Yeah hi this post is gonna rock you!
General:The mp3 sounds really bad I've said this before but it seems you didn't care about it, well.... I'm asking you to change it now
The SB really makes no sense, why is there a little girl dancing in the center? what does it have to do with the background?Being one of your 1st maps I excepted more than one diff by yourself.
Emaal's:
He we go.00:24:454 (1) - this is to close to the spinner either make the spinner shorter and end at 00:23:769 to meet easy diff standards or make the spinner a slider.
00:24:454 (1) - this looks ugly, also you can line up it's end point with 00:25:824 (2).
00:25:824 (2) - this slider isn't snapped on the grid snap it and make it straight.
00:27:194 (1) - line this up with the end point of 00:26:509 (3).
00:28:221 (1) - make this slider go straight down, then make 00:28:907 (2) - look like this.

00:29:934 (1) - this looks bad catmall sliders doesn't really work try using bezier. it's also why alot of your sliders can't line up right.
00:31:304 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - why are all these at a diff distance snap us started with 0.5 this combo is at 0.4.
00:35:414 (3) - straighten this out.
00:38:155 (4,5,6) - line this up with the sliders in between 00:37:470 (3) 00:39:182 (1) .
00:40:895 (1) - another really bad slider.
00:43:293 (4) - line up with 00:42:265 (1,2,3)
01:10:009 (3) - one grid right.
01:10:694 (1,2,3) - line this up.
01:12:065 (1,2,3) - ^
01:17:545 (1,2) - line up with the slider 01:16:860 (3)
01:28:506 (1,2,3) - ^ 01:27:821 (3)
01:31:588 finish the map or atleast map to a better ending point than this.
Chacha17's:
Next ;p.00:02:532 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - remove all the claps and swap with whistles.
00:10:753 (1,2,3,4,5) - the spacing changes right here why this section isn't snapped at 0.9 like the rest of the map?
01:07:270 (3,4,5) - spacing
01:14:462 (3) - ^
01:13:777 (1,2,3) - line this up the the slider.
There alot of little spacing changes like you might of scrolled the wheel up and down when moving notes. I think you snapped at 0.9
Ruka's:
00:33:702 (5) - bad slider

01:32:959 (6,7,8) - spacing inconsistent
01:35:699 (5,6,7) - spacing inconsistent
01:38:439 (5,6,7) - ^ inconsistent
01:41:779 (2) - remove note
other than that there is a big overuse of hitsounds going on in this diff I'm not trying to sound like a jerk but try using my map as an example on how the hitsounds could flow.
Jeri:
I really don't like this style of mappping at all I've told him before really I will not mod that diff if another bat thinks that's okay then fine by me.
emaal wrote:
This also shows that BAT's don't care about priority.
Yeah I'd rather you not disrespect the BAT on a beat map thread okay?

for a map having this high of a priority and for me to find this many issues yeah...... so much for priority.