Hi!
M4M from my queue. Some suggestions and opinions, so don't take it really seriously.
[Jumping]
00:05:684 (2) - What about to use shape from previous slider? It would be more consistent.
00:19:393 - 00:28:161 - This part might be a bit less jumpy, if I were You, I'd make this part more calm and resign to large jumps (like 00:25:084 (3,4,5) ). Look at Laurier's diff - there are shorter distances between notes. I know it's Jumping diff, but jumps at this moment wouldn't match.
00:23:853 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Stream's shape doesn't look good and transition into slider is a bit rough.
00:48:776 (7) - Try to reverse it, may be played better.
00:54:622 (2) - Reverse for better flow?
01:08:161 (3) - You can improve shape to more circular:
01:24:622 (6) - Similar to above.
01:26:315 (1,3) - Try to make blanket with these notes?
01:29:699 (4) - Transition from this slider to next circle may be easier when you shorten slider to white tick and add note (when I was playing this map first time, I got confused and didn't know, when slider ends and how to go to next circle). But if You don't want to do it, just ignore it. I mean something like this:
(if You decide to do it, please change position of 01:30:622 (6) to obtain better flow)
01:41:392 (3) - Reversing that note would improve flow.
01:48:623 (2) - It'll look better when You remove overlap with previous slider.
01:49:084 (3) - Make this section more smooth by reversing slider.
02:02:930 (4) - Blanket with next slider would be cool. (If You want to help yourself, reverse temporarily "covered" slider. Like this:
02:13:238 (2) - I'm not a fan of these sliders... As always I suggest You something smoother:
02:17:084 (6) - Please make this slider "normally" circular. You did pattern like this really good earlier - at 02:14:315 (5,6,7).
02:44:622 (1,2,3) - What about to change a bit pattern? (but it may not flow)
02:46:546 (8) - Move it a bit down to make stream's shape better.
02:51:546 (1) - That spinner... It's really confusing with fast jumps and 1/4 triplets before, so it's really hard to get 300 ._.
03:01:084 (4) - It would be nice when You add blanket with previous slider.
03:12:161 (2,3) - I suggest You to reverse these notes and move new (2) to (236,324). It should flow better.
03:13:084 (7) - This slider looks strange... Maybe try something like this?
03:23:853 (1) - Better blanket would be great.
03:25:392 (1,2) - Try to reverse these sliders separately.
I generally don't like playing jumps, but this map have some kind of "magic"
[Insane]
01:31:084 (7,8) - These notes were confusing as stacked. Maybe unstack (8)?
03:17:238 (4) - Nazi - fix blanket with (6).
This diff is just perfect :3
[Hard]
00:47:084 (2,3) - Try to replace these shapes with something other.
01:06:007 (4) - Flow would be better, if You reverse this slider. But don't do that if You find that spacing can be too hard for Hard difficulty (2.57!)
01:13:238 (6) - Maybe try to move slider to (24,288).
01:25:084 (6) - I hope that making blanket with previous slider is possible
02:23:084 (2) - Fix blanket.
02:30:007 (1) - Shape still can be improved. Try this: (putted an assistant circle to help with making better shape)
(if necessary, stack perfectly (2) under slider tail)
02:42:315 - Put a circle here?
03:09:392 (1) - I hope that this slider won't make problems (it has negative x values).
03:13:084 (1) - You can improve this shape.
[Normal]
Just note: This difficulty have really large slider velocity (and changes). With high BPM and low AR it could be really hard to play. Maybe try to use AR6 (if it's rankable for Normal difficulty). I had really big problems with parts like 02:02:469 (3,4,1,2,3) - this pattern would be really nice but with Approach Rate 8+. In addition, rhythm of this difficulty reminds me Hard difficulty. In my opinion, You should remove some notes (mostly 1/2 circles) and re-arrange some patterns to make it more readable at AR 5-6. But mapped really good in overall :3
Absolutely love this song and map <3 Hope I'll see it ranked soon Good luck!
M4M from my queue. Some suggestions and opinions, so don't take it really seriously.
[Jumping]
00:05:684 (2) - What about to use shape from previous slider? It would be more consistent.
00:19:393 - 00:28:161 - This part might be a bit less jumpy, if I were You, I'd make this part more calm and resign to large jumps (like 00:25:084 (3,4,5) ). Look at Laurier's diff - there are shorter distances between notes. I know it's Jumping diff, but jumps at this moment wouldn't match.
00:23:853 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Stream's shape doesn't look good and transition into slider is a bit rough.
00:48:776 (7) - Try to reverse it, may be played better.
00:54:622 (2) - Reverse for better flow?
01:08:161 (3) - You can improve shape to more circular:
01:24:622 (6) - Similar to above.
01:26:315 (1,3) - Try to make blanket with these notes?
01:29:699 (4) - Transition from this slider to next circle may be easier when you shorten slider to white tick and add note (when I was playing this map first time, I got confused and didn't know, when slider ends and how to go to next circle). But if You don't want to do it, just ignore it. I mean something like this:
(if You decide to do it, please change position of 01:30:622 (6) to obtain better flow)
01:41:392 (3) - Reversing that note would improve flow.
01:48:623 (2) - It'll look better when You remove overlap with previous slider.
01:49:084 (3) - Make this section more smooth by reversing slider.
02:02:930 (4) - Blanket with next slider would be cool. (If You want to help yourself, reverse temporarily "covered" slider. Like this:
02:13:238 (2) - I'm not a fan of these sliders... As always I suggest You something smoother:
02:17:084 (6) - Please make this slider "normally" circular. You did pattern like this really good earlier - at 02:14:315 (5,6,7).
02:44:622 (1,2,3) - What about to change a bit pattern? (but it may not flow)
02:46:546 (8) - Move it a bit down to make stream's shape better.
02:51:546 (1) - That spinner... It's really confusing with fast jumps and 1/4 triplets before, so it's really hard to get 300 ._.
03:01:084 (4) - It would be nice when You add blanket with previous slider.
03:12:161 (2,3) - I suggest You to reverse these notes and move new (2) to (236,324). It should flow better.
03:13:084 (7) - This slider looks strange... Maybe try something like this?
03:23:853 (1) - Better blanket would be great.
03:25:392 (1,2) - Try to reverse these sliders separately.
I generally don't like playing jumps, but this map have some kind of "magic"
[Insane]
01:31:084 (7,8) - These notes were confusing as stacked. Maybe unstack (8)?
03:17:238 (4) - Nazi - fix blanket with (6).
This diff is just perfect :3
[Hard]
00:47:084 (2,3) - Try to replace these shapes with something other.
01:06:007 (4) - Flow would be better, if You reverse this slider. But don't do that if You find that spacing can be too hard for Hard difficulty (2.57!)
01:13:238 (6) - Maybe try to move slider to (24,288).
01:25:084 (6) - I hope that making blanket with previous slider is possible
02:23:084 (2) - Fix blanket.
02:30:007 (1) - Shape still can be improved. Try this: (putted an assistant circle to help with making better shape)
(if necessary, stack perfectly (2) under slider tail)
02:42:315 - Put a circle here?
03:09:392 (1) - I hope that this slider won't make problems (it has negative x values).
03:13:084 (1) - You can improve this shape.
[Normal]
Just note: This difficulty have really large slider velocity (and changes). With high BPM and low AR it could be really hard to play. Maybe try to use AR6 (if it's rankable for Normal difficulty). I had really big problems with parts like 02:02:469 (3,4,1,2,3) - this pattern would be really nice but with Approach Rate 8+. In addition, rhythm of this difficulty reminds me Hard difficulty. In my opinion, You should remove some notes (mostly 1/2 circles) and re-arrange some patterns to make it more readable at AR 5-6. But mapped really good in overall :3
Absolutely love this song and map <3 Hope I'll see it ranked soon Good luck!