Offset: +1 from current (lol)

[Easy]
01:19:887 (1,2) - maybe make it so that it crosses each other at each others' centers.

[Normal]
This could use a large hitsound working. Seriously.
00:30:634 (1) - for some odd reason the previous 2 covered the slider, I dunno why.
00:32:201 (4) - symmetry

[Hard]
This could use a large hitsound working. Seriously.
Kind of a lot of sliders which would look better if symmetrical. Please run through some of these.
00:35:335 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - bllllllllll spacing
00:53:469 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:01:977 (3) - New Combo?
01:25:261 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - For some reason this suddenly became too confusing.

[blade]
00:36:231 (4) - move 1/4 later, and preferably move it away from the slider's too.
00:42:052 (9) - symmetry
00:58:395 (1) - shorten by 1/4
01:16:977 (1) - remove new combo

Thank you MoonFragrance and Zekira for your help.

General:

-- White + kiai =.= (Why is this so common?)

YGOkid8's Easy:

-- Change the preview time so its the same as normal and hard.

00:16:754 (2) - Right one square.
00:21:232 (1) - Down one square.
00:21:679 (2) - ^
00:29:291 (3) - Right one square.

All nazi issues, good job with this.

Normal +:

-- I think it's fine if you call this "Normal".
-- The hitsounds need a little work, generally too many soft claps (I think it was every white tick?).

00:06:456 (5) - New combo.
00:13:172 (1) - Remove new combo. Maybe move this under the slider?
00:21:232 (1) - Move down one square.
00:22:351 (4) - Whistle the end definitely XD
00:24:142 (1,2) - Move right one square.
00:24:142 (1) - Remove clap.
00:42:053 (4) - New combo?
01:01:306 -- From here on no claps?

I could post a lot of hitsound suggestions if it would be of help to you but try and experiment and find a consistent pattern, this has improved a lot from the last time I saw it, great job ^^

Hard:

00:05:560 (4) - End on white tick (or the red).
00:13:172 (1,2) - Maybe better centered and stacked, I found this jump a little odd.
00:19:888 (3) - Put it in the same place as 00:18:993 (1) - ?
00:39:926 (2) - Remove clap.

Again hitsounds need some work, too many soft claps.

blade3285's Hard:

-- With the overlaps in this difficulty the white + kiai does become a problem.
-- Again some of these soft claps dont sound too good.
-- Change the preview time so its the same as normal and hard.

00:06:903 (1) - Minor spacing error.
00:07:351 (2) - ^
00:08:023 (4) - Slightly confusing.
00:14:067 (5) - Minor spacing error.
00:28:396 (6) - ^
00:31:082 (3) - ^
00:31:978 (5) - ^
00:36:344 (4) - Spacing error.
00:40:261 (3) - Center between 1 and 2. [Diagonally]
00:56:605 (4) - Spacing...
00:58:396 (1) - End on the white tick or red.

-- Yeah, watch out for the spacing, the hitsounds could do with a little work.

Overall: Great job, I think you could move this to pending now and get some more mods

~ Star.

Thanks for your help Shulin.
Suggestions for hitsounds would be most appreciated.

Moved to pending.

gfbrd, forgot to tell you (just in case)

Should you feel any need to edit my diff. in any way (eg. a Modder's suggestion), feel free to do so

Also for my diff, I thought I made the last spinner quieter, but... doesn't show that. So, lower the volume (the timing section's already there) to 2. Thanks

PS. If you didn't figure out, the volume level is on a scale of 0 to 10.

Oh okay I got it. ^^'
I'll be sure to tell you if I want you to edit your difficulty.
I have already made some changes to your difficulty, if you didn't like the way I changed it feel free to let me know and you can tell me to change it the way you like it or you can change it yourself. ^^

Also I lowered the volume thanks for letting me know.

Hi~

[Hard]

01:16:978 (4) - Spacing
01:19:888 (3) - ^

[blade3285's Hard]

00:58:396 (1) - uhh, I don't really like where this spinner ends, end it either in 00:59:993, or in 01:01:116 ^^


Have a star! *

Thanks for you help sesito71. ^^

Well done~

[Easy]
Fine~

[Normal]
All good~Notes fit the song well~
Theres too much clap and too loud,need a hitsound pattern I think.

[Hard]
Still need a hitsound pattern,it does well in kiai time,but rest of those...heres my suggestion~
00:05:560 (4) - Clap?
00:17:873 (3) - Remove clap?
00:18:097 (4) - Clap?
00:19:217 (2) - Clap at first repeat?
00:19:888 (3) - Clap?
00:21:679 (4) - Remove clap at first repeat?
00:34:440 (6) - Clap at first repeat?
00:35:560 (3) - Remove clap at first repeat?
00:38:247 (5) - ^
00:38:918 (6) - Remove clap?
00:39:926 (2) - Clap?
00:40:933 (4) - Remove clap at first repeat?
00:41:828 (6) - Clap?
00:43:172 (10) - Remove clap at first repeat?
00:46:530 (11) - ^
00:53:694 (3) - Clap at first repeat?
That's all~
00:57:500 (2,3) - This jump makes me lol~

[blade3285]
Hitsound a little bit loud to me,turn down?
Remove some finish,they doesn't fit...
00:15:411 (6) - Seems finish+clap doesn't work well here...
00:58:396 (1) - End here 00:59:963?

STAR~

LK STRICT MODDING~

bpm/offest ok

easy
[00:07:35] Slider: remove whistle, First: no, Last: Whistle
[00:21:67] ^
[00:57:78] add clap
[01:07:35] i suggest you use a "flip horizontally" on this slider

normal
[00:15:63] spinner stop at[00:16:30] or [00:16:75]
[00:56:15] slider: first:clap ,last:Whistler
[00:58:17] spinner stop at [00:59:96]
[01;08:91] move 1 grid left
[01:13:62] slider: forst:Whistler

hard
many spacing mistakes in this diff,i do my best to find but i think some were lost XD
I hope you check again
[00:07:12] spacing
[00:10:70] ^
[00:15:41] unless move 1 grid up
[00:15:63] spinner stop at[00:16:30] and set clap
[00:16:75] add combo anf cllap
[00:16:97] clap at slider's beginning
[00:18:54] clap here
[00:25:26] move 3 grids left
[00:36:23] move 1 grid down
[00:36:45] move 1 grid down and 1 grid left
[00:36:90] move 1 grid left
[00;39:92] clap?
[00:42:27] move 1 grid down
[00:57:50] lol why?
[01;24:36] (3,1) fix them

blade3285's Hard
this diff's hitsound very Special..so i didnt mod very well
[00:09:81] (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) add some hit sound?
[00:46:30] slider: first:clap,last:finish
[00:50:78] finish?
[01:00:07] stop at [00:59;96]

star

Thank you kino77 and LKs for you help. ^^

YGOkid8's Easy
low the overall diff a bit
slider velocity, to fast for easy, imo (is the same used in normal and hard >.< )

Normal
fine

Hard
it seems that you didnt use distance snap, plz space combos evenly, and try using distance snap, and use new como for jumps
wrong spaced combos exmaples:
00:06:232 (1,2,3,4,5) - in time lime all have the same distance between them, but in the map/chart dont @.@
00:09:814 (1,2,3,4,5) - same here
00:18:993 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:30:635 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
so, you must doble check spacing ^^
00:58:172 (1) - move half beat later (shorten), and add note here 00:58:172

blade3285's Hard
00:05:112 (3,4) - spacing
00:15:187 (5,6) - spacing
00:17:650 (3,4,5) - move half beat later?
00:39:590 (1,2,3) - separate 3 from 2, make the space between the same combo the same
00:58:396 (1) - end it at 00:58:396
doble check spacing with AIMod plz

Star

Thank you Lissette for your help. ^^

Hello!

[YGOkid8's Easy]
00:14:515 (2) - Move 4 grid left?
00:16:754 (2) - Move 1 grid left?
00:49:441 (3) - Move 2 grid right?

[Normal]
00:25:709 (5) - Move 4 grid left?
01:18:097 (7) - Move 1 grid right?
01:27:053 (9) - Move 1 grid down?

[Hard]
00:15:635 (1) - Unrankable spinner LOL (AutoPlay must have a bonus score at least 2000, the AutoPlay have a bonus score 1000)
00:48:993 (7) - Make symetric?
01:05:560 (4) - ^

[blade3285's Hard]
00:27:724 (5) - Make symetric?

Not bad
STAR

Thank you Leorda for your help. ^^

Feel free to change whatever Leorda said. But with Lissette:

Lissette wrote:

YGOkid8's Easy
low the overall diff a bit
slider velocity, to fast for easy, imo (is the same used in normal and hard >.< )

yes, it is a little fast for easy. But, I think the map is already easy enough. The way I work with an Easy map: if the beats are usually far apart, I have a slightly faster Slider Velocity, but not too fast. If they're close-ish, i slower velocity.

But, if it's really bothering people, then I'll change it, of course

Hello

[Easy]

• 00:47:650 (1) None
  00:53:023 (3) Clap

[Normal]

• (I think Clap is too spammed)
  00:25:262 (4) None
  00:34:217 (3) Spacing

[Hard]

• 00:58:172 (1) Finish

[Blade]

• 00:28:620 (7) Whistle

Star

Fixed. Thanks for your help. ^^

YGOkid's Easy
00:54:814 (1,2,3) - quite unintuitive spacing... find a better one!
00:57:500 (4) - new combo?
01:23:470 (1,4) - move them 3 squares up and a square left

Normal
[General] ... a 4,5 Star Rating Normal mode? You had better to make this mode more simple (maybe by removing some beats or by lowering the Overall Difficulty) in order to call it as a Normal mode...
Except for this point, it's fine!

Hard
00:32:202 (5,1) - ...this jump is exagerate even for an Hard mode...
00:37:575 (2,3) - One square down!

blade3285's Hard
00:39:590 (1,2,3) - tricky spacing can make this section quite ugly to plat... link these beats with a slider with a repeat!
01:18:993 (3) - new combo
01:24:366 (3) - ^

An honest, well-made creation which needs some hitsounds cures on Normal and Hard modes... (maybe try to add some finish hitsounds!)
The rest was good, so have your star!

Thank you for your help Lokamp. ^^

Hi.

I don't like how you arranged the hitsounds. If you want, I can mod sounds and give you some suggestions.

[YGOkid8's Easy]

Good.


[Normal]

Good!


[Hard]

Looks good, but i see the spacing throughtout the map is small, but suddenly some unexpected jumps appear like these ones: 00:39:590 (1,2,3) Isn't it too hard for [Hard] ?


[blade3285's Hard]

Looks more like [Insane] D:
Well, didn't see any mistakes.

Star!

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

[blade's hard]
00:08:023 (4) - Spread this slider out a bit?

I'd like to see more creative hitsounds...there are too many claps being used. Try whistles?

^ I made the slider like that on purpose.

Thanks for the suggestion Zerostarry.
I will try to fix up the hitsounds a bit. ^^

Overall :
PreviewTime: 4664[blade3285's Hard]
PreviewTime: 1093[Hard]
PreviewTime: 1093[Normal]
PreviewTime: 4664[YGOkid8's Easy]
as you see,the Pre-time is different from some diffs
Set the same numerical value in all diffs

[YGOkid8's Easy]
make the slidertick decrease to 1.0
eg:00:11:829 (1) - you'll sound "di di di di di di"
it doesnt sound good.

others are fine,but i dont like the hitsound of this map...
hmmm...there are too many clap in your maps,try using whistle & finish or finding other custom hitsound : )
Star.

Thank you for your help gdeath. ^^

easy:
00:39:590 (3) - take clap off this and make it finish?
00:49:441 (3) - I dont like clap on this...maybe make the clap on the end of the slider
00:53:023 (3) - add finish to start of this slider instead?

normal:
not going to mod hitsounds much...but all the claps don't sound great
00:06:456 (1) - I would make this a whistle
00:11:381 (1,2) - align?
00:25:709 (5) - move up to align with 3
00:34:217 (3) - move up to align with 1
01:27:724 (1) - sounds kinda odd with finish

hard:
so many clapsss
00:26:157 (8) - add note?
00:42:948 (9,10) - align?
01:27:724 (1) - maybe remove finish

blade's hard:
00:08:023 (4) - don't really like finish at the end of this..
00:49:217 (8) - I would just start spinner here
00:54:814 (1,2,3,4) - don't have too many finishes together
01:08:918 (3,4) - move these right to stack above the 1 and 2 from before? (and move notes after to align)
01:23:470 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3) - why so many finishes..

Overall I think hitsounds are overused in all the diff's but oh well
*star*

Thank you James2250 for your help. ^^

his was a rlly decent map. Very Awesome!thx for this,nice vid btw

Thanks KingSRS2 ^^

This is a very good map! I couldn't really find anything that really stood out or cried out "fix me"

Here's a higher quality mp3 for you:
http://up.ppy.sh/files/yume_no_manual_t ... uality.mp3

Hope it helps!

Oh, and *star*

Thank you jmaeshawn for the mp3 ^^
I will start fixing it tomrrow or on the weekends when I have time.

This is great!

nice work on all difficulties

Thank you Chacha17 and xxheroxx. ^^

xxheroxx: Great suggestions.
However, I think they are fine but if theres more people that want those to be changed, I will change it.
Fixed. Thanks.

[Combo Colors]

Aqua? I think, I don't like it :< doesn't fit the background at all

[YGOkid8's Easy]

00:11:380 (3) - Hidden notes are bad on a easy :< they can be confusing for new players.

[Hard]

00:39:926 (2) - 10 squares up (grid level 3) < good suggestion from xxheroxx, plays nicer:3

01:21:903 (4) - a tiny bit off-screen

[blade3285's Hard]

Awesome diff!!

Consider upping OD by 1 :3 plays nicer

minor nazi

00:46:306 (6)

Thank you for your help Teara. ^^

[Easy]
I think you should either lower the slider tick rate to 1 or lower the HP drain with 1 tick. It's because, if a beginner plays this map, he may die by just missing one longer slider.
00:58:396 (1) - I'd start this spinner at 00:58:172, and end it where it ends now. Not only does this fit better with the lyrics, it also gives the newbies a slightly bigger chance of finishing the spinner.

[Normal]
This diff, has less slider tick rate than Easy. Kinda strange. Maybe make slidertickrate 2?
01:27:724 (1) - Ends in silence on Easy, ends in sound here. Intended?

[Hard]
Again, lower slidertick than Easy?
01:00:411 (1,2,3) - Sounds better if they have finishes instead!

[Blade's Hard]
Slidertick etc.


Good map, have a star

Thank you Real1 for your help. ^^

[Ygokid]
It's fine.


[Normal]

00:08:247 (1) - I don't like the way how this spinner work. The come back time after it is too short. It works good in [Hard], but it's a bit innatural for a Normal difficulty. I prefer deleting it or expanding, but do what you want, it's only a suggestion.
00:15:635 (1) - ^
01:05:336 (3,4) - Spacing.


[Hard]

Decrease HP Drain a bit? (1 tick?).

00:26:605 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Awwr. This spacing change is pretty odd. There should be a simple reason like a louder/faster part of the song for changing spacing like this (example of good use of spacing change: 01:00:411 (1,2,3). Please space it in the regular Distance Spacing.
00:33:321 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
[00:40:933] - Unreasonable volume change. Make it normal volume.
00:43:844 (1,2,3,4,5) - The same spacing thing like before.
01:01:306 (1,2) - Inconsistent spacing.
00:57:500 (2) - Hidden slider.


[blade3285]

00:35:112 (1) - Stack on vanishing (3).


Nice one. +star

[YGOkid8's Easy]

Nothing of wrong.

8,5/10

[Normal]

00:08:247 (1) - 00:09:814 (1) Recovery time is too short. Remove it and add three hitcircles on white ticks?
00:13:172 (5) Stack these perfectly with the previous slider's end
00:15:635 (1) 1/4 shorter
00:57:724 (3) Add a repeat and move the next spinner of 1/4 (make it shorter of another 1/4)

8,5/10

[Hard]

00:32:202 (5) stack this with the previous (2)
00:33:993 (4,5,6) Bad position. Make a pentagon like in the picture?



00:36:903 (1) Inconsistent spacing considering the place of 00:36:232 (3,4,5)
Nice,

9/10

[blade3285's Hard]

01:27:053 (1) 1/4 shorter, it fits better in my opinion

9/10

Thank you fartownik and Armin for your help. ^^

Good job mapping this.

Only one thing and I'll pubble

Timing sections that change volume must be put 1/4 back before the note, and on [Hard] there are a lot of those.

Fix and I'll pubble

Edit: Pubbled

okay I made the changes, ready for a pubble.

Thank you for your help NoHItter. ^^

I think that hitsound is a bit loud.
Can you lower a bit?
Just a suggestion :3

Okay I lowered it.
Hope it is better now thanks for suggestion. ^^

All clear up. Bubbled.

almost a month bubbled

Yea it is taking a long time unfortunately. =(
It is just a bit hard to get some BATs to look at it right now, I am still trying though.
Hopefully I can find one soon and get it ranked already. =)

If you want, you can also help me try to find some BATs to take a look at it.

[Easy]
01:26:157 (4) - Balance with (1)

[Hard]
01:26:829 (7,8)-> Nice try but this is totally wrong orz.

[blade3285]
Change diff name to "Insane" instead of "Hard"

Fix and reconnect me <(_ _)>

Okay I changed it thanks for your help. ^^

@_@

bump

What happened to the bubble? o.o?

YGOkid8's-
Fine

Normal-
Hmm... most of the formations could look better, but nothing critical...

Hard-
Looks better than Normal, sounds quite nice too

blade3285's-
Seems more of an Insane (overall diff and drain wise), but miny already mentioned, and this was left unchanged
Hitsounds are quite nice

So... I guess this is just a bubble repair~

Never edit the thread title or update (even bump) the thread or else the bubble will be gone

@Shinxyn: Thanks for the bubble repair, now I just need to get it ranked haha.

@NoHItter, and YGOkid8: Yea I kinda messed up the bubble by updating the map. >_<
Now I know I wasn't suppose to do that. hahaha

Ranked.

Hoho, also my first rank. o/

EDIT: +10 offset >.>; totally not expected to mess up my first rank

n'awww, Gens~

this song very good >.<