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Printemps - Love marginal [Osu|Taiko]

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mintong89
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mintong89
Hey, as you request at pm so here we go:

[Jik's Oni]

00:02:057 - => 00:02:170 - add 1/12 notes at here? well the sound is really clear so I'm not suggest you to ignore it even it's beginning.
00:09:388 (24) - , 00:10:290 (28) - , 00:11:192 (31) - , 00:12:997 (36) - and 00:14:801 (46) - consider put big note? The music self-explain, cymbal sound. Make sure to delete 1/4 as 1/2 if you put big note at 1/4 pattern.
00:31:493 (40) - You should put k here because the clap sound and the metronome (d k d k law at white line.) even you follow the vocal imo...
00:33:297 (50) - ^
00:35:327 - => 00:35:779 - You can hear the drum sound at here so I'm suggest you to put 5 1/4 notes at here.
00:36:906 - I hear a sound at here but I can't explain what the sound is...but I wish you can add it.
00:45:929 (112) - Same as above that k metronome.
00:47:733 (122) - ^
01:03:297 (209,210,211) - Put a variant kdk pattern here to make little different to previous part?
01:41:418 - => 01:44:237 - umm...it's kinda sad because the drum sound is very good to give you to put the pattern but you didn't put anything...try to fit drum sound.
02:56:530 (332) - Actually the sound pitch at here is higher than 02:56:756 (333) - so try k here?

Overall: Well...You can try some variant pattern but not blindly fit vocal...as you can see, some place is really feel "empty" or even "boring because just rigid with vocal and didn't really creative." But it's fine for me so sorry if I say something too over.

Muzukashii is fine for me.
Good Luck!
Jikson[m9]
177 posts
Joined March 2012
Jikson[m9]

mintong89 wrote:

Hey, as you request at pm so here we go:

[Jik's Oni]

00:02:057 - => 00:02:170 - add 1/12 notes at here? well the sound is really clear so I'm not suggest you to ignore it even it's beginning. I found it becaomes difficult to hit so...
00:09:388 (24) - , 00:10:290 (28) - , 00:11:192 (31) - , 00:12:997 (36) - and 00:14:801 (46) - consider put big note? The music self-explain, cymbal sound. Make sure to delete 1/4 as 1/2 if you put big note at 1/4 pattern. done
00:31:493 (40) - You should put k here because the clap sound and the metronome (d k d k law at white line.) even you follow the vocal imo... all similar parts done
00:33:297 (50) - ^
00:35:327 - => 00:35:779 - You can hear the drum sound at here so I'm suggest you to put 5 1/4 notes at here. done
00:36:906 - I hear a sound at here but I can't explain what the sound is...but I wish you can add it. threw away the vocal now
00:45:929 (112) - Same as above that k metronome.
00:47:733 (122) - ^
01:03:297 (209,210,211) - Put a variant kdk pattern here to make little different to previous part? I choose to follow the pitch
01:41:418 - => 01:44:237 - umm...it's kinda sad because the drum sound is very good to give you to put the pattern but you didn't put anything...try to fit drum sound. done
02:56:530 (332) - Actually the sound pitch at here is higher than 02:56:756 (333) - so try k here? didnt really get it

Overall: Well...You can try some variant pattern but not blindly fit vocal...as you can see, some place is really feel "empty" or even "boring because just rigid with vocal and didn't really creative." But it's fine for me so sorry if I say something too over.

Muzukashii is fine for me.
Good Luck!
thx for modding, done some changes to improve connections too.

http://puu.sh/9kdEb/bfc0612159.osu
IamKwaN
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happy623 wrote:

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qoot8123
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Joined March 2011
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Hi~ :)

[ Oni]

General
:idea: 第一段kiai結束後面的solo部分(01:28:786 - ~ 01:39:613 - )個人覺得note下的不是很好,建議仔細聽樂器的重音在下note會比較能詮釋出這一段的感覺,其他地方也是要注意一下 ex:https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1712119(01:28:786 - ~ 01:32:395 - )
ex2:http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1712122(01:32:395 - ~ 01:36:004 - )

SPOILER
  1. 00:38:485 (81) - 移到00:38:034 - ?這裡突然停頓感覺怪怪的
  2. 02:06:906 (41) - ^
  3. 01:01:493 (206,207,208) - 試著跟一下vocal的音調,因為前面01:00:591 (200,201,202,203,204,205) - 主要是跟vocal,後面如果不跟vocal感覺有點違和
  4. 01:03:297 (217,218,219) - ^
  5. 01:05:102 (228,229,230) - ^
  6. 01:15:929 (287,288,289) - ^
  7. 01:17:733 (299,300,301) - ^
  8. 01:19:538 (311,312,313) - ^(後面的kiai也一樣)
  9. 01:08:260 - 這裡加個note然後把01:09:049 (246) - 移到01:08:824 - 最後把01:08:034 (242) - 的finish刪掉,我覺得這樣前後兩段比較有連貫性
  10. 01:48:185 (463,464,465,466,467,468,469,470,471,472,473,474,475,476,477,478,479,480) - 這裡感覺放太多note了,跟音樂有點不太合,建議做一些刪減
  11. 02:17:057 (100,101,102,103,104,105,106,107) - 跟第一段kiai有點類似,把02:17:169 (101) - 刪掉,然後02:17:057 (100) - 加個finish最後把02:17:621 (104) - 移到02:17:395 -
  12. 02:31:042 (182,183,184,185,186,187,188,189) - ^
  13. 02:53:260 (322,323,324,325,326,327,328,329,330,331,332,333,334,335,336) - 注意一下吉他的重音,尤其是02:54:162 (328,329,330,331) -
  14. 03:01:380 (367) - 移到03:01:267 - 這裡的鼓聲還蠻明顯的
  15. 03:01:831 (369) - 移到03:01:718 - 原因同上
  16. 03:47:057 - 這裡加個note
  17. 04:07:583 (201,208,211,217) - 這裡建議改成d,全都k打起來有點無聊
  18. 04:10:403 (222) - 移到04:09:951 - 然後改成k,仔細聽一下吉他solo,他是停在04:10:403 -
  19. 04:12:320 (236,237,238,239,240,241,242,243,244,245) - 這裡建議改成這樣?http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1712198比較能加強後面兩個二連的重音

大致就這些,整體來講還可以,不過還有很大的改善空間 :)

GL~
Jikson[m9]
177 posts
Joined March 2012
Jikson[m9]

qoot8123 wrote:

Hi~ :)

[ Oni]

General
:idea: 第一段kiai結束後面的solo部分(01:28:786 - ~ 01:39:613 - )個人覺得note下的不是很好,建議仔細聽樂器的重音在下note會比較能詮釋出這一段的感覺,其他地方也是要注意一下 ex:https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1712119(01:28:786 - ~ 01:32:395 - )
ex2:http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1712122(01:32:395 - ~ 01:36:004 - ) 已依方向修正

SPOILER
  1. 00:38:485 (81) - 移到00:38:034 - ?這裡突然停頓感覺怪怪的 就是一句歌詞的停頓？
  2. 02:06:906 (41) - ^ ^
  3. 01:01:493 (206,207,208) - 試著跟一下vocal的音調,因為前面01:00:591 (200,201,202,203,204,205) - 主要是跟vocal,後面如果不跟vocal感覺有點違和
  4. 01:03:297 (217,218,219) - ^
  5. 01:05:102 (228,229,230) - ^
  6. 01:15:929 (287,288,289) - ^
  7. 01:17:733 (299,300,301) - ^
  8. 01:19:538 (311,312,313) - ^(後面的kiai也一樣) all done
  9. 01:08:260 - 這裡加個note然後把01:09:049 (246) - 移到01:08:824 - 最後把01:08:034 (242) - 的finish刪掉,我覺得這樣前後兩段比較有連貫性 我覺得現在的較好...
  10. 01:48:185 (463,464,465,466,467,468,469,470,471,472,473,474,475,476,477,478,479,480) - 這裡感覺放太多note了,跟音樂有點不太合,建議做一些刪減 done
  11. 02:17:057 (100,101,102,103,104,105,106,107) - 跟第一段kiai有點類似,把02:17:169 (101) - 刪掉,然後02:17:057 (100) - 加個finish最後把02:17:621 (104) - 移到02:17:395 - ^
  12. 02:31:042 (182,183,184,185,186,187,188,189) - ^ ^
  13. 02:53:260 (322,323,324,325,326,327,328,329,330,331,332,333,334,335,336) - 注意一下吉他的重音,尤其是02:54:162 (328,329,330,331) - done
  14. 03:01:380 (367) - 移到03:01:267 - 這裡的鼓聲還蠻明顯的 done
  15. 03:01:831 (369) - 移到03:01:718 - 原因同上 ^
  16. 03:47:057 - 這裡加個note done
  17. 04:07:583 (201,208,211,217) - 這裡建議改成d,全都k打起來有點無聊 done
  18. 04:10:403 (222) - 移到04:09:951 - 然後改成k,仔細聽一下吉他solo,他是停在04:10:403 - done
  19. 04:12:320 (236,237,238,239,240,241,242,243,244,245) - 這裡建議改成這樣?http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1712198比較能加強後面兩個二連的重音 done

大致就這些,整體來講還可以,不過還有很大的改善空間 :)

GL~
I like this mod. 獲益良多，謝mod

http://puu.sh/9tuFR/c0e424051f.osu
IamKwaN
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Update了!
Evening
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Evening
Mod by Req

[Jik's Oni]

00:06:455 (14,15,16) - kdk > kkd | 14 and 15 are of the same pitch while 16 is lower in pitch than 15, I think this pattern suits it better
00:12:997 (32) - d > D | Did you miss a finish here? Since 00:14:801 (42) - is the same sound effect and it has a finish
00:38:260 (80) - d > D | Maybe a finisher here?
00:43:673 (106) - d > k | A kat here to follow the vocal here?
00:46:154 (119,120) - Swap | Follows vocal more
00:46:606 (122) - d > k | To keep consistency with 00:48:410 (132,133) -
01:22:470 (331) - d > k | To follow vocals similar to 01:21:794 (327,329) -
01:36:794 - Add a d here to follow guitar? Similar to 01:36:230 (411,412,413) -
02:07:132 (42,45,47) - dkd > kdk | The kat rhythm here sounds really off compared to the others, I suggest this pattern
02:44:576 (268) - d > k | 02:44:124 (266,267,268) - All of them are of the same pitch I suggest to make this a kat also
03:07:019 (402) - d > k | This kat rhythm sounds nicer imo
04:24:613 (309,312) - Swap |^
04:01:267 (161,162,163) - ddk > kkd | This fits the vocals better imo

[Nardo's Muzu]
01:36:004 (249) - d > k AND add a d on 01:36:230 - | This is to follow the guitar
02:18:185 (392,393,394) - Not sure about this kkd here, you haven't used a triplet with mixed colours previously
02:19:989 (399,400,401,402) - You might also want to keep the triplet constant with ^ since this triplet is 1/2 late
03:58:335 (96,97,98) - Not sure if this ddk is intended, I've only seen 2 of mixed color triplets here

Nothing else, good luck
I crash everytime I see a slider in taiko map idk why though orz
IamKwaN
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lZenxl wrote:

Mod by Req Thanks for mod!

Nothing else, good luck
I crash everytime I see a slider in taiko map idk why though orz
Please post this into the technical support forum ww
Nardoxyribonucleic
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Nardoxyribonucleic

lZenxl wrote:

Mod by Req

[Nardo's Muzu]
01:36:004 (249) - d > k AND add a d on 01:36:230 - | This is to follow the guitar In terms of guitar pitch, 01:36:455 (250,252) - is higher than 01:36:004 (249) - , so keeping 249 as d would be better. Concerning 01:36:230 - , leaving it blank is better imo.
02:18:185 (392,393,394) - Not sure about this kkd here, you haven't used a triplet with mixed colours previously kkd could fit the rhythm. I just want to make something different from the first kiai.
02:19:989 (399,400,401,402) - You might also want to keep the triplet constant with ^ since this triplet is 1/2 late I'd prefer the current placement, as it could fit the music better.
03:58:335 (96,97,98) - Not sure if this ddk is intended, I've only seen 2 of mixed color triplets here Yup, this is intended.

Nothing else, good luck
I crash everytime I see a slider in taiko map idk why though orz
Thanks for the mod~ :)
Jikson[m9]
177 posts
Joined March 2012
Jikson[m9]

lZenxl wrote:

Mod by Req

[Jik's Oni]

00:06:455 (14,15,16) - kdk > kkd | 14 and 15 are of the same pitch while 16 is lower in pitch than 15, I think this pattern suits it better
00:12:997 (32) - d > D | Did you miss a finish here? Since 00:14:801 (42) - is the same sound effect and it has a finish
00:38:260 (80) - d > D | Maybe a finisher here?
00:43:673 (106) - d > k | A kat here to follow the vocal here? I think I better keep the sentencing
00:46:154 (119,120) - Swap | Follows vocal more "bi-de"is "high-low" isn't it？
00:46:606 (122) - d > k | To keep consistency with 00:48:410 (132,133) -
01:22:470 (331) - d > k | To follow vocals similar to 01:21:794 (327,329) - listen to the four dons here
01:36:794 - Add a d here to follow guitar? Similar to 01:36:230 (411,412,413) -
02:07:132 (42,45,47) - dkd > kdk | The kat rhythm here sounds really off compared to the others, I suggest this pattern
02:44:576 (268) - d > k | 02:44:124 (266,267,268) - All of them are of the same pitch I suggest to make this a kat also the next sentence would be odd if it is kat(？)
03:07:019 (402) - d > k | This kat rhythm sounds nicer imo
04:24:613 (309,312) - Swap |^
04:01:267 (161,162,163) - ddk > kkd | This fits the vocals better imo also, listen to the dons

all fixed unless specified
Thanks for modding!
http://puu.sh/9C8U7/0dab352030.osu
IamKwaN
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Updated!
Nardoxyribonucleic
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Nardoxyribonucleic
Hi, here comes a taiko mod requested by IamKwaN :3

  • [Jik's Oni]
  1. 00:03:748 (6,7) - k d ? The piano at 00:03:748 - has a higher pitch than 00:03:974 (7) -
  2. 00:05:327 (11) - consider deleting this note ? Previous notes are supported by the piano but this note doesn't follow anything. A bit odd imo.
  3. 00:13:899 (37) - K would fit the high-pitched piano more.
  4. 00:19:651 (55) - maybe k for the guitar strike ? The current pattern is a bit boring as there are only dons from 00:18:185 to 00:19:989 - (nearly 2 seconds). Making 00:19:651 (55) - as k still fits the pitch drop from 00:19:651 to 00:19:989 -
  5. 00:23:824 (4) - D. The sound is similar to 00:22:696 (3) - , so adding finish there could make mapping more consistent.
  6. 00:26:305 (15,16) - kd. This could follow the vocal in a way better.
  7. 00:32:846 (48) - k for the vocal. This would result in a better contrast to 00:30:816 (36,37,38) -
  8. 00:36:906 (74) - maybe k for the snare sound ? You followed the snares all the way from 00:24:275 (6) to 00:36:004 (68) -
  9. 00:38:034 - add d ? I can hear a noticeable beat there. Ignoring it would be a bit strange.
  10. 00:40:741 (92,93) - same as 00:26:305 (15,16) -
  11. 00:43:673 (106,107) - k d . The vocal at 00:43:673 (106) - has the same pitch as 00:43:222 (104) -
  12. 00:49:876 (141) - delete ? The note follows nothing.
  13. 00:56:982 (179,180) - dk would fit the vocal well imo.
  14. 01:00:929 (202) - d ? The sound is not strong as 00:59:124 (192,214) - . In addition, making this as d could match the low-pitched vocal nearby i.e. 01:00:591 (200,201) - .
  15. 01:11:418 (262,263) - same as 00:56:982 (179,180) -
  16. 01:34:087 - add d for the guitar there ?
  17. 01:40:403 (431) - move to 01:40:628 - ? The beat at 01:40:628 - is stronger imo.
  18. 01:43:899 - lacks a note. As the beat is more prominent than 01:41:643 - , adding d here to form a ddd triplet would be better.
  19. 01:46:606 (462) - change to k (for the high-pitched piano) and add d at 01:46:831 - ?
  20. 01:53:147 (479) - maybe k for the relatively high-pitched piano ?
  21. 01:53:711 (481) - delete ? similar reason as 00:49:876 (141) -
  22. 01:54:500 (484,486,490,492,495,497) - k for the snares ? A bit monotonous because of lacking kats.
  23. 01:55:515 (487) - delete ? similar reason as 00:49:876 (141) -
  24. 02:03:748 (25) - you could also change this as k for following the vocal pitch.
  25. 02:08:936 (53,64) - k for snare consistency ? Similar to 00:36:906 (74) -
  26. 02:16:944 - add d to follow the beat ?
  27. 02:19:989 (119,120) - same as 00:56:982 (179,180) -
  28. 02:34:425 (203,204) - ^
  29. 02:54:500 (334,336) - k d for following the pitch better ?
  30. 02:57:658 (349) - k for the snare sound ?
  31. 02:59:576 (359) - move to 02:59:463 - and make 1/6 kkkk from 02:59:688 to 02:59:914 - . The current 1/4 kkkk pattern does not match the guitar well imo.
  32. 03:00:478 (365,366) - kd to follow the guitar better ?
  33. 03:04:425 (389) - adding finish here would be nice imo.
  34. 03:33:748 (6,14,18) - k for the snares.
  35. 03:50:215 (89,90) - dk as you did at 03:35:779 (15,16) - ? Same as 00:56:982 (179,180) -
  36. 04:14:350 (252) - k for the snare sound ?
  37. 04:18:410 (272) - add finish here for the strong cymbal sound ?
I hope the above mods could help the mapset get closer to rank.
That's all and good luck~ :D
Jikson[m9]
177 posts
Joined March 2012
Jikson[m9]

Nardoxyribonucleic wrote:

Hi, here comes a taiko mod requested by IamKwaN :3

  • [Jik's Oni]
  1. 00:03:748 (6,7) - k d ? The piano at 00:03:748 - has a higher pitch than 00:03:974 (7) -
  2. 00:05:327 (11) - consider deleting this note ? Previous notes are supported by the piano but this note doesn't follow anything. A bit odd imo.
  3. 00:13:899 (37) - K would fit the high-pitched piano more.
  4. 00:19:651 (55) - maybe k for the guitar strike ? The current pattern is a bit boring as there are only dons from 00:18:185 to 00:19:989 - (nearly 2 seconds). Making 00:19:651 (55) - as k still fits the pitch drop from 00:19:651 to 00:19:989 -
  5. 00:23:824 (4) - D. The sound is similar to 00:22:696 (3) - , so adding finish there could make mapping more consistent.
  6. 00:26:305 (15,16) - kd. This could follow the vocal in a way better.
  7. 00:32:846 (48) - k for the vocal. This would result in a better contrast to 00:30:816 (36,37,38) -
  8. 00:36:906 (74) - maybe k for the snare sound ? You followed the snares all the way from 00:24:275 (6) to 00:36:004 (68) -
  9. 00:38:034 - add d ? I can hear a noticeable beat there. Ignoring it would be a bit strange.
  10. 00:40:741 (92,93) - same as 00:26:305 (15,16) -
  11. 00:43:673 (106,107) - k d . The vocal at 00:43:673 (106) - has the same pitch as 00:43:222 (104) -
  12. 00:49:876 (141) - delete ? The note follows nothing.
  13. 00:56:982 (179,180) - dk would fit the vocal well imo.
  14. 01:00:929 (202) - d ? The sound is not strong as 00:59:124 (192,214) - . In addition, making this as d could match the low-pitched vocal nearby i.e. 01:00:591 (200,201) - .
  15. 01:11:418 (262,263) - same as 00:56:982 (179,180) -
  16. 01:34:087 - add d for the guitar there ?
  17. 01:40:403 (431) - move to 01:40:628 - ? The beat at 01:40:628 - is stronger imo.
  18. 01:43:899 - lacks a note. As the beat is more prominent than 01:41:643 - , adding d here to form a ddd triplet would be better.
  19. 01:46:606 (462) - change to k (for the high-pitched piano) and add d at 01:46:831 - ?
  20. 01:53:147 (479) - maybe k for the relatively high-pitched piano ?
  21. 01:53:711 (481) - delete ? similar reason as 00:49:876 (141) -
  22. 01:54:500 (484,486,490,492,495,497) - k for the snares ? A bit monotonous because of lacking kats.
  23. 01:55:515 (487) - delete ? similar reason as 00:49:876 (141) -
  24. 02:03:748 (25) - you could also change this as k for following the vocal pitch.
  25. 02:08:936 (53,64) - k for snare consistency ? Similar to 00:36:906 (74) -
  26. 02:16:944 - add d to follow the beat ?
  27. 02:19:989 (119,120) - same as 00:56:982 (179,180) -
  28. 02:34:425 (203,204) - ^
  29. 02:54:500 (334,336) - k d for following the pitch better ?
  30. 02:57:658 (349) - k for the snare sound ?
  31. 02:59:576 (359) - move to 02:59:463 - and make 1/6 kkkk from 02:59:688 to 02:59:914 - . The current 1/4 kkkk pattern does not match the guitar well imo.
  32. 03:00:478 (365,366) - kd to follow the guitar better ?
  33. 03:04:425 (389) - adding finish here would be nice imo.
  34. 03:33:748 (6,14,18) - k for the snares.
  35. 03:50:215 (89,90) - dk as you did at 03:35:779 (15,16) - ? Same as 00:56:982 (179,180) -
  36. 04:14:350 (252) - k for the snare sound ?
  37. 04:18:410 (272) - add finish here for the strong cymbal sound ?
I hope the above mods could help the mapset get closer to rank.
That's all and good luck~ :D
Tried my best to follow the mods except places that I wanted to put there
http://puu.sh/9Y4DU/db0fb6d28e.osu
IamKwaN
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Konpaku Sariel
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jik's oni
00:10:966 (24) - k

00:12:997 (30,31,32,33,34,35) - D__d__k_K__d__k

00:14:801 (36) - K

00:15:929 (39) - delete

00:16:606 (40) - K
00:17:508 (41) - ^
00:18:410 (45) - ^

00:18:861 (46) - delete

00:25:403 (12) - add d

00:26:305 (15,16,17,18) - dk_kd

00:27:207 (20) - add d
00:27:320 (21) - add k

00:29:012 (31) - add d

00:31:042 (42,43,44) - kdd

00:31:718 (45,46,47,48) - dk_kd or dk__d

00:34:876 (62,63,64,65,66,67,68,69,70,71) - ddd_kkddddk
or ddd_k_ddkdk

00:36:230 (71) - d

00:36:568 (73) - delete

00:38:034 (81) - add d

00:44:688 (113,114) - kd

01:07:132 (244) - K

01:11:418 (263,264) - dk

02:22:921 (138,139) - kd

02:34:425 (204,205,206,207) - dk_dk

03:09:388 (422,428) - k

03:38:598 (28) - delete
Jikson[m9]
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Konpaku Sariel wrote:

jik's oni
00:10:966 (24) - k

00:12:997 (30,31,32,33,34,35) - D__d__k_K__d__k

00:14:801 (36) - K

00:15:929 (39) - delete

00:16:606 (40) - K
00:17:508 (41) - ^
00:18:410 (45) - ^

00:18:861 (46) - delete

00:25:403 (12) - add d

00:26:305 (15,16,17,18) - dk_kd

00:27:207 (20) - add d
00:27:320 (21) - add k

00:29:012 (31) - add d

00:31:042 (42,43,44) - kdd

00:31:718 (45,46,47,48) - dk_kd or dk__d

00:34:876 (62,63,64,65,66,67,68,69,70,71) - ddd_kkddddk
or ddd_k_ddkdk

00:36:230 (71) - d

00:36:568 (73) - delete

00:38:034 (81) - add d

00:44:688 (113,114) - kd

01:07:132 (244) - K

01:11:418 (263,264) - dk

02:22:921 (138,139) - kd

02:34:425 (204,205,206,207) - dk_dk

03:09:388 (422,428) - k

03:38:598 (28) - delete
http://puu.sh/a5dkn/729c6fa11f.osu

Fixed most, inspiring mod


Edit: http://puu.sh/a5eaj/6e4a916210.osu
The correct one
IamKwaN
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As per your request. Sorry for long delay.

Offset -5?

[Jik's Oni]
  1. The volume was a bit low overall. I would suggest increasing the volume.
  2. 01:08:936 (249,250,251) - This triplet doesn't fit the music that well. I think a 1/2 is enough here, just like what you did at 00:54:500 (167,168) -
  3. 01:15:591 (289) - It sounds better after removing this note.
  4. 01:21:794 (327,328,329,330) - How about changing this to dk dk? In order to fit the pitch.
  5. 01:30:816 (381,382,383,384) - I don't think 2-plet - 2-plet pattern fits the music here. Simple 1/2 would fit the music. Suggestion: 01:30:365 (379,380,381,382,383) - k d d k k
  6. 01:40:403 - Add a note here? d is recommended.
  7. 02:44:801 (270,271,272,273) - How about changing this to dk dk? In order to fit the pitch.
  8. 03:31:493 - Add a big don here to fit the drum and vocal.
  9. 03:31:606 (1) - Still not recommend to use a spinner here. Placing a big don at 03:31:831 - and 03:32:169 - would be much better.
  10. 04:25:290 (315) - kat?
  11. 04:25:403 (316) - don?

[Nardo's Muzukashii]
  1. The volume was a bit low overall. I would suggest increasing the volume.
  2. 01:09:726 (159) - Change this to kat in order to fit the pitch and for consistency?
  3. 02:10:966 (367,368,369,370) - The rhythm was a bit weird imo. I suggest adding a note at 02:11:079 - and then removing the note at 02:11:305 (369) -
  4. 03:08:034 (578) - How about changing this note to kat to fit the pitch?

wtf....點解個sb素材同d梗取材我張map唔同我講聲.......
Jikson[m9]
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kanpakyin wrote:

As per your request. Sorry for long delay.

Offset -5?

[Jik's Oni]
  1. The volume was a bit low overall. I would suggest increasing the volume. done
  2. 01:08:936 (249,250,251) - This triplet doesn't fit the music that well. I think a 1/2 is enough here, just like what you did at 00:54:500 (167,168) - done
  3. 01:15:591 (289) - It sounds better after removing this note. done
  4. 01:21:794 (327,328,329,330) - How about changing this to dk dk? In order to fit the pitch. vocal: d_ _d_ _d=> d_kd_kd
  5. 01:30:816 (381,382,383,384) - I don't think 2-plet - 2-plet pattern fits the music here. Simple 1/2 would fit the music. Suggestion: 01:30:365 (379,380,381,382,383) - k d d k k music: d_ _k_ _k=> d_dk_dk
  6. 01:40:403 - Add a note here? d is recommended. done
  7. 02:44:801 (270,271,272,273) - How about changing this to dk dk? In order to fit the pitch. like the previous one
  8. 03:31:493 - Add a big don here to fit the drum and vocal.
  9. 03:31:606 (1) - Still not recommend to use a spinner here. Placing a big don at 03:31:831 - and 03:32:169 - would be much better. Really couldn't I emphasize the lyrics here？
  10. 04:25:290 (315) - kat? done
  11. 04:25:403 (316) - don?done
http://puu.sh/azMoN/7b90aa337c.osu
IamKwaN
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kanpakyin wrote:

As per your request. Sorry for long delay. where is aabc?

Offset -5? okie

wtf....點解個sb素材同d梗取材我張map唔同我講聲....... my bro said梗無抄只拎左你clannad幾張素材,sorry o.o
@Nardo and Jik, please -5 offset urself coz I don't know where do u guys snap 1/6 :cOk, updated. I try to -5 myself, please check once for me >.<
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kanpakyin wrote:

As per your request. Sorry for long delay.

[Nardo's Muzukashii]
  1. The volume was a bit low overall. I would suggest increasing the volume. Increased the volume of all timing points by 10% except the last spinner.
  2. 01:09:726 (159) - Change this to kat in order to fit the pitch and for consistency? Umm... I think dd is fine, as 01:09:721 (159) - has the same vocal pitch as 01:09:608 (158) -
  3. 02:10:966 (367,368,369,370) - The rhythm was a bit weird imo. I suggest adding a note at 02:11:079 - and then removing the note at 02:11:305 (369) - Changed from d kkk to ddk d.
  4. 03:08:034 (578) - How about changing this note to kat to fit the pitch? fixed
Thanks for the mod~ :)

Update: http://puu.sh/azXlR.rar
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Updated. :3
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GET HYPED

Best LL! song about to have a ranked map from it yay
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waiting for this song ranked XD
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/me eats kwan


cool storyboard. great job guys~
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can anyone plz hurry uip and rank this plz?
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haha5957 wrote:

can anyone plz hurry uip and rank this plz?
wtf I almost gave u a Kudosu lol
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Song great needed minor changes but from my perspective the song was great! Lel please approve 8-)
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Mod for Normal and Insane; mainly focusing on the usage of finishes.
11:07 Hinsvar: owo
11:13 Hinsvar: Hi owo
11:18 IamKwaN: hi ;w;
11:21 IamKwaN: i just woke up and finished lunch lol
11:24 Hinsvar: Oh lol
11:25 IamKwaN: lol am i too lzazy
11:25 Hinsvar: iktf
11:25 *Hinsvar is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/379624 Printemps - Love marginal [Normal]]
11:25 Hinsvar: \:D/
11:25 IamKwaN: o_O
11:26 Hinsvar: I'm actually thinking of ranking this.
11:26 Hinsvar: Gotta fix a few things!
11:26 IamKwaN: ok!
11:26 Hinsvar: Normal: 00:17:503 (2) - Finish please.
11:26 Hinsvar: I think you know why :P
11:27 IamKwaN: rmemove the whistle>
11:27 IamKwaN: ?
11:27 Hinsvar: No need.
11:27 IamKwaN: ok~
11:27 IamKwaN: done (dance
11:27 Hinsvar: lol
11:29 IamKwaN: ;w;
11:29 Hinsvar: Why ;-;
11:29 Hinsvar: 00:50:886 - Try a finish too here? :P
11:29 IamKwaN: :D?
11:30 IamKwaN: cool (dance
11:31 Hinsvar: 01:20:661 - and 01:21:563 - I'm pretty sure these ticks lack finishes too lol
11:31 Hinsvar: Too low amount of finishes ):
11:33 IamKwaN: 02:43:217 (2) -  and 02:44:571 (4) - :3
11:33 Hinsvar: There too lol
11:33 IamKwaN: yay also done for third kiais
11:33 Hinsvar: yay
11:34 Hinsvar: 01:32:390 (1) - Why not try blanketing with the curve near the end of 01:31:262 (5) - ?
11:34 Hinsvar: also finish pls
11:34 Hinsvar: 01:32:390 - 
11:34 Hinsvar: ...Actually, I'm sure you missed way too many cymbals lol
11:34 IamKwaN: yes lol
11:35 Hinsvar: Might want to review the entire diff from the beginning.
11:35 Hinsvar: *recheck
11:36 IamKwaN: ok ww
11:38 Hinsvar: 03:45:473 (4) - Don't you think you misplaced the finish w
11:39 IamKwaN: lol shd be on the tail, isnt it 
11:39 Hinsvar: Yes.
11:40 IamKwaN: ok :3
11:40 Hinsvar: 02:29:683 (4) - This too lol
11:40 Hinsvar: Replace the finish with a whistle, and add a finish on the tail.
11:40 IamKwaN: why lolllll
11:40 IamKwaN: ok i am baka  
11:41 Hinsvar: lol
11:41 IamKwaN: ok all of them are misplaced
11:41 IamKwaN: ;-;
11:41 Hinsvar: ok ;-;
11:41 Hinsvar: Eh, wkyik isn't here...
11:42 IamKwaN: i bet he is still pig
11:42 Hinsvar: lol
11:42 IamKwaN: lol
11:42 Hinsvar: His diff also misses too many cymbals.
11:42 Hinsvar: lol
11:43 IamKwaN: i saw he is still talking on qq at 4 am last nite ;-;
11:43 Hinsvar: Oh wow.
11:43 IamKwaN: lol his hitsounds are even simplier than mine lol
11:43 Hinsvar: lol
11:43 IamKwaN: lol
11:43 Hinsvar: Is 623 fine on you changing her parts?
11:44 Hinsvar: I'd like to get as many parts IRC-modded instead of in the forum lol
11:44 IamKwaN: lol i try to find her
11:44 Hinsvar: lol okay
11:45 IamKwaN: lol and the one who is talking with wkyik is 623 
11:45 IamKwaN: i mean last nite
11:45 IamKwaN: ;_;
11:45 Hinsvar: Okay lol
11:45 Hinsvar: ;_;
11:46 IamKwaN: in fact insane's hitsounds are done by 623 ._.
11:46 Hinsvar: ._.
11:50 Hinsvar: Oh lol Bakari asked me for help.
11:50 Hinsvar: Wait for a bit.
11:50 Hinsvar: Slap me if I forget!
11:50 Hinsvar:  /w\
11:51 IamKwaN: ok :D
11:57 *Hinsvar is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/379332 Printemps - Love marginal [Collab Insane]]
11:57 Hinsvar: Let's get back to the feels train w
11:58 IamKwaN: w no chance to slap u /me sad
11:58 IamKwaN: my hobby is to slap every BAT once
11:58 Hinsvar: KwaN so scary w
11:59 IamKwaN: i am not :c
11:59 Hinsvar: Okay :c
11:59 IamKwaN: :D
12:00 Hinsvar: :D
12:01 Hinsvar: 01:03:292 (7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - This is confusing to play IMO.
12:01 Hinsvar: Because of the stacks and stuff.
12:02 IamKwaN: yea i think so but i found Guy and some other players for testplaying
12:02 IamKwaN: they say ok AR8 is fine
12:02 IamKwaN:  i cant get a B for this map
12:02 IamKwaN: ;-;
12:03 Hinsvar: Well I'm talking about the pattern itself, not the AR :P
12:03 IamKwaN: yea this pattern is harsh
12:03 Hinsvar: ...But wait, AR8.3 seems to be cool.
12:03 Hinsvar: Try it lol
12:03 IamKwaN: lol ok
12:06 IamKwaN: yea lol
12:07 IamKwaN: good
12:07 Hinsvar: Okay lol
12:09 IamKwaN: woh-oh-oh
12:15 Hinsvar: hue
12:17 IamKwaN: roar where are they
12:18 Hinsvar: Who lol
12:18 IamKwaN: my DEAR GDers
12:19 Hinsvar: w
12:19 IamKwaN: \~/
12:21 Hinsvar: \w/
12:21 Hinsvar: 01:27:428 (2,3,1) - Why is this inconsistent lol
12:23 IamKwaN: ask that baka 623 :@
12:23 IamKwaN: ok changed lol
12:23 Hinsvar: hue
12:25 Hinsvar: 04:01:939 (8,9,1) - Don't you think the curve here looks a little... weird?
12:26 IamKwaN: yes lol
12:26 Hinsvar: lol
12:26 IamKwaN: omg i dont love this map anymore
12:26 IamKwaN: .  ..
12:27 Hinsvar: Why lol
12:27 IamKwaN: i dont like the style
12:27 IamKwaN: coz 623 maps first
12:27 IamKwaN: and i just imitate hers
12:28 IamKwaN: and it fails
12:28 IamKwaN: lol
12:28 Hinsvar: Okay :P
12:28 IamKwaN: OAQ
12:28 Hinsvar: Why D:
12:28 Hinsvar: Well that should be it.
12:28 Hinsvar: I'll mod wkyik's diff soon.
12:28 IamKwaN: lol
12:28 Hinsvar: lol
12:29 Hinsvar: Should I post this log lol
12:29 IamKwaN: ok :3
12:29 IamKwaN: update first then w
12:29 IamKwaN: yes :D/
12:29 IamKwaN: including my hobby there
12:29 Hinsvar: Okay lol

Will mod Hard soon here. nvm, IRC modded.

Hard
13:45 Kawaiwkyik: 0.0~
13:45 Hinsvar: owo
13:47 Kawaiwkyik: ovo" Iamkwan call me to in-game you :3
13:48 Hinsvar: Haha :D
13:48 Hinsvar: Well since you're here, let's do an IRC mod instead.
13:49 Kawaiwkyik: ok~
13:50 Hinsvar: First off, why are there not much finishes?
13:50 Hinsvar: There are a lot of places where you could add them.
13:51 Hinsvar: You know, cymbals and stuff like them.
13:52 Kawaiwkyik: lazy /.\ and my hitsounding is too bad
13:52 Hinsvar: Ask KwaN then o/
13:52 Hinsvar: *slapped by KwaN*
13:53 Kawaiwkyik: lol
13:53 Hinsvar: 00:05:774 - Well uh, at least add a whistle here.
13:53 Hinsvar: The instrument is very noticeable.
13:54 Kawaiwkyik: 00:06:676 - Here too?
13:54 Hinsvar: Yep.
13:55 Hinsvar: 00:30:134 (5) - Make this a straight slider like 00:30:586 (6,2) - ? It'd look neater and make a better flow.
13:56 Kawaiwkyik: ok~
13:56 Hinsvar: 00:49:082 - I don't think a Drum finish fits this... ._.
13:56 Hinsvar: Just use the Soft whistle.
13:57 Kawaiwkyik: changed
13:59 Hinsvar: 02:49:082 - Forgot a finish?
14:00 Kawaiwkyik: i use drum-finish here orz
14:00 Hinsvar: Oops.
14:01 Hinsvar: But you might as well use Soft here.
14:01 Hinsvar: To be consistent with the first kiai.
14:01 Hinsvar: It fits better anyway, IMO.
14:01 Kawaiwkyik: maybe soft-finish more fits here?
14:01 Hinsvar: Yep.
14:01 Kawaiwkyik: ok
14:03 Hinsvar: 03:35:097 - Again, consider using soft-finish here.
14:03 Hinsvar: Drum-whsitle doesn't really go along with the cymbal.
14:05 Kawaiwkyik: ok~
14:05 Hinsvar: 03:11:638 - Increase the volume here to 30%,  03:26:074 - to 40%, and add a timing point at 03:38:931 - with 50% volume so the hitsounds will be more audible.
14:05 Hinsvar: Right now it just feels awkward to play because of the weak hitsounds.
14:06 Hinsvar: 03:44:119 (1) - Add a finish!
14:06 Hinsvar: 03:45:924 - ^
14:07 Kawaiwkyik: missing a lot of finish /.\ my bad
14:07 Hinsvar: lol
14:08 Hinsvar: 03:59:345 (4) - Might want to start at 03:59:458 - instead and add a circle at 03:59:345 - so you can follow the cymbal at 03:59:458 - .
14:08 Hinsvar: I'd say it's okay to follow the vocal and skip the instruments sometimes.
14:08 Hinsvar: But not if you skip a cymbal :P
14:08 Hinsvar: Or just any strong instrument in general.
14:10 Kawaiwkyik: 01:20:435 (4,5) - 02:43:217 (2,3) -  same?
14:13 Hinsvar: Preferably change them too.
14:14 Kawaiwkyik: ok
14:15 Kawaiwkyik: changed~
14:17 Hinsvar: Okay, you can give your diff to KwaN now \o/
14:18 Kawaiwkyik: ok><
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Thank you w Updated!
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Ugh, I hate to say this but the combo at 03:17:503 (1,2) should be swapped in wkyik's diff. Sorry, completely oversaw that.

Slap Tell me once it's fixed.
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KEMBALIKANLAH PADAKU HATIKU YANG TEMBUS PANDANG

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Congrats~ :)
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MESKIPUN KITA TEMAN TAPI KU MENCINTAIMU
GALAU MAKSIMUM WUBWUB
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Hinsvar wrote:

KEMBALIKANLAH PADAKU HATIKU YANG TEMBUS PANDANG

MESKIPUN KITA TEMAN TAPI KU MENCINTAIMU
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YESSSSS FINALLY MORE RANKED LL SONGS

Congrats! >w<
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Greetings,

this map has been considered as not ready for Ranked, yet. Therefore we disqualify this beatmap and put it back to WIP. Please keep in mind that disqualified maps are handled by the Beatmap Appreciation Team and will be sent back to Qualified by them. The Quality Assurance Team is not responsible for sending your beatmap back to Qualified.

We disqualify this beatmap for the following reason(s):

[General]

  1. The difficulty spread is uneven. We consider the transistion from the Normal to Hard as too big. The Normal was mainly consisting of 1/1-rhythmed hitobjects, whereas the Hard turned out to be throughoutly 1/2 with overmapped 1/4 objects. Considering the Collab coming after that, the spread is appearing even more imbalanced. A new difficulty between Normal and Hard would work out the best in our eyes
  2. The mapping quality decayed as more we proceeded in playing the difficulties. We wish you to map more to the song, since this is a rhythm music game, after all.
[Insane]

  1. 00:22:916 (1) - We consider this whole map to play oddly, but this threw us entirely off. We do not know if this is working as you wished, but you should stick more to the music
These concerns have been pointed out during the revision of your beatmap. Since we were not satisfied with the turnout of this, we can not let this surpass, yet. It's your responsibility now to fix our above named concerns and find modders and BATs to help you getting this to Qualified again. We always recommend you to receive further revision by the modding community before rolling this for Qualified again.
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Yea, I totally agree with your points. I am glad QATs come and unrank it.
Lemme discuss with my GDers first before taking any action.
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wat de fhauq
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DDDDDDDDDDDDD:
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when is the rerank? does this need new difficulty? or what? what is the problemo??
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how to rat a beatmap?
I like this beatmap! :)
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.....This map needs to be updated. I want this song ranked T__T
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hi ar
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Revived, boyz!
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Yuii- wrote:

Revived, boyz!
Oh, that's good to hear. :D
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(for posts I just removed, please avoid spamming things which aren't talking about the beatmap. Thank you :3)
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Printemps is great
waiting for re-rank :3)
Meyrink
729 posts
Joined February 2014
Meyrink
oh come on shARPII that was just for fun :3 !
good luck for rerank kwan =w=/
HabiHolic
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Joined October 2012
HabiHolic
GL Reranked KwaN!

you can ask get me bubbled!
Koiyuki
Beatmap Nominator
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Joined March 2013
Koiyuki
aji
yf_bmp
Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper
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Joined December 2011
yf_bmp
支持
Equim
335 posts
Joined June 2014
Equim
when?
BanchoBot
w00t p00t
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Here since the beginning
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