As your request. Sorry for the delay.
Read this first for the icon explanation.
- [?] Asking for a second thought.
- [!] Fatal error. You have to fix this for sure.
- [No icon] Only a suggestion.
Read this first for the icon explanation.
- [?] Asking for a second thought.
- [!] Fatal error. You have to fix this for sure.
- [No icon] Only a suggestion.
[General]
1. Oh, I doubt the BPM. Ask someone else to check it for you.
2. Remove "thumbs.db" files from Animation2 and Animation 3 folder.
[Storyboard]
The "Bump Birds" doesn't make any sense. It's a little hard to notice although we can see it clearly. It's like, too simple and the birds are not the right object to be bumped.
[emaal's Easy+]
-- Oh, this diff is messy.
-- Please, use distance snap properly.
-- I found some parts that look crowded
00:05:272 (1) - Ignore the distance snap. Move it to the center.
00:06:642 (2) - Ignore the distance snap. Move it to the east-south corner.
00:08:013 (1) - Ignore the distance snap. Move it to the east-north corner.
00:09:383 (2) - Ignore the distance snap. Move it to the center.
00:10:753 (1) - Ignore the distance snap. Move it to the west-north corner.
00:13:150 - Add a note here then add a finish. The beginning part is a little boring.
00:14:863 (2) - Ignore the distance snap. Move it to the center.
00:16:233 (1) - Ignore the distance snap. Move it to the west-north corner.
00:18:973 (1) - Ignore the distance snap. Move it to the west-south corner.
00:20:343 (2) - Ignore the distance snap. Move it to the south-center corner.
00:21:713 (3) - Ignore the distance snap. Move it to the east-south corner.
00:24:454 (1) - Move it closer to the center.
00:27:879 (3) - Move it three tiny grids right then move 00:28:221 (1) one tiny grid right.
00:28:907 (2) - Distance error.
00:29:934 (1) - Replace the clap with finish.
00:31:304 (1) - ^
00:35:414 (1) - Distance error. I don't want to consider it as a jump. Change the red point become white point.
00:40:895 (1) - Move it one tiny grid left.
00:58:364 - Add a note here then add finish.
01:04:529 (1) - Move bakward one 1/2 tick.
01:05:728 (2) - Remove one repeat.
01:07:954 (1) - Remove this note then add one more repeat on 01:07:098 (3).
01:09:324 (1) - The distance is not right.
01:29:876 - Add a note here.
01:30:561 (2,3,4,5) - I'm afraid this part will be too hard.
[ChaCha17's Fine]
00:12:637 (5) - Extend one 1/2 tick. [?]
00:40:210 (3) - Align with 00:39:525 (1).
00:40:552 (4) - Align with 00:39:867 (2).
00:43:978 (2) - Move two tiny grids up.
01:01:104 (2) - Reduce one 1/4 tick.
01:11:380 - Add a note here.
01:15:490 (5) - Add new combo.
01:16:346 (8) - Move forward one 1/4 tick.
01:23:197 (4) - ^
01:27:821 (1,2) - Move backward one 1/2 tick. Add one more repeat to (2).
01:35:870 - Add a note here maybe.
01:41:693 (2) - Extend one 1/2 tick. [?]
01:51:626 (4) - Reduce one 1/2 tick.
[Summer Holiday]
-- You might want to increase the distance spacing a little.
02:12:691 (1) - Move one tiny grid up.
[jericho2442's Rave]
00:42:265 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Move them one tiny grid right. And if you do this, move 00:43:635 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) too.
Star.1. Oh, I doubt the BPM. Ask someone else to check it for you.
2. Remove "thumbs.db" files from Animation2 and Animation 3 folder.
[Storyboard]
The "Bump Birds" doesn't make any sense. It's a little hard to notice although we can see it clearly. It's like, too simple and the birds are not the right object to be bumped.
[emaal's Easy+]
-- Oh, this diff is messy.
-- Please, use distance snap properly.
-- I found some parts that look crowded
00:05:272 (1) - Ignore the distance snap. Move it to the center.
00:06:642 (2) - Ignore the distance snap. Move it to the east-south corner.
00:08:013 (1) - Ignore the distance snap. Move it to the east-north corner.
00:09:383 (2) - Ignore the distance snap. Move it to the center.
00:10:753 (1) - Ignore the distance snap. Move it to the west-north corner.
00:13:150 - Add a note here then add a finish. The beginning part is a little boring.
00:14:863 (2) - Ignore the distance snap. Move it to the center.
00:16:233 (1) - Ignore the distance snap. Move it to the west-north corner.
00:18:973 (1) - Ignore the distance snap. Move it to the west-south corner.
00:20:343 (2) - Ignore the distance snap. Move it to the south-center corner.
00:21:713 (3) - Ignore the distance snap. Move it to the east-south corner.
00:24:454 (1) - Move it closer to the center.
00:27:879 (3) - Move it three tiny grids right then move 00:28:221 (1) one tiny grid right.
00:28:907 (2) - Distance error.
00:29:934 (1) - Replace the clap with finish.
00:31:304 (1) - ^
00:35:414 (1) - Distance error. I don't want to consider it as a jump. Change the red point become white point.
00:40:895 (1) - Move it one tiny grid left.
00:58:364 - Add a note here then add finish.
01:04:529 (1) - Move bakward one 1/2 tick.
01:05:728 (2) - Remove one repeat.
01:07:954 (1) - Remove this note then add one more repeat on 01:07:098 (3).
01:09:324 (1) - The distance is not right.
01:29:876 - Add a note here.
01:30:561 (2,3,4,5) - I'm afraid this part will be too hard.
[ChaCha17's Fine]
00:12:637 (5) - Extend one 1/2 tick. [?]
00:40:210 (3) - Align with 00:39:525 (1).
00:40:552 (4) - Align with 00:39:867 (2).
00:43:978 (2) - Move two tiny grids up.
01:01:104 (2) - Reduce one 1/4 tick.
01:11:380 - Add a note here.
01:15:490 (5) - Add new combo.
01:16:346 (8) - Move forward one 1/4 tick.
01:23:197 (4) - ^
01:27:821 (1,2) - Move backward one 1/2 tick. Add one more repeat to (2).
01:35:870 - Add a note here maybe.
01:41:693 (2) - Extend one 1/2 tick. [?]
01:51:626 (4) - Reduce one 1/2 tick.
[Summer Holiday]
-- You might want to increase the distance spacing a little.
02:12:691 (1) - Move one tiny grid up.
[jericho2442's Rave]
00:42:265 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Move them one tiny grid right. And if you do this, move 00:43:635 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) too.