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Chu-Bra!! Cast - Shy Girls (TV Size)

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bmin11
5,438 posts
Joined October 2008
bmin11
*Cough Cough* Ok.... I recently figured out that there are too much BGs with their ass up

[Hard]
I suggest using grid level 3
00:27:300 (7) - spacing
00:30:615 (1) - spacing
00:52:721 (3) - spacing
01:12:931 (2,3) - spacing
01:17:036 (1) - spacing

[Normal]
00:51:457 (4) - spacing
00:53:352 (2) - ^
00:55:247 (2) - ^
Now I'm really confused which spacing I have to based on @_@. Just go through with your distance snaping from here. Sorry
01:15:773 (3) - I can see this clearly though. Spacing

[Easy]
00:34:615 (3) - Check this note again plz. It looks unsnapped to me
00:35:668 (1) - Unsnapped
00:49:563 (1) - I don't really suggest speed ups for [Easy]
00:54:615 (1) - spacing

Hitsound seems ok to me, but you should equalize your spacing (of course you can leave your jumps)
Vicho
887 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
Vicho

bmin11 wrote:

*Cough Cough* Ok.... I recently figured out that there are too much BGs with their ass up

[Hard]
I suggest using grid level 3
00:27:300 (7) - spacing
00:30:615 (1) - spacing
00:52:721 (3) - spacing
01:12:931 (2,3) - spacing
01:17:036 (1) - spacing

[Normal]
00:51:457 (4) - spacing
00:53:352 (2) - ^
00:55:247 (2) - ^
Now I'm really confused which spacing I have to based on @_@. Just go through with your distance snaping from here. Sorry
01:15:773 (3) - I can see this clearly though. Spacing

[Easy]
00:34:615 (3) - Check this note again plz. It looks unsnapped to me
00:35:668 (1) - Unsnapped
00:49:563 (1) - I don't really suggest speed ups for [Easy]
00:54:615 (1) - spacing

Hitsound seems ok to me, but you should equalize your spacing (of course you can leave your jumps)

All Fixed
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Leorda
I have apologize for you.
Your beatmap is a hentai background, so I can't mod your map.
Sorry about that...........

If you already changes some background, PM Me, and I mod it
If YOU can't find some non-hentai background, PM Me, and I star it
Dusty
870 posts
Joined June 2009
Dusty
Curved sliders are good. Different shapes are good.

[Easy]
Don't box map. Use more curves and triangles and symmetries and stuff.

I don't think the notes on the 1/4 beat are good for an Easy.

[Normal]
See Easy, although I do see some triangles, maybe use more of those.
Also, this feels about as hard as Easy...

[Hard]
argh, same complaints as Easy and Normal, sometimes the spacing is weird, I don't like it.
Shulin
1,333 posts
Joined August 2009
Shulin
General:

-- Offset: 320
-- You seem to be randomly placing hitsounds try to make a consistent pattern.
-- Where did the Hard go?
-- View > Grid Level > 2 or 3 ~ this will let you place beats better.
-- Soft hitsounds sound better on this song.
-- Kill the claps.

Normal:

-- Your silder velocity might be too high for a normal.
-- Hm, maybe try to follow either the beat or the vocals, you keep on moving between the two too rapidly making the rhythm hard to catch.
-- A lot of your spacing problems come from a low grid level use grid level 2 or 3.

00:26:036 (2,3,4,5,6) - Spacing.
00:50:826 (3,4) - Spacing.
00:55:878 (3) - ^
01:04:721 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:16:405 (4) - Spacing.

Easy:

The same problems as normal really... A useful guide might be AI Mod activate by Ctrl + Shift + A

Not much else I can suggest at present, make sure to use a bigger grid snap it will help :D
Vanmonky
986 posts
Joined June 2009
Vanmonky
As your request. Sorry for the delay.

Read this first for the icon explanation.
- [?] Asking for the second thought.
- [!] Fatal error. You have to fix this for sure.
- [No icon] Only a suggestion.

[General]
1. Set the preview position properly. Don't set it to almost-end section.
2. Always use distance snapping!
3. The placements of some notes are really bad.

[Easy]
Set the kiai time section such as the [Normal] diff.
00:02:878 (3) - Should be on 00:02:826.
00:05:405 (6) - Should be on 00:05:352.
00:07:931 (8) - Should be on 00:07:878.
00:08:299 (1) - The spinner is too short. It's hard for an easy diff. Should be on 00:08:194.
00:26:089 (2) - Should be on 00:26:194.
00:26:721 (3) - Should be on 00:26:826.
00:27:300 (4) - Should be on 00:27:457.
00:29:721 (2) - Should be on 00:29:668.
00:30:352 (3) - Should be on 00:30:300.
00:31:089 (1) - Should be on 00:30:931.
00:31:773 (2) - Should be on 00:31:563.
00:32:405 (3) - Should be on 00:32:194.
00:32:826 - Add note here.
00:34:615 (3) - Should be on 00:34:721.
00:35:615 (1) - Should be on 00:35:668. Add finish.
00:36:826 (3) - Should be on 00:36:931.
00:37:247 (4) - Should be on 00:37:563.
00:38:878 (2) - Should be on 00:38:826.
00:43:089 (1) - Should end on 00:44:510.
00:50:563 (2) - Should be on 00:50:510.
00:51:194 (3) - Should be on 00:51:142.
00:51:826 (4) - Should be on 00:51:773.
00:52:142 (1) - Should be on 00:52:089.
00:52:773 (2) - Should be on 00:52:721.
00:53:405 (3) - Should be on 00:53:352.
00:54:036 (4) - Should be on 00:53:984.
00:56:247 (3) - Should be on 00:56:194.
00:58:773 (3) - Should be on 00:58:721.
01:09:826 (1) - Should be on 01:09:773.
01:11:036 - Add note here.
01:17:247 (1) - Should be on 01:17:352. Should end on 01:18:615.

[Normal]
00:02:878 (1) - Should be on 00:02:826.
00:25:615 (1) - Should be on 00:25:563.
00:27:352 (6) - Should be on 00:27:300.
00:29:405 (3) - Should be on 00:29:352.
00:31:773 (3) - Should be on 00:31:721.
00:32:405 (4) - Should be on 00:32:352.
00:33:036 (1) - Should be on 00:33:142. Should end on 00:35:036.
01:08:352 (1) - Should end on 01:09:773.
01:23:194 (1) - Should be on 01:23:036. Should end on 01:24:773.
Star.
GladiOol
4,475 posts
Joined August 2008
GladiOol
[General]

That background is almost porn, please change it >_<
Offset 315.
Don't put in same source as artist name, please fix.

[Normal]
  1. 00:30:630 (1,2) - Spacing, (2) is too far away from (1).
  2. 00:49:262 (4,1) - Spacing, no BIG jumps in normal difficulty's please.
  3. 00:50:841 (3,4) - Spacing, (4) is too close to (3).
  4. 01:00:315 (2,3) - Spacing, (3) is too far away from (2).
  5. 01:04:736 (1,1) - Spacing, (1) is too close to (1).
  6. 01:05:367 (1) - Remove new combo.
  7. 01:08:367 (1) - Increase spinner length by 1/1
[Easy]

Decrease drain rate and overall difficulty by 2.
Normal and Easy have same slider velocity of 1.40, you should change this by making it in easy slower. (Say 1.00 ?)
A lot of notes are not snapped, but when you put in the right offset you should resnap all notes. Then run through the song if all notes are correctly snapped.
tieff
Featured Artist
2,254 posts
Joined March 2009
tieff
Shy tieff~

Download: Chu-Bra!! Cast - Shy Girls (TV Size) (Vicho-kun) [Shy tieff].osu
Vicho
887 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
Vicho

Dusty wrote:

Curved sliders are good. Different shapes are good.

[Easy]
Don't box map. Use more curves and triangles and symmetries and stuff.

I don't think the notes on the 1/4 beat are good for an Easy.

[Normal]
See Easy, although I do see some triangles, maybe use more of those.
Also, this feels about as hard as Easy...

[Hard]
argh, same complaints as Easy and Normal, sometimes the spacing is weird, I don't like it.

Fixed

Shulin wrote:

General:

-- Offset: 320
-- You seem to be randomly placing hitsounds try to make a consistent pattern.
-- Where did the Hard go?
-- View > Grid Level > 2 or 3 ~ this will let you place beats better.
-- Soft hitsounds sound better on this song.
-- Kill the claps.

Normal:

-- Your silder velocity might be too high for a normal.
-- Hm, maybe try to follow either the beat or the vocals, you keep on moving between the two too rapidly making the rhythm hard to catch.
-- A lot of your spacing problems come from a low grid level use grid level 2 or 3.

00:26:036 (2,3,4,5,6) - Spacing.
00:50:826 (3,4) - Spacing.
00:55:878 (3) - ^
01:04:721 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:16:405 (4) - Spacing.

Easy:

The same problems as normal really... A useful guide might be AI Mod activate by Ctrl + Shift + A

Not much else I can suggest at present, make sure to use a bigger grid snap it will help :D

Fixed

VanMoNky wrote:

As your request. Sorry for the delay.

Read this first for the icon explanation.
- [?] Asking for the second thought.
- [!] Fatal error. You have to fix this for sure.
- [No icon] Only a suggestion.

[General]
1. Set the preview position properly. Don't set it to almost-end section.
2. Always use distance snapping!
3. The placements of some notes are really bad.

[Easy]
Set the kiai time section such as the [Normal] diff.
00:02:878 (3) - Should be on 00:02:826.
00:05:405 (6) - Should be on 00:05:352.
00:07:931 (8) - Should be on 00:07:878.
00:08:299 (1) - The spinner is too short. It's hard for an easy diff. Should be on 00:08:194.
00:26:089 (2) - Should be on 00:26:194.
00:26:721 (3) - Should be on 00:26:826.
00:27:300 (4) - Should be on 00:27:457.
00:29:721 (2) - Should be on 00:29:668.
00:30:352 (3) - Should be on 00:30:300.
00:31:089 (1) - Should be on 00:30:931.
00:31:773 (2) - Should be on 00:31:563.
00:32:405 (3) - Should be on 00:32:194.
00:32:826 - Add note here.
00:34:615 (3) - Should be on 00:34:721.
00:35:615 (1) - Should be on 00:35:668. Add finish.
00:36:826 (3) - Should be on 00:36:931.
00:37:247 (4) - Should be on 00:37:563.
00:38:878 (2) - Should be on 00:38:826.
00:43:089 (1) - Should end on 00:44:510.
00:50:563 (2) - Should be on 00:50:510.
00:51:194 (3) - Should be on 00:51:142.
00:51:826 (4) - Should be on 00:51:773.
00:52:142 (1) - Should be on 00:52:089.
00:52:773 (2) - Should be on 00:52:721.
00:53:405 (3) - Should be on 00:53:352.
00:54:036 (4) - Should be on 00:53:984.
00:56:247 (3) - Should be on 00:56:194.
00:58:773 (3) - Should be on 00:58:721.
01:09:826 (1) - Should be on 01:09:773.
01:11:036 - Add note here.
01:17:247 (1) - Should be on 01:17:352. Should end on 01:18:615.

[Normal]
00:02:878 (1) - Should be on 00:02:826.
00:25:615 (1) - Should be on 00:25:563.
00:27:352 (6) - Should be on 00:27:300.
00:29:405 (3) - Should be on 00:29:352.
00:31:773 (3) - Should be on 00:31:721.
00:32:405 (4) - Should be on 00:32:352.
00:33:036 (1) - Should be on 00:33:142. Should end on 00:35:036.
01:08:352 (1) - Should end on 01:09:773.
01:23:194 (1) - Should be on 01:23:036. Should end on 01:24:773.
Star.

Fixed, thank you very much, thanks 4 star ;D

Gladi wrote:

[General]

That background is almost porn, please change it >_<
Offset 315.
Don't put in same source as artist name, please fix.

[Normal]
  1. 00:30:630 (1,2) - Spacing, (2) is too far away from (1).
  2. 00:49:262 (4,1) - Spacing, no BIG jumps in normal difficulty's please.
  3. 00:50:841 (3,4) - Spacing, (4) is too close to (3).
  4. 01:00:315 (2,3) - Spacing, (3) is too far away from (2).
  5. 01:04:736 (1,1) - Spacing, (1) is too close to (1).
  6. 01:05:367 (1) - Remove new combo.
  7. 01:08:367 (1) - Increase spinner length by 1/1
[Easy]

Decrease drain rate and overall difficulty by 2.
Normal and Easy have same slider velocity of 1.40, you should change this by making it in easy slower. (Say 1.00 ?)
A lot of notes are not snapped, but when you put in the right offset you should resnap all notes. Then run through the song if all notes are correctly snapped.

Fixed

tieff wrote:

Shy tieff~

Wow, thanks :D
DJPop
osu! Alumni
3,549 posts
Here since the beginning
DJPop
AudioLeadIn: 2685
PreviewTime: 315
Countdown: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0


Download: 12192 Chu-Bra!! Cast - Shy Girls (TV Size).rar
Vicho
887 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
Vicho

DJPop wrote:

AudioLeadIn: 2685
PreviewTime: 315
Countdown: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

Fixed!


[attachment=0:71f20]12192 Chu-Bra!! Cast - Shy Girls (TV Size).rar[/attachment:71f20]

Thanks :P
Teara
osu! Alumni
814 posts
Joined June 2009
Teara
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Nerv_Mario
146 posts
Joined October 2008
Nerv_Mario
Aquí va mi diff :d

Good Luck ;D

Download: Chu-Bra!! Cast - Shy Girls (TV Size) [Nerv's Hard].rar
4nto_old
1 post
Joined February 2009
4nto_old
yay! ojala quede bien ;)

Download: chu-bra - shy girls skin.rar
Vicho
887 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
Vicho

Teara wrote:

[General]

Not bad, all diffs are decent, but two really easy diffs, then two really insanes, no balance, this song requires a proper hard IMO.

[Easy]

00:05:367 (6) - Place on white tick
00:07:893 (8) - Place on white tick
00:26:170 (2) - Place on white tick
00:26:801 (3) - Place on white tick
00:29:683 (2) - Place on white tick
00:30:275 (3) - Place on white tick
00:30:907 (1,2,3) - Place on white tick
00:34:736 (3) - Place on white tick
00:35:683 (1) - ^
00:36:946 (3,4) - ^
00:50:486 (2,3,4) - ^
00:52:696 (2,3,4) - ^
00:56:170 (3) - ^
01:09:788 (2) - ^
01:17:367 (1) - Start/end white tick?

Please run AIMod and make sure all notes are distanced snapped properly =p Easy diffs should always be snapped perfectly IMO
All fixed

[Normal]

Normal's Offset is different from the rest?

00:32:352 (4) - Red tick? ( 1/4 beat selector )
Fixed

[Shy Tieff]

Hmm To many unexpected jumps, easy/hard/easy/hard =p this diff isnt constant :<

[DJPop's insane]

Rename to DJPop's Streams
No
Thanks for the star
DeadAlready
1,575 posts
Joined August 2008
DeadAlready
lol chu-bra XD

nice song~ >w</

stared~ <3

SPOILER
ah...a little problem here 0.0

why offset of [Easy].[Shy tieff] and [DJPop's Insane] are 315ms but offset of [Normal] and [Nerv's Hard] are 300ms XD?

I think gladi's 315ms is good :P, so please change these two diff's offset to 315ms and remember to resnap all notes :D
Lokamp
2,530 posts
Joined January 2009
Lokamp
...Ow. Another semi-hentai map. Take your breath, Lokamp...
...and then, for your modding.

[General] Add DJPop and Nerv_Mario to the tags!

Easy
00:36:946 (3,4, 1) - fix spacing
01:15:472 (2) - clap here

Normal
Simply fine!

Nerv's Hard
00:11:668 (4) - new combo
00:13:247 (spinner) - silence it!
00:40:089 (7) - set custom whistle only on this slider's start
01:14:194 (5,6) - move 5th a square up and 6th 21-2 squares up

Shy tieff
Sounds good!

DJPop's Insane
00:08:209 (3) - finish only on this slider's repeat

... I HATE caterigorically such semi-porn TV Sized maps...
... but I must admit the 4 mappers have done a BRILLIANT work with mapping and skinning!
Let's star this before I change my mind ;3
DJPop
osu! Alumni
3,549 posts
Here since the beginning
DJPop

Lokamp wrote:

DJPop's Insane
00:08:209 (3) - finish only on this slider's repeat
X
Babble
230 posts
Joined July 2009
Babble
Hiya~

Easy
Looks fine

Normal
Also looks fine

Tieff
WHOAH, turn overall diff down 1 or 2 notches. That's an absolute must IMO.

DJpop
Looks fine
Flower-tan
10 posts
Joined January 2010
Flower-tan
+star :)
Nerv_Mario
146 posts
Joined October 2008
Nerv_Mario
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Download: Chu-Bra!! Cast - Shy Girls (TV Size) (Vicho-kun) [Nerv's Hard].osu
Cyril Scarlet
osu! Alumni
3,877 posts
Joined May 2009
Cyril Scarlet
Chu-bura XD
Beuchi
osu! Alumni
2,288 posts
Joined February 2009
Beuchi
Hare el mod en ingles por los guest mappers y eso :P

Here are some suggestions for your map, you don't have to change them if you don't agree with me :P

Let's go!!

~All Diffs~
- 1st and 2nd Combocolours are so hard to read (specially the 2nd x.x) please change them.
- Already mentioned it, [Easy], [Shy tieff] and [DJPop's Insane] have a different offset. Change the offset on the other two diffs.
- Cool skin! Maybe make some scorebar-ki images? :3

~Easy~
- Resnap all the notes. AIMod doesn't say anything about not snapped notes but they aren't snapped on the timeline ._.'

00:08:209 (1) - I find this spinner too short for an Easy diff :/
00:25:578 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing.
00:34:657 (3) - Move to white tick.
00:43:104 (1) - Finish it on white tick.
00:52:657 (2,3,4) - Move to white tick.
00:58:657 (3) - ^

~Normal~
- Change offset to 315, then resnap. (Uh oh... seems that your map has a strange bug that crashes osu! when you try to change the offset... o_e)

~Nerv's Hard~
- Change offset to 315, then resnap. (Ahhh the same problem here TwT)

00:21:457 (3) - Sudden jump imo, I think it's better to follow the distance snap here...

~Shy tieff~
- Reduce Overall Difficulty, please e_e

00:46:893 (3,1) - Uhh... Too sudden jump :/
01:19:893 (11) - New Combo.

~DJPop's Insane~
00:43:499 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Seriously... -w-'
01:27:393 (1) - Finish it on white tick.

Good job :3 *star*
Starrodkirby86
osu! Alumni
3,739 posts
Here since the beginning
Starrodkirby86
[Normal]:
You have THREE inherited timing sections at the same area (Offset 300). Please remove the two you don't want there, then change the remaining one to 301. After that, add 15 to all offsets, and resnap your notes.

[Nerv's Hard]:
There is one inherited timing section at the same area as the main timing section. Change the inherited timing section's offset to 301, then add 15 to all offsets, then resnap your notes.
Breeze
osu! Alumni
4,949 posts
Joined March 2009
Breeze
[General]
  1. osb.file didn't used, please delete then full submit
[Easy]
  1. hitsound volume feel loud, I suggest 60-80, chorus luuder is OK
  2. 00:44:525 (1) - remove whistle, add finish
  3. I really don't like what you used of whistle :/ Anyway it's on depends on you, just personally think whistle didn't fit music
[Normal]
  1. hitsound volume feel loud, I suggest 60-80, chorus luuder is OK
  2. 00:09:142 (1) - remove whistle
  3. 01:23:352 (1) - start at 01:22:800, end at 01:24:773
[Nerv's Hard]
  1. 00:00:300 - 00:35:668 - This part feel hi volume loud, suggest use 60, others are fine
[Shy tieff]
  1. 01:24:472 (13) - Maybe put it out will more organized to hit :/

    love this diff :3
[DJpop's Insane]
  1. 00:31:104 (3-8) - why 3 is turn left, 4 is right, 5,6 is left, then 7,8 right, seemed erratically :/ on purpose? Well, I'm just inquisitive
  2. 00:35:683 Timing section - put it al ittle forward
nice map
star
xierbaliti
osu! Alumni
1,463 posts
Joined August 2008
xierbaliti
-easy-
Volume 7~7.5 is better. ._.
00:05:367 (6) - New combo?

-normal-
01:02:841 Add a circle here
01:03:157 (3,4) - Move them to 01:03:472 & 01:04:104.
01:15:472 Also,add a circle here and move 01:15:788 (4,5) - to 01:16:104 & 01:16:736

-Nerv-
00:21:457 (3) - This jump is not good. ._.

-tieff-
OA8 PLEASE ._.
00:30:472 (5,1) - change it like this? the short slider is hard to read.

DJPop
osu! Alumni
3,549 posts
Here since the beginning
DJPop

Breeze wrote:

[DJpop's Insane]
  1. 00:31:104 (3-8) - why 3 is turn left, 4 is right, 5,6 is left, then 7,8 right, seemed erratically :/ on purpose? Well, I'm just inquisitive
    Little trick.
  2. 00:35:683 Timing section - put it al ittle forward
    Only BPM changes, not include sounds.

Beuchi-chan wrote:

~DJPop's Insane~
00:43:499 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Seriously... -w-'
Snares :3
01:27:393 (1) - Finish it on white tick.
Sound ends there.
miccoliasms
491 posts
Joined April 2009
miccoliasms
<3
Nerv_Mario
146 posts
Joined October 2008
Nerv_Mario
:D

Download: Chu-Bra!! Cast - Shy Girls (TV Size) (Vicho-kun) [Nerv's Hard].osu
happy30
Featured Artist
2,064 posts
Joined August 2008
happy30
this map needs more timing help... D:
i take pop's diff as example..
on this part: 00:11:841 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - listen to this in 25% playback rate, the stream goes slower than how it's suposed to go :?
also, the part after this stream seems a little too late but... the ending doesnt sound off :? :? :?

[Easy]

nothing wrong, but a little boxy...

[Normal]

hmm, maybe consider using alot less red ticks..
at this high bpm and with the small amount of notes its hard to see when you need to hit the notes. I actually got a pretty low accuracy on this diff when I played this.

[nerv's hard]

offset +15

[Shy tieff]

pantsu

[DJPop's Insane]

pantsu


sorry i cant give pantsu now, lets all try to fix the timing :o
James2250
osu! Alumni
4,059 posts
Joined July 2008
James2250
easy:
odd this has same stats as normal (hp drain etc) but ok

normal:
01:16:104 (4,5,6) - seems strange that these 3 are the only spaced out notes on the entire map..might throw some people off?

hard:
looks fine

tieff:
looks fine

DJPop:
looks fine

although the timing does seem ok to me I would prefer you get it checked by a better timer before this gets pubbled (im not an expert at timing) as happy30 mentioned it
*star*
orioncomet
osu! Alumni
2,684 posts
Joined May 2009
orioncomet
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Vicho
887 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
Vicho

James2250 wrote:

easy:
odd this has same stats as normal (hp drain etc) but ok
Fixed

normal:
01:16:104 (4,5,6) - seems strange that these 3 are the only spaced out notes on the entire map..might throw some people off?
Fixed

hard:
looks fine

tieff:
looks fine

DJPop:
looks fine

although the timing does seem ok to me I would prefer you get it checked by a better timer before this gets pubbled (im not an expert at timing) as happy30 mentioned it
*star*
thankyou! :P
Sure
4,220 posts
Joined February 2009
Sure
Good job. ^^
But only one thing, hit skin bothers me.. I can't see well next note that under the hit skin. I will play this map after skin was deleted. Sorry :P
Anyway nice map. Star~*
Vicho
887 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
Vicho

ykcarrot wrote:

Good job. ^^
But only one thing, hit skin bothers me.. I can't see well next note that under the hit skin. I will play this map after skin was deleted. Sorry :P
Re-sized the hits *-*
Anyway nice map. Star~*
vivere
752 posts
Joined April 2009
vivere
Hi Vicho :P

General
* good skin :|
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Easy

00:08:209-spinner move up 00:09:788
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Normal

01:03:157-up a little circle
01:03:788-that the circle is to the height of circle 4
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Nerv's Hard

01:10:420(2,3)-just a little bit on 2 of 3 to make it the same space as 3 and 4
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Shy tieff

00:02:841-There is plenty of space between 10 and combo combo 1, could reduce :?:
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will be a great Beatmap :)

+Star ;)
cHaLo_MaLo
1 post
Joined February 2009
cHaLo_MaLo

vivere wrote:

Nerv's Hard

01:10:420(2,3)-just a little bit on 2 of 3 to make it the same space as 3 and 4
I will not, because I followed the distance snap to the letter
Nerv_Mario
146 posts
Joined October 2008
Nerv_Mario

cHaLo_MaLo wrote:

vivere wrote:

Nerv's Hard

01:10:420(2,3)-just a little bit on 2 of 3 to make it the same space as 3 and 4
I will not, because I followed the distance snap to the letter
Sorry , I was in the my friend's account xDDDD
Derekku
COOL DUDE
7,270 posts
Joined March 2009
Derekku
[General]
*I'm a bit wary of the bg and other skin elements, but I've seen worse so I'm not really sure how to judge these orz
*Comboburst is too large. Max width allowed is 500px, so please resize it accordingly and do a full submission.
*Cute skin. I like the pretty colors and numbers x3

[Easy]
00:10:420 (1) - I'd have this a bit closer to the center since it's after the spinner.
00:57:157 (1,2) - There's a bit of a gap between these, so move (1) up please :3

[Normal]
00:35:683 (1) - A bit closer to the center, please o:
01:03:157 (4) - Too far from previous.

[Nerv's Hard]
00:42:788 - Starting kiai here where there's no note feels awkward to me. I'd put it on the white tick or wait until the downbeat of the new measure =x
00:44:841 - ^
01:22:262 - ^ At least put this one on the start of 01:22:420 (1) XP

[Shy tieff]
*O_O Such high overall diff... you probably wouldn't wanna lower it a tick, would you? XP
00:23:051 (1) - Could you remove one repeat off of this so that attempting to hit the next note won't result in a combo break? x_x; (same thing for the many other kick sliders in this map)
01:24:946 (1) - I'd move this back to the red tick and extend 1/2.

[DJPop's Insane]
So streamy.. @_@ Looks fine, though =3

Offset: Seems to be right-on. Great job, everyone! :B
tieff
Featured Artist
2,254 posts
Joined March 2009
tieff
Pantsu~

Download: Chu-Bra!! Cast - Shy Girls (TV Size) (Vicho-kun) [Shy tieff].osu
Nerv_Mario
146 posts
Joined October 2008
Nerv_Mario
asdf

Download: Chu-Bra!! Cast - Shy Girls (TV Size) (Vicho-kun) [Nerv's Hard].osu
Lizbeth
osu! Alumni
1,731 posts
Joined August 2008
Lizbeth
o.o perdon por la tardanza.. culpo la uni ><

DJPop's Insane
00:43:262 - place inherited section 1/4 before the note

Nerv's Hard
00:02:051 (6) - i think fits better if you shorten by 1/2 beat
00:48:314 - place inherited section 1/4 before the note (there r few more like this)

Shy tieff
all good, fun diff ^^

Normal & Easy
ok!
DJPop
osu! Alumni
3,549 posts
Here since the beginning
DJPop

Lizbeth wrote:

DJPop's Insane
00:43:262 - place inherited section 1/4 before the note
Nothing different, that timing section only changes BPM from x0.5 to x1.
Derekku
COOL DUDE
7,270 posts
Joined March 2009
Derekku
Comboburst: Fixed

Easy: ircfix
Normal: Good~
tieff: Good, thanks!
Nerv: Good, thanks!

Pubbled! :B
Mafiamaster
osu! Alumni
3,460 posts
Joined July 2008
Mafiamaster
[Easy]
00:48:946 (5) - Move a tad bit to the left so it's under 2.
01:06:315 (3) - Move up a little bit so it's aligned with 01:04:420 (4).
01:06:946 (4) - Stack on fading 4.

[Normal]
00:03:472 (3) - Move down a little bit so it's evenly spaced in this combo.
45,013ms - Why is this timing section 1.0x speed? It's not like you have sliders or anything here. Change it to 0.5

Edit: Bubbled
Ephemeral
Inland Empire
3,963 posts
Joined April 2009
Ephemeral
Default Font Set Check: FAILED (Incomplete set) [default-comma.png, default-dot.png elements missing]
Score Font Set Check: FAILED (Incomplete set) [score-comma.png, score-dot.png elements missing]

Timing sounds finicky, probably 305 offset despite it sounding early in metronome

Delete the empty .osb

Reduce tick rate on DJPop's Insane to 0.5

Kiai is inconsistent across effectively every difficulty (tieff's difficulty probably has the best kiai section despite it being almost half the song)
Vicho
887 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
Vicho
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
happy30
Featured Artist
2,064 posts
Joined August 2008
happy30
djpop:
00:11:841 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - still sounds weird when playing with 25% playback...

but i guess it doesnt matter much...
Ephemeral
Inland Empire
3,963 posts
Joined April 2009
Ephemeral
Find another BAT to restore the bubble then
Starrodkirby86
osu! Alumni
3,739 posts
Here since the beginning
Starrodkirby86
Hi!

[Easy]
Not snapped.

The next problemas~

The sectionfail and pass can use a bit of resizing. I kind of resized them for you, so go for that. :lol:

I can't think of anything else for right now...So gogogo?



Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
16,650 posts
Joined August 2008
Andrea
[Easy]

01:09:157 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:09:788 (2) - New combo.
01:13:578 (1) - Remove new combo.

[Nerv's Hard]

Use the same kiai of the other difficulties.

01:03:472 (4) - New combo.

[Shy tieff]

01:19:578 (9) - New combo.
WyndII
777 posts
Joined October 2008
WyndII
hi! Ｏ(≧∇≦)Ｏ
Lol, Chu-bra. xD

Mod:

SPOILER
Apparently, I did not found any major issues XD

SHY STAR!!!
Vicho
887 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
Vicho

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Easy]

01:09:157 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:09:788 (2) - New combo.
01:13:578 (1) - Remove new combo.
Fixed

[Nerv's Hard]

Use the same kiai of the other difficulties.
No.

01:03:472 (4) - New combo.
Ok, Fixed

[Shy tieff]

01:19:578 (9) - New combo.
Fixed
Thank you :3
Starrodkirby86
osu! Alumni
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Here since the beginning
Starrodkirby86
o.o
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
16,650 posts
Joined August 2008
Andrea
Good enough.

Ranked~
Ephemeral
Inland Empire
3,963 posts
Joined April 2009
Ephemeral
I sure hope that offset was fixed.

:|
happy30
Featured Artist
2,064 posts
Joined August 2008
happy30
Offset 319 BPM 190
Offset 11.687 BPM 200
Offset 12.928 BPM 190
Offset 45.942 BPM 190

:|

13:00 till 25:00 is definitely off
Gabi
2,554 posts
Joined December 2008
Gabi
yeah, happys timing changes seems to be more correct. atleast

Offset 11.687 BPM 200
Offset 12.928 BPM 190
EvianBubble
339 posts
Joined October 2009
EvianBubble
Uhm, I'm not sure if this is in the right place but "the link has expired" so I can't download it. Help? I really want to play this song, I really like the anime so far :P

EDIT: Nevermind, I was able to download it
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