safe_osu wrote:

มาแล้วครับ แจกดาวโลดครับ STAR!! -.-

[overall]
it seem ok, I enjoy it! but too few finish sound, add some finish sound please

[cute]
01:38:500 should follow vocal -- move to 01:38:318 and change to slider (set end at 01:38:682)
02:16:681 should follow vocal -- (6) change to 4 times / (7) move to 02:17:590 / (8) move to 02:17:954 and change end to 02:18:863
02:19:227 add hit circle
02:19:590 change to 4 times
03:05:772 should follow vocal -- same as above
03:15:226 should follow vocal -- same as above

[Tsundere~]
01:03:228 should follow beat -- (1) change end to 01:03:409 / (2) chage end to 01:03:773 no, i don't wanna change it
02:18:863 should follow beat -- same as above no either
02:22:500 add new combo
02:23:772 delete new combo
02:24:681 add new combo
02:25:409 delete new combo
02:26:681 add new combo
03:08:317 should follow beat -- same as above no either

Garven wrote:

[General]
I personally dislike sliders with a tiny graphic for me to follow with my cursor. The non-bright follow circle is also difficult to follow for me. Is that a personal dislike? I better get another complain about that =w=

[Cute]
02:37:227 -> 02:59:590 This is a rather long break. Consider mapping some of it starting from 02:45:772 maybe? It is good for easier diff to have a long brake =w=.

[Tsundere~]
I died in the first 10 seconds of play.That's the taste of Tsundere XD Appears/sounds fine to me though.thanks

I guess all I have are personal gripes rather than mods. Looks great, though! Star~ thanks

YGOkid8 wrote:

General:

- Remove "anime" from tags. It'll be set as the genre. roger
- Though it'll get removed anyway, just FYI, there are two spaces between "ova" and "anime" in Tsundere~, so be wary of that. roger
- Delete .osb and Full Submit Deleted and full submitted

Cute:

Combo Mod~
00:20:683 (9) - New Combo here instead of 00:21:773 (1)
00:33:410 (2) - New Combo here instead of 00:32:864 (1)
01:45:045 (2) - New Combo here instead of 01:44:500 (1)
02:19:590 (10) - New Combo here instead of 02:20:681 (1)
02:28:318 (3) - New Combo here instead of 02:27:227 (1)
03:09:045 (6) - New Combo here instead of 03:10:499 (1)

02:16:681 (6) - New Combo.
02:25:409 (5) - ^
03:02:863 (5) - ^
03:12:317 (4) - ^
03:17:772 (6) - ^
03:20:317 (10) - ^

^ fixed

Normal Mod~
02:37:045 ~ 02:59:590 - This is a pretty long break... it is the solo guitar part, nothing to map anyway and i don't want the score beyond 10M

Tsundere~

If orioncomet and DJPop are going to make an Insane(? Must be if estimate 5 stars), I don't really see the point of this diff. No need 3 Insanes 0.0. IMO, you should just get rid of this diff, and make an Easy diff.

If this was Hard, or if orioncomet/DJPop were going to make Hard, it'll be okay, but... eh. i told them to make insane XD

I mod anyway, in case you disagree >.< actually, this is the difficulty between hard and insane =w=

Combo Mod~
00:47:955 (4) - New Combo, because beginning of jump damn, u right XD

Normal Mod~
02:37:045 ~ 02:59:590 - This is a pretty long break... for the easiest difficulty, long brake will help them recover their energy XD

YGOkid8 wrote:

between Hard and Insane is...
what, still sounds and looks like an Insane to me
But yea, you need an Easy. A Normal and 3 Insanish beatmaps will be looked at Approved, so...

• • Delete these files: "button-left.png", "button-middle.png" and "button-right.png"
  • Offset: 2870 (resnap all notes)

xxheroxx wrote:

[Mod Infos]

Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.

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[General]

• • Delete these files: "button-left.png", "button-middle.png" and "button-right.png"
  • Offset: 2870 (resnap all notes)

LoweH wrote:

Hi

Flat-chested
00:54:869 (4) - Add new timing here without audio or lower audio (?)

nicemap Starrr**

termerys wrote:

LoweH wrote:

Hi

Flat-chested
00:54:869 (4) - Add new timing here without audio or lower audio (?)

nicemap Starrr**

umm..., there's no timing point there, if there's mistake in time, it have another timing point at 00:55:233 which is have kiai.

Leorda wrote:

[DJPop's Cool]
02:34:504 (B) - The break are too long, map something else?
Not fit.
03:36:595 (1) - How about, delete the object at 03:36:504 (5), and then move this spinner to 03:36:504 and extend to 03:38:140?
X
03:39:504 (1) - How about, delete the object at 03:39:413 (4), and then move this spinner to 03:39:413 and extend to 03:40:867?
X

Leorda wrote:

SWASDI!

[Skin]
I don't like when the spinner-metre is cut-off at right-side, the spinner-circle is cut-off the star picture in lower-left, and sliderscorepoint is cut-off. You should fix this umm... i think that the spinner-metre is not that annoyying and for another thing, and for other, let me have time to figure it out.

[Flat-chested] all fixed
00:20:324 (6) - Make symetric and new combo here?
00:23:233 (1) - I think whistle here is not fit at all, use finish instead?
00:31:233 (4) - Add a finish at the end of slider?
00:33:415 (1) - Add a finish?
00:34:869 (1) - ^
00:55:233 (1) - Add a finish at the start of slider?
00:58:142 (1) - ^
01:01:051 (1) - Add a finish?
01:06:869 (2) - New combo here?
01:30:141 (1) - Add a finish?
01:35:960 (7) - New combo here?
01:38:869 (1) - I think whistle here is not fit at all, use finish instead?
01:47:596 (12) - New combo, since it's long for easy diff
01:50:505 (1) - Add a finish?
01:59:232 (8) - New combo, since it's long for easy diff
02:22:505 (2) - New combo?

[Cute] all done
01:30:141 (1) - Add a finish?
02:15:050 (4) - Ugly slider! Make it curve!
02:17:959 (3) - ^ this one i made it a right angle instead.
02:37:413 (B) - The break are too long, map something else? No thanks
03:04:504 (5) - Ugly slider! Make it curve!
03:13:231 (3) - ^

[DJPop's Cool] i'll let him decide
02:34:504 (B) - The break are too long, map something else?
03:36:595 (1) - How about, delete the object at 03:36:504 (5), and then move this spinner to 03:36:504 and extend to 03:38:140?
03:39:504 (1) - How about, delete the object at 03:39:413 (4), and then move this spinner to 03:39:413 and extend to 03:40:867?

[Tsundere] done
00:12:142 (x) - Add note? let them have a little brake for their hand after a long continuous hit circle
01:01:051 (6) - New combo?
01:09:596 (4) - ^
02:11:777 (1) - Move the new combo to 02:11:232 (5)?

Not bad
STAR Kudosu!

VanMoNky wrote:

[DJPop's Cool]
-- Add kiai times like other diffs or make a single kiai time from 03:00:322 to 03:23:595.
Added.
00:36:324 (3,4) - Oh, bad distance snap. Solve this by rotate the (3) vertically. Or something else.
Fixed.
03:11:504 (11,12) - They are stacked up. It's a bad idea.
Done by mistake = ="
Fixed.

VanMoNky wrote:

As your request. Sorry for the delay.

Read this first for the icon explanation.
- [?] Asking for a second thought.
- [!] Fatal error. You have to fix this for sure.
- [No icon] Only a suggestion.

[General]
1. Add "DJPop" in the tags box. added
2. The maximum comboburst is 500px width and 767px height. Yours are too big. [!] then, i use the original one
3. The sliderfollowcircle rotates unsmoothly. don't want to fix it because i like this one
4. Remove the star.png image. It's useless. deleted

[Flat-chested] Fixed all
00:07:960 (4) - Distance error.
00:08:688 - Add a note here then add finish.
00:31:233 (4) - Add finish at the end.
00:33:415 (1) - Add finish.
00:34:869 (1) - ^
00:48:324 (1) - Its placement is too hard for easy diff compared with the time between the end of spinner and the beginning of slider. Move it closer to the center.
00:52:324 (1) - ^
00:55:233 (1) - Add finish at the beginning.
01:03:960 (7) - Add new combo, then..
01:05:414 (1,2) - Swap new combo.
01:06:869 (2) - Add finish at the beginning.
01:30:141 (1) - Add finish.
01:35:960 (7,8) - Add finish at the beginning.
01:45:414 (7) - Add new combo.
01:47:596 (12) - Add new combo at the beginning and the end.
01:58:505 (6) - Add new combo.
02:10:868 (1) - Add finish at the beginning.
02:19:595 (7) - Add new combo, then..
02:21:050 (1,2) - Swap new combo.
02:34:141 (1) - Add finish.
02:37:050 - This green timing is the last timing you're using. Remove the rest.

[Cute] Added
-- Add some more hitsounds like finishes or claps.

[DJPop's Cool] He fixed it.
-- Add kiai times like other diffs or make a single kiai time from 03:00:322 to 03:23:595.
00:36:324 (3,4) - Oh, bad distance snap. Solve this by rotate the (3) vertically. Or something else.
03:11:504 (11,12) - They are stacked up. It's a bad idea.

[Tsundere~]
01:03:233 (1,2) - Extend them one 1/4 tick. if it is 1/4, it is too long for a word
02:18:868 (1,2) - ^ ^
03:00:322 (4) - Add new combo. OK
03:08:322 (1,2) - Extend them one 1/4 tick. like the first one

Star.

Leorda wrote:

SWASDI!

[Skin]
I don't like when the spinner-metre is cut-off at right-side Fixed, the spinner-circle is cut-off the star picture in lower-left Fixed, and sliderscorepoint is cut-off i use the original one instead then. You should fix this

orioncomet wrote:

[General]
- kill .osb file
- Your Easy and Normal aren't easy or normal enough for me.
- some break time on some diffs is a bit long.
- Red combocolour really fit with the BG and make those notes really hard to see, fix it.
- offset 2866 - Resnap all note.

[Flat-chested]
- normal hitsound are too loud.
00:52:324 (1) - delete.

[Cute]
- normal hitsound are too loud.
00:23:233 (1) - replace sound whistle with finish.
01:38:869 (1) - ^
03:23:595 (1) - add sound finish.

[DJPop's Cool]
Cool.

[Tsundere~]
- normal hitsound are too loud.
seem fine.

roxkyuubiforever wrote:

Flat-chested - I wish I could do great Easys like this one... Fixed
00:13:680(timing) - This timing section is useless for this diff, so please, delet it~
00:24:683(timing) - Useless~
00:46:501(Spinner,1) - This trasition may be too hard for a few newbies...
00:49:415(spinner) - Sounds better ending at 00:52:320. I and ploy want it to give more time for newbies
01:05:414(4) - Maybe it's a stupid idea but maybe clap on the last 3 hits of this slider? >_> no thanks
01:39:955(timing) - Useless~
01:49:778(1) - imo I don't really think that this New Combo should be used...
01:52:228(timing) - Useless~
01:58:505(1) - No New Combo here, please~
02:21:050(1) - First: No New Combo here and New combo on the next note. Second: Maybe the same stupid idea from 01:05:414? >_> ok but no sound thanks
02:27:595(5) - Ugh, Ugly >_<

Cute - Nice Slider art and gameplay. I just miss a little bit the clap hit sounds... Fixed
00:24:683(timing) - Useless~
00:37:774(timing) - Hum... I don't know why a timing section with 1/2 here, since there is no use for it ._.
01:05:960(3) - Starting here makes it fell weard.... Maybe start it at 01:06:138(white tick), taking off one of the repetitions?
01:37:414(1) - Take off the last repetiion please. It's not sounding pretty well
01:39:955(timing) - Useless~
01:47:959(1) - Wrong spacing
01:52:228(timing) - Useless~
01:53:501(timing) - Hum.. Another 1/2 that I don't know why is here... me too XD
02:54:137(timing) - Useless~
02:59:591(timing) - Move it at least 1/2 backward on the timeline. A volume timing section cannot be on the top of a hitcircle

DJPop's Nice spacing >w<
Flawless victory~ F L A W L E S S ! ! !

Tsundere~ - Niiice Fun and cool hit sounds~
00:02:684(1,2) - It's not really wrong but a few may complain... 2 notes before the timing sections starts~ it match with the rhythm and i don't want to bring the timing start point on non-rhythm sound

Cool map! Star~~~

orioncomet wrote:

Change offset on DJPop's Cool to 2866 and Resnap all note

Shulin wrote:

General:

-- Keep audio volume at 80% on all diffs.
-- The BPM is set to 165.002 make it 165.00
-- Offset 2,879 is much better for me.

Flat-chested:

01:15:592 (2) - Add claps to the last 3 returns.
01:49:774 (2) - Spacing (nazi).
02:28:682 (1,2) - Add claps to last 3 returns following previous pattern.

Cute:

00:52:320 (1,2,3,4) - Too much clap, remove clap from start or end of slider maybe? Or do like 02:07:955 (1,2,3,4) -

DJPop's Cool:

Fine.

Tsundere ~:

-- Why soft sounds? Others use normal I think this should to.

00:23:047 (6) - End on red tick. which red tick?
01:03:229 (1,2) - Better to end on red tick imo. Or add an extra return.
01:38:683 (5) - End on red tick. which red tick?
02:18:864 (1,2) - End on red tick or add a return, has more rhythm imo.
02:59:773 (1,2,3,1) - Jump really big compared to others, consider reducing it.
03:08:318 (1,2) - Red tick, or add return etc?
03:10:500 (1) - Spacing? i want it to be jump
03:33:045 (5) - Move from under slider
03:35:227 (1) - Remove new combo.

~ Star

Alace wrote:

use this clap sample for those 1/4 clap sound
i guess it`s better

arien666 wrote:

IRC modded parts

SPOILER

[Flat-chested]
02:01:788 (4) - [Suggestion] Align with (3)'s end without grid snap?
02:19:969 (2,3,4,1) - How about move 1 grid up and left?
02:24:333 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - How about move 1 grid left if you moved 02:19:969 (2,3,4,1)?

[Cute]
00:31:788 (8) - [Suggestion] I think end isn't aligned with (9) ;_;
01:30:879 (2) - How about move 1 grid right?
01:49:424 (4,5) - ^
02:30:879 (5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid right?

On Forum

SPOILER

[DJPop's Cool]
Flawless XD
02:02:151 (1,2) - [Suggestion] How about move 0.5 grid left? [I mean make symmetric via y-axis)

[Tsundere~]
00:03:242 (4) - How about move 1 grid left?
00:38:878 (3,5,6,7,8) - [Suggestion] How about align with (2)'s end without grid snap?
00:44:515 (12) - How about move 1 grid left?
00:47:424 (3) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid up and right?
00:55:060 (4) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid down?
01:17:788 (7) - ^
01:53:060 (6,7,8,9,10) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid up?
02:10:515 (3) - How about move 1 grid down? it is actually equal to (1) from the top
02:26:333 (8) - How about move 1 grid left?
02:56:151 (4) - How about move 1 grid left and 2 grid down?
03:26:879 (1,2) - How about move 1 grid left?
03:37:788 (3,4) - How about move 1 grid right?
03:40:879 (4,5) - How about move 1 grid left?
03:42:879 (3) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid down?

Good song anyway XD
Anyway, good luck :3

arien666 wrote:

[DJPop's Cool]
Flawless XD
02:02:151 (1,2) - [Suggestion] How about move 0.5 grid left? [I mean make symmetric via y-axis)
Fixed.

simplistiC wrote:

take off ova from tags eh, why?, this song is from hayate no gotoku ova, and
[Tsundere~]
03:27:606 (5) - make this a flip of 2 i will mod when u finished your mod

ill finish modding tomorrow as i have to sleep soon.

yaya wrote:

i'm sorry to do this .
you should delete .osb file then full upload