This has been the most tiring mapset I've checked so far...
[General]
[Salad]
[Winda's Platter]
[toybot's Rain]
[DS96's Deluge]
I don't know how will you manage to make DS96's Deluge have more max combo/max score than GAMI's Overdose. Good luck with that, and with the mapset. You'll really need it.
[General]
- Fix BG. Currently it only credits DragonSlayer96 for his CTB diff. All the other ctb mappers are missing.
- In some diffs the hitsounds are 95% drowned by the music and can't be heard at all.
- Delete bookmarks
General
- Hitsounds problem I mentioned before
- 00:09:819 (2,3) - Decrease the distance a bit, just a little bit
- 00:15:152 (2,3) - ^
- 00:18:930 (3,4) - ^
- 00:36:708 (3,4) - ^
- 00:37:597 (5,1) - ^
- 01:14:261 (1,2) - Move them to the right
- I can do the first Kiai Time without dashing at all, I suggest the following:SPOILER
- 01:18:594 (2,3) - Maybe you can add a jump. Also, make this slider a bit more vertical
- 01:22:427 (1,2,3,4) - Ctrl + H
- 01:25:760 (3,4) - Maybe you can add a jump
- 01:28:094 (1,2,3,1) - This is too boring
- 01:29:760 (4,5) - Maybe you can add a jump
- 01:35:594 (1,2,3) - Add more distance!
- 01:40:260 (1,2,3,4) - Add more distance
- 01:58:925 (2) - This is weird as it doesn't follow vocals
- 02:31:035 (1,2,3) - These two jumps having the same distance doesn't fit, as the music hints otherwise.
- Again, the second Kiai can be done almost without dashing. And there this one part 02:48:201 (1,2,3,4) - that it's extremely weird
- 03:15:201 (3,4) - JUMP!
- 03:17:868 (3,4) - ^
- 03:27:868 (2) - This one is too close to the previous note
General
- There are too many blank spaces in the timeline... map them.
- 00:02:819 (5,6) - Add distance here
- 00:03:374 (1,2,3,4) - ^
- 00:07:374 - Map that break; Julie and toybot mapped it
- 00:39:597 (1,2) - These should be 1/2 sliders. Also, (2) should be at 00:40:041 -
- 00:42:152 (6) - Delete this note
- 00:42:485 (1,2,3) - These sliders don't fit the music
- 00:45:485 (3) - Delete note
- 00:46:708 - Why is there nothing mapped here.
- 00:47:374 (3) - These slider doesn't fit the music
- 00:50:263 (3,1) - These sliders don't fit the music. Ok, if I keep poiting out these sliders I will freak out. Seriously, remap them all.
- 00:55:485 (2) - Delete note
- 01:07:597 (1,2,3) - Add more movement
- 01:09:374 (1,2,3) - ^
- 01:28:260 (1,2) - Decrease distance
- 01:28:594 (3) - End this repeat slider at 01:29:260 -
- 01:56:925 (5,6,7) - Nope, change the pattern
- 01:59:148 (16,17) - Don't stack
- 02:05:592 (1,2) - ^
- 02:14:036 (1) - Slider head doesn't fit the music
- 02:39:368 (2,3,4,5) - Add movement here. It's too boring.
- 02:43:702 (5) - Move to 02:43:535 -
- 02:44:702 (7) - 1/2 slider
- 02:46:868 (2) - Move to 02:47:035 -
- 02:47:535 (4) - Move to 02:47:701 - and make it a 1/1 repeat slider
- 02:51:368 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Why is this barely audible...
General
I'll skip toybot's Rain on purpose. While it can be improved, it's far better than the rest of the diffs. I'll just point two things:
[GAMI's Overdose]I'll skip toybot's Rain on purpose. While it can be improved, it's far better than the rest of the diffs. I'll just point two things:
- Delete the bookmark forest plz
- 00:03:597 (2,3,1) - This pattern is still a NO for me. I have already told you, but I'll insist. Forever.
- 00:03:374 (1) - Remove New Combo
- 00:03:930 (4,5,1,2) - I think this part is weird, specially the jump from (1) to (2)
- 00:07:374 - Map that break
- 00:05:597 (4,5,1,2,3) - Make (4) a 1/4 slider. Map the rest like this, as I don't think these 1/4 hyperdashes are really fitting.
- 00:19:152 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I think this pattern is too hard
- 00:20:485 (1,2,1,2) - Again, I'd prefer this as 1/4 sliders
- 00:23:152 (4) - End this on the red tick; there's even a vocal on it.
- 00:21:930 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Distance on this part is really weird. They are all different from (1) to (2), from (2) to (3), from (3) to (4) and from (4) to (1) and it feels awkward to play.
- 00:24:485 (3,4) - Distance is too large
- 00:30:041 (3,4,5,6) - Equal each distance
- 00:34:708 (3,4,1) - No, the jump from (3) to (4) isn't even fitting.
- 00:36:930 (4,5,1,2) - The flow in this part is bad. I would move (5) to the right and Ctrl + G (1,2)
- 00:37:819 (1,2,3) - Delete (2,3), make (1) a repeat slider and add a circle here 00:38:930 -
- 00:44:263 (2,3) - I would put (2) facing right
- 00:46:041 (1,2,3) - These jumps are just ugly.
- 00:47:374 (3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Try to fix the flow in this part
- 00:54:374 (2) - Erase this note
- 00:55:041 (1) - Erase this note
- 00:57:374 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2) - Jump from a red tick to a blue one? That's not right. The stream feels overmapped to me, too.
- 01:00:930 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^. Plus the triangles placed like this are really hard
- 01:04:485 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Same thing. Don't put jumps like that on blue ticks.
- 01:07:597 (1,1) - No need to NC (2). Also, they're too close to the border after the spinner.
- 01:11:152 (1,2) - (1) is too close to the border after the spinner.
- 01:11:597 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - Make them 1/4 sliders please
- 01:14:261 (5) - NC
- 01:15:594 (9,10) - Add another repeat to (9). Make (10) a 1/2 slider and start it on 01:16:261 -
- 01:17:844 (7,8) - No hyperdash here
- 01:20:261 (4) - Make it a circle
- 01:23:177 (4) - Delete
- 01:24:177 (3) - ^
- 01:25:844 (1,3) - ^
- 01:26:260 (1) - ^. Add circle at 01:26:427 -
- 01:38:260 (1) - End this at 01:39:260 -
- Click here for a forum break02:09:370 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This looks completely overmapped; I would delete a lot of notes. Also, this kind of patterns (that you have used a lot already) 02:17:370 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) should be used really carefully.
- 02:23:147 - This part is off. Fix the timing
- 02:24:036 (1,2,3,4) - Fix the flow
- 02:27:592 (2,3,4,5) - Fix the flow
- 02:42:368 (1,2,3,1,2) - Why don't you follow the vocals here? It will create more variety on the timeline (currently, it's just a spam of 1/2 sliders + the ocassional 5-plet stream)
- 03:24:118 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Overmapped.
This has less max combo and score than both Rain and Overdose. Fix that, or this map won't get far.
I'll shortly mod this, this mapset was far too tiring. I'll point out a few things that need to be changed IMO
- 00:01:819 (1,2) - Too large
- 00:02:263 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Try to do something else with those repeat sliders (place them on the other direction, or don't hyperdash them, dunno). Also, distance between (3,4,5) is really weird.
- 00:10:708 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Fix flow in this part. Lead guitar is hinting triplets
- 00:12:485 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same suggestion as GAMI's Overdose. This should be 1/4 sliders, nothing else (like 4). Also, delete (5).
- 00:15:819 (2,4,5) - I won't point these kind of patterns anymore. Just use them carefully, they're extremely hard.
- 00:38:930 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Fix this
- 01:47:857 (1,2,3) - Fix this
- 02:32:702 (1,2) - It's too far
- 02:56:535 (6,7,8) - Nope
- 02:57:035 (9) - This doesn't fit
I don't know how will you manage to make DS96's Deluge have more max combo/max score than GAMI's Overdose. Good luck with that, and with the mapset. You'll really need it.