DJPop wrote:

~Easy~
Fine.

~Hard~
00:39:164 (7) - new combo Fixed
02:13:165 (1) - move left 1 grid (Lv3) Fixed
02:14:594 (6) - move right 1 grid (Lv3)Fixed
02:14:880 (7) - move right 2 grids (Lv3)Fixed
02:22:880 (1,2) - move right 1 grid (Lv3)Fixed
02:24:023 (5) - move left 1 grid (Lv3)Fixed

~Insane~
00:36:165 (1) - remove new combo Done
00:40:737 (1) - ^ Done
00:59:451 (1) - ^ Done
01:51:165 (1) - start on blue tick Done
01:55:737 (1) - ^ Done


+Star

sonnyc wrote:

[General]

• I think you should Resnap all notes on every diff.Fixed

[Easy]

• 00:24:593 (4) None Done
  01:09:736 (4) ^ Done
  01:29:450 (8) Delete? It's good for me
  01:40:022 (2) None I like it this way

[Hard]

• 00:30:736 (8) New combo I'm fine by this
  01:02:593 (8) Delete ^
  01:23:879 (5) Clap at end? I think none is good
  01:41:164 (2) None Done
  *01:46:879* Insert break Done
  02:52:022(3) Reduce 1 reverse Feels good done
  02:54:307 (2) ^ ^

[Insane]

• 00:31:879 (10) Whistle It's fine the way it is
  00:45:164 (7) New combo ^

Shinxyn wrote:

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Easy- fair enough, but... I kinda want a spinner for Easy, just so the points aren't all the same That's it Add a spinner at the end

Hard- xD this was renamed from Normal, Normal+ then Hard, right? The spacing is kinda high for Normal, it is kinda like Normal+, but... preferably Hard... so add 2 to overall diff..? or just 1 if you'd like Yes the dillema Add 1 to OD
00:40:308 (5) - mmm the rest of the combo's hitsound is strong, add whistle/finish to end of this slider to match?Done
01:41:165 (2) - clap? (to sound like combo before this?) Remove the previous one to match this
02:06:308 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - the claps... if you're trying to match the music's claps, shift the claps to the next white ticks (though 6's slider is over that), also, the pace changes at the next combo (to match the music) I think I'll stick with this
02:06:308 (1) - left a tick~? (spreads 1,2,3,4,5 out better) Done
02:24:023 (5) - ^ (or just... move this whole combo around a bit) Done
02:42:880 (1) - @_@ there are sliders that go for 5 repeats like this and then 4 repeats like 02:45:165 (1).. even though they sound the same in the vocal/music... kinda misleading in some parts, just a note Forgot to remove that
Hmm the combos could be organized better, but they're fine

Insane- mmm fair
00:50:308 - don't mix hitsounds please Fixed
00:56:594 (8) - ^Fixed
01:46:879 (1) - kinda hard to see when following the (sorta) heavy spacingR-really? but I 'll still go with this
02:06:308 (1) to 02:17:737 (5) - the claps -could- match the music's clap, but then that would mean shifting all the claps u have now to the next white ticks.... just saying hmm... guess I'll go with this again
03:21:737 (1) - o-o no hitsounds here? Another miss thanks for pointing it out
The combo's could also be a bit more organized here, but its fine..

Hitsounds... are okayish Well, guess I'll learn more

Lokamp wrote:

Easy
01:20:593 (5,1) - new combo on 5th, remove next new combo
01:33:165 (4) - add a whistle or a clap on this slider's start

Hard
[General] Except for some strange cases of wrong spacing, there are some strange mini-sliders, like on 00:55:737 (4)
or on 01:03:737 (1) ... try to place them better!
00:30:023 (6) - new combo

Insane
00:56:594 (8) - new combo

Spacing is still improvable on Hard and Insane modes but, as it is now, this map is a good result for a 1st try of mapping.
Have your star! Thanks as it is now I think I'll learn more about insane spacing

blissfulyoshi wrote:

Popping the p-bubble because the beats sound off. Look at the next post for details.

Easy:
Combo mod:
00:26:308 (1) - to follow your pattern of having 2 line of lyrics per combo, remove new combo (this is optional since this will make the combo rather long)
01:32:594 (3) - new combo to be consistent with 00:50:879 (1)
01:41:165 (4,1) - remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to 4 to be consistent with 00:50:879 (1)

Hard:
Combo mod:
00:30:023 (6) - new combo for the next line of lyrics
00:50:880 (6) - new combo to be consistent with 01:00:022 (1)
00:52:594 (1) - Throughout the song you sometimes add a new combo to the "woooh." This felt weird to me because you are not consistent with this (Ex: 01:01:737 (5)). Also, 00:50:308 (5) and places similar to it do not have their own combo. I would like to know your reasoning for this.
03:07:451 (1,3) - remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to 3 to include the "woooh" in your combo and follow your lyrical pattern

Insane:
Normal mod:
01:46:879 (1) - since the repeat to the slider is barely visible after the 300 from the previous slider, may you pleasemake the repeat easier to see

Combo mod:
01:04:880 (1) - remove new combo to be consistent with 00:56:164 (6)
01:12:737 (1,2) - remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to 2 to follow the lyrics
01:31:451 (1,3) - remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to 3 to be consistent with 00:50:308 (5)
01:40:594 (1,2) - remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to 2 to be consistent with 00:50:308 (5)
01:42:451 (1,2) - remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to 2 to be consistent with 00:52:165 (3)
03:25:737 (1,3) - remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to 3 to be consistent with 03:21:164 (5)

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Nice map overall. Fix the offset and I'll rep-bubble the song. Star.

Zerostarry wrote:

Your combo colors are inconsistent. Also, please don't use black.