Leorda wrote:

NI HAO!

[Timing]
The timing feels off
1) BPM : 150,00
Offset : 6.400 fixed

For H-boy's diff
1) BPM : 300,00 wait please
Offset : 6.400
Please set the Timing Section to 1x if the BPM Adjustment is 2x and set the Timing Section to 0.5x if the BPM Adjustment is 1x

[Star brightness]
01:00:800 (1) - Add a clap hitsound at the end of slider
01:01:600 (2) - ^
01:02:400 (3) - ^
01:03:200 (4) - ^
01:04:000 (1) - ^
01:05:600 (2) - ^
01:06:400 (4) - ^
01:07:200 (6) - Add a clap hitsound at 2nd repeating slider and the end of slider
01:10:600 (4) - Move 1 grid right?[/color]

[H-boy's Luna]
Look [Timing], if you already fix it, PM Me yea~

[Moon Light] done~
00:06:400 (3) - Add a finish hitsound at the start of slider

GREAT MAP!
STAR!

DJPop wrote:

Offset: 6,400yea


~Star brightness~ <<< "Starlight" is better
You should map til the end of the song.
00:00:200 (1) - silence it i fixed stop time

~H-boy's Luna~
01:52:000 (2,3) - remove sliderwhistledone

~Moonlight~ <<< can also write "Moonlight"
01:18:800 (12) - new combo
01:58:800 - end Kiai here

~Sun Shine~ <<< can also write "Sunshine"
00:31:100 (6) - move left 1 grid (Lv3)
00:52:600 (11) - new combo
00:52:800 (1) - remove new combo
00:53:400 (4) - new combo
00:54:300 (2) - start on red tick
00:56:300 (4) - ^
00:59:500 (6) - ^
01:22:800 (1) - remove new combo no
01:31:600 (1) - ^yea
01:48:400 (1) - ^no


+Star

tsukamaete wrote:

不错 尽管sunshine难度风格有点像farto的moonlight

NI HAO!

[Skin]
1) spinner-clear is missing
2) spinner-bonus is missing

[H-boy Luna]
00:51:500 (x) - Add note?
01:17:800 (x) - ^

Oh, I gave you this

lcclarke wrote:

[Starlight]
我觉得Hitsound应该规律化
00:14:800 - Whistle应该加在这里更好,因为与前面的Whistle一样都是间隔8拍. 这个问题我也思考了很久，一开始和你一样，最终给改成现在这样了，我每个难度有一套不同的音效，而这个难度我想还原最大的音乐
00:15:600 (4) - 这里取消Whistle
00:40:400 - 加上whistle
01:12:000 (5) , 01:12:400 (6) - 这2个用soft-hitfinish不合适,感觉太突兀,可以使用低音量的normal-hitnormal来代替感觉更好我不打算用normal的音效..

[H-boy's Luna]修改你说的一些

来一个死大!!~~

xBubu wrote:

star!

我想吃kudosu>"<

LKs wrote:

Leorda wrote:

NI HAO!

[Timing]
The timing feels off
1) BPM : 150,00
Offset : 6.400 fixed

For H-boy's diff
1) BPM : 300,00 wait please
Offset : 6.400
Please set the Timing Section to 1x if the BPM Adjustment is 2x and set the Timing Section to 0.5x if the BPM Adjustment is 1x

[Star brightness]
01:00:800 (1) - Add a clap hitsound at the end of slider
01:01:600 (2) - ^
01:02:400 (3) - ^
01:03:200 (4) - ^
01:04:000 (1) - ^
01:05:600 (2) - ^
01:06:400 (4) - ^
01:07:200 (6) - Add a clap hitsound at 2nd repeating slider and the end of slider
01:10:600 (4) - Move 1 grid right?[/color]

[H-boy's Luna]
Look [Timing], if you already fix it, PM Me yea~

[Moon Light] done~
00:06:400 (3) - Add a finish hitsound at the start of slider

GREAT MAP!
STAR!

thx

LKs wrote:

Leorda wrote:

NI HAO!

[Timing]
The timing feels off
1) BPM : 150,00
Offset : 6.400 fixed

For H-boy's diff
1) BPM : 300,00 wait please
Offset : 6.400
Please set the Timing Section to 1x if the BPM Adjustment is 2x and set the Timing Section to 0.5x if the BPM Adjustment is 1x

[Star brightness]
01:00:800 (1) - Add a clap hitsound at the end of slider
01:01:600 (2) - ^
01:02:400 (3) - ^
01:03:200 (4) - ^
01:04:000 (1) - ^
01:05:600 (2) - ^
01:06:400 (4) - ^
01:07:200 (6) - Add a clap hitsound at 2nd repeating slider and the end of slider
01:10:600 (4) - Move 1 grid right?[/color]

[H-boy's Luna]
Look [Timing], if you already fix it, PM Me yea~

[Moon Light] done~
00:06:400 (3) - Add a finish hitsound at the start of slider

GREAT MAP!
STAR!

thx

H-boy wrote:

早知道这么多STAR...
我就用Kudosu支持我自己的图去了...= =~XD

Natteke desu wrote:

Hi.

If I put "(?)" - it means I'm not sure.

[Starlight] done

01:37:600 - Kiai ends here (?)
01:55:200 - Unused timing section?

[xBubu'JUMP!]

01:58:300 - mby add a beat here? In the track there is a beat. i dont think so

[Sunshine] done

01:58:400 (3) - Using Grid Level 3, move it up 1 grid.

ignorethis wrote:

+16ms~ i think
Timing is early by ~20ms. (Happy30's suggestion is to +16ms on the current offset)
Use 1/6 for the following sections (take Luna as an example): 00:28:000 (8,9), 00:29:600 (2,3), 01:35:200 (8,9), 01:36:800 (2,3). ] fixed

<Starlight>
Why is this difficulty shorter than others? umm,,i want this diff very soft, but ths final part too heated

<Sunshine> all fixed
I recommend overall=8
01:23:600 (3) - This one is not allowed (If I missed any others change them too)
01:49:200 (3) - ^

star'd. Tell me for a recheck and pubble.

you didn't fix the 1/6 notes =.= I mean apply this to all your difs, not only the one I mentioned.

Shulin wrote:

General:done

-- Source looks better as "TEMPO: QQR2's MUSIC TEAM"
-- Delete the "," before xBubu

Starlight:done

00:00:216 (1) - Start on first white tick?

Good!

about 1/3, i really want to use it .but in fact its really not good For this maps!

That's all, nice maps! ignorethis said he'd re-check so for now here is a star

abalee wrote:

Sunshine:
01:12:016 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 这一段的1/4不好理解。可以考虑弄回之前的1/4的间距或者渐增的间距。

xBubu's JUMP!：
01:47:816 (4,1) - 建议这里不要jump 改变成了不jump的方式

Hboy's
01:41:816 (1,2) - spacing? fixed

顺便把那个.osb文件删掉再 full upload一次。 我在xbubu难度里面有SB的提示，难道不需要.osb文件吗

happy30 wrote:

offset 6.404 i like offest=6404

on every diff: select all inherit timing sections and move them +16 ms (+4 if you use my offset)

[Starlight]

01:12:016 (5,6) - restack under (4) fidex

[H-boy's Luna]

can you make the BPM 150? ..bpm=300 may better, sry
then make the inherit timing sections 2x bpm instead of 1x

[xBubu's JUMP!]

the speed up warning should not pop up around 1min removed

[Sunshine] fixed

00:54:732 (3) - hmm? x_x
00:59:932 (7) - ^

call me back for protobub

happy30 wrote:

all diffs: start kiai on 01:13:604? and on 01:39:204? it not interchangeable
sorry change offset to: 4 you mean make it =4? yea done

you also forgot to put every inherit timing section +4 ms done


[Moonlight] fixed

01:27:204 (1) - remove new combo
01:31:204 (5) - add new combo
01:44:804 (1) - remove new combo
01:45:204 (7) - add new combo
01:45:804 (1) - remove new combo

[H-boy's Luna] yea..

no, put 150 bpm and make the inherit timing sections 2x bpm
all diffs should have the same BPM

[xBubu's JUMP!] removed

00:33:404 (1) - speed up should appear here? i dont think its needed
00:40:604 (1) - ^

also please recheck all of your combo colours, I think you could make them a bit better.advanced pink color

happy30 wrote:

sorry i meant something else with combo colours >_> my bad
iill point them out
if you dont agree with some then just leave them

[Starlight]

New combo colour:

00:21:604 (1) - remove √
00:22:404 (2) - add√
00:28:804 (5) - add√
00:29:204 (1) - remove√
01:07:204 (6) - add√
01:09:004 (1) - remove√
01:10:604 (4) - add√
01:21:604 (1) - remove√
01:28:004 (1) - remove
01:31:204 (1) - remove√
01:32:804 (4) - add√

[H-boy's Luna]

00:28:804 (10) - add
00:29:204 (1) - remove
00:41:004 (12) - add√
00:41:604 (1) - remove√
01:22:804 (9) - add
01:23:204 (1) - remove
01:36:004 (10) - add
01:36:404 (1) - remove
01:48:204 (12) - add
01:48:804 (1) - remove

[Moonlight]

00:24:004 (5) - add√
00:25:204 (1) - remove√
00:25:604 (2) - add
01:06:604 (4) - add? (because of 0.5x bpm)√
01:18:804 (1) - remove√
01:46:804 (1) - remove√

[xBubu's JUMP!]

00:32:204 (1) - remove√
00:33:004 (1) - remove√
00:36:204 (1) - remove
00:39:404 (1) - remove√
00:53:804 (1) - remove√
00:54:004 (2) - add√
00:55:804 (1) - remove
00:56:004 (2) - add
00:58:404 (1) - remove
00:59:204 (1) - remove
01:07:004 (1) - removespacing change here
01:07:204 (2) - add^
01:15:604 (1) - remove√
01:22:604 (12) - add
01:23:204 (1) - remove
01:33:004 (1) - remove?√
01:55:204 (8) - add√
01:55:404 (1) - remove√

[Sunshine]

resnap all notes pleaseSome worng spacings were found and fixed~

00:13:804 (1) - remove
00:15:020 (5) - add√
00:15:620 (1) - remove√
00:23:004 (1) - remove
00:23:804 (1) - remove√
00:24:004 (2) - add√
00:27:204 (2) - add√
00:27:604 (1) - remove√
00:28:004 (3) - add√
00:53:404 (1) - remove
00:57:204 (6) - add
00:57:604 (1) - remove
00:58:404 (1) - remove√
01:36:804 (1) - remove
01:48:804 (1) - remove√

call me back for bub

blissfulyoshi wrote:

Sorry for a very late mod. Not going to mod combos since I believe that happy30 has that covered.

Remove the .osb file and do a full-resubmit.

Starlight:

H-boy's Luna: done
Timing section mod:
00:11:004 - unneeded timing section, please remove
00:16:004 - since this timing section changes the hitsound volume, please move it back a quarter note
00:16:404 - ^
00:16:804 - ^
I am going to advise you comb through your timing sections throughout the rest of your diff

Moonlight: It feels weird that this is worth almost as much as H-boy's Luna, but it is a lot easier
Timing section mod: done
01:40:404 - since this timing section changes the hitsound volume, please move it back a quarter note
01:42:004 - ^
01:51:404 - unneeded timing section, please remove
01:55:204 - ^

xBubu's JUMP!:

Sunshine: done
Normal mod:
The notes in this diff are not snapped

Timing section mod: done
01:07:204 - since this timing section changes the hitsound volume, please move it back a quarter note
01:56:804 - a quarter note before this timing section, make an inherited timing section with the same hitsound settings but with kiai

==================================
Nice map. Star. (For some reason I feel H-boy's Luna is the hardest diff for me) I will let Happy30 take care of the p-bubbling.

orioncomet wrote:

[General] √
- BG Colour: Black ?

[H-boy's Luna]
00:33:404 - this timing selection seem useless?√
00:36:604 - ^√
00:42:804 - ^fixed audio
00:46:204 - ^√
01:18:204 - ^√
01:43:804 - ^√

other diff are fine, starr ~

abalee wrote:

Sunshine:
Objects aren't snapped!

abalee wrote:

Unsnapped not fixed yet.

plz make sure you run the AIMod and it doesn't say "Object isn't snapped!"

Starrodkirby86 wrote:

[H-boy's Luna]:
01:36:404 (1,2) - Space out (1) a little more to the left...? Or at least make that repeat more visible... :3
fixed

[Sunshine]:
01:20:904 (9,10) - It's a note overlap. Better separate them. It probably came from the recent resnap.fixed

Oh yes, your map lacks a hitcircleoverlay.png . Please add that. You can use the template skin's, if you want.done

Delete the .osb too!

abalee wrote:

Fixed.