap here 00:52:477 - sound pretty emphasized so I would use higher spacing there, i moved 00:52:477 (5) -
01:05:602 (4,1) - lol same ^^^^^^ (1) sound pretty emphasized that jumps would sound better keep
01:11:227 (9,10,1) - just wondering why you stop stack 1/4 at tail like 01:09:821 (1,2,3) - ,01:07:477 (6,7,1) - they look pretty nice when stacked imo xdd LOL
01:13:805 (2,3) - would prefer this to have more spacing than 01:13:571 (1,2) - beat here 01:14:039 (3) - sound very emphasized , you even do it here 01:14:977 (2,3) - moved stuff
02:13:688 (1,1) - same as 00:45:563 (1,1) - I think that rhythm make thing looks/sound more intresting same reason and done
02:52:242 (7,8) - should have higher spacing than 02:52:008 (6,7) - , (8) sound the most emphasized here done
03:22:711 (5,1) - play a bit awkward here , spacing should be bigger since (1) sound really strong imo , try this ? did something different
SPOILER
03:25:992 (6,7) - should have bigger spacing ddd done
04:27:867 (5,6) - ^dd , might as well 04:27:633 (4,5) - consider this too somehow spacing looks a bit weird for me done
04:29:039 (3,4) - lol I think spacing here should be lower than 04:28:805 (2,3) - keep
04:29:977 (3,4) - pretty smiliar ^^^ ^
04:33:492 (6,7) - spacing should be higher than 04:33:258 (5,6) - d the vocal's voice stuff :p
04:37:477 (6,7) - xxxss should be lower ^

would be better to consider some spacing here a bit
good luck

thx for mod

K i A i

662 posts

Joined March 2011

K i A i 2015-12-09T13:47:38+00:00

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48,48,210211,5,4,0:3:0:0:
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48,160,226852,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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Blizs

898 posts

Joined November 2013

Blizs 2015-12-09T17:31:16+00:00

fixed everything except the last one about circle and spinner.
I'll keep it like that since the last note (04:41:227 (2) - ) ended on blue tick. I'm afraid if the players will be confused if add a circle after it. I just make a simple hard diff here, so I want to avoid using 3/4 snap or similar to it.

Thanks for mod, Celsius >w<

Update :
F Ant's Hard : http://pastebin.com/raw.php?i=JWQG5d3E

Factorial

691 posts

Joined August 2013

Factorial 2015-12-12T01:47:15+00:00

Modding here
[K i A i's Normal]

00:03:258 (1) - Spinner too short (I even get 100 most of the time)
00:46:852 (6) - As for the lowest difficulty, don't use 1/4 on NM. The must be elements of EZ on this.
03:13:571 (1,2,3) - 04:25:758 (3) - ^
01:04:899 (5) - Replace with a circle at 01:04:899

[Hard]
All fine here.
[Insane]

03:00:914 (2,3,4,5) - You can unstack these and make it similar to 00:45:445 (1,2,1) on Hard.
03:04:664 (2) - 03:08:414 (2) - 04:12:164 (2) - 04:15:914 (2) - 04:19:664 (2) - ^

C00L

1,078 posts

Joined September 2014

C00L 2015-12-12T18:05:30+00:00

Hello M4M

em to start of with im not an experienced player when it comes to <4.5* maps, but i will try my best, oh and btw the insane diff (the one that ill be modding) plays really good on DT and HD

Insane

01:45:446 (1) - maybe extend to the red tick sounds a bit better imo, unless youre keeping it there for players to re-adjust their aim
02:29:391 (8,1) - i'd say delete this and start a NC here 02:29:977 (3) - (sounds a bit better imo)
03:58:571 (1) - maybe curve this a bit more so that it creates a blanket with 03:59:039 (2) -
04:10:055 (2) - start new combo here except here 04:09:821 (1) - i dont think there is any reason to start the NC here 04:09:821 (1) - since there is no major like raise in the song or any sort of drop
04:41:578 (4) - delete this leave a sort of tension point before the last note appears
(at this point ive went over this again sorry that its not in order :/)
01:01:266 (8,1) - delete these and start a NC here 01:01:852 (3) -

Apart from that really nice blankets O_o
Sorry if this wasnt helpful at all :/

GL with youre map

lit120

3,276 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

lit120 2015-12-19T17:26:44+00:00

Neil Leo wrote:
Modding here
[Insane]
03:00:914 (2,3,4,5) - You can unstack these and make it similar to 00:45:445 (1,2,1) on Hard. why would i need to unstack it?
03:04:664 (2) - 03:08:414 (2) - 04:12:164 (2) - 04:15:914 (2) - 04:19:664 (2) - ^ ^

Cooldue7 wrote:
Hello M4M

em to start of with im not an experienced player when it comes to <4.5* maps, but i will try my best, oh and btw the insane diff (the one that ill be modding) plays really good on DT and HD

Insane
01:45:446 (1) - maybe extend to the red tick sounds a bit better imo, unless youre keeping it there for players to re-adjust their aim i'll just keep that for now
02:29:391 (8,1) - i'd say delete this and start a NC here 02:29:977 (3) - (sounds a bit better imo) the vocal starts at 02:29:508 (1) - so i have to NC that
03:58:571 (1) - maybe curve this a bit more so that it creates a blanket with 03:59:039 (2) - blanket is too meh for this
04:10:055 (2) - start new combo here except here 04:09:821 (1) - i dont think there is any reason to start the NC here 04:09:821 (1) - since there is no major like raise in the song or any sort of drop well there is a reason why. it's the same like 01:30:446 (1) - and 02:58:571 (1) -
04:41:578 (4) - delete this leave a sort of tension point before the last note appears there is a note, why would i need to delete that?
(at this point ive went over this again sorry that its not in order :/)
01:01:266 (8,1) - delete these and start a NC here 01:01:852 (3) - same reason from the previous mod

Apart from that really nice blankets O_o
Sorry if this wasnt helpful at all :/

GL with youre map

no change here. sorry guys

. thx for mods

Nathan

2,161 posts

Joined August 2014

Nathan 2015-12-21T22:48:51+00:00

hard's AR seems a bit high and close to insane, imo 7 or maybe even lower is already fine

[Insane]

00:00:446 (1,2,3,4,1) - these should all be overlapped, even if they're only sliders, it's difficult to sightread and it kinda just hits the player in the balls right when they start the map, besides all other 1/4 in this difficulty didn't have spacing like this
00:17:321 (1) - I guess this is very subjective, but I really don't get the spinner here, it's a build-up, and at the peak of it you have something underwhelming, I think it would be a wasted opportunity not to map it out
00:20:602 (4) - strange rhythm, ends on a strong downbeat, you're probably going to claim that you're following vocals, but you're not following them properly, especially since the stronger vocal is on 00:21:071 -
00:40:524 (4,5,6,7) - space these evenly, or don't have such a wide angle with uneven distances, it causes weird decelerating/accelerating movements
when you have sharper angles there's a change in direction, so you don't have to worry about all that momentum bs
00:46:617 (1) - you could really change this into a more difficult rhythm, some 1/4 sliders or circles would fit the loud sounds much more, having a repeat through the entire thing doesn't emphasize any of the beats
01:13:571 (1,2,3,4,1) - shape looks very messy, try moving 01:14:274 (4,1) - so it's equal distance between 01:13:571 (1,2) -
01:45:446 (1) - same spinner thing as earlier, seems like you did this a couple more times so I'm just gonna stop mentioning it
01:47:321 (1) - center the 2nd grey node in between the first 1st and the red for a more balanced curve and blanket
02:41:696 (1,2,3,4) - you can also make make this shape neater, same thing really as in 01:13:571 (1,2,3,4,1) -
02:58:336 (3,1,2) - no reason to have uneven spacing here, looks messy, and combined with the wide angle you've got a random deceleration between 1 and 2
03:21:071 (1,2) - why isn't this fully stacked like 03:24:821 (1,2) - ? don't see any difference and it just looks bleh
03:24:821 (1,2) - ^
03:36:071 (1,2,3,4,5) - the two previous streams went from 0.5 -> 0.7, then all of a sudden this increases by 0.3, and the next by 0.2 again, make them all even, don't see anything in the music that calls for a sudden spurt in spacing
03:58:102 (5,6,1) - strange spacing again, 5->6 should at least be less spaced than 6->1, 1 is the strongest out of all of these yet has lower emphasis

K i A i

662 posts

Joined March 2011

K i A i 2015-12-22T04:44:42+00:00

too late sorry

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48,48,210211,5,4,0:3:0:0:
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48,160,226852,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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272,48,237633,2,0,L|208:56,1,60,4|2,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
152,56,238102,2,0,L|88:48,1,60,8|2,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
32,48,238571,2,0,B|32:108|32:108|72:168,1,120,4|8,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,200,239274,2,0,P|112:280|48:352,1,180,2|8,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,312,240211,6,0,L|0:192,1,120,2|2,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
40,144,240914,2,0,L|104:144,1,60,8|2,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
160,144,241383,2,0,P|168:176|168:208,1,60,4|2,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
136,256,241852,1,8,0:0:0:0:
184,296,242086,2,0,L|248:288,1,60,2|4,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
288,328,242555,2,0,L|352:320,1,60,2|8,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,360,243024,2,0,L|512:344,1,120,2|2,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
512,284,243727,2,0,P|508:256|512:224,1,60,8|2,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
512,164,244196,6,0,P|464:200|392:200,1,120,4|8,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,176,244899,2,0,P|352:264|288:328,1,180,2|8,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,360,245836,1,2,0:3:0:0:
184,336,246071,2,0,L|56:336,1,120,4|8,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,288,246774,2,0,B|24:196|24:196|80:128,1,180,2|8,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,192,247946,6,0,L|304:192,1,120,4|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,216,248649,2,0,P|424:216|480:184,1,120,6|6,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
504,136,249352,1,8,0:0:0:0:
480,80,249586,2,0,B|432:80|432:80|400:104|360:104,1,120,6|6,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
312,72,250289,2,0,L|248:72,1,60,8|2,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
200,104,250758,2,0,L|136:104,1,60,4|6,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
88,136,251227,2,0,L|24:136,2,60,8|2|4,0:0|0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,251930,12,2,255446,0:0:0:0:
256,192,259196,5,4,0:1:0:0:
200,88,262946,6,0,P|256:68|312:88,3,120,4|4|4|4,0:3|0:3|0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
256,192,264821,2,0,L|256:256,3,60,4|4|4|4,0:3|0:3|0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
256,312,265758,2,0,L|256:352,2,30,4|4|4,0:3|0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
256,252,266227,1,8,0:0:0:0:
168,168,266696,6,0,P|104:168|56:200,2,120,4|8|4,0:0|0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
256,252,268102,1,8,0:0:0:0:
344,168,268571,2,0,P|408:168|456:200,2,120,4|8|4,0:3|0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
256,252,269977,2,0,L|256:316,1,60,8|2,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
200,336,270446,6,0,B|152:336|152:336|136:328|136:328|80:328,1,120,4|8,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,240,271383,2,0,B|48:240|48:240|64:232|64:232|120:232,1,120,4|8,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,144,272321,2,0,B|152:144|152:144|136:136|136:136|80:136,2,120,4|8|4,0:3|0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
256,168,273492,1,2,0:3:0:0:
312,192,273727,2,0,L|376:192,1,60,8|2,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
432,192,274196,6,0,P|432:128|464:80,2,120,4|8|4,0:1|0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
448,312,275602,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,264,276071,2,0,P|336:328|304:376,2,120,4|8|4,0:3|0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
248,176,277477,2,0,P|216:176|184:184,1,60,8|2,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
144,224,277946,6,0,L|24:216,1,120,4|8,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,120,278883,2,0,L|104:0,1,120,4|8,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,72,279821,2,0,L|320:80,1,120,4|4,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
248,176,280758,2,0,L|240:296,1,120,4|6,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
236,356,281461,1,6,0:3:0:0:
236,356,282164,5,4,1:2:0:0:
256,192,282399,12,0,289196,0:0:0:0:

lit120

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lit120 2015-12-22T07:05:58+00:00

sukiNathan wrote:
hard's AR seems a bit high and close to insane, imo 7 or maybe even lower is already fine

[Insane]
00:00:446 (1,2,3,4,1) - these should all be overlapped, even if they're only sliders, it's difficult to sightread and it kinda just hits the player in the balls right when they start the map, besides all other 1/4 in this difficulty didn't have spacing like this i took a look again on this part, and seems that you're right about this
00:17:321 (1) - I guess this is very subjective, but I really don't get the spinner here, it's a build-up, and at the peak of it you have something underwhelming, I think it would be a wasted opportunity not to map it out will think about this
00:20:602 (4) - strange rhythm, ends on a strong downbeat, you're probably going to claim that you're following vocals, but you're not following them properly, especially since the stronger vocal is on 00:21:071 - OHHH I SEE WHERE THE VOCAL STOPS!!!
00:40:524 (4,5,6,7) - space these evenly, or don't have such a wide angle with uneven distances, it causes weird decelerating/accelerating movements
when you have sharper angles there's a change in direction, so you don't have to worry about all that momentum bs i'm not even worried about that. that's just intentional for me here
00:46:617 (1) - you could really change this into a more difficult rhythm, some 1/4 sliders or circles would fit the loud sounds much more, having a repeat through the entire thing doesn't emphasize any of the beats true
01:13:571 (1,2,3,4,1) - shape looks very messy, try moving 01:14:274 (4,1) - so it's equal distance between 01:13:571 (1,2) - i didn't create a shape here
01:45:446 (1) - same spinner thing as earlier, seems like you did this a couple more times so I'm just gonna stop mentioning it same thing m8
01:47:321 (1) - center the 2nd grey node in between the first 1st and the red for a more balanced curve and blanket fixed by myself
02:41:696 (1,2,3,4) - you can also make make this shape neater, same thing really as in 01:13:571 (1,2,3,4,1) - same answer
02:58:336 (3,1,2) - no reason to have uneven spacing here, looks messy, and combined with the wide angle you've got a random deceleration between 1 and 2 moved stuff
03:21:071 (1,2) - why isn't this fully stacked like 03:24:821 (1,2) - ? don't see any difference and it just looks bleh god damn it, didn't see that coming
03:24:821 (1,2) - ^ ^
03:36:071 (1,2,3,4,5) - the two previous streams went from 0.5 -> 0.7, then all of a sudden this increases by 0.3, and the next by 0.2 again, make them all even, don't see anything in the music that calls for a sudden spurt in spacing got your point there. remade
03:58:102 (5,6,1) - strange spacing again, 5->6 should at least be less spaced than 6->1, 1 is the strongest out of all of these yet has lower emphasis moved stuff

ok about the spinners, i'll try to think about it later, since some modders were complaining about this. thx for mod

updated K i A i's diff

Blizs

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Blizs 2015-12-24T12:26:03+00:00

@Hakurei : can you fix the AR for me please ? :3

lit120

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lit120 2016-01-15T19:05:04+00:00

ok, so i decided to remap the spinner stuff one (some parts), and this should be good enough for now

also, changed AR at Blizs' diff as he mentioned above

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Irreversible 2016-01-18T17:08:19+00:00

[K i a i's Normal]

03:11:696 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1) - This pattern is pretty overkill for a normal.. please use something easier.
03:34:196 (1,2,3,4) - Same, so many repeaters are really confusing actually! Please change, since it's the easiest diff.

Beautiful diff!!

[F Ant's Hard]

I have nothing to say, perfect.

[Insane]

00:20:602 (4) - When I saw this pattern, symmetry came into my mind. The flow would be supported too! http://puu.sh/mApjm/ed5ac5df8e.jpg
00:22:946 (1,2,3) - and 00:24:352 (4,1,2,3) - have inconsistent DS for no reason.
00:26:696 (1) - Could have slightly increased spacing to fit the moment.
00:27:633 (3,4,1) - Inconsistent DS.
00:44:274 (2) - Not enough DS to fit the rest (even tho it's blanket, it lokos really off)
00:53:649 (3,4,5) - Could form a triangle or anything like this, to look more patterned. Also, the way 5 is close to 3 triggers me slightly.
01:05:133 (3,4) - This could be symmetric, no? Would fit the pattern better, too.
01:19:196 (1,2,3,4,5) - Mhh, when I look at how jumpy this is, and how jumpy 01:04:196 (1,2,3) - not is.. I wonder why you've mapped it so different.
01:47:321 (1) - First curve is not done well, please use more dots to smoothen out the curve.
02:09:352 (5) - Flow is slightly interrupted here. http://puu.sh/mApC0/8d2c0d95b2.jpg Try this? Looks neat and patternd, and also it leads in the next slider purrfectly.

Mhh, basically it's the same "small" errors over and over again
1) Please check whether the DS is consistent in parts where it should be consistent (song is calm, so the DS should spike for no reason)
2) Make sure the way you map the song is at least a bit consistent, perfectly seenable in this part 01:19:196 (1,2,3,4,5) -. Please go over the map and check for stuff like this to polish it as good as possible!

Not a bad map, has potential for sure.

Good luck!

lit120

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lit120 2016-01-18T17:37:53+00:00

Irreversible wrote:
[Insane]

00:20:602 (4) - When I saw this pattern, symmetry came into my mind. The flow would be supported too! http://puu.sh/mApjm/ed5ac5df8e.jpg ahhh this should be good
00:22:946 (1,2,3) - and 00:24:352 (4,1,2,3) - have inconsistent DS for no reason. wtf? didn't pay attention to this
00:26:696 (1) - Could have slightly increased spacing to fit the moment. keep
00:27:633 (3,4,1) - Inconsistent DS. done
00:44:274 (2) - Not enough DS to fit the rest (even tho it's blanket, it lokos really off) woah, got it
00:53:649 (3,4,5) - Could form a triangle or anything like this, to look more patterned. Also, the way 5 is close to 3 triggers me slightly. moved and making it into triangle
01:05:133 (3,4) - This could be symmetric, no? Would fit the pattern better, too. nahhh i don't want to make a symmetry here
01:19:196 (1,2,3,4,5) - Mhh, when I look at how jumpy this is, and how jumpy 01:04:196 (1,2,3) - not is.. I wonder why you've mapped it so different. alright, moved it
01:47:321 (1) - First curve is not done well, please use more dots to smoothen out the curve. good to go
02:09:352 (5) - Flow is slightly interrupted here. http://puu.sh/mApC0/8d2c0d95b2.jpg Try this? Looks neat and patternd, and also it leads in the next slider purrfectly. RIP blanket

Mhh, basically it's the same "small" errors over and over again
1) Please check whether the DS is consistent in parts where it should be consistent (song is calm, so the DS should spike for no reason)
2) Make sure the way you map the song is at least a bit consistent, perfectly seenable in this part 01:19:196 (1,2,3,4,5) -. Please go over the map and check for stuff like this to polish it as good as possible!

Not a bad map, has potential for sure.

Good luck!

thx for mod! i'll take a look at my diff closely from what you pointed there

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