1. Hard (3.26 stars, 478 notes)
2. Insane (4.06 stars, 649 notes)
3. Normal (1.6 stars, 252 notes)

10nya wrote:

frost w/ delis

this is masterpiece .w.

Delis wrote:

Give me some examples before start working on it, I wonder how you will make sb for this song (use anime images or just some effects to the BG with lyrics or something else)
I think the images which are related to the anime (probably buddy complex, I'm not really sure about..) don't fit to this song since the song was not probably using for both OP/ED. also I kinda hesitate to use anime sb that I haven't watched series, this is up to you though.

Kloyd wrote:

自分のモッドは極めて個人的で、Kloyd自身のFeelingに元にしているため、これは提案と言うよりは意見並べに過ぎないということに気づいてください！

[Insane]distance-snap basedで個人的に好きな譜面です。 自分のpartは1回もdistance snap使ってない...LOL

01:07:481 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - ここのヒットサウンド提案
01:08:620 (1) - の頭にFinish
01:10:139 (2) - 同一
01:10:329 (3) - 足元のFinish除外

01:18:873 (4,5,6) - ここもうちょっとサークル２をめぐる正三角っぽくなってほしいです

01:20:772 (1) - ふぃにっしゅ
この後の同じセッションは同じくフィニッシュ入れたり消したりして欲しいです

02:30:646 (3,4) - もうちょっとblanketになって欲しいです OKかんぺき

03:03:114 (2,3) - ここに0.02のspacing置いたのは意図的なもの？ どうやって直すんですかX_X
03:45:266 (13) - 俺だったらここに低速スライダーで終えたけどこれもこれなりにいい感じ

何も書いてない所はFrostmourneのパートなので、本人に直すか、こっちで直すか聞いてみます。
[Hard]

00:18:873 (1,2,3) - ここのスペーシング変化は意図的？ 特に意図は無いですが、1と3の隙間を同じくらいにしてるのとそれほど難易度は変化しないでジャンプみたいな配置にしてるので意図的と言えばそうかも知れないですxx
00:49:633 (1,2) - 0.01はまぁいいか OK_

ヒットサウンドはInsaneと同様です Insaneのヒットサウンドそのまま持ってきたんでとりあえずFrostの返事待ってから変えるかどうか決めますx.xb
02:14:316 (1) - こいつの流れがちょっといきなりっぽい感じはしますけど、、配置としてはここに置くのが最適だと判断しますのでとりあえずpass ですね、恐らく1/1のblankがあるので大丈夫...かと思います..

02:29:127 (3,4,5,1) - 配置の方だけどこれはどうでしょうか　　http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1978669 合ってるかわかりませんが試してみました～

03:17:544 (4,5,6,7) - 曲の流れをkloyd的に読み感じた後の提案ですけどサークルを一直線に配置するよりはちょっとズレて置いた方はどうかなと。。
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1978676 直線大好きクンなのでここは保留させてくださいorz もしかしたら後で変えるかも知れませんが今の所は！


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Hitsoundは同様
＋02:46:215 (4) - drum tomがあまり似合わない気がします softwhistleはどうでしょう 後ろの音に合わせて付けてみたんですがどうなんでしょう...少し他の方の意見を待って見ます！

03:37:861 (3) - ちょっと下に置きましょう おっと、、直しました！






くだらないモッドなんですけど助けになって欲しいでしゅ

グッドラックです！

except collab diff
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyric\Diff Delis.png",320,240
 S,0,18873,,0.7440001
 F,0,18873,20392,0,1
 M,0,18873,24949,106,165,116,165
 F,0,20392,23430,1
 F,0,23430,24949,1,0

Collab diff
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyric\Diff DF.png",320,240
 S,0,18873,,0.7440001
 F,0,18873,20392,0,1
 M,0,18873,24949,106,165,116,165
 F,0,20392,23430,1
 F,0,23430,24949,1,0

1. AR+1 しませんか？ Normal AR3で Hard AR7まで飛ぶのはdiff gapが大きすぎると思います
2. 00:23:051 (2) - 正しく音をとるならこうじゃない？
   
3. 01:17:354 (2,3) - こっちと音取り統一しない？02:24:190 (3,4) -
4. 02:44:506 (1) - add clap ? 入れ忘れ？

1. 00:22:481 (6,1) - この間隔は非常にわかりづらいです、おそらくミス？
2. 01:18:304 (6,7,8,9) - やりづらいなあ・・・Normalとのバランスもあるし全部スライダーで拾ってもいいかもしれない
   
3. 01:54:000 (3) - DSなめてる
4. 02:42:987 (2) - 違う形のほうが好ましい(完全に重ねてるのはみづらい)
5. 02:53:620 - 入れるの忘れてる
   
6. Normalとの差がかなり広いからそれだけが心配なところ

1. 03:37:290 (2) - unsnapped

1. 02:14:316 (1) - ここもっと囲い厨できると思う！(Satellite風mod)
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 02:35:582 (1) - nazi(x141y314)02:34:063 (2) - の囲い厨したい。
   [Hard]
   
   1. 00:25:329 - Normalとbreak合わせたほうがgood! って前mod見なおしたらSatelliteさんも言ってるけど直ってない感じかなこれ
   2. 03:23:810 (4) - 前後でdsバラけちゃってる感あるから揃えたほうが良さそう。
      
      このHard面白い。
   [Insane]
   
   1. Satelliteさんということ無いね~ってお話してました。
      流れいいしHitSoundsいいし図形綺麗やしもしかしてpro...わかる。それな。

1. referring to the exsited approved map:
   Artist:ちょうちょ
   Romanised Artist: ChouCho

1. 00:15:835 (1) - you missed a clap here on slider tail.
2. 00:36:152 (5) - could probably add claps on slider head and slider tail~
3. 00:49:253 (4,1) - you may want to swap NCs here.
   
4. 01:09:000 - a circle here fits pretty well with the vocal...highly suggested as you followed the vocal slightly afterwards 01:09:759 (3) -
5. 01:16:405 (1) - a whistle to catch the piano sound?
   
6. 01:17:354 (2) - probably here as well! i also suggest using similar rhythm like 02:24:190 (3,4) - . the rhythm is totally the same to me ;-;
7. 02:15:835 - circle? x.x
8. 02:23:240 (2) - try adding a whistle on slider head.
9. 02:24:190 (3) - ^ on slider head as well
10. 02:24:759 (4) - ^ slider head.. try it!
11. 02:36:721 (2,3,4,5) - have a try on rhythm like this? follows the vocal better with a slider to emphasize the drums.
    
    img

    
12. 03:14:316 (5) - forgot a whistle on slider head
13. 03:36:342 (1) - ^ on slider tail

1. 00:39:759 (6) - try placing this visually in distance snap:
   
   img

   
2. 01:17:164 (3) - a whistle here as i assume you're placing whistle on vocals.
3. 02:13:367 (8) - whistle here as well.
4. 03:32:924 (7) - a clap like you did in Normal?
5. 03:39:570 - not using soft whistle for this part like you did in Normal? 0 0

1. has the same HP drain as Hard, highly suggest changing it to something 6-7 for a better spread.
2. 01:49:253 (4) - quite confusing (at least for me :<) to read both because AR8 and overlapping with 01:49:633 (6) - x.x. try to move it to 01:48:114 (7) - here? much less tricky this way with better flow!
3. 01:54:570 (1) - try to use ctrl+J, flows better for me~
4. 01:55:139 (2) - this one too if you apply the one above.

Minakami Yuki wrote:

Something irc discussend about the metadata:

SPOILER

2014-08-29 10:48 Minakami Yuki: the song is from Buddy Complex?
2014-08-29 10:49 Delis: I have no idea, frost gave me this
2014-08-29 10:49 Delis: probably...
2014-08-29 10:49 Minakami Yuki: it's from the album of Buddy Complex's ed
2014-08-29 10:49 Minakami Yuki: but i'm not sure is this song from the anime..
2014-08-29 10:49 Minakami Yuki: album name あの空に還る未来で

8 months ago Ticket modding

1. Grey——Just some complaints.
2. Black——My personal suggestions.
3. Bold——Highly recommended.
4. Red——(Maybe) Unrankable, you have to fix it.

[General]

1. Aritist: ちょうちょ
   Romanised Aritist: Choucho
2. 03:05:772 - add a kiai time here, because it's the final part here... don't want to add kiai ;w;

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• 
  Nice placement, so most recommendations are hitsounds.

1. 00:13:557 (2) - also clap on the head
2. 00:15:076 (4) - 00:18:114 (4) - ^ ehh why, I can't listen to any clap sound from the music there.
3. 00:16:215 - consider adding a tick sound here? sorry I hate using tick sound
4. 00:15:835 (1) - clap on the end
5. 00:19:633 (2) - clap and whistle on the head? only whistle
6. 00:21:152 (3) - clap on the head
7. 00:45:076 (4) - whistle on the repeat yeah
8. 00:48:304 (3) - whistle on the head yaa
9. 00:56:848 (3) - add drum sampleset on the end and 00:57:608 (4) - ? imo it fits. feels kinda out of place for me ,_,
10. 01:04:253 (2) - whistle on the head?
11. 01:17:354 (2) - ^ I would like to keep the whistle patterns as is
12. 01:24:570 (1,2) - swap nc? added on 2
13. 02:13:557 (5,1) - blanket? oke
14. 02:21:911 (3) - move to 11,179 I'm grid lover B( did something though
15. 02:23:240 (2) - whistle on the head? sampleset drum instead
16. 02:34:063 (2,1) - make a blanket?
17. 02:43:177 (3,2) - ^ no idea how to do 2nd one, 1st one is done
18. 03:20:013 (1,2) - swap nc? added on 2 as well

[Hard]

1. You forget to add a spinner at the beginning. hah yes...
2. 00:20:202 (1) - whistle on the head? sure
3. 00:39:759 (6,7) - a bit close. I recommend to move 00:40:139 (7) - to 108,120, also 00:40:709 (8) - a little lower yeah
4. 01:12:418 (5,6) - stack 6 at 5's end? just like 01:00:266 (6,7) - the stack was no reason to do, so I would like to keep here x.x
5. 02:18:683 (5) - I recommend to move this out of 02:18:114 (4) - nahh
6. 03:04:823 (5,1,2,3) - a little suggestion, making a raising volume here. kk
7. 03:39:380 (4) - NC here? lmao I didn't notice the NC is continuing for 3 stanzas, fixed on my own (almost followed your suggestions)
8. 03:43:937 (6) - ^
9. 03:44:886 (9,10,11,12) - http://puu.sh/be8NZ/93fc894d2e.jpg instead? o nice

[Insane]

1. 00:12:608 (2) - nc? uumm seems no need there.
2. 01:24:570 (5) - it is so high that it may be hidden by the hp bar. For more safe here, I recommend to change the curve of 01:23:240 (2) - and make them low a little. oke
3. 03:04:823 - same mentioned in hard sure
4. 03:37:290 (2) - AI MOD SAID UNSNAPED fixeddd
   
   not much to say, really a good relaxing song and diff!
   wonderful work!

Good luck~
star!

Rakuen wrote:

Hi~

A mod for you ♥

[General]
ChuoCho ♥

[Normal]
00:17:354 (3,4) - Don't suggest the pattern which both sliders humped each other, might wanna try this (rotate 45* anticlockwise and put on X:112 Y:120): oke

Image

00:25:519 - Can let the break start here seems the guitar sound there, and then lead in at 00:29:506 - it seems not working well so
01:25:709 (2) - NC here can be optional for rhythm change y
01:49:063 (5) - Move to X:417 Y:197 for better blanket, or you prefer to adjust the shape manually this looks already good blanket and i'm grid lover lol, adjusted by myself anyway!
02:07:481 (4) - Move to X:276 Y:188 to make it same distance between 02:05:962 (2,3) - and 02:06:721 (3,4) - , refer the pic (gap between sliders): k

Image

02:09:000 (2) - Move 2 tiny grid to the North, would look better like the pic: kk

Image

02:13:557 (5,1) - Might wanna blanket this. In the 2nd point of slider 02:14:316 (1) - , locate it to X:192 Y:132 , and 3rd point to X:164 Y:40. Refer pic: done

Image

03:21:152 (2) - NC can be optional here for rhythm change okk

Nice arrangements, nothing much can be found

[Hard]
00:15:266 (7) - Try moving to X:216 Y:224, making them look like properly snapped (not too far from 00:14:696 (6) - ): sure

Image

00:25:519 - Break here? forgot to put at 00:25:329 for consistency with normal
00:39:759 (6,7,8) - Can try this pattern cuz humped sliders doesn't look good imo, feel free to keep it for mapping style: current one looks much better x.x

Image

00:47:164 - Put a whistle here may sound better I can't hear the sound which is similar to whistle sound, unless you meant default whistle
02:28:747 (2) - I would stack the tail of slider on head of 02:27:608 (3) - to make it look "not bad stacked" seems overall of the map doesn't have much stacks, and gives a clean feel kk
03:21:532 (3) - Can try to point the slider tail a little up to avoid too close to slider border of 03:21:911 (4) - was not that close but fixed :/
03:35:202 (2) - Move to X:158 Y:288 to make it looks spaced with tail of 03:34:823 (1) - (rendering them bigger gap), refer pic: k

Image

03:38:810 (3) - Move the tail point of slider to X:98 Y:108 to look same as 03:38:241 (2) - (nazi) I copied the pattern to make the same pattern with 03:36:342 (1,2,3) - also I have no idea it actually changes..
03:39:570 (5) - NC here? To make the NC looks consistent
03:44:127 (7) - NC here too (optional) yaya

[Insane]
00:24:949 (3) - NC here instead of 00:24:570 (1) - to lead to rhythm change. Or unstacking it might look better I personally don't like to put NC on an object which is stacked. also no need to unstack here..
00:37:101 (3) - NC here instead of 00:36:721 (1) - for constant combo (on the big white tick) ^
00:58:177 (6) - NC for "kiai" (I mean chorus) part, if you agree remove combo for 00:58:557 (1) - yea
01:16:405 (3) - Ctrl+G might work better for the flow + cursor movement indeed, changed!
01:28:747 (11) - NC here instead of 01:29:506 (1) - for consistency we don't like to put a NC for the last object of streams, dunno but at least I personally dislike it.
03:20:392 (1,1) - Remove the NC to increase HP drain by a little, for me it's not necessary to put a new combo here on Insane I personally don't want to change such a cool nc usage
03:24:190 (12) - NC here for consistency, remove the on from 03:24:949 (1) - same

Cool map, smooth to play

litoluna wrote:

De~li~s~nya~n
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1. 02:14:316 (1) - ここもっと囲い厨できると思う！(Satellite風mod) Satelliteさんの囲いします
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 02:35:582 (1) - nazi(x141y314)02:34:063 (2) - の囲い厨したい。ゆいこんぬの囲い厨はじめました
   [Hard]
   
   1. 00:25:329 - Normalとbreak合わせたほうがgood! って前mod見なおしたらSatelliteさんも言ってるけど直ってない感じかなこれ saTElliteさんは別の部分ですねたぶん治しました
   2. 03:23:810 (4) - 前後でdsバラけちゃってる感あるから揃えたほうが良さそう。dsなめてる
      
      このHard面白い。
   
   [Insane]
   
   1. Satelliteさんということ無いね~ってお話してました。
      流れいいしHitSoundsいいし図形綺麗やしもしかしてpro...わかる。それな。わかる#Frostmourne

Ranked　まってまっす！(2回め

Pereira006 wrote:

Hi

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hitsound:

• 
  01:27:228 (4) - missing add whistle in start slider, because you have done pattern hitsound since there's no sound..
  02:10:519 (4) - ^ same yeah
  02:22:291 (4) - missing add whistle in end slider, same before explain added
  03:24:190 (1) - ^ same no sound to put a whistle there

[Hard]

hitsound:

• 
  00:55:329 (1) - could add whistle in start slider and end,, sound better IMO I copied the hitsounds from Insane so... removed the whistles on 2nd part instead.
  00:56:848 (3) - add whistle in start slider, sound better a lot IMO
  01:23:051 (1,2,1,2) - I can hear strong guitar there, could whistle something ? I feel lack hitsound it probably would be noisy since the song is so calm, for now I keep this as is x.x
  02:05:013 (1) - missing add whistle in end slider, you have done other pattern hitsound yeah

[Insane]

hitsound:

• 
  00:24:949 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - I feel, there part strong guitar, could add whistle something, sound better a lot
  00:55:329 (1,2,3) - again, add something with whistle, like happened in diff hard same
  01:23:051 (1,2,3,4,5) - again, need add whistle in there part I decided to not put whistle for the guitar, sorry for that ,_,
  02:05:013 (1) - missing add whistle in end slider added!

Gameplay:

• 
  01:24:570 (5) - could bit more down ? The skin normal, skin drain is almost hidden this slider, this could bit more down if you fix, don't forger other
  part spacing fixed~
  02:04:253 (4) - could put new combo and remove new combo at 02:04:633 (1), better nahh in my opinion this new combo is much better >_>
  02:17:164 (3) - New combo, lyrics strong it breaks the triangle pattern

[]
Some part guitar, example here 00:24:949 at 00:27:987, many more, could add whistle, sound better a lot IMO
gameplay look good, any question ask me
Best good luck

Oracle wrote:

/me hugs delis & frosty
I don't really have anything to complain on this clean and nice set but...let's at least address something related to hitsounding, shall we?

bold=highly recommended/important stuff
red=unrankable issue
Others are all suggestions. Feel free to reject!

General

1. referring to the exsited approved map:
   Artist:ちょうちょ
   Romanised Artist: ChouCho

Normal

1. 00:15:835 (1) - you missed a clap here on slider tail. no ;<
2. 00:36:152 (5) - could probably add claps on slider head and slider tail~ added only tail!
3. 00:49:253 (4,1) - you may want to swap NCs here. yea
   
4. 01:09:000 - a circle here fits pretty well with the vocal...highly suggested as you followed the vocal slightly afterwards 01:09:759 (3) - added
5. 01:16:405 (1) - a whistle to catch the piano sound? drum sampleset instead
   
6. 01:17:354 (2) - probably here as well! i also suggest using similar rhythm like 02:24:190 (3,4) - . the rhythm is totally the same to me ;-;
7. 02:15:835 - circle? x.x yeah
8. 02:23:240 (2) - try adding a whistle on slider head. drum sampleset again
9. 02:24:190 (3) - ^ on slider head as well
10. 02:24:759 (4) - ^ slider head.. try it! I would rather to keep current whistle patterns atm x.x
11. 02:36:721 (2,3,4,5) - have a try on rhythm like this? follows the vocal better with a slider to emphasize the drums. changed on my own
    
    img

    
12. 03:14:316 (5) - forgot a whistle on slider head that was intentional x.x;
13. 03:36:342 (1) - ^ on slider tail there's no sound to add whistle orz

Hard

1. 00:39:759 (6) - try placing this visually in distance snap: probably done, changed 00:39:190 (5) - before change this so dunno it fits here x_x
   
   img

   
2. 01:17:164 (3) - a whistle here as i assume you're placing whistle on vocals.
3. 02:13:367 (8) - whistle here as well.
4. 03:32:924 (7) - a clap like you did in Normal?
5. 03:39:570 - not using soft whistle for this part like you did in Normal? 0 0 because this part was hitsounded by frost and I copied all from Insane x.x fixed all

Insane

1. has the same HP drain as Hard, highly suggest changing it to something 6-7 for a better spread. forgot to change ww
2. 01:49:253 (4) - quite confusing (at least for me :<) to read both because AR8 and overlapping with 01:49:633 (6) - x.x. try to move it to 01:48:114 (7) - here? much less tricky this way with better flow! eh not really, also I don't wanted to make a large jump here. 01:49:423 (5) - added a nc instead o
3. 01:54:570 (1) - try to use ctrl+J, flows better for me~
4. 01:55:139 (2) - this one too if you apply the one above. 01:54:170 (4) - mmm changed this instead

this is...too clean for me to suggest anything helpful ;w; delis ijiwaru
good luck! dear my friends.

Forseen wrote:

Gulēt.

Normal:

1. 00:41:658 (3) - Maybe use the same rhythm following the vocal like at 00:35:392 (4,5) ? I guess the new players will know what to expect here since you already used it before. Also, since it's pretty much mapped with sliders, there's shouldn't be any confusion. changed 1st one easier
   
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2. 01:11:278 (2) - How about moving the curve like this? A small thing, but I'd say this would look better when transitioning to the next slider. genki
   
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3. 01:49:063 (5) - Sounds empty, add a clap on the tail. nah no sound and I didn't feel empty here ._.
4. 02:10:519 (4) - Forgot whistle on the head. fixud
5. 02:14:316 (1) - I tried not to, but I can't mod your map without mentioning a blanket at least once, SORRY, but do this: AHAHAHA FIXED
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 02:22:291 (4) - Same about whistle, on tail. Don't know if you skipped it intentionally. added~!
7. 03:09:759 (2) - This might just be my personal preference, but I find two sliders with the same curve one after another placed like this, next to each other with a slight difference on the grid, kind of plain. Maybe use a straight slider here: fixed on my own
   
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8. 03:36:342 (1) - Another whistle missing, on tail. You have two of them on the following slider, so have two of them here as well. Unless you intended for the rhythm to build up with having one at first, then two afterwards, but I don't think that would fit here. ,_, it feels weird since no sound + whistle = ;<
9. 03:42:228 (1) - The last 3 sliders should make a good enough ending, so I don't think this note is necessary here. There isn't any beat in the background here either. <3

Hard:

1. 00:09:759 - Uhh, I guess you can start this with spinner as well like on other difficulties. Don't really see a reason not to do so. da
2. 00:18:114 (8,9,10) - This might be too hard (well, not really), but maybe have a tiny jump here (would fit the music), like this, with adding one reverse and a note under the tail of the previous slider: fixed on my own
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:22:861 - Add a note. You pretty much had them on all the white and red ticks up until now, and this part doesn't really differ that much to have an empty beat here, so yeah. While for the rest of the map those empty beats seem really fitting, not sure if that's the case here. Just my take on this. no idea but somehow I don't wanna add a circle here..
4. 00:49:253 (9) - Add a new combo here like you did at 00:44:696 (1). the NC follows the vocal (lyric actually)
5. 01:17:924 (5) - Some distance snap issue. This should be a bit lower on the grid. glid.
6. 01:34:253 (4) - Move to x:284, y:94? Might be better with these both sliders to have a circle above them instead of a stack. See for yourself. moved somewhere
7. 01:48:304 (4) - I think this ain't properly stacked with the tail of 01:47:354 (3). After fixing this remember to stack 01:49:063 (7) properly as well. :// I can't fix this because of glid snapperino
8. 01:51:911 (4) - I think an NC here like you did before the first chorus? da.
9. 01:52:291 (5) - Also a distance snap issue, move this more to the right. You see that (5) is closer to (4) than it is to (6). da.
10. 02:38:525 - Maybe a note here as well for a triplet like in the beginning of this combo? Should sound good enough. I should have made this diff easier, so it must be making harder this diff ;_; also I prefer stacked 2 circle x 2
11. 02:25:709 (8,9) - You could make this pattern look better by doing this: da
    
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12. 03:11:468 (8) - Unstack and move to x:448, y:48 for a pretty triangle. da
13. 03:17:164 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - (5) here is in kind of annying place. To avoid it, do a pattern like here, perhaps: oops sorry I wanna keep placing the circle at annoying place,_,
    
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14. 03:37:861 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - You were using a new combo on every 5th white tick nearing the end, then suddenly stopped for this and the next combo making them really long. Don't know what's the reasoning behind that, but you might want to put another NC somewhere here and on the next combo as well. da

Insanel:

1. 00:48:873 (4) - Move to x:238, y:108, might be a better bet than a stack. b-but I think the stack fits the song ;w;
2. 01:22:101 (3) - A place in the middle of the following combo could work out here, so put this at x:266, y:186. seems it makes overlapping 01:23:220 (2) - and 01:23:220 (2) - ,_, it feels a bit worse for me, also dunno I thought the pattern was fine as is
3. 01:37:101 (5,6) - Switching these elements makes a better rhythm, try it: da
   
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4. 02:08:051 (1) - Ctrl+G, so that it goes upwards like the previous slider, and replace the reverse with a circle, Something like this: tried though it was troll to play >_>
   
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5. 02:36:911 (1) - I'd suggest a pattern like this here: sori but just a normal triangle makes a bit worse ;_;
   
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6. 02:38:525 - Same as on Hard difficulty, perhaps a triplet? where beat
7. 03:10:709 (2,3) - Remove the circle and instead add a reverse for the slider? Obviously, move the slider to where the circle was in the timeline. OK_
8. 03:16:215 (3) - New combo here like you did before during first chorus. that is frost part but done

GOOD™ LUCK™, STAR™!

1. maybe add Sun Rainbow to the tags since Rainbow made the SB? (idk I always add SBer name on my maps w)

1. 00:09:739 (1) - this spinner is too loud, how about make this part at least 40% volume as well and then you can go back at 60% start here 00:12:588 -
2. 00:57:398 (3) - remove drum additions and change this into soft-clap instead? It'll support the music better
3. 01:07:461 (1) - previous pattern was right to left and next pattern is right to left as well, this one feels a bit awkward for me since the slider's shape has up-down shape. How about crtl+> this one to make this slider's flow right-to-left as well? It'll help player to flashlight this part easily (imo(
4. 01:25:689 - This part is much calmer than previous part, how about turn down the volume to -5% or -10% to support music better? 01:27:588 - is really loud, right?
5. 01:30:246 (2) - remove whistle, it break the consistency of your whistle usage and doesn't support anything at here
6. 01:39:360 (3) - this slider plays awkwardly for me since previous and next patterns are using straight sliders. Well if you want to keep this, at least ctrl+j this will make the play a bit smoother
7. 02:03:284 (2) - this play awkwardly for me as well, I suggest to change this into 'fan pattern' like move this slider like this
   
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   or make this 'upside-downside upside-downside' pattern like this (just copy-paste slider no. 1 and re-arrange circle no 3.)
   
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8. 02:11:069 (1) - to support music, add additions and sample set to Drum?
9. 02:24:739 (4) - how about add whistle here? It's a bit strange for me since 02:23:220 (2) - has a sound but not at here, though the vocal at this part and 02:23:220 - is a bit similar. if you do so then add whistle here as well 01:17:904 - , 03:13:347 - ,
10. 02:33:284 - same volume suggestion as 01:25:689 -
11. 02:39:360 (3) - why don't you also copy-paste slider at 02:38:600 (2) - and ctrl+j to make the flow smoother?

1. 00:09:739 (1) - same volume suggestion as Normal
2. 00:14:107 (4) - to make this exactly at the center of previous and next slider, how about move this to x280 y348 to make 1,38 ds? it won't hurt too much, at least.
3. 00:17:144 (4,5,6) - jump at here doesn't support anything imo, the jump is more perfect if it on 00:18:094 (7,8) - to support the violin. How about reduce jump on 00:17:144 (4,5,6) - and make jump at 00:18:094 (7,8) - like this?
   image is for 00:18:474 until 00:19:233
   
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4. 00:20:562 (2) - add whistle as well? the piano have the same sound as 00:20:182 (1) -, add whistle here too 00:21:701 - the piano have the same sound here as well,
5. 00:21:891 (5,1) - swap NC? Since 00:21:891 - have new stanza and Finish sound supported here to add NC
6. 01:04:233 (1) - remove whistle, add Drum additions and Drum sampleset to support the music?
7. 01:16:385 (1) - ^
8. 01:43:727 (9) - ^
9. 01:49:043 (7) - this slider plays awkward for me, how about rearrange like this to make the flow better? (there's a little ds change on 01:48:853 (6,8) - like put this on x328 y108)
   
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10. 02:11:069 (1) - same as 01:04:233 -
11. 02:23:220 (1) - ^
12. 02:29:486 (4) - if you hear this at 75% playback, the finish sound is more at 02:29:296 - rather than here, so move finish?
13. 03:11:828 (1) - same as 01:04:233 -
14. 03:24:929 (3) - IM SORRY FOR THIS NAZI MOD but can you please move this 1 grid down to make better symmetry with slider 03:24:170 (1) - ;w; please kill me lol
15. 03:29:296 (4) - imo stacking this will make player miss-read this pattern is the same as 03:25:689 (5,6) - so unstack?
16. 03:33:284 (1) - this one play awkward for me. how about change like this? (slider 03:33:663 (2) - rotated to -16 degrees))
    
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17. 03:37:461 (3,1) - this one is awkward as well but less awkward than 00:33:284 - , how about rearrange like this? ((slider (3) is rotated to -60 degress)))
    
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1. I was hoping for mapper's name on each part they map on this diff, since this is a collab D:
2. 00:09:739 (1) - same volume suggestion as Normal
3. 01:28:727 (12,1) - swap NC ? it support new stanza and raise the hp drain if player miss those streams
4. 01:41:258 (6) - how about move this to x332 y200 to make better symmetry shape?
5. 02:09:929 (2) - how about move this to x408 y140 to make better symmetry shape?
6. 03:24:170 (12,1) - same as 01:28:727 -
7. 03:27:208 (9,1) - ^
8. 03:45:246 (11) - this isn't a big deal i'm so sorry for this nazi-est mod ever but move this 1 grid to left to make same ds ;w;?

Sun Rainbow wrote:

Finish BG effect.
This is SB image and osb:http://puu.sh/bdUkj/0dc6eefe56.zip

and
add these code in diff

except collab diff
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyric\Diff Delis.png",320,240
 S,0,18873,,0.7440001
 F,0,18873,20392,0,1
 M,0,18873,24949,106,165,116,165
 F,0,20392,23430,1
 F,0,23430,24949,1,0

Collab diff
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyric\Diff DF.png",320,240
 S,0,18873,,0.7440001
 F,0,18873,20392,0,1
 M,0,18873,24949,106,165,116,165
 F,0,20392,23430,1
 F,0,23430,24949,1,0

頑張って！！！><

Delis wrote:

Thanks, also sorry I have a request to you to change one thing. Can you change Diff -> Difficulty or each diff (Normal by / Hard by / Insane by) for the Diff.png?

Using Diff is kinda impolite for SB I think, so I would like you to change it, Thank you for the lyrics anyway! ></

KSHR wrote:

じゃすとまいとぅーせんと

ニコニコ動画での活動時にちょうちょ名義だったこと、既存のranked（Fychoのコンピレーションとか）のArtistがちょうちょになっちゃってたりすることを考えると、Tagsに入れておいてあげると検索しやすくなっていいかもです

1. i suggest using OD5 on hard...3-5-7 feels smoother somehow

1. 00:09:734 (1) - why is this spinner ending differently from other diffs x.x. make it 00:11:918 - like other diffs?
2. 01:24:545 (1) - slider end lands on nothing in the song and it does bothers me a bit on the calm part. mind changing it into a circle?

Oracle wrote:

soon™
place reserved

recheck no kd

General

1. i suggest using OD5 on hard...3-5-7 feels smoother somehow Sorry I dislike to use OD5 on Hard diff (I felt like oh IT'S TOO EASY to get SS on HR when I was newbie )

Hard

1. 00:09:734 (1) - why is this spinner ending differently from other diffs x.x. make it 00:11:918 - like other diffs?
2. 01:24:545 (1) - slider end lands on nothing in the song and it does bothers me a bit on the calm part. mind changing it into a circle?

let me know

Fycho wrote:

gratz~ Delis x Frosty

Fycho wrote:

gratz~ Delis x Frosty

Fycho wrote:

gratz~ Delis x Frosty

ps. Sinon <3 = me