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puxtu
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puxtu
yo gami, sorry lama
puxtu's NM, HD and MX
GAMI
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GAMI

puxtu wrote:

yo gami, sorry lama
puxtu's NM, HD and MX
THANKS KAK :D

UPDATE DONE
Mike Ace
287 posts
Joined August 2013
Mike Ace
Hi o/ From : Raccoon's Mania Modding Team
Coloumn : 0|1|2|3

MOD
[4K MX]
01:05:967 (105967|3) - Ganti Single Note
01:43:888 - Pindahin Ke Kolom 1 (Inget D = Kolom 0 , F = Kolom 1 , J = Kolom 2 , K = Kolom 3 )
01:44:730 - Pindahin Ke Kolom 0
01:45:741(145741|1) - ^
01:46:584 - Pindahin Ke Kolom 2
01:54:506 - ^
01:54:674 - Pindahin Ke Kolom 1

[4K HD]
01:25:685 - Pindahin Ke Kolom 0/3
01:30:236 - Tambah 1 Note
01:57:708 - Pindahin Ke 3

[4K NM]
01:44:393 - Pindahin Ke 1 & 2
01:46:753 (146753|0 ) - Pindahin Ke 1

Itu Ajj :D Sorry Kalo Gk Ngebantu ;w; GL For Ranking
puxtu
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puxtu

Mike Ace wrote:

Hi o/ From : Raccoon's Mania Modding Team
Coloumn : 0|1|2|3

MOD
[4K MX]
01:05:967 (105967|3) - Ganti Single Note
01:43:888 - Pindahin Ke Kolom 1 (Inget D = Kolom 0 , F = Kolom 1 , J = Kolom 2 , K = Kolom 3 )
01:44:730 - Pindahin Ke Kolom 0
01:45:741(145741|1) - ^
01:46:584 - Pindahin Ke Kolom 2
01:54:506 - ^
01:54:674 - Pindahin Ke Kolom 1

[4K HD]
01:25:685 - Pindahin Ke Kolom 0/3
01:30:236 - Tambah 1 Note
01:57:708 - Pindahin Ke 3

[4K NM]
01:44:393 - Pindahin Ke 1 & 2
01:46:753 (146753|0 ) - Pindahin Ke 1

Itu Ajj :D Sorry Kalo Gk Ngebantu ;w; GL For Ranking
thanks udh mod bro :)
update nya gw kirim lewat pm
GAMI
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GAMI
okay. still waiting Taikodiff and the mod until 11/11/2014 (for the taiko)
I don't want this being graveyard
rew0825
1,290 posts
Joined March 2013
rew0825
Hi from my mod requeue :)

[ Salad]
  1. 00:41:866 (2) - x:152
  2. 00:43:214 (2) - x:360
  3. 00:50:124 (2) - ctrl+< and x:456

[ Platter]
  1. 01:53:494 (1,2) - change to note (1) - x:304 (2) - x:272 (3) - x:224 (4) - x:176
  2. 01:59:393 (2) - ctrl+h

[ Rain]
  1. 01:08:327 (3) - ctrl+h and x:432
  2. 01:08:832 (4) - ctrl+h and x:128

and

Lucky
I'm a New mod Mania , I hope my mod can help you

colum l1 l 2 l 3 l 4 l

[ puxtu's NM]
  1. 00:51:641 - Add note 2
  2. 00:54:169 (54169|2) - move to 4
  3. 01:00:237 (60237|1) - move to 3
  4. 01:44:393 (104393|3,104393|0) - move to 2,4
  5. 01:45:741 (105741|3,105741|0) - move to 2,4
  6. 01:47:090 (107090|0,107090|3) - move to 2,4

[ puxtu's HD]
  1. 01:21:809 (81809|2) - move to 2
  2. 01:27:202 (87202|2) - move to 2
  3. 01:32:427 (92427|0) - move to 2

Good luck :)
puxtu
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puxtu

GAMI wrote:

okay. still waiting Taikodiff and the mod until 11/11/2014 (for the taiko)
I don't want this being graveyard
isn't that too long? lol :v
GAMI
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GAMI

rew0825 wrote:

Hi from my mod requeue :)

[ Salad]
  1. 00:41:866 (2) - x:152
  2. 00:43:214 (2) - x:360
  3. 00:50:124 (2) - ctrl+< and x:456

[ Platter]
  1. 01:53:494 (1,2) - change to note (1) - x:304 (2) - x:272 (3) - x:224 (4) - x:176
  2. 01:59:393 (2) - ctrl+h

[ Rain]
  1. 01:08:327 (3) - ctrl+h and x:432
  2. 01:08:832 (4) - ctrl+h and x:128

and

Lucky
I'm a New mod Mania , I hope my mod can help you

colum l1 l 2 l 3 l 4 l

[ puxtu's NM]
  1. 00:51:641 - Add note 2
  2. 00:54:169 (54169|2) - move to 4
  3. 01:00:237 (60237|1) - move to 3
  4. 01:44:393 (104393|3,104393|0) - move to 2,4
  5. 01:45:741 (105741|3,105741|0) - move to 2,4
  6. 01:47:090 (107090|0,107090|3) - move to 2,4

[ puxtu's HD]
  1. 01:21:809 (81809|2) - move to 2
  2. 01:27:202 (87202|2) - move to 2
  3. 01:32:427 (92427|0) - move to 2

Good luck :)
thanks for the mod :D
i will update when the update of the mania is done owo
GAMI
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GAMI

puxtu wrote:

GAMI wrote:

okay. still waiting Taikodiff and the mod until 11/11/2014 (for the taiko)
I don't want this being graveyard
isn't that too long? lol :v
i'm tired from waiting taiko gd -_-
puxtu
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puxtu
Lmao
Told you :v
GAMI
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GAMI

puxtu wrote:

Lmao
Told you :v
lol, gd taiko udah dihapus skrg
puxtu
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puxtu

GAMI wrote:

puxtu wrote:

Lmao
Told you :v
lol, gd taiko udah dihapus skrg
lol yauda tunggu apa lg? :D
GAMI
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GAMI
tggu update kakak :3
puxtu
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puxtu
where's da mods :/
GAMI
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GAMI

puxtu wrote:

where's da mods :/
Ane suruh tunda dlu karna platter lg dikerjakaan ulang btw Si rew mod mania ente :/
puxtu
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puxtu

GAMI wrote:

puxtu wrote:

where's da mods :/
Ane suruh tunda dlu karna platter lg dikerjakaan ulang btw Si rew mod mania ente :/
wat..
mana?

HOW DA HELL I KNOW THIS IS A GODDAMN MOD ;A;

oh well, sorry gw ga liat
here's my update
GAMI
582 posts
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GAMI
[/quote]
wat..
mana?

HOW DA HELL I KNOW THIS IS A GODDAMN MOD ;A;

oh well, sorry gw ga liat
here's my update[/quote]

BAKA Q A Q
btw update done & enmei saladnya, senin sya update
puxtu
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puxtu
overdoze-nya apa kabar?
ane udh manggil ursa sama kurokami buat icon apple
GAMI
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GAMI

puxtu wrote:

overdoze-nya apa kabar?
ane udh manggil ursa sama kurokami buat icon apple
ga tau buat overdose Q A Q
tapi klo ada yg mau GD overdose, boleh aja :3

btw happy birthday yaa :)
moga panjang umur & sehat selalu ^^
puxtu
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puxtu

GAMI wrote:

puxtu wrote:

overdoze-nya apa kabar?
ane udh manggil ursa sama kurokami buat icon apple
ga tau buat overdose Q A Q
tapi klo ada yg mau GD overdose, boleh aja :3

btw happy birthday yaa :)
moga panjang umur & sehat selalu ^^
aww thanks udh ngucapin ;)
/me hugs gami
GAMI
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GAMI

puxtu wrote:

aww thanks udh ngucapin ;)
/me hugs gami
mau ucapin di fb tapi ga sempat buka :c
jadi ucapannya lewat forum aja :(
puxtu
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puxtu

GAMI wrote:

puxtu wrote:

aww thanks udh ngucapin ;)
/me hugs gami
mau ucapin di fb tapi ga sempat buka :c
jadi ucapannya lewat forum aja :(
wkwkw iya gpp
makasi udh ngucapin ya ;)
Kamikaze
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Kamikaze
;A;
puxtu
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puxtu
I feel like I'm being stalked
Kamikaze
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Kamikaze
no you're not
GAMI
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GAMI

puxtu wrote:

wkwkw iya gpp
makasi udh ngucapin ya ;)
cie dapat hadiah apa? :3
puxtu
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puxtu

GAMI wrote:

puxtu wrote:

wkwkw iya gpp
makasi udh ngucapin ya ;)
cie dapat hadiah apa? :3
ngga dpt hadiah apa apa
semua org lupa sama ulang tahun ane :3
GAMI
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GAMI

puxtu wrote:

ngga dpt hadiah apa apa
semua org lupa sama ulang tahun ane :3
Gambatte ya kak :3
Hunter Howl
335 posts
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Hunter Howl
ane bisa bikin Overdoze? :>
puxtu
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puxtu

GAMI wrote:

puxtu wrote:

ngga dpt hadiah apa apa
semua org lupa sama ulang tahun ane :3
Gambatte ya kak :3
thanks :3
I need a hug btw :3
GAMI
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GAMI

raianshimuzu wrote:

ane bisa bikin Overdoze? :>
boleh tapi jangkanya 2 minggu-3minggu
GAMI
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GAMI

puxtu wrote:

I need a hug btw :3
/me huggu :3
puxtu
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puxtu

GAMI wrote:

puxtu wrote:

I need a hug btw :3
/me huggu :3
dawww so cute, thanks vienna :3
GAMI
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GAMI

puxtu wrote:

dawww so cute, thanks vienna :3
arigatooo kakak :3
puxtu
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puxtu

GAMI wrote:

puxtu wrote:

dawww so cute, thanks vienna :3
arigatooo kakak :3
aaaaa vienna ngegemesin deh (/>w<)/
GAMI
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GAMI

puxtu wrote:

aaaaa vienna ngegemesin deh (/>w<)/
aku ngga ngegemesin kak~! \(≧◡≦\)
rew0825
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rew0825
ahh... I can GD Platter ???
GAMI
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GAMI

rew0825 wrote:

ahh... I can GD Platter ???
gomenne ;w;
Hunter Howl
335 posts
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Hunter Howl
sebenarnya udah jadi :v nih linknya

btw, sekedar mod kecil-kecilan

[General]
BGnya harus beresolusi 1366x768 atau 1024x768.
Tambah ke tags : puxtu raianshimuzu (kalau situ udah update beatmaps dengan Overdoze ane)
Widescreen Support dihapus. ga ada Storyboard
01:21:303 - Kiai awalannya mending dari sini
01:21:135 - Preview Time disini


[Salad]
02:02:595 (4,5) - Jarak kedua note ini terlalu berjauhan & hanya bisa ditangkap menggunakan Hyperdash. mending yang (5) ditaroh ke x : 272
01:48:438 (2) - geser ke kanan dikit. berasa offscreen
01:49:786 (4) - ^ (tapi ke kiri)
sebagian besarnya udah lumayan. huee

[Rain]
01:21:135 - kalau mau cocok dengan lagunya mending dari sini ga usah pake S:C1. S ajah :3
01:02:428 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - dipakein S:C1 Clap
01:03:271 (5) - agak offscreen
01:03:608 - untuk bagian slow part mending pake S Hitsound ajah
01:19:787 (4,5) - dipakein S:C1 Clap
01:21:303 (1) - ke kanan dikit (seenggaknya ke X : 32)
01:21:303 - penggunaan S:C1 Clap nggak cocok dengan irama musiknya. biar cocok pake Clap dari :
01:21:809 -
01:22:483 -
01:23:157 -
& hitung-hitung aja tiap 2 beat sekali dari 01:21:303 - sampai 01:42:961 -
01:42:876 (7) - agak offscreen
01:43:045 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - patternnya terlalu acak. berasa main Overdose @_@
02:02:595 (3) - agak offscreen

rew0825 wrote:

ahh... I can GD Platter ???
someone already requested to make platter for this o.o
GAMI
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GAMI
TFW WITH THE FCKING BEATMAP, JANGAN DIUPDATE DLU! ADA YANG PUNYA DIFF SEBELUM UPDATE 12/11/2014 KIRIMIN DONG
puxtu
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puxtu

GAMI wrote:

TFW WITH THE FCKING BEATMAP, JANGAN DIUPDATE DLU! ADA YANG PUNYA DIFF SEBELUM UPDATE 12/11/2014 KIRIMIN DONG
lol are you ok? :v
GAMI
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GAMI

puxtu wrote:

GAMI wrote:

TFW WITH THE FCKING BEATMAP, JANGAN DIUPDATE DLU! ADA YANG PUNYA DIFF SEBELUM UPDATE 12/11/2014 KIRIMIN DONG
lol are you ok? :v
Kaga ok! :v osu kembaliin update ane ke gajah mada! (Mapnya yg updatan yg mania mu sebelum diupdate) klo punya kirimin dong yg sebelum update hari ini :c
puxtu
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puxtu
err kalo yg mania aja ane punya, nih http://puu.sh/cNtEI/666c0c3c7c.rar
Harbyter
Beatmap Nominator
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Joined October 2011
Harbyter
hi~ here the mod for the request from ▣▣▣No.1 Team Modding Queue OPEN [Mania]▣▣▣



[MOD]

Column -1-2-3-4-


puxtu's MX
yo puxxx what you did here lel

00:51:136 (51136|2) - delete ,no sound here?
00:51:810 (51810|2) - ^
00:51:641 (51641|1,51641|2) - i suggest to turn those note in LN like the preiovus vocal pattern
00:56:445 - add note 3?
01:21:472 (81472|1) - delete
01:21:977 (81977|1) - ^
01:22:820 (82820|2,83326|0) - ^
01:24:168 (84168|0) - ^
01:26:275 (86275|1,86612|2) - ^ then i think you should change that pattern
01:26:865 (86865|1) - delete
01:29:562 (89562|0) - ^
01:30:910 (90910|3) - ^
01:32:764 (92764|0) - ^
01:34:955 (94955|1) - ^
01:36:303 (96303|3) - ^
01:37:062 (97062|1,97230|3,97230|0,97399|1) - ^

01:37:652 (97652|2) - delete
01:37:989 (97989|1) - move in col 3
01:38:157 (98157|0) - delete
01:39:000 (99000|3) - ^
01:39:506 (99506|1) - ^
01:40:348 (100348|3) - ^
01:41:697 (101697|0) - ^
01:45:489 (105489|3,105489|1) - i suggest do not put note here
01:45:573 - from here to here 01:46:668 - want to make a pattern like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2231217
01:47:006 - add note 1
01:50:882 (110882|2,110882|1) - delete
01:56:275 (116275|3,116275|2) - delete
02:01:668 (121668|0,121668|3) - ^

ok,that's all :)
puxtu
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puxtu
yo harby, thx for mods
update http://puu.sh/cNGXv/6462544e31.rar
GAMI
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GAMI
Update done, wait for mods
juankristal
osu! Alumni
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juankristal
Hi, a little mod here trying to help :P

Mania
HD

01:39:506 (99506|1) - delete (There is no sound and the MX doesnt have that note)
01:39:674 (99674|2) - move note to 1 (to be like 01:37:820 (97820|1) - pattern maybe?)

01:40:854 (100854|0) - delete (To make a pattern like the last one)
01:41:022 (101022|4) - move note to 0 (same of the other one)

NM

Maybe try this pattern? The other things seems fine

01:29:730 (89730|3) - 3
01:29:899 (89899|0) - 2
01:30:067 (90067|3) - 1

01:30:404 (90404|0) - 0
01:30:573 (90573|3) - 1
01:30:741 (90741|0) - 2

Hope it is fine and hope you like it and sorry if you not :P
GAMI
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GAMI
btw yg raian overdose coba dehh dari 01:11:360 (1) - sampe 01:19:956 (7) - dibuat mainstream biar lebih kerasa overdosenya :D
Hunter Howl
335 posts
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Hunter Howl

GAMI wrote:

btw yg raian overdose coba dehh dari 01:11:360 (1) - sampe 01:19:956 (7) - dibuat mainstream biar lebih kerasa overdosenya :D
mudah-mudahan yang ini lumayan mainsetrum /?
oh iya. sama beberapa perubahan kecil :)
GAMI
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GAMI

raianshimuzu wrote:

GAMI wrote:

btw yg raian overdose coba dehh dari 01:11:360 (1) - sampe 01:19:956 (7) - dibuat mainstream biar lebih kerasa overdosenya :D
mudah-mudahan yang ini lumayan mainsetrum /?
oh iya. sama beberapa perubahan kecil :)
besok di added `-`)
jaringan lemot `-`)
puxtu
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puxtu
sorry ane telat :C
update
GAMI
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Topic Starter
GAMI
Update done, wait for mods in further
Badis
416 posts
Joined November 2010
Badis
Hi o / from my queue gonna mod rain and overdose diff
Raian's Overdoze

00:44:731 (3,4) - should be better if it was a slider (we follow lines better when its a slider)
00:52:484 (1) - closer to 2 please
00:58:214 (3) - closer to 2 (a little ^^ )
00:59:394 (5) - closer to 6
01:02:091 (2) - closer to 1
01:02:933 (4,5,6,7) - the flow is inexistant , thats too tough I think you should change that part
01:05:124 - 01:07:147 - what about adding a note there , feels this part is too empty
01:11:782 (6) - what about X=512 , same thing here the flow is bad on streams , if you don't disagree with my (6) position , at least try to make it easier
01:13:383 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - same thing here
01:16:417 (1,2,3,4) - same thing
01:19:956 (7) - I think it should be a long slider :)
01:18:945 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ok thats possible and all but I don't see the point of putting "airman" jumps
01:31:753 (5,6,7,8) - too tough stream , try to make the flow better
01:35:967 (4) - closer to 1 please
01:43:045 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,1) - lel thats pluto pattern and its as paintfull as the original one c:
a important hyperdash must be easy to catch so... 01:43:382 (3) - closer to 2 ; 01:43:889 (6) - closer to 5 ; 01:44:394 (1) - closer to 2 red
01:45:911 (2,3) - wtf I never fc this part , the timing must be perfect xD , please make it way easier !!
01:46:585 (6) - closer to 7 please (the whole pattern is too hard to fc each time)
01:48:607 (2) - closer to 3 AND 01:48:270 (2,1) - should be a perfect line (not enough clean)
01:49:281 (6) - too hard to catch...
02:00:236 (3,4,5,6) - I don't like vertical sliders its useless in my opinion
02:01:584 (3,4,5,6) - same thing

Rain

00:57:540 (3) - I think this one should be a hyperdash , pretty a pain to catch 00:57:877 (1) - without
01:03:271 (6,1) - I suggest something like this

01:04:956 (6) - closer to 5 please
01:06:304 (3) - doesn't respect singer's rythm
01:07:315 (1) - make it more difficult to catch
01:08:411 (2,3) - doesn't respect singer's rythm
01:09:591 - 01:09:928 - 01:10:265 - 5 % volume
01:09:675 - 01:09:675 - 01:09:675 - 50 % volume
01:10:349 (4) - doesn't respect singer's rythm
01:39:000 (1,2,3,4) - ok its symetric BUT would be better if these circles were more in the left
01:58:888 (1,2,3,4) - WTF IS THAT ?? XD please change its unreadable x)

Thats all I have to say , each or your map are challenging thats a good point o/ good luck for ranking !!
GAMI
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GAMI

Badis wrote:

Hi o / from my queue gonna mod rain and overdose diff
[centre]Rain

00:57:540 (3) - I think this one should be a hyperdash , pretty a pain to catch 00:57:877 (1) - without
01:03:271 (6,1) - I suggest something like this

01:04:956 (6) - closer to 5 please
01:06:304 (3) - doesn't respect singer's rythm
01:07:315 (1) - make it more difficult to catch
01:08:411 (2,3) - doesn't respect singer's rythm
01:09:591 - 01:09:928 - 01:10:265 - 5 % volume
01:09:675 - 01:09:675 - 01:09:675 - 50 % volume
01:10:349 (4) - doesn't respect singer's rythm
01:39:000 (1,2,3,4) - ok its symetric BUT would be better if these circles were more in the left
01:58:888 (1,2,3,4) - WTF IS THAT ?? XD please change its unreadable x)

Thats all I have to say , each or your map are challenging thats a good point o/ good luck for ranking !!
update for overdose, wait for overdose update
Hunter Howl
335 posts
Joined July 2013
Hunter Howl

Badis wrote:

Hi o / from my queue gonna mod rain and overdose diff
Raian's Overdoze

00:44:731 (3,4) - should be better if it was a slider (we follow lines better when its a slider) Changed with the (1,2) as well
00:52:484 (1) - closer to 2 please as you wish (i'm having a hard time to catch this one as well LOL)
00:58:214 (3) - closer to 2 (a little ^^ ) Done
00:59:394 (5) - closer to 6 Moved a little
01:02:091 (2) - closer to 1 ^
01:02:933 (4,5,6,7) - the flow is inexistant , thats too tough I think you should change that part to be honest, i kinda like this "Sort" of flow. but changed anyway to a more flexible flow
01:05:124 - 01:07:147 - what about adding a note there , feels this part is too empty Trying to follow the Vocal Line. sorry
01:11:782 (6) - what about X=512 , same thing here the flow is bad on streams , if you don't disagree with my (6) position , at least try to make it easier your suggestion doesn't feel like fit with the map so i decided to rearrange at 01:11:360 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
01:13:383 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - same thing here ^
01:16:417 (1,2,3,4) - same thing ^
01:19:956 (7) - I think it should be a long slider :) nice idea.
01:18:945 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ok thats possible and all but I don't see the point of putting "airman" jumps Fine. some small Zig-Zag Jumps
01:31:753 (5,6,7,8) - too tough stream , try to make the flow better did it with other way. sorry
01:35:967 (4) - closer to 1 please Not to Close
01:43:045 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,1) - lel thats pluto pattern and its as paintfull as the original one c:
a important hyperdash must be easy to catch so... 01:43:382 (3) - closer to 2 ; 01:43:889 (6) - closer to 5 ; 01:44:394 (1) - closer to 2 red Closed the points you've mentioned i did that jump on purpose xD
01:45:911 (2,3) - wtf I never fc this part , the timing must be perfect xD , please make it way easier !! done closing 01:45:911 (2,4,6,8) -
01:46:585 (6) - closer to 7 please (the whole pattern is too hard to fc each time) Has been mentioned @^
01:48:607 (2) - closer to 3 AND 01:48:270 (2,1) - should be a perfect line (not enough clean)Keeping the (2) and moved 01:48:438 (1,3) - a little
01:49:281 (6) - too hard to catch... i Lol'd a bit xD
02:00:236 (3,4,5,6) - I don't like vertical sliders its useless in my opinion was waiting for someone to take a look at it :v
02:01:584 (3,4,5,6) - same thing ^

Thats all I have to say , each or your map are challenging thats a good point o/ good luck for ranking !!
Thanks, Badis

EDIT 1 : Tunggu Dulu >.< tiba-tiba gue salah copas isi filenya
EDIT 2 : Nvm. guenya aja yang agak plin-plan gara-gara ga merhatiin mana file osu sama file mod di notepad -_- http://puu.sh/d6l9L/cd17d2b737.osu
GAMI
582 posts
Joined February 2014
Topic Starter
GAMI
update done, wait for next mod
Time-
364 posts
Joined July 2013
Time-
yo

Change artist name to nano (keknya aku pernah komen tentang artistnya kan, knp blm diganti ewe)
Check Aimod, there is some tag conflict

[Salad]
hmm patternnya masih perlu dipermulus h3h3, aku males nyebutinnya satu" jadi aku mod dikit aja ye :p klo mau mod irc pm aku
00:55:518 (1) - dibikin lurus aja ke atas biar pemula gampang nangkap dropletnya
00:56:866 (1) - ^
01:44:056 (3) - dikurangi distancenya, kejauhan imo
01:27:202 (2) - dibikin lurus juga

[Frobe's Platter]
00:41:698 (1,2) - move it to left side, 00:43:046 (1,2) - to right side, and 00:44:394 (1,2) - to left side, to make some movement ewe
01:05:630 (2) - move to x:184 to decrease the distance
01:11:360 (1) - x:408 to make some movement
01:17:428 (1) - move to x:364 to decrease distance
01:36:135 (1,2) - ctrl+h but it will make an Hdash, if you apply this maybe you should decrease the distance on the next pattern
01:56:528 (1,2,3) - ctrl+h
So many stop pattern, maybe you should change some xD

[Rain]
Hdashnya banyak yg terlalu maksa, beberapa pattern di bagian yg rendah juga movementnya dikit bgt hue
entah knp aku males ngemod buatan GAMI :p klo mau bisa pm aku buat irc mod juga

[Raian's Overdoze]
01:15:405 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - bagian ini bikin aku fail wkkwkwkwk, sebenernya tiap di bagian stream itu jump agak maksa gitu, klo bisa bikin stream yg sederhana tapi susah, dan bagian yg laen itu agak terlalu mudah buat overdose jadi mirip rain, tldr bagian stream dibuat agak mudah dan yg laen dibuat agak susah

I can't really mod rain and overdose diff ;;
Hunter Howl
335 posts
Joined July 2013
Hunter Howl

Time- wrote:

[Raian's Overdoze]
01:15:405 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - bagian ini bikin aku fail wkkwkwkwk, sebenernya tiap di bagian stream itu jump agak maksa gitu, klo bisa bikin stream yg sederhana tapi susah, dan bagian yg laen itu agak terlalu mudah buat overdose jadi mirip rain, tldr bagian stream dibuat agak mudah dan yg laen dibuat agak susah begini yah. sebelumnya udah dimintain sama Pemilik Beatmap ini untuk membuat bagian yang ente tunjuk dibuat lebih mainstream biar lebih serasi dengan Overdozenya. jadinya memang agak maksa gitu stream ama jumpnya. tapi biar bagaimana pun juga, makasih banget nunjukin bagian yang agak ganjal (itupun menurut ane. hue-hue) jadi untuk yang 01:15:405 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ane ga ubah
GAMI, Ini Updatenya
Frobe
Former osu!catch Champion: 2015
743 posts
Joined January 2011
Frobe

Time- wrote:

[Frobe's Platter]
00:41:698 (1,2) - move it to left side, 00:43:046 (1,2) - to right side, and 00:44:394 (1,2) - to left side, to make some movement ewe
01:05:630 (2) - move to x:184 to decrease the distance instead, reduces the distance of its pattern
01:11:360 (1) - x:408 to make some movement
01:17:428 (1) - move to x:364 to decrease distance
01:36:135 (1,2) - ctrl+h but it will make an Hdash, if you apply this maybe you should decrease the distance on the next pattern
01:56:528 (1,2,3) - ctrl+h
So many stop pattern, maybe you should change some xD
code
osu file format v13

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152,220,102708,2,0,L|172:272,1,40
240,260,102876,2,0,L|220:312,1,40
160,344,103045,6,0,P|132:296|160:200,1,160,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,200,103550,1,8,0:0:0:0:
104,184,103719,2,0,P|188:176|240:112,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,348,104393,6,0,P|436:304|416:188,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,152,104899,1,8,0:0:0:0:
98,205,105067,2,0,P|86:283|39:348,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,344,105741,6,0,P|380:296|352:200,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,200,106247,1,8,0:0:0:0:
408,184,106416,2,0,P|324:176|272:112,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,348,107090,6,0,P|76:304|96:188,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,152,107595,1,8,0:0:0:0:
413,205,107764,2,8,P|425:283|472:348,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,344,108438,6,0,P|100:304|104:208,1,160,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,212,108944,1,8,0:0:0:0:
95,221,109112,2,0,P|97:299|160:344,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,272,109786,6,0,P|352:280|300:224,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,200,110292,2,0,L|412:120,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
98,124,110798,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,344,111135,6,0,P|412:304|408:208,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,212,111640,1,8,0:0:0:0:
417,221,111809,2,0,P|415:299|352:344,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,272,112483,6,0,P|160:280|212:224,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,200,112989,2,0,L|100:120,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
413,124,113494,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,272,113831,6,0,B|120:200|120:200|160:268,1,160,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,272,114337,2,0,B|392:200|392:200|352:268,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,272,114843,1,8,0:0:0:0:
412,320,115180,6,0,P|344:252|280:252,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,320,115685,2,0,P|168:252|232:252,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,320,116191,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,272,116528,6,0,B|392:200|392:200|352:268,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,272,117034,2,0,B|120:200|120:200|160:268,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,272,117539,1,8,0:0:0:0:
100,320,117876,6,0,P|168:252|232:252,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,320,118382,2,0,P|344:252|280:252,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,320,118888,1,8,0:0:0:0:
364,308,119225,6,0,L|296:264,2,80,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,308,119730,2,0,P|280:267|312:180,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,200,120236,1,8,0:0:0:0:
148,308,120573,6,0,L|216:264,2,80,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,308,121079,2,0,P|232:267|200:180,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,200,121584,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,308,121921,6,0,L|272:256,2,80,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,308,122427,2,0,L|240:256,2,80,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
28,268,122932,1,8,0:0:0:0:
268,264,123101,1,12,0:0:0:0:

i did not fix others... i'll think a little more. thank you ^^ :)
puxtu
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puxtu
ini yg punya map kemana?

anyway, diff gw yg mx mending pindahin ke creator's word aja. kalo dibiarin mapnya jadi unrankable ;)
https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_Criteria#Guidelines
No guest mapper should have more difficulties in the mapset than the creator, all modes together. For collaboration mapsets, the uploader should take part in all collab difficulties. The person who should upload the map is the one who contributed most to it. Maps with an ambiguous set of difficulties such as collabs will be evaluated on a case-by-case basis to ensure that the submitting mapper is properly accounted for.
Hunter Howl
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puxtu wrote:

ini yg punya map kemana?

anyway, diff gw yg mx mending pindahin ke creator's word aja. kalo dibiarin mapnya jadi unrankable ;)
https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_Criteria#Guidelines
No guest mapper should have more difficulties in the mapset than the creator, all modes together. For collaboration mapsets, the uploader should take part in all collab difficulties. The person who should upload the map is the one who contributed most to it. Maps with an ambiguous set of difficulties such as collabs will be evaluated on a case-by-case basis to ensure that the submitting mapper is properly accounted for.
setau gue kalau GD untuk mode yang berbeda ya ga apa-apa

btw, sabar yah, Putu G. Bandem :v mungkin yang punya mapper lagi sibuk ujian
puxtu
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wuat da.. jgn bongkar identitas pls :v
GAMI
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thanks for mods ^^
anyways all already update ~

i'm going back do my sport exam ^^
__Hatsune_Miku
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Salad
  1. 01:19:787 (3) - Add clap ?
  1. Then all good :P
Rain
  1. 01:19:956 (2) - Clap
  1. 01:31:247 (6) - ctrl + < 180
Raian's Overdoze
  1. 01:28:551 (2) - Ctrl + > = 90
The map is Verry good // nice :D
Tari
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Change Nano -> nano
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Tari wrote:

Change Nano -> nano
done ^^ thanks for the info :D
Aste-
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Hiii~

Mania Modnya selesai ~

Karena ak ngga bisa bahasa jepang, jadinya pake Indo aj ya (ribet oy...)

Start lagunya lama banget ( 00:00:000 sampe 00:06:641 ngga ad sound nya ) coba deh di edit mp3 nya (masukan aj)

Bang Puxtu. kalo jadinya aneh sorry yah~ ^.^

1-2-3-4

Puxtu's NM
Hitsound terlalu tinggi.. Range nya jadiin 40 sampe 60 % aj bang..

Widescreen Support :kalo ngga pake SB, uncheck aj

00:43:046 (43046|1,43383|0) - Ctrl G?
00:45:742 (45742|2,46080|3) - ^

00:50:967 (50967|0) - Move to 4
00:52:147 (52147|3,52147|1) - Delete salah satu
00:52:484 (52484|0) - Tambah Note

00:52:653 (52653|3) - Move ke 3
00:52:821 (52821|2,52821|1) - ^ 1&2

01:19:619 (79619|1) - ^ 3
01:19:787 (79787|3) - ^ 2
01:19:956 (79956|2) - ^ 4

01:32:090 (92090|3) - ^ 2

01:40:517 (100517|3) - ^ 2

Puxtu's HD
Widescreen = same as NM

Hitsound terlalu tinggi.. Range nya jadiin 40 sampe 60 % aj bang..

01:31:416 (91416|2,91584|0,91668|1,91753|3,91837|2,91921|0,92006|1,92090|2) - ngga jadiin gini aj?


Sisanya menurutku Fine~

End~

Wehh. Musicnya keren. tapi kalo ngga pake Video mending di edit bagian intronya, (00:00:000 sampe 00:41:698 Potong aja)

GL~

*Nembak pake peluru *
Hunter Howl
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applied to what _ Hatsune Miku said. thanks
http://puu.sh/dBY6m/243dfc94f3.osu

Pharos21 wrote:

Wehh. Musicnya keren. tapi kalo ngga pake Video mending di edit bagian intronya, (00:00:000 sampe 00:41:698 Potong aja)

GL~

*Nembak pake peluru *
masalah musiknya ga apa-apa deh selama draining timenya diatas rekomentasi (yaitu 45 detik). std mapset punya Umi aja ga dipotong :P
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raianshimuzu wrote:

masalah musiknya ga apa-apa deh selama draining timenya diatas rekomentasi (yaitu 45 detik). std mapset punya Umi aja ga dipotong :P
Dia kan pake Video (T0T) ini kan kagak
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Pharos21 wrote:

raianshimuzu wrote:

masalah musiknya ga apa-apa deh selama draining timenya diatas rekomentasi (yaitu 45 detik). std mapset punya Umi aja ga dipotong :P
Dia kan pake Video (T0T) ini kan kagak
i'm lazy desu ~ :3

nanti gua added video kalo bisa buat map ctb `-`
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Pake punya si Umi aja videonya =w=
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raianshimuzu wrote:

Pake punya si Umi aja videonya =w=

bisa dl kan khusus videonya aja? kuota saya udah sekarat :C
Hunter Howl
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[quote=GAMI]bisa dl kan khusus videonya aja? kuota saya udah sekarat :C[/quote]
nope. harus download beserta beatmapnya :<
GAMI
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everyone who download it, please re-download it again
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Pharos21 wrote:

[Puxtu's NM]00:43:046 (43046|1,43383|0) - Ctrl G?
00:45:742 (45742|2,46080|3) - ^ keep

00:50:967 (50967|0) - Move to 4
00:52:147 (52147|3,52147|1) - Delete salah satu delete nyawamu aja ya kidding
00:52:484 (52484|0) - Tambah Note not enough sound

00:52:653 (52653|3) - Move ke 3
00:52:821 (52821|2,52821|1) - ^ 1&2

01:19:619 (79619|1) - ^ 3
01:19:787 (79787|3) - ^ 2
01:19:956 (79956|2) - ^ 4

01:32:090 (92090|3) - ^ 2

01:40:517 (100517|3) - ^ 2 keep
thx for mods
not replied means..OK
update with self modding and fixed hitsounds: http://puu.sh/dCBQL/63c0f8afd7.rar
ps: gami pls pindahin yg MX ke creator's word. thank you
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puxtu wrote:

Pharos21 wrote:

[Puxtu's NM]00:43:046 (43046|1,43383|0) - Ctrl G?
00:45:742 (45742|2,46080|3) - ^ keep

00:50:967 (50967|0) - Move to 4
00:52:147 (52147|3,52147|1) - Delete salah satu delete nyawamu aja ya kidding
00:52:484 (52484|0) - Tambah Note not enough sound

00:52:653 (52653|3) - Move ke 3
00:52:821 (52821|2,52821|1) - ^ 1&2

01:19:619 (79619|1) - ^ 3
01:19:787 (79787|3) - ^ 2
01:19:956 (79956|2) - ^ 4

01:32:090 (92090|3) - ^ 2

01:40:517 (100517|3) - ^ 2 keep
thx for mods
not replied means..OK
update with self modding and fixed hitsounds: http://puu.sh/dCBQL/63c0f8afd7.rar
ps: gami pls pindahin yg MX ke creator's word. thank you
ok
puxtu
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sorry ane ngga berbakat bikin mx wkwk
GAMI
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ane ngga berbakat nge-map :3
puxtu
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vienna pls :C

btw kok masih diff yg lama ya?
belum di update?
GAMI
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emang iya haha...
mana jari telunjuk saya buat main ctb pada luka
tambah parah xD
puxtu
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Lel gws Vienna

Btw kalo udh di update, lansung manggil usagi bwt modding ya
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usagi ? 0.0

nanti yee... _(:3」∠)_
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Sama mod ctb sekalian yak :v
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raianshimuzu wrote:

Sama mod ctb sekalian yak :v
iya, saya udah usahain kok
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raianshimuzu wrote:

Sama mod ctb sekalian yak :v
iya, saya udah usahain kok

double xl-kampret :V
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raianshimuzu wrote:

Sama mod ctb sekalian yak :v
iya, saya udah usahain kok

fck post
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hatrick 0.0
Hunter Howl
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2nd mod :3

semua yang gue sebutin hanyalah saran / sugesti. mungkin ada beberapa bagian yang harus diubah jadi tolong pertimbangkan kembali :3
all of this was just some suggestion. please reconsider before applying them

[puxtu's NM]
00:41:698 - kecilin dikit volumenya (antara 40-50%) and what's with dat Drum Custom hitsound? :/)
00:42:035 (42035|2) - rasanya kaku kalau ga tambahan hitsound. coba pake drum whistle
00:43:383 (43383|0) - ^
00:44:731 (44731|1) - ^
00:46:080 (46080|3) - ^
00:46:754 (46754|2) - ^
00:47:428 (47428|1) - ^
00:48:776 (48776|2) - ^
00:50:799 (50799|1) - Normal Clap
00:51:473 (51473|2) - ^

intinya, (sebagian besar) berasa kaku dikarenakan tidak adanya hitsound yang bervariasi :/

01:17:091 (77091|2) - jadiin LN kalau bisa
01:24:000 (84000|2) - ^
01:29:393 (89393|1) - ^
01:34:787 (94787|2) - ^

Patternnya udah bagus

[puxtu's HD]
00:41:698 - kok beda tipe penggunaan hitsoundnya? :/ yang NM lu pake drum. HD lu pake Soft. gue bingung gaya elu untuk penggunaan hitsound :v
00:42:035 (42035|3) - bakal gue sebutin untuk pake whistile lagi (entah soft ato drum)
00:41:698 - 00:50:377 - ^ (tebak aja sendiri yang mana dipakein whistle)
00:50:799 (50799|3,50799|2) - diganti dengan custom soft whistle
00:51:304 (51304|2,51304|3) - Soft Custom Whistle
00:51:473 (51473|1,51473|0) - Soft Custom Clap
00:51:641 (51641|2,51641|3) - Soft Custom Whistle (LN yang kepalanya)
01:22:483 (82483|2) - seharusnya taruh soft custom clap disini. bukan di 01:22:652 (82652|3,82652|1) - :/
01:24:000 (84000|0,84000|3) - ^ (01:23:831 (83831|1) - )
dst dibagian kiai

00:55:181 - asiknya tambah not satu deh di kolom 3
00:56:529 - ^ (2)
01:00:574 - ^ (3)
01:01:922 - ^ (2)
01:03:271 - Kecilin volumenya (40-50%)
01:17:428 (77428|1,77512|0) - sekedar saran, mending note di kolom 2 ditaroh di 01:17:512 - dan note di kolom 1 ditaroh di 01:17:428 -
01:17:765 (77765|1,77849|0,78102|1,78186|0) - ^ (lu kirain sendiri timingnya. huee)

ini diff mania emang asik dimainin. tapi karena salah tempat naruh hitsoundnya, gw sering miss :/

[Salad]
hanya 2 hal yang bakal gw sebutin untuk ini diff dikarenakan semua patternnya udah mulus. ahue (meskipun masih sering miss gara-gara lag lappy `-`)
01:32:258 - 02:01:584 - hitsoundnya mana? :/
02:01:921 (1) - ini spinner kayaknya berakhir di 02:03:101 - deh :3

[Frobe's Platter]
nice diff. so i'm gonna point out 2 things
first of all, i wonder why you love putting "Triplets" (like in std mode) at some part of the music? just wondering okay. i'm not forcing you to change it :)
01:02:765 (2,4) - try to make them line up in here. i feel like i'm playing light rain in this part. if you don't understand, simply Ctrl + G :/

[Rain]
01:02:428 (1,2,3,4,5) - dari sini, ane mau saranin ke ente untuk ubah posisinya :
(1) = x = 128
(3) = x = 256
(4) = x = 176
(5) = x = 144

njir. dibagian kiainya bikin gw fail. akwkakwakwa

[Raian's Overdoze]

Hello :3 /

kayaknya gitu aja. selanjutnya bakal dimod sama pemain lain / BAT :3
GAMI
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raianshimuzu wrote:

2nd mod :3

semua yang gue sebutin hanyalah saran / sugesti. mungkin ada beberapa bagian yang harus diubah jadi tolong pertimbangkan kembali :3
all of this was just some suggestion. please reconsider before applying them

[puxtu's NM]
00:41:698 - kecilin dikit volumenya (antara 40-50%) and what's with dat Drum Custom hitsound? :/)
00:42:035 (42035|2) - rasanya kaku kalau ga tambahan hitsound. coba pake drum whistle
00:43:383 (43383|0) - ^
00:44:731 (44731|1) - ^
00:46:080 (46080|3) - ^
00:46:754 (46754|2) - ^
00:47:428 (47428|1) - ^
00:48:776 (48776|2) - ^
00:50:799 (50799|1) - Normal Clap
00:51:473 (51473|2) - ^

intinya, (sebagian besar) berasa kaku dikarenakan tidak adanya hitsound yang bervariasi :/

01:17:091 (77091|2) - jadiin LN kalau bisa
01:24:000 (84000|2) - ^
01:29:393 (89393|1) - ^
01:34:787 (94787|2) - ^

Patternnya udah bagus

[puxtu's HD]
00:41:698 - kok beda tipe penggunaan hitsoundnya? :/ yang NM lu pake drum. HD lu pake Soft. gue bingung gaya elu untuk penggunaan hitsound :v
00:42:035 (42035|3) - bakal gue sebutin untuk pake whistile lagi (entah soft ato drum)
00:41:698 - 00:50:377 - ^ (tebak aja sendiri yang mana dipakein whistle)
00:50:799 (50799|3,50799|2) - diganti dengan custom soft whistle
00:51:304 (51304|2,51304|3) - Soft Custom Whistle
00:51:473 (51473|1,51473|0) - Soft Custom Clap
00:51:641 (51641|2,51641|3) - Soft Custom Whistle (LN yang kepalanya)
01:22:483 (82483|2) - seharusnya taruh soft custom clap disini. bukan di 01:22:652 (82652|3,82652|1) - :/
01:24:000 (84000|0,84000|3) - ^ (01:23:831 (83831|1) - )
dst dibagian kiai

00:55:181 - asiknya tambah not satu deh di kolom 3
00:56:529 - ^ (2)
01:00:574 - ^ (3)
01:01:922 - ^ (2)
01:03:271 - Kecilin volumenya (40-50%)
01:17:428 (77428|1,77512|0) - sekedar saran, mending note di kolom 2 ditaroh di 01:17:512 - dan note di kolom 1 ditaroh di 01:17:428 -
01:17:765 (77765|1,77849|0,78102|1,78186|0) - ^ (lu kirain sendiri timingnya. huee)

ini diff mania emang asik dimainin. tapi karena salah tempat naruh hitsoundnya, gw sering miss :/

[Salad]
hanya 2 hal yang bakal gw sebutin untuk ini diff dikarenakan semua patternnya udah mulus. ahue (meskipun masih sering miss gara-gara lag lappy `-`)
01:32:258 - 02:01:584 - hitsoundnya mana? :/
02:01:921 (1) - ini spinner kayaknya berakhir di 02:03:101 - deh :3

[Frobe's Platter]
nice diff. so i'm gonna point out 2 things
first of all, i wonder why you love putting "Triplets" (like in std mode) at some part of the music? just wondering okay. i'm not forcing you to change it :)
01:02:765 (2,4) - try to make them line up in here. i feel like i'm playing light rain in this part. if you don't understand, simply Ctrl + G :/

[Rain]
01:02:428 (1,2,3,4,5) - dari sini, ane mau saranin ke ente untuk ubah posisinya :
(1) = x = 128
(3) = x = 256
(4) = x = 176
(5) = x = 144

njir. dibagian kiainya bikin gw fail. akwkakwakwa

[Raian's Overdoze]

Hello :3 /

kayaknya gitu aja. selanjutnya bakal dimod sama pemain lain / BAT :3
rain & salad has been change (lol sama sering mati dibagian kiai pertama jadi saya ubah posisinya)

I will update after all GD-ers sending their diff
puxtu
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puxtu
vienna pls
ini diff ane belum di update.. masih versi yg lama
update dulu yg baru, baru manggil modder yg lain ok?

raian: tahan dulu modnya, tunggu di update sama gami
GAMI
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puxtu wrote:

vienna pls
ini diff ane belum di update.. masih versi yg lama
update dulu yg baru, baru manggil modder yg lain ok?

raian: tahan dulu modnya, tunggu di update sama gami
Please... -_- coba cek ulang
Hunter Howl
335 posts
Joined July 2013
Hunter Howl

puxtu wrote:

vienna pls
ini diff ane belum di update.. masih versi yg lama
update dulu yg baru, baru manggil modder yg lain ok?

raian: tahan dulu modnya, tunggu di update sama gami
Yang lama?
Please. Perasaan gami selalu update diff mania ente, putu -_-
puxtu
2,926 posts
Joined August 2013
puxtu

puxtu wrote:

thx for mods
not replied means..OK
update with self modding and fixed hitsounds: http://puu.sh/dCBQL/63c0f8afd7.rar
ps: gami pls pindahin yg MX ke creator's word. thank you
yg ini belum di update
Frobe
Former osu!catch Champion: 2015
743 posts
Joined January 2011
Frobe

GAMI wrote:

raianshimuzu wrote:

[Frobe's Platter]
nice diff. so i'm gonna point out 2 things
first of all, i wonder why you love putting "Triplets" (like in std mode) at some part of the music? just wondering okay. i'm not forcing you to change it :) because i think it is fit the song :v
01:02:765 (2,4) - try to make them line up in here. i feel like i'm playing light rain in this part. if you don't understand, simply Ctrl + G :/ instead, reduced the distance
thank you ^^

code
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TitleUnicode:Happy Ending Simulator
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ArtistUnicode:ナノ
Creator:GAMI
Version:Frobe's Platter
Source:Gunslinger Stratos 2
Tags:ガンスリンガーストラトス２ square enix  WEST GROUND puxtu raianshimuzu frobe
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304,308,121079,2,0,P|232:267|200:180,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,200,121584,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,308,121921,6,0,L|272:256,2,80,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,308,122427,2,0,L|240:256,2,80,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
28,268,122932,1,8,0:0:0:0:
268,264,123101,1,12,0:0:0:0:
GAMI
582 posts
Joined February 2014
Topic Starter
GAMI
already update it
tell me if your new diff is not being updated ^^

(srly jengkel gua ama update osu yg terbaru lol)
ursa
1,302 posts
Joined April 2010
ursa
*Mods ;3

It's not my Intense mod , so feel free to ignore

General Problem
Berdasarkan check & Testplay sih , bagi gw diffspread rada kacau di Overdose - Rain diff , soalnya penggunaan beat jump cenderung banyak di Rain & Overdose lebih ngedominan slider jump

Raian's overdose
Note : most of your flows depends on slider , well it's good but some part would be a little weird if you using it too many

00:45:742 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - well i feels this part like a mirror(copy-paste) for fot the side one , so i suggest , how about changing the shape between 1 part of this one
00:47:259 (2) - Move this beat to right [x=312] because 00:47:091 (1,2,3,4) - feels like missing hyper
01:03:271 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - well generally you can improve this part by making some 1/2 beat jump + slider instead of using only long slider
01:15:405 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - your stream is catchable & fine , but the structure stream feels kinda not clean.
01:20:967 (1,2) - it looks not cool if you make this one stacked
01:28:888 (3,4,5,1) - this part feels like missing hyper
01:45:742 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - technically it still catchable , but the structure are pain to catch, i suggest you should readjust this part
01:47:090 (1,2) - Missing Hyper
01:59:225 (1,2) - Missing Hyper on 01:59:225 (1) - Slider end , to fix this one , just move 01:59:730 (2) - to x = 0

Rain
Note : Bagian awal sih udah lumayan , tapi menurut gwa , mending di nerf dikit bagian dikit , soalnya rada overjumped x-x

00:43:046 (1,2,3,4) - Jumpnya kayak ngulang seperti bagian awal = - = ,saran gwa sih coba bikin jump yang berbeda aja
00:48:439 (1,2,3,4) - same case seperti di atas , cuman berbeda dikit
01:00:237 (4,1) - posisi 01:00:574 (1) - mending di pendekin dikit ( x = 192 )
01:08:327 (2,3) - posisi slider 01:08:748 (3) - ini lumayan aneh = - =
01:14:563 (1,2,3,4,5) - posisi jumpnya rada jauh dikit , saran gwa ,coba di atur dulu posisinya
01:25:517 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - gap distance di bagian ini terlalu tinggi , mending di pendekin dikit
01:27:876 (3,1) - missing hyper , saran gwa mending 01:27:876 (3) - di buat hyper aja
01:49:449 (2,1,2) - posisi slider ini 01:49:786 (1) - rada sakit banget klo gak di buat hyper
01:50:123 (2,1,2) - ^ sama
02:00:573 (1,2,3) - beberapa jump di buat hyper aja, klo menurut gw

Platter
Note : A clean flow for platter , that's all i want to said
00:43:046 (1,2) - feels the jumps is like repeating like the previous part
01:53:831 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - it feels so repeating , please make some improvement to this part


Salad
Note : Pattern Salad sih menurut gwa masih banyak bagian yang bisa di improve , cman hal ini aja yang gwa rasa bisa gwa sarankan

00:46:417 (1,2,3) - coba geser slider ini ke kiri dikit biar bisa buat jump dengan pattern selanjutnya
00:50:462 (3,4,5,1,2,3) - bagian ini kayaknya coba di buat seperti ini biar bagus *Pic
00:53:495 (4,1,2,3,4,5) - bagian ini sebenarnya masih bisa di improve dengan di tingkatin distancenya (ato gak di map ke kiri juga bakal bagus kok)
01:13:383 (1,2,3,4,5) - masih bisa di improve buat jump pattern ini
01:32:258 (1,2,3) - ^ sama

well , secara umum masih banyak bagian yang gwa bisa point di salad ,tapi cma itu dulu.

goodluck , PM balik klo udah dapat mod
Hunter Howl
335 posts
Joined July 2013
Hunter Howl

ursa wrote:

*Mods ;3

It's not my Intense mod , so feel free to ignore

General Problem
Berdasarkan check & Testplay sih , bagi gw diffspread rada kacau di Overdose - Rain diff , soalnya penggunaan beat jump cenderung banyak di Rain & Overdose lebih ngedominan slider jump

Raian's overdose
Note : most of your flows depends on slider , well it's good but some part would be a little weird if you using it too many

00:45:742 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - well i feels this part like a mirror(copy-paste) for fot the side one , so i suggest , how about changing the shape between 1 part of this one sorry. Biar keliatan nggak kaku untuk bagian ini
00:47:259 (2) - Move this beat to right [x=312] because 00:47:091 (1,2,3,4) - feels like missing hyper Applied
01:03:271 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - well generally you can improve this part by making some 1/2 beat jump + slider instead of using only long slider Masalahnya gua mau ngikutin vocalnya. jadi hanya sebagian yang gue ubah
01:15:405 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - your stream is catchable & fine , but the structure stream feels kinda not clean. done
01:20:967 (1,2) - it looks not cool if you make this one stacked Udah dipindahin (1) ke kanan :3
01:28:888 (3,4,5,1) - this part feels like missing hyper Applied on (4)
01:45:742 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - technically it still catchable , but the structure are pain to catch, i suggest you should readjust this part dah tuh
01:47:090 (1,2) - Missing Hyper Ekor kedua slider berasa off screen @_@
01:59:225 (1,2) - Missing Hyper on 01:59:225 (1) - Slider end , to fix this one , just move 01:59:730 (2) - to x = 0 Berasa offscreen juga :3

Makasih yah, Om/Tante /me run away
GAMI, INI Updatenya http://puu.sh/dKPb2/f07e35cc19.osu
Frobe
Former osu!catch Champion: 2015
743 posts
Joined January 2011
Frobe

ursa wrote:

Platter
Note : A clean flow for platter , that's all i want to said
00:43:046 (1,2) - feels the jumps is like repeating like the previous part
01:53:831 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - it feels so repeating , please make some improvement to this partd
well... i don't think that is have a problem. sorry :(
GAMI
582 posts
Joined February 2014
Topic Starter
GAMI
update done :D and thanks ursa for the mods ! :D
Vhy
678 posts
Joined November 2012
Vhy
as requested on queue

[General]
- you can disable "widescreen support" on all diff since you don't have any SB on it
- unnecessary hitsound files "soft-sliderslide" and "soft-sliderslide2" because in sliderslide in CtB are always unaudible. but im not sure about mania
- your BG resolution must be either 1024x768 or 1366x768 in order to get it rankable. the current are 1228x767 so you need to resize it
- only 2 combo colours? actually im not against this but it's better to add more colour as variety stuff to get the map more interesting. also these 2 combo is way to similar
- im not sure with the red timing point at 01:20:124. i know this is used to reset the metronome but i think it's wrongly placed and cause the main beat is off on timeline because it should be on big white tick instead. considering move that red timing to 01:19:956 to correct the stanza?. if you agree with this then don't forget to add another red timing at 01:43:045 to reset the stanza. remember this is just a suggestion to make the timeline easier to deal with, applying this won't affect any on the gameplay

[Salad]
unused greenline
00:50:546
00:51:136
00:57:877
01:09:591 - ~
01:09:675 - ^
01:09:928 - ^
01:10:012 - ^
01:10:265 - ^
01:10:349 - dunno if those 5% volume is intended. else just remove these
01:11:360
01:20:124 - it already has the red timing
00:46:754 (3,1) - the amount of spacing here is way too much. it's almost like the spacing is doubled from the previous note which is really surprising. considering reduce the spacing here and make it similar like 00:46:585 (2,3)
00:47:596 (4) - i would like to see this placed in the left of (3)
00:50:799 (5,1) - the spacing here should be higher than the previous pattern since the tone of the vocal here goes high. sort of like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2447315
00:52:821 (2,3,4) - make the spacing of these notes similar to balance the movement
00:53:832 (1) - maybe rotate it by 60 degrees anti-clockwise and move it around x:296 to have a better flow
00:55:518 (1) - just what is this slider? having that curve shape is fine but followed by two reverse could be annoying in gameplay. player will miss the droplet easily here. it's better to divide this to a two 1/1 slider and make a proper pattern
00:56:866 (1) - here as well
01:13:383 (1,2,3,4) - this part is really lack of movement if you compare it to 01:11:360 (1,2,3,4). since the background is similar, it should be at least have some consistency in distance matter
01:23:663 (2,3,4,5,1) - lack of movement. peoples are always expect to get more movement in kiai
01:39:674 (3,4,1) - ^

this diff still needs some works. both pattern and spacing are really inconsistent in some part. there are too much constant of 1/2 beat usage in pattern. also the overall hitsound can much better than this

[Frobe's Platter]
00:50:293 (2,3,4,5) - don't you feel weird when play this part? nice pattern there but the spacing between (3,4) is way too little. make its spacing similar to the next note to highlight the drum sound better
00:55:012 - imo it feels doesn't right to ignore this vocal. maybe add a beat here?
00:55:433 (3) - this can be removed because it's follow nothing. adding triplet here sounds unfitting with the tone of vocal on the music
00:59:057 (6,7) - regular triplet pattern? like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2447625
01:04:029 (2) - kind of overmap. not even fit to this calm part. considering change it to a single circle instead at 01:04:113
01:08:579 (5) - same here. just remove
01:09:563 (2) - orz why using 1/3 beat here? there's nothing in the music has this 1/3 beat. please move it to 01:09:506
01:09:900 (4) - same as above
01:19:956 - unused greenline. you can remove this

rest look acceptable

[Rain]
unused greenline
00:50:562
00:51:136
00:57:877
01:07:315
01:11:360
01:20:124
00:41:698 (1,2) - a HDash in this early part? it's better not to. let's just give the player an easy pattern to introduce with
00:50:630 (2,3) - swap their position and move (3) more to the left until a HDash spawn to make a flow
00:52:653 (2,3,4) - im not sure about this 2 HDashes at this part. i prefer to get rid one of these Hdash to simplify the pattern it self since you are constantly using 1/2 slider
00:53:832 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - lack of movement. please add some
01:03:102 (5,6) - stacking this as end of the stream doesn't go well. please add spacing here more more and more than the stream if needed. a HDash is also possible to add
01:17:933 (2) - why is this ends at blue tick?
01:34:955 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - this is just weird. why all these triplet doing there? the song didn't call for it so it's better to make a normal 1/2 slider or circle instead. this way will make that chain HDash to be more enjoyable

shut... all of your remain pattern were just has the same issue imo. please pay more attention on your pattern ans spacing. dunno why but i feels most of your pattern especially those constant 1/2 sliders pattern were randomly placed and flipped away, or maybe it is just me.

[Raian's Overdoze]
all fine for me. im just expecting the kiais could be more harder and interesting. that's all

not really bad overall. but watch out the spread between rain and overdose because i found the rain is a bit harder and the overdose is a bit easier
okay good luck with the map ;)
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