Mira-san wrote:

Hello. Via PM req.
As I replied, Insane and Miracle only. ehe ehe ehe.

Also, I focus on fixing errors on placement and not giving suggestions. (I suck, forgive me :v)

Insane

00:46:258 (1) - The distance of this one to (2) is pretty close compared to the rest. Might want to nudge that down a little bit. You're right. Damn, I hate this kind of problem.

Are you sure you wanted me to mod this? I can't find anything. It's clean I'm starting to think that I might be quite weird compared to the others.

Miracle

Not SS-able. It could be an issue on my side, but I don't think so. heheh. Apparently, osu! still can't comprehend 1/12 and 1/16 sliders...

00:35:895 (2) - Not snapped. Please blame the song for this. There is an instrument sound at the end of the slider. If there were a 1/24 divisor, the end would be snapped quite neatly there.
00:41:541 (3) - Auto gets 100 on these 1/16th sliders. While some work fine, others don't. They can be found somewhere after the kiai parts. Yeah. I will try to point them out later. If you want me to, PM me pls huehue. Read my reply to the bold text above. Let's blame osu!, yeah \:D/
00:48:830 (3) - Move to x:81 y:120 and rotate by 4 degrees using Selection Centre. It would look straighter. Did stuff with this.
01:26:134 (3) - You could move this to x:148 y:320. Would ruin your map though, inconsistency. :v Try this out then revert to the original one hue. I might as well remap the next few seconds. Didn't exactly follow your suggestion, but it gave me some ideas, so...

That's it! Nub mods.

I like the song and map, and dat Madoka.

GL ^^

Sey wrote:

Hello, mod from my queue
I was a bit surprised to see 2 Rain difficulties here. To create a higher difficulty spread I would have included a Platter (no Overdose cos the song is too slow for that) at least, but that's fine to me. ^^

[Crystal's Rain]

1. 00:46:829 (3,4) - How about creating a little jump here? I think these "drum voices" would need it.
2. 00:48:544 (1,2,3,4,5) - Where's the challenge? Create a dashy effect here, it suits the rhythm well in my opinion.
3. 00:56:262 (3,1) - Increase distance to the right, 00:56:977 (2) - and if this slider starts at 00:57:120 - (Hear it with 25% playback rate, makes much more sense) you can include another dash to the left again to implement a cool right-left-dashy movement here.
4. 01:43:428 (1,2,3,4) - Good idea but why don't you increase the distance from each slider to the next? This makes it way more interesting to play.
5. 01:52:575 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe make this a bit jumpier? Feels kinda boring though the music is pretty fast & loud here. This one for relax, so no change.
6. 04:05:209 (1,1,1) - This seems very disturbing at the end. This slider is very short and starts/ends too abrupt between the sliders. The violin starts a bit later than 04:07:210 (1) - , it actually starts at 04:07:282 - which is a 1/8 section. So that means there's also a little timing error here. I suggest you to only use one spinner and a long slider here. Also check out how it is made in the Rain Collab.
7. What am I doing here? e_e The diff is very nice and I am not sure what to mod here ^^ Good work!

Pro modder Sey, Thank you so much!
http://puu.sh/7MC5O.osu

CoroQuetz wrote:

From Lions' Modding Queue~
All are suggestions unless in red.

[Muzukashii]
00:04:809 (19,20) - change to d? I feel it preserves the d rhythm here better Done.
01:51:860 (432) - delete? there's no beat here Actually, there is something here, and it's pretty noticeable.
Actually, the patterns in this diff are more Oni than Muzu... if not for low BPM I'd say it's too hard, as it is, it's a bit hard to say. You'll have to see what the BAT says I guess. Yeah, I already knew about this. I'll wait.

[Oni]
00:14:814 (84,85) - delete 84 and change 85 to d, it'll fit the beat better Since many people said it... Sure.
00:16:100 (91) - change this to d too, it fits the pitch better Done.
00:23:390 (128) - remove finish, no starting streams with big notes. ^
03:40:055 (1199) - remove finish, no mid-stream big notes either. Removed the note after it instead.

good luck with rank~

Accel wrote:

hihi~accel from modding lions
Crystal's Rain

Pattern-wise

00:01:665 to 00:01:951 u can follow what u did before at 00:00:522
00:48:544 to 00:48:973 & 00:49:116 to 00:49:545 straighten the curve! as in putting them further apart
01:10:126 & 01:10:198 it can be spaced out instead, by moving 01:09:983's combo away from them to do a dashjump pattern with 01:09:840's combo
01:17:272 to 01:17:415 wut. why add the little extra jumping distance! I didn't fix this style of jumps.
01:25:276 to 01:26:134^
01:53:718 to 01:54:147^ only this has fixed.
02:02:008 to 02:02:580^
02:04:724 to 02:05:009^
02:07:010 to 02:07:296^

02:10:869 this combo seemed cramped to the right .-.?
02:55:748 & 02:55:891 can be placed further apart, by moving 02:55:462 more to the right
03:41:198 to 03:42:198 sudden change of spacing o.o

Thoughts

01:17:272 to 01:17:415 add spacings until it becomes a hyperdashy/redjumpy! Same goes to (01:17:272 to remaked
01:17:415) & (01:53:718 to 01:54:147) relax pattern. no change.
01:39:855 to 01:39:997 u can space this pattern further for a jump!
01:52:575 to 01:53:432 /me spaces them very far for wth jumps xD

/ hope it gets ranked

DakeDekaane wrote:

Hi, returning the favor :3

[General]
A few people already addressed that Muzu and Oni are a bit harder, Muzu has a few irregular 1/4 patterns like ddkdd, kdk, kdd, dkdd and so, which are more like Oni patterns. Oni has long 1/4 streams that aren't bad for an Oni, it's just a bit harder than the average Oni.
The spread is good and the difficulties are good as they're now, though I'd suggest you to have a lower diff prepared in case you need it.
I'm going to mod the difficulties as they're built and not going to suggest to remove anything to fit the supposed difficulty because I found them very nice
Maybe remove the SB for Taiko diffs or make a different one here who puts the lyrics below the playfield, most of the time they're covered. Not a must, I know this would be painful.

I have a feeling that this map is gonna stuck in Pending for a very long time... I'll consider doing a Futsuu, but only if more people told me so.

This song's rhythm is pretty weird, especially at the beginning. Also, listening to the song and trying to map it makes me think that this song is only technically 104.95 BPM due to the pattern of the instruments being played, and in practice, it's supposed to be mapped like a 209.9 BPM song, thus those (seemingly?) difficult patterns in Muzu. And since this song doesn't have much instrument sounds on the 1/8 ticks (treated as 1/4 ticks @ 209.9 BPM here due to the reason I've aforementioned), but there's a hell lot of voices on 1/4 ticks (treated as 1/2 ticks), I decided to map Oni the current way.

...I'll consult Xinely about the SB.

I feel the timing a bit off, try with 516-518, I may be wrong tho, my PC tends to derp sometimes. It was 517, but I shifted it to 522 after Delis tested Miracle (formerly Extra) and told me that the offset should be shifted by ~+5-7. And yep, I think 522 is more accurate for now. I'll wait until more people complain about this, as I think there's no need to shift the offset now.

[Oni]
00:07:239 (38,44,45) - Maybe remove these. I know they're there for the harp(?, but I think they're a bit intrusive given you map the other instrument here. Done.
00:13:671 (76,77,78,79) - Maybe swap color for this, so the final pattern will be like the one you used previously for this same rhythm. ^
00:25:676 (139,140,141,142,143) - Maybe use kdkdk here, the drums are like alternating. ^
00:31:965 (177) - Maybe don here? ^
00:58:406 (305) - Use a kat here, the drums goes in the same pattern as in the previous notes. ^
01:06:982 (343,347) - Use kat for both, so you keep dons for the bassy drums. I don't feel comfortable at all using the kat notes here for some reason... I'll consider using kat if more people says the same thing, though.
01:16:129 (399,403) - As above. Aditionally you can make 01:17:272 (407) a don. Made 01:17:558 (406) a kat to be consistent with 01:17:272 (404) instead. I think it's better this way...
01:26:277 (461,462,463,464,465,466,467,468,469) - Maybe use dddkkddkd, I think it fits better with the drums there. Sure!
01:52:575 (587,588,589,590,591) - Use kkkkd like im previous similar parts? ^
02:01:865 (635,639) - Maybe use kat for this, like I mentioned for 01:06:982 (343,347). Same response.
02:10:726 (677) - You could remove this note, to make the next part begin clearly. Done.
02:11:012 (679,683) - Use kat for these. If you do, use don for 02:12:013 (686). Same as 01:06:982 (343,347).
02:29:164 (793,794,795,796,797,798,799,800,801) - If you followed my suggestion about the alternating dkdkdk for parts like this, apply it here too. Alternatively, you can use kdkdkdk here. Did things by myself here.
03:05:753 (984,985,986,987,988,989,990,991,992,993,994,995,996,997,998) - This is quite irregular, while the music isn't that irregular, try a dkdkdkdkddkkddk here. Done.
03:19:616 (1068,1072) - Use kat here, if you do, use don for 03:20:760 (1076). ^
03:29:764 (1130) - A don would fit here better. ^
03:46:915 (1241,1242,1243,1244,1245,1246,1247,1248,1249) - Something similar as in 02:29:164 (793,794,795,796,797,798,799,800,801) about a kdkdkdk pattern here. ^

[Muzukashii]
00:07:239 (30,35,36) - Same as in Oni, maybe remove this as it's a bit weird following two instruments at the same time. If you do, use a don for 00:07:811 (33). Done.
00:14:242 (62) - The piano is quite higher here, maybe use a kat. ^
00:27:963 (124) - A kat would fit better here. ^
00:30:250 (137) - ^ ^
00:44:400 (190) - A don would fit better here. I personally think of the opposite, because of how the instrument here sounds compared to 00:44:114 (186).
01:07:982 (275,276,277,278,279) - Use kkddk, so the last kat somehow stands out more. Done.
02:12:299 - I think a note is missing here, the drums are quite loud to have a doubles pattern. Put a don here and make 02:12:441 (511) a don too. Changed to kddkk here instead. It just... fits the instruments, IMO.
02:30:736 (587) - Maybe use a don here, so the vocals in 02:30:879 (588) are more noticeable, this may make this part harder tho. Done.
02:49:316 - A note here would fit nicely along with the previous pattern. Either a kat or a don works here. ^


Modding standard diffs as I told you, I feel weird not modding all diffs, so have a few suggestions for each one.
[Easy]
00:37:110 (1,2) - Maybe make both 3/4 sliders, they'd fit nicely with the instrumental, you already introduced a similar rhythm before so I don't see much problem making something similar here. Okay.
01:36:567 (1) - Remove NC. ^

[Normal]
00:08:525 (2,3) - This plays a bit weird as 00:08:954 has a strong beat and one hits in a weaker beat in 00:09:097, it'd be better to hit the one in the blue tick, so you should use the 1/2 slider first and then the 3/4, or remove the 1/2 slider and add a repeat to the 3/4 slider. Reversed.
00:31:393 (4,5) - ^ I think the instrument at 00:31:965 is quite notable. It'd be weird not to have a hittable object.
00:40:541 (2,3) - ^ ^
00:40:541 (2,3) - ^ ^
00:53:118 (1,2) - ^ Reversed.
01:23:990 (3,4) - ^ Nope, for the same reason as the parts where I rejected this.
01:56:005 (3,4) - ^ Done.
01:58:292 (3,4) - ^ Nope.
02:14:299 (2,3) - ^ ^
03:09:183 (2,3) - ^ ^
03:11:470 (2,3) - ^ ^
01:36:567 (1) - Remove NC. Okay.
02:40:598 (1) - ^ ^

[Hard]
00:04:523 (3) - This should end 1/4 beat earlier, the harp(? has more emphasis here than in the blue tick. Done.
00:12:527 (2) - I'd suggest you to keep following the same instrument here so this part doesn't sound a bit weird, just put a circle in 00:12:670 instead the sldier. ^
00:14:814 (2) - Same reason as above, maybe remove this. ^
00:27:963 (1,2,3) - slider-slider-circle fits better here as 00:28:535 is a strong beat so hitting something there would play better. I'm sure 00:28:392 is stronger than 00:28:535, thus the reason I'm making the rhythm look like this.
00:29:107 (3,4) - You would already know what I'm going to say here about not hitting in a strong beat like 00:29:535. Yep.
00:37:110 (2) - Use 1/4 sliders here, like you did in the other parts. ^
00:39:397 (1,2,1,2) - This is a good spot to show what I'm refering to with the suggestions I made in Normal, as the second one plays much better than the first. Except the instrument at 00:39:969 is more notable than 00:39:826, thus the rhythm. But yep, I get what are you trying to tell.
00:46:829 (3) - This would play a bit better being a 1/2 slider. Done.
00:54:261 (1,2) - Swap order. Feels weird because there is nothing notable at 00:54:547, yet I have to end the 1/2 slider there.
01:10:269 (1,2) - This is good. hue
01:36:567 (1) - Remove NC. Done.
01:58:292 (1,2) - Swap order. Nope; same reason as 00:54:261 (1,2).
02:33:023 (4) - End this 1/4 beat earlier, it'd match the drums correctly. Done.
03:20:045 (3) - This would fit better as a 1/2 slider ^
03:20:617 (4) - Maybe this too, you can add a circle in 03:21:046 if you do. ^
I noticed too some there's a bit of inconsistencies in your comboing, for example 00:02:808 (1,2,3,1,2,3), would fit in a single combo and keep consistency of putting a NC each 2 stanza. Did my best to fix this.

[Insane]
00:21:674 (5) - I'm really not sure about these sliders, I know why you put them here, but they're kinda emulating holds which aren't supposed to be in osu!, just saying so you can considerate them in a future Well, it's because the instrument being played here is best mapped with a 1/16 kick slider at this length, IMO... Can't really be helped.
01:04:552 (1,2,3) - slider-slider-circle would fit better. The vocalist sings a syllable at 01:04:981, and it'll be weird if I put the end of a slider there.
01:36:567 (1) - Remove NC. Yep.
01:58:292 (1,2) - Swap order. Nope for the same reason as 00:54:261 (1,2) in Hard.
02:40:598 (1) - Maybe remove NC. Okay.
03:58:349 (1,1,1) - uguu ;-;

[Miracle]
01:04:552 (1,2,3) - slider-slider-circle would fit better. Nope; same reason as Insane.
Also the same thing about the short sliders. ugu ;w /slapped

That'd be all from my part, good luck \o/

Edit: Check AIMod, there are some Metadata issues and unsnapped objects. Yep, yep, will take note of this.

Kuzino wrote:

Thanks for give me to PM

[Crystal's Rain]
Korean modding
Overdose 같은 Rain이네요
00:15:672 (1,2,3) - 이부분이 00:14:528 (2,3,4) - 이부분하고 받는게 똑같은데 좌우 대칭으로 해보는게 어떨까요 ok
01:16:129 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 이구간에서 01:17:129 (1,2,3,4) - 이 점프 정말 어려운거같네요 다른 패턴으로 바꿀수잇다면 바꾸는게 좋을거같음 fixed
01:18:130 (7) - 하이퍼 대쉬 없어도 될듯합니다. 이쪽 하이퍼대시를 놔두는 대신에 01:18:702 (2) - 이쪽 하이퍼를 없앰
01:25:419 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - 여기서 01:26:420 (2) - 이 노트를 x:352로 옮기면 난이도에 더 알맞는 점프가 되지않을까 하네요 fixed
02:31:451 (6) - 이 노트 오른쪽으로 약간 옮기면 더 받기쉬워질듯 2칸 줄였습니다
04:06:925 (1) - 마지막 스핀 두개중에서 첫스핀을 여기서 끊고 04:07:210 (1) - 여기에 노트, 두번째 스핀을 04:13:213 (1) - 여기서 끊는게 더 나을거같네요 Sey의 모딩 참고. 04:07:282 가 맞습니다.

Good luck!

Xinely wrote:

• 
  CLSW

1. start on 00:10:383 - , music as 00:10:669 - 00:10:383 - 00:11:527 - actually become main important music here, imo it really need to mapped as you did at 00:00:950 (4) - until 00:07:239 - . there are nice rhythms here hmm, no. I love this.
2. 00:18:673 (4) - since the cymbal on 00:18:816 - is really loud, imo it would be nice if do a jump here instead slider's repeat that easy to catch by player. maybe change it become circles and try arrange as http://puu.sh/7QFDV.jpg seems fine to me
3. 00:23:818 (2) - hmm how about make the spacing become balance here instead do a jump and 00:23:961 (3) - not moveable here since same x axis here. so move 00:23:818 (2) - to x:240 instead? sorry, not changed.
4. 00:42:827 (1) - how about make this slider more moveable with nicely by move the tail to x:192? fixed
5. 00:47:258 (6) - the music is only drum here. a huge jump like this imo too hard to catch and doesn't fit with music. how about move it to x:192? if you agree, you can make a jump for next slider with 00:47:401 (1) - x:352 fixed
6. 00:50:117 (1) - unnecessary NC here imo since the previous is only 1, remove it? fixed
7. 00:50:117 (1) - also it's using HDash jump but it's easy to catch, a huge jump doesn't really fit for this time imo, how about https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1469422 instead? 00:50:117 (1) - on pic placed at x:168 changed the slider's shape. better recheck.
8. 01:26:848 (5,6,7,8) - imo this stream doesn't make any challenge part, it catchable with so easy. how about arrange them like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1469436 ? it's still easy but looked more challenging here good. fixed
9. 01:36:996 (2,3) - hmm how about make it more moveable to catch? it's really easy for this one imo, https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1469439 fixed
10. 02:12:156 (2) - make this one more moveable to catch? it would be better to play imo, http://puu.sh/7QIpi.jpg. oh also no need whistle in slider's body since it won't work at ctb I think movements are enough.
11. 02:52:603 (3) - move around x:408 to make a jump here since the music is loud, imo jump would be emphasize more than previous pattern 5+5 grid jumps. I have to maintain this distances.
12. 02:59:178 (2) - moveable would be better here, try move the tail to x:296 fixed them all to reverse ways.
13. Mapped with well here, enjoying it at all :3

Rakuen wrote:

Hi~

M4M~

Don't slap me if my mod sux x_x

[General]
Good song! Of course \:D/

[Timing]
01:09:126 - Prefer Preview point to be here It'll feel jarring because osu! will play the song starting with a cut-off vocal.

[Easy]
00:02:808 (3) - Don't like it for Easy, it's stacked too quick with 00:00:522 (1) - Okay, unstacked.
00:03:952 (4,5) - Prefer this to be a slider since previous ones are and it could be slightly hard to read (like this 00:13:099 (4) - ) Done.
00:07:954 - Whistle to notice, it fits ^
00:16:529 (3,4) - Slider to cover music in 00:16:815 - and to be same with 00:07:382 (3) - ^
00:16:529 - Could consider NC here, the rhythm is a bit changed ^
00:31:393 (5) - Can be stopped at 00:31:822 - (optional) The instrument at 00:31:965 is more notable, so no.
00:40:541 (3) - Try to follow cover which is at 00:40:969 - and 00:41:541 - ? (optional) I hope I did it correctly.
00:49:688 (2,3) - ^ same as this (optional) ^
04:07:496 - Silence here, the cover seems to fade out slowly Uh, I think there's still an instrument sound that needs to be emphasized here.

[Normal]
OD: 3, looks better I want to keep a balanced spread of difficulty setting, and OD3 seems to be too easy...
00:13:099 (2,3) - Try this: Hmm, I don't think it'll improve the map a lot, and I'll have to remap the next 10 seconds or so to get this done, basically.

Image

00:32:537 - Whistle for start, since "finish" is too noisy Done.
00:35:538 (2,3) - Strange part...re-winded lots of time but strange vocal and cover >_>, maybe try follow vocal? I can't exactly see how can I follow the vocal here... Also, it'll be far harder to play if I don't follow the instruments here.
01:06:553 - Note here, brings up the feel more and vocal Done.
02:10:583 - ^ ^
02:39:168 - Note for bass ^
03:49:202 (1) - A bit not following flow, maybe pattern of Ctrl+J ^
03:54:919 (2) - Inconsistency DS | wtf; fixed
04:07:496 - Silence here, the cover seems to fade out slowly Nope; same reason as Easy.

^ This diff looks so neat and nice!! GJ!! \:D/

[Hard]
AR: 8, fits note density and SV of KIAI, and the jumps too | It's better, yeah, but I'm afraid it might be a little too hard... Done anyway.
OD: 7 ^ (if following) Hmm, maybe no. It'd make quite a difficulty spike from Normal to Hard.
00:17:673 (4) - Ctrl+G looks fun Done, and I also got an idea to make 00:17:673 (4,1,2,1) 20% more awesome!
00:24:247 (2,3) - Try this, or other pattern could be better: I don't want to make a jump here. I just can't feel the need for a bigger spacing there for some reason.

Image

00:30:250 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make them a little more DS even they're going to slow down, cuz notes previously are quite far spaced Done.
00:44:971 (5) - Looks like triplet, keep if you want to remain the difficulty I'll keep it as is. Making a triplet here means making a 209.9 BPM one... I think you know where is this going.
00:56:977 (5) - Move a tiny grid up for better cursor movement (or adjust a little bit) Sure.
01:27:992 - Whistle or put something here, it seems too silenced ^
01:36:567 (6) - Put on X:256 Y:48 (middle line) or somewhere further, it seems a bit close Somewhere, alright.
01:50:860 (3) - 2 short slider or 2 circle feels better when play, like 01:55:433 (2,3) - Doesn't seem to fit here for some reason, I think... Maybe it's just me, but I feel kinda uncomfortable, somehow.
02:00:007 (5) - ^ ^
02:12:584 (3) - Ctrl+G and then same for 02:12:870 (4) - , for better flow and don't mind close DS for 02:13:156 (1) - You know what? Let's remap the next 3 seconds!
02:16:300 - Missing vocal tho Fixed.
02:21:446 (2) - Ctrl+G, I love this pattern & flow holy shit why not
03:02:751 - Note here for same combo set pattern with big jumps, which connects to 03:02:894 (2,3) - (if you get what I mean) I want to focus on the more notable instruments here, and it'd be a hell of a work to remap this one lol
03:26:763 - Add a note here, like 03:17:615 (2) - Done.

[Insane]
For me I would prefer AR9, it's more comfortable when playing seems the jumps are very big
Try and refer this map's Insane: Avril Lavigne - Rock N Roll
^ That map's BPM is lower than yours but has a better gameplay of AR9, consider it | Let's try.
00:02:094 (2) - There should be NC here following your combo sets Not here since there isn't any kind of switch to another kind of pattern.
00:10:097 (3) - Ctrl+G looks better for me Yes.
00:33:108 (1) - Try this rhythm: ^

Image

00:34:109 (2) - For me I prefer to follow vocal at 00:33:966 - and 00:34:252 - instead of not really visible cover I wish to emphasize the instruments here. idk why, I just feel that this rhythm is better.
00:37:682 (3) - This likely not following anything, looks extra cuz vocal should be at here 00:37:634 - (1/12), can remove it or stick to vocal Since the difference isn't that noticeable, I'll keep the rhythm as is for now.
00:52:546 (2) - Can try put closer to 00:51:975 (1) - for better spacing Done.
03:15:543 (4) - This hit sounds extra Nope, I'm sure the instrument supports this note well.
03:58:349 (1) - omg this slider is so cute XD! Thanks! But since it's pretty similar to a hold note... I'm not sure if this is gonna be allowed or not lol

[Miracle]
Can't mod x_x... spare mehhh >_< hue

Everything looks good if with AR9, nothing much to mod

Hinsvar wrote:

it's pretty troubling to have to edit my reply post to add another part of a mod lol

Atrue wrote:

Hello~
From your M4M req.



[Notion]
This color means something you can either choose to fix or not to fix cause I prefer to do this.
And this color means some issue to fix I think.
[General]
Good map and a little suggestions here.
Yes, I believe in miracle. (ノ·ω·)ノ︵
Great work you've done. I love the new try of style.

[Miracle]
General
Well done, nice try! \:D/
This diff's mod took me about 1 hour..and I will finish other diffs tomorrow if I can.
Placement
00:27:106 (1,2) - Ok though, what if ctrl+G? Better flow I think~ The flow at 00:26:963 (2,1) becomes too forced this way...
00:40:541 (1,2,3,1) - I just really don't like the flow here... Yes, but changing it would be a pain and i'm sure you made it on purpose. I personally really like this, and it's hard to find another pattern that goes well with the song here.
01:09:269 (2,3,1) - Flow is really not smooth. I know you made this on purpose, but I have to say this kind of flow and jump is really dangerous. To get is better in flow I suggest to Ctrl+G slider 2. The flow will be a little too linear like that, and the current placement works well, I think...
01:14:128 (2,3) - flow is not good here. Different with the issue above, here the angel 2 to 3 is really not smooth, which is easy to break the combo. It'd feel too plain to just use normal curved sliders too much, right? Also, I still feel that the pattern plays pretty nicely...Example:

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01:55:433 (1,2,3,4) - I don't know why you slow down here. It's really abrupt to make the slow down and it is not so fit in the music. Example:

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Or you just give it 4 NC to emphasize it though I don't think it is really cool to do this. Made something... different.
Hitsound
00:46:829 - This 'kind' of place, I think Sampleset:drum Additions:soft + whistle is better to show the beat and the sound here. The sound doesn't really fit, IMO...
01:19:988 (1) - Clap here is not with the music, especially when you only use clap here. To keep the consistence I suggest you to remove the clap. Oops, made it to use the Auto sampleset.
02:49:602 - Hmm.. According to what you did 02:48:459 , I guess here you should change the hitsound into Sample:auto whistle +clap. ^
02:58:749 (4) - Also I suggest for a Sample:auto + clap I keep missing these stuff...
03:26:334 - Hmmmmmm maybe not finish here is better? Not sure. Oops.
03:41:055 - Also I suggest for a Sample:auto + clap. Because drum whistle is not so good to hear especially the hitsound is longer than clap and you don't need the prolonged sound. Done.
03:51:203 - Sample:auto imo Someone slap me.

NCs
00:22:818 (3) - NC for a new part of sound.. I think the rhythm hasn't really restarted there yet.
00:27:106 (1) - Remove NC because you don't need to emphasize the note here. Remapped this part a little.
01:03:409 (1,2) - 1 remove NC and 2 add NC... This fits with how the song goes, IMO...

That's my suggestions. Thanks for requesting.If you have any questions feel free to send pm to me. .

Desperate-kun wrote:

M4M~

[General]

1. Fine ^^ Hehe.

[Easy]

1. Uh nice blue tick polarity issues at the beginning o/ But I guess, there's no other way, and they are playable, because you only have to click at the white ticks Did something awesome here!
2. 00:09:669 (1) - Higher spacing is quite noticable when playing ^
3. 00:32:537 (1) - Hmm first part of the curve doesn't look really good, would be better with the anchor-point around x:252 y:76. See: Made it smoother.
   
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4. 01:26:277 (2) - To improve the movement here, I think the slider should be less curved. Like this: Done.
   
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5. 02:54:319 (1) - ^ Like this: ^
   
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6. 03:56:062 (2,3,4) - This movement could also be better. Either make the first slider less curved, or change the rest. Here is how both variants look: Made (2) smoother.
   
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7. Nice :3 huehue

[Normal]

1. 02:21:446 (3) - This slider looks very sharp curved for being so short, but I guess it's presonal preference. Smoothed.
2. 02:35:167 (4) - Move it somewhere around x:388 y:60 to improve the flow with the previous object Done.
3. 03:54:919 (2) - Huge spacing issue, I guess it's not on purpose Fixed.
4. Awesome. I worry a bit about the blue tick stuff at that one part, but I guess, it's alright (?) Hmm, where? lol

[Hard]

1. 00:00:950 (2,3) - Because you used a slider that is almost parallel to the axis, I'd put these in a straight line for better aesthetics. Like that: Sure.
   
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2. 03:22:332 (3,6) - Stack them properly? Okay.
3. Almost perfect :b \:D/

[Insane]

1. I can't see any mistakes at all. This one is really perfect! So much fun to play O: So is Insane really better than Miracle, now? \D:/

[Miracle]

1. 00:03:809 (3) - Fix the stack by disabling grid snap. Done.
2. Well, nothing more. Wow, the Insane diffs are really perfect to me, although I'm Insane player so I am able to mod that o: But your flow is just awesome, and things look fine as well. I guess most mappers who find much stuff in Insanes mod mostly hitsounding which I can't really do ;w; I should learn that. Thanks, thanks~ Just keep learning!

Anyway, awesome mapset! Didn't found much at all o/ I hope my mod was helpful. Got my star as well :*

Good luck!

Serena- wrote:

additional mod (Platter) no kudosu pls

[Platter]
00:31:965 (2) - reduce the distance of the jump Done.
00:47:830 (4) - i think that stacking it over 00:47:544 (2) - looks better Nope because I think it's nice to emphasize the piano here. Reduced the distance a little, though.
01:17:701 (3,4,5,6) - maybe reducing the distance between the notes might be better cuz the last fruit is a HD Sure.
01:29:707 (1,2,3,4) - try moving this a bit to the right ^
03:25:762 (3,4) - try reducing the jump a bit? ^

nice enjoyable Platter

good luck xD

1. I feel like you could amplify your clap a bit more, even when I turned effects sounds way up I could still barely hear it

1. 00:18:816 (1,3) - consider making these the same slider flipped? would give this pattern a little more uniformity since they're in the same combo
2. 01:13:699 (1) - way nazi, but if you move the white point in the larger curve of this to x236 y272 I think it makes this curve look a lot nicer
3. 01:52:575 (3,4,5) - a little confused as to why you chose to do this here in a quieter section of the verse, I'd expect an increase in difficulty like this during the kiai or something more intense
4. 02:10:869 (4) - also way nazi, but same as before, white point to x192 y44?
5. 02:24:304 - just as an example, if you were to add 1/2 in to this kiai, spots like this would be a really nice way to do it, since it fits well with the vocal
6. 02:55:462 (2,3,4) - like I said earlier, I think these lines of 1/2 would be more fitting in a much more intense part of the music rather than here, just makes sense to me looking at the intensity of the music
7. 03:49:202 (1) - I guess I'm just really not a fan of stuff with what looks like a bit sloppy curves sorry haha, so try bringing that second white point down a bit?
   
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8. 04:02:923 (1) - drag the red point so that it's directly on top of the middle slidertick? will divide the slider in half evenly and looks nice this way
9. 04:05:352 (1) - to me, this sounds like it ends with the music better if it stops 1/4 earlier

1. 00:30:822 (4) - remove whistle? since it goes down in pitch I think the drum sample is enough
2. 00:34:824 (2) - remove whistle from the head? I think putting more emphasis on the sound at the tail is nice, will also be consistent with 00:32:537 (1) -
3. 00:43:971 (3) - ^
4. 00:59:978 (1,2) - both of these ^ I think this happens a lot, so if you agree up to you to change more if you'd like~
5. 01:17:701 (5) - add a whistle? I think the vocal note here benefits from the extra emphasis. also 02:21:732 (5) - 03:20:617 (4) - 03:30:336 (3) -

1. 00:30:250 (1,2,3) - I would personally use the rhythm from 00:27:963 (1,2,3) - for this, I feel like it fits better since 00:31:107 - doesn't need a click if you're following the melody
2. 00:46:258 (1) - why not shorten this by 1/4 and add a note 00:46:829 - like you have done many times before? I think it would be nice to have a click on this drum sample, and the melody will fit with the slider this way
3. 00:55:405 (1) - same as ^
4. 01:04:552 (1,2,3) - rhythm suggestion here, I think this captures a bit more of the feel from the drum and incorporates the vocal well, plus a click on 01:05:695 - doesn't seem necessary to me
   
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5. 01:21:703 (2) - I think dividing this into a slider + circle would fit a lot better
6. 01:48:859 (2,3) - select these two and move to x316 y192? I think it makes this pattern look just a bit nicer
7. 02:17:730 (1) - I think this slider with a bit more curve than normal looks out of place, consider making it just a bit more smooth? might just be a personal thing of mine, but I generally don't think sliders this short should have such drastic curves, looks odd
8. 03:25:476 (3,4,5) - perhaps shift these all down a bit, give these a more distinct shape
   
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1. 00:01:236 (2,4) - for these sliders in the beginning, I'd remove the whistle from the tail, it sounds a bit odd to me. You could add them back in on the head if you'd like, I think it sounds nice
2. 01:54:290 (4) - drum sample on the end?

1. 00:14:957 (2) - this might be better off moved so that it has equal distance, since right now there's a significant jump to 3 that I don't think really emphasizes anything
2. 00:16:100 (5,1) - the gap between these notes is something I'd consider too far to be comfortable for a hard level player, especially since the direction and pattern of 00:16:529 (1,2,3) - isn't designed to flow well with the player's jump from 5. Consider reworking into something like this to flow better and introduce the 1/4 spacing more intuitively
   
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3. 00:24:533 (3) - just a personal thing of mine, but rotate 15 so that 2 before connects more smoothly to this slider?
4. 00:26:820 (1,2,3) - I'm not sure on this, but these sort of patterns I don't think play the way you intend them to, since the slider leniency from 1 will make this feel like uneven spacing even though it looks even. Generally the way to fix this is to move 2 closer to the head of 3, so that the higher spacing from the slider will even out the feeling. But in return that might make the rhythm confusing, by seemingly having a 1/2 gap between 1 and 2. (personally I would have avoided these alltogether in a hard, but you've applied some of the same mentality as you did your miracle diff to this so that's more of a style opinion than anything else)
5. 00:27:963 (1,2,3) - another problem that arises from your high spacing 1/4 is when you switch back to 1/2, the distances look the same. You can even see it surrounding this pattern here, the 3.05 1/4 distance looks almost exactly the same as the 1.58 1/2 distance
6. 00:27:963 (1,2,3) - vs 00:30:250 (1,2,3) - I would consider a consistency issue, as the first pattern is significantly harder to play than the second pattern, but they follow the exact same part in the music
7. 00:27:391 (3,1) - ALSO you might want to keep in mind that since 3 is a longer slider, it will slow the player's cursor down compared to the short sliders like 1, so having a large jump after it might feel uncomfortable and forced.
   ok that was a lot of stuff lol, so i'm gonna try and refrain from mentioning things like that again and you can apply those ideas where you see fit
8. 01:11:412 (1,2,3,4) - this pattern is super hard to play haha, I had to really push to do it well. I also noticed that you only use this pattern once here in the first kiai and then once in a verse which I think fits even less, since i would expect a difficulty spike like this to be in one of the strongest parts of the song. I'd consider changing this to something easier (same with the 01:59:435 (1,2,3,4) - pattern later)
9. 02:58:749 (7,1) - this is one i would definitely consider making easier, it doesn't look as hard from a distance snap standpoint but that's due to the sv change, it's a pretty drastic change in speed
10. 03:12:613 - want to note that this last kiai is probably my favorite part of the map, where I think it actually feels like a hard diff that fits the feel of the song rather than a light insane
11. 03:22:332 (3,6) - surprised you didn't stack, you usually do

1. 00:34:824 (1) - 00:37:110 (2) - 00:38:254 (4) - I'd remove the whistle from the end of these three, it doesn't fit imo. having the emphasis be on the second slider sounds better to me
2. 01:51:860 (5) - add a soft whistle to the head? it sounds incomplete when you have whistles on the notes leading up to this but not on here where the melody peaks

1. 00:02:951 (2,3) - swap this for a slider? more rambling on number of clicks vs difficulty compared to song feel...yeah
2. 00:10:669 (1) - rotate clockwise so that it leads into the next circle better?
3. 00:23:104 (3) - maybve change this to a 1/4 slider pointing away from 1? you're skipping a part in the violin melody that i think should be mapped
   
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4. 00:31:822 (7,1) - I personally just think this jump is too sudden and doesn't fit well, there isn't anything in the music to suggest it
5. 00:34:538 (5) - remove this circle? since you're primarily mapping to the background sound in this section, having this one circle with the vocal feels odd to me
6. 00:55:976 (3) - try dropping this down to around x272 y72, imo the sharp angle you had before isn't that great to play
7. 01:06:410 (2,3) - what if you swapped these two and then changed 3 into a slider pointing to the right? I think it would flow really well and not kill the momentum going into the kiai
   
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8. 01:15:557 (2) - so notes like this I can see you're using as a style approach, so I'll just mention for reference in the future that these generally are very drastic jumps, much more than they look in editor, since they go completely opposite from the flow of the notes prior
9. 01:19:416 (1,2,3) - suppose I'll just throw this pattern suggestion here, take it or leave it, I like how this flows
   
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10. 01:51:431 (1,2) - ^
    
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11. 02:02:294 (3,4) - why not rotate these two away from each other, to give a little more variety to this pattern?
    
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12. 02:02:865 (1,2,3,4) - this feels very weak in comparison to the previous time this part of the music came up, I think some more open spacing on these sliders would feel really cool
13. 02:19:731 (4) - stack onto the head of 02:20:016 (1) - for consistency with 01:15:700 (3,1) - ?
14. 02:29:450 (2,2) - I think it would feel more comfortable to do a ctrl+g on these two individually and then move them to the right just a bit, with how sliders play this will be easier to play than what you have
15. 03:23:475 (3) - rotate about 25 or so clockwise? it feels a little awkward from 2 at the moment

1. nothin stuck out to me, nice

1. 00:07:382 (1,2) - swap these two? will make the jump from 6 feel more natural
   
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2. 02:03:151 (2,1) - seems like a really big antijump to me, might want to move this line of circles to the left some so that the player doesn't overshoot them after going through so many fast jumps
3. 02:21:589 (4,1) - try placements like this, I think it'll make the jumps a bit more intuitive
   
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4. 02:23:733 (2,3) - ctrl+g? same reason as ^

1. 00:11:241 (5,6) - remove whistle from the head of 6 and move it to the tail of 5? will be more consistent with what you've been doing the whistle patterns to
2. 00:11:956 (1) - add whistle? same reason as ^

340 wrote:

offset: 506

ZHSteven wrote:

Mark in case I forgot.
Will check CTB diffs this weekend

+star

captin1 wrote:

hi
sorry about the delay, and this mod took me several days to complete, so apologies in advance if some things have changed in the earlier part of the mod
[General]

1. I feel like you could amplify your clap a bit more, even when I turned effects sounds way up I could still barely hear it Amplified.

[Easy]
Placement/Rhythm/Nazi Patterning

1. 00:18:816 (1,3) - consider making these the same slider flipped? would give this pattern a little more uniformity since they're in the same combo Done.
2. 01:13:699 (1) - way nazi, but if you move the white point in the larger curve of this to x236 y272 I think it makes this curve look a lot nicer Looks kawaii.
3. 01:52:575 (3,4,5) - a little confused as to why you chose to do this here in a quieter section of the verse, I'd expect an increase in difficulty like this during the kiai or something more intense Combined them into a slider.
4. 02:10:869 (4) - also way nazi, but same as before, white point to x192 y44? Done.
5. 02:24:304 - just as an example, if you were to add 1/2 in to this kiai, spots like this would be a really nice way to do it, since it fits well with the vocal Okay!
6. 02:55:462 (2,3,4) - like I said earlier, I think these lines of 1/2 would be more fitting in a much more intense part of the music rather than here, just makes sense to me looking at the intensity of the music ^
7. 03:49:202 (1) - I guess I'm just really not a fan of stuff with what looks like a bit sloppy curves sorry haha, so try bringing that second white point down a bit? Why not?
   
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8. 04:02:923 (1) - drag the red point so that it's directly on top of the middle slidertick? will divide the slider in half evenly and looks nice this way Done.
9. 04:05:352 (1) - to me, this sounds like it ends with the music better if it stops 1/4 earlier I originally ended it there, but I found that ending it there feels... a little unnatural.

Hitsounding

1. 00:30:822 (4) - remove whistle? since it goes down in pitch I think the drum sample is enough While it does go down, the instrument, there is another instrument sound here that would be weird not to be emphasized with a whistle.
2. 00:34:824 (2) - remove whistle from the head? I think putting more emphasis on the sound at the tail is nice, will also be consistent with 00:32:537 (1) - Uh idk... it feels quite empty. Also, I didn't add a whistle at 00:32:537 because the pitch of the piano (?) is pretty low compared to the head of this one.
3. 00:43:971 (3) - ^ Did this one.
4. 00:59:978 (1,2) - both of these ^ I think this happens a lot, so if you agree up to you to change more if you'd like~ No. Again, it feels like there is something missing.
5. 01:17:701 (5) - add a whistle? I think the vocal note here benefits from the extra emphasis. also 02:21:732 (5) - 03:20:617 (4) - 03:30:336 (3) - The whistles will conflict with the instrument though... I prefer to keep it as is.

[Normal]
Placement/Rhythm/Nazi Patterning

1. 00:30:250 (1,2,3) - I would personally use the rhythm from 00:27:963 (1,2,3) - for this, I feel like it fits better since 00:31:107 - doesn't need a click if you're following the melody Done.
2. 00:46:258 (1) - why not shorten this by 1/4 and add a note 00:46:829 - like you have done many times before? I think it would be nice to have a click on this drum sample, and the melody will fit with the slider this way Because from this part, there are instruments with simpler rhythms which is easier to follow by Normal players, and I prefer it this way, trying not to make the rhythm more complex. Will keep my pattern for now.
3. 00:55:405 (1) - same as ^ ^
4. 01:04:552 (1,2,3) - rhythm suggestion here, I think this captures a bit more of the feel from the drum and incorporates the vocal well, plus a click on 01:05:695 - doesn't seem necessary to me Done.
   
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5. 01:21:703 (2) - I think dividing this into a slider + circle would fit a lot better ^
6. 01:48:859 (2,3) - select these two and move to x316 y192? I think it makes this pattern look just a bit nicer ^
7. 02:17:730 (1) - I think this slider with a bit more curve than normal looks out of place, consider making it just a bit more smooth? might just be a personal thing of mine, but I generally don't think sliders this short should have such drastic curves, looks odd ^
8. 03:25:476 (3,4,5) - perhaps shift these all down a bit, give these a more distinct shape ^
   
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Hitsounding

1. 00:01:236 (2,4) - for these sliders in the beginning, I'd remove the whistle from the tail, it sounds a bit odd to me. You could add them back in on the head if you'd like, I think it sounds nice Oops, it was supposed to be like what you said.
2. 01:54:290 (4) - drum sample on the end? There's nothing that feels like a drum here, so...

[Hard]
Placement/Rhythm/Nazi Patterning

1. 00:14:957 (2) - this might be better off moved so that it has equal distance, since right now there's a significant jump to 3 that I don't think really emphasizes anything Done.
2. 00:16:100 (5,1) - the gap between these notes is something I'd consider too far to be comfortable for a hard level player, especially since the direction and pattern of 00:16:529 (1,2,3) - isn't designed to flow well with the player's jump from 5. Consider reworking into something like this to flow better and introduce the 1/4 spacing more intuitively ^
   
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3. 00:24:533 (3) - just a personal thing of mine, but rotate 15 so that 2 before connects more smoothly to this slider? ^
4. 00:26:820 (1,2,3) - I'm not sure on this, but these sort of patterns I don't think play the way you intend them to, since the slider leniency from 1 will make this feel like uneven spacing even though it looks even. Generally the way to fix this is to move 2 closer to the head of 3, so that the higher spacing from the slider will even out the feeling. But in return that might make the rhythm confusing, by seemingly having a 1/2 gap between 1 and 2. (personally I would have avoided these alltogether in a hard, but you've applied some of the same mentality as you did your miracle diff to this so that's more of a style opinion than anything else) I still think that using the benefit of slider leniency by making you not have to move very exactly following the slider's path doesn't affect this pattern in a bad way. I'll try to keep this in mind, though.
5. 00:27:963 (1,2,3) - another problem that arises from your high spacing 1/4 is when you switch back to 1/2, the distances look the same. You can even see it surrounding this pattern here, the 3.05 1/4 distance looks almost exactly the same as the 1.58 1/2 distance Remapped.
6. 00:27:963 (1,2,3) - vs 00:30:250 (1,2,3) - I would consider a consistency issue, as the first pattern is significantly harder to play than the second pattern, but they follow the exact same part in the music ^
7. 00:27:391 (3,1) - ALSO you might want to keep in mind that since 3 is a longer slider, it will slow the player's cursor down compared to the short sliders like 1, so having a large jump after it might feel uncomfortable and forced. ^
   ok that was a lot of stuff lol, so i'm gonna try and refrain from mentioning things like that again and you can apply those ideas where you see fit
8. 01:11:412 (1,2,3,4) - this pattern is super hard to play haha, I had to really push to do it well. I also noticed that you only use this pattern once here in the first kiai and then once in a verse which I think fits even less, since i would expect a difficulty spike like this to be in one of the strongest parts of the song. I'd consider changing this to something easier (same with the 01:59:435 (1,2,3,4) - pattern later) Done.
9. 02:58:749 (7,1) - this is one i would definitely consider making easier, it doesn't look as hard from a distance snap standpoint but that's due to the sv change, it's a pretty drastic change in speed ^
10. 03:12:613 - want to note that this last kiai is probably my favorite part of the map, where I think it actually feels like a hard diff that fits the feel of the song rather than a light insane \:D/
11. 03:22:332 (3,6) - surprised you didn't stack, you usually do Ah yeah...

Hitsounding

1. 00:34:824 (1) - 00:37:110 (2) - 00:38:254 (4) - I'd remove the whistle from the end of these three, it doesn't fit imo. having the emphasis be on the second slider sounds better to me Done.
2. 01:51:860 (5) - add a soft whistle to the head? it sounds incomplete when you have whistles on the notes leading up to this but not on here where the melody peaks ^

[Insane]
Placement/Rhythm/Nazi Patterning

1. 00:02:951 (2,3) - swap this for a slider? more rambling on number of clicks vs difficulty compared to song feel...yeah Okay.
2. 00:10:669 (1) - rotate clockwise so that it leads into the next circle better? Rearranged the objects here a bit.
3. 00:23:104 (3) - maybve change this to a 1/4 slider pointing away from 1? you're skipping a part in the violin melody that i think should be mapped I personally feel kinda awkward with this rhythm... Let's see what will the other modders say.
   
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4. 00:31:822 (7,1) - I personally just think this jump is too sudden and doesn't fit well, there isn't anything in the music to suggest it Reduced.
5. 00:34:538 (5) - remove this circle? since you're primarily mapping to the background sound in this section, having this one circle with the vocal feels odd to me This is to make a consistent 3/4 gap in the rhythm. It feels far weirder to play this section without the section, otherwise.
6. 00:55:976 (3) - try dropping this down to around x272 y72, imo the sharp angle you had before isn't that great to play Did stuff here.
7. 01:06:410 (2,3) - what if you swapped these two and then changed 3 into a slider pointing to the right? I think it would flow really well and not kill the momentum going into the kiai Remapped.
   
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8. 01:15:557 (2) - so notes like this I can see you're using as a style approach, so I'll just mention for reference in the future that these generally are very drastic jumps, much more than they look in editor, since they go completely opposite from the flow of the notes prior Okay.
9. 01:19:416 (1,2,3) - suppose I'll just throw this pattern suggestion here, take it or leave it, I like how this flows Eh idk, it feels forced honestly. Played with 01:19:416 (1)'s curve, though.
   
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10. 01:51:431 (1,2) - ^ Did something like that.
    
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11. 02:02:294 (3,4) - why not rotate these two away from each other, to give a little more variety to this pattern? This repetitiveness is already a variety in itself, and I think it perfectly fits with how the song goes here.
    
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12. 02:02:865 (1,2,3,4) - this feels very weak in comparison to the previous time this part of the music came up, I think some more open spacing on these sliders would feel really cool Sure.
13. 02:19:731 (4) - stack onto the head of 02:20:016 (1) - for consistency with 01:15:700 (3,1) - ? ^
14. 02:29:450 (2,2) - I think it would feel more comfortable to do a ctrl+g on these two individually and then move them to the right just a bit, with how sliders play this will be easier to play than what you have ^
15. 03:23:475 (3) - rotate about 25 or so clockwise? it feels a little awkward from 2 at the moment 25 anti-clockwise and played with 03:22:890 (1,2,3)'s position a bit.

Hitsounding

1. nothin stuck out to me, nice \:D/

[Miracle]
Placement/Rhythm/Nazi Patterning

1. 00:07:382 (1,2) - swap these two? will make the jump from 6 feel more natural Done.
   
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2. 02:03:151 (2,1) - seems like a really big antijump to me, might want to move this line of circles to the left some so that the player doesn't overshoot them after going through so many fast jumps Increased the spacing.
3. 02:21:589 (4,1) - try placements like this, I think it'll make the jumps a bit more intuitive Hmm, I'm not really sure of this, if I have to be blunt... Something just feels off. Maybe it's only me.
   
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4. 02:23:733 (2,3) - ctrl+g? same reason as ^ Sure.

Hitsounding

1. 00:11:241 (5,6) - remove whistle from the head of 6 and move it to the tail of 5? will be more consistent with what you've been doing the whistle patterns to Ah yes.
2. 00:11:956 (1) - add whistle? same reason as ^ ^

To give an overall opinion, I think the set is curved a bit too much towards the higher end. You did a very cool diff with Miracle, but then applied a bit too much of the fast speed to the rest of the diffs, and so as a result ended up with a set that's quite hard despite the slow paced song. Just my opinion though

apologies again for taking so long with this

good luck!

examination wrote:

Wow I think this map will be ranked soon.
Since many good modders have modded your map and I'm a noob modder QAQ,I think I can't give many good suggestions.
Though,I'll try my best.
Give some advice in CTB diffs //Since many good modders have modded your STD diffs.

[Platter]
00:16:529 (1,2,3,4,5) - I prefer this pattern with no dashes. Why? It fits with the song and isn't overly difficult for a Platter.
00:39:826 (4,5) - This slider seems a bit far and will be a challenge for many players (especially with HR or DT) Reduced the distance.
01:02:837 (5,6) - This distance can be longer.Since here's a strong beat. Sure.
01:48:716 (4,1) - ^ ^
02:06:867 (5,6) - ^ ^
02:33:451 (3,1) - If it were me,I prefer to place them at the same point,since the song breaks here. The gap between them in the timeline is close, though. It might be a little awkward to play.
02:35:595 (7,1) - ^ ^
02:38:025 (3,1) - ^ ^

The last part of kiai seems a bit boring,I think you can make the patterns more changeable to make it more fun.

The rest part will come tonight.
No kds pls since I haven't finished.

examination wrote:

[Crystal's Rain]
Generally,I think it's a bit hard,and some patterns feels like overdose. But that's not a big problem.
I can't play Rain very well , so just ignore if you think it feels good to reserve it.
01:15:686 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - oh this part seems a bit awsome for me.I tried many times but fail to catch them all. hmm. I can't find any reason to fix it
01:25:262 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - Crazy but no HDashes.Feeling good~
02:04:710 (5,6,7,1) - This distance seems to be a bit far for players to react. no change
02:57:449 (5,6,1,2,3,4,1) - I think these HDashes doesn't feel so good.As you see,it is really awsome for players to react unless you are a top CTB player. added slider for readable Red means HDash moves and Green means normal moves.

SPOILER

added sliders at the end.

Other parts seems nice to me.

1. All in all this Platter is fine. The only problem is that this song is very long and your patterns repeat very often, so after a while it feels pretty dull playing this difficulty. This is rankable but I will make a few suggestions to make this difficulty a bit more interesting.
2. 00:07:368 (1,2,3,4) - , 00:16:515 (1,2,3,4,5) - Copy & paste I guess? Let's be a bit more creative here. Make the second pattern like this, we don't need to keep consistency between them: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1484556. In game it should look like this: http://puu.sh/7WXsQ.jpg
3. 00:30:236 (1,2,3,4,5) - , 00:39:383 (1,2,3,4,5) -, 00:48:530 (1,2,3,4,5) - , 00:59:393 (3,4,5,6) - , 01:43:414 (1,2,3,4) - , 02:17:144 (3,4,5,6) - ... and so on... and so on.... This pattern appears way too often in your difficulty and it's one of these patterns that makes it so dull as I said above. I make suggestions of other patterns that you can use here to make this a bit more interesting: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1484586, http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1484607, http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1484612, http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1484622. Also please take a look in my CtB mapping tutorial to get some ideas of patterns that can be used in CTB maps.
4. 01:07:682 (4,1,2,3) - Select this whole section and move it to x: 424. This will create a Double HDash and will be a perfect start into the Kiai time.
5. The Kiai is way too easy. Let's try to build more Dashes and Hdashes here:
6. 01:12:542 (1,2) - Here should be a dashier pattern. Let's see, try this out for example: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1484677
7. 01:15:972 (1,2,3,4) - Way too easy for a Kiai. At least increase the distances here to create some harder Dashes.
8. 01:30:836 - Why not triplet here as you pretty much used every where else (as example at 01:28:406 (2,3,1) -)?
9. 02:03:709 (4,1) - Maybe a HDash fits here. But then you need to make this pattern after (4) a bit easier.
10. 02:34:867 - map on the triple voice again?
11. 02:57:735 (1,2,3) - Hue, we can make this fun and put HDashes between the sliders. This works well: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1484729. If you find it too difficult just ignore this, I know it's a really hard pattern
12. 03:33:466 (3,4) - Might be interesting to see a double-dashy effect here, but first just a normal dash to the left, then a HDash. Move 03:33:466 (3) - to x:288 and you see what I mean.
13. Rest seems fine though this song is very long and gets a bit boring. As stated above many patterns seem to repeat and I don't think we can fix this. Maybe it's really worth it to check this tutorial and look for some other patterns. I am sure this map can be made more creative.

mingmichael wrote:

ming comes huehuheue btw modnya pake indo aja ya wkwk


Red ~> unrakable issue, must be changed
Blue ~> highly suggested, consider to use it
Black ~> suggestion, just free to choose it


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[ Muzukashii]

General

☞ oke~!

Notes Structure

☞ sedikit disayangkan pas kiai part (part 1, 2 sama 3). ada beberapa yang kurang konsistent untuk beberapa penempatan, kayak peletakan kat yang seharusnya di garis putih untuk ngikutin suara kick dari lagu tapi malah ditempatkan di merah. yaps ada beberapa saran di Notes box nanti buat penempatan kat-kat tersebut

☞ penempatan don yang digantikan menjadi kat. sebagai contohnya di 00:53:104 - dan dibeberapa note di ketukan awal atau x:3 yang seharusnya don. sebenernya pada dasarnya itu bagus kalo ngikut vokal, tapi sedikit disayangkan karena ngikutin vokal, tekanan buat lagu itu sendiri jadi ilang karena notenya itu kat bukannya don. disini juga ada beberapa saran yang bisa diliat nanti di Notes box

☞ btw pada dasarnya uda bagus koq pattern-patternnya dan juga muzunya oke cuma ada banyak beberapa mod yang aku cantumin di Notes box

Notes

• ganti 00:07:797 - jadi kat, karena nada belnya itu masih sama kayak 00:07:654 - dan akhirnya belnya jadi rendah di 00:07:940 - makanya jadi don kayak yang dipakai disana Done.

• ganti 00:13:942 - ke kat dan 00:14:228 - ke don, sama halnya kayak 00:09:369 - yang dipake kat disana buat nekanin don di 00:09:655 - . dan mereka berdua 00:13:942 - dan 00:14:228 - punya penekanan nada yang sama kayak 00:09:369 - dan 00:09:655 - . kenapa ga gunain note yang sama? :3 ^

• drum hitnya (atau suara bass itu? lol) berenti di 00:17:087 - , jadi note di 00:17:230 - mending dipindahin ke 00:17:373 - . dan juga selaen karena suara yang uda berenti di 00:17:087 - , aku pindahin 00:17:230 - ke 00:17:373 - buat jaga pattern xxx-xxx-xxx dari 00:17:944 - sampe 00:17:944 - . dan juga sebenarnya dimulai dari 00:17:087 - , pattern dasarnya bukan xx-xx atau note-note genap kayak sebelumnya karena instrument dasar (itu kayak suara kecapi bukan?) yang buat note ganda. kayak contohnya 00:09:655 (39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46) - ^

• cuma saran kecil aja. gimana kalau pindahin 00:18:087 - ke 00:18:373 - dan ganti 00:18:230 - dan 00:18:373 - jadi o o? menurut pendapat ku sih lebih bagus buat ngikutin droping pitch sounds disana :3 hehee itu suara biolanya tinggi ke rendah abisan dengan 5-plets ^

• 00:19:088 - ganti ke don karena suara dasar biolanya itu masih setara dan sama kayak 00:18:802 - yang ditaro don juga disana :3 oh yah dan ganti 00:19:374 - ke kat buat ngejaga kat pattern, sama halnya di 00:21:660 - yang dikasih kat juga disana ^

• gimana dikasih dua note (don) di 00:24:233 - sama 00:24:376 - ? lumayan buat ngikutin suara biola disana daripada dikasih break antara 00:23:947 - sama 00:24:519 - ^

• delete 00:25:376 - ? suara drumnya terakhir jadi di 00:25:234 - , dan di 00:25:376 - uda ga ada drumnya tapi cuma biola. ^

• 00:40:669 - mundurin 1/4 kebelakang, jadi 5-plets disana. Err ini udah bener timestamp-nya? Perasaan ada yang salah o.o

• kat di 00:47:387 - ngikutin kick sound disana yang muncul juga disana. btw lebih mending dibandingkan dengan don, karena kalo don jadi nada monoton soalnya bakalan jadi 4 dons dari 00:46:815 - sampe 00:47:673 - Done.

• kasih note di 00:48:245 - :c sayang kalau dijadikan break disana. btw kaga usa khawatir dengan note setelahnya yang 5-plets 1/4 xD satu note sebelomnya kaga susah buat ngerusin ke 5-plets ^

• ganti 00:55:391 - ke don dan 00:55:962 - ke kat, dan juga pindahin 00:55:534 - ke 00:55:677 - . buat jaga kekonsistenan sebenernya kayak 00:50:817 - sampe 00:51:389 - yang patternnya x-xxx pada dasarnya. di 00:53:104 - sampe 00:53:676 - juga gunain pattern itu soalnya drum hitnya juga sama pada dasarnya ^

• dari 00:55:391 - sampe 00:55:962 - sama kayak atas ^ Salah timestamp? lol

• ganti 00:57:678 - ; 00:57:821 - ; 00:57:963 - jadi ooo. aku ganti jadi itu soalnya drum hit pertama itu jatohnya di 00:57:678 - , tapi disana awalnya tadi kat :c bukannya kaga cocok, tapi jadi sedikit aneh karena drum hit yang dominan dan cocok disana itu don, bukannya kat ^

• 01:06:825 - ; 01:06:968 - ; 01:07:111 - sama halnya kayak diatas ^ ^

• ganti 01:09:540 - sama 01:09:683 - jadi o o. suara kick soundnya muncul di 01:09:683 - bukan di 01:09:540 - . jadinya 01:09:683 - seharusnya kat buat ngikutin suara kick tersebut ^

• saran kecil, gimana 01:13:256 - ganti ke kat, buat ngejaga suara biola yang masih tinggi kayak 01:13:114 - (sebenernya 01:13:256 - uda lebih rendah dari 01:13:114 - , tapi setidaknya dia masih lebih tinggi dibandingin 01:13:399 - yang uda bener2 jatoh dan rendah) ^

• pindahin 01:13:828 - ke 01:14:114 - dan ganti jadi don dan 01:14:257 - ke kat. sama yang mod sebelomnya yang kick soundnya berada di 01:14:257 - ^

• 01:18:545 - ; 01:18:688 - ; 01:18:831 - sama kayak diatas juga ^ ^

• dari 01:22:832 - sampe 01:23:404 - sama kayak atas ^ ^

• ganti 01:24:833 - ke kat karena vokalnya yang masih tinggi (ehh paling tinggi dah disana), dan akhirnya jatoh di 01:25:119 - jadinya di 01:25:119 - itu don. ^

• 01:25:405 - ; 01:25:548 - ; 01:25:691 - ganti jadi ooo. sama seperti yang point2 sebelumnya btw ^

• delete 01:42:842 - . kaga ada drum hit disana, dan juga pattern yang dihasilin juga lebih asik dengan x-xx-x Removed.

• mundurin 1/4 01:44:700 - , buat ngikutin suara kecapi juga disana Done.

• ganti 01:47:987 - ke don, karena drum hit pertama sama kayak 01:47:987 - yang dikasih don juga ^

• kat di 01:55:991 - ? kecapinya disana tinggi juga btw ^

• dari 01:59:421 - sampe 02:01:136 - bagaimana kalau >> ini? ^

• kat di 02:01:851 - ? ^

• 02:10:427 - pindahin ke 02:10:712 - dan ganti ke kat, jadinya ooo disana. ^

• ganti 02:17:716 - ke don dan pindhin 02:17:859 - ke 02:18:144 - . sama halnya kayak di kiai pertama ^

• dari 02:24:576 - sampai 02:25:148 - sama kayak atas ^ ^

• 02:26:863 - dan 02:29:721 - don juga ^

• ganti 02:31:008 - ke kat dan 02:31:294 - don, jadinya 7-pletsnya jadi ooooooo. lebih terarah dan gampang di-read soalnya pattern genap-genap disana ^

• 02:41:727 - delete? buat fokusin ngikutin piano aja disana ^

• ganti 02:44:871 - ke kat karena suara klimaks pianonya yang tertinggi berada di sana, dan akhirnya dia turun ke 02:45:157 - , dan di 02:45:157 - seharusnya itu don karenanya ^

• ganti 02:58:735 - ke kat dan 02:58:878 - ke don. ini ku ganti buat ngejaga kekonsistenan pattern awal disana setelah aku cek berkali-kali. di 03:01:165 - ; 03:01:451 - ; dan 03:03:452 - ; 03:03:738 - ; 03:04:023 - juga o o o, tapi kenapa di awal part di 02:58:878 - itu beda sendiri? coba dipikirkan kembali yang ini >.< Umm, saya gak gitu ngerti dengan masalah yang ada di sini... Tapi berhubung ini mau dinaikin jadi Oni karena saran Ono (hue), saya tambah beberapa biji (lol) note di sini.

• don di 03:15:172 - dan pindahin 03:15:029 - ke 03:15:315 - Done.

• 03:19:745 - ; 03:19:888 - ; 03:20:031 - o o o ? ^

• ganti 03:22:032 - dan 03:22:318 - jadi o o | ^

• 03:24:033 - juga don, dan bisa ditambahin note lagi (don) di 03:24:462 - ^

• 03:28:892 - ; 03:29:035 - ; 03:29:178 - o o o juga? ^

• 03:31:179 - ; 03:31:322 - ; 03:31:465 - o o o | ^

• 03:33:466 - ; 03:33:752 - o o | ^

• 03:35:467 - don ^

• pindahin 03:37:897 - ke 03:38:183 - dan jadiin note o o o ^

• di 03:39:755 - bisa diganti jadi kat buat ngikutin bel kecil di sana. dan juga kat di sana bisa buat nekenin don yang ada di 03:40:041 - ^

• 03:42:613 - ; 03:42:899 - o o | ^

• 03:44:614 - don ^

• 03:47:044 - delete (kaga ada nada atau instrument yang bisa diikutin di 03:47:044 - btw :c) dan ganti 03:47:473 - jadi don ^

• bisa diganti 03:56:620 - dan 03:57:763 - jadi kat juga sama kayak 03:56:048 - yang kat ^

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aku cek oninya nanti aja sekalian bareng buat ngerecheck muzu kalo uda diupdate
pada dasarnya muzunya uda oke, pattern2 mendasarnya uda keliatan juga cuma kadang ada beberapa yang kurang tepat sama pattern tersebut
btw goodluck~!

Lanturn wrote:

The lyrics look so angry sometimes

mingmichael wrote:

recheck~ no kudosu btw hins


Red ~> unrakable issue, must be changed
Blue ~> highly suggested, consider to use it
Black ~> suggestion, just free to choose it


[ Muzukashii]

General

☞ ganti SV ke 1.40. 1.20 terlalu pelan untuk ukuran Muzukashii dengan 105BPM Done.

Notes Structure

☞ oke~

Notes

• delete 00:09:083 - . sama ganti 00:09:369 - jadi kat. sebenernya aku delete 00:09:083 - karena pada dasarnya mau mencegah different triplet meskipun cuma 105BPM, triplet tetep triplet dan 00:09:369 - jadi don karena kalo kita ngikutin intonasi suara kecapi dan juga suara bel dari 00:08:940 - itu dari tinggi dan tetap sama di 00:09:369 - dan akhirnya jadi paling rendah juga di 00:09:655 - . sebenarnya sama halnya juga di Oni yang di 00:09:369 - ialah kat ww Done...?

• hm.. kenapa 00:10:369 - ; 00:11:513 - dan 00:12:656 - kaga kat juga kayak 00:14:943 - ; 00:16:086 - ? itu suara kecapi di note-note tersebut pas banget tempat jatoh suaranya jadi lebih rendah dibandingkan dengan note sebelumnya yang kat Maksudnya don maybe? lol. Done anyway.

• ganti ke kat mencegah different triplet juga ditengah-tengah 00:22:232 - hingga 00:23:947 - . kalau buat pendapat pribadi ku sih different triplet di tengah2 kayak gitu cukup sulit, lain halnya juga different triplet ditempatinnya di awal-awal note atau akhir-akhir note lalu ada sedikit break itu masih bisa ditoleransi Err, maksudnya 00:23:090 (76)? Oh well, done.

• delete 00:29:664 - , sama halnya kaga ada note tambahan juga di 00:31:665 - >.< buat sedikit konsisten juga sih karena mereka masih di part yang sama dengan nada (suara instrumen) yang sama juga Done.

• delete 00:50:388 - dan juga ganti 00:50:531 - ke don. aku delete 00:50:388 - buat sedikit ngasih break dan don di 00:50:531 - buat ngikutin instrumen yang rendah jika dibandingin sama 00:50:103 - yang instrumennya masih ditinggi disitu ^

• ganti 01:04:538 - ke don untuk ngikutin suara drum hit pertama di sana juga ^

• delete 01:13:971 - dan ganti 01:14:257 - ke kat. dan juga ganti 01:13:256 - ke kat, karena ooo lebih gampang dimaenin dibandingin ooo (<< sebenernya ini masih misteri kenapa kayak gitu `-` lol) ^

• pindahin 01:15:543 - ke 01:15:829 - dan ganti 01:15:972 - dengan don jadinya ooo-triplet. pada 01:15:972 - memiliki suara drum hit pertama, dan lebih cocok dengan don ^

• sama halnya yang sebelumnya yang di 01:19:402 - ^

• pindah 01:24:690 - ke 01:24:976 - ^

• delete 01:45:272 - dan ganti 01:45:415 - ke don ^

• ganti ke kat 02:03:423 - karena masih nada tinggi juga di sini ^

• sama kayak kiai pertama 02:17:287 - ganti ke kat dan delete 02:18:002 - . dan ganti 02:17:716 - dan 02:18:287 - jadi o o ^

• add don 02:23:719 - ? ^

• ganti 02:25:720 - dengan mod yang sebelumnya ^

• pindahin 02:28:721 - ke 02:29:007 - jadinya ooo-triplet ^

• ganti 02:44:586 - jadi ooo-triplet. btw triplet tersebut lebih mendukung suara piano disana yang sebenernya semakin lama disetiap note tersebut semakin tinggi dari 02:44:586 - sampe 02:44:871 - ^

• 02:53:733 - ^ ^

• ganti 02:57:592 - don ^

• delete 02:59:307 - juga ^

• ganti ke kat 03:01:165 - dan delete 03:01:594 - kalo delete yang atas juga ^ buat konsisten dengan note yang di 03:01:165 - ; 03:01:451 - ; 03:01:737 - dengan note 02:58:878 - ; 02:59:164 - ; 02:59:450 - yang o o o ^

• 03:02:880 - ganti ke ooo-triplet ^

• don 03:06:310 - ^

• ganti 03:23:604 - ke kat dan ganti 03:24:033 - ke don ^

• 03:25:891 - ke kat juga ^

• pindahin 03:28:178 - ke 03:28:464 - ^

• swap 03:31:465 - dengan 03:31:751 - ^

• kat 03:35:038 - dan 03:35:467 - don ^

• bagaimana kalau di 03:38:897 - sampai 03:40:041 - kayak gini? sebenarnya patternnya juga menyerupai kayak di 03:20:603 - yang mau ancang2 ke part kiai selanjutnya, cuma bedanya 03:38:897 - kaga kat karena 03:37:754 - yang jadi penentuannya itu don ^

• kat juga 03:44:185 - ^

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[ Oni]

General

☞ sipp

Notes Structure

☞ oke~ sudah lebih terarah dibandingkan sebelumnya

Notes

• pindahin 01:14:972 - ke 01:15:257 - soalnya kaga ngikutin apa2 di 01:14:972 - , jadi dipindahin ke 01:15:257 - . meskipun sama halnya, di 01:15:257 - kaga ada suara yang bisa diikutin, tapi dengan penempatan ooo lebih ngeflow dengan lagunya dibandingkan ooo sebelumnya Done.

• don di 01:22:832 - dan pindahin 01:22:975 - ke 01:23:261 - dan ganti dengan ooo. soalnya sebelum2nya aku liat kamu emang gunain triplet macam gitu di bagian sana, jadinya ku ganti di sini biar jagain kekonsistenannya itu ^

• ganti 01:25:119 - ke don karena vokalnya yang jatoh di sini (jadi terendah jika dibandingin dengan note sebelumnya di 01:24:833 - ) ^

• pindahin 01:26:406 - ke 01:26:691 - . btw dengan dipindahinnya ini dan menggunakan mod sebelumnya bisa buat mirror-pattern btw secara ga langsung dan bagus >> here. meskipun note terakhir di 01:27:120 - bukan kat untuk membuat mirror-pattern yang sempurna tapi ga apa yang ada di gambar itu uda bagus juga dan lebih konsisten juga menurutku ^

• ganti 03:43:471 - don. sama halnya yang di 03:34:324 - juga don ^

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[ Inner Oni]

General

☞ oke~

Notes Structure

☞ dasarnya oke~! cuma ada beberapa usul nanti :3

Notes

• ganti 00:11:513 - ke don. sama kayak 00:10:369 - yang suara kecapinya jatoh di situ jadi rendah Done.

• ganti 00:11:799 - dan 00:12:084 - jadi o o kalo ganti yang diatas ^ ^

• 00:12:656 - disini juga don ^

• swap 00:12:942 - dengan 00:13:085 - ^

• ganti 00:19:374 - ke kat untuk ngikutin suara kick di sana yang perlu kat ^

• delete 00:21:232 - dan swap 00:20:940 - dengan 00:21:089 - [/color]

• pindahin 00:40:098 - ke 00:40:241 - . soalnya setelah ku amati lagi ternyata lebih dominan ngikutin suara bel disana dibandingkan kecapi, jadi untuk disana fokus ke suara bel aja ^

• mundurin 00:40:669 - ke 00:40:812 - ^

• ganti ke kat, jadi ooo timestamp where hue

• dari 00:46:244 - sampai 00:47:387 - gimana kalau pake pattern genap? ooooooooo Done.

• mundurin 00:49:245 - ke 00:49:388 - dan mundurin 00:49:817 - ke 00:49:960 - ^

• add don 00:51:818 - ^

• delete 01:00:107 - , terlalu bising dengan penggunaan don yang sedikit berlebih ;-; ^

• 01:05:967 - sampai 01:06:539 - >> ooooo? ^

• 01:24:405 - don? ^

• 01:27:120 - kat dan 01:27:263 - don? kalau diperhatikan lagi di 01:27:120 - ada suara bel kecil yang muncul, jadinya aku ganti ke kat di sana ^

• untuk 01:29:693 - sampai 01:30:265 - dan 01:31:980 - sampai 01:32:551 - kenapa kaga gunain note kayak 01:27:406 - sampai 01:27:978 - yang o o o? lebih konsisten juga dibanding random 5-plets kayak sebelumnya ^

• kat 02:10:569 - ? mengikuti vokal yang masih tinggi di sana (bahkan sebenarnya tambah tinggi di sana wkwk) ^

• ganti 02:17:001 - jadi don dan 02:17:287 - ke kat, jadinya 5-plets disana jadi ooooo. lebih cocok untuk ngikutin suara bel di 02:17:144 - juga dengan ooo ^

• ganti ke don 02:28:578 - ? ^

• sama halnya di 02:33:723 - dan 02:36:010 - kayak point-point sebelumnya. bagaimana ngikutin pattern kayak di 02:31:437 - yang o o o | ^

• ganti ke kat 02:44:871 - , suara pianonya sudah sedikit meningkat juga di sini Ningkat sih, tapi IMO masih kurang tinggi, jadi gak terasa pas dengan kat...

• ganti 02:53:733 - jadi ooooo lebih terarah juga untuk ngikutin suara biola di sana Done.

• upss kat terlewatkan di 02:54:876 - :c btw ngikutin bel juga dengan kat di sana, sama halnya kayak di 02:50:303 - ^

• kat di 03:00:879 - , ngikutin suara biola yang baru aja naek di sana ^

• 03:03:309 - ^ ^

• ganti 03:03:738 - jadi ooo karena bel di 03:04:023 - ^

• sama kayak part ke-2 yang ku mod, ganti 03:16:744 - jadi kat ^

• upss kat di sini 03:17:744 - ^

• kat juga di 03:25:891 - ^

• di 03:27:749 - bagaimana kalau ooooo? lebih tepat untuk mengikuti vokal juga disana ^

• ganti 03:34:609 - jadi ooooo | ^

• don 03:37:039 - ^

• don di 03:41:756 - , buat membuat pattern dasar di 03:40:898 - jadi o o o o o o o o o di 1/4 bsd ^

• upss don di 03:42:327 - , drum hit pertama disini ^

• kat juga di 03:44:185 - ^

• don 03:46:186 - ^

kat di 03:56:620 - ^

====================


okee segitu dulu dari saya :3
goodluck~!

lZenxl wrote:

NO KUDOSU

01:25:119 - I realised that the SB is a bit... too hyper and exciting it needs to calm down She said that this is to emphasize the intensity of the song here.

[Muzu]

00:26:520 - I don't think you want to undermap this here since the instrument is pretty significant
-
- I think it's pretty suitable for muzu since it's really low in bpm and I strongly suggest to have those triplets the same color if you want to change them since mixed colored triplets are somewhat Oni level Done.

01:06:825 - TO 01:09:112 - I suggest an increasing volume section here are the vocal increases in strength, maybe put an inheriting point on every white line and increasing to around 70 - 80%? The increase in power isn't really that noticeable, though. The current state should be okay.

03:08:025 (545,551) - dd > kk | These notes are on the same pitch as their following notes, I suggest to have both of them as kats Done.

Nothing else, really nice Muzu since it's pretty dynamic in the rhythm

224,76,76544,2,0,L|363:84,1,140,0|0,3:0|3:2,0:0:0:0:
360,168,76972,1,8,0:0:0:0:
156,184,77115,6,0,L|156:84,1,70
300,208,77401,2,0,L|300:308,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,96,77687,1,8,0:0:0:0:
296,92,77830,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,152,77973,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,100,78116,1,8,0:0:0:0:
292,44,78259,6,0,P|364:40|420:88,1,140,2|0,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:

first (1),(2),(3),(4)

Next (1)(2)(3)(4)(5)(6)

1. 00:02:794 (1) - to 00:05:510 (3) - left--> right --> left --> right ......plus it squeeze ONLY at right part of the whole compose field.. it is really boring. try some other unique jumps or movements
2. 00:13:085 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - this is the patterns that you should and maybe must avoid to use in a well designed CTB map. Left to Right with nothing.
   suggestion:
   
   5,1,2

   
   3,4,5,6,1

   
3. 01:43:414 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - nice. you need to introduce more patterns like this instead of moving left to right
4. 02:10:855 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) -also a nice try of stand patterns. keep it going
5. 03:17:173 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - please please avoid these kind of patterns in kiai, or not in last part of kiai.... the whole pattern is just
   ..........<--
   ........ -->
   ..........<--
   ........ -->.-->

ZHSteven wrote:

sorry but I can only get some free time spend in weekend.. so here we go

[Platter]
Generally this diff contains a lot of left-right-to patterns, which will makes the whole map plays like repeating everything. You need to come up with some new interesting ideas for platter, to entertain plays better, or they will rate 1s
patterns like
X
..X
....X
..X
X
..X
....X
..X
X
this is ok for only 1 or 2, maybe 3 in a series of pattern. But if the whole map gives a feeling that nothing but this, you are in trouble...

Maybe you can try some patterns here Catch the Beat - mapping tutorial, but now I will suggest you to use some standing patterns more.

one easy and simple suggestion: 01:15:972 (1) - to 01:18:259 (1) -
try this

SPOILER

224,76,76544,2,0,L|363:84,1,140,0|0,3:0|3:2,0:0:0:0:
360,168,76972,1,8,0:0:0:0:
156,184,77115,6,0,L|156:84,1,70
300,208,77401,2,0,L|300:308,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,96,77687,1,8,0:0:0:0:
296,92,77830,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,152,77973,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,100,78116,1,8,0:0:0:0:
292,44,78259,6,0,P|364:40|420:88,1,140,2|0,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:

first (1),(2),(3),(4)

Next (1)(2)(3)(4)(5)(6)

Made a little variation on the pattern.

Here comes the details, I will not say too much but please make sure your patterns can "entertain" plays, give them a reason that they needs to play this map 2nd time.

1. 00:02:794 (1) - to 00:05:510 (3) - left--> right --> left --> right ......plus it squeeze ONLY at right part of the whole compose field.. it is really boring. try some other unique jumps or movements Remapped.
2. 00:13:085 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - this is the patterns that you should and maybe must avoid to use in a well designed CTB map. Left to Right with nothing.
   suggestion: Did stuff by myself. Hope it worked.
   
   5,1,2

   
   3,4,5,6,1

   
3. 01:43:414 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - nice. you need to introduce more patterns like this instead of moving left to right Sure.
4. 02:10:855 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) -also a nice try of stand patterns. keep it going ...I always knew it was right to keep this. Sure, sure.
5. 03:17:173 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - please please avoid these kind of patterns in kiai, or not in last part of kiai.... the whole pattern is just
   ..........<--
   ........ -->
   ..........<--
   ........ -->.--> Remapped. I hope it isn't too hard for a Platter..

If the key point of standard map is to use different flowing note+ sliders to show the characteristic of different songs, the key point of a CTB map is to use movement difference.
this diff can still improve a lot. will keep an eye on it.


Oops it is too late now... So i'll leave the other 2 diffs for tomorrow(actually they are well designed imo, nothing much to say)

Senritsu wrote:

Just conisder me as a bored people bcs game banyak yang gabisa dimainin, gamenya susah, bosen gaada mod request, dan karena libur.
Consider it as a free suggestions. and no kd. dan hadiah karena udah selesai UN ;D/ am i rite hue yes

[Inner Oni]
karena generalnya udah dicek sama ming, gw ga ikut" lagi deh--nvm. gw cuma males.
ohwow ini yang salah siapa `` Baka AiMod ``b
00:07:225 try adding d here. biar nggak terlalu kosong dan ngikutin instrumennya. idk what is that. harp? Done.
00:07:940 and 00:08:083 add d, karena suara ting ting ting blablablaaweaiowjea masih bunyi. anggep aja gemanya lah. ...Sebenernya dulu ada note sih di sini. Sekarang emang terasa gimana gitu kalau gak ada apa-apa. Oke deh, tambahin balik lol
00:08:368 (45) - sama kea 00:07:225 ^
00:24:233 (131) - ganti ke k, karena drumnya nggak kedengeran. bahkan nggak kedengeran apapun sih.. lol buat nyamain rhythm juga biar enak.. aduh males ngetik pokoknya itu lah Done.
01:27:120 (466,467) - swap? karena instrumennya. ^
02:11:999 (679) - d here. karena instrumen dan vokalnya rendah ^
02:35:153 (818) - change to d? karena drum terkesan dominan. tapi biarin aja 02:34:867 (817) - tetep k, walau drumnya dominan, karena kamu ngikut instrumen satunya x) ^
oke ini cuma saran. terserah mau nerima, atau mungkin tambah diimprovisasi. ;3
03:08:883 (996,997,998) - ganti ke dkd karena musiknya Gak deh, soalnya instrumen di 03:09:169 lebih tinggi daripada 03:09:026.
lalu 03:09:455 (999,1000,1001) - ganti ke dkk, kasih d di sini 03:09:883 ^
03:11:170 (1010,1011,1012) - ganti ke kkd. ^

gg Hinsvar and friends.

Senritsu wrote:

[Muzukashii]
00:20:660 (68) - change to d karena drumnya kuat di sana Done.
00:23:090 (76) - ^ Di sini lebih pas sama kat sih IMO...
00:42:099 mungkin dimundurin setengah senti biar kedengeran lebih enak? not ini di blue tick kedengeran agak aneh imo `` sekalian nebeng vokal aja, daripada nebeng instrumen yang agak nggak normal--i mean terkesan 'kalah' di sana 8) Instrumen di sini lebih dominan daripada vokal.
01:48:559 (321) - coba dimajuin setengah senti--i mean tick. Done.
02:38:583 nanggung. kasih aja d di sini biar ngikutin drumnya
ada beberapa tempat sih yang agak gw kurang yakin enaknya dikosongin atau nggak.. tapi well, nggak pengaruh buat gw ww
ok no kd.

Hinsvar wrote:

Whoa, that sounds cool

Can you upload it somewhere? Maybe YouTube or something like that? I'm interested to see the MAD

I'll place it in the Creator's Words if you're going to upload it lol

Hinsvar wrote:

Okay, I'll wait hue

Meanwhile... do I need to get more mods again? lol

Also, remapped a few parts of Platter \o\

SPOILER

Replay download:Replay

Mao wrote:

Req by PM, sorry for the biiiig delay :c
Had to clear some other requests first and then I was sick for the whole week :c

1. Unrankable Issue
2. Recommended to fix
3. Highly Suggested
4. Suggestion
5. Just my own opinion / Comment

General

1. Fine!

Miracle

1. 00:09:655 (1) - The section starting here is basically the same as the previous one, but why didn't you map the anti-jumps here? I'd change this for consistency, maybe just me though. Also the section here seems a bit overmapped to me, the timeline in the previous section is way better to me. I'm sure the song gets stronger and more intense here; it's indicated by the instrument sounds here too.
2. 00:43:242 (2) - Changing this into two circles would fit better here isnce the vocals are pretty strong on the white tick. Also the smal distance felt a bit unnatural to me. I tried to alternate this but it was more of a singletap which kicked me off a bit since you've used bigger distances for the other 1/4 parts. I'm just following how is the vocal "held" here, and it feels more natural that way. By the way, you're modding Insane here, not Miracle \o\ Increased the spacing, I guess.
3. 00:53:676 (3) - Move this too 360|179 for an equal triangle Done.
4. The transition from 00:58:535 (2) - to 00:58:821 (1) - felt a bit weird, so CTRL+G on all of these (00:58:821 (1,2,1,2) -) seperately could work for a better cursor movement here. I... personally don't feel comfortable with this at all for some reason.
   
   Screenshot

   
5. 01:12:399 (3) - Why is the DS to the next object so small? The stream looks a bit sloppy like this :c Oops.
6. 01:23:904 (6) - The DS to the next object is so far, looks really weird as well. ^
7. 01:35:410 (1) - I feel like this doesn't really fit the music. The start is a note of the instrument, and this is the last note of this instrument, so I'd suggest you to put a note there. And then from the red tick where you mapped vocals, I'd map a 1/4 slider for the fade and a circle at the white one, since the vocals are really strong there. Doesn't seem to be really fitting, IMO. The 1/4 slider feels awkward, for one.
   
   Screenshot

   
8. 01:36:553 (4) - I'd suggest you to move the NC here, since this is the start of a new section. 01:35:410 (1) has an NC to indicate that it's the start of a new pattern, and I'm sure that the combo pattern is more correct this way compared to the music.
9. 02:48:302 (6) - Maybe CTRL+G could make the flow better here c: Sure.
10. 03:38:611 (2,1) - How about chaning these into 90° rotated versions of 03:38:326 (1) - ? Would make it look a bit more consistent :c This is intentional for a better flow. Gotta sacrifice a little polishing for cursor movement comfortability.
11. Awesome flow! Some stream shapes are weird sicne their spacing varies in the middle of them which is kinda weird for so low distance and such short streams :/

Insane

1. 00:09:655 (1) - Same as I said for Insane. Same response.
2. 01:05:396 (4) - The DS felt a bit low to me in here. While playing I thought it was 1/4. Consider making the spacing higher here :c Eh idk, I can read this perfectly as being 1/2 beats apart from (3). I'll keep this as is for now.
3. 01:41:127 (1,2,3,4) - How about a perfect rotated square here? The movement needed to hit a square like that is... kinda jarring int this situation, thus the current pattern.
4. 01:55:705 (1,2) - These are the same sounds as 01:55:419 (1,2) - . But why are the distances so high for the second ones? Try to keep it consistent. Just map a higher distance between 01:55:562 (2,1) - . This is to make sure players are... "warmed up" before doing a jump to 01:55:991 (1). It also just feels better, somehow.
5. 01:59:421 (1,2) - A 1/4 slider could fit the music here better because the vocals fade out a bit until they were strong again at 01:59:707 (2) - . I'm following the instruments here, actually, since it feels weird to follow the vocal.
6. 02:03:423 (1,2,3,4) - If you listen to the music closely you can hear a "bump" sound for all of these notes. Some hitsounding could be cool here. Maybe drum claps could help. Drum-hitnormal works!
7. You seemed to have fun spacing 1/4 notes a bit low in the last Kiai. Maybe stacking them for consistency could be better, but if you like it so much keep it. Nothing big, just me being a bit nitpicky.
8. Watch your stacks x-x
9. Cool Patterns!

Hard

1. 00:25:234 (4) - Why aren't the distances consistent here? :c Ah yeah...
2. 00:27:377 (3) - Placing the 2nd anchor point in the middle would make the slider look better since now the curve overlaps the start a bit weird. Sure.
   
   Screenshot

   
3. 00:31:951 (1) - This is the same part as 00:29:093 (6,7) - . But #1 Why is the spacing so high here? and #2 Why is this slider slower? Consider changing this for consistency. The music gets kinda changed here, I believe, and thus the inconsistency here is fine.
4. 00:58:821 (1) - Move to 477|189 for consistency with the gaps between the previous 4 slider's heads. Done.
5. 01:01:108 - The note here should be clicked since it's so strong as you can hear if you listen closely. I'd suggest shorten the slider and place a note here. ^
   
   Screenshot

   
6. 01:02:823 (3) - Same as above but here there's actually something on the blue tick so I'd suggest it as seen below. ^
   
   Screenshot

   
7. 01:21:117 (3) - Make the two red marked lines in the screenshot parallel for a better look :c Did... something.
   
   Screenshot

   
8. 02:17:716 (1) - The jump here is a bit big, maybe CTRL+G could work. The transition to the following object would be good as well. Rearranged stuff.
9. 02:29:721 (3) - Why isn't this a completely y-flipped version of 02:29:150 (1) - ? Consider changing this. Sure.
10. 02:51:303 (2) - Just a little comment here. This looks a little bit strong curved and weird due to the last anchor point not being right on the sliders tail. Up to you if you want to change it but it would make the look of the slider better. ^
11. 03:13:742 (5) - Making this symmetrical would be cool. Keeping this as is since it won't be so noticeable.
12. 03:17:744 (3) - Same as I said for the parallel red marked lines for the other one. Tried my best.
13. Nice!

Normal

1. 01:28:835 (2) - Stack with 01:27:120 (4) - Sure.
2. 02:02:566 (2) - An equal triangle here could be cool. Place it somewhere around 219|129 ^
3. 03:17:173 (1) - The 2nd Anchor Point could be in the middle for not overlapping the head. ^
   
   Screenshot

   
4. Sorry for nazi mod here but there's nothing bad here, just some transitions where the following object could follow the previous slider's track (e.g. 00:13:085 (2) -) x-x

Easy

1. 00:13:085 (4) - The transition is bit weird here since you have got the previous slider's curvy movement which goes more downwards. I'd suggest you to move this to 152|299. Sure.
2. 00:20:517 (2) - 0,12 Distance Variation? Why is this here. This shouldn't be the case ;w; ^
3. 00:22:804 (4) - ^ ^
4. 00:43:957 (3) - Moving the 3rd grey anchor point into the middle would make the slider look a bit better since the transition here is weird to me :V ^
   
   Screenshot

   
5. Rest is fine, awesome diff! :3

Please reply! I hope it was helpful and good luck! :3

Awesome Mapset deserves it

Trust wrote:

(◕‿◕✿)

Hi KSHR, how's it going?

Natsu wrote:

k 100

btw probably I should defeat KSHR

captin1 wrote:

broke the 100 sp >:3

kanpakyin wrote:

Sorry for delay. It's okay.

[Inner Oni]

1. I have a suggestion, how about changing the SV from 1.6 to 2.8 or 3.2? This would facilitate the readability of the map. 2.8'd. But I wonder if I should make Muzu's SV 2.8 too...
2. 00:30:236 (166,167,168,169,170) - How about changing this to kdkkd in order to fit the drum sound as well as the pitch of the instrument. This can also be consistent with the previous pattern. Done.
3. 00:54:533 (284,285,286) - I don't think this 1/4 triplet fits the music well as there is actually nothing to support the triplet. I would say simple 1/2 should be enough here. But there is a very clear and noticeable instrument sound at 00:54:676. I can't leave it unmapped.
4. 01:05:396 (332,333,334,335,336,337,338,339,340) - How about ddkkddkdk? This fits the drum pretty well. Done.
5. 02:59:307 (942) - How about changing this to kat? My personal feelings only. ^

[Oni]

1. I have a suggestion, how about changing the SV from 1.6 to 2.8 or 3.2? This would facilitate the readability of the map. Hmm okay then, 2.8 it is.
2. 00:30:236 (135,136,137,138,139) - kdkkd sounds better here imo, at least it can fit the drum and the pitch perfectly. Done.
3. 00:40:669 (173) - Please remove this note if possible, as it doesn't fit the music. You can clearly hear that there is nothing on the background music supports this note. Thus, removing it would be nice. ^
4. 00:52:818 (221,222) - Swap it? Using k d here instead of d k. As the drum sound on 00:53:104 - is very strong. And a don could fit better than a kat for such strong downbeat here. ^
5. 00:58:821 (244) - don? ^
6. 01:18:545 (318,319,320) - kkd here for fitting the drum sound better? ^
7. 01:20:831 (327,328,329) - Considering the vocal and the drum aspects, I think dkd is much more suitable here. As the pitch at 01:20:974 (328) - is the highest among three, and the don at 01:21:117 (329) - could fit the drum very well. ^
8. 02:59:164 (705,706) - d k here? ^
9. 03:40:898 (882) - I think you could change this to kat in order to fit the pitch and the drum sound. ^

[Muzukashii]

1. 00:52:818 (159,160) - Swap it? Using k d here instead of d k. As the drum sound on 00:53:104 - is very strong. And a don could fit better than a kat for such strong downbeat here. Hmm, makes sense. Done.
2. 01:07:968 (199) - Change this back to don and then add a note at 01:08:254 - (don)? Sure.
3. 01:20:403 (236) - I would prefer removing this note if I were you as there is nothing to support the note at blue tick. ^
4. 02:35:153 (447) - How about changing this back to don so that it can fit the drum sound as well as the pitch? ^
5. 03:05:167 (537,538,539) - kdd sounds better here. Have a try on it? ^
6. 03:31:751 (624,625) - Change these to kat? ^
7. 03:57:192 (703) - don seems better here as don can fit to the drum and the pitch. ^

kanpakyin wrote:

[Inner Oni]
00:21:660 (121) - you haven't fixed this broken slider. I am baka. Fixed.
00:30:808 (170) - Probably change this to don? Hmm yep, just realized that the pitch decreases quite noticeably here. Fixed too.
03:08:883 (996,997,998) - dkd here? ^
03:11:170 (1009,1010,1011) - ^ ^

Natsu wrote:

This need mania diffs to be perfect

#runs

CLSW wrote:

Oh wow.

Crystal's Rain

Platter

Rain Collab

Tari wrote:

Platter

1. 00:06:653 (2) - You need to enlarge spacing here I guess, even though your using different rhythms here you still should know that there is a jump in this tick (time of the music) just compare it to 00:05:510 (3) - where there is a jump towards that note, there also needs to be a jump towards 00:06:653 (2) - too please. Sure.
2. 00:23:233 - Add a note here? because 00:24:233 (4) - there is a slider end there that represents the blue beat, and it leads to a jump to the next note, and if you add a note here it'll flow really well with what your trying to do there , well try to put the note on top, so there is no movement because the jump towards 00:23:376 (1) - is the key emphasis here ^
   
   example

   
3. 00:55:820 (3) - Uh shouldn't there be a farther movement towards the next note rather than here? how about you move this note more to the right OTL? it makes more sense that way if you do so ^
   
   example

   
4. 01:00:965 - Well same case scenario as before, you should add a note here, and put it farther away from the next note so you can match up with the next combo's catch and movement pattern at 01:02:823 (5,6) - Uh, I'm sure there's nothing here in the song, unlike 01:03:252 which actually has a drum playing.
5. 01:58:135 - Note seem to be lacking here, how about you add some notes here to fill in that harp sound that occurs in the blue tick somewhere around here? its just to show tis there basically. Added.
6. 02:23:147 (4) - Doing spacing like this can be confusing for the players , especially if you space them the same distance apart from the 1/4th notes that follow, well it won't matter that much in gameplay but having such little movement in kiai can be a problem. Made the spacing bigger.