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Ayana Taketatsu - Let's Go! (Azu-nyan Ver.)

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Xgor
Elite Mapper
2,534 posts
Joined April 2009
Xgor
~Background~
The proporations are wrong and gives me black borders :/
Please resize it

~MP3~
More than 50% of the mp3 is unused, cut it or map the rest!

~Skin~
You have skin stuff that are unnecessary in a normal map like selection-mod-autoplay and menu-back.
Remove them
Also.... is this skin really a K-ON skin? (Never watched the anime but......)

~All difficulties~
The snapping are horrible :/
Just use 1/1 1/2 and sometimes 1/4
Add preview point
Use a smaller grid size and then use distance snap
Don't use to much kiai fountains

~Hard~
01:23:183 (1) - Spinners must give at least 2000 bonus in auto to be ranked!

Not a horrible map but there is a lot of things to fix!
*star*
Kotomi-chan
139 posts
Joined April 2009
Topic Starter
Kotomi-chan

Xgor wrote:

~Background~
The proporations are wrong and gives me black borders :/
Please resize it

~MP3~
More than 50% of the mp3 is unused, cut it or map the rest!

~Skin~
You have skin stuff that are unnecessary in a normal map like selection-mod-autoplay and menu-back.
Remove them
Also.... is this skin really a K-ON skin? (Never watched the anime but......)

~All difficulties~
The snapping are horrible :/
Just use 1/1 1/2 and sometimes 1/4
Add preview point
Use a smaller grid size and then use distance snap
Don't use to much kiai fountains

~Hard~
01:23:183 (1) - Spinners must give at least 2000 bonus in auto to be ranked!

Not a horrible map but there is a lot of things to fix!
*star*
Thanks for mod! all the suggestions are done, but normal is incomplete xD
Vicho
887 posts
Joined May 2009
Vicho
....
Last edited by Vicho , edited 1 time in total.
Kotomi-chan
139 posts
Joined April 2009
Topic Starter
Kotomi-chan

Vicho-kun wrote:

Pudiste haberme pedido a mi que te editara la canción porque se nota el momento en que lo cortaste, si quieres te la edito yo, a menos que tengas problemas con eso, bueno y me preguntaba, me dejas hacer un dificultad que se pueda llamar Vicho's World Tour =D XD
Bueno solo si me dejas, trataría de hacer una gran diff :3
Ya sé que es algo inesperado de preguntar y que ni siquiera nos conocemos pero ambos tenemos algo en común, somos de Chile =O! XD

Bueno, avisas si quieres, bye-bee!!
Jojo, ¡Claro xD! cualquier ayuda es bienvenida~ :3
Y si, si puedes arreglarme ese corte raro que le hice estaría mejor xDU
Viva Shile ;O!
Mion-Nya
70 posts
Joined June 2009
Mion-Nya
te salio bastante bueno xDDDDDDD; auu enseñame >_>
por sierto el edit del skin bastante wow! xD muy bueno como nos quedo el skin mwaahhahaha! 8D :D

te estrellare contra la pared XD
Kim Jin Seok
369 posts
Joined December 2008
Kim Jin Seok
[Budokan]
00:07:362 - Move to 00:07:255
02:14:112~02:14:540 - [Suggest] Circle distance too long.

[School Festival]
00:14:129 - Move to 00:14:112

..Star+
Gens
osu! Alumni
3,485 posts
Joined August 2008
Gens
[General]
  1. The beatmap's name should be "Let's Go! (Azu-nyan Ver.)", instead of "Lets Go! (Azu-nyan Ver.)". Remember to Full Submit after that!
  2. Set a preview point by going to the menu Timing -> Set Current Position as Preview. Set it around 00:56:621.
  3. You have two .osb files inside your folder, please delete the one you aren't using.
  4. Remove the following from tags: "Let's go azu-nyan version ver. Ayana Taketatsu" and "bu".
[Timing]
  1. BPM: 140.00
  2. Offset: 907
[Skin]
  1. These files aren't used while playing:
    1. hitcircleselect.png
    2. menu-back.png
    3. ranking-B.png
    4. ranking-C.png
    5. ranking-D.png
    6. ranking-S.png
    7. ranking-SH.PNG
    8. ranking-perfect.png
    9. ranking-title.png
    10. ranking-X.png
    11. ranking-XH.png
    12. scorebar-colour.png
    13. star.png
    You need to delete them and full submit.
  2. There are some files from the "Xi-style" skin... do you have permission to use them? At least give Xiaounlimited credit in the first post.
  3. There must be some discrepancy between the hitx, hitxk and hitxg and so on...
  4. The "sliderb" image sequence needs to be polished a bit... it isn't centered and it looks weird while playing.
[Budokan!]
  1. Resnap all notes.
~ ~ ~

Hmm, the map still needs some work... make sure to use 1/4 only and resnap all notes. You need to recheck the map yourself if you don't want a big nazi list in here. It should be pretty obvious what to fix and whatnot. :?
Call me back when you have fixed all these things.
anonymous_old
0 posts
Here since the beginning
anonymous_old
School Festival!
SPOILER

[*] Fix the slider shapes.

00:12:076 (6) : Remove this slider.
00:12:076 (x) : Add a beat here.
00:12:612 (x) : Add a beat here.
00:13:040 (8) : Remove this slider.
00:13:255 (x) : Add a beat here.
00:29:647 (x) : Add a beat here.
00:34:362 (11) : Make this slider shorter.
00:41:219 (4) : Remove this slider.
00:40:362 (3) : Make this slider repeat one more time.
00:50:005 (2) : Remove this slider.
00:50:862 (x) : Add a beat here.
01:23:112 (2) : Unrankable.
01:48:719 (x) : Add a beat here.
01:57:612 (x) : Add a beat here.
01:57:826 (x) : Add a beat here.
01:58:040 (x) : Add a beat here.
02:20:862 (1) : Shorten by 1 tick.
02:21:290 (x) : Add a beat here.

Budokan!
SPOILER

00:06:826 (3) : Move back by 1 tick.

Try and fix this map by redoing it.

Kotomi-chan
139 posts
Joined April 2009
Topic Starter
Kotomi-chan

Loogiesquared wrote:

School Festival!
SPOILER

[*] Fix the slider shapes.

00:12:076 (6) : Remove this slider.
00:12:076 (x) : Add a beat here.
00:12:612 (x) : Add a beat here.
00:13:040 (8) : Remove this slider.
00:13:255 (x) : Add a beat here.
00:29:647 (x) : Add a beat here.
00:34:362 (11) : Make this slider shorter.
00:41:219 (4) : Remove this slider.
00:40:362 (3) : Make this slider repeat one more time.
00:50:005 (2) : Remove this slider.
00:50:862 (x) : Add a beat here.
01:23:112 (2) : Unrankable.
01:48:719 (x) : Add a beat here.
01:57:612 (x) : Add a beat here.
01:57:826 (x) : Add a beat here.
01:58:040 (x) : Add a beat here.
02:20:862 (1) : Shorten by 1 tick.
02:21:290 (x) : Add a beat here.
Budokan!
SPOILER

00:06:826 (3) : Move back by 1 tick.

Try and fix this map by redoing it.

Thanks a lot! all the changes are done ;3 I'll give you a kodosu :D

Gens wrote:

SPOILER
[General]
  1. The beatmap's name should be "Let's Go! (Azu-nyan Ver.)", instead of "Lets Go! (Azu-nyan Ver.)". Remember to Full Submit after that!
  2. Set a preview point by going to the menu Timing -> Set Current Position as Preview. Set it around 00:56:621.
  3. You have two .osb files inside your folder, please delete the one you aren't using.
  4. Remove the following from tags: "Let's go azu-nyan version ver. Ayana Taketatsu" and "bu".
[Timing]
  1. BPM: 140.00
  2. Offset: 907
[Skin]
  1. These files aren't used while playing:
    1. hitcircleselect.png
    2. menu-back.png
    3. ranking-B.png
    4. ranking-C.png
    5. ranking-D.png
    6. ranking-S.png
    7. ranking-SH.PNG
    8. ranking-perfect.png
    9. ranking-title.png
    10. ranking-X.png
    11. ranking-XH.png
    12. scorebar-colour.png
    13. star.png
    You need to delete them and full submit.
  2. There are some files from the "Xi-style" skin... do you have permission to use them? At least give Xiaounlimited credit in the first post.
  3. There must be some discrepancy between the hitx, hitxk and hitxg and so on...
  4. The "sliderb" image sequence needs to be polished a bit... it isn't centered and it looks weird while playing.
[Budokan!]
  1. Resnap all notes.
~ ~ ~
Hmm, the map still needs some work... make sure to use 1/4 only and resnap all notes. You need to recheck the map yourself if you don't want a big nazi list in here. It should be pretty obvious what to fix and whatnot. :?
Call me back when you have fixed all these things.
Thanks!!! I'm fixing and testing the map now. :3 I'll give you a kodosu too xD
Beuchi
osu! Alumni
2,288 posts
Joined February 2009
Beuchi
GO GO GO!!

Veaaamos :3

Lo primero: Asegúrate de que has arreglado las cosas que te han dicho en los otros mods, la mitad de los cambios sugeridos por Gens no los veo en el map... Si los has hecho entonces haz un Full Submit.

~All Diffs~
- Necesitas dificultades más fáciles~
- Tienes 2 Combocolours iguales, borra uno.
- Aplica el Timing que te dio Gens y haz un Resnap (Timing - Resnap all notes)
- Muchos de los elementos del Storyboard aparecen tarde, sobre todo los avisos de "Speed Down" y "Speed Up"
- La imagen que tienes como "hit0" es un poco grande.

~School Festival!~
- Asegúrate de revisar cada nota con el Distance Snap activado.
00:09:799 (3) - Muévelo al tick blanco.
00:12:692 (1,2,3,4,5) - Muévelos al tick rojo.
00:24:799 (1) - Haz que empiece en el tick blanco.
00:56:942 (7) - Muévelo al tick blanco.
00:57:692 (1) - Añade una repetición más.
01:03:799 (2) - Borra una repetición.
01:04:549 (x) - Añade una nota.
01:06:157 (1) -Muévelo al tick rojo.
01:21:478 (11) - Haz que acabe en el tick rojo.
01:22:656 (1,2,3,4) - Muévelos al tick blanco.
01:39:692 (7) - Slider escondido, no es rankeable
01:40:335 (1) - Acábalo en 01:41:621.
01:44:514 (7,8) - Muévelo al tick blanco.
01:57:585 (3,4,5) - Muévelos al tick rojo.
02:04:442 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - Muévelos al tick rojo.
02:13:121 (1) - Añade una repetición.
02:14:621 (1) - Haz que acabe en 02:16:121
02:20:835 (1) - Acórtalo hasta el tick blanco.
02:23:192 (1) - Dos notas en el mismo sitio, no es rankeable. Mueve el spinner hacia delante.
02:25:442 (1) - Alárgalo hasta 02:29:621.

~Budokan!~
- Asegúrate de revisar cada nota con el Distance Snap activado.
00:24:907 (1) - Alárgalo hasta 00:27:907
00:28:442 (1) - Muévelo al tick blanco.
00:31:335 (7) - Añade una repetición.
00:38:621 (1) - La flecha de repetición del slider está escondida, no es rankeable.
00:52:656 (1) - Muévelo al tick blanco.
00:57:049 (2) - Añade 2 repeticiones.
01:01:764 (4) - Acórtalo hasta el tick rojo.
01:09:478 (1) - Haz que acabe en el tick rojo.
01:13:657 (3) - Muévelo al tick blanco y acórtalo hasta el tick rojo.
01:31:335 (3) - Slider escondido, no es rankeable.
01:40:335 (1,1) - Por qué no los haces un solo spinner? Los spinners deben tener al menos un bonus de 2000 en Auto...
01:42:156 (1) - Muévelo al tick blanco y alárgalo hasta donde estaba.
01:47:192 (6) - Acórtalo hasta el tick rojo.
01:48:371 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Muévelos al tick rojo.
01:52:335 (14) - Acórtalo hasta el tick blanco.
01:55:121 (1) - Acórtalo hasta el tick blanco.
02:07:871 (1) - Muévelo al tick blanco.

Omg que largo xDDD Bueno, aun asi no está tan mal, así que te doy una estrellita ^^ Buena suerte!!
Vicho
887 posts
Joined May 2009
Vicho
Aqui te dejo mi diff, la hice fácil :3
Cualquier cosa me avisas :3

Download: Ayana Taketatsu - Let's Go! (Azu-nyan Ver.) (Kotomi-chan) [Vicho's Training Camp].osu
Kotomi-chan
139 posts
Joined April 2009
Topic Starter
Kotomi-chan

Beuchi-chan wrote:

GO GO GO!!

Veaaamos :3
SPOILER
Lo primero: Asegúrate de que has arreglado las cosas que te han dicho en los otros mods, la mitad de los cambios sugeridos por Gens no los veo en el map... Si los has hecho entonces haz un Full Submit.

~All Diffs~
- Necesitas dificultades más fáciles~
- Tienes 2 Combocolours iguales, borra uno.
- Aplica el Timing que te dio Gens y haz un Resnap (Timing - Resnap all notes)
- Muchos de los elementos del Storyboard aparecen tarde, sobre todo los avisos de "Speed Down" y "Speed Up"
- La imagen que tienes como "hit0" es un poco grande.

~School Festival!~
- Asegúrate de revisar cada nota con el Distance Snap activado.
00:09:799 (3) - Muévelo al tick blanco.
00:12:692 (1,2,3,4,5) - Muévelos al tick rojo.
00:24:799 (1) - Haz que empiece en el tick blanco.
00:56:942 (7) - Muévelo al tick blanco.
00:57:692 (1) - Añade una repetición más.
01:03:799 (2) - Borra una repetición.
01:04:549 (x) - Añade una nota.
01:06:157 (1) -Muévelo al tick rojo.
01:21:478 (11) - Haz que acabe en el tick rojo.
01:22:656 (1,2,3,4) - Muévelos al tick blanco.
01:39:692 (7) - Slider escondido, no es rankeable
01:40:335 (1) - Acábalo en 01:41:621.
01:44:514 (7,8) - Muévelo al tick blanco.
01:57:585 (3,4,5) - Muévelos al tick rojo.
02:04:442 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - Muévelos al tick rojo.
02:13:121 (1) - Añade una repetición.
02:14:621 (1) - Haz que acabe en 02:16:121
02:20:835 (1) - Acórtalo hasta el tick blanco.
02:23:192 (1) - Dos notas en el mismo sitio, no es rankeable. Mueve el spinner hacia delante.
02:25:442 (1) - Alárgalo hasta 02:29:621.

~Budokan!~
- Asegúrate de revisar cada nota con el Distance Snap activado.
00:24:907 (1) - Alárgalo hasta 00:27:907
00:28:442 (1) - Muévelo al tick blanco.
00:31:335 (7) - Añade una repetición.
00:38:621 (1) - La flecha de repetición del slider está escondida, no es rankeable.
00:52:656 (1) - Muévelo al tick blanco.
00:57:049 (2) - Añade 2 repeticiones.
01:01:764 (4) - Acórtalo hasta el tick rojo.
01:09:478 (1) - Haz que acabe en el tick rojo.
01:13:657 (3) - Muévelo al tick blanco y acórtalo hasta el tick rojo.
01:31:335 (3) - Slider escondido, no es rankeable.
01:40:335 (1,1) - Por qué no los haces un solo spinner? Los spinners deben tener al menos un bonus de 2000 en Auto...
01:42:156 (1) - Muévelo al tick blanco y alárgalo hasta donde estaba.
01:47:192 (6) - Acórtalo hasta el tick rojo.
01:48:371 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Muévelos al tick rojo.
01:52:335 (14) - Acórtalo hasta el tick blanco.
01:55:121 (1) - Acórtalo hasta el tick blanco.
02:07:871 (1) - Muévelo al tick blanco.
Omg que largo xDDD Bueno, aun asi no está tan mal, así que te doy una estrellita ^^ Buena suerte!!
Omfg Beu xDD Todo hecho ;3 exepto algunas cosas del skin y del storyboard que otro día las hago xDU ¡Y gracias por la estrella!

Vicho-kun wrote:

Aqui te dejo mi diff, la hice fácil :3
Cualquier cosa me avisas :3
¡Gracias Vicho-kun! :D La proxima update tendrá la dif x3 gokurou-sama deshita~ (8)
Fenya
1,655 posts
Joined September 2009
Fenya
esta bien echo aunque creo que le faltan algunoa detalles... pero como no soy buena modeadora (como se escriba xD) no creo que te los pueda decir todos.

[skin.]
-cambia el "hit0" como dijo beuchi-chan es muy grande.
- los sliderb deven ser mas grandes ( ami parecer)
-cambia fruit-ryuuta pliss.

[vicho's troining camp.]
al principio le faltan notas (ami parecer).

y trata de trabajar mas en el map.. si quieres que te lo rankeen.
bueno eso, ya te di mi estrella asi que eso.

tambien puedes ( si esque se puede hacer) pasarle tu contraseña a beu y decirle que lo edite mejor.
xD
cuenta conmigo te ayudare ^^
Last edited by Fenya , edited 8 times in total.
wolfang3
1 post
Joined September 2009
wolfang3
bueno, me gusta el map deven aver unos detalles que tienes que cambiar y seguir los post de los demas usuarios que saben mas xD. pero te dejo un estrella xD.
Zakiu
49 posts
Joined August 2008
Zakiu
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
penaxo
36 posts
Joined August 2009
penaxo
hola! ^^;; tu map te kedo muy bueno eso si hay una nota rara en 391 en CTB nose si la puedes arreglar ^^
y suerte con tu map
Taira Yoshiyuki
16 posts
Joined July 2009
Taira Yoshiyuki
el map me gusto,no doy opniones sobre arreglos por que no me manejo en el tema de crear map,pero te dejo mi estrella ^^por que en si me gusta el map como eh dicho antes bueno me despido y espero que sea rankeado ^^
Foster Don
150 posts
Joined August 2009
Foster Don
buen map yo todavia nose q consejos darte xd si apenas llevo 1 map creado xd
te estrella
dragondelragnarok
3 posts
Joined April 2009
dragondelragnarok
me gusto la beatmap
Ignacio_old
378 posts
Joined August 2009
Ignacio_old
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maikmaple
maikmaple
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Luvdic
2,113 posts
Joined July 2009
Luvdic
General:

- Todas las dificultades tienen diferentes offset, deberian tener el mismo offset para todas las dificultades
- En Vicho's Training Camp está en 1/6 mientras que los demás en 1/4. Esto debería ser iguales para todos las dificultades también, viendo que usan la misma canción y el mismo mp3...
- Todas las dificultades tienen diferentes combo colours, deberías ponerlos iguales. Ademas, el Budokan! los 5 combo colours son casi identicos...
- Hay partes del map en que se salen mucho del mapa, deberías tratar de ponerlos dentro. Ej:
En Budokan!: 00:32:364 (9,1) -
- Vi algunos problemas de espacio. Ej:
En Budokan!: 00:06:649 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5) -
- Recomendaría que uses el Grid Level 3. Esto se cambia en View -> Grid Leveel -> 3

Solo dare estas recomendaciones en general por ahora
Jadre
4 posts
Joined May 2009
Jadre
that a great song

nice work



=D


saludos
Jadre
4 posts
Joined May 2009
Jadre
that a great song

nice work



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saludos [lucky:8b23e][/lucky:8b23e]
Jadre
4 posts
Joined May 2009
Jadre
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Beuchi
osu! Alumni
2,288 posts
Joined February 2009
Beuchi

Ignacio wrote:

.
OMFG BEST POST EVAAAAAHHH

*cough cough*

Modeando la nueva diff :3

~All Diffs~
- Añade "VIcho-kun" a los Tags.

~Vicho's Training Camp~
- Usa 1/2 snap, no 1/6, y haz un resnap a todo.
- Activa el Distance Snap y revisa todas las notas.
- Baja el HP Drain Rate y el Overall Difficulty, estan MUY altos para una Easy.

00:33:264 (4) - Muevelo 1/2 mas tarde.
00:38:407 (5,6) - ^
00:40:121 (1) - ^
00:49:978 (2,3) - ^
00:55:764 (1) - Terminalo en 00:57:049.
00:57:478 (1) - Muevelo 1/2 mas tarde.
00:58:549 (2) - Elimina esta nota.
01:00:478 (4) - Muevelo 1/2 mas tarde.
01:02:835 (1) - No soy fan de los spinners cortos en Easys, pero bueh, terminalo en 01:04:121
01:05:407 (4) - Elimina esta nota.
01:06:049 (1,2) - Muevelo 1/2 mas tarde.
01:07:121 (4) - Muevelo 1/2 mas pronto.
01:07:764 (1) - Muevelo 1/2 mas tarde y añade una repeticion.
01:08:407 (2,3) - Elimina estas notas.
01:12:264 (3) - Muevelo 1/2 mas pronto.
01:12:907 (1) - Muevelo 1/2 mas tarde.
01:15:692 (4) - Elimina esta nota.
01:17:407 (7) - Muevelo 1/2 mas pronto.
01:19:764 (1) - Terminalo en 01:21:478
01:22:978 (2,3,1) Muevelo 1/2 mas tarde.
pumperzito
24 posts
Joined October 2008
pumperzito
Good MAp 1 Star for it!! ;)
riknitro
1 post
Joined November 2008
riknitro
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
PoGoAdiCtO
1 post
Joined April 2009
PoGoAdiCtO
Excelente beatmap!!

Felicidades por tu trabajo Nee-san ;D
Kablo
29 posts
Joined September 2009
Kablo
Muy buen Map. Hay varios cambios mejores a la versión "Beta". Te ha salido muy bien, y el trabajo de Vicho tampoco está mal. Aunque podrías mejorar un poco más el ritmo y poner el Beat Snap Divisor igual para todos.

Pero muy bueno. ^^
Neo Adonis
320 posts
Joined November 2009
Neo Adonis
Vicho's...:
The note you have in 00:33:692 should be moved 1/2 beat before (to the left). The same with the spinner in 00:40:549 and all the notes after the 01:18:049 spinner.
On a easy difficulty, the beats after 00:57:478 are hard to understand. You should remap all the section until you get an easier rhythm.


School...:
Use the same offset of the Vicho's... difficulty

Budokan!:
As same as the previous difficulty. Use the same offset.

And use the 56624 PreviewTime on all the difficulties.

In general, the beatmap liked me!

(Si no entiendes inglés, búscame en el juego o PM y lo traduciré al español. Esto es para que todos los que entren lo entiendan.)
konan-yoshi999
84 posts
Joined August 2008
konan-yoshi999
[General]
The BPM is too fast
Change:
BPM- 139.902
Remember to "snap to new timing"

[Vicho's Training Camp]
00:33:692 (4)- Move back to white tick
01:00:692 (4,1)- Jumping isnt good for an Easy difficulty :|
01:06:264 (1,2,3,4)- respace
01:07:335 (5)- move forward to white tick
01:11:407 (1,2,3,4)- Respace!
01:13:335 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7)- Respace!!
01:17:192 (6,7)- Respace!!!
01:21:692 (Spinner)- Stretch back to white tick
01:22:549 (1,2,3)- Move all back to white tick!
01:25:121 (Spinner)- Move Back to white tick!

Can't help anymore until this is fixed...
Vicho
887 posts
Joined May 2009
Vicho
aqui te dejo la diff mejorada xP
por cierto, despues elimina los archivos .osb de la carpeta que no sirven de nada y luego haz full submission :P

Download: Ayana Taketatsu - Let's Go! (Azu-nyan Ver.) (Kotomi-chan) [Vicho's Training Camp].osu
Cyril Scarlet
osu! Alumni
3,877 posts
Joined May 2009
Cyril Scarlet
Cute (●´ω｀●)
Zanma_old
13 posts
Joined March 2009
Zanma_old
STAR
3ly_S
188 posts
Joined March 2008
3ly_S
Bastante bien >:D Star por el esfuerzo ^^
Vicho
887 posts
Joined May 2009
Vicho
ahora si xD
se me habian olvidado los sonidos xD

EDIT: Lol! ahora si xD
EDIT2: Ahora te la paso de nuevo ya que le hice unos pequeños cambios :B

Download: Ayana Taketatsu - Let's Go! (Azu-nyan Ver.) (Kotomi-chan) [Vicho's Training Camp].osu
Shinxyn
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Shinxyn
wow, lots of skinning..
-I think you're missing "approachcircle.png" though.
-the offset's really off.... not to mention, all three diffs have different offsets, Use 904 for all three please, then resnap with 1/4 (no need for 1/8 at ALL), then double check places that might have snapped wrong
-Please don't use four different shades of the same colour (green), including the green background, it gets kinda hard to read green over green with a new combo being green...
-use lower hitsound volume, lower volume by two or so ticks?
-Set Preview point

Vicho's- this isn't complete? it seems fine though, though the storyboard continues.. kinda dull and sorta along Easy+ though, the 1/2 notes make it a bit complex for easy, but it's fine~

School Festival!- I can't mod this well cuz of the off timing, please fix the timing and remember to use only up to 1/4, not 1/8, I'll just try to point out stuff unrelated to timing...
Overall diff +2 or 3 please
Don't use full volume for normal hitsound set please, it's much too loud compared to the soft~~
01:01:094 (1) - I don't recommend you using these kinds of sliders, thought they're playable, they can still cause issues
01:19:576 (6) - if you're ganna stack, stack properly ._.
01:54:397 - place the speed up warning around here please (the spinner blocks out the one you have already...) or actually......... just don't use 2x bpm here
02:11:647 (2,4) - same as 1:19:576..
02:13:147 (1) - ow my ears, too loud, too fast, and mixed of whistle and finish </3

Bokudan!- @.@ again, too much timing issues right now
Same as School Festival in terms of hitsounds
00:31:292 (7) - too fast, too loud, etc etc
00:57:007 (2) - ^
01:15:488 (2,3,4,5) - things like this is why I don't like the combos being all green...
01:26:899 - add a break~

Theres a lot more things I could point out, but first, please fix the timing
Lots of stars, not enough mods >.<!!!
The map has some potential though...
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Kotomi-chan
139 posts
Joined April 2009
Topic Starter
Kotomi-chan

Shinxyn wrote:

SPOILER
wow, lots of skinning..
-I think you're missing "approachcircle.png" though.
-the offset's really off.... not to mention, all three diffs have different offsets, Use 904 for all three please, then resnap with 1/4 (no need for 1/8 at ALL), then double check places that might have snapped wrong
-Please don't use four different shades of the same colour (green), including the green background, it gets kinda hard to read green over green with a new combo being green...
-use lower hitsound volume, lower volume by two or so ticks?
-Set Preview point

Vicho's- this isn't complete? it seems fine though, though the storyboard continues.. kinda dull and sorta along Easy+ though, the 1/2 notes make it a bit complex for easy, but it's fine~

School Festival!- I can't mod this well cuz of the off timing, please fix the timing and remember to use only up to 1/4, not 1/8, I'll just try to point out stuff unrelated to timing...
Overall diff +2 or 3 please
Don't use full volume for normal hitsound set please, it's much too loud compared to the soft~~
01:01:094 (1) - I don't recommend you using these kinds of sliders, thought they're playable, they can still cause issues
01:19:576 (6) - if you're ganna stack, stack properly ._.
01:54:397 - place the speed up warning around here please (the spinner blocks out the one you have already...) or actually......... just don't use 2x bpm here
02:11:647 (2,4) - same as 1:19:576..
02:13:147 (1) - ow my ears, too loud, too fast, and mixed of whistle and finish </3

Bokudan!- @.@ again, too much timing issues right now
Same as School Festival in terms of hitsounds
00:31:292 (7) - too fast, too loud, etc etc
00:57:007 (2) - ^
01:15:488 (2,3,4,5) - things like this is why I don't like the combos being all green...
01:26:899 - add a break~

Theres a lot more things I could point out, but first, please fix the timing
Lots of stars, not enough mods >.<!!!
The map has some potential though...
Fixed! and Thanks so much! With this type of mod the map is going to be better and better :D
Landir_old
4 posts
Joined November 2009
Landir_old
Star!

Excelente skin y bien logrado el map xD

Saludos!
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