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wwww why the star rate is... ;q;
moved to pending<3 thanks for the lovely extra as always laurier-san w
added lovely mochi's hard too!
moved to pending<3 thanks for the lovely extra as always laurier-san w
added lovely mochi's hard too!
hi there
General:
Lauriextra < Insane, huh?? maybe change Laurier's diff to "Laurier's Insane" can be help (and i feel this is insane diff, not really extra)
Insane:
00:31:292 (6) - i feel something in 00:31:611 - so i suggest to shorten slider end to that timeline (it feels forced)
00:48:845 (4) - maybe you need move slider to 00:49:005 - (Strong vocal + strong downbeat there) and you can add circle in 00:48:845 - )
00:52:834 (1) - i think 3/4 pattern feels empty sound (since you mapped 00:49:643 (1,1,1,1) - this part without slider ends in blue tick i suggest to make it 1/2 slider, you can add high SV then)
01:17:090 (3,4,5,1,2) - do longstream in here looks good (or maybe add 1/4 kicksliders) to empasize song
01:26:186 (1) - nice ending, keep it pls
01:27:462 - i think you forget make spinner here (just like lauriextra)
Lauriextra:
no massive sudden SV changes? sosad best hahaha
you need to make this map harder than Insane diff plz
maybe make some huge jump pattern can be help (but dont overuse it)
or maybe you can reduce sliders in this map (change it to circles)
00:52:834 (5) - NC this, looks need to NC and make some jump with this circles 00:52:834 (5,6) -
Very good map,60% 75% of this map is sliders. okay ._.
this map too good, #instarank pls
Easy:
00:06:239 (1,2) - its okay for this? i think put some clickable object in 00:06:877 - more acceptable (00:06:877 (2) - just make this slider 1/1 beat) and since 00:07:834 (3) - slider follow some BG instrument
00:10:388 (2,1,2) - this pattern too pro lol
00:21:558 (1,1,1,1) - boring (short song needs to full duration mapped pls, except some sound who cant be mapped cause the sound has very low), maybe make this pattern can fill the break time http://puu.sh/fekBJ/2874c167ef.jpg, it's up to you
00:39:749 (2,3) - feels so sudden, maybe change to 1/1 pattern can be done
00:58:898 - fill this timeline pls, since this part is kiai time it feels awkward by not fill this. (lots of strong intrument+ vocal in there)
01:01:451 (4,1) - i think you prefer use 1/2 then use 1/1 as basic beat, 1/2 pattern in 188BPM is like kind of hard to read stuff i think (but idk who knows your think lol, this suggestion same like your other 1/2 pattern)
good luck with your map!
General:
Lauriextra < Insane, huh?? maybe change Laurier's diff to "Laurier's Insane" can be help (and i feel this is insane diff, not really extra)
Insane:
00:31:292 (6) - i feel something in 00:31:611 - so i suggest to shorten slider end to that timeline (it feels forced)
00:48:845 (4) - maybe you need move slider to 00:49:005 - (Strong vocal + strong downbeat there) and you can add circle in 00:48:845 - )
00:52:834 (1) - i think 3/4 pattern feels empty sound (since you mapped 00:49:643 (1,1,1,1) - this part without slider ends in blue tick i suggest to make it 1/2 slider, you can add high SV then)
01:17:090 (3,4,5,1,2) - do longstream in here looks good (or maybe add 1/4 kicksliders) to empasize song
01:26:186 (1) - nice ending, keep it pls
01:27:462 - i think you forget make spinner here (just like lauriextra)
Lauriextra:
no massive sudden SV changes? so
you need to make this map harder than Insane diff plz
maybe make some huge jump pattern can be help (but dont overuse it)
or maybe you can reduce sliders in this map (change it to circles)
00:52:834 (5) - NC this, looks need to NC and make some jump with this circles 00:52:834 (5,6) -
Very good map,
this map too good, #instarank pls
Easy:
00:06:239 (1,2) - its okay for this? i think put some clickable object in 00:06:877 - more acceptable (00:06:877 (2) - just make this slider 1/1 beat) and since 00:07:834 (3) - slider follow some BG instrument
00:10:388 (2,1,2) - this pattern too pro lol
00:21:558 (1,1,1,1) - boring (short song needs to full duration mapped pls, except some sound who cant be mapped cause the sound has very low), maybe make this pattern can fill the break time http://puu.sh/fekBJ/2874c167ef.jpg, it's up to you
00:39:749 (2,3) - feels so sudden, maybe change to 1/1 pattern can be done
00:58:898 - fill this timeline pls, since this part is kiai time it feels awkward by not fill this. (lots of strong intrument+ vocal in there)
01:01:451 (4,1) - i think you prefer use 1/2 then use 1/1 as basic beat, 1/2 pattern in 188BPM is like kind of hard to read stuff i think (but idk who knows your think lol, this suggestion same like your other 1/2 pattern)
good luck with your map!
[Normal]
00:45:813 remove new color
00:50:281 remove new color
00:54:430 it kind of throws me off so remove
01:05:600 add note
[Hard]
01:02:728 remove new color
01:17:728 remove new color and note and make a slider and end it at 01:18:207
01:18:366 add note
01:27:462 spinner end at 01:29:856
00:45:813 remove new color
00:50:281 remove new color
00:54:430 it kind of throws me off so remove
01:05:600 add note
[Hard]
01:02:728 remove new color
01:17:728 remove new color and note and make a slider and end it at 01:18:207
01:18:366 add note
01:27:462 spinner end at 01:29:856
hey~
[General]
support~☆
~Good Luck~
[General]
- tags suggetion:
opening
Nomizu Iori
Togashi Misuzu
Sadohara Kaori
Misato
- 00:16:451 (3) - NC
- 00:36:558 (3,1) - not good flow. I suggest circular flow
- 00:59:537 (2) - I prefer 2/1rhythm
- 01:11:664~01:12:303- I prefer to follow this vocal by slider. how about this?
- 00:11:824 (2,4) - this overlapping is not good for normal
- 00:18:047 (4) - curve a little for good flow
- 00:54:590- whistle?
- 01:05:600- add a note. feel weird
- 01:06:877- whistle
- 01:17:728 (1) - you can make more symmetrically with vertical line. rotate 1 degree anti-clockwise
- 00:32:090 (2,3,4,5,1) - you can make better flow ,imo
- 01:17:728 (2) - very difficult, I feel. I suggest to make 01:17:568 (1,2) - in a straight line
- 00:15:334 (5,6) - little jump is unnecessary, imo
- 00:54:909 (4,5) - how about stack?
- 01:15:175 (5,7) - this overlapping is hard to see...
- 00:27:143 (2,3) - ここは00:22:037 (2,3) - と同じようなvocal followが良いと思います。
- 00:49:324 (5) - 上凸の方がやりやすいと思います
- SRがinsaneより低いのはやっぱ気になるかな。custom-diffname(?)ですし
support~☆
~Good Luck~
Topic Starter
thanks for the mod, fixed all for rando and fort! updated
EDIT: added pan;s easy
EDIT: added pan;s easy
sorry my mod wasn't of use
Hi, DahplA here posting from Jloughman14's and DahplA's Modding team. This is a response in regards to this request. Please be sure to vote here on how helpful our mod was.
Lauriextra
- 01:26:186 (1) - Stack this properly
- 01:23:154 (6) - Maybe straighten it out a little?
- 01:17:728 (1) - I don't think this slider is symmetrical
Damn, a very impressive mapset. Couldn't find any 'real' problems, only just slight fixes. This should be ranked soon I hope. Good luck.
Topic Starter
^fixed my symmetry on the normal, thanks for modding ^^~
Hi
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M4M from your Modding Queue
P A N's Easy
00:21:558 (1, 1, 1, 1, 1) It repeats 5 times at the same place. Please move it to a different place. If you could hear the piano playing faintly at the background, you could use that to distinguish notes
00:24:111 (1, 1, 1) remove NC ?
00:24:111 (1, 1, 1) remove NC ?
Normal
01:05:600 slider from here to 01:05:920
01:16:451 (1) extend spinner to 01:17:090 to reduce blank
01:25:228 (1) remove it and extend (2) like this
01:16:451 (1) extend spinner to 01:17:090 to reduce blank
01:25:228 (1) remove it and extend (2) like this
Mochi's Hard
01:27:462 Add spinner at the end ?
Insane
00:59:696 (5) Note is too low. Please bring it higher
01:05:760 (4) ^
01:17:728 (2) change it to slider. If you could put some unique pattern to it. It would be better
01:05:760 (4) ^
01:17:728 (2) change it to slider. If you could put some unique pattern to it. It would be better
[General]
Blue and Purple is not suitable for combo colour, Try this, it is more similar to the backgroundCombo1: R: 255 G: 122 B: 51
Combo4: R: 229 G: 229 B: 229- Untick Widescreen Support at P A N's Easy, Normal and Laurier's Insane there is no storyboard
- 00:43:260 (2) - Avoid to place this placing above the 00:41:983 (1)'s tail. It is difficult for beginners to play sharp turn after moving down at 00:41:983 (1) and then move up to hit 00:43:260 (2), For example you can place at x:205 y:326, then fix the following notes
- 00:52:834 - I think you should not miss the sound here since it is start of another vocal, you can shorten the slider to 00:52:834 and then a note 00:53:154 (2) so that you won't miss the sound
- 00:04:962 - The gap here feel empty, also the downbeat at 00:04:962 can not be ignored, use a slider which start at 00:04:962 instead of a note at 00:05:281 (3)
- 00:15:175 - Same thing mentioned above
- 00:33:047 - Another downbeat which I think it should not be ignored, The vocal in 00:34:324 (1,2,3,4) and 00:32:090 (2) is similar, so I think you can use then pattern in 00:34:643 (2,3,4) for 00:32:090 (2)
- 00:38:154 - A downbeat here, try to add a note
- 00:38:792 (4) - Snapped wrongly
- 00:41:026 (5) - Slider ends at red tick feel too early even there is a drum sound, end at 00:41:664 instead
- 01:05:600 - Add a note here, it should not be empty since you placed object at 00:55:388 which has similar vocal
- 01:19:483 (2) - I don't suggest you to curve down this slider, it is in downward movement, but you placed 01:20:600 (3) above it and as I mentioned downbeat, 01:20:281 You can place object in here also because it is another downbeat
- 01:03:366 (1) - 01:03:686 is a strong beat, which I think it is not suitable to use a reverse here
- 00:08:792 (1,2) - Flow in here is weird because 00:08:792 (1)'s tail is in opposite direction with 00:09:271 (2) which awkward to play, may consider to change the shape to fix the flow
- 00:45:654 (4) - May consider decrease the spacing here, this part is soft compared to other parts, which is not suitable for a large jump
- 00:56:824 (3,1) - 4x is too large for a jump, try to reverse the direction, so that there will have jump between 00:57:143 (1,2) and provide a consistency jump in this combo
- 01:02:728 (2,3) - Same, decrease the distance, 5x is generally too large
Good Luck!
Hello! Sorry for late mod;; and its a very short mod too Oh well 
[Easy]
00:44:856 (1) - Maybe move it one beat earlier? (at 00:44:537) I think it sounds better so
[Normal]
00:18:047 (4) - Maybe move slider end to X:428 Y:288 ??
01:12:462 (4) - Fix blanket
[Hard]
00:34:324 (1) - Fix blanket
00:44:537 (1) - Fix it so it blankets with 00:45:494 (2)
01:19:005 (1) - Fix blanket
Sorry for late mod;; and its a very short mod too Oh well [Easy]
00:44:856 (1) - Maybe move it one beat earlier? (at 00:44:537) I think it sounds better so
[Normal]
00:18:047 (4) - Maybe move slider end to X:428 Y:288 ??
01:12:462 (4) - Fix blanket
[Hard]
00:34:324 (1) - Fix blanket
00:44:537 (1) - Fix it so it blankets with 00:45:494 (2)
01:19:005 (1) - Fix blanket
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