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shionelove
http://puu.sh/dAWRa/364a368a86.zip

SD=2.90(about LV.9 in IIDX) so you should make Hard easier(around 2.3)
don't ask me to make harder,because i can't add more lol
i avoid overmap

edit:fix metadata issue please
Topic Starter
Kyousuke-

hutunohito wrote:

http://puu.sh/dAWRa/364a368a86.zip

SD=2.90(about LV.9 in IIDX) so you should make Hard easier(around 2.3)
don't ask me to make harder,because i can't add more lol
i avoid overmap

edit:fix metadata issue please
okay sumbitted~
sorry changed to Hard+ because it's needs harder difficulty
i can't make my Hard diff more easier ;w; i give up lol

Insane taken by Zan!
needs Easy GD wwww

  1. BG changed, because the old one is too mainstream :v
  2. source and tags fixed
  3. Zan's Anomaly added and updated!
  4. hitsound added. still inprogress, Hard diff for hitsounding reference
  5. nerf down difficulty on Hard diff from 2.7 to 2.5 and nerf down a bit on Normal (omg it's only 0.1 ;w;)
HOST_old
hi mod from pm

u can ignore my mod if u think this is not pertinent.



column 1 / 2 / 3 / 4 / 5



[Normal]

00:25:441 - add 5
00:25:624 (25624|2) - move 4
00:25:806 (25806|3) - move 3
00:25:989 (25989|4) - move 2

00:34:770 (34770|1) - move 3
00:39:343 (39343|0) - this LN end 00:40:624
00:40:624 - add 2

00:46:660 - add 1
00:47:209 (47209|0) - move 3

00:53:306 - add 4
00:53:428 (53428|4) - add 5
00:53:672 (53672|4) - add 5
00:53:916 (53916|4) - add 5

01:18:489 (78489|0) - delete

01:38:063 (98063|0) - delete
01:38:245 (98245|1) - this LN start 01:38:063 and move 1, end 01:40:989


[Hard]

00:34:953 (34953|4) - move 1
00:34:861 (34861|0) - move 2

01:02:209 - add 1

01:14:648 - add 4

01:37:971 - add 3
01:38:063 - add 2
01:38:063 (98063|0) - delete
01:38:245 (98245|1) - move to 1 and start 01:38:063 ~ end 01:40:989



[]


thx for your request kyousuke <3
Shinzo-
Hi Kyou !
from queue
it looks like someone has mod it first :(
[Normal]
00:08:353 - empty ? i think should be like before, if u just follow the main piano, then delete 00:03:514 (3514|4,3707|3,3901|2,5062|4,5256|3,5449|1,6611|0,6804|1) -
00:43:916 (43916|3) - delete cause u just make 1 note before
01:14:648 - 01:16:111 - u can add a note, not just 1 LN ._.


[Hard]
00:40:989 (40989|1,40989|3,40989|0,41721|4,41721|3,41721|1) - why 3 note? cause after this, u just make 2 note
01:30:745 (90745|3,90745|2) - why just 2 note ? u make 3 note before this and after this
01:31:660 (91660|1) - delete, the sound didnt strong enough to make it 3 not
01:38:063 (98063|0) - 1 note only? T_T

[Hutunohito]
00:16:660 (16660|4,16660|1,16660|0) - same with 00:15:928 (15928|2,15928|0,15928|4,15928|1) - so add 1 more note ._.
00:25:258 (25258|0,25258|1,25258|4,25258|2,25258|3) - are you sure ?
01:08:063 (68063|1,68063|3,68063|0,68245|1,68245|0,68245|3,68428|0,68428|1,68428|3) - i think the sound didnt strong enough to make it 3 not and i think 01:08:611 (68611|0,68611|4,68611|2) - should be 4 notes like before
01:27:636 (87636|0) - move to 2


[Zan]
00:09:224 (9224|1,9514|2,9707|3) - same sound with 00:08:740 (8740|4,8740|3,8933|4,8933|3) - so make it 2 notes
00:21:782 (21782|4,21782|0,22148|1,22148|3) - the vocal just using 1 LN like before but why this is 2 LN ?
00:26:538 (26538|2) - i hear nothing
00:34:404 - add note, it same with 00:33:855 (33855|1,33855|3,34038|2,34038|0,34221|3,34221|1) -
00:40:624 (40624|4) - dele, i dont know why u make 3 notes here ._.
00:41:538 (41538|3) - delete it or add note 00:42:270
00:52:971 (52971|3,53245|1) - u make LV for vocal but i hear nothing except vocal .... ._.
01:01:111 - add 1 more note for consistency
01:08:063 (68063|0,68063|2,68245|1,68245|3,68428|4,68428|2) - why 2 note again ? ._. i didnt hear her Screaming xD
01:25:258 (85258|1,85258|0,85258|3) - 3 note ? i see no diffrent with 01:26:538 (86538|2,86538|3)
Topic Starter
Kyousuke-

Shinzo- wrote:

Hi Kyou !
from queue
it looks like someone has mod it first :( lol sorry www i think you're late, so i req to others first xD
[Normal]
00:08:353 - empty ? i think should be like before, if u just follow the main piano, then delete 00:03:514 (3514|4,3707|3,3901|2,5062|4,5256|3,5449|1,6611|0,6804|1) - oh got it thanks for pointing
00:43:916 (43916|3) - delete cause u just make 1 note before it's different. this has a stronger sound
01:14:648 - 01:16:111 - u can add a note, not just 1 LN ._. okay~


[Hard]
00:40:989 (40989|1,40989|3,40989|0,41721|4,41721|3,41721|1) - why 3 note? cause after this, u just make 2 note yes it has a stronger sound
01:30:745 (90745|3,90745|2) - why just 2 note ? u make 3 note before this and after this it's same like this actually 01:24:892 (84892|2) -
01:31:660 (91660|1) - delete, the sound didnt strong enough to make it 3 not okay. removed at some part
01:38:063 (98063|0) - 1 note only? T_T yes, i don't want to make harder for that
thanks shin~

HOST wrote:

hi mod from pm

u can ignore my mod if u think this is not pertinent.



column 1 / 2 / 3 / 4 / 5



[Normal]

00:25:441 - add 5 i don't want make it harder. and it's not loud sound
00:25:624 (25624|2) - move 4
00:25:806 (25806|3) - move 3
00:25:989 (25989|4) - move 2
^ hmm i prefer my pattern before, sorry no change~

00:34:770 (34770|1) - move 3 fixed
00:39:343 (39343|0) - this LN end 00:40:624 fixed owo
00:40:624 - add 2 added~

00:46:660 - add 1 added
00:47:209 (47209|0) - move 3 okay!

00:53:306 - add 4
00:53:428 (53428|4) - add 5
00:53:672 (53672|4) - add 5
00:53:916 (53916|4) - add 5
^apply some. nice suggesion~ but it's too hard for normal i think ;w; i'll use it for Hard diff!
01:18:489 (78489|0) - delete fixed

01:38:063 (98063|0) - delete fixed
01:38:245 (98245|1) - this LN start 01:38:063 and move 1, end 01:40:989 okay~


[Hard]

00:34:953 (34953|4) - move 1
00:34:861 (34861|0) - move 2
^good suggestion :3
01:02:209 - add 1 added

01:14:648 - add 4 added

01:37:971 - add 3
01:38:063 - add 2
01:38:063 (98063|0) - delete
01:38:245 (98245|1) - move to 1 and start 01:38:063 ~ end 01:40:989
^nice suggestion <3


[]


thx for your request kyousuke <3
wow great mods! thx host <3
*waiting the others~
shionelove

Shinzo- wrote:

Hi Kyou !
from queue
it looks like someone has mod it first :(


[Hutunohito]
00:16:660 (16660|4,16660|1,16660|0) - same with 00:15:928 (15928|2,15928|0,15928|4,15928|1) - so add 1 more note ._.
instead delete 3
00:25:258 (25258|0,25258|1,25258|4,25258|2,25258|3) - are you sure ? delete 3
01:08:063 (68063|1,68063|3,68063|0,68245|1,68245|0,68245|3,68428|0,68428|1,68428|3) - i think the sound didnt strong enough to make it 3 not
bass+vocal+an instrument,the reason i follow vocal here is accent and pattern and i think 01:08:611 (68611|0,68611|4,68611|2) - should be 4 notes like before by intention,i know there's 3sounds i mention above and cymbal,i can put 4notes,but considering next sounds,i put 3notes
01:27:636 (87636|0) - move to 2 bass=1
thanks_( :3 _/ /_)_
http://puu.sh/dENoo/9a0f56bb5a.zip
Topic Starter
Kyousuke-
updated~

still waiting zan...


BG changed again www
note : GD-er can choose the another bg~ and the old one
Zan-

Shinzo- wrote:

[Zan]
00:09:224 (9224|1,9514|2,9707|3) - same sound with 00:08:740 (8740|4,8740|3,8933|4,8933|3) - so make it 2 notes - only added note at 00:09:707 -
00:21:782 (21782|4,21782|0,22148|1,22148|3) - the vocal just using 1 LN like before but why this is 2 LN ? - middle coloumn is special key, so 1 LN is ok, thus i want to make neat-looking pattern
00:26:538 (26538|2) - i hear nothing - removed
00:34:404 - add note, it same with 00:33:855 (33855|1,33855|3,34038|2,34038|0,34221|3,34221|1) - - from 00:34:404 - i focus on piano sound so its only 1-noted, as i said i want to make neat-looking
00:40:624 (40624|4) - dele, i dont know why u make 3 notes here ._. - nope, it has loud clap-like sound
00:41:538 (41538|3) - delete it or add note 00:42:270 - my bad, added
00:52:971 (52971|3,53245|1) - u make LV for vocal but i hear nothing except vocal .... ._. - it has low ring sound so i make 2-noted | 1 for ring 1 for vocal
01:01:111 - add 1 more note for consistency - added
01:08:063 (68063|0,68063|2,68245|1,68245|3,68428|4,68428|2) - why 2 note again ? ._. i didnt hear her Screaming xD - it has some loud instrument (idk the name) plus vocal so i make 2-LN
01:25:258 (85258|1,85258|0,85258|3) - 3 note ? i see no diffrent with 01:26:538 (86538|2,86538|3)- my bad, deleted
thanks~

update
Topic Starter
Kyousuke-
rip i can't update. i've retried 3 times


finally it's updated~ _(:3_/
Zan-
try more
Harbyter
hi~ here the mod req on ▣▣▣No.1 Team Modding Queue OPEN [Mania]▣▣▣


[MOD]

Column -1-2-3-4-5-


Zan's Anomaly
if you are following the piano at the start then ---->

00:03:320 (3320|1) - move here 00:03:353 -
00:03:707 (3707|1) - move here 00:03:772 -
00:03:901 (3901|2) - here 00:03:933 -
00:04:095 (4095|3) - here 00:04:127 -

00:04:288 (4288|4,4288|0) - 00:04:320 - suggest to turn the LN in a simple note

00:04:675 (4675|4,4675|1) - maybe just one note here? and move here 00:04:707 -

00:04:869 (4869|2,4869|3) - same here,only one note??and move here 00:04:933 -

00:05:062 (5062|1,5062|4) - here i suggest to add only one note,the sound isn't really strong ,maybe delete the LN?and move here 00:05:127 -

00:05:256 (5256|2) - this one here 00:05:320 -

00:05:449 (5449|3) - --> 00:05:514 -

00:05:643 (5643|0,5643|2) - 00:05:691 -

00:05:836 (5836|0,5836|2) - 00:05:885 -

00:06:030 (6030|1) - 00:06:095 -

00:06:224 (6224|2) - 00:06:256 -

00:06:417 (6417|4) - 00:06:449 -

00:06:611 (6611|0,6611|2) - 00:06:643 - and suggest tu turn this LN in a note too

00:06:804 (6804|3) - 00:06:836 -

00:06:998 (6998|4,6998|1) - 00:07:030 -

00:07:191 (7191|0,7191|3) - 00:07:224 -

00:08:546 (8546|2) - 00:08:578 -

00:08:353 (8353|1) - 00:08:385 -

00:09:707 (9707|3,9707|4) - 00:09:740 -

00:10:095 (10095|3,10095|4,10288|4,10288|3) - 00:10:127 -

00:12:288 - add 4?

00:12:353 - here is a full 1/12 ,why not complete the stair? like this??

--------

00:13:245 - add 2?

00:13:367 - add 4? complete the stair xD

00:28:977 (28977|1,29038|2,29099|3,29160|2,29221|1) - here is a 1/8 instead of the 1/6

01:24:434 - why this pattern is more easier from this 00:19:770 - ??

here i suggest to move this note 01:36:599 - in col 5 and add a note 4 then
01:36:645 - add 3
01:36:691 - add 1
01:36:736 - add 2
01:36:782 - add 4
01:36:874 (96874|4,96874|3) - move here 01:36:919 -

that's all hope i'll bbe helpfull :) :)
Bray-
Ganbateee kyouuu!!

*shoot star :D
Topic Starter
Kyousuke-

Harbyter wrote:

hi~ here the mod req on ▣▣▣No.1 Team Modding Queue OPEN [Mania]▣▣▣


[MOD]

Column -1-2-3-4-5-


Zan's Anomaly
if you are following the piano at the start then ---->

00:03:320 (3320|1) - move here 00:03:353 -
00:03:707 (3707|1) - move here 00:03:772 -
00:03:901 (3901|2) - here 00:03:933 -
00:04:095 (4095|3) - here 00:04:127 -

00:04:288 (4288|4,4288|0) - 00:04:320 - suggest to turn the LN in a simple note

00:04:675 (4675|4,4675|1) - maybe just one note here? and move here 00:04:707 -

00:04:869 (4869|2,4869|3) - same here,only one note??and move here 00:04:933 -

00:05:062 (5062|1,5062|4) - here i suggest to add only one note,the sound isn't really strong ,maybe delete the LN?and move here 00:05:127 -

00:05:256 (5256|2) - this one here 00:05:320 -

00:05:449 (5449|3) - --> 00:05:514 -

00:05:643 (5643|0,5643|2) - 00:05:691 -

00:05:836 (5836|0,5836|2) - 00:05:885 -

00:06:030 (6030|1) - 00:06:095 -

00:06:224 (6224|2) - 00:06:256 -

00:06:417 (6417|4) - 00:06:449 -

00:06:611 (6611|0,6611|2) - 00:06:643 - and suggest tu turn this LN in a note too

00:06:804 (6804|3) - 00:06:836 -

00:06:998 (6998|4,6998|1) - 00:07:030 -

00:07:191 (7191|0,7191|3) - 00:07:224 -

00:08:546 (8546|2) - 00:08:578 -

00:08:353 (8353|1) - 00:08:385 -

00:09:707 (9707|3,9707|4) - 00:09:740 -

00:10:095 (10095|3,10095|4,10288|4,10288|3) - 00:10:127 -

00:12:288 - add 4?

00:12:353 - here is a full 1/12 ,why not complete the stair? like this??

--------

00:13:245 - add 2?

00:13:367 - add 4? complete the stair xD

00:28:977 (28977|1,29038|2,29099|3,29160|2,29221|1) - here is a 1/8 instead of the 1/6

01:24:434 - why this pattern is more easier from this 00:19:770 - ??

here i suggest to move this note 01:36:599 - in col 5 and add a note 4 then
01:36:645 - add 3
01:36:691 - add 1
01:36:736 - add 2
01:36:782 - add 4
01:36:874 (96874|4,96874|3) - move here 01:36:919 -

that's all hope i'll bbe helpfull :) :)
thx harby xD
waiting zan~

Brian_Ex wrote:

Ganbateee kyouuu!!

*shoot star :D
wah tenkyu briann >w<
DrawdeX

Hello! :)
From Astral Horizon Modding Team!
Mod as requested :)
I only focus on pitch relevancy and hand balance
5K = |1|2|3|4|5|
Everything modded
[Timing]
>For the kiai time (Ctrl+Shift+A to find the error)
• 01:10:075 - Remove inherited point
• 01:10:258 - ^

[Normal]
HD -1
• 00:29:282 - Add a note
• 00:35:136 (35136|4) - Why 3 notes here? Remove this
• 00:38:063 (38063|4) - ^
• 00:40:989 - Add a note
• 00:41:721 - ^
• 00:46:843 - ^
• 00:48:672 (48672|4) - Move to 4
• 00:49:221 (49221|4) - ^
• 00:52:697 - Add a note
• 00:53:977 - ^
• 00:54:160 - ^
• 01:13:002 - ^
• 01:16:111 - ^
• 01:26:904 - ^
• 01:27:819 - ^
• 01:30:745 - ^
• 01:32:758 - ^
• 01:36:416 (96416|3) - Move to 2
• 01:38:063 - Add a note

[Hard]
• 00:52:697 - Add a note
• 01:00:014 - ^
• 01:08:428 (68428|4) - Move to 3
• 01:08:611 - Add a note
• 01:11:538 - ^

[hutu's Hard+]
• 00:03:296 (3296|1,3320|2,3345|3) - Uhh I don't think it has multiple piano sounds here. I suggest two or three notes on red line only.
• 00:27:819 - Add a note

[Zan's Anomaly]
• 00:22:514 - Add a note or two notes
• 00:39:343 - Add a note
• 00:51:233 - ^
• 01:14:648 - ^

Good luck~! :)
Topic Starter
Kyousuke-

DrawdeX wrote:


Hello! :)
From Astral Horizon Modding Team!
Mod as requested :)
I only focus on pitch relevancy and hand balance
5K = |1|2|3|4|5|
Everything modded
[Timing]
>For the kiai time (Ctrl+Shift+A to find the error)
• 01:10:075 - Remove inherited point
• 01:10:258 - ^
i think it's fine :3
[Normal]
HD -1 are you mean HP -1? it's already good with hp 7 od 7
• 00:29:282 - Add a note that's not a strong sound. and i don't want to make double notes on that part
• 00:35:136 (35136|4) - Why 3 notes here? Remove this it's chord and more louder than double notes
• 00:38:063 (38063|4) - ^
• 00:40:989 - Add a note okay
• 00:41:721 - ^ no
• 00:46:843 - ^
• 00:48:672 (48672|4) - Move to 4 it seems not good to make stairs on it
• 00:49:221 (49221|4) - ^
• 00:52:697 - Add a note no. i don't want make it harder, and i'm afraid the star will reach almost 2
• 00:53:977 - ^
• 00:54:160 - ^
• 01:13:002 - ^ no
• 01:16:111 - ^
• 01:26:904 - ^ ok
• 01:27:819 - ^ no. too many double notes
• 01:30:745 - ^
• 01:32:758 - ^ ok
• 01:36:416 (96416|3) - Move to 2 patern break
• 01:38:063 - Add a note no
sorry that some are rejected, i don't want to make it harder
[Hard]
• 00:52:697 - Add a note added
• 01:00:014 - ^ hmm i don't sure about this...
• 01:08:428 (68428|4) - Move to 3 pattern break
• 01:08:611 - Add a note no
• 01:11:538 - ^

Good luck~! :)
Thx drawx~ will check later :) all updated~!
shionelove

DrawdeX wrote:


Hello! :)
From Astral Horizon Modding Team!
Mod as requested :)
I only focus on pitch relevancy and hand balance
5K = |1|2|3|4|5|
[Timing]
>For the kiai time (Ctrl+Shift+A to find the error)
for the next time your modding:ignore kiai 15sec thing,it's not unrankable
• 01:10:075 - Remove inherited point
• 01:10:258 - ^ no thanks,i need kiai starting effect



[hutu's Hard+]
• 00:03:296 (3296|1,3320|2,3345|3) - Uhh I don't think it has multiple piano sounds here. I suggest two or three notes on red line only.
delete one
• 00:27:819 - Add a note ok

Good luck~! :)
thanks

http://puu.sh/dV5Nn/6cf73c588a.zip
Topic Starter
Kyousuke-
ALL UPDATED~!
Ringating
from my queue:

there wasn't really much I could do for your current bg, since it was fairly compression heavy. I smoothed it as much as I could without causing more issues, in order to remove as many of the artifacts as I could. Here is the original bg w/ the slight smoothing. I didn't upscale it, since osu does that internally on its own.

Since I wasn't really satisfied with how that turned out, I found you an alternate image. Here is that:I hope it meets your moe expectations quality standards.

no kudosu
Aii-
wah lagu sama kek punya luckman xD Starr~~~~

kalo mau dimod, kirim aja message ke ane kyou ^_^
Zan-

Ringating wrote:

from my queue:

there wasn't really much I could do for your current bg, since it was fairly compression heavy. I smoothed it as much as I could without causing more issues, in order to remove as many of the artifacts as I could. Here is the original bg w/ the slight smoothing. I didn't upscale it, since osu does that internally on its own.

Since I wasn't really satisfied with how that turned out, I found you an alternate image. Here is that:I hope it meets your moe expectations quality standards.

no kudosu
oh m8

i really love this!<3
Aii-
yo mod request via message ^_^

[Normal]

00:01:965 (1965|0) - move to col 5

00:17:209 (17209|3,17392|1) - move to 1 left

00:34:770 (34770|2,34861|3,34953|4) - move to 1 left

00:40:989 (40989|1) - move to col 1

00:41:538 (41538|2) - move to col 4 and 00:41:355 (41355|1,41538|3) - Control + G

00:41:721 - add note col 5

00:45:014 - add note col 3

00:45:928 (45928|2) - move to col 2

00:46:660 (46660|0) - delete

00:53:886 - add note col 5, nice 3 hammer xD

00:54:160 - add note

01:04:038 - add note

01:09:343 - add note col 5

01:16:843 - add note

[Hard]

00:02:353 (2353|2,2546|3) - Control + G

00:13:550 (13550|2) - move to col 4

00:17:026 (17026|1) - move to col 4

00:17:209 (17209|0) - move to col 4

00:17:392 (17392|2) - move to col 2

00:42:087 (42087|3) - move to col 1

00:49:404 (49404|2) - move to col 2

00:53:947 (53947|3) - move to col 2

00:57:819 (57819|2) - move to col 4

01:05:502 (65502|1) - move to col 5

01:06:782 - add note col 2

01:09:343 (69343|4) - move to col 2

01:38:063 (98063|1) - move to col 4

Kawaii song :3
Topic Starter
Kyousuke-

Ringating wrote:

from my queue:

there wasn't really much I could do for your current bg, since it was fairly compression heavy. I smoothed it as much as I could without causing more issues, in order to remove as many of the artifacts as I could. Here is the original bg w/ the slight smoothing. I didn't upscale it, since osu does that internally on its own.

Since I wasn't really satisfied with how that turned out, I found you an alternate image. Here is that:I hope it meets your moe expectations quality standards. yup it's good, but...

no kudosu
thanks Ringating! i'll use the smoother ver :)
the alternate is already used in another maps ;w;

Aii- wrote:

yo mod request via message ^_^

[Normal]

00:01:965 (1965|0) - move to col 5 ga jadi stairs dong wkwk

00:17:209 (17209|3,17392|1) - move to 1 left re-arranged

00:34:770 (34770|2,34861|3,34953|4) - move to 1 left sengaja gamau digabungin stairsnya

00:40:989 (40989|1) - move to col 1 pattern break

00:41:538 (41538|2) - move to col 4 and 00:41:355 (41355|1,41538|3) - Control + G nice

00:41:721 - add note col 5 okay~

00:45:014 - add note col 3 no, i won't add to the other part too

00:45:928 (45928|2) - move to col 2 okay

00:46:660 (46660|0) - delete there's have a sound

00:53:886 - add note col 5, nice 3 hammer xD tapi suaranya ga gitu gede :v jga ga mau add banyak note sih disana

00:54:160 - add note kalo di add disana nanti di part sebelumnya jga hrs di add

01:04:038 - add note

01:09:343 - add note col 5

01:16:843 - add note okay

[Hard]

00:02:353 (2353|2,2546|3) - Control + G pattern break

00:13:550 (13550|2) - move to col 4 ud bgs disana

00:17:026 (17026|1) - move to col 4 re-arranged

00:17:209 (17209|0) - move to col 4 jdi hammer dong o_o

00:17:392 (17392|2) - move to col 2 ok

00:42:087 (42087|3) - move to col 1 pattern break

00:49:404 (49404|2) - move to col 2 re-arranged

00:53:947 (53947|3) - move to col 2 it's different

00:57:819 (57819|2) - move to col 4 okay

01:05:502 (65502|1) - move to col 5 no, that same sound with part before

01:06:782 - add note col 2

01:09:343 (69343|4) - move to col 2 re-arranged

01:38:063 (98063|1) - move to col 4

Kawaii song :3 :3
thx aii mod sama starnya~
modnya membantu kog ^^
updated~
[Shi-Ra]
Hello from Shana's Modding Team, there are mods for your mania chart ^w^

Shi-Ra's Pattern Review:

(notice that columns are following like 0 1 2 3 4 for 5K diffs)

Normal
Inside :3
00:18:672 - here I recommend you to use this pattern, it'll be more comfortable to catch all notes here in this way, also it's more suitable with your previous patterns

00:32:026 (32026|1) - move this note to 2nd column, to continue runningmen pattern here, it's really suitable pattern for this part, check it

00:34:770 (34770|2,34861|3,34953|4) - I suggest you to move these notes to 3rd>2nd>1st columns accordingly to perform comfortable stair transition here, now it plays uncomfortable a little with double noting in 4th column

00:47:666 (47666|0) - centre column again please, now it looks like broken triplet, so I suggest you to fill it, don't leave 2nd column empty owo

01:24:434 (84434|3,84617|1) - hm...perform stair triplet or move both of this notes to 2nd column to perform more comfortable transition before next going chord

That's all here ^w^

Hard
Inside :3
00:22:880 - here I recommend you to re-arrange some notes and use this pattern, it'll be comfortable note transition for stream here

00:25:441 (25441|0) - hum...you can move this note to 1st column to complete stair pattern here, it'll be awesome after previous jack here, check that

00:40:898 (40898|4) - there's no sound for this note according to the song there are previous and next going beats only, so I think you need to remove it

00:46:386 (46386|3) - hum, there's no sound too, I suggest you to remove this note coz the stream actually begins at 00:46:477

01:04:038 (64038|2,64130|3,64221|4) - what's about moving these notes left by one column? it'll be comfortable transition with next going chord here without jacking in 4th column

01:18:947 - missed sound here, you can add one more note to 3rd column, check that

Hm...what's all? Yus I think owo

Hutu's Hard+
Inside :3
00:09:514 (9514|2,9707|3) - I suggest you to move these notes left by one column to make some difference in these chords, check that, it'll be really good owo

00:21:416 (21416|4) - I recommend you to move this note to 2nd column, it'll be more comfortable position for it according to the next going chord

00:36:233 (36233|3) - move this one to 2nd column too, same reason as before, or you can move it to 4th column to make this pattern more challenging

00:43:367 (43367|3) - centre or zero column for this note please, you need to accent clap sound in another way, don't perform jack here

01:13:002 (73002|0,73093|1) - I recommend you to move these notes to 1st and 3rd columns accordingly, it'll be more comfortable hand balanced transition for this part

01:27:636 (87636|0) - finally move this one to 1st column to connect previous and next going chords here with this note

That's all for your diff ^w^

Last diff no changes I think, nice song, here's your star ^w^
Good luck :3/
Topic Starter
Kyousuke-

[Shi-Ra] wrote:

Hello from Shana's Modding Team, there are mods for your mania chart ^w^

Shi-Ra's Pattern Review:

(notice that columns are following like 0 1 2 3 4 for 5K diffs)

Normal
Inside :3
00:18:672 - here I recommend you to use this pattern, it'll be more comfortable to catch all notes here in this way, also it's more suitable with your previous patterns nice <3

00:32:026 (32026|1) - move this note to 2nd column, to continue runningmen pattern here, it's really suitable pattern for this part, check it okay owo

00:34:770 (34770|2,34861|3,34953|4) - I suggest you to move these notes to 3rd>2nd>1st columns accordingly to perform comfortable stair transition here, now it plays uncomfortable a little with double noting in 4th column okay~

00:47:666 (47666|0) - centre column again please, now it looks like broken triplet, so I suggest you to fill it, don't leave 2nd column empty owo fixed~

01:24:434 (84434|3,84617|1) - hm...perform stair triplet or move both of this notes to 2nd column to perform more comfortable transition before next going chord okay changed to triplet

That's all here ^w^

Hard
Inside :3
00:22:880 - here I recommend you to re-arrange some notes and use this pattern, it'll be comfortable note transition for stream here nice suggest :3

00:25:441 (25441|0) - hum...you can move this note to 1st column to complete stair pattern here, it'll be awesome after previous jack here, check that okay~

00:40:898 (40898|4) - there's no sound for this note according to the song there are previous and next going beats only, so I think you need to remove it lol fixed

00:46:386 (46386|3) - hum, there's no sound too, I suggest you to remove this note coz the stream actually begins at 00:46:477 fixed

01:04:038 (64038|2,64130|3,64221|4) - what's about moving these notes left by one column? it'll be comfortable transition with next going chord here without jacking in 4th column okay, more better :3

01:18:947 - missed sound here, you can add one more note to 3rd column, check that added

Hm...what's all? Yus I think owo

Last diff no changes I think, nice song, here's your star ^w^
Good luck :3/
Shi-Ra is back owo/ i thought you was inactive =w=
Keep active pls xD

Okay i'll check later~ *probably on friday night all applied~ thanks Shi-Ra xD so useful mod!
And thanks for your star >w<

ALL UPDATED~!
shionelove

[Shi-Ra] wrote:

Hello from Shana's Modding Team, there are mods for your mania chart ^w^

Shi-Ra's Pattern Review:

(notice that columns are following like 0 1 2 3 4 for 5K diffs)



Hutu's Hard+
Inside :3
00:09:514 (9514|2,9707|3) - I suggest you to move these notes left by one column to make some difference in these chords, check that, it'll be really good owo ok

00:21:416 (21416|4) - I recommend you to move this note to 2nd column, it'll be more comfortable position for it according to the next going chord
sorry not change,4=bass

00:36:233 (36233|3) - move this one to 2nd column too, same reason as before, or you can move it to 4th column to make this pattern more challenging
ok

00:43:367 (43367|3) - centre or zero column for this note please, you need to accent clap sound in another way, don't perform jack here
ok
01:13:002 (73002|0,73093|1) - I recommend you to move these notes to 1st and 3rd columns accordingly, it'll be more comfortable hand balanced transition for this part
ok
01:27:636 (87636|0) - finally move this one to 1st column to connect previous and next going chords here with this note
sorry 0=bass
That's all for your diff ^w^

Last diff no changes I think, nice song, here's your star ^w^
Good luck :3/
thanks for mod,useful for me
http://puu.sh/eern5/98975249a9.zip
Zan-

[Shi-Ra] wrote:

Hello from Shana's Modding Team, there are mods for your mania chart ^w^

Shi-Ra's Pattern Review:

(notice that columns are following like 0 1 2 3 4 for 5K diffs)

Normal
Inside :3
00:18:672 - here I recommend you to use this pattern, it'll be more comfortable to catch all notes here in this way, also it's more suitable with your previous patterns

00:32:026 (32026|1) - move this note to 2nd column, to continue runningmen pattern here, it's really suitable pattern for this part, check it

00:34:770 (34770|2,34861|3,34953|4) - I suggest you to move these notes to 3rd>2nd>1st columns accordingly to perform comfortable stair transition here, now it plays uncomfortable a little with double noting in 4th column

00:47:666 (47666|0) - centre column again please, now it looks like broken triplet, so I suggest you to fill it, don't leave 2nd column empty owo

01:24:434 (84434|3,84617|1) - hm...perform stair triplet or move both of this notes to 2nd column to perform more comfortable transition before next going chord

That's all here ^w^

Hard
Inside :3
00:22:880 - here I recommend you to re-arrange some notes and use this pattern, it'll be comfortable note transition for stream here

00:25:441 (25441|0) - hum...you can move this note to 1st column to complete stair pattern here, it'll be awesome after previous jack here, check that

00:40:898 (40898|4) - there's no sound for this note according to the song there are previous and next going beats only, so I think you need to remove it

00:46:386 (46386|3) - hum, there's no sound too, I suggest you to remove this note coz the stream actually begins at 00:46:477

01:04:038 (64038|2,64130|3,64221|4) - what's about moving these notes left by one column? it'll be comfortable transition with next going chord here without jacking in 4th column

01:18:947 - missed sound here, you can add one more note to 3rd column, check that

Hm...what's all? Yus I think owo

Hutu's Hard+
Inside :3
00:09:514 (9514|2,9707|3) - I suggest you to move these notes left by one column to make some difference in these chords, check that, it'll be really good owo

00:21:416 (21416|4) - I recommend you to move this note to 2nd column, it'll be more comfortable position for it according to the next going chord

00:36:233 (36233|3) - move this one to 2nd column too, same reason as before, or you can move it to 4th column to make this pattern more challenging

00:43:367 (43367|3) - centre or zero column for this note please, you need to accent clap sound in another way, don't perform jack here

01:13:002 (73002|0,73093|1) - I recommend you to move these notes to 1st and 3rd columns accordingly, it'll be more comfortable hand balanced transition for this part

01:27:636 (87636|0) - finally move this one to 1st column to connect previous and next going chords here with this note

That's all for your diff ^w^

Last diff no changes I think, nice song, here's your star ^w^
Good luck :3/
why u no mod my diff ;___;
Marirose
Hey kyousuke o/
from my queue
you chose 5K 4 diffs , according to my rules, i ll take 3 to mod
and here's the mod :)

col=1,2,3,4,5
Normal
00:02:740 (2740|0) - ignore this secondary piano sound will better w/
00:03:514 (3514|4,3707|3,3901|2) - same reason, its hard in normal diff i think,just secondary piano sound is enough
00:05:256 (5256|3,5449|1) - ~
00:05:836 (5836|3) - make it another col plz
00:06:611 (6611|0,6804|1) - ignore
00:08:159 (8159|0,8353|1,8546|2) - same
00:08:740 (8740|4,8933|4) - okay,same sound,same col
00:10:095 (10095|2,10288|3) - make them all at col 3
00:18:306 (18306|4,18489|3,18764|2) - no sound,or not clearly sound,i recommand to remove
00:19:130 (19130|3) - soft drum hit,better to ignore this
00:24:160 (24160|2) - remove ,no sound
00:28:733 (28733|2) - try to make this LN,end at 00:29:282 -
00:34:861 (34861|2,34953|3) - ignore these sound
00:43:184 (43184|2) - ignore this soft hit
00:54:892 (54892|4,55075|4,55258|4) - try stream here,left→right
00:56:355 (56355|2) - remove
01:08:794 (68794|2) - remove
01:09:892 (69892|3) - try change to LN and end at 01:10:258 -
01:17:026 (77026|2) - remove
01:19:221 (79221|2) - remove if you didnt follow the vocal
01:21:050 (81050|4) - remove,you didnt follow this sound at all
01:22:880 - if vocal? add
01:39:160 - add at LN at col4,end at 01:40:989 - ,same as 01:38:063 (98063|0) -


end :D

Hard
00:08:159 (8159|4) - this LN end at 00:10:482 - and dont forget to fix 00:09:707 (9707|0) -
00:34:221 (34221|0) - move it to col2
00:34:587 (34587|0) - same
00:34:770 (34770|2,34861|1,34953|0) - uncomfortable,try another pattern or remove these soft hit
00:48:306 (48306|0) - actually i think this LN is end at 00:48:855 -
00:59:831 (59831|1,61294|3) - umm you followed main+secondary piano sound here,but i think its not friendly to use short LN
01:09:617 (69617|3) - col3 plz
01:09:709 (69709|0) - col2
01:39:160 - LN www

end :D

Hutu's Hard+
00:09:224 (9224|1) - you can move this to col1,for comfortable pattern connect 00:09:514 (9514|1,9514|3,9707|4,9707|2) - them
00:52:697 (52697|2) - col2
01:03:124 (63124|1) - col3 then reverse all of them 01:02:941 (62941|4,62941|2,62941|0,63032|3,63124|1,63215|3,63306|2,63306|0,63398|1,63489|3) - better,right? http://puu.sh/epll1/7dc8b0003f.jpg
01:16:111 (76111|0) - remove this one,5 notes are exaggerating..:O


okay :D

ABOVE ALL
.ogg keysound map is unrankable
plz convert them to .wav format ><



Good Luck XD
Topic Starter
Kyousuke-

Marirose wrote:

Hey kyousuke o/
from my queue
you chose 5K 4 diffs , according to my rules, i ll take 3 to mod
and here's the mod :)

col=1,2,3,4,5
Normal
00:02:740 (2740|0) - ignore this secondary piano sound will better w/
00:03:514 (3514|4,3707|3,3901|2) - same reason, its hard in normal diff i think,just secondary piano sound is enough
00:05:256 (5256|3,5449|1) - ~
00:05:836 (5836|3) - make it another col plz
00:06:611 (6611|0,6804|1) - ignore
00:08:159 (8159|0,8353|1,8546|2) - same
00:08:740 (8740|4,8933|4) - okay,same sound,same col
00:10:095 (10095|2,10288|3) - make them all at col 3
00:18:306 (18306|4,18489|3,18764|2) - no sound,or not clearly sound,i recommand to remove
00:19:130 (19130|3) - soft drum hit,better to ignore this
00:24:160 (24160|2) - remove ,no sound bell sound :3
00:28:733 (28733|2) - try to make this LN,end at 00:29:282 - [color=#00BF00]re-arranged :3[/color]
00:34:861 (34861|2,34953|3) - ignore these sound
00:43:184 (43184|2) - ignore this soft hit
00:54:892 (54892|4,55075|4,55258|4) - try stream here,left→right good idea owo
00:56:355 (56355|2) - remove
01:08:794 (68794|2) - remove
01:09:892 (69892|3) - try change to LN and end at 01:10:258 -
01:17:026 (77026|2) - remove
01:19:221 (79221|2) - remove if you didnt follow the vocal following vocal
01:21:050 (81050|4) - remove,you didnt follow this sound at all
01:22:880 - if vocal? add added :3
01:39:160 - add at LN at col4,end at 01:40:989 - ,same as 01:38:063 (98063|0) - nice owo


end :D
thanks star nerf down! _(:3_/

Hard
00:08:159 (8159|4) - this LN end at 00:10:482 - and dont forget to fix 00:09:707 (9707|0) -
00:34:221 (34221|0) - move it to col2
00:34:587 (34587|0) - same
00:34:770 (34770|2,34861|1,34953|0) - uncomfortable,try another pattern or remove these soft hit re-arranged a bit .-.
00:48:306 (48306|0) - actually i think this LN is end at 00:48:855 - fixed
00:59:831 (59831|1,61294|3) - umm you followed main+secondary piano sound here,but i think its not friendly to use short LN hmm i make pattern like that anyway...
01:09:617 (69617|3) - col3 plz it's not fit i think and looks hard
01:09:709 (69709|0) - col2 ^
01:39:160 - LN www ok

end :D

ABOVE ALL
.ogg keysound map is unrankable
plz convert them to .wav format ><

ok will change later~
*too lazy _(:3_/



Good Luck XD
no reply means fixed
okay will check later~ thx
thx! great mods XD
[AyanoTatemaya]
yo~ pm me when you update this map. :)
shionelove

Marirose wrote:

Hey kyousuke o/
from my queue
you chose 5K 4 diffs , according to my rules, i ll take 3 to mod
and here's the mod :)

col=1,2,3,4,5


Hutu's Hard+
00:09:224 (9224|1) - you can move this to col1,for comfortable pattern connect 00:09:514 (9514|1,9514|3,9707|4,9707|2) - them
no thanks,piano for 2chords(2 piano sounds)
00:52:697 (52697|2) - col2 nice
01:03:124 (63124|1) - col3 then reverse all of them 01:02:941 (62941|4,62941|2,62941|0,63032|3,63124|1,63215|3,63306|2,63306|0,63398|1,63489|3) - better,right? http://puu.sh/epll1/7dc8b0003f.jpg repattern
01:16:111 (76111|0) - remove this one,5 notes are exaggerating..:O instead 3


okay :D

ABOVE ALL
.ogg keysound map is unrankable
plz convert them to .wav format ><



Good Luck XD
thanks for mad

http://puu.sh/esd6r/fb94f140b7.zip
Topic Starter
Kyousuke-

shionelove wrote:

Marirose wrote:

Hey kyousuke o/
from my queue
you chose 5K 4 diffs , according to my rules, i ll take 3 to mod
and here's the mod :)

col=1,2,3,4,5


Hutu's Hard+
00:09:224 (9224|1) - you can move this to col1,for comfortable pattern connect 00:09:514 (9514|1,9514|3,9707|4,9707|2) - them
no thanks,piano for 2chords(2 piano sounds)
00:52:697 (52697|2) - col2 nice
01:03:124 (63124|1) - col3 then reverse all of them 01:02:941 (62941|4,62941|2,62941|0,63032|3,63124|1,63215|3,63306|2,63306|0,63398|1,63489|3) - better,right? http://puu.sh/epll1/7dc8b0003f.jpg repattern
01:16:111 (76111|0) - remove this one,5 notes are exaggerating..:O instead 3


okay :D

ABOVE ALL
.ogg keysound map is unrankable
plz convert them to .wav format ><



Good Luck XD
thanks for mad

http://puu.sh/esd6r/fb94f140b7.zip
the puush seems error ;w;

ALL UPDATED~!
ready for mods~ calling ayano...
Lunatic Raccoon
Hi Kyou here comes my mod
Modding Hard and Hard+
General
  1. 5K Maps are quite rare in osu!mania. It's quite surprising to see a 5K map here
  2. The song is really good actually, i love it <3
  3. So the Hard+ diff is still "hutu's Hard+"? hutu has changed his name to "shionelove", so why not changing it?
  4. Add "shionelove" to tags
Hard
  1. 00:12:611 - Add a note for the end of piano slide, maybe?
  2. 00:12:030 - You can add a LN here to represent for the piano slide
  3. 00:34:953 (34953|1) - Move this to column 3 or 4 then make it a 1/2 beat length LN
  4. 00:57:819 - An additional LN for the piano slide is possible here
  5. 01:03:672 (63672|4) - Turn this into a 1 beat length LN
  6. 01:14:648 (74648|3) - ^
  7. 01:15:380 (75380|4,75745|1) - ^ (This is optional tho)
  8. 01:16:843 - Kind of blank. Mind adding a LN/replacing a note with a LN?
  9. 01:38:063 (98063|1) - Move this to 4th col. It will be easier for players to press it more accurately
  10. 01:40:258 - You can add another LN here
hutu's Hard
  1. Looks like it hasn't been hitsounded yet
  2. Almost perfect, just need to point out some stuffs
  3. 00:43:367 - More like double clap, how about doubling this?
  4. 00:49:221 - ^
  5. 00:46:111 and 00:46:294 - It feels like these should be doubled as well
  6. 01:16:843 and 01:18:306 should be triple, while 01:17:392 should be double
  7. 01:19:404 and 01:20:136 - Leave them double, as 01:20:319 is like a blast so it should has more notes than others
Good luck!
Topic Starter
Kyousuke-

Lunatic Raccoon wrote:

HI Kyou here comes my mod
Modding Hard and Hard+
General
  1. 5K Maps are quite rare in osu!mania. It's quite surprising to see a 5K map here osu!mania needs more 5K maps~!
  2. The song is really good actually, i love it <3 <333
  3. So the Hard+ diff is still "hutu's Hard+"? hutu has changed his name to "shionelove", so why not changing it?
  4. Add "shionelove" to tags ok
Hard
  1. 00:12:611 - Add a note for the end of piano slide, maybe? umm no sorry, feels weird ;w;
  2. 00:12:030 - You can add a LN here to represent for the piano slide nice~
  3. 00:34:953 (34953|1) - Move this to column 3 or 4 then make it a 1/2 beat length LN no ;w;
  4. 00:57:819 - An additional LN for the piano slide is possible here it's quite hard
  5. 01:03:672 (63672|4) - Turn this into a 1 beat length LN it's not need to make in LN btw
  6. 01:14:648 (74648|3) - ^ ^
  7. 01:15:380 (75380|4,75745|1) - ^ (This is optional tho) good suggestion owo
  8. 01:16:843 - Kind of blank. Mind adding a LN/replacing a note with a LN? no :U
  9. 01:38:063 (98063|1) - Move this to 4th col. It will be easier for players to press it more accurately ok
  10. 01:40:258 - You can add another LN here no thx~

Good luck!

Okay will check later~ thx 4 modding owo thx rakun xD
No mods again on Zan's Anomaly.... ;w; *dear modder, mod this diff :U
And about shionelove diff name, let he decide it _( :3_//_
Nanatsu
just random 'general' modding since this is my favorite song =w= ( favorite illustrator too =w= ) i am totally lolicon

i suddenly wanted to know about this song further myself hhehe

* Metadata : OK!
* BG Size : plz change BG Size to 1024x768 pixels for 4:3, 1366x768 pixels for 16:9 according to ranking rule
* MP3 : very moe and fine =w=
( but i might suggest to change 'Hwakaka' mp3 file name to just normally Graceful Anomaly or something related to song )
* TAG / Source : about まじかる ちゃ~みんぐ!...
if read it as roma alphabet.. it becomes to 'majikaru cha~mingu!'
maybe u can think such 'what is that??' ..but this is 'Magical Charming!' in japanese.. so, i don't think it's offical name..
( at least japanese are using katagana to represent other language into their language. but it's hiragana tho )
also, you can check this offical site http://www.lumpofsugar.co.jp/product/magicha/
( d..don't travel this site much!! h..hent /me hides )
so, about source, i suggest to change to ' Magical Charming! ' ( wow such pont.. rip copy from offical site )
and you can add 'shionelove' since hutunohito changed name to shionelove

* Timing : http://puu.sh/eWL7z/f3939f8f6c.png fine~ ( but.. i didn't check bpm 155.. )
* Offset : OK!
* AiMod : OK!
* Difficulty Spread : seems fine.

you can ask pattern modding if you want~ but remember that i have less experience on 5k modding T.T
Topic Starter
Kyousuke-

_S u w a k o_ wrote:

just random 'general' modding since this is my favorite song =w= ( favorite illustrator too =w= ) i am totally lolicon
lolicon o.o
i suddenly wanted to know about this song further myself hhehe

* Metadata : OK!
* BG Size : plz change BG Size to 1024x768 pixels for 4:3, 1366x768 pixels for 16:9 according to ranking rule will change later~
* MP3 : very moe and fine =w=
( but i might suggest to change 'Hwakaka' mp3 file name to just normally Graceful Anomaly or something related to song ) ok
* TAG / Source : about まじかる ちゃ~みんぐ!...
if read it as roma alphabet.. it becomes to 'majikaru cha~mingu!'
maybe u can think such 'what is that??' ..but this is 'Magical Charming!' in japanese.. so, i don't think it's offical name..
( at least japanese are using katagana to represent other language into their language. but it's hiragana tho )
also, you can check this offical site http://www.lumpofsugar.co.jp/product/magicha/
( d..don't travel this site much!! h..hent /me hides ) can't open lol. It's blocked in Indonesia? :U
so, about source, i suggest to change to ' Magical Charming! ' ( wow such pont.. rip copy from offical site )
and you can add 'shionelove' since hutunohito changed name to shionelove
ok
* Timing : http://puu.sh/eWL7z/f3939f8f6c.png fine~ ( but.. i didn't check bpm 155.. )
* Offset : OK!
* AiMod : OK!
* Difficulty Spread : seems fine.

you can ask pattern modding if you want~ but remember that i have less experience on 5k modding T.T
okay will ask REDYUMiKA, she/he will mod this map too :U the metadata seems fine... But i'll ask further for metadata mod
*suddenly clicked give kudosu

thanks~

OH HYPE DAT DE-CADE AVA
REDYUMiKA
R☆Yumi's 4K Chart Check (Column:1,2,3,4,5)
---> Type:GM, Language:


[General]
1. Timing Check :

2. Metadata Check :
  1. Source : "まじかる ちゃ~みんぐ!" ---> OK
  2. Tags : "magical charming!" ---> OK

    *Tags/Source is acceptable to describe by both the wordings which are usually stated by official website or whatever.
    References : (e.g.1) & (e.g.2) by Magical Charming! Official Web
3. BG's data Check : *

4. HP/OD FIX Check :

5. Audio FIX Check :
  1. wav & ogg files : & mp3 file :
[Normal]
00:05:062 (5062|0) - Here's the start point which have a piano accompaniment for the next part.
I think you wouldn't need to add a note to the above point, if thinking so like the point of 00:06:611 -

00:10:869 (10869|2,11062|3) - Ctrl+J, there is a sound which take a lower pitch.

00:25:624 (25624|2,25806|3,25989|4,26172|0) - Ctrl+J ・・・(*1)
  1. 00:24:160 (24160|2,24343|4) - & 00:24:526 (24526|2,24709|4) -
    These stairs are shown a character of upper's pitch. Regarding the point of (*1),
    I highly recommend you exchange a pitch direction to not focus on them as the same stuff.
00:54:892 (54892|1,55075|2,55258|3,55441|4) - Ctrl+J for taking a relevance to the next.

00:59:831 - & 01:01:294 - add a note to 3. To emphasize this upbeat will be a comfortable.

01:13:002 - add a note to 4 to emphasize the upbeat.

[Hard]
00:53:947 (53947|3) - a little obscure but if you intend to follow the vocal, I think 00:53:977 - is appropriate to put it.

01:09:526 (69526|0,69709|0,69892|0) - move them to 2 for taking a balance against the former placement.

(01:11:172 - add a note to 4)

[hutu's Hard+]
00:05:062 (5062|1,5256|2,5449|3) - & 00:06:030 (6030|2,6224|3,6417|4) -
伴奏とメインメロディの階段、これはそのまま位置を入れ替えてはどうですか?
00:05:643 (5643|0,5836|0) - との接続がしっくり来るような感じがします。 ---> (e.g.1)

00:06:804 (6804|1,6998|2) - Ctrl+J ダブルノートの強調部分、幅があと少し欲しいかもしれないです。

00:11:062 - ~ 00:11:304 - 閾値を意識したのか或いは、単に打ちやすさを考えたのか微妙なところですが..
00:11:111 - は微かに鳴ってる感じがしますね。3にノートを入れても問題ないように感じます。

00:56:264 (56264|1,56355|2,56447|3) - Ctrl+J ヴォーカルのエンドアクセントと、ベルのような音は切り離したほうがマッチしそうです。

01:09:526 (69526|4,69617|3,69709|4,69800|3,69892|4) - そのまま移動させて34のトリルにしてみてはどうでしょうか。
01:08:794 - & 01:09:160 - の24配列(前者は若干違いますが..)に対して勢いが付けれると思います。

[Zan's Anomaly]
00:02:933 (2933|3) - move to 2, pitch is kinda weak around here.

00:28:672 - ~ 00:28:916 - There are misplacement of notes by different divisor. ---> (e.g.2)

00:29:282 - ~ 00:29:648 - I think here's overchorded tho... that's anomaly. :roll:

00:59:099 - add a note to 3 for making it have a consistence of voice accent.

Good Luck :oops:

*Mods Quality Feedback*

Overview
Since the start of the activity I have mostly received a comment to own mod though, I feel sometimes feedback is a little insufficient between the mapper and modder when I think one's comment over again. mod should be the stuff that is always recognized as a simple reference, or a just suggestion toward the mapper, no matter what it hurt you with kinda aggressive phrase. however we have to know one's honest thoughts about the processed mods for example what did you get, or how did you receive.
Don't hold me back. I'm not gonna get a false evaluation. Strict opinion will make me more strong.
Note : ★☆☆☆☆ < (Low) < (High) < ★★★★★

1. how many useful tips did you get from my mod?
[list:1337]★☆☆☆☆
2. were you able to understand the mod's meaning or intention easily?
★☆☆☆☆3. was I able to satisfy you with the existing contents?
★☆☆☆☆4. what do you have a concern about your chart now?
*please describe here*5. do you have a point which need the check further?
*please describe here*・Information
I will change these questions depending on the situation, and surely feedback them for you guys.
~ Since 2014,12,14 ~
Topic Starter
Kyousuke-

REDYUMiKA wrote:

R☆Yumi's 4K Chart Check (Column:1,2,3,4,5)
---> Type:GM, Language:


[General]
1. Timing Check :

2. Metadata Check :
  1. Source : "まじかる ちゃ~みんぐ!" ---> OK
  2. Tags : "magical charming!" ---> OK

    *Tags/Source is acceptable to describe by both the wordings which are usually stated by official website or whatever.
    References : (e.g.1) & (e.g.2) by Magical Charming! Official Web
3. BG's data Check : *

4. HP/OD FIX Check :

5. Audio FIX Check :
  1. wav & ogg files : & mp3 file :
[Normal]
00:05:062 (5062|0) - Here's the start point which have a piano accompaniment for the next part.
I think you wouldn't need to add a note to the above point, if thinking so like the point of 00:06:611 - lol okay~

00:10:869 (10869|2,11062|3) - Ctrl+J, there is a sound which take a lower pitch. applied owo

00:25:624 (25624|2,25806|3,25989|4,26172|0) - Ctrl+J ・・・(*1)
  • 00:24:160 (24160|2,24343|4) - & 00:24:526 (24526|2,24709|4) -
    These stairs are shown a character of upper's pitch. Regarding the point of (*1),
    I highly recommend you exchange a pitch direction to not focus on them as the same stuff.
^ applied and re-arranged :3
00:54:892 (54892|1,55075|2,55258|3,55441|4) - Ctrl+J for taking a relevance to the next. ok!

00:59:831 - & 01:01:294 - add a note to 3. To emphasize this upbeat will be a comfortable. added~

01:13:002 - add a note to 4 to emphasize the upbeat. added~

[Hard]
00:53:947 (53947|3) - a little obscure but if you intend to follow the vocal, I think 00:53:977 - is appropriate to put it. okay~ following bell + vocal

01:09:526 (69526|0,69709|0,69892|0) - move them to 2 for taking a balance against the former placement. fixed

(01:11:172 - add a note to 4) already

Good Luck :oops:

*Mods Quality Feedback*

Overview
Since the start of the activity I have mostly received a comment to own mod though, I feel sometimes feedback is a little insufficient between the mapper and modder when I think one's comment over again. mod should be the stuff that is always recognized as a simple reference, or a just suggestion toward the mapper, no matter what it hurt you with kinda aggressive phrase. however we have to know one's honest thoughts about the processed mods for example what did you get, or how did you receive.
Don't hold me back. I'm not gonna get a false evaluation. Strict opinion will make me more strong.
Note : ★☆☆☆☆ < (Low) < (High) < ★★★★★

1. how many useful tips did you get from my mod?
[list:1337]★★★★★
2. were you able to understand the mod's meaning or intention easily?
★★★★☆3. was I able to satisfy you with the existing contents?
★★★★★4. what do you have a concern about your chart now?
I must focus on hitsounding now...5. do you have a point which need the check further?
Maybe about note placement and pitch・Information
I will change these questions depending on the situation, and surely feedback them for you guys.
~ Since 2014,12,14 ~
all applied <3
thx yumi~ owo
and also for the star xD *just realized =w=

waiting the others~
shionelove

Lunatic Raccoon wrote:

Hi Kyou here comes my mod
Modding Hard and Hard+
General
  1. 5K Maps are quite rare in osu!mania. It's quite surprising to see a 5K map here
  2. The song is really good actually, i love it <3
  3. So the Hard+ diff is still "hutu's Hard+"? hutu has changed his name to "shionelove", so why not changing it?
  4. Add "shionelove" to tags

hutu's Hard
  1. Looks like it hasn't been hitsounded yet done
  2. Almost perfect, just need to point out some stuffs
  3. 00:43:367 - More like double clap, how about doubling this? next two notes are snare and clap
  4. 00:49:221 - ^ same
  5. 00:46:111 and 00:46:294 - It feels like these should be doubled as well sorry i don't like double notes in one sound
  6. 01:16:843 and 01:18:306 should be triple, while 01:17:392 should be double
    that triple notes=that double note's sounds+bass
  7. 01:19:404 and 01:20:136 - Leave them double, as 01:20:319 is like a blast so it should has more notes than others
    first triple=bass+snare+instrument same pitch and rhythm as vocal,second triple=bass+inst+cymbal
Good luck!

REDYUMiKA wrote:

R☆Yumi's 4K Chart Check (Column:1,2,3,4,5)
---> Type:GM, Language:


[General]
1. Timing Check :

2. Metadata Check :
  1. Source : "まじかる ちゃ~みんぐ!" ---> OK
  2. Tags : "magical charming!" ---> OK

    *Tags/Source is acceptable to describe by both the wordings which are usually stated by official website or whatever.
    References : (e.g.1) & (e.g.2) by Magical Charming! Official Web
3. BG's data Check : *

4. HP/OD FIX Check :

5. Audio FIX Check :
  1. wav & ogg files : & mp3 file :

[hutu's Hard+]
00:05:062 (5062|1,5256|2,5449|3) - & 00:06:030 (6030|2,6224|3,6417|4) -
伴奏とメインメロディの階段、これはそのまま位置を入れ替えてはどうですか?
00:05:643 (5643|0,5836|0) - との接続がしっくり来るような感じがします。 ---> (e.g.1)
1に置いてあった8分の縦を2にずらす形に

00:06:804 (6804|1,6998|2) - Ctrl+J ダブルノートの強調部分、幅があと少し欲しいかもしれないです。
これは強調しているのではなく、低音ピアノ3連に高音ピアノが混ざって2ノーツになってる、いわゆる混フレってやつです
前のパターンで低音は3連隣接階段で置いていて、パターンを変化させたくないのでno changeで


00:11:062 - ~ 00:11:304 - 閾値を意識したのか或いは、単に打ちやすさを考えたのか微妙なところですが..
00:11:111 - は微かに鳴ってる感じがしますね。3にノートを入れても問題ないように感じます。
ここになっていると言うより、低音が4連で00:11:062から始まっているのに気がついたので、2連にして5鍵全てを生かすパターンに変更

00:56:264 (56264|1,56355|2,56447|3) - Ctrl+J ヴォーカルのエンドアクセントと、ベルのような音は切り離したほうがマッチしそうです。
ここはボーカルを取っていないというより、ボーカルと同じリズムでベルが鳴っていてそっちにあわせてるので問題なし

01:09:526 (69526|4,69617|3,69709|4,69800|3,69892|4) - そのまま移動させて34のトリルにしてみてはどうでしょうか。
01:08:794 - & 01:09:160 - の24配列(前者は若干違いますが..)に対して勢いが付けれると思います。
4始動の24トリルにすることで偏りを防ぐことにしました



Good Luck :oops:
modding arigatou~><

http://puu.sh/eX819/8b6adfbeef.zip
Zan-

REDYUMiKA wrote:

[Zan's Anomaly]
00:02:933 (2933|3) - move to 2, pitch is kinda weak around here. ok

00:28:672 - ~ 00:28:916 - There are misplacement of notes by different divisor. ---> (e.g.2) fixed!

00:29:282 - ~ 00:29:648 - I think here's overchorded tho... that's anomaly. :roll: changed to singles

00:59:099 - add a note to 3 for making it have a consistence of voice accent. nope~

Good Luck :oops:
thanks~

update: http://puu.sh/eZRod/3c4c97ff10.osu
Topic Starter
Kyousuke-
ALL UPDATED~!
waiting for mods~
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