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唔？
Hard:
高潮前面一点那一段声音偏小
01:47:896 (1) - no volume spinner
Normal:
00:43:825 (6) - WTH?
01:08:467 (8) - 第一拍clap
01:11:682 (7) - 第二拍clap
noumi <3
高潮前面一点那一段声音偏小
01:47:896 (1) - no volume spinner
Normal:
00:43:825 (6) - WTH?
01:08:467 (8) - 第一拍clap
01:11:682 (7) - 第二拍clap
noumi <3
能美 >.<
給 star！XD
給 star！XD
【HARD】
01:42:860
。总感觉结尾声音偏小了 稍微加点音量吧。。更舒服一点~
01:42:860
。总感觉结尾声音偏小了 稍微加点音量吧。。更舒服一点~
Topic Starter
jamesleao wrote:
Hard:
高潮前面一点那一段声音偏小
01:47:896 (1) - no volume spinner
Normal:
00:43:825 (6) - WTH?
01:08:467 (8) - 第一拍clap
01:11:682 (7) - 第二拍clap
noumi <3
FIXEDddddd519 wrote:
【HARD】
01:42:860
。总感觉结尾声音偏小了 稍微加点音量吧。。更舒服一点~
Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.
[Normal]
0.7 Slider Velocity+ 2.0x Distance Spacing 绝对是太蛋疼了，1.4/1.0明显会好些。你不觉得现在滑slider时就让人觉得很痛苦吗……
00:28:219 (9,1) - spacing
00:35:504 (2,4) - 音量反差太大，完全就是爆音效果了……
00:37:219 (2) - 同。
01:02:933 (8) - new combo
01:05:504 (1) - 一个是音量反差太大。。。第二个是请加条绿线在此note上开始kiai，前面那条绿线只做音量调整用。
01:31:862 (1) - 结尾同样，kiai线和音量线分开。
[Hard]
用grid level3 map会不会更好些。
0.7 Slider Velocity是纯种蛋疼（即使2x部分也就是1.4），这是Hard我说……
爆音部分同Normal
00:04:647 (4) - 和(1)在对称位会给人更好的感觉
00:49:219 (2) - 意义不明。
00:53:076 (1) - end在(2)的位置我感觉更好。
00:56:504 (1) - 同
01:04:862 (8) - new combo
01:09:576 (3,4) - spacing?
01:24:362 (8) - ^
这歌在个人感觉上不适合做taiko。
Edit: Hard最好OA7吧……感觉8弄的不伦不类。
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.
[Normal]
0.7 Slider Velocity+ 2.0x Distance Spacing 绝对是太蛋疼了，1.4/1.0明显会好些。你不觉得现在滑slider时就让人觉得很痛苦吗……
00:28:219 (9,1) - spacing
00:35:504 (2,4) - 音量反差太大，完全就是爆音效果了……
00:37:219 (2) - 同。
01:02:933 (8) - new combo
01:05:504 (1) - 一个是音量反差太大。。。第二个是请加条绿线在此note上开始kiai，前面那条绿线只做音量调整用。
01:31:862 (1) - 结尾同样，kiai线和音量线分开。
[Hard]
用grid level3 map会不会更好些。
0.7 Slider Velocity是纯种蛋疼（即使2x部分也就是1.4），这是Hard我说……
爆音部分同Normal
00:04:647 (4) - 和(1)在对称位会给人更好的感觉
00:49:219 (2) - 意义不明。
00:53:076 (1) - end在(2)的位置我感觉更好。
00:56:504 (1) - 同
01:04:862 (8) - new combo
01:09:576 (3,4) - spacing?
01:24:362 (8) - ^
这歌在个人感觉上不适合做taiko。
Edit: Hard最好OA7吧……感觉8弄的不伦不类。
Topic Starter
THX~NatsumeRin wrote:
Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.
[Normal]
0.7 Slider Velocity+ 2.0x Distance Spacing 绝对是太蛋疼了，1.4/1.0明显会好些。你不觉得现在滑slider时就让人觉得很痛苦吗……
00:28:219 (9,1) - spacing
00:35:504 (2,4) - 音量反差太大，完全就是爆音效果了……
00:37:219 (2) - 同。
01:02:933 (8) - new combo
01:05:504 (1) - 一个是音量反差太大。。。第二个是请加条绿线在此note上开始kiai，前面那条绿线只做音量调整用。
01:31:862 (1) - 结尾同样，kiai线和音量线分开。
normal: FIXED
[Hard]
用grid level3 map会不会更好些。 fixed
0.7 Slider Velocity是纯种蛋疼（即使2x部分也就是1.4），这是Hard我说…… fixed
爆音部分同Normal fixed
00:04:647 (4) - 和(1)在对称位会给人更好的感觉 fixed
00:49:219 (2) - 意义不明。 fixed
00:53:076 (1) - end在(2)的位置我感觉更好。 fixed
00:56:504 (1) - 同fixed
01:04:862 (8) - new combofixed
01:09:576 (3,4) - spacing?fixed
01:24:362 (8) - ^
这歌在个人感觉上不适合做taiko。 (这样啊...
Edit: Hard最好OA7吧……感觉8弄的不伦不类。 fixed
呜.....返工重做中.....当初考虑了很久才用的0.7的说= =
由于我打图hitsound音量开的很小 爆音什么的让大家的耳膜受罪了= =
Topic Starter
normal重制完毕
hard正在改= =
呜......hard改完了
幸亏大多用的是2X.....
否则和重新做没什么区别了.....
当初怎么就选的0.7啊........
hard正在改= =
呜......hard改完了
幸亏大多用的是2X.....
否则和重新做没什么区别了.....
当初怎么就选的0.7啊........
Topic Starter
Sprosive wrote:
offset:324 (?)
star
呜= =
到底是325还是362啊.....
我刚听ex的改成362的说= =
[HARD]
01:15:966 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) 按照原来做的有点唐突 可以做成方形
01:31:109 (14.spun) →(14,15[slider]) 如图 转圈后会显得很唐突 所以这样改也可以
01:42:966 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) 这里可以开1.0x DS来排一条直线上去 之后的稍作调整
01:46:324 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) 同上 一条曲线
仅供参考..
01:15:966 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) 按照原来做的有点唐突 可以做成方形
01:31:109 (14.spun) →(14,15[slider]) 如图 转圈后会显得很唐突 所以这样改也可以
01:42:966 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) 这里可以开1.0x DS来排一条直线上去 之后的稍作调整
01:46:324 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) 同上 一条曲线
仅供参考..
star 
我发现迟了 
支持kud~
顺便给点帮助rank的建议
这音质要是衣服发现了他的蛋疼戮泡/心能力会发挥到极致的，试下这个?
.osb不要的话就删掉然后重新full sub一次吧
所有难度都设置preview time
歌手应该是写声优(Suzuda Miyako)?科多的名字放在tags上吧
如果接受了我的意见换mp3跟改名字的时候最好不要退出编辑界面...有传新图的可能...
在发售那天ranked吧
Download: one's future.mp3
支持kud~顺便给点帮助rank的建议
这音质要是衣服发现了他的蛋疼戮泡/心能力会发挥到极致的，试下这个?
.osb不要的话就删掉然后重新full sub一次吧
所有难度都设置preview time
歌手应该是写声优(Suzuda Miyako)?科多的名字放在tags上吧
如果接受了我的意见换mp3跟改名字的时候最好不要退出编辑界面...有传新图的可能...
在发售那天ranked吧
Download: one's future.mp3
Topic Starter
samipale wrote:
我发现迟了
顺便给点帮助rank的建议
这音质要是衣服发现了他的蛋疼戮泡/心能力会发挥到极致的，试下这个?
.osb不要的话就删掉然后重新full sub一次吧
所有难度都设置preview time
歌手应该是写声优(Suzuda Miyako)?科多的名字放在tags上吧
如果接受了我的意见换mp3跟改名字的时候最好不要退出编辑界面...有传新图的可能...
在发售那天ranked吧
十分感谢....
话说这mp3是怎么来的.....(其实只是用原来的改成更高码率了...?) edit :好像不是....
声优的罗马音原来我不知道就写了科多..
再次感谢.
官网下的pv_lolipop wrote:
十分感谢....
话说这mp3是怎么来的.....(其实只是用原来的改成更高码率了...?) edit :好像不是....
声优的罗马音原来我不知道就写了科多..
再次感谢.
edit:原本的写着是44100hz但是实际上不是。。这个我压成44100hz了，pv的音频是192kbps我也照着转192kbps，不过有点失真就是啦。。
Topic Starter
啊啊....难怪 我的pv是二次转的了samipale wrote:
官网下的pv_lolipop wrote:
十分感谢....
话说这mp3是怎么来的.....(其实只是用原来的改成更高码率了...?) edit :好像不是....
声优的罗马音原来我不知道就写了科多..
再次感谢.
edit:原本的写着是44100hz但是实际上不是。。这个我压成44100hz了，pv的音频是192kbps我也照着转192kbps，不过有点失真就是啦。。
网速太慢不能full sub了........
edit:上传完毕
star 
darling的好伙伴就是我的好朋友
Add "Ex Boy" to tags~
ExBoy's diffs offset is different by 1 xD xD
I'd ask you to cut out that ad part at the end of the mp3... if you can :<
Try offset +20ish (345) (match it with Ex Boy's)
Ex Boy's Relaxing-
Fair, could use some finish hitsounds at least
01:23:467 (1) - the repeat is fairly hidden, I saw it, but wouldn't do this for easiest diff
Normal-
I'm not against lowest stack, but I'm sure there are people who are v.v
01:01:395 (6) - add clap to middle of slider? (the repeat)
01:25:609 (9) - add clap? maybe?
01:29:038 (4) - clap at end of slider sounds weird since its on a 1/2 beat
Not bad..
Hard-
again, the stack.. oh well
00:23:696 (1,2) - clap clap?
00:34:624 (8,9,10) - have this sound like 00:27:767 (8,9,10)? (whistle-clap-clap)
00:35:267 (1) - imo, remove this whistle
01:38:695 (9) - maybe add a finish for the end of the normal hitsound section?
Pretty good~!
Ex Boy's Future-
Good, don't like the "across the screen" jumps, but good
Not bad for first map (speaking about Normal and Hard of course)
ExBoy's diffs offset is different by 1 xD xD
I'd ask you to cut out that ad part at the end of the mp3... if you can :<
Try offset +20ish (345) (match it with Ex Boy's)
Ex Boy's Relaxing-
Fair, could use some finish hitsounds at least
01:23:467 (1) - the repeat is fairly hidden, I saw it, but wouldn't do this for easiest diff
Normal-
I'm not against lowest stack, but I'm sure there are people who are v.v
01:01:395 (6) - add clap to middle of slider? (the repeat)
01:25:609 (9) - add clap? maybe?
01:29:038 (4) - clap at end of slider sounds weird since its on a 1/2 beat
Not bad..
Hard-
again, the stack.. oh well
00:23:696 (1,2) - clap clap?
00:34:624 (8,9,10) - have this sound like 00:27:767 (8,9,10)? (whistle-clap-clap)
00:35:267 (1) - imo, remove this whistle
01:38:695 (9) - maybe add a finish for the end of the normal hitsound section?
Pretty good~!
Ex Boy's Future-
Good, don't like the "across the screen" jumps, but good
Not bad for first map (speaking about Normal and Hard of course)
Topic Starter
i'm very grateful for your modding~Shinxyn wrote:
Add "Ex Boy" to tags~
ExBoy's diffs offset is different by 1 xD xD
I'd ask you to cut out that ad part at the end of the mp3... if you can :<
Try offset +20ish (345) (match it with Ex Boy's)
Ex Boy's Relaxing-
Fair, could use some finish hitsounds at least
01:23:467 (1) - the repeat is fairly hidden, I saw it, but wouldn't do this for easiest diff
Normal-
I'm not against lowest stack, but I'm sure there are people who are v.v
01:01:395 (6) - add clap to middle of slider? (the repeat)
01:25:609 (9) - add clap? maybe?
01:29:038 (4) - clap at end of slider sounds weird since its on a 1/2 beat
Not bad..
Hard-
again, the stack.. oh well
00:23:696 (1,2) - clap clap?
00:34:624 (8,9,10) - have this sound like 00:27:767 (8,9,10)? (whistle-clap-clap)
00:35:267 (1) - imo, remove this whistle
01:38:695 (9) - maybe add a finish for the end of the normal hitsound section?
Pretty good~!
Ex Boy's Future-
Good, don't like the "across the screen" jumps, but good
Not bad for first map (speaking about Normal and Hard of course)
thanks a lot
fixing~
edit: fixed
3 [Insane], call me again after one of them had been removed. Sorry.
MOE MOE KUDO CHAN
nothing found.
Star!
nothing found.
Star!
Offset: -512
~Ex Boy's Relaxing~
Add hitsounds.
00:09:773 (1) - silence sliderticks
00:52:202 (3) - repeat 4 times, not 5
00:55:630 (4) - repeat 3 times, not 5
01:45:987 (4) - end on left blue tick
~Normal~
00:00:130 - add note
01:05:273 - ^
01:22:416 (3) - move right 1 grid (Lv3)
~Hard~
00:00:130 - add note
01:05:273 - ^
01:05:487 - (Timing) reduce volume a bit
~moemoeCJ~
00:00:130 - add note
00:52:416 (9) - silence sliderslide & slidertick
00:55:845 (7) - ^
~Ex Boy's Future~
00:00:130 - add note
00:24:345 (4,5) - don't mute, it's confused
01:05:273 - add note
01:07:845 (6) - make it more symmetry
01:47:487 (9) - remove
+Star
~Ex Boy's Relaxing~
Add hitsounds.
00:09:773 (1) - silence sliderticks
00:52:202 (3) - repeat 4 times, not 5
00:55:630 (4) - repeat 3 times, not 5
01:45:987 (4) - end on left blue tick
~Normal~
00:00:130 - add note
01:05:273 - ^
01:22:416 (3) - move right 1 grid (Lv3)
~Hard~
00:00:130 - add note
01:05:273 - ^
01:05:487 - (Timing) reduce volume a bit
~moemoeCJ~
00:00:130 - add note
00:52:416 (9) - silence sliderslide & slidertick
00:55:845 (7) - ^
~Ex Boy's Future~
00:00:130 - add note
00:24:345 (4,5) - don't mute, it's confused
01:05:273 - add note
01:07:845 (6) - make it more symmetry
01:47:487 (9) - remove
+Star
sorry看到djpop的谱才发现歌手名写错了，是Suzuta不是Suzuda,sorry again...Find and ask BAT to mod, don't just wait for them.
You guys' maps are cool, please be cool as well.
EDIT: You guys are cool, too.
EDIT: You guys are cool, too.
deepsea wrote:
You guys' maps are cool, please be cool as well.
^^// cute hit circle ♥
Topic Starter
i'll told them to calm down.deepsea wrote:
You guys' maps are cool, please be cool as well.
我并不希望他们这么做,但是他们实在是太激动了..
viewtopic.php?f=25&t=30066
★~
Don't care about it.
Don't care about it.
楼上你头像X掉了（你在笑吧你在笑吧 :3 笑えで笑えで
a late star~
a late star~
我真的在笑 XDColin Hou wrote:
楼上你头像X掉了（你在笑吧你在笑吧 :3 笑えで笑えで
a late star~
star~
应该的
Ex Boy's Relaxing与moemoeCJ两难度高潮部分没有kiai（这两个不是自己的可能没有注意吧..）
Normal：
01:12:987 此处感觉使用circle比slider合适
01:15:130 此slider最后一下回转感觉有些多余...
另外感觉加个hitcircleoverlay会好看些
嘛...我水平很低，一点建议
star.....
Normal：
01:12:987 此处感觉使用circle比slider合适
01:15:130 此slider最后一下回转感觉有些多余...
另外感觉加个hitcircleoverlay会好看些
嘛...我水平很低，一点建议
star.....
打击音效似乎有点小……
[Ex Boy's Relaxing]
Stacking leniency is set too low. XD
01:23:487 (1) - Repeating sign is hidden by previous beat.
[Normal]
Nothing wrong.
[Hard]
Nothing wrong either. XD
[moemoeCJ]
Nothing wrong here either... XD
By the way, since I have to pop the bubble anyway, is it possible for you guys to cut the end of the mp3 (where the advertisement is)?
I'll come back to rebubble this map. :3
Stacking leniency is set too low. XD
01:23:487 (1) - Repeating sign is hidden by previous beat.
[Normal]
Nothing wrong.
[Hard]
Nothing wrong either. XD
[moemoeCJ]
Nothing wrong here either... XD
By the way, since I have to pop the bubble anyway, is it possible for you guys to cut the end of the mp3 (where the advertisement is)?
I'll come back to rebubble this map. :3
I forgot to mention that if you want to add that extra difficulty, your map will have to go through extra modding (which means I probably won't immediately return the bubble unless it is absolutely flawless). I am also not sure how well will that fit the difficulty spread unfortunately. XD XD
Just a note before I remod. XD
Just a note before I remod. XD
Topic Starter
fixed
waiting for rebubbling
edit:
it seems that offset has been changed after cutting the end of the mp3.
fixing...
edit:
fixed
waiting for rebubbling
edit:
it seems that offset has been changed after cutting the end of the mp3.
fixing...
edit:
fixed
I just realized you need to do this for all the difficulties in order for your skin to work properly...
Go to Song Setup > Storyboarding... and underneath skinning, select the preferred skin as Default.
Other than that, no more complains! I am sorry about missing this bit. XD
Go to Song Setup > Storyboarding... and underneath skinning, select the preferred skin as Default.
Other than that, no more complains! I am sorry about missing this bit. XD
Topic Starter
thanksMaxwellDemon wrote:
I just realized you need to do this for all the difficulties in order for your skin to work properly...
Go to Song Setup > Storyboarding... and underneath skinning, select the preferred skin as Default.
Other than that, no more complains! I am sorry about missing this bit. XD
I'll fix it when I return home
Sent from my iPhone
___________
edit:fixed.
Topic Starter
i won't~ > <jamesleao wrote:
dont give up , girl
THX~
Alright, spotting no more issues. Bubbled!
>.< ~
kioukiou is so moe.
EDIT:For people who are going to bitch about diff spread and star counters:Play the map first.
EDIT:For people who are going to bitch about diff spread and star counters:Play the map first.
Congratulations
good job~~Congratulations~~
Congrat ^^//