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Suzuta Miyako - one's future

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_lolipop
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010年5月26日 at 19:15:28

Artist: Suzuta Miyako
Title: one's future
Source: Kud Wafter
Tags: Key VisualArt's Noumi Kudoryafuka Ex boy Crazy Jay
BPM: 140
Filesize: 12635kb
Play Time: 01:47
Difficulties Available:
  1. Ex Boy's Future (4.95 stars, 296 notes)
  2. Ex Boy's Relaxing (2.78 stars, 117 notes)
  3. Hard (4.78 stars, 320 notes)
  4. moemoeCJ (4.9 stars, 276 notes)
  5. Normal (4.36 stars, 163 notes)
Download: Suzuta Miyako - one's future
Download: Suzuta Miyako - one's future (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 1st beatmap

difficulties:
-ex boy's relaxing done
-normal done
-hard done
-moemoeCJ done
-ex boy's future done





-May.22-
cutted the useless part of mp3 and changed the offset (redownload plz)

-May.8-
added Crazy Jay's difficulty


-May.3-
Slider Velocity fixed
added ex boy's relaxing and insane difficulties
added skin
changed the mp3 file


-May.2-
added video
Saten ruiko
萌~~賽高
XiaoWei
不错的map
star!!!!!
Topic Starter
_lolipop
I'll appreciate it if you mod this~
Nagato Yuki_old
star
cloness
stat~ :)
vb5944590
嘛…… 8-) star
Snowy Dream
【normal】
good~
【hard】
GOOD JUMP~

Star~
Niva
Modding.

[General]
Add tags?
Change the song title to One's Future (not one's future).
To get this ranked, you need an easier diff with less than 3.5 star difficulty.
In my opinion, 2 seconds audio lead-in is better than 1.5 seconds.
Uh, consider cutting the useless part of the mp3?

[Normal]
00:36:967 (1) - Spacing.
00:43:825 (6) - Try to move one grid down and one grid right. Also try to make it 1/4 shorter and add a repeat.
00:59:467 (4) - Spacing (actually it's fine, but try to move one grid upper)
01:31:825 (1) - Better if ended at 01:33:325 or 01:33:753 (because it's quite too short for normal)

[Hard]
00:12:539 (5) - Spacing.
00:37:610 (3) - Move one grid right, it's better to be placed in center
00:38:039 (4) - ^
01:07:182 (3) - Ugly positioning for a triangle.
01:09:753 (4) - Spacing.
01:22:396 (3) - Spacing.

There are other minor spacing problems... Most of the spacing problem can be solved if you set the grid level to 3.
Star!

(Edit: It's amazing seeing this map has +9 SP in only two hours...)
500ml_old
试玩。
NatsumeRin
星星送给科多.
Topic Starter
_lolipop

Nivalis wrote:

Modding.

[General]
Add tags?
Change the song title to One's Future (not one's future). FIXED
To get this ranked, you need an easier diff with less than 3.5 star difficulty. 3.5 ....= =|||
In my opinion, 2 seconds audio lead-in is better than 1.5 seconds. FIXED
Uh, consider cutting the useless part of the mp3?

[Normal]
00:36:967 (1) - Spacing.
00:43:825 (6) - Try to move one grid down and one grid right. Also try to make it 1/4 shorter and add a repeat. FIXED
00:59:467 (4) - Spacing (actually it's fine, but try to move one grid upper)
01:31:825 (1) - Better if ended at 01:33:325 or 01:33:753 (because it's quite too short for normal) FIXED

[Hard]
00:12:539 (5) - Spacing. FIXED
00:37:610 (3) - Move one grid right, it's better to be placed in center FIXED
00:38:039 (4) - ^ FIXED
01:07:182 (3) - Ugly positioning for a triangle. FIXED
01:09:753 (4) - Spacing. FIXED
01:22:396 (3) - Spacing. FIXED

There are other minor spacing problems... Most of the spacing problem can be solved if you set the grid level to 3.
Star!



thanks a lot!!

btw:the original name of this song is one's future rather than O.... F....
Topic Starter
_lolipop

NatsumeRin wrote:

星星送给科多.
铃~~帮我做个太鼓谱吧~~~
Snowy Dream
【Normal】
00:43:825

这里转的没节奏感。。换个长条。。。
Topic Starter
_lolipop

ddddd519 wrote:

【Normal】
00:43:825

这里转的没节奏感。。换个长条。。。


乃的图挂了.....
我再看看怎样能好些吧
Snowy Dream

唔?
JamesLeao
Hard:
高潮前面一点那一段声音偏小
01:47:896 (1) - no volume spinner
Normal:
00:43:825 (6) - WTH?
01:08:467 (8) - 第一拍clap
01:11:682 (7) - 第二拍clap

noumi <3 :oops:
climbb65588
能美 >.<
給 star!XD
Snowy Dream
【HARD】
01:42:860
。总感觉结尾声音偏小了 稍微加点音量吧。。更舒服一点~
Topic Starter
_lolipop

jamesleao wrote:

Hard:
高潮前面一点那一段声音偏小
01:47:896 (1) - no volume spinner
Normal:
00:43:825 (6) - WTH?
01:08:467 (8) - 第一拍clap
01:11:682 (7) - 第二拍clap

noumi <3 :oops:

ddddd519 wrote:

【HARD】
01:42:860
。总感觉结尾声音偏小了 稍微加点音量吧。。更舒服一点~
FIXED
Ex Boy
整体感觉还不错,hard的OA有些低,建议改到7或8。
timing也许是362?
NatsumeRin
Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[Normal]
0.7 Slider Velocity+ 2.0x Distance Spacing 绝对是太蛋疼了,1.4/1.0明显会好些。你不觉得现在滑slider时就让人觉得很痛苦吗……
00:28:219 (9,1) - spacing
00:35:504 (2,4) - 音量反差太大,完全就是爆音效果了……
00:37:219 (2) - 同。
01:02:933 (8) - new combo
01:05:504 (1) - 一个是音量反差太大。。。第二个是请加条绿线在此note上开始kiai,前面那条绿线只做音量调整用。
01:31:862 (1) - 结尾同样,kiai线和音量线分开。

[Hard]
用grid level3 map会不会更好些。
0.7 Slider Velocity是纯种蛋疼(即使2x部分也就是1.4),这是Hard我说……
爆音部分同Normal
00:04:647 (4) - 和(1)在对称位会给人更好的感觉
00:49:219 (2) - 意义不明。
00:53:076 (1) - end在(2)的位置我感觉更好。
00:56:504 (1) - 同
01:04:862 (8) - new combo
01:09:576 (3,4) - spacing?
01:24:362 (8) - ^

这歌在个人感觉上不适合做taiko。

Edit: Hard最好OA7吧……感觉8弄的不伦不类。
Topic Starter
_lolipop

NatsumeRin wrote:

Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[Normal]
0.7 Slider Velocity+ 2.0x Distance Spacing 绝对是太蛋疼了,1.4/1.0明显会好些。你不觉得现在滑slider时就让人觉得很痛苦吗……
00:28:219 (9,1) - spacing
00:35:504 (2,4) - 音量反差太大,完全就是爆音效果了……
00:37:219 (2) - 同。
01:02:933 (8) - new combo
01:05:504 (1) - 一个是音量反差太大。。。第二个是请加条绿线在此note上开始kiai,前面那条绿线只做音量调整用。
01:31:862 (1) - 结尾同样,kiai线和音量线分开。


normal: FIXED

[Hard]
用grid level3 map会不会更好些。 fixed
0.7 Slider Velocity是纯种蛋疼(即使2x部分也就是1.4),这是Hard我说…… fixed
爆音部分同Normal fixed
00:04:647 (4) - 和(1)在对称位会给人更好的感觉 fixed
00:49:219 (2) - 意义不明。 fixed
00:53:076 (1) - end在(2)的位置我感觉更好。 fixed
00:56:504 (1) - 同fixed
01:04:862 (8) - new combofixed
01:09:576 (3,4) - spacing?fixed
01:24:362 (8) - ^

这歌在个人感觉上不适合做taiko。 (这样啊...

Edit: Hard最好OA7吧……感觉8弄的不伦不类。 fixed
THX~

呜.....返工重做中.....当初考虑了很久才用的0.7的说= =
由于我打图hitsound音量开的很小 爆音什么的让大家的耳膜受罪了= =
Topic Starter
_lolipop
normal重制完毕
hard正在改= =

呜......hard改完了
幸亏大多用的是2X.....
否则和重新做没什么区别了.....

当初怎么就选的0.7啊........
sm000001
0.0
Sumeragi Amane
^^
rustbell
offset:324 (?)

star
Topic Starter
_lolipop

Sprosive wrote:

offset:324 (?)

star

呜= =
到底是325还是362啊.....
我刚听ex的改成362的说= =
bambool
我来支持一下。
yanggaog
.......
Nagato Yuki_old
[HARD]
01:15:966 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) 按照原来做的有点唐突 可以做成方形


01:31:109 (14.spun) →(14,15[slider]) 如图 转圈后会显得很唐突 所以这样改也可以

01:42:966 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) 这里可以开1.0x DS来排一条直线上去 之后的稍作调整

01:46:324 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) 同上 一条曲线


仅供参考..
LirsRosso
star
digiaria
路过给星,继续围观
游戏6月发售,能在发售前RANK掉这歌就太好了 =w=
KanbeKotori
;)
TerisKey
star~ 8-)
Axey
star 8-)
SamiPale
我发现迟了 :o 支持kud~

顺便给点帮助rank的建议

这音质要是衣服发现了他的蛋疼戮泡/心能力会发挥到极致的,试下这个?
.osb不要的话就删掉然后重新full sub一次吧
所有难度都设置preview time
歌手应该是写声优(Suzuda Miyako)?科多的名字放在tags上吧
如果接受了我的意见换mp3跟改名字的时候最好不要退出编辑界面...有传新图的可能...

在发售那天ranked吧 :D

Download: one's future.mp3
Topic Starter
_lolipop

samipale wrote:

我发现迟了 :o 支持kud~

顺便给点帮助rank的建议

这音质要是衣服发现了他的蛋疼戮泡/心能力会发挥到极致的,试下这个?
.osb不要的话就删掉然后重新full sub一次吧
所有难度都设置preview time
歌手应该是写声优(Suzuda Miyako)?科多的名字放在tags上吧
如果接受了我的意见换mp3跟改名字的时候最好不要退出编辑界面...有传新图的可能...

在发售那天ranked吧 :D

十分感谢....
话说这mp3是怎么来的.....(其实只是用原来的改成更高码率了...?) edit :好像不是....
声优的罗马音原来我不知道就写了科多..
再次感谢.
SamiPale

_lolipop wrote:

十分感谢....
话说这mp3是怎么来的.....(其实只是用原来的改成更高码率了...?) edit :好像不是....
声优的罗马音原来我不知道就写了科多..
再次感谢.
官网下的pv :o

edit:原本的写着是44100hz但是实际上不是。。这个我压成44100hz了,pv的音频是192kbps我也照着转192kbps,不过有点失真就是啦。。
Topic Starter
_lolipop

samipale wrote:

_lolipop wrote:

十分感谢....
话说这mp3是怎么来的.....(其实只是用原来的改成更高码率了...?) edit :好像不是....
声优的罗马音原来我不知道就写了科多..
再次感谢.
官网下的pv :o

edit:原本的写着是44100hz但是实际上不是。。这个我压成44100hz了,pv的音频是192kbps我也照着转192kbps,不过有点失真就是啦。。
啊啊....难怪 我的pv是二次转的了


网速太慢不能full sub了........

edit:上传完毕
Vikon
這版本是有足夠O2的 !
不是LIVE版!
支持!
jyjdia
:lol:
boy15174
star~
OoAiroO_old
star :)
subarasikibuta
darling的好伙伴就是我的好朋友 :)
Shinxyn
Add "Ex Boy" to tags~
ExBoy's diffs offset is different by 1 xD xD
I'd ask you to cut out that ad part at the end of the mp3... if you can :<
Try offset +20ish (345) (match it with Ex Boy's)

Ex Boy's Relaxing-
Fair, could use some finish hitsounds at least
01:23:467 (1) - the repeat is fairly hidden, I saw it, but wouldn't do this for easiest diff

Normal-
I'm not against lowest stack, but I'm sure there are people who are v.v
01:01:395 (6) - add clap to middle of slider? (the repeat)
01:25:609 (9) - add clap? maybe?
01:29:038 (4) - clap at end of slider sounds weird since its on a 1/2 beat
Not bad..

Hard-
again, the stack.. oh well
00:23:696 (1,2) - clap clap?
00:34:624 (8,9,10) - have this sound like 00:27:767 (8,9,10)? (whistle-clap-clap)
00:35:267 (1) - imo, remove this whistle
01:38:695 (9) - maybe add a finish for the end of the normal hitsound section?
Pretty good~!

Ex Boy's Future-
Good, don't like the "across the screen" jumps, but good

Not bad for first map (speaking about Normal and Hard of course)
Topic Starter
_lolipop

Shinxyn wrote:

Add "Ex Boy" to tags~
ExBoy's diffs offset is different by 1 xD xD
I'd ask you to cut out that ad part at the end of the mp3... if you can :<
Try offset +20ish (345) (match it with Ex Boy's)

Ex Boy's Relaxing-
Fair, could use some finish hitsounds at least
01:23:467 (1) - the repeat is fairly hidden, I saw it, but wouldn't do this for easiest diff

Normal-
I'm not against lowest stack, but I'm sure there are people who are v.v
01:01:395 (6) - add clap to middle of slider? (the repeat)
01:25:609 (9) - add clap? maybe?
01:29:038 (4) - clap at end of slider sounds weird since its on a 1/2 beat
Not bad..

Hard-
again, the stack.. oh well
00:23:696 (1,2) - clap clap?
00:34:624 (8,9,10) - have this sound like 00:27:767 (8,9,10)? (whistle-clap-clap)
00:35:267 (1) - imo, remove this whistle
01:38:695 (9) - maybe add a finish for the end of the normal hitsound section?
Pretty good~!

Ex Boy's Future-
Good, don't like the "across the screen" jumps, but good

Not bad for first map (speaking about Normal and Hard of course)
i'm very grateful for your modding~
thanks a lot
fixing~




edit: fixed
masuo_old
star~ =ω=ノ
lcclarke
不错不错,很萌的歌曲,视频也很好,加油吧~~~
abalee
3 [Insane], call me again after one of them had been removed. Sorry.
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