BURTON - Shinonomegiku [Osu|CatchTheBeat]‬ · forum‬

Wafu

Joined June 2011

Fixed just spinner NCs, I find other things not even worth changing and unreasonable, sorry. Also I fixed volume issue which I noticed just now.

Anyway thanks for a mod.

Kurokami

osu! Alumni

4,024 posts

Joined February 2010

Kurokami 11 years ago

Fixed the Tag/Source/kiai problem tho the kiai can be different since it is a guest diff.

SPOILER

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Shinonomegiku.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 84907
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 2
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 16
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Shinonomegiku
TitleUnicode:東雲菊
Artist:BURTON
ArtistUnicode:BURTON
Creator:[_Crystal]
Version:Kurokami's Platter
Source:ましろ色シンフォニー -Love is pure white-
Tags:Mashiro-iro Symphony original soundtrack ost SUBSTAC9 yf_bmp Kurokami Wafu IamKwaN
BeatmapID:382311
BeatmapSetID:152709

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.5
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"sana1.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,0,0,0

[TimingPoints]
241,666.666666666667,3,2,1,20,1,0
22241,-100,3,2,1,60,0,0
44241,-100,3,2,1,50,0,0
44574,-100,3,2,1,40,0,0
44907,-100,3,2,1,30,0,0
45241,-100,3,2,1,20,0,0
45574,-100,3,2,1,60,0,0
54241,-100,3,2,1,60,0,0
76241,-50,3,2,1,60,0,0
77574,-100,3,2,1,60,0,0
86241,666.666666666667,4,2,1,60,1,1
86241,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
91574,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
92241,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
94241,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
95574,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
102241,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
102907,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
103574,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
104241,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
104907,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
105574,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
106574,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
107241,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
107574,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
110241,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
110907,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
115574,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
116241,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
118241,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
118907,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
126241,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
126907,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
131574,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
132241,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
136907,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
137574,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
139574,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
140241,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
142241,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
142907,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
144907,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
146241,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
146907,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
147574,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
147907,-100,4,2,1,20,0,0
148241,-100,4,2,1,10,0,0
148574,-100,4,2,1,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 128,255,255
Combo2 : 128,128,255
Combo3 : 128,255,0

[HitObjects]
416,288,241,5,2,0:0:0:0:
128,272,907,2,0,L|256:192,1,150,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,224,2241,6,0,L|144:144,2,150,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,64,4241,6,0,L|352:112,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,144,4907,2,0,L|224:160,2,75,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,112,5907,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,96,6241,6,0,L|208:176,2,150,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,176,8241,6,0,L|384:192,2,37.5,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,192,8907,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,160,9074,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,128,9241,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,192,9574,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,272,10241,6,0,L|64:192,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,192,10907,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,144,11241,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,11574,2,0,L|272:192,1,75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,144,12241,6,0,L|336:96,1,150,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,64,13574,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,64,13907,1,2,0:0:0:0:
480,64,14241,6,0,L|400:64,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,96,14907,2,0,L|256:144,1,75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,208,15574,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,288,15907,1,2,0:0:0:0:
16,208,16241,6,0,L|80:160,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,160,16907,2,0,L|272:112,1,75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,64,17574,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,32,17907,1,2,0:0:0:0:
416,80,18241,6,0,L|496:112,2,75,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,96,19241,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,20241,12,0,21907,0:0:0:0:
192,176,22241,6,0,L|112:144,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,112,22907,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,112,23241,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,192,23574,2,0,L|320:256,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,288,24241,6,0,L|32:256,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,192,24907,2,0,L|224:128,1,75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,80,25574,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,48,25907,1,0,0:0:0:0:
16,80,26241,6,0,L|96:96,2,75,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,48,27241,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,48,27574,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,48,27907,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,112,28241,6,0,L|416:160,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,176,28907,2,0,L|240:176,1,37.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,192,29241,2,0,L|320:256,1,75,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,272,29907,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,256,30241,6,0,L|256:208,2,75,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,192,31241,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,144,31574,1,8,0:0:0:0:
32,144,31907,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,80,32241,6,0,L|400:80,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,80,32907,2,0,L|112:80,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,16,33574,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,16,33741,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,16,33907,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,112,34241,6,0,L|288:144,2,75,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,128,35241,1,0,0:0:0:0:
16,192,35574,2,0,L|96:192,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,192,36241,6,0,L|240:240,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,240,36907,2,0,L|400:304,1,75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,320,37574,1,8,0:0:0:0:
432,176,37907,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,160,38241,6,0,L|112:32,1,150,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,32,39241,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,96,39574,2,0,L|208:96,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,96,40241,6,0,L|336:96,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,160,40907,2,0,L|160:208,1,75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,272,41574,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,320,41907,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,192,42241,6,0,L|272:144,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,80,42907,2,0,L|400:80,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,80,43574,2,0,L|224:80,1,75,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,80,44241,5,2,0:0:0:0:
432,112,44324,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,144,44407,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,176,44491,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,208,44574,1,0,0:0:0:0:
0,224,44907,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,256,44991,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,288,45074,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,320,45157,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,352,45241,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,336,45574,2,0,L|384:288,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,192,46241,6,0,L|208:144,2,75,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,192,47241,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,112,47574,1,10,0:0:0:0:
320,112,47907,1,2,0:0:0:0:
352,48,48241,6,0,L|416:96,2,75,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,48,49241,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,112,49574,1,10,0:0:0:0:
144,112,49782,1,2,0:0:0:0:
336,176,49991,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,176,50241,5,0,0:0:0:0:
144,192,50282,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,208,50407,2,0,L|176:288,1,112.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,336,51241,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,288,51574,2,0,L|112:240,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,192,52241,6,0,L|400:240,2,75,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,144,53241,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,192,53574,2,0,L|288:128,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,64,54241,5,2,0:0:0:0:
192,64,54324,2,0,L|160:112,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,192,54907,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,192,54991,2,0,L|304:240,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,256,55574,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,256,55657,2,0,L|128:304,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,304,56241,5,2,0:0:0:0:
384,304,56324,2,0,L|416:256,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,192,56907,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,192,56991,2,0,L|176:160,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,96,57574,1,8,0:0:0:0:
368,96,57657,2,0,L|416:64,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,80,58241,5,2,0:0:0:0:
192,80,58324,2,0,L|240:48,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,80,58907,1,0,0:0:0:0:
16,80,58991,2,0,L|64:112,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,160,59574,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,160,59657,2,0,L|224:192,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,60241,5,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,60324,2,0,L|400:224,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,288,60907,2,0,L|240:240,1,75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,61574,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,61657,2,0,L|400:160,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,144,62241,5,2,0:0:0:0:
160,144,62324,2,0,L|112:112,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,96,62907,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,96,62991,2,0,L|384:64,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,48,63574,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,48,63657,2,0,L|208:96,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,192,64241,5,2,0:0:0:0:
16,192,64324,2,0,L|64:224,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,240,64907,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,240,64991,2,0,L|240:272,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,256,65574,1,8,0:0:0:0:
464,256,65657,2,0,L|432:208,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,160,66241,5,2,0:0:0:0:
288,128,66324,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,96,66407,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,48,66574,2,0,L|416:96,2,75,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,32,67574,2,0,L|336:32,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,48,68241,6,0,L|176:96,2,75,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,32,69241,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,96,69574,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,160,69907,1,2,0:0:0:0:
272,192,70074,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,224,70241,6,0,L|128:272,2,75,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,160,71241,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,128,71574,2,0,L|224:80,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,32,72241,6,0,L|464:96,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,48,72907,2,0,L|224:112,1,75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,192,73574,2,0,L|336:192,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,208,74241,6,0,L|176:256,2,75,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,144,75241,1,0,0:0:0:0:
496,80,75574,2,0,L|432:32,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,48,76241,6,0,L|64:96,4,150,2|0|0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,32,77907,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,80,78241,6,0,L|320:128,2,75,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,64,79241,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,80,79574,2,0,L|208:144,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,192,80241,6,0,L|352:256,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,256,80907,2,0,L|208:192,1,75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,192,81574,2,0,L|64:128,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,96,82241,6,0,L|352:144,2,75,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,32,83241,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,96,83574,2,0,L|240:160,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,144,84241,6,0,L|416:192,2,75,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,96,85241,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,160,85574,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,224,85907,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,272,86074,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,272,86241,6,0,L|192:192,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,128,87241,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,112,87574,2,0,L|224:64,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,64,88241,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,64,88574,1,0,0:0:0:0:
16,48,88907,6,0,L|80:96,2,75,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,64,89907,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,64,90241,2,0,L|352:64,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,64,90907,2,0,L|96:128,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,144,91574,6,0,B|480:240|480:240|368:352,1,300,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,304,92574,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,240,92907,2,0,L|240:240,2,75,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,160,93907,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,16,94241,6,0,B|480:96|480:96|384:176|384:176|480:256|480:256|336:352,1,600,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,304,95907,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,176,96241,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,176,96574,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,128,96741,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,80,96907,6,0,L|192:0,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,0,97907,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,0,98241,2,0,L|128:48,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,80,98907,1,8,0:0:0:0:
80,128,99241,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,192,99574,6,0,L|224:192,2,75,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,256,100574,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,272,100907,2,0,L|224:224,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,192,101574,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,128,101907,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,32,102241,6,0,L|336:112,2,150,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,16,103241,1,0,0:0:0:0:
16,32,103574,2,0,B|144:112|144:112|16:192,1,300,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,224,104574,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,208,104907,6,0,B|288:128|288:128|416:48,1,300,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,32,105907,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,48,106241,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,96,106574,5,8,0:0:0:0:
160,112,106741,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,128,106907,1,2,0:0:0:0:
288,192,107241,1,2,0:0:0:0:
480,192,107574,6,0,L|352:272,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,288,108574,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,192,108907,1,2,0:0:0:0:
80,96,109241,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,64,109574,2,0,L|272:64,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,112,110241,6,0,B|352:192|352:192|480:272,1,300,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,320,111241,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,272,111574,2,0,L|144:224,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,144,112241,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,96,112574,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,80,112907,6,0,L|288:32,2,75,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,96,113907,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,144,114241,2,0,L|256:192,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,192,114907,2,0,L|400:240,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,272,115574,6,0,B|240:192|240:192|112:112,1,300,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,64,116574,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,48,116907,2,0,L|160:0,1,75,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,16,117574,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,64,117907,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,112,118074,1,8,0:0:0:0:
384,160,118241,6,0,B|256:240|256:240|384:320,1,300,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,240,119241,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,240,119574,2,0,L|320:240,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,240,120241,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,160,120574,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,128,120907,6,0,L|0:96,2,75,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,160,121907,1,0,0:0:0:0:
496,176,122241,2,0,L|448:240,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,240,122907,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,240,123241,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,192,123574,6,0,L|272:112,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,96,124574,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,112,124907,2,0,L|320:48,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,96,125574,2,0,L|112:32,1,75,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,112,126241,6,0,B|448:192|448:192|320:272,1,300,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,192,127241,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,192,127574,1,2,0:0:0:0:
80,176,127907,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,128,128074,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,80,128241,1,2,0:0:0:0:
16,48,128574,1,2,0:0:0:0:
304,80,128907,6,0,L|224:208,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,256,129907,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,208,130241,2,0,L|160:256,2,75,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,160,131241,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,208,131574,6,0,B|96:128|96:128|224:48,1,300,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,112,132574,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,208,132907,2,0,L|176:144,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,160,133574,2,0,L|352:96,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,208,134241,6,0,L|192:208,2,75,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,208,135241,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,208,135574,2,0,L|160:144,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,128,136241,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,48,136574,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,48,136907,6,0,B|192:128|192:128|320:208,1,300,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,128,137907,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,208,138241,2,0,L|272:272,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,272,138907,2,0,L|112:272,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,288,139574,6,0,B|496:208|496:208|368:128,1,300,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,96,140574,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,128,140907,2,0,L|320:192,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,240,141574,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,320,141907,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,320,142241,6,0,B|160:240|160:240|32:160,1,300,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,80,143241,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,112,143574,1,2,0:0:0:0:
272,192,143907,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,272,144241,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,304,144574,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,144907,12,0,148907,0:0:0:0:

ZZHBOY

1,649 posts

Joined April 2012

ZZHBOY 11 years ago

晚上又喝多

[general]
建议把normal的CS-1让整体的diff spread好点毕竟EZ是cs1
[hard]
最高难度尽量别漏音太明显比如00:44:241 -
00:49:574 - 三分拍加原曲没有的音效感觉还是违和或者音量弄小一点
01:04:241 (1,3) - 没blanket好
01:13:241 (4,5) - ^
01:28:241 (5,6) - ^
01:49:574 (5,6) - ^
02:23:241 (2,3) - ^
01:10:241 (3) - NC 下一个额Nc把cancel了
01:26:241 (5) - ^
01:47:241 (2) - DS好高啊美味ent?
01:56:907 (3) - 前后DS差太多感觉不太好把下一个额滑条弄近一点或者把这个弄远点吧
02:05:241 - 这里明显有个音最好别空
02:09:907 - ^
02:20:907 (5) - 角度这么大好丑的
[normal]
00:25:907 (2) - maybe can delete it
00:48:241 (1) - it's ugly...radian smaller may be better
01:02:241 (1) - ^
02:00:907 (1) - ^
02:03:574 (1,2) - ^ to blanket well
02:21:574 (2,3,1) - i fell flow is bad here...
[easy]
可以考虑给slider tick加上音效
00:15:574 (2) - 弧度大一点美观
00:35:241 (2) - 简化成白线的单点就可以啦不然三个滑条挤一起很丑的
01:12:241 (2) - 建议和上一个一样不要有弧度美观问题
01:33:574 (3,4) - 完全可以把4像上移点blanket嘛美观
01:34:241 - 这里也可以加finish音效
[ctb]
01:42:241 (1,2,3) - smaller jump here...

美丽

Last edited by ZZHBOY 11 years ago, edited 1 time in total.

Crystal

Former osu!catch Champion: 2018

1,123 posts

Joined June 2012

Topic Starter

Crystal 11 years ago

ZZHBOY wrote:
晚上又喝多干了这杯
[general]
建议把normal的CS-1让整体的diff spread好点毕竟EZ是cs1
[hard]
最高难度尽量别漏音太明显比如00:44:241 - 这里怎么放都比较违和因为不是1/8
00:49:574 - 三分拍加原曲没有的音效感觉还是违和或者音量弄小一点好的
01:04:241 (1,3) - 没blanket好
01:13:241 (4,5) - ^
01:28:241 (5,6) - ^
01:49:574 (5,6) - ^
02:23:241 (2,3) - ^ 以上都改了
01:10:241 (3) - NC 下一个额Nc把cancel了的好额
01:26:241 (5) - ^ 好
01:47:241 (2) - DS好高啊美味ent? 美味ent
01:56:907 (3) - 前后DS差太多感觉不太好把下一个额滑条弄近一点或者把这个弄远点吧稍微修改了下现在感觉这个DS没有问题了
02:05:241 - 这里明显有个音最好别空不了,因为快到结尾了不跟鼓了
02:09:907 - ^ ^
02:20:907 (5) - 角度这么大好丑的有吗?没感觉丑..
美丽

谢谢mod

Last edited by Crystal 11 years ago, edited 1 time in total.

IamKwaN

osu! Alumni

3,905 posts

Joined August 2012

IamKwaN 11 years ago

ZZHBOY wrote:
[easy]
可以考虑给slider tick加上音效現在有音的啊
00:15:574 (2) - 弧度大一点美观跟00:13:574 (1) 是一對的
00:35:241 (2) - 简化成白线的单点就可以啦不然三个滑条挤一起很丑的欸豈不是漏音了
01:12:241 (2) - 建议和上一个一样不要有弧度美观问题多弧度blanket就美麗
01:33:574 (3,4) - 完全可以把4像上移点blanket嘛美观為啥我覺得這blanket很醜
01:34:241 - 这里也可以加finish音效不耶我是抄Normal的音效我看你nm也沒建議+finish 所以不了

Neta

536 posts

Joined May 2011

Neta 11 years ago

Hello~ from my modding queue

[KwaN's Easy]

00:52:241 (2,3) - how about this one?
SPOILER

SPOILER
NICEMAP~~

[Wafu's Normal]

map is good but i think you should use little more hitsound...
NP

[Hard]

00:22:907 (3,4) - little more bending will be nice
01:02:241 (3) - Ctrl + G?
01:15:574 (2) - ^
02:12:241 (5) - ^

so nice map ~

can't find many problems XD

STAR and GL~

Kurokami

osu! Alumni

4,024 posts

Joined February 2010

Kurokami 11 years ago

Sorry, no change on CtB. The only jump is at (2) to (3) and that is not really a long one. It is during the kiai anyways.

Crystal

Former osu!catch Champion: 2018

1,123 posts

Joined June 2012

Topic Starter

Crystal 11 years ago

Neta wrote:
Hello~ from my modding queue <3

[Hard]
00:22:907 (3,4) - little more bending will be nice that's right, fixed <3
01:02:241 (3) - Ctrl + G?
01:15:574 (2) - ^
02:12:241 (5) - ^ all nope because it's on purpose
so nice map ~

can't find many problems XD

STAR and GL~ :3 thanks~

thanks for modding and star~~

IamKwaN

osu! Alumni

3,905 posts

Joined August 2012

IamKwaN 11 years ago

@Neta: fix all of them.

SPOILER

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Shinonomegiku.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 84907
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 0.8

[Metadata]
Title:Shinonomegiku
TitleUnicode:東雲菊
Artist:BURTON
ArtistUnicode:BURTON
Creator:[_Crystal]
Version:KwaN's Easy
Source:ましろ色シンフォニー -Love is pure white-
Tags:Mashiro-iro Symphony original soundtrack ost SUBSTAC9 yf_bmp Kurokami Wafu IamKwaN
BeatmapID:387799
BeatmapSetID:152709

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:2
OverallDifficulty:1
ApproachRate:2
SliderMultiplier:0.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"sana1.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,0,0,0

[TimingPoints]
241,666.666666666667,3,2,1,20,1,0
22241,-100,3,2,2,60,0,0
54241,-100,3,2,3,60,0,0
56241,-100,3,2,2,60,0,0
56407,-100,3,2,3,60,0,0
58241,-100,3,2,2,60,0,0
58407,-100,3,2,3,60,0,0
60241,-100,3,2,2,60,0,0
60407,-100,3,2,3,60,0,0
62241,-100,3,2,2,60,0,0
62407,-100,3,2,3,60,0,0
64241,-100,3,2,2,60,0,0
64407,-100,3,2,3,60,0,0
66241,-100,3,2,2,60,0,0
66407,-100,3,2,3,60,0,0
68241,-100,3,2,2,60,0,0
68407,-100,3,2,3,60,0,0
70241,-100,3,2,2,60,0,0
86241,666.666666666667,4,2,3,60,1,1
86241,-100,4,2,2,60,0,1
97574,-100,4,2,3,60,0,1
97741,-100,4,2,2,60,0,1
105574,-100,4,2,3,60,0,1
105741,-100,4,2,2,60,0,1
106574,-100,4,2,2,40,0,0
107241,-100,4,2,2,50,0,0
107574,-100,4,2,2,60,0,1
118907,-100,4,2,3,60,0,1
119074,-100,4,2,2,60,0,1
126907,-100,4,2,3,60,0,1
127074,-100,4,2,2,60,0,1
134907,-100,4,2,3,60,0,1
135074,-100,4,2,2,60,0,1
137574,-100,4,2,3,60,0,1
137741,-100,4,2,2,60,0,1
140241,-100,4,2,3,60,0,1
140407,-100,4,2,2,60,0,1
144907,-100,4,2,3,60,0,0
146241,-100,4,2,3,50,0,0
146907,-100,4,2,3,40,0,0
147574,-100,4,2,3,30,0,0
147907,-100,4,2,3,20,0,0
148241,-100,4,2,3,10,0,0
148574,-100,4,2,3,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 128,255,255
Combo2 : 128,128,255
Combo3 : 128,255,0

[HitObjects]
112,88,241,6,0,P|80:160|88:240,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,312,2241,2,0,P|228:332|305:311,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,280,4241,6,0,B|444:244|328:168|444:148|396:88,1,200,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,56,6241,2,0,P|288:76|208:56,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,32,8241,6,0,L|96:108,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,200,9574,1,2,0:0:0:0:
96,292,10241,2,0,L|120:368,2,80,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,96,13574,6,0,P|344:100|384:96,2,80,2|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,80,15574,2,0,P|168:76|128:80,2,80,2|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,168,17574,1,2,0:0:0:0:
116,244,18241,6,0,P|116:304|140:360,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,276,20241,2,0,L|460:276,1,200,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
484,240,22241,6,0,P|500:204|500:160,1,80,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,80,23574,1,8,0:0:0:0:
356,72,24241,2,0,P|316:72|280:92,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,152,25574,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,204,26241,6,0,B|176:264|244:240|244:240|280:240,2,160,2|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,120,29574,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,88,30241,6,0,L|256:104,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,164,31574,2,0,L|376:160,2,40,8|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,240,32907,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,316,33574,2,0,L|160:308,1,40,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,300,34241,6,0,P|108:248|124:192,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,176,35241,2,0,L|156:168,1,40,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,108,36241,2,0,L|300:96,2,80,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,152,38241,6,0,P|128:192|140:232,1,80,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,184,39574,1,8,0:0:0:0:
236,280,40241,2,0,P|274:266|303:236,1,80,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,184,41574,1,8,0:0:0:0:
308,136,42241,6,0,P|348:128|388:136,2,80,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,136,44241,2,0,P|164:128|124:136,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,224,45574,1,8,0:0:0:0:
196,316,46241,6,0,P|236:308|276:316,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,332,47574,2,0,L|384:276,1,40,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,248,48241,2,0,L|412:168,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,76,49574,2,0,L|376:60,1,53.3333333333333,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,60,50241,6,0,P|264:120|268:232,1,200,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,256,52241,2,0,L|352:244,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,228,53574,2,0,L|442:177,1,40,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,140,54241,6,0,L|436:28,2,80,4|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,108,56241,2,0,L|344:-4,2,80,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,108,58241,6,0,L|256:-4,2,80,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,140,60241,2,0,L|164:28,2,80,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,236,62241,6,0,P|112:268|52:276,2,80,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,248,64241,2,0,P|227:296|176:330,2,80,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,184,66241,6,0,P|344:234|337:294,2,80,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,88,68241,2,0,P|315:33|290:-20,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,52,69574,2,0,L|168:44,1,40,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,56,70241,6,0,L|24:84,2,80,6|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,152,72241,2,0,P|88:164|48:168,2,80,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,144,74241,6,0,L|301:163,2,80,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,240,76241,2,0,P|270:251|309:255,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,240,77574,1,8,0:0:0:0:
384,144,78241,6,0,B|376:104|376:104|352:72,2,80,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,140,80241,2,0,B|257:113|257:113|218:102,2,80,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,200,82241,6,0,B|268:240|324:224|324:224|368:248,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,284,84241,2,0,B|484:240|444:184|444:184|448:160,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,148,85574,2,0,L|352:124,1,40,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,112,86241,6,0,P|331:72|356:36,2,80,6|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,208,88241,1,8,0:0:0:0:
216,220,88907,2,0,L|132:232,2,80,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,208,90907,2,0,L|376:196,1,40,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,188,91574,6,0,L|408:104,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,36,92907,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,76,93574,1,8,0:0:0:0:
164,52,94241,2,0,P|152:112|168:168,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,216,95574,2,0,L|100:216,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,312,96907,6,0,L|280:312,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,272,98907,1,8,0:0:0:0:
428,200,99574,2,0,L|436:120,1,80
344,96,100907,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,32,101574,2,0,L|232:36,1,40,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,40,102241,6,0,L|176:120,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,184,103574,1,2,0:0:0:0:
128,276,104241,1,8,0:0:0:0:
212,320,104907,2,0,B|249:332|283:302|283:302|318:272|359:274,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,276,106907,2,0,L|462:228,1,40,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,188,107574,6,0,P|480:152|476:108,2,80,6|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,136,109574,1,8,0:0:0:0:
324,64,110241,2,0,P|360:44|408:44,2,80,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,88,112241,2,0,L|192:94,1,40,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,96,112907,6,0,L|60:104,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,176,114241,1,2,0:0:0:0:
56,256,114907,1,8,0:0:0:0:
152,264,115574,2,0,L|240:264,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,172,116907,2,0,L|352:172,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,244,118241,6,0,P|440:172|412:100,1,160,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,36,120241,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,76,120907,2,0,P|216:76|180:56,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,20,122241,1,2,0:0:0:0:
84,116,122907,2,0,L|80:168,1,40,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,204,123574,6,0,L|84:284,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,316,124907,1,2,0:0:0:0:
264,276,125574,1,8,0:0:0:0:
328,204,126241,2,0,L|340:44,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,28,128241,2,0,L|240:76,1,40,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,116,128907,6,0,P|199:134|159:138,1,80,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,208,130241,2,0,P|114:245|118:285,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,344,131574,2,0,P|229:326|269:322,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,256,132907,2,0,P|318:219|314:179,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,84,134241,6,0,B|236:60|188:80|188:80|144:104|72:84,2,240,6|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,112,138907,1,8,0:0:0:0:
384,208,139574,2,0,P|352:276|276:312,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,312,141574,1,8,0:0:0:0:
116,244,142241,6,0,P|108:208|116:164,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,76,143574,2,0,P|184:68|228:76,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,140,144907,1,12,0:0:0:0:
256,192,145574,12,0,148907,0:0:0:0:

10crystalmask01

10crystalmask01 11 years ago

Hey, mod from queue

[Hard]

*Overall I'd say the rhythm is good, but it's also a little dull. Try making some triplet hit objects in the rhythm, to it spice up!
00:23:407 - Add a hit circle?
00:25:407 - ^
00:27:407 - ^
00:31:407 - ^
00:39:407 - ^
00:41:407 - ^
00:45:407 - ^
00:57:074 - ^
00:59:407 - ^
01:01:074 - ^
01:06:741 - ^
01:13:074 - ^
01:15:407 - ^
01:17:074 - ^
01:21:074 - ^
00:58:241 (1,2,3,4) - Square or diamond, you can still fix this shape.

[Wafu's Normal]
Circle size - 1? Their spacing is quite large for a Normal diff. And also so that the circle size is consistent throughout the diff (Easy - 2, Normal 4, Hard - 4)
00:05:241 - Not going to add a note here to start the follow up with the piano notes?
00:11:907 - ^
00:31:574 (3) - Consider making it a 1/2 slider from 00:31:574 - 00:31:907
00:47:907 (2,1) - I hate being nazi, but I have to say please fix the blanket here.
01:09:907 - Interesting. Try adding a note here with a drum clap. After you add the hitsound, just adjust the setting (shown the the top left) to this:

01:25:907 - Same as above

02:08:241 (3,4) - Change the whistle on these notes to drum claps?
02:19:241 - Add a note here with a clap

[KwaN's Easy]
Looks fine to me.

Good luck.

Crystal

Former osu!catch Champion: 2018

1,123 posts

Joined June 2012

Topic Starter

Crystal 11 years ago

10crystalmask01 wrote:
Hey, mod from queue xD
[Hard]

*Overall I'd say the rhythm is good, but it's also a little dull. Try making some triplet hit objects in the rhythm, to it spice up!
00:23:407 - Add a hit circle?
00:25:407 - ^
00:27:407 - ^
00:31:407 - ^
00:39:407 - ^
00:41:407 - ^
00:45:407 - ^
00:57:074 - ^
00:59:407 - ^
01:01:074 - ^
01:06:741 - ^
01:13:074 - ^
01:15:407 - ^
01:17:074 - ^
01:21:074 - ^ i just follow the music, if add circles at these places it doesn't sound very good imo. so no fix sry ;w;
00:58:241 (1,2,3,4) - Square or diamond, you can still fix this shape. 00:58:907 (3,4,5,6) - is shaped as well, making 00:58:241 (1,2,3,4) -square-shaped or diamond-shaped breaks this shape. so im not going to fix it sry

Good luck. :3 thanks

thanks anyway <333

Wafu

1,703 posts

Joined June 2011

Wafu 11 years ago

I'm sorry, but nothing fixed in both mods, I don't find any of these things much reasonable, or they were even wrong.

lkx_Shore

1,453 posts

Joined January 2010

lkx_Shore 11 years ago

[Hard]
00:08:241 (2) - 我觉得这是一个1/8的3连打...在hard里放一个1/8的来回我觉得是没问题的
00:12:241 (5) - delete,00:10:574 (2,4) - 换note，这段还是不要放多余的节奏了，不自然
00:19:241 - 这个音还是别漏了
00:33:574 (3) - 嗯我觉得有1/8就应该下1/8..
00:44:241 (1) - ^ 不过这个好像是1/6折返一次
00:50:241 (2) - 还是1/8
01:06:241 - ^
01:10:074 (2) - 换drum，然后01:10:241 (1) - 加finish
01:36:907 (1) - 去掉头里的clap
01:36:907 (1) - 还不如单用finish

跳都是随机跳，这样从表达音乐的最初宗旨上已经fail。当然随机跳没什么，毕竟“打着爽”

[Wafu's nm]
two bigwhitle line add one NC is better imo

[at last]
我觉得timing有点不对...

Crystal

Former osu!catch Champion: 2018

1,123 posts

Joined June 2012

Topic Starter

Crystal 11 years ago

lkx_Shore wrote:
[Hard]
00:08:241 (2) - 我觉得这是一个1/8的3连打...在hard里放一个1/8的来回我觉得是没问题的但是这首曲子很平静的耶,开头更是静的可以,突然放个1/8有点突然的感觉
00:12:241 (5) - delete,00:10:574 (2,4) - 换note，这段还是不要放多余的节奏了，不自然嗯确实是,但是我不确定改动后是不是更好,如果后面还有modder提出来的话我再改动
00:19:241 - 这个音还是别漏了改了
00:33:574 (3) - 嗯我觉得有1/8就应该下1/8.. 但是不好衔接,个人认为,map这首歌我不太想在节奏上做的太"跳跃"
00:44:241 (1) - ^ 不过这个好像是1/6折返一次不,我听了很多遍是间隔不同的,所以就用一个circle这样子
00:50:241 (2) - 还是1/8 还是不好衔接,个人认为;w;
01:06:241 - ^
01:10:074 (2) - 换drum，然后01:10:241 (1) - 加finish ok改了
01:36:907 (1) - 去掉头里的clap
01:36:907 (1) - 还不如单用finish 改了,这两个是说的一个嘛?还是复制错了时间线;w;

跳都是随机跳，这样从表达音乐的最初宗旨上已经fail。当然随机跳没什么，毕竟“打着爽” 我初衷就是想摆随机的,所以;w; 当然我比较叒所以不太会表达音乐

[at last]
我觉得timing有点不对... 确实是,会改,先和其他mapper说一下等会统一改动

谢谢mod

IamKwaN

osu! Alumni

3,905 posts

Joined August 2012

IamKwaN 11 years ago

SPOILER

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Shinonomegiku.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 84907
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 6
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 0.8

[Metadata]
Title:Shinonomegiku
TitleUnicode:東雲菊
Artist:BURTON
ArtistUnicode:BURTON
Creator:[_Crystal]
Version:KwaN's Easy
Source:ましろ色シンフォニー -Love is pure white-
Tags:Mashiro-iro Symphony original soundtrack ost SUBSTAC9 yf_bmp Kurokami Wafu IamKwaN
BeatmapID:387799
BeatmapSetID:152709

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:2
OverallDifficulty:1
ApproachRate:2
SliderMultiplier:0.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"sana1.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,0,0,0

[TimingPoints]
225,666.666666666667,3,2,1,20,1,0
22225,-100,3,2,2,60,0,0
54225,-100,3,2,3,60,0,0
56225,-100,3,2,2,60,0,0
56391,-100,3,2,3,60,0,0
58225,-100,3,2,2,60,0,0
58391,-100,3,2,3,60,0,0
60225,-100,3,2,2,60,0,0
60391,-100,3,2,3,60,0,0
62225,-100,3,2,2,60,0,0
62391,-100,3,2,3,60,0,0
64225,-100,3,2,2,60,0,0
64391,-100,3,2,3,60,0,0
66225,-100,3,2,2,60,0,0
66391,-100,3,2,3,60,0,0
68225,-100,3,2,2,60,0,0
68391,-100,3,2,3,60,0,0
70225,-100,3,2,2,60,0,0
86225,666.666666666667,4,2,3,60,1,1
86225,-100,4,2,2,60,0,1
97558,-100,4,2,3,60,0,1
97725,-100,4,2,2,60,0,1
105558,-100,4,2,3,60,0,1
105725,-100,4,2,2,60,0,1
106558,-100,4,2,2,40,0,0
107225,-100,4,2,2,50,0,0
107558,-100,4,2,2,60,0,1
118891,-100,4,2,3,60,0,1
119058,-100,4,2,2,60,0,1
126891,-100,4,2,3,60,0,1
127058,-100,4,2,2,60,0,1
134891,-100,4,2,3,60,0,1
135058,-100,4,2,2,60,0,1
137558,-100,4,2,3,60,0,1
137725,-100,4,2,2,60,0,1
140225,-100,4,2,3,60,0,1
140391,-100,4,2,2,60,0,1
144891,-100,4,2,3,60,0,0
146225,-100,4,2,3,50,0,0
146891,-100,4,2,3,40,0,0
147558,-100,4,2,3,30,0,0
147891,-100,4,2,3,20,0,0
148225,-100,4,2,3,10,0,0
148558,-100,4,2,3,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 128,255,255
Combo2 : 128,128,255
Combo3 : 128,255,0

[HitObjects]
112,88,225,6,0,P|80:160|88:240,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,312,2225,2,0,P|228:332|305:311,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,280,4225,6,0,B|444:244|328:168|444:148|396:88,1,200,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,56,6225,2,0,P|288:76|208:56,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,32,8225,6,0,L|96:108,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,200,9558,1,2,0:0:0:0:
96,292,10225,2,0,L|120:368,2,80,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,96,13558,6,0,P|344:100|384:96,2,80,2|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,80,15558,2,0,P|168:76|128:80,2,80,2|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,168,17558,1,2,0:0:0:0:
116,244,18225,6,0,P|116:304|140:360,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,276,20225,2,0,L|460:276,1,200,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
484,240,22225,6,0,P|500:204|500:160,1,80,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,80,23558,1,8,0:0:0:0:
356,72,24225,2,0,P|316:72|280:92,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,152,25558,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,204,26225,6,0,B|176:264|244:240|244:240|280:240,2,160,2|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,120,29558,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,88,30225,6,0,L|256:104,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,164,31558,2,0,L|376:160,2,40,8|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,240,32891,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,316,33558,2,0,L|160:308,1,40,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,300,34225,6,0,P|108:248|124:192,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,176,35225,2,0,L|156:168,1,40,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,108,36225,2,0,L|300:96,2,80,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,152,38225,6,0,P|128:192|140:232,1,80,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,184,39558,1,8,0:0:0:0:
236,280,40225,2,0,P|274:266|303:236,1,80,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,184,41558,1,8,0:0:0:0:
308,136,42225,6,0,P|348:128|388:136,2,80,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,136,44225,2,0,P|164:128|124:136,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,224,45558,1,8,0:0:0:0:
196,316,46225,6,0,P|236:308|276:316,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,332,47558,2,0,L|384:276,1,40,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,248,48225,2,0,L|412:168,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,76,49558,2,0,L|380:64,1,53.3333333333333,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,60,50225,6,0,P|264:120|268:232,1,200,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,256,52225,2,0,L|352:244,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,228,53558,2,0,L|442:177,1,40,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,140,54225,6,0,L|436:28,2,80,4|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,108,56225,2,0,L|344:-4,2,80,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,108,58225,6,0,L|256:-4,2,80,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,140,60225,2,0,L|164:28,2,80,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,236,62225,6,0,P|112:268|52:276,2,80,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,248,64225,2,0,P|227:296|176:330,2,80,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,184,66225,6,0,P|344:234|337:294,2,80,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,88,68225,2,0,P|315:33|290:-20,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,52,69558,2,0,L|168:44,1,40,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,56,70225,6,0,L|24:84,2,80,6|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,152,72225,2,0,P|88:164|48:168,2,80,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,144,74225,6,0,L|301:163,2,80,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,240,76225,2,0,P|270:251|309:255,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,240,77558,1,8,0:0:0:0:
384,144,78225,6,0,B|376:104|376:104|352:72,2,80,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,140,80225,2,0,B|257:113|257:113|218:102,2,80,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,200,82225,6,0,B|268:240|324:224|324:224|368:248,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,284,84225,2,0,B|484:240|444:184|444:184|448:160,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,148,85558,2,0,L|352:124,1,40,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,112,86225,6,0,P|331:72|356:36,2,80,6|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,208,88225,1,8,0:0:0:0:
216,220,88891,2,0,L|132:232,2,80,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,208,90891,2,0,L|376:196,1,40,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,188,91558,6,0,L|408:104,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,36,92891,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,76,93558,1,8,0:0:0:0:
164,52,94225,2,0,P|152:112|168:168,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,216,95558,2,0,L|100:216,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,312,96891,6,0,L|280:312,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,272,98891,1,8,0:0:0:0:
428,200,99558,2,0,L|436:120,1,80
344,96,100891,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,32,101558,2,0,L|232:36,1,40,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,40,102225,6,0,L|176:120,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,184,103558,1,2,0:0:0:0:
128,276,104225,1,8,0:0:0:0:
212,320,104891,2,0,B|249:332|283:302|283:302|318:272|359:274,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,276,106891,2,0,L|462:228,1,40,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,188,107558,6,0,P|480:152|476:108,2,80,6|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,136,109558,1,8,0:0:0:0:
324,64,110225,2,0,P|360:44|408:44,2,80,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,88,112225,2,0,L|192:94,1,40,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,96,112891,6,0,L|60:104,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,176,114225,1,2,0:0:0:0:
56,256,114891,1,8,0:0:0:0:
152,264,115558,2,0,L|240:264,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,172,116891,2,0,L|352:172,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,244,118225,6,0,P|440:172|412:100,1,160,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,36,120225,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,76,120891,2,0,P|216:76|180:56,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,20,122225,1,2,0:0:0:0:
84,116,122891,2,0,L|80:168,1,40,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,204,123558,6,0,L|84:284,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,316,124891,1,2,0:0:0:0:
264,276,125558,1,8,0:0:0:0:
328,204,126225,2,0,L|340:44,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,28,128225,2,0,L|240:76,1,40,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,116,128891,6,0,P|199:134|159:138,1,80,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,208,130225,2,0,P|114:245|118:285,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,344,131558,2,0,P|229:326|269:322,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,256,132891,2,0,P|318:219|314:179,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,84,134225,6,0,B|236:60|188:80|188:80|144:104|72:84,2,240,6|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,112,138891,1,8,0:0:0:0:
384,208,139558,2,0,P|352:276|276:312,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,312,141558,1,8,0:0:0:0:
116,244,142225,6,0,P|108:208|116:164,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,76,143558,2,0,P|184:68|228:76,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,140,144891,1,12,0:0:0:0:
256,192,145558,12,0,148891,0:0:0:0:

Yumeno Himiko

Elite Storyboarder

1,168 posts

Joined August 2012

Yumeno Himiko 11 years ago

先射一颗星星~~
好既然叫我mod了那我就来了
You'll see many ~~useless~~ suggestions. I hope it will be of help to your map.
前面这么多摸过的我菊得general应该不用看惹

[KwaN's Easy]
00:17:574 (3) - 左移1格
00:54:241 (1,2,1,2) - 可以改成逐渐向左下移动的看起来可能更好？
01:24:241 (2) - 感觉拖得不好看
Ez做得挺好摸不出啥东西来=。=

[Wafu's Normal]
00:19:741 (1) - This spinner should start from 00:19:907 here (Since it's a Normal level)
00:50:241 (1) - 1grid down and 1 grid left
01:46:241 (3) - change the circle to a slider may feel better?
02:10:907 (2) - ^
Well done but I feel a bit strange QAQ //Maybe in sliders? some sliders just feel uncomfortable.

[Hard]
首先check一下ds啊 hard对DS的要求还是有的开了一下AImod看到一堆DS问题可能你是换DS摆的四暗刻不过还是注意一下
00:19:574 (5) - 重新拉一下
00:34:907 (1,2,3,4) - 不够美观
00:42:241 (1,2,3,1) - 后面突然少一个音感觉不太好可以考虑换成slider 不过保持这样也可以或者换个折返的slider
00:58:241 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 其实这种点你都是怎么摆的.-.
01:22:574 (4) - 这个note删掉
02:18:907 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - 最后这段DS明显开太大了我觉得要remap一下
感觉跟normal一样有几个slider看起来挺别扭应该是弧度太大可以考虑重新画一下
然后有的地方可以补点节奏进去这个Hard感觉偏简单//单说节奏

[STAC's Salad]

collapsed text

I forget if the salad can be FC without using dashes TUT,if dashes can use,ignore the following
00:37:907 (6,1) - I can't catch this without using a dash,consider change it.
00:53:907 (4,1) - ^
01:05:907 (3,4) - ^
01:46:241 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - ^
01:57:907 (7,8,1) - ^
02:21:907 (2,3) - ^

01:16:907 (4) - I think this can be a reversed slider
01:25:741 (3,4,5) - change them to a slider or delete them
01:34:241 (3) - Needs to be fixed as the plate has to move a long way and may be hard for beginners
02:12:574 (6,7) - just follow the previous patterns looks better~

[Kurokami's Platter]
00:44:241 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - These two threats me. Maybe can make the ds shorter.
in kiai time maybe use too many dashes. consider cut some distances down.
good rhythm and well mapped~ I believe it's a wonderful CTB diff.

好了其实我也没摸出啥
有啥乱提的建议不要打我我请你吃桶还不行吗

Wafu

1,703 posts

Joined June 2011

Wafu 11 years ago

I'm sorry, nothing fixed in examination's mod. I don't find these important, because you know, one grid left, one grid right.. these things are not worth changing, it's almost invisible.

IamKwaN

osu! Alumni

3,905 posts

Joined August 2012

IamKwaN 11 years ago

@考試: fix了第一個;然後第二跟第三個都是intentional的,所以就不fix了
@Crystal: 下面這個是最新版

SPOILER

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Shinonomegiku.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 84907
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 3
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 0.8

[Metadata]
Title:Shinonomegiku
TitleUnicode:東雲菊
Artist:BURTON
ArtistUnicode:BURTON
Creator:[_Crystal]
Version:KwaN's Easy
Source:ましろ色シンフォニー -Love is pure white-
Tags:Mashiro-iro Symphony original soundtrack ost SUBSTAC9 yf_bmp Kurokami Wafu IamKwaN
BeatmapID:387799
BeatmapSetID:152709

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:2
OverallDifficulty:1
ApproachRate:2
SliderMultiplier:0.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"sana1.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,0,0,0

[TimingPoints]
238,666.666666666667,3,2,1,20,1,0
22238,-100,3,2,2,60,0,0
54238,-100,3,2,3,60,0,0
56238,-100,3,2,2,60,0,0
56404,-100,3,2,3,60,0,0
58238,-100,3,2,2,60,0,0
58404,-100,3,2,3,60,0,0
60238,-100,3,2,2,60,0,0
60404,-100,3,2,3,60,0,0
62238,-100,3,2,2,60,0,0
62404,-100,3,2,3,60,0,0
64238,-100,3,2,2,60,0,0
64404,-100,3,2,3,60,0,0
66238,-100,3,2,2,60,0,0
66404,-100,3,2,3,60,0,0
68238,-100,3,2,2,60,0,0
68404,-100,3,2,3,60,0,0
70238,-100,3,2,2,60,0,0
86238,666.666666666667,4,2,3,60,1,1
86238,-100,4,2,2,60,0,1
97571,-100,4,2,3,60,0,1
97738,-100,4,2,2,60,0,1
105571,-100,4,2,3,60,0,1
105738,-100,4,2,2,60,0,1
106571,-100,4,2,2,40,0,0
107238,-100,4,2,2,50,0,0
107571,-100,4,2,2,60,0,1
118904,-100,4,2,3,60,0,1
119071,-100,4,2,2,60,0,1
126904,-100,4,2,3,60,0,1
127071,-100,4,2,2,60,0,1
134904,-100,4,2,3,60,0,1
135071,-100,4,2,2,60,0,1
137571,-100,4,2,3,60,0,1
137738,-100,4,2,2,60,0,1
140238,-100,4,2,3,60,0,1
140404,-100,4,2,2,60,0,1
144904,-100,4,2,3,60,0,0
146238,-100,4,2,3,50,0,0
146904,-100,4,2,3,40,0,0
147571,-100,4,2,3,30,0,0
147904,-100,4,2,3,20,0,0
148238,-100,4,2,3,10,0,0
148571,-100,4,2,3,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 128,255,255
Combo2 : 128,128,255
Combo3 : 128,255,0

[HitObjects]
112,88,238,6,0,P|80:160|88:240,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,312,2238,2,0,P|228:332|305:311,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,280,4238,6,0,B|444:244|328:168|444:148|396:88,1,200,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,56,6238,2,0,P|288:76|208:56,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,32,8238,6,0,L|96:108,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,200,9571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
96,292,10238,2,0,L|120:368,2,80,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,96,13571,6,0,P|344:100|384:96,2,80,2|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,80,15571,2,0,P|168:76|128:80,2,80,2|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,168,17571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
120,252,18238,6,0,P|120:312|144:368,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,284,20238,2,0,L|460:284,1,200,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
484,244,22238,6,0,P|500:208|500:164,1,80,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,84,23571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
356,72,24238,2,0,P|316:72|280:92,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,152,25571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,204,26238,6,0,B|176:264|244:240|244:240|280:240,2,160,2|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,120,29571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,88,30238,6,0,L|256:104,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,164,31571,2,0,L|376:160,2,40,8|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,240,32904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,316,33571,2,0,L|160:308,1,40,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,300,34238,6,0,P|108:248|124:192,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,176,35238,2,0,L|156:168,1,40,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,108,36238,2,0,L|300:96,2,80,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,152,38238,6,0,P|128:192|140:232,1,80,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,184,39571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
236,280,40238,2,0,P|274:266|303:236,1,80,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,184,41571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
308,136,42238,6,0,P|348:128|388:136,2,80,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,136,44238,2,0,P|164:128|124:136,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,224,45571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
196,316,46238,6,0,P|236:308|276:316,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,332,47571,2,0,L|384:276,1,40,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,248,48238,2,0,L|412:168,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,76,49571,2,0,L|380:64,1,53.3333333333333,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,60,50238,6,0,P|264:120|268:232,1,200,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,256,52238,2,0,L|352:244,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,228,53571,2,0,L|442:177,1,40,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,140,54238,6,0,L|436:28,2,80,4|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,108,56238,2,0,L|344:-4,2,80,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,108,58238,6,0,L|256:-4,2,80,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,140,60238,2,0,L|164:28,2,80,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,236,62238,6,0,P|112:268|52:276,2,80,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,248,64238,2,0,P|227:296|176:330,2,80,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,184,66238,6,0,P|344:234|337:294,2,80,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,88,68238,2,0,P|315:33|290:-20,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,52,69571,2,0,L|168:44,1,40,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,56,70238,6,0,L|24:84,2,80,6|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,152,72238,2,0,P|88:164|48:168,2,80,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,144,74238,6,0,L|301:163,2,80,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,240,76238,2,0,P|270:251|309:255,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,240,77571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
384,144,78238,6,0,B|376:104|376:104|352:72,2,80,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,140,80238,2,0,B|257:113|257:113|218:102,2,80,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,200,82238,6,0,B|268:240|324:224|324:224|368:248,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,284,84238,2,0,B|484:240|444:184|444:184|448:160,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,148,85571,2,0,L|352:124,1,40,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,112,86238,6,0,P|331:72|356:36,2,80,6|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,208,88238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
216,220,88904,2,0,L|132:232,2,80,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,208,90904,2,0,L|376:196,1,40,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,188,91571,6,0,L|408:104,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,36,92904,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,76,93571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
164,52,94238,2,0,P|152:112|168:168,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,216,95571,2,0,L|100:216,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,312,96904,6,0,L|280:312,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,272,98904,1,8,0:0:0:0:
428,200,99571,2,0,L|436:120,1,80
344,96,100904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,32,101571,2,0,L|232:36,1,40,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,40,102238,6,0,L|176:120,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,184,103571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
128,276,104238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
212,320,104904,2,0,B|249:332|283:302|283:302|318:272|359:274,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,276,106904,2,0,L|462:228,1,40,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,188,107571,6,0,P|480:152|476:108,2,80,6|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,136,109571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
324,64,110238,2,0,P|360:44|408:44,2,80,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,88,112238,2,0,L|192:94,1,40,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,96,112904,6,0,L|60:104,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,176,114238,1,2,0:0:0:0:
56,256,114904,1,8,0:0:0:0:
152,264,115571,2,0,L|240:264,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,172,116904,2,0,L|352:172,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,244,118238,6,0,P|440:172|412:100,1,160,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,36,120238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,76,120904,2,0,P|216:76|180:56,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,20,122238,1,2,0:0:0:0:
84,116,122904,2,0,L|80:168,1,40,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,204,123571,6,0,L|84:284,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,316,124904,1,2,0:0:0:0:
264,276,125571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
328,204,126238,2,0,L|340:44,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,28,128238,2,0,L|240:76,1,40,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,116,128904,6,0,P|199:134|159:138,1,80,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,208,130238,2,0,P|114:245|118:285,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,344,131571,2,0,P|229:326|269:322,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,256,132904,2,0,P|318:219|314:179,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,84,134238,6,0,B|236:60|188:80|188:80|144:104|72:84,2,240,6|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,112,138904,1,8,0:0:0:0:
384,208,139571,2,0,P|352:276|276:312,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,312,141571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
116,244,142238,6,0,P|108:208|116:164,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,76,143571,2,0,P|184:68|228:76,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,140,144904,1,12,0:0:0:0:
256,192,145571,12,0,148904,0:0:0:0:

Crystal

Former osu!catch Champion: 2018

1,123 posts

Joined June 2012

Topic Starter

Crystal 11 years ago

examination wrote:
先射一颗星星~~ 谢谢:3
好既然叫我mod了那我就来了
You'll see many ~~useless~~ suggestions. I hope it will be of help to your map.
前面这么多摸过的我菊得general应该不用看惹 ._.

[Hard]
首先check一下ds啊 hard对DS的要求还是有的开了一下AImod看到一堆DS问题可能你是换DS摆的四暗刻不过还是注意一下有么;w;
00:19:574 (5) - 重新拉一下不懂什么意思=.= 我感觉挺好
00:34:907 (1,2,3,4) - 不够美观改了
00:42:241 (1,2,3,1) - 后面突然少一个音感觉不太好可以考虑换成slider 不过保持这样也可以或者换个折返的slider 但是不管怎么放都比较违和,这样我感觉是最好了
00:58:241 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 其实这种点你都是怎么摆的.-. .-.
01:22:574 (4) - 这个note删掉 nope D:
02:18:907 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - 最后这段DS明显开太大了我觉得要remap一下为什么;w;
感觉跟normal一样有几个slider看起来挺别扭应该是弧度太大可以考虑重新画一下 bpm低呀,弧度再减小就比较boring了
然后有的地方可以补点节奏进去这个Hard感觉偏简单//单说节奏好我考虑一下

好了其实我也没摸出啥
有啥乱提的建议不要打我我请你吃桶还不行吗 ;w;

谢谢mod

yf_bmp

Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper

1,634 posts

Joined December 2011

yf_bmp 11 years ago

M4M moeXingxing

Notice:

Red: Be unrankable
Blue: Be important
Black: Suggestions

[General]
建议将tick音与默认的soft-hitnormal音混合:3

[Hard]
有一些滑条都拉的太弯了比如00:33:571 (3,4) - 00:38:904 (3,4) - 等有些丑改一下更好吧

00:59:238 (4,5,6) - 尝试等距?
01:20:238 (5) - ctrl+g更好flow感觉
01:22:238 (3,4,5) - 等距?
01:24:238 (1,2,3) - ^
02:23:571 (3,4,5) - 尾杀不好 02:24:571 (4) - x:384 y:68 这里附近可以接受
02:24:904 (5) - 换finish

好

[Normal]
00:00:238 (1,1) - blank them better
00:47:904 (2,1) - blank better
02:00:907 (1,3) - ^
02:03:574 (1,3) - ^

[Easy]
00:49:571 (4) - 節奏對於ez有些不太好掌握
01:20:238 (2,1) - 包好啦
01:24:238 (2) - 這個也是

Nothing serious. The map is good enough to rank!
M4M map: http://osu.ppy.sh/s/152595 thanks~

IamKwaN

osu! Alumni

3,905 posts

Joined August 2012

IamKwaN 11 years ago

yf_bmp wrote:
M4M moeXingxing moe yf <3

[Easy]
00:49:571 (4) - 節奏對於ez有些不太好掌握但那裡真的是1/3
01:20:238 (2,1) - 包好啦 kkk
01:24:238 (2) - 這個也是 kkk

Thanks!

SPOILER

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Shinonomegiku.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 84907
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 0.8

[Metadata]
Title:Shinonomegiku
TitleUnicode:東雲菊
Artist:BURTON
ArtistUnicode:BURTON
Creator:[_Crystal]
Version:KwaN's Easy
Source:ましろ色シンフォニー -Love is pure white-
Tags:Mashiro-iro Symphony original soundtrack ost SUBSTAC9 yf_bmp Kurokami Wafu IamKwaN
BeatmapID:387799
BeatmapSetID:152709

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:2
OverallDifficulty:1
ApproachRate:2
SliderMultiplier:0.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"sana1.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,0,0,0

[TimingPoints]
238,666.666666666667,3,2,1,20,1,0
22238,-100,3,2,2,60,0,0
54238,-100,3,2,3,60,0,0
56238,-100,3,2,2,60,0,0
56404,-100,3,2,3,60,0,0
58238,-100,3,2,2,60,0,0
58404,-100,3,2,3,60,0,0
60238,-100,3,2,2,60,0,0
60404,-100,3,2,3,60,0,0
62238,-100,3,2,2,60,0,0
62404,-100,3,2,3,60,0,0
64238,-100,3,2,2,60,0,0
64404,-100,3,2,3,60,0,0
66238,-100,3,2,2,60,0,0
66404,-100,3,2,3,60,0,0
68238,-100,3,2,2,60,0,0
68404,-100,3,2,3,60,0,0
70238,-100,3,2,2,60,0,0
86238,666.666666666667,4,2,3,60,1,1
86238,-100,4,2,2,60,0,1
97571,-100,4,2,3,60,0,1
97738,-100,4,2,2,60,0,1
105571,-100,4,2,3,60,0,1
105738,-100,4,2,2,60,0,1
106571,-100,4,2,2,40,0,0
107238,-100,4,2,2,50,0,0
107571,-100,4,2,2,60,0,1
118904,-100,4,2,3,60,0,1
119071,-100,4,2,2,60,0,1
126904,-100,4,2,3,60,0,1
127071,-100,4,2,2,60,0,1
134904,-100,4,2,3,60,0,1
135071,-100,4,2,2,60,0,1
137571,-100,4,2,3,60,0,1
137738,-100,4,2,2,60,0,1
140238,-100,4,2,3,60,0,1
140404,-100,4,2,2,60,0,1
144904,-100,4,2,3,60,0,0
146238,-100,4,2,3,50,0,0
146904,-100,4,2,3,40,0,0
147571,-100,4,2,3,30,0,0
147904,-100,4,2,3,20,0,0
148238,-100,4,2,3,10,0,0
148571,-100,4,2,3,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 128,255,255
Combo2 : 128,128,255
Combo3 : 128,255,0

[HitObjects]
112,88,238,6,0,P|80:160|88:240,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,312,2238,2,0,P|228:332|305:311,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,280,4238,6,0,B|444:244|328:168|444:148|396:88,1,200,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,56,6238,2,0,P|288:76|208:56,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,32,8238,6,0,L|96:108,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,200,9571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
96,292,10238,2,0,L|120:368,2,80,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,96,13571,6,0,P|344:100|384:96,2,80,2|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,80,15571,2,0,P|168:76|128:80,2,80,2|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,168,17571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
120,252,18238,6,0,P|120:312|144:368,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,284,20238,2,0,L|460:284,1,200,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
484,244,22238,6,0,P|500:208|500:164,1,80,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,84,23571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
356,72,24238,2,0,P|316:72|280:92,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,152,25571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,204,26238,6,0,B|176:264|244:240|244:240|280:240,2,160,2|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,120,29571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,88,30238,6,0,L|256:104,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,164,31571,2,0,L|376:160,2,40,8|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,240,32904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,316,33571,2,0,L|160:308,1,40,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,300,34238,6,0,P|108:248|124:192,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,176,35238,2,0,L|156:168,1,40,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,108,36238,2,0,L|300:96,2,80,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,152,38238,6,0,P|128:192|140:232,1,80,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,184,39571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
236,280,40238,2,0,P|274:266|303:236,1,80,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,184,41571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
308,136,42238,6,0,P|348:128|388:136,2,80,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,136,44238,2,0,P|164:128|124:136,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,224,45571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
196,316,46238,6,0,P|236:308|276:316,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,332,47571,2,0,L|384:276,1,40,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,248,48238,2,0,L|412:168,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,76,49571,2,0,L|380:64,1,53.3333333333333,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,60,50238,6,0,P|264:120|268:232,1,200,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,256,52238,2,0,L|352:244,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,228,53571,2,0,L|442:177,1,40,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,140,54238,6,0,L|436:28,2,80,4|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,108,56238,2,0,L|344:-4,2,80,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,108,58238,6,0,L|256:-4,2,80,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,140,60238,2,0,L|164:28,2,80,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,236,62238,6,0,P|112:268|52:276,2,80,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,248,64238,2,0,P|227:296|176:330,2,80,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,184,66238,6,0,P|344:234|337:294,2,80,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,88,68238,2,0,P|315:33|290:-20,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,52,69571,2,0,L|168:44,1,40,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,56,70238,6,0,L|24:84,2,80,6|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,152,72238,2,0,P|88:164|48:168,2,80,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,144,74238,6,0,L|301:163,2,80,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,240,76238,2,0,P|270:251|309:255,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,240,77571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
384,144,78238,6,0,B|376:104|376:104|352:72,2,80,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,144,80238,2,0,B|257:117|257:117|218:106,2,80,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,200,82238,6,0,B|268:248|324:224|324:224|364:248,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,284,84238,2,0,B|472:236|436:184|436:184|440:156,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,140,85571,2,0,L|348:116,1,40,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,104,86238,6,0,P|327:64|352:28,2,80,6|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,200,88238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
220,212,88904,2,0,L|136:224,2,80,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,200,90904,2,0,L|380:188,1,40,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,180,91571,6,0,L|412:96,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,36,92904,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,76,93571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
164,52,94238,2,0,P|152:112|168:168,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,216,95571,2,0,L|100:216,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,312,96904,6,0,L|280:312,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,272,98904,1,8,0:0:0:0:
428,200,99571,2,0,L|436:120,1,80
344,96,100904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,32,101571,2,0,L|232:36,1,40,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,40,102238,6,0,L|176:120,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,184,103571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
128,276,104238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
212,320,104904,2,0,B|249:332|283:302|283:302|318:272|359:274,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,276,106904,2,0,L|462:228,1,40,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,188,107571,6,0,P|480:152|476:108,2,80,6|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,136,109571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
324,64,110238,2,0,P|360:44|408:44,2,80,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,88,112238,2,0,L|192:94,1,40,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,96,112904,6,0,L|60:104,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,176,114238,1,2,0:0:0:0:
56,256,114904,1,8,0:0:0:0:
152,264,115571,2,0,L|240:264,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,172,116904,2,0,L|352:172,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,244,118238,6,0,P|440:172|412:100,1,160,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,36,120238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,76,120904,2,0,P|216:76|180:56,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,20,122238,1,2,0:0:0:0:
84,116,122904,2,0,L|80:168,1,40,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,204,123571,6,0,L|84:284,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,316,124904,1,2,0:0:0:0:
264,276,125571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
328,204,126238,2,0,L|340:44,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,28,128238,2,0,L|240:76,1,40,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,116,128904,6,0,P|199:134|159:138,1,80,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,208,130238,2,0,P|114:245|118:285,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,344,131571,2,0,P|229:326|269:322,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,256,132904,2,0,P|318:219|314:179,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,84,134238,6,0,B|236:60|188:80|188:80|144:104|72:84,2,240,6|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,112,138904,1,8,0:0:0:0:
384,208,139571,2,0,P|352:276|276:312,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,312,141571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
116,244,142238,6,0,P|108:208|116:164,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,76,143571,2,0,P|184:68|228:76,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,140,144904,1,12,0:0:0:0:
256,192,145571,12,0,148904,0:0:0:0:

Kurokami

osu! Alumni

4,024 posts

Joined February 2010

Kurokami 11 years ago

Ok. Here is my diff. Yeah, the timing is much better. I forgot to check it before mapping but oh well.

SPOILER

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Shinonomegiku.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 84907
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 2
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 16
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Shinonomegiku
TitleUnicode:東雲菊
Artist:BURTON
ArtistUnicode:BURTON
Creator:[_Crystal]
Version:Kurokami's Platter
Source:ましろ色シンフォニー -Love is pure white-
Tags:Mashiro-iro Symphony original soundtrack ost SUBSTAC9 yf_bmp Kurokami Wafu IamKwaN
BeatmapID:382311
BeatmapSetID:152709

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.5
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"sana1.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,0,0,0

[TimingPoints]
238,666.666666666667,3,2,1,20,1,0
22238,-100,3,2,1,60,0,0
44238,-100,3,2,1,50,0,0
44571,-100,3,2,1,40,0,0
44904,-100,3,2,1,30,0,0
45238,-100,3,2,1,20,0,0
45571,-100,3,2,1,60,0,0
54238,-100,3,2,1,60,0,0
76238,-50,3,2,1,60,0,0
77571,-100,3,2,1,60,0,0
86238,666.666666666667,4,2,1,60,1,1
86238,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
91571,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
92238,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
94238,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
95571,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
102238,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
102904,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
103571,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
104238,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
104904,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
105571,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
106571,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
107238,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
107571,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
110238,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
110904,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
115571,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
116238,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
118238,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
118904,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
126238,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
126904,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
131571,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
132238,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
136904,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
137571,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
139571,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
140238,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
142238,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
142904,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
144904,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
146238,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
146904,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
147571,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
147904,-100,4,2,1,20,0,0
148238,-100,4,2,1,10,0,0
148571,-100,4,2,1,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 128,255,255
Combo2 : 128,128,255
Combo3 : 128,255,0

[HitObjects]
416,288,238,5,2,0:0:0:0:
128,272,904,2,0,L|256:192,1,150,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,224,2238,6,0,L|144:144,2,150,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,64,4238,6,0,L|352:112,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,144,4904,2,0,L|224:160,2,75,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,112,5904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,96,6238,6,0,L|208:176,2,150,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,176,8238,6,0,L|384:192,2,37.5,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,192,8904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,160,9071,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,128,9238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,192,9571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,272,10238,6,0,L|64:192,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,192,10904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,144,11238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,11571,2,0,L|272:192,1,75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,144,12238,6,0,L|336:96,1,150,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,64,13571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,64,13904,1,2,0:0:0:0:
480,64,14238,6,0,L|400:64,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,96,14904,2,0,L|256:144,1,75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,208,15571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,288,15904,1,2,0:0:0:0:
16,208,16238,6,0,L|80:160,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,160,16904,2,0,L|272:112,1,75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,64,17571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,32,17904,1,2,0:0:0:0:
416,80,18238,6,0,L|496:112,2,75,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,96,19238,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,20238,12,0,21904,0:0:0:0:
192,176,22238,6,0,L|112:144,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,112,22904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,112,23238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,192,23571,2,0,L|320:256,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,288,24238,6,0,L|32:256,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,192,24904,2,0,L|224:128,1,75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,80,25571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,48,25904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
16,80,26238,6,0,L|96:96,2,75,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,48,27238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,48,27571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,48,27904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,112,28238,6,0,L|416:160,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,176,28904,2,0,L|240:176,1,37.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,192,29238,2,0,L|320:256,1,75,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,272,29904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,256,30238,6,0,L|256:208,2,75,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,192,31238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,144,31571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
32,144,31904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,80,32238,6,0,L|400:80,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,80,32904,2,0,L|112:80,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,16,33571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,16,33738,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,16,33904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,112,34238,6,0,L|288:144,2,75,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,128,35238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
16,192,35571,2,0,L|96:192,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,192,36238,6,0,L|240:240,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,240,36904,2,0,L|400:304,1,75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,320,37571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
432,176,37904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,160,38238,6,0,L|112:32,1,150,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,32,39238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,96,39571,2,0,L|208:96,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,96,40238,6,0,L|336:96,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,160,40904,2,0,L|160:208,1,75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,272,41571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,320,41904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,192,42238,6,0,L|272:144,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,80,42904,2,0,L|400:80,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,80,43571,2,0,L|224:80,1,75,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,80,44238,5,2,0:0:0:0:
432,112,44321,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,144,44404,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,176,44488,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,208,44571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
0,224,44904,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,256,44988,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,288,45071,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,320,45154,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,352,45238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,336,45571,2,0,L|384:288,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,192,46238,6,0,L|208:144,2,75,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,192,47238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,112,47571,1,10,0:0:0:0:
320,112,47904,1,2,0:0:0:0:
352,48,48238,6,0,L|416:96,2,75,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,48,49238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,112,49571,1,10,0:0:0:0:
144,112,49779,1,2,0:0:0:0:
336,176,49988,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,176,50238,5,0,0:0:0:0:
144,192,50279,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,208,50404,2,0,L|176:288,1,112.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,336,51238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,288,51571,2,0,L|112:240,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,192,52238,6,0,L|400:240,2,75,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,144,53238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,192,53571,2,0,L|288:128,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,64,54238,5,2,0:0:0:0:
192,64,54321,2,0,L|160:112,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,192,54904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,192,54988,2,0,L|304:240,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,256,55571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,256,55654,2,0,L|128:304,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,304,56238,5,2,0:0:0:0:
384,304,56321,2,0,L|416:256,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,192,56904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,192,56988,2,0,L|176:160,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,96,57571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
368,96,57654,2,0,L|416:64,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,80,58238,5,2,0:0:0:0:
192,80,58321,2,0,L|240:48,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,80,58904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
16,80,58988,2,0,L|64:112,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,160,59571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,160,59654,2,0,L|224:192,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,60238,5,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,60321,2,0,L|400:224,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,288,60904,2,0,L|240:240,1,75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,61571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,61654,2,0,L|400:160,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,144,62238,5,2,0:0:0:0:
160,144,62321,2,0,L|112:112,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,96,62904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,96,62988,2,0,L|384:64,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,48,63571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,48,63654,2,0,L|208:96,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,192,64238,5,2,0:0:0:0:
16,192,64321,2,0,L|64:224,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,240,64904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,240,64988,2,0,L|240:272,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,256,65571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
464,256,65654,2,0,L|432:208,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,160,66238,5,2,0:0:0:0:
288,128,66321,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,96,66404,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,48,66571,2,0,L|416:96,2,75,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,32,67571,2,0,L|336:32,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,48,68238,6,0,L|176:96,2,75,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,32,69238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,96,69571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,160,69904,1,2,0:0:0:0:
272,192,70071,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,224,70238,6,0,L|128:272,2,75,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,160,71238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,128,71571,2,0,L|224:80,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,32,72238,6,0,L|464:96,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,48,72904,2,0,L|224:112,1,75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,192,73571,2,0,L|336:192,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,208,74238,6,0,L|176:256,2,75,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,144,75238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
496,80,75571,2,0,L|432:32,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,48,76238,6,0,L|64:96,4,150,2|0|0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,32,77904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,80,78238,6,0,L|320:128,2,75,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,64,79238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,80,79571,2,0,L|208:144,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,192,80238,6,0,L|352:256,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,256,80904,2,0,L|208:192,1,75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,192,81571,2,0,L|64:128,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,96,82238,6,0,L|352:144,2,75,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,32,83238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,96,83571,2,0,L|240:160,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,144,84238,6,0,L|416:192,2,75,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,96,85238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,160,85571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,224,85904,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,272,86071,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,272,86238,6,0,L|192:192,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,128,87238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,112,87571,2,0,L|224:64,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,64,88238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,64,88571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
16,48,88904,6,0,L|80:96,2,75,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,64,89904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,64,90238,2,0,L|352:64,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,64,90904,2,0,L|96:128,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,144,91571,6,0,B|480:240|480:240|368:352,1,300,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,304,92571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,240,92904,2,0,L|240:240,2,75,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,160,93904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,16,94238,6,0,B|480:96|480:96|384:176|384:176|480:256|480:256|336:352,1,600,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,304,95904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,176,96238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,176,96571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,128,96738,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,80,96904,6,0,L|192:0,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,0,97904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,0,98238,2,0,L|128:48,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,80,98904,1,8,0:0:0:0:
80,128,99238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,192,99571,6,0,L|224:192,2,75,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,256,100571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,272,100904,2,0,L|224:224,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,192,101571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,128,101904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,32,102238,6,0,L|336:112,2,150,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,16,103238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
16,32,103571,2,0,B|144:112|144:112|16:192,1,300,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,224,104571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,208,104904,6,0,B|288:128|288:128|416:48,1,300,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,32,105904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,48,106238,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,96,106571,5,8,0:0:0:0:
160,112,106738,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,128,106904,1,2,0:0:0:0:
288,192,107238,1,2,0:0:0:0:
480,192,107571,6,0,L|352:272,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,288,108571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,192,108904,1,2,0:0:0:0:
80,96,109238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,64,109571,2,0,L|272:64,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,112,110238,6,0,B|352:192|352:192|480:272,1,300,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,320,111238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,272,111571,2,0,L|144:224,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,144,112238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,96,112571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,80,112904,6,0,L|288:32,2,75,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,96,113904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,144,114238,2,0,L|256:192,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,192,114904,2,0,L|400:240,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,272,115571,6,0,B|240:192|240:192|112:112,1,300,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,64,116571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,48,116904,2,0,L|160:0,1,75,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,16,117571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,64,117904,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,112,118071,1,8,0:0:0:0:
384,160,118238,6,0,B|256:240|256:240|384:320,1,300,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,240,119238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,240,119571,2,0,L|320:240,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,240,120238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,160,120571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,128,120904,6,0,L|0:96,2,75,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,160,121904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
496,176,122238,2,0,L|448:240,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,240,122904,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,240,123238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,192,123571,6,0,L|272:112,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,96,124571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,112,124904,2,0,L|320:48,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,96,125571,2,0,L|112:32,1,75,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,112,126238,6,0,B|448:192|448:192|320:272,1,300,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,192,127238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,192,127571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
80,176,127904,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,128,128071,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,80,128238,1,2,0:0:0:0:
16,48,128571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
304,80,128904,6,0,L|224:208,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,256,129904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,208,130238,2,0,L|160:256,2,75,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,160,131238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,208,131571,6,0,B|96:128|96:128|224:48,1,300,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,112,132571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,208,132904,2,0,L|176:144,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,160,133571,2,0,L|352:96,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,208,134238,6,0,L|192:208,2,75,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,208,135238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,208,135571,2,0,L|160:144,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,128,136238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,48,136571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,48,136904,6,0,B|192:128|192:128|320:208,1,300,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,128,137904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,208,138238,2,0,L|272:272,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,272,138904,2,0,L|112:272,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,288,139571,6,0,B|496:208|496:208|368:128,1,300,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,96,140571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,128,140904,2,0,L|320:192,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,240,141571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,320,141904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,320,142238,6,0,B|160:240|160:240|32:160,1,300,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,80,143238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,112,143571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
272,192,143904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,272,144238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,304,144571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,144904,12,0,148904,0:0:0:0:

Edit: Ok, edited with the latest timing.

SUBSTAC9

288 posts

Joined May 2009

SUBSTAC9 11 years ago

examination wrote:
[STAC's Salad]
collapsed text
I forget if the salad can be FC without using dashes TUT,if dashes can use,ignore the following
00:37:907 (6,1) - I can't catch this without using a dash,consider change it.
00:53:907 (4,1) - ^
01:05:907 (3,4) - ^
01:46:241 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - ^
01:57:907 (7,8,1) - ^
02:21:907 (2,3) - ^
yeah that's can Dash improve to be more challenge but there's not over HDash I consider and adjust some with your suggests from above.
01:16:907 (4) - I think this can be a reversed slider sorry not change
01:25:741 (3,4,5) - change them to a slider or delete them ahmm.. add note is better
01:34:241 (3) - Needs to be fixed as the plate has to move a long way and may be hard for beginners change for all pattern thanks
02:12:574 (6,7) - just follow the previous patterns looks better~ ok

edit to final timing and fix from examination's modding
thank you

SPOILER

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Shinonomegiku.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 84907
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 2
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 16
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Shinonomegiku
TitleUnicode:東雲菊
Artist:BURTON
ArtistUnicode:BURTON
Creator:[_Crystal]
Version:STAC's Salad
Source:ましろ色シンフォニー -Love is pure white-
Tags:Mashiro-iro Symphony original soundtrack ost SUBSTAC9 yf_bmp Kurokami Wafu IamKwaN
BeatmapID:390317
BeatmapSetID:152709

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.5
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"sana1.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,0,0,0

[TimingPoints]
238,666.666666666667,3,2,1,20,1,0
22238,-100,3,2,1,60,0,0
54238,-100,3,2,1,60,0,0
76238,-50,3,2,1,60,0,0
77571,-100,3,2,1,60,0,0
86238,666.666666666667,4,2,1,60,1,1
86238,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
91571,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
92238,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
94238,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
95571,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
104904,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
105571,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
107238,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
107571,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
110238,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
110904,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
118238,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
118904,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
144904,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
146238,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
146904,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
147571,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
147904,-100,4,2,1,20,0,0
148238,-100,4,2,1,10,0,0
148571,-100,4,2,1,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 128,255,255
Combo2 : 128,128,255
Combo3 : 128,255,0

[HitObjects]
256,192,19571,12,0,21571,0:0:0:0:
384,192,22238,6,0,L|208:192,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,23238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,23571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,192,23904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,64,24238,2,0,L|304:64,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,128,25238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,128,25571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
48,192,25904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,208,26238,6,0,L|384:208,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,112,27238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,112,27571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,112,27904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,112,28238,2,0,L|128:112,2,75,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,192,29238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,112,29571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,192,29904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,192,30238,6,0,L|448:80,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,192,31238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,192,31571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,192,31904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,192,32238,6,0,L|64:80,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,64,33238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,192,33571,2,0,L|448:80,1,150,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,112,34571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,192,34904,6,0,L|80:272,2,75,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,192,35904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,192,36238,2,0,L|368:288,2,75,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,192,37238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,192,37571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
144,192,37904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,192,38238,6,0,L|272:96,1,150,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,64,39238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,64,39571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,64,39904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,176,40238,2,0,L|512:224,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,320,41238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,320,41571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,320,41904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,288,42238,6,0,L|64:144,2,150,2|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,288,44238,2,0,L|448:144,2,150,2|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,192,46238,6,0,L|352:192,2,150,2|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,47904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,192,48238,2,0,L|368:192,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,192,49238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,192,49571,2,0,L|160:192,2,150,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,192,51571,6,0,L|240:192,2,150,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,96,53238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,96,53571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,96,53904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,96,54238,6,0,P|432:160|384:240,1,150,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,55238,2,0,L|256:96,2,75,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,288,56238,2,0,P|80:224|128:144,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,96,57238,2,0,L|352:96,2,75,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,192,58238,6,0,P|160:240|208:192,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,128,59238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,192,59571,2,0,P|352:240|304:192,1,150,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,320,60571,2,0,L|160:320,2,75,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,320,61571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,272,61904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,320,62238,6,0,L|48:144,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,192,63238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,192,63571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,352,63904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,320,64238,2,0,L|464:144,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,64,65238,5,0,0:0:0:0:
368,64,65571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,64,65904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,64,66238,2,0,L|192:64,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,67238,2,0,L|80:288,2,75,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,112,68238,5,2,0:0:0:0:
256,48,68571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,112,68904,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,48,69238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,128,69571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,48,69904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,128,70238,6,0,L|336:272,1,150,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,128,71571,2,0,L|176:272,1,150,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,192,72571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,192,72904,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,192,73238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,192,73571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
368,192,74238,6,0,L|384:288,2,75,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,192,75238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,192,75571,2,0,L|128:288,2,75,8|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,192,76904,2,0,L|96:192,1,300,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,80,78238,6,0,L|240:80,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,80,79238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,80,79571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
240,192,79904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,192,80238,2,0,L|230:192,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,192,81238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,81571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
432,192,81904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,192,82238,6,0,L|96:192,1,300,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,84238,2,0,L|400:192,1,300,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,85738,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,192,85904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,192,86071,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,192,86238,1,4,0:0:0:0:
416,80,86904,6,0,L|416:176,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,192,87571,2,0,L|304:96,1,75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,80,88238,2,0,L|96:176,2,75,8|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,160,89238,6,0,L|160:240,1,75,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,160,89904,2,0,L|352:240,1,75,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,320,90571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,288,90904,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,320,91238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,320,91571,6,0,P|96:272|96:48,1,300,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,240,92904,2,0,P|368:208|352:96,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,176,94238,2,0,B|256:96|432:192,2,300,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,160,95904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,320,96238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
368,256,96571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,224,96738,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,192,96904,1,6,0:0:0:0:
64,192,97571,6,0,L|112:96,2,75,8|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,98904,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,192,99238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,192,99571,2,0,L|352:96,2,150,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,101571,5,8,0:0:0:0:
368,192,101904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,192,102238,2,0,L|32:192,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,192,103571,2,0,L|480:192,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,112,104904,2,0,L|112:112,1,150,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,105571,6,0,L|352:192,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,192,106238,1,2,0:0:0:0:
208,192,106571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,106738,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,192,106904,1,2,0:0:0:0:
48,192,107238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,192,107571,6,0,L|384:96,1,150,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,112,108571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,108,108904,1,2,0:0:0:0:
128,112,109238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,112,109571,2,0,L|400:256,1,150,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,256,110571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,243,110904,5,8,0:0:0:0:
392,243,111238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,256,111571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,256,111904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,192,112238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
32,192,112571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,256,112904,6,0,L|416:256,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,192,113904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,192,114238,2,0,L|0:192,2,150,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,128,115904,5,0,0:0:0:0:
368,192,116238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
512,192,116571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,192,116904,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,128,117238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,192,117571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
512,192,117904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,192,118071,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,192,118238,6,0,B|32:192|32:192|0:32,1,300,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,80,119238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,144,119571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
416,160,119904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,144,120238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
416,160,120571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,272,120904,6,0,P|128:224|96:176,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,272,122238,2,0,P|384:224|416:176,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,96,123238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,192,123571,2,0,L|16:256,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,192,124571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,192,124904,6,0,L|432:256,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,288,125571,2,0,L|272:336,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,288,126238,2,0,L|160:192,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,192,126904,2,0,L|32:256,2,75,8|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,192,127904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,128071,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,192,128238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,192,128571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,192,128904,6,0,L|448:192,1,150,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,192,129904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,192,130238,2,0,L|368:192,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,192,131238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,131571,2,0,L|288:192,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,192,132571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,132904,2,0,L|432:192,2,150,2|8|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,134904,12,0,138238,0:0:0:0:
144,192,138904,5,8,0:0:0:0:
368,192,139238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,96,139571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,96,140238,5,8,0:0:0:0:
16,96,140571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,140904,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,288,141238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,141571,5,8,0:0:0:0:
256,96,141904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
496,96,142238,1,2,0:0:0:0:
384,192,142571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,142904,6,0,L|176:288,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,143571,2,0,L|336:288,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,192,144238,6,0,L|0:176,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,144904,12,0,148904,0:0:0:0:

Crystal

Former osu!catch Champion: 2018

1,123 posts

Joined June 2012

Topic Starter

Crystal 11 years ago

yf_bmp wrote:
M4M moeXingxing moeYF >.<

Notice:

Red: Be unrankable
Blue: Be important
Black: Suggestions
[General]
建议将tick音与默认的soft-hitnormal音混合:3 ok

[Hard]
有一些滑条都拉的太弯了比如00:33:571 (3,4) - 00:38:904 (3,4) - 等有些丑改一下更好吧其实我感觉还好;w;听听后面人怎么说吧

00:59:238 (4,5,6) - 尝试等距? 改了
01:20:238 (5) - ctrl+g更好flow感觉 ;w;个人不太喜欢这样后面怎么调整都不太好衔接
01:22:238 (3,4,5) - 等距? 改了
01:24:238 (1,2,3) - ^ 改了
02:23:571 (3,4,5) - 尾杀不好 02:24:571 (4) - x:384 y:68 这里附近可以接受改了
02:24:904 (5) - 换finish 改了

好 ^^

Nothing serious. The map is good enough to rank! >.<谢谢
M4M map: http://osu.ppy.sh/s/152595 thanks~ ok, will check it soon

谢谢mod

smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

smallboat 11 years ago

嗨星星，來晚。

[General]

Widescreen support 不一致，check君媽的diff.

[KwaN's Easy]

00:18:238 (1) - 尾端應該是在後一格白線，這樣滑的比較舒服，現在這個感覺才滑到一半，有點不舒服的感覺。
00:34:238 (1,2) - 這邊節奏有點太複雜，不如跟00:36:238 (2) 一樣，玩得比較順暢。
00:44:238 (2,3) - ^ 節奏用 00:42:238 (1) 試試。
00:50:238 (1) - 尾端應該是前一格白線。
01:12:238 (2) - 不太喜歡這種要彎不彎要直不直的slider，只是我的意見，不如全部弄直?
02:24:904 (3) - 這裡應該NC?

[Wafu's Normal] Why are you have so many object's unsnapped? (Check the Aimod)

00:05:238 (2) - Have a rhythm at this here,so I think add this ,can fit the music.
00:17:238 (2) - ^
00:29:238 (2) - ^
00:31:904 (4) - ^
00:37:238 (2) - ^

[Hard] 有些輕柔的whistle聲都被clap蓋住了..所以我建議要remove..

00:22:904 (3) - 這個去掉clap，聽起來比較自然些，連續兩個聽的很noisy，所以00:23:571 (4) 開頭有鼓聲就強調這裡就好了。
00:24:904 (3) - ^
00:26:904 (3) - ^
00:30:904 (2) - ^
00:32:904 (2) - ^
00:36:904 (2) - ^
00:38:904 (3) - ^
00:40:904 (3) - ^
00:42:904 (2) - ^
00:44:238 (1) - 換1/4折返?
00:44:904 (2) - 這個去掉clap
00:46:238 (1) - 尾端音效去掉
01:00:238 (7) - 開頭我覺得是whistle
01:06:904 (1) - 這個去掉clap
01:08:904 (5) - ^
01:13:571 (7) - 前後加兩個clap聽起來很奇怪，搬動後面那一個比較適合音樂。
01:22:904 (5) - 這個去掉clap (後面還有類似的試試自己搬動看看? 有些沒有鼓聲卻放clap，不如不要加)
02:24:904 (5) - 試試這裡NC?

節奏不錯沒什麼問題，只是音效有點..聽的不太舒服...

祝星星RANK ~ !

IamKwaN

osu! Alumni

3,905 posts

Joined August 2012

IamKwaN 11 years ago

smallboat wrote:
嗨星星，來晚。 \:D/

[General]

Widescreen support 不一致，check君媽的diff. 無SB,所以跟我uncheck才對

[KwaN's Easy]

00:18:238 (1) - 尾端應該是在後一格白線，這樣滑的比較舒服，現在這個感覺才滑到一半，有點不舒服的感覺。我在跟鋼琴;w;
00:34:238 (1,2) - 這邊節奏有點太複雜，不如跟00:36:238 (2) 一樣，玩得比較順暢。這樣會漏掉00:35:238
00:44:238 (2,3) - ^ 節奏用 00:42:238 (1) 試試。再想想
00:50:238 (1) - 尾端應該是前一格白線。對
01:12:238 (2) - 不太喜歡這種要彎不彎要直不直的slider，只是我的意見，不如全部弄直? ;w; 在blanket
02:24:904 (3) - 這裡應該NC? 前面都轉了NC

謝謝>.<
@星星, update了的話請告知

SPOILER

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Shinonomegiku.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 84907
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 0.8

[Metadata]
Title:Shinonomegiku
TitleUnicode:東雲菊
Artist:BURTON
ArtistUnicode:BURTON
Creator:[_Crystal]
Version:KwaN's Easy
Source:ましろ色シンフォニー -Love is pure white-
Tags:Mashiro-iro Symphony original soundtrack ost SUBSTAC9 yf_bmp Kurokami Wafu IamKwaN
BeatmapID:387799
BeatmapSetID:152709

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:2
OverallDifficulty:1
ApproachRate:2
SliderMultiplier:0.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"sana1.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,0,0,0

[TimingPoints]
238,666.666666666667,3,2,1,20,1,0
22238,-100,3,2,2,60,0,0
54238,-100,3,2,3,60,0,0
56238,-100,3,2,2,60,0,0
56404,-100,3,2,3,60,0,0
58238,-100,3,2,2,60,0,0
58404,-100,3,2,3,60,0,0
60238,-100,3,2,2,60,0,0
60404,-100,3,2,3,60,0,0
62238,-100,3,2,2,60,0,0
62404,-100,3,2,3,60,0,0
64238,-100,3,2,2,60,0,0
64404,-100,3,2,3,60,0,0
66238,-100,3,2,2,60,0,0
66404,-100,3,2,3,60,0,0
68238,-100,3,2,2,60,0,0
68404,-100,3,2,3,60,0,0
70238,-100,3,2,2,60,0,0
86238,666.666666666667,4,2,3,60,1,1
86238,-100,4,2,2,60,0,1
97571,-100,4,2,3,60,0,1
97738,-100,4,2,2,60,0,1
105571,-100,4,2,3,60,0,1
105738,-100,4,2,2,60,0,1
106571,-100,4,2,2,40,0,0
107238,-100,4,2,2,50,0,0
107571,-100,4,2,2,60,0,1
118904,-100,4,2,3,60,0,1
119071,-100,4,2,2,60,0,1
126904,-100,4,2,3,60,0,1
127071,-100,4,2,2,60,0,1
134904,-100,4,2,3,60,0,1
135071,-100,4,2,2,60,0,1
137571,-100,4,2,3,60,0,1
137738,-100,4,2,2,60,0,1
140238,-100,4,2,3,60,0,1
140404,-100,4,2,2,60,0,1
144904,-100,4,2,3,60,0,0
146238,-100,4,2,3,50,0,0
146904,-100,4,2,3,40,0,0
147571,-100,4,2,3,30,0,0
147904,-100,4,2,3,20,0,0
148238,-100,4,2,3,10,0,0
148571,-100,4,2,3,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 128,255,255
Combo2 : 128,128,255
Combo3 : 128,255,0

[HitObjects]
112,88,238,6,0,P|80:160|88:240,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,312,2238,2,0,P|228:332|305:311,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,280,4238,6,0,B|444:244|328:168|444:148|396:88,1,200,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,56,6238,2,0,P|288:76|208:56,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,32,8238,6,0,L|96:108,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,200,9571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
96,292,10238,2,0,L|120:368,2,80,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,96,13571,6,0,P|344:100|384:96,2,80,2|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,80,15571,2,0,P|168:76|128:80,2,80,2|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,168,17571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
120,252,18238,6,0,P|120:312|144:368,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,284,20238,2,0,L|460:284,1,200,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
484,244,22238,6,0,P|500:208|500:164,1,80,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,84,23571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
356,72,24238,2,0,P|316:72|280:92,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,152,25571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,204,26238,6,0,B|176:264|244:240|244:240|280:240,2,160,2|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,120,29571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,88,30238,6,0,L|256:104,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,164,31571,2,0,L|376:160,2,40,8|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,240,32904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,316,33571,2,0,L|160:308,1,40,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,300,34238,6,0,P|108:248|124:192,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,176,35238,2,0,L|156:168,1,40,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,108,36238,2,0,L|300:96,2,80,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,152,38238,6,0,P|128:192|140:232,1,80,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,184,39571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
236,280,40238,2,0,P|274:266|303:236,1,80,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,184,41571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
308,136,42238,6,0,P|348:128|388:136,2,80,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,136,44238,2,0,P|164:128|124:136,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,224,45571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
196,316,46238,6,0,P|236:308|276:316,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,332,47571,2,0,L|384:276,1,40,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,248,48238,2,0,L|412:168,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,76,49571,2,0,L|380:64,1,53.3333333333333,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,60,50238,6,0,P|276:88|260:172,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,256,52238,2,0,L|352:244,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,228,53571,2,0,L|442:177,1,40,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,140,54238,6,0,L|436:28,2,80,4|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,108,56238,2,0,L|344:-4,2,80,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,108,58238,6,0,L|256:-4,2,80,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,140,60238,2,0,L|164:28,2,80,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,236,62238,6,0,P|112:268|52:276,2,80,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,248,64238,2,0,P|227:296|176:330,2,80,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,184,66238,6,0,P|344:234|337:294,2,80,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,88,68238,2,0,P|315:33|290:-20,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,52,69571,2,0,L|168:44,1,40,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,56,70238,6,0,L|24:84,2,80,6|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,152,72238,2,0,P|88:164|48:168,2,80,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,144,74238,6,0,L|301:163,2,80,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,240,76238,2,0,P|270:251|309:255,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,240,77571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
384,144,78238,6,0,B|376:104|376:104|352:72,2,80,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,144,80238,2,0,B|257:117|257:117|218:106,2,80,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,200,82238,6,0,B|268:248|324:224|324:224|364:248,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,284,84238,2,0,B|472:236|436:184|436:184|440:156,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,140,85571,2,0,L|348:116,1,40,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,104,86238,6,0,P|327:64|352:28,2,80,6|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,200,88238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
220,212,88904,2,0,L|136:224,2,80,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,200,90904,2,0,L|380:188,1,40,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,180,91571,6,0,L|412:96,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,36,92904,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,76,93571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
164,52,94238,2,0,P|152:112|168:168,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,216,95571,2,0,L|100:216,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,312,96904,6,0,L|280:312,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,272,98904,1,8,0:0:0:0:
428,200,99571,2,0,L|436:120,1,80
344,96,100904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,32,101571,2,0,L|232:36,1,40,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,40,102238,6,0,L|176:120,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,184,103571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
128,276,104238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
212,320,104904,2,0,B|249:332|283:302|283:302|318:272|359:274,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,276,106904,2,0,L|462:228,1,40,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,188,107571,6,0,P|480:152|476:108,2,80,6|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,136,109571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
324,64,110238,2,0,P|360:44|408:44,2,80,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,88,112238,2,0,L|192:94,1,40,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,96,112904,6,0,L|60:104,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,176,114238,1,2,0:0:0:0:
56,256,114904,1,8,0:0:0:0:
152,264,115571,2,0,L|240:264,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,172,116904,2,0,L|352:172,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,244,118238,6,0,P|440:172|412:100,1,160,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,36,120238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,76,120904,2,0,P|216:76|180:56,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,20,122238,1,2,0:0:0:0:
84,116,122904,2,0,L|80:168,1,40,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,204,123571,6,0,L|84:284,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,316,124904,1,2,0:0:0:0:
264,276,125571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
328,204,126238,2,0,L|340:44,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,28,128238,2,0,L|240:76,1,40,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,116,128904,6,0,P|199:134|159:138,1,80,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,208,130238,2,0,P|114:245|118:285,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,344,131571,2,0,P|229:326|269:322,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,256,132904,2,0,P|318:219|314:179,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,84,134238,6,0,B|236:60|188:80|188:80|144:104|72:84,2,240,6|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,112,138904,1,8,0:0:0:0:
384,208,139571,6,0,P|352:276|276:312,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,312,141571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
116,244,142238,2,0,P|108:208|116:164,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,76,143571,2,0,P|184:68|228:76,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,140,144904,5,12,0:0:0:0:
256,192,145571,8,0,148904,0:0:0:0:

Kuzino

Former osu!catch Champion: 2014

1,207 posts

Joined August 2009

Kuzino 11 years ago

Hi
from modding queue

nice song

[STAC's Salad]
00:23:571 (3) - move this note x:280
00:33:238 (2) - move this note x:256
00:37:904 (6) - move this note x:176
01:05:238 (1,2,3,4) - how about this pattern https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1475219 (note 2 → x:272) or https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1475219
01:12:571 (3,4,5,6) - how about this pattern http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1475228 (note 4,6 → x:272) or http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1475232 (note 3,4 → x:368 and note 5,6 → x:176)
01:57:904 (7,8,1) - How about making these notes a bit closer to each other?
02:14:904 (1) - decrease hitsound volume at spinners

[Kurokami's Platter]
00:19:571 (1) - , 00:19:904 (1) - add note
00:28:904 (2) - I think a note will be better here instead of a short slider
00:44:238 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - how about decrease space?
00:49:238 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - i think this part use 1/4 is better.
00:54:238 (1) - move this note x:192
01:34:238 (1) - change like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1475314. this enables putting a hitsound here( 01:34:904 ), which is more natural.
01:47:238 (4) - move this note x:272
01:49:571 (5) - move this slider x:336

Good Luck!

Zygfryd reinn1

24 posts

Joined April 2014

Zygfryd reinn1 11 years ago

Map is good at all

.

SUBSTAC9

288 posts

Joined May 2009

SUBSTAC9 11 years ago

Kuzino wrote:
Hi
[STAC's Salad]
00:23:571 (3) - move this note x:280 ok
00:33:238 (2) - move this note x:256 not change this by cause of logic
00:37:904 (6) - move this note x:176 ok
01:05:238 (1,2,3,4) - how about this pattern https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1475219 (note 2 → x:272) or https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1475219 ok
01:12:571 (3,4,5,6) - how about this pattern http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1475228 (note 4,6 → x:272) or http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1475232 (note 3,4 → x:368 and note 5,6 → x:176) change by other way
01:57:904 (7,8,1) - How about making these notes a bit closer to each other? ok thank you
02:14:904 (1) - decrease hitsound volume at spinners added

thank you very much kuzino
update

SPOILER

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Shinonomegiku.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 84907
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 2
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Shinonomegiku
TitleUnicode:東雲菊
Artist:BURTON
ArtistUnicode:BURTON
Creator:[_Crystal]
Version:STAC's Salad
Source:ましろ色シンフォニー -Love is pure white-
Tags:Mashiro-iro Symphony original soundtrack ost SUBSTAC9 yf_bmp Kurokami Wafu IamKwaN
BeatmapID:390317
BeatmapSetID:152709

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.5
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"sana1.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,0,0,0

[TimingPoints]
238,666.666666666667,3,2,1,20,1,0
22238,-100,3,2,1,60,0,0
54238,-100,3,2,1,60,0,0
76238,-50,3,2,1,60,0,0
77571,-100,3,2,1,60,0,0
86238,666.666666666667,4,2,1,60,1,1
86238,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
91571,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
92238,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
94238,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
95571,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
104904,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
105571,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
107238,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
107571,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
110238,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
110904,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
118238,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
118904,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
134904,-100,4,2,1,55,0,1
136238,-100,4,2,1,50,0,1
137571,-100,4,2,1,45,0,1
138904,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
144904,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
146238,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
146904,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
147571,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
147904,-100,4,2,1,20,0,0
148238,-100,4,2,1,10,0,0
148571,-100,4,2,1,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 128,255,255
Combo2 : 128,128,255
Combo3 : 128,255,0

[HitObjects]
256,192,19571,12,0,21571,0:0:0:0:
384,192,22238,6,0,L|208:192,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,23238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,192,23571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,192,23904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,64,24238,2,0,L|304:64,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,128,25238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,128,25571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
48,192,25904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,208,26238,6,0,L|384:208,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,112,27238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,112,27571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,112,27904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,112,28238,2,0,L|128:112,2,75,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,192,29238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,112,29571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,192,29904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,192,30238,6,0,L|448:80,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,192,31238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,192,31571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,192,31904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,192,32238,6,0,L|64:80,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,80,33238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,192,33571,2,0,L|448:80,1,150,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,112,34571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,192,34904,6,0,L|80:272,2,75,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,192,35904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,192,36238,2,0,L|368:288,2,75,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,192,37238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,192,37571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,192,37904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,192,38238,6,0,L|272:96,1,150,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,64,39238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,64,39571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,64,39904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,176,40238,2,0,L|512:224,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,320,41238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,320,41571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,320,41904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,288,42238,6,0,L|64:144,2,150,2|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,288,44238,2,0,L|448:144,2,150,2|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,192,46238,6,0,L|352:192,2,150,2|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,47904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,192,48238,2,0,L|368:192,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,192,49238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,192,49571,2,0,L|160:192,2,150,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,192,51571,6,0,L|240:192,2,150,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,96,53238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,96,53571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,96,53904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,96,54238,6,0,P|432:160|384:240,1,150,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,55238,2,0,L|256:96,2,75,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,288,56238,2,0,P|80:224|128:144,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,96,57238,2,0,L|352:96,2,75,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,192,58238,6,0,P|160:240|208:192,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,128,59238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,192,59571,2,0,P|352:240|304:192,1,150,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,320,60571,2,0,L|160:320,2,75,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,320,61571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,272,61904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,320,62238,6,0,L|48:144,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,192,63238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,192,63571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,352,63904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,320,64238,2,0,L|464:144,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,64,65238,5,0,0:0:0:0:
272,64,65571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,64,65904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,64,66238,2,0,L|192:64,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,67238,2,0,L|80:288,2,75,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,112,68238,5,2,0:0:0:0:
256,48,68571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,112,68904,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,48,69238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,128,69571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,48,69904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,128,70238,6,0,L|336:272,1,150,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,128,71571,2,0,L|176:272,1,150,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,192,72571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,192,72904,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,192,73238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,192,73571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
368,192,74238,6,0,L|384:288,2,75,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,192,75238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,192,75571,2,0,L|128:288,2,75,8|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,192,76904,2,0,L|96:192,1,300,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,80,78238,6,0,L|240:80,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,80,79238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,80,79571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
240,192,79904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,192,80238,2,0,L|230:192,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,192,81238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,81571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
432,192,81904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,192,82238,6,0,L|96:192,1,300,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,84238,2,0,L|400:192,1,300,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,85738,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,192,85904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,192,86071,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,192,86238,1,4,0:0:0:0:
416,80,86904,6,0,L|416:176,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,192,87571,2,0,L|304:96,1,75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,80,88238,2,0,L|96:176,2,75,8|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,160,89238,6,0,L|160:240,1,75,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,160,89904,2,0,L|352:240,1,75,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,320,90571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,288,90904,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,320,91238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,320,91571,6,0,P|96:272|96:48,1,300,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,240,92904,2,0,P|368:208|352:96,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,176,94238,2,0,B|256:96|432:192,2,300,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,160,95904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,320,96238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
368,256,96571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,224,96738,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,192,96904,1,6,0:0:0:0:
120,192,97571,6,0,L|168:96,2,75,8|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,192,98904,1,8,0:0:0:0:
360,192,99238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,192,99571,2,0,L|352:96,2,150,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,101571,5,8,0:0:0:0:
368,192,101904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,192,102238,2,0,L|32:192,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,192,103571,2,0,L|480:192,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,112,104904,2,0,L|112:112,1,150,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,105571,6,0,L|352:192,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,192,106238,1,2,0:0:0:0:
208,192,106571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,106738,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,192,106904,1,2,0:0:0:0:
48,192,107238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,192,107571,6,0,L|384:96,1,150,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,112,108571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,108,108904,1,2,0:0:0:0:
128,112,109238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,112,109571,2,0,L|400:256,1,150,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,256,110571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,243,110904,5,8,0:0:0:0:
392,243,111238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,256,111571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,256,111904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,192,112238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
32,192,112571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,256,112904,6,0,L|416:256,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,192,113904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,192,114238,2,0,L|0:192,2,150,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,128,115904,5,0,0:0:0:0:
368,192,116238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
512,192,116571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,192,116904,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,128,117238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,192,117571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
512,192,117904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,192,118071,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,192,118238,6,0,B|160:192|160:192|128:32,1,300,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,80,119238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,144,119571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
416,160,119904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,144,120238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
416,160,120571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,272,120904,6,0,P|128:224|96:176,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,272,122238,2,0,P|384:224|416:176,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,96,123238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,192,123571,2,0,L|16:256,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,192,124571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,192,124904,6,0,L|432:256,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,288,125571,2,0,L|272:336,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,288,126238,2,0,L|160:192,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,192,126904,2,0,L|32:256,2,75,8|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,192,127904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,128071,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,192,128238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,192,128571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,192,128904,6,0,L|448:192,1,150,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,192,129904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,192,130238,2,0,L|368:192,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,192,131238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,131571,2,0,L|288:192,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,192,132571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,132904,2,0,L|432:192,2,150,2|8|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,134904,12,0,138238,0:0:0:0:
144,192,138904,5,8,0:0:0:0:
368,192,139238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,96,139571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,96,140238,5,8,0:0:0:0:
16,96,140571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,140904,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,288,141238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,141571,5,8,0:0:0:0:
256,96,141904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
496,96,142238,1,2,0:0:0:0:
384,192,142571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,142904,6,0,L|176:288,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,143571,2,0,L|336:288,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,192,144238,6,0,L|0:176,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,144904,12,0,148904,0:0:0:0:

Maboyu

373 posts

Joined November 2011

Maboyu 11 years ago

我來了>W< 星星:D

[KwaN's Easy]
Circle size+1?

nice>w< 沒什麼問題!

[Wafu's Normal]
00:49:571 (2,3) - I suggest this rhythm ↓↓

SPOILER

01:31:574 (1) - Try this rhythm?

SPOILER

[Hard]
00:12:238 (5) - 這邊放一個Circle就好?

SPOILER

00:18:904 (4,5) - 沒包好><
00:28:238 - NC?
01:28:238 (6,7) - 沒包好!!>W<
02:00:904 (2,3) - ^
02:03:571 (1,2) - 試試這樣的節奏?

SPOILER

02:10:238 (2,3) - 沒包好!
02:16:904 (1) - 試試看這樣?

SPOILER

02:23:238 (2,3) - 沒包好!

祝你早日RANK^^
MOD還不是說很成熟>< 請多多包含OAQ

Kurokami

osu! Alumni

4,024 posts

Joined February 2010

Kurokami 11 years ago

Kuzino wrote:
Hi
from modding queue

nice song

[Kurokami's Platter]
00:19:571 (1) - , 00:19:904 (1) - add note Why? I can hear nothing there which needs two note. o.o Changed the previous circle to a long slider.
00:28:904 (2) - I think a note will be better here instead of a short slider Nope, because the base sound is still going on in the background but at 00:29:238 there is a second one which tears the first one apart. Thats why I used two slider instead of one.
00:44:238 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - how about decrease space? No, if you mean between the notes. If you mean between this and the next one I did that, just after my last post and I forgot to send it, or more like I waited for the next mod.
00:49:238 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - i think this part use 1/4 is better. No, because the sounds are not there. It will be too hard to catch them with hidden since its slow so you can only use your rhythm sense to jump and stuff.
00:54:238 (1) - move this note x:192 No because here is the rhythm change in the music thats why I mapped it differently from the rest. Its hard to catch thats true but some harder patterns needs since this is kinda easy isn't it? (And this is sounds a little bit differently than the rest anyways.)
01:34:238 (1) - change like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1475314. this enables putting a hitsound here( 01:34:904 ), which is more natural. I also wondered about this. Thanks for pointing out.
01:47:238 (4) - move this note x:272 k
01:49:571 (5) - move this slider x:336 k

Good Luck!

Thanks for your mod. :3

SPOILER

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Shinonomegiku.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 84907
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 2
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 16
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Shinonomegiku
TitleUnicode:東雲菊
Artist:BURTON
ArtistUnicode:BURTON
Creator:[_Crystal]
Version:Kurokami's Platter
Source:ましろ色シンフォニー -Love is pure white-
Tags:Mashiro-iro Symphony original soundtrack ost SUBSTAC9 yf_bmp Kurokami Wafu IamKwaN
BeatmapID:382311
BeatmapSetID:152709

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.5
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"sana1.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,0,0,0

[TimingPoints]
238,666.666666666667,3,2,1,20,1,0
19238,-66.6666666666667,3,2,1,20,0,0
19904,-100,3,2,1,20,0,0
22238,-100,3,2,1,60,0,0
44238,-100,3,2,1,50,0,0
44571,-100,3,2,1,40,0,0
44904,-100,3,2,1,30,0,0
45238,-100,3,2,1,20,0,0
45571,-100,3,2,1,60,0,0
54238,-100,3,2,1,60,0,0
76238,-50,3,2,1,60,0,0
77571,-100,3,2,1,60,0,0
86238,666.666666666667,4,2,1,60,1,1
86238,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
91571,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
92238,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
94238,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
95571,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
102238,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
102904,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
103571,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
104238,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
104904,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
105571,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
106571,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
107238,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
107571,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
110238,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
110904,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
115571,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
116238,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
118238,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
118904,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
126238,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
126904,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
131571,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
132238,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
136904,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
137571,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
139571,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
140238,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
142238,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
142904,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
144904,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
146238,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
146904,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
147571,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
147904,-100,4,2,1,20,0,0
148238,-100,4,2,1,10,0,0
148571,-100,4,2,1,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 128,255,255
Combo2 : 128,128,255
Combo3 : 128,255,0

[HitObjects]
416,288,238,5,2,0:0:0:0:
128,272,904,2,0,L|256:192,1,150,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,224,2238,6,0,L|144:144,2,150,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,64,4238,6,0,L|352:112,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,144,4904,2,0,L|224:160,2,75,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,112,5904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,96,6238,6,0,L|208:176,2,150,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,176,8238,6,0,L|384:192,2,37.5,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,192,8904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,160,9071,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,128,9238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,192,9571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,272,10238,6,0,L|64:192,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,192,10904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,144,11238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,11571,2,0,L|272:192,1,75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,144,12238,6,0,L|336:96,1,150,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,64,13571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,64,13904,1,2,0:0:0:0:
480,64,14238,6,0,L|400:64,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,96,14904,2,0,L|256:144,1,75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,208,15571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,288,15904,1,2,0:0:0:0:
16,208,16238,6,0,L|80:160,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,160,16904,2,0,L|272:112,1,75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,64,17571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,32,17904,1,2,0:0:0:0:
416,80,18238,6,0,L|496:112,2,75,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,96,19238,2,0,B|160:192|160:192|224:288,1,225.000008583069,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,20238,12,0,21904,0:0:0:0:
192,176,22238,6,0,L|112:144,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,112,22904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,112,23238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,192,23571,2,0,L|320:256,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,288,24238,6,0,L|32:256,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,192,24904,2,0,L|224:128,1,75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,80,25571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,48,25904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
16,80,26238,6,0,L|96:96,2,75,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,48,27238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,48,27571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,48,27904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,112,28238,6,0,L|416:160,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,176,28904,2,0,L|240:176,1,37.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,192,29238,2,0,L|320:256,1,75,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,272,29904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,256,30238,6,0,L|256:208,2,75,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,192,31238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,144,31571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
32,144,31904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,80,32238,6,0,L|400:80,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,80,32904,2,0,L|112:80,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,16,33571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,16,33738,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,16,33904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,112,34238,6,0,L|288:144,2,75,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,128,35238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
16,192,35571,2,0,L|96:192,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,192,36238,6,0,L|240:240,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,240,36904,2,0,L|400:304,1,75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,320,37571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
432,176,37904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,160,38238,6,0,L|112:32,1,150,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,32,39238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,96,39571,2,0,L|208:96,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,96,40238,6,0,L|336:96,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,160,40904,2,0,L|160:208,1,75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,272,41571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,320,41904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,192,42238,6,0,L|272:144,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,80,42904,2,0,L|400:80,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,80,43571,2,0,L|224:80,1,75,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,80,44238,5,2,0:0:0:0:
416,112,44321,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,144,44404,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,176,44488,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,208,44571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,224,44904,1,2,0:0:0:0:
96,256,44988,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,288,45071,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,320,45154,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,352,45238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,336,45571,2,0,L|384:288,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,192,46238,6,0,L|208:144,2,75,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,192,47238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,112,47571,1,10,0:0:0:0:
320,112,47904,1,2,0:0:0:0:
352,48,48238,6,0,L|416:96,2,75,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,48,49238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,112,49571,1,10,0:0:0:0:
144,112,49779,1,2,0:0:0:0:
336,176,49988,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,176,50238,5,0,0:0:0:0:
144,192,50279,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,208,50404,2,0,L|176:288,1,112.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,336,51238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,288,51571,2,0,L|112:240,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,192,52238,6,0,L|400:240,2,75,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,144,53238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,192,53571,2,0,L|288:128,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,64,54238,5,2,0:0:0:0:
192,64,54321,2,0,L|160:112,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,192,54904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,192,54988,2,0,L|304:240,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,256,55571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,256,55654,2,0,L|128:304,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,304,56238,5,2,0:0:0:0:
384,304,56321,2,0,L|416:256,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,192,56904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,192,56988,2,0,L|176:160,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,96,57571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
368,96,57654,2,0,L|416:64,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,80,58238,5,2,0:0:0:0:
192,80,58321,2,0,L|240:48,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,80,58904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
16,80,58988,2,0,L|64:112,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,160,59571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,160,59654,2,0,L|224:192,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,60238,5,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,60321,2,0,L|400:224,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,288,60904,2,0,L|240:240,1,75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,61571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,61654,2,0,L|400:160,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,144,62238,5,2,0:0:0:0:
160,144,62321,2,0,L|112:112,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,96,62904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,96,62988,2,0,L|384:64,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,48,63571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,48,63654,2,0,L|208:96,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,192,64238,5,2,0:0:0:0:
16,192,64321,2,0,L|64:224,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,240,64904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,240,64988,2,0,L|240:272,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,256,65571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
464,256,65654,2,0,L|432:208,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,160,66238,5,2,0:0:0:0:
288,128,66321,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,96,66404,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,48,66571,2,0,L|416:96,2,75,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,32,67571,2,0,L|336:32,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,48,68238,6,0,L|176:96,2,75,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,32,69238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,96,69571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,160,69904,1,2,0:0:0:0:
272,192,70071,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,224,70238,6,0,L|128:272,2,75,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,160,71238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,128,71571,2,0,L|224:80,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,32,72238,6,0,L|464:96,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,48,72904,2,0,L|224:112,1,75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,192,73571,2,0,L|336:192,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,208,74238,6,0,L|176:256,2,75,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,144,75238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
496,80,75571,2,0,L|432:32,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,48,76238,6,0,L|64:96,4,150,2|0|0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,32,77904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,80,78238,6,0,L|320:128,2,75,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,64,79238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,80,79571,2,0,L|208:144,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,192,80238,6,0,L|352:256,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,256,80904,2,0,L|208:192,1,75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,192,81571,2,0,L|64:128,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,96,82238,6,0,L|352:144,2,75,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,32,83238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,96,83571,2,0,L|240:160,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,144,84238,6,0,L|416:192,2,75,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,96,85238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,160,85571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,224,85904,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,272,86071,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,272,86238,6,0,L|192:192,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,128,87238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,112,87571,2,0,L|224:64,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,64,88238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,64,88571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
16,48,88904,6,0,L|80:96,2,75,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,64,89904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,64,90238,2,0,L|352:64,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,64,90904,2,0,L|96:128,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,144,91571,6,0,B|480:240|480:240|368:352,1,300,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,304,92571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,240,92904,2,0,L|240:240,2,75,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,160,93904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,16,94238,6,0,B|480:96|480:96|384:176|384:176,2,300,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,304,95904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,176,96238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,176,96571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,128,96738,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,80,96904,6,0,L|192:0,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,0,97904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,0,98238,2,0,L|128:48,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,80,98904,1,8,0:0:0:0:
80,128,99238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,192,99571,6,0,L|224:192,2,75,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,256,100571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,272,100904,2,0,L|224:224,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,192,101571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,128,101904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,32,102238,6,0,L|336:112,2,150,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,16,103238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
16,32,103571,2,0,B|144:112|144:112|16:192,1,300,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,224,104571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,208,104904,6,0,B|288:128|288:128|416:48,1,300,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,32,105904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,48,106238,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,96,106571,5,8,0:0:0:0:
160,112,106738,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,128,106904,1,2,0:0:0:0:
272,192,107238,1,2,0:0:0:0:
480,192,107571,6,0,L|352:272,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,288,108571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,192,108904,1,2,0:0:0:0:
80,96,109238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,64,109571,2,0,L|256:64,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,112,110238,6,0,B|352:192|352:192|480:272,1,300,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,320,111238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,272,111571,2,0,L|144:224,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,144,112238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,96,112571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,80,112904,6,0,L|288:32,2,75,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,96,113904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,144,114238,2,0,L|256:192,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,192,114904,2,0,L|400:240,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,272,115571,6,0,B|240:192|240:192|112:112,1,300,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,64,116571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,48,116904,2,0,L|160:0,1,75,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,16,117571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,64,117904,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,112,118071,1,8,0:0:0:0:
384,160,118238,6,0,B|256:240|256:240|384:320,1,300,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,240,119238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,240,119571,2,0,L|320:240,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,240,120238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,160,120571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,128,120904,6,0,L|0:96,2,75,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,160,121904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
496,176,122238,2,0,L|448:240,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,240,122904,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,240,123238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,192,123571,6,0,L|272:112,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,96,124571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,112,124904,2,0,L|320:48,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,96,125571,2,0,L|112:32,1,75,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,112,126238,6,0,B|448:192|448:192|320:272,1,300,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,192,127238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,192,127571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
80,176,127904,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,128,128071,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,80,128238,1,2,0:0:0:0:
16,48,128571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
304,80,128904,6,0,L|224:208,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,256,129904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,208,130238,2,0,L|160:256,2,75,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,160,131238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,208,131571,6,0,B|96:128|96:128|224:48,1,300,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,112,132571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,208,132904,2,0,L|176:144,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,160,133571,2,0,L|352:96,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,208,134238,6,0,L|192:208,2,75,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,208,135238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,208,135571,2,0,L|160:144,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,128,136238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,48,136571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,48,136904,6,0,B|192:128|192:128|320:208,1,300,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,128,137904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,208,138238,2,0,L|272:272,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,272,138904,2,0,L|112:272,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,288,139571,6,0,B|496:208|496:208|368:128,1,300,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,96,140571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,128,140904,2,0,L|320:192,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,240,141571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,320,141904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,320,142238,6,0,B|160:240|160:240|32:160,1,300,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,80,143238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,112,143571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
272,192,143904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,272,144238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,304,144571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,144904,12,0,148904,0:0:0:0:

IamKwaN

osu! Alumni

3,905 posts

Joined August 2012

IamKwaN 11 years ago

@小魚: 不轉了lol
@星星: 為毛N的AR仍然是6?

Crystal

Former osu!catch Champion: 2018

1,123 posts

Joined June 2012

Topic Starter

Crystal 11 years ago

smallboat

smallboat wrote:
嗨星星，來晚。 >.<

[General]

Widescreen support 不一致，check君媽的diff.

[Hard] 有些輕柔的whistle聲都被clap蓋住了..所以我建議要remove.. 猴!

00:22:904 (3) - 這個去掉clap，聽起來比較自然些，連續兩個聽的很noisy，所以00:23:571 (4) 開頭有鼓聲就強調這裡就好了。
00:24:904 (3) - ^
00:26:904 (3) - ^
00:30:904 (2) - ^
00:32:904 (2) - ^
00:36:904 (2) - ^
00:38:904 (3) - ^
00:40:904 (3) - ^
00:42:904 (2) - ^ 以上的都改了
00:44:238 (1) - 換1/4折返? 这里还是一个circle因为不是1/4也不是1/6
00:44:904 (2) - 這個去掉clap kk
00:46:238 (1) - 尾端音效去掉 kk
01:00:238 (7) - 開頭我覺得是whistle kk
01:06:904 (1) - 這個去掉clap kk
01:08:904 (5) - ^ kk
01:13:571 (7) - 前後加兩個clap聽起來很奇怪，搬動後面那一個比較適合音樂。不了;w;挺好
01:22:904 (5) - 這個去掉clap (後面還有類似的試試自己搬動看看? 有些沒有鼓聲卻放clap，不如不要加) 猴,彻底改了一遍
02:24:904 (5) - 試試這裡NC? ok

節奏不錯沒什麼問題，只是音效有點..聽的不太舒服... 彻底排查了一遍,现在应该好多了

祝星星RANK ~ ! xD谢谢

AliomLoung

AliomLoung wrote:
我來了>W< 星星:D :3

[Hard]
00:12:238 (5) - 這邊放一個Circle就好? 改啦xD
SPOILER
00:18:904 (4,5) - 沒包好>< ><fixed
00:28:238 - NC? 不了因为和前面的是连贯的
01:28:238 (6,7) - 沒包好!!>W< ><改了
02:00:904 (2,3) - ^ 也改了
02:03:571 (1,2) - 試試這樣的節奏? 算了QAQ
SPOILER
02:10:238 (2,3) - 沒包好! >.<改了
02:16:904 (1) - 試試看這樣? 不了我认为这样挺不错的
SPOILER
02:23:238 (2,3) - 沒包好! ><嗯嗯改了

祝你早日RANK^^ 谢谢:3
MOD還不是說很成熟>< 請多多包含OAQ [/color]

thanks for modding~!! :3

IamKwaN wrote:
@小魚: 不轉了lol
@星星: 為毛N的AR仍然是6? 我去和他说说:3

rainn1 wrote:
Map is good at all . thanks!!! xD

Wafu

1,703 posts

Joined June 2011

Wafu 11 years ago

Fixed only unsnapped notes and AR. Nothing from AliomLoung's mod was fixed, because I don't want to overmap and also use 1/6 notes on normal diff. Thanks.

DeletedUser_2243638

DeletedUser_2243638 11 years ago

Mod-Request~

Guest-Easy

00:01:571 add whistle
00:03:571 ^
00:07:571 ^
00:20:238 (2) this slider is so long you could play with its' shape more

01:36:904 (1) ^
02:06:238 (4) ^

Guest-Normal

00:01:571 add wihstle~
00:03:571 ^
00:07:571 ^
00:08:238 (1) make a reverseslider of this one (but keep the lengh), I think this fits better
00:48:238 remove NC
00:49:571 add NC
00:50:238 remove NC
00:54:238 remove NC
00:58:238 remove NC
01:30:904 add Nc
01:31:571 remove NC
01:36:571 add object
01:39:571 remove NC
01:41:571 add NC
01:42:238 remove NC
01:46:904 add NC
01:47:571 remove Nc
01:50:238 remove NC
01:51:571 add NC
01:52:904 remove NC
01:58:238 remove NC
01:59:571 add NC
02:00:904 remove NC
02:02:904 add NC
02:03:571 remove NC

Hard

00:01:571 add whistle
00:03:571 ^
00:07:571 ^
00:13:571 remove clap (doesn't really fit to this calm point)
00:14:904 ^
00:16:904 ^
00:18:904 ^
00:34:238 remove clap
00:34:904 remove whistle
00:40:904 remove clap
00:42:904 ^
00:43:571 ^
00:54:071 add clap
01:10:071 ^
01:14:238 remove clap
01:31:238 (4,5) add claps
01:36:571 (4,5) ^
01:57:904 (5,6) ^
02:08:571 (5,6) ^
02:09:904 add object
02:16:904 you could play a bit with the shape of this slider ^^
02:22:238 ^

Hope I helped you a bit, though I couldn't find much but give some hitsound-advice ^^ A really nice song, it was fun to mod it

Serena-

454 posts

Joined December 2012

Serena- 11 years ago

hi pm request~

[STAC's Salad]
00:41:904 (8) - try to stack it on 00:41:238 (6) -
00:42:238 (1) - how about making a jump here? like 00:39:238 (2,3,4,5) - this pattern

[Kurokami's Platter]
its not a real problem, but note that there is only one HD in the diff. i know its hard to make a HD with bpm 90, but trying to move notes like these(00:32:238 (1) - ) and make a HD might be good also
00:50:279 (2) - i think placing this 00:50:321 - might sound better
00:54:238 (1) - stack this over 00:54:321 (2) - like the others?

and to Kurokami srry for not responding to your mod cuz my computer cant read the beatmap file of my map T.T ill try to fix them as soon as possible.

IamKwaN

osu! Alumni

3,905 posts

Joined August 2012

IamKwaN 11 years ago

@Julini: fix all those hitsounds mod, thank you!

SPOILER

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Shinonomegiku.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 84907
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 0.8

[Metadata]
Title:Shinonomegiku
TitleUnicode:東雲菊
Artist:BURTON
ArtistUnicode:BURTON
Creator:[_Crystal]
Version:KwaN's Easy
Source:ましろ色シンフォニー -Love is pure white-
Tags:Mashiro-iro Symphony original soundtrack ost SUBSTAC9 yf_bmp Kurokami Wafu IamKwaN
BeatmapID:387799
BeatmapSetID:152709

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:2
OverallDifficulty:1
ApproachRate:2
SliderMultiplier:0.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"sana1.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,0,0,0

[TimingPoints]
238,666.666666666667,3,2,1,20,1,0
22238,-100,3,2,2,60,0,0
54238,-100,3,2,3,60,0,0
56238,-100,3,2,2,60,0,0
56404,-100,3,2,3,60,0,0
58238,-100,3,2,2,60,0,0
58404,-100,3,2,3,60,0,0
60238,-100,3,2,2,60,0,0
60404,-100,3,2,3,60,0,0
62238,-100,3,2,2,60,0,0
62404,-100,3,2,3,60,0,0
64238,-100,3,2,2,60,0,0
64404,-100,3,2,3,60,0,0
66238,-100,3,2,2,60,0,0
66404,-100,3,2,3,60,0,0
68238,-100,3,2,2,60,0,0
68404,-100,3,2,3,60,0,0
70238,-100,3,2,2,60,0,0
86238,666.666666666667,4,2,3,60,1,1
86238,-100,4,2,2,60,0,1
97571,-100,4,2,3,60,0,1
97738,-100,4,2,2,60,0,1
105571,-100,4,2,3,60,0,1
105738,-100,4,2,2,60,0,1
106571,-100,4,2,2,40,0,0
107238,-100,4,2,2,50,0,0
107571,-100,4,2,2,60,0,1
118904,-100,4,2,3,60,0,1
119071,-100,4,2,2,60,0,1
126904,-100,4,2,3,60,0,1
127071,-100,4,2,2,60,0,1
134904,-100,4,2,3,60,0,1
135071,-100,4,2,2,60,0,1
137571,-100,4,2,3,60,0,1
137738,-100,4,2,2,60,0,1
140238,-100,4,2,3,60,0,1
140404,-100,4,2,2,60,0,1
144904,-100,4,2,3,60,0,0
146238,-100,4,2,3,50,0,0
146904,-100,4,2,3,40,0,0
147571,-100,4,2,3,30,0,0
147904,-100,4,2,3,20,0,0
148238,-100,4,2,3,10,0,0
148571,-100,4,2,3,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 128,255,255
Combo2 : 128,128,255
Combo3 : 128,255,0

[HitObjects]
112,88,238,6,0,P|80:160|88:240,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,312,2238,2,0,P|228:332|305:311,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,280,4238,6,0,B|444:244|328:168|444:148|396:88,1,200,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,56,6238,2,0,P|288:76|208:56,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,32,8238,6,0,L|96:108,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,200,9571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
96,292,10238,2,0,L|120:368,2,80,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,96,13571,6,0,P|344:100|384:96,2,80,2|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,80,15571,2,0,P|168:76|128:80,2,80,2|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,168,17571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
120,252,18238,6,0,P|120:312|144:368,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,284,20238,2,0,L|460:284,1,200,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
484,244,22238,6,0,P|500:208|500:164,1,80,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,84,23571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
356,72,24238,2,0,P|316:72|280:92,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,152,25571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,204,26238,6,0,B|176:264|244:240|244:240|280:240,2,160,2|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,120,29571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,88,30238,6,0,L|256:104,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,164,31571,2,0,L|376:160,2,40,8|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,240,32904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,316,33571,2,0,L|160:308,1,40,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,300,34238,6,0,P|108:248|124:192,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,176,35238,2,0,L|156:168,1,40,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,108,36238,2,0,L|300:96,2,80,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,152,38238,6,0,P|128:192|140:232,1,80,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,184,39571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
236,280,40238,2,0,P|274:266|303:236,1,80,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,184,41571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
308,136,42238,6,0,P|348:128|388:136,2,80,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,136,44238,2,0,P|164:128|124:136,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,224,45571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
196,316,46238,6,0,P|236:308|276:316,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,332,47571,2,0,L|384:276,1,40,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,248,48238,2,0,L|412:168,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,76,49571,2,0,L|380:64,1,53.3333333333333,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,60,50238,6,0,P|276:88|260:172,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,256,52238,2,0,L|352:244,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,228,53571,2,0,L|442:177,1,40,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,140,54238,6,0,L|436:28,2,80,4|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,108,56238,2,0,L|344:-4,2,80,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,108,58238,6,0,L|256:-4,2,80,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,140,60238,2,0,L|164:28,2,80,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,236,62238,6,0,P|112:268|52:276,2,80,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,248,64238,2,0,P|227:296|176:330,2,80,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,184,66238,6,0,P|344:234|337:294,2,80,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,88,68238,2,0,P|315:33|290:-20,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,52,69571,2,0,L|168:44,1,40,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,56,70238,6,0,L|24:84,2,80,6|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,152,72238,2,0,P|88:164|48:168,2,80,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,144,74238,6,0,L|301:163,2,80,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,240,76238,2,0,P|270:251|309:255,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,240,77571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
384,144,78238,6,0,B|376:104|376:104|352:72,2,80,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,144,80238,2,0,B|257:117|257:117|218:106,2,80,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,200,82238,6,0,B|268:248|324:224|324:224|364:248,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,284,84238,2,0,B|472:236|436:184|436:184|440:156,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,140,85571,2,0,L|348:116,1,40,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,104,86238,6,0,P|327:64|352:28,2,80,6|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,200,88238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
220,212,88904,2,0,L|136:224,2,80,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,200,90904,2,0,L|380:188,1,40,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,180,91571,6,0,L|412:96,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,36,92904,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,76,93571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
164,52,94238,2,0,P|152:112|168:168,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,216,95571,2,0,L|100:216,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,312,96904,6,0,L|280:312,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,272,98904,1,8,0:0:0:0:
428,200,99571,2,0,L|436:120,1,80
344,96,100904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,32,101571,2,0,L|232:36,1,40,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,40,102238,6,0,L|176:120,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,184,103571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
128,276,104238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
212,320,104904,2,0,B|249:332|283:302|283:302|318:272|359:274,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,276,106904,2,0,L|462:228,1,40,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,188,107571,6,0,P|480:152|476:108,2,80,6|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,136,109571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
324,64,110238,2,0,P|360:44|408:44,2,80,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,88,112238,2,0,L|192:94,1,40,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,96,112904,6,0,L|60:104,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,176,114238,1,2,0:0:0:0:
56,256,114904,1,8,0:0:0:0:
152,264,115571,2,0,L|240:264,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,172,116904,2,0,L|352:172,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,244,118238,6,0,P|440:172|412:100,1,160,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,36,120238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,76,120904,2,0,P|216:76|180:56,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,20,122238,1,2,0:0:0:0:
84,116,122904,2,0,L|80:168,1,40,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,204,123571,6,0,L|84:284,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,316,124904,1,2,0:0:0:0:
264,276,125571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
328,204,126238,2,0,L|340:44,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,28,128238,2,0,L|240:76,1,40,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,116,128904,6,0,P|199:134|159:138,1,80,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,208,130238,2,0,P|114:245|118:285,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,344,131571,2,0,P|229:326|269:322,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,256,132904,2,0,P|318:219|314:179,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,84,134238,6,0,B|236:60|188:80|188:80|144:104|72:84,2,240,6|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,112,138904,1,8,0:0:0:0:
384,208,139571,6,0,P|352:276|276:312,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,312,141571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
116,244,142238,2,0,P|108:208|116:164,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,76,143571,2,0,P|184:68|228:76,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,140,144904,5,12,0:0:0:0:
256,192,145571,8,0,148904,0:0:0:0:

Last edited by IamKwaN 11 years ago, edited 1 time in total.

Crystal

Former osu!catch Champion: 2018

1,123 posts

Joined June 2012

Topic Starter

Crystal 11 years ago

Julini wrote:
Mod-Request~ <3
Hard

00:01:571 add whistle
00:03:571 ^
00:07:571 ^
00:13:571 remove clap (doesn't really fit to this calm point)
00:14:904 ^
00:16:904 ^
00:18:904 ^ fixed all the above
00:34:238 remove clap i'd like keep a clap here, it fits the music more, imo <3
00:34:904 remove whistle ^
00:40:904 remove clap ^
00:42:904 ^ ^
00:43:571 ^ ^
00:54:071 add clap no sry, i think it's too noisy ;w;
01:10:071 ^ ^
01:14:238 remove clap fixed
01:31:238 (4,5) add claps
01:36:571 (4,5) ^
01:57:904 (5,6) ^
02:08:571 (5,6) ^ no sry, i think it's too noisy, too ;w;
02:09:904 add object sry no fix, i think it's enough
02:16:904 you could play a bit with the shape of this slider ^^ ok, will consider about this one <3
02:22:238 ^ ^

Hope I helped you a bit, though I couldn't find much but give some hitsound-advice ^^ A really nice song, it was fun to mod it thank you Julini, improved this mapset a lot xD

thanks for modding~

SUBSTAC9

288 posts

Joined May 2009

SUBSTAC9 11 years ago

Serena- wrote:
[STAC's Salad]
00:41:904 (8) - try to stack it on 00:41:238 (6) -
00:42:238 (1) - how about making a jump here? like 00:39:238 (2,3,4,5) - this pattern

ok change to new pattern style
thank you very much

update

SPOILER

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Shinonomegiku.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 84907
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 2
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Shinonomegiku
TitleUnicode:東雲菊
Artist:BURTON
ArtistUnicode:BURTON
Creator:[_Crystal]
Version:STAC's Salad
Source:ましろ色シンフォニー -Love is pure white-
Tags:Mashiro-iro Symphony original soundtrack ost SUBSTAC9 yf_bmp Kurokami Wafu IamKwaN
BeatmapID:390317
BeatmapSetID:152709

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.5
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"sana1.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,0,0,0

[TimingPoints]
238,666.666666666667,3,2,1,20,1,0
22238,-100,3,2,1,60,0,0
54238,-100,3,2,1,60,0,0
76238,-50,3,2,1,60,0,0
77571,-100,3,2,1,60,0,0
86238,666.666666666667,4,2,1,60,1,1
86238,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
91571,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
92238,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
94238,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
95571,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
104904,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
105571,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
107238,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
107571,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
110238,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
110904,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
118238,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
118904,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
134904,-100,4,2,1,55,0,1
136238,-100,4,2,1,50,0,1
137571,-100,4,2,1,45,0,1
138904,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
144904,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
146238,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
146904,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
147571,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
147904,-100,4,2,1,20,0,0
148238,-100,4,2,1,10,0,0
148571,-100,4,2,1,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 128,255,255
Combo2 : 128,128,255
Combo3 : 128,255,0

[HitObjects]
256,192,19571,12,0,21571,0:0:0:0:
384,192,22238,6,0,L|208:192,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,23238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,192,23571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,192,23904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,64,24238,2,0,L|304:64,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,128,25238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,128,25571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
48,192,25904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,208,26238,6,0,L|384:208,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,112,27238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,112,27571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,112,27904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,112,28238,2,0,L|128:112,2,75,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,192,29238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,112,29571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,192,29904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,192,30238,6,0,L|448:80,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,192,31238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,192,31571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,192,31904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,192,32238,6,0,L|64:80,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,80,33238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,192,33571,2,0,L|448:80,1,150,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,112,34571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,192,34904,6,0,L|80:272,2,75,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,192,35904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,192,36238,2,0,L|368:288,2,75,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,192,37238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,192,37571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,192,37904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,192,38238,6,0,L|272:96,1,150,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,64,39238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,64,39571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,64,39904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,176,40238,2,0,L|480:280,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,288,41238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,296,41571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,288,41904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,288,42238,6,0,L|448:144,2,150,2|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,288,44238,2,0,L|64:144,2,150,2|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,192,46238,6,0,L|352:192,2,150,2|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,47904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,192,48238,2,0,L|368:192,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,192,49238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,192,49571,2,0,L|160:192,2,150,10|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,192,51571,6,0,L|240:192,2,150,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,96,53238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,96,53571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,96,53904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,96,54238,6,0,P|432:160|384:240,1,150,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,55238,2,0,L|256:96,2,75,0|10|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,288,56238,2,0,P|80:224|128:144,1,150,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,96,57238,2,0,L|352:96,2,75,0|10|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,192,58238,6,0,P|160:240|208:192,1,150,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,128,59238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,192,59571,2,0,P|352:240|304:192,1,150,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,320,60571,2,0,L|160:320,2,75,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,320,61571,1,10,0:0:0:0:
256,272,61904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,320,62238,6,0,L|48:144,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,192,63238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,192,63571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,352,63904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,320,64238,2,0,L|464:144,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,64,65238,5,0,0:0:0:0:
272,64,65571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,64,65904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,64,66238,2,0,L|192:64,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,67238,2,0,L|80:288,2,75,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,112,68238,5,2,0:0:0:0:
256,48,68571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,112,68904,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,48,69238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
80,128,69571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,48,69904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,128,70238,6,0,L|336:272,1,150,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,128,71571,2,0,L|176:272,1,150,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,192,72571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,192,72904,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,192,73238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,192,73571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
368,192,74238,6,0,L|384:288,2,75,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,192,75238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,192,75571,2,0,L|128:288,2,75,8|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,192,76904,2,0,L|96:192,1,300,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,80,78238,6,0,L|240:80,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,80,79238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,80,79571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
240,192,79904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,192,80238,2,0,L|230:192,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,192,81238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,81571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
432,192,81904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,192,82238,6,0,L|96:192,1,300,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,84238,2,0,L|400:192,1,300,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,85738,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,192,85904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,192,86071,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,192,86238,1,4,0:0:0:0:
416,80,86904,6,0,L|416:176,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,192,87571,2,0,L|304:96,1,75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,80,88238,2,0,L|96:176,2,75,8|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,160,89238,6,0,L|160:240,1,75,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,160,89904,2,0,L|352:240,1,75,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,320,90571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,288,90904,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,320,91238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,320,91571,6,0,P|96:272|96:48,1,300,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,240,92904,2,0,P|368:208|352:96,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,176,94238,2,0,B|256:96|432:192,2,300,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,160,95904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,320,96238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
368,256,96571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,224,96738,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,192,96904,1,6,0:0:0:0:
120,192,97571,6,0,L|168:96,2,75,8|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,192,98904,1,8,0:0:0:0:
360,192,99238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,192,99571,2,0,L|352:96,2,150,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,101571,5,8,0:0:0:0:
368,192,101904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,192,102238,2,0,L|32:192,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,192,103571,2,0,L|480:192,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,112,104904,2,0,L|112:112,1,150,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,105571,6,0,L|352:192,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,192,106238,1,2,0:0:0:0:
208,192,106571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,106738,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,192,106904,1,2,0:0:0:0:
48,192,107238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,192,107571,6,0,L|384:96,1,150,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,112,108571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,108,108904,1,2,0:0:0:0:
128,112,109238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,112,109571,2,0,L|400:256,1,150,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,256,110571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,243,110904,5,8,0:0:0:0:
392,243,111238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,256,111571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,256,111904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,192,112238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
32,192,112571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,256,112904,6,0,L|416:256,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,192,113904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,192,114238,2,0,L|0:192,2,150,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,128,115904,5,0,0:0:0:0:
368,192,116238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
512,192,116571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,192,116904,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,128,117238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,192,117571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
512,192,117904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,192,118071,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,192,118238,6,0,B|160:192|160:192|128:32,1,300,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,80,119238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,144,119571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
416,160,119904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,144,120238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
416,160,120571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,272,120904,6,0,P|128:224|96:176,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,272,122238,2,0,P|384:224|416:176,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,96,123238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,192,123571,2,0,L|16:256,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,192,124571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,192,124904,6,0,L|432:256,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,288,125571,2,0,L|272:336,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,288,126238,2,0,L|160:192,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,192,126904,2,0,L|32:256,2,75,8|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,192,127904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,128071,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,192,128238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,192,128571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,192,128904,6,0,L|448:192,1,150,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,192,129904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,192,130238,2,0,L|368:192,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,192,131238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,131571,2,0,L|288:192,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,192,132571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,132904,2,0,L|432:192,2,150,2|8|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,134904,12,0,138238,0:0:0:0:
144,192,138904,5,8,0:0:0:0:
368,192,139238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,96,139571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,96,140238,5,8,0:0:0:0:
16,96,140571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,140904,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,288,141238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,141571,5,8,0:0:0:0:
256,96,141904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
496,96,142238,1,2,0:0:0:0:
384,192,142571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,142904,6,0,L|176:288,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,143571,2,0,L|336:288,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,192,144238,6,0,L|0:176,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,144904,12,0,148904,0:0:0:0:

Oracle

571 posts

Joined April 2012

Oracle 11 years ago

老星啊

Hard
irc modded

Wafu's Normal
You are using NC too often. Almost like a NC spam=.=. I suggest you remove 1 new combo from each 2
01:21:571 (3) - i'd prefer to put this downwards from 2 http://puu.sh/7YZG5.jpg to have a better flow transition to 01:22:238 (1) -
i have no complain besides, safe diff.

徒弟's Easy
OD+1吧 2→4→6的spread好点
00:49:571 (4) - 不是很建议结束在1/3的tick. 由于SV很低所以这里十分难读出节奏.很容易以为跟00:47:571 (2) - 是一样的。推荐缩短到00:49:904 - ,跟打节拍的1/2鼓。
01:12:238 (2) - 我会推荐跟01:14:238 (1) - 一样做成直的。看起来整洁点。
01:34:238 (4) - 中间的白线要不要用tick音?
01:39:571 (3) - 头上加个whistle然后尾巴加clap? 你长白线好像都加了,这里应该是漏了。
01:40:904 (4) - 漏了whistle?
没了,下次找你做GD!

Good Luck~

Crystal

Former osu!catch Champion: 2018

1,123 posts

Joined June 2012

Topic Starter

Crystal 11 years ago

Oracle wrote:
老星啊

Hard
irc modded
Good Luck~

SPOILER

2014-04-07 09:30 Oracle: 00:00:238 (1,2) - 
2014-04-07 09:30 Oracle: 比如这个
2014-04-07 09:31 Oracle: 实际上1的尾巴和2这两个音是一组的
2014-04-07 09:31 Oracle: 00:06:904 (1) - 应该像这个一样跟
2014-04-07 09:32 Oracle: 00:13:571 (1) - 然后这边  滑条尾巴压了一个重音
2014-04-07 09:32 Oracle: 是不太推荐的   
2014-04-07 09:32 Oracle: 做的时候尽量避免
2014-04-07 09:32 [_Crystal]: 猴
2014-04-07 09:32 Oracle: 因为滑条尾巴打击感弱
2014-04-07 09:32 Oracle: 所以不要拿来跟强的音
2014-04-07 09:32 [_Crystal]: 我改改看
2014-04-07 09:32 Oracle: 00:17:904 (2) - 这个也是
2014-04-07 09:33 Oracle: 但是这种点很多  都改的话简直成了remap了;w;
2014-04-07 09:33 Oracle: 以后做的时候注意一下
2014-04-07 09:33 [_Crystal]: 诶;w;
2014-04-07 09:33 [_Crystal]: 我后面很少有这样了诶
2014-04-07 09:34 Oracle: 如果不多就改改
2014-04-07 09:34 Oracle: 00:36:238 (1,2) - 
2014-04-07 09:34 Oracle: 这个  顺时针转一下
2014-04-07 09:34 Oracle: 稍微转一点点
2014-04-07 09:34 Oracle: 00:35:904 (4,1) - 这个flow比较歪
2014-04-07 09:34 Oracle: 转一下顺
2014-04-07 09:34 [_Crystal]: 00:36:238 (1,2) - 一起转?
2014-04-07 09:34 Oracle: en
2014-04-07 09:35 [_Crystal]: hou
2014-04-07 09:35 [_Crystal]: 大概多少度啊;w;
2014-04-07 09:35 Oracle: 我转转看。。
2014-04-07 09:37 Oracle: http://puu.sh/7YYlG.jpg
2014-04-07 09:37 Oracle: 大概这样  
2014-04-07 09:37 Oracle: 4也移动了一点
2014-04-07 09:38 [_Crystal]: 好
2014-04-07 09:38 Oracle: 01:13:571 (7) - 
2014-04-07 09:38 Oracle: 这个我会比较喜欢ctrl+G
2014-04-07 09:38 Oracle: 甩尾flow到8
2014-04-07 09:38 Oracle: 也顺不少
2014-04-07 09:39 Oracle: 01:20:238 (5) - 这个也是
2014-04-07 09:39 Oracle: ;w;我是转圈爱好者 你试试看觉得好就改
2014-04-07 09:40 [_Crystal]: 嗯
2014-04-07 09:40 Oracle: 我打起来是感觉爽一些
2014-04-07 09:41 [_Crystal]: 01:20:238 (5) - 这个调整之后后面的要不要调啊;w; 上次yf也说过这个我总感觉后面不太顺
2014-04-07 09:41 Oracle: 不用  
2014-04-07 09:42 Oracle: 顺着的  而且滑条跳circle  大跳都不怕
2014-04-07 09:42 [_Crystal]: k
2014-04-07 09:43 Oracle: 02:05:904 (4) - 这个我感觉放在3右下会好打点  可你的blanket就美丽了
2014-04-07 09:43 [_Crystal]: 我柑橘这个挺好啊;w;
2014-04-07 09:43 Oracle: 那就不改了  其实都行
2014-04-07 09:43 [_Crystal]: 嗯
2014-04-07 09:44 Oracle: 02:07:571 (3,4) - 这个的间距  希望还能小一点。。
2014-04-07 09:44 Oracle: 跟1/2好像
2014-04-07 09:44 Oracle: 我打的时候豪侠才能够嵯峨乐
2014-04-07 09:44 Oracle: 好像读错了*
2014-04-07 09:44 [_Crystal]: 红啊u
2014-04-07 09:44 [_Crystal]: 后啊
2014-04-07 09:44 Oracle: 02:16:571 (6,1) - 
2014-04-07 09:45 Oracle: 这两个  弄成三点一线  
2014-04-07 09:45 Oracle: http://puu.sh/7YYPj.jpg
2014-04-07 09:45 [_Crystal]: 我先把前面那个改完
2014-04-07 09:46 Oracle: 你savelog慢慢看\o/
2014-04-07 09:46 Oracle: 其他没啥了 
2014-04-07 09:46 [_Crystal]: 猴
2014-04-07 09:46 Oracle: 因为bpm很低  所以怎么打都不会怪的
2014-04-07 09:46 [_Crystal]: XD
2014-04-07 09:46 Oracle: 建议找狗
2014-04-07 09:47 [_Crystal]: 先拿水果还是先拿std都一样?
2014-04-07 09:47 Oracle: 拿得到哪个就去拿哪个
2014-04-07 09:47 [_Crystal]: hao
2014-04-07 09:47 Oracle: 我赶紧趁热打铁给你摸完
2014-04-07 09:47 Oracle: 不然又懒了

谢谢mod

IamKwaN

osu! Alumni

3,905 posts

Joined August 2012

IamKwaN 11 years ago

@master: only no fix that 1/3, 因為我主要都不是跟鼓

SPOILER

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Shinonomegiku.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 84907
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 0.8

[Metadata]
Title:Shinonomegiku
TitleUnicode:東雲菊
Artist:BURTON
ArtistUnicode:BURTON
Creator:[_Crystal]
Version:KwaN's Easy
Source:ましろ色シンフォニー -Love is pure white-
Tags:Mashiro-iro Symphony original soundtrack ost SUBSTAC9 yf_bmp Kurokami Wafu IamKwaN
BeatmapID:387799
BeatmapSetID:152709

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:2
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:2
SliderMultiplier:0.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"sana1.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,0,0,0

[TimingPoints]
238,666.666666666667,3,2,1,20,1,0
22238,-100,3,2,2,60,0,0
54238,-100,3,2,3,60,0,0
56238,-100,3,2,2,60,0,0
56404,-100,3,2,3,60,0,0
58238,-100,3,2,2,60,0,0
58404,-100,3,2,3,60,0,0
60238,-100,3,2,2,60,0,0
60404,-100,3,2,3,60,0,0
62238,-100,3,2,2,60,0,0
62404,-100,3,2,3,60,0,0
64238,-100,3,2,2,60,0,0
64404,-100,3,2,3,60,0,0
66238,-100,3,2,2,60,0,0
66404,-100,3,2,3,60,0,0
68238,-100,3,2,2,60,0,0
68404,-100,3,2,3,60,0,0
70238,-100,3,2,2,60,0,0
86238,666.666666666667,4,2,3,60,1,1
86238,-100,4,2,2,60,0,1
94904,-100,4,2,3,60,0,1
95071,-100,4,2,2,60,0,1
97571,-100,4,2,3,60,0,1
97738,-100,4,2,2,60,0,1
105571,-100,4,2,3,60,0,1
105738,-100,4,2,2,60,0,1
106571,-100,4,2,2,40,0,0
107238,-100,4,2,2,50,0,0
107571,-100,4,2,2,60,0,1
118904,-100,4,2,3,60,0,1
119071,-100,4,2,2,60,0,1
126904,-100,4,2,3,60,0,1
127071,-100,4,2,2,60,0,1
134904,-100,4,2,3,60,0,1
135071,-100,4,2,2,60,0,1
137571,-100,4,2,3,60,0,1
137738,-100,4,2,2,60,0,1
140238,-100,4,2,3,60,0,1
140404,-100,4,2,2,60,0,1
144904,-100,4,2,3,60,0,0
146238,-100,4,2,3,50,0,0
146904,-100,4,2,3,40,0,0
147571,-100,4,2,3,30,0,0
147904,-100,4,2,3,20,0,0
148238,-100,4,2,3,10,0,0
148571,-100,4,2,3,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 128,255,255
Combo2 : 128,128,255
Combo3 : 128,255,0

[HitObjects]
112,88,238,6,0,P|80:160|88:240,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,312,2238,2,0,P|228:332|305:311,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,280,4238,6,0,B|444:244|328:168|444:148|396:88,1,200,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,56,6238,2,0,P|288:76|208:56,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,32,8238,6,0,L|96:108,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,200,9571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
96,292,10238,2,0,L|120:368,2,80,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,96,13571,6,0,P|344:100|384:96,2,80,2|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,80,15571,2,0,P|168:76|128:80,2,80,2|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,168,17571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
120,252,18238,6,0,P|120:312|144:368,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,284,20238,2,0,L|460:284,1,200,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
484,244,22238,6,0,P|500:208|500:164,1,80,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,84,23571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
356,72,24238,2,0,P|316:72|280:92,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,152,25571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,204,26238,6,0,B|176:264|244:240|244:240|280:240,2,160,2|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,120,29571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,88,30238,6,0,L|256:104,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,164,31571,2,0,L|376:160,2,40,8|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,240,32904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,316,33571,2,0,L|160:308,1,40,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,300,34238,6,0,P|108:248|124:192,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,176,35238,2,0,L|156:168,1,40,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,108,36238,2,0,L|300:96,2,80,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,152,38238,6,0,P|128:192|140:232,1,80,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,184,39571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
236,280,40238,2,0,P|274:266|303:236,1,80,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,184,41571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
308,136,42238,6,0,P|348:128|388:136,2,80,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,136,44238,2,0,P|164:128|124:136,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,224,45571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
196,316,46238,6,0,P|236:308|276:316,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,332,47571,2,0,L|384:276,1,40,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,248,48238,2,0,L|412:168,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,76,49571,2,0,L|380:64,1,53.3333333333333,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,60,50238,6,0,P|276:88|260:172,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,256,52238,2,0,L|352:244,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,228,53571,2,0,L|442:177,1,40,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,140,54238,6,0,L|436:28,2,80,4|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,108,56238,2,0,L|344:-4,2,80,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,108,58238,6,0,L|256:-4,2,80,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,140,60238,2,0,L|164:28,2,80,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,236,62238,6,0,P|112:268|52:276,2,80,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,248,64238,2,0,P|227:296|176:330,2,80,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,184,66238,6,0,P|344:234|337:294,2,80,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,88,68238,2,0,P|315:33|290:-20,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,52,69571,2,0,L|168:44,1,40,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,56,70238,6,0,L|24:84,2,80,6|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,152,72238,2,0,L|48:172,2,80,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,144,74238,6,0,L|301:163,2,80,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,240,76238,2,0,L|312:260,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,240,77571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
384,144,78238,6,0,B|376:104|376:104|352:72,2,80,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,144,80238,2,0,B|257:117|257:117|218:106,2,80,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,200,82238,6,0,B|268:248|324:224|324:224|364:248,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,284,84238,2,0,B|472:236|436:184|436:184|440:156,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,140,85571,2,0,L|348:116,1,40,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,104,86238,6,0,P|327:64|352:28,2,80,6|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,200,88238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
220,212,88904,2,0,L|136:224,2,80,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,200,90904,2,0,L|380:188,1,40,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,180,91571,6,0,L|412:96,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,36,92904,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,76,93571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
164,52,94238,2,0,P|152:112|168:168,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,216,95571,2,0,L|100:216,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,312,96904,6,0,L|280:312,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,272,98904,1,8,0:0:0:0:
428,200,99571,2,0,L|436:120,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,96,100904,1,2,0:0:0:0:
272,32,101571,2,0,L|232:36,1,40,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,40,102238,6,0,L|176:120,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,184,103571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
128,276,104238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
212,320,104904,2,0,B|249:332|283:302|283:302|318:272|359:274,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,276,106904,2,0,L|462:228,1,40,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,188,107571,6,0,P|480:152|476:108,2,80,6|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,136,109571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
324,64,110238,2,0,P|360:44|408:44,2,80,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,88,112238,2,0,L|192:94,1,40,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,96,112904,6,0,L|60:104,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,176,114238,1,2,0:0:0:0:
56,256,114904,1,8,0:0:0:0:
152,264,115571,2,0,L|240:264,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,172,116904,2,0,L|352:172,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,244,118238,6,0,P|440:172|412:100,1,160,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,36,120238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,76,120904,2,0,P|216:76|180:56,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,20,122238,1,2,0:0:0:0:
84,116,122904,2,0,L|80:168,1,40,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,204,123571,6,0,L|84:284,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,316,124904,1,2,0:0:0:0:
264,276,125571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
328,204,126238,2,0,L|340:44,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,28,128238,2,0,L|240:76,1,40,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,116,128904,6,0,P|199:134|159:138,1,80,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,208,130238,2,0,P|114:245|118:285,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,344,131571,2,0,P|229:326|269:322,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,256,132904,2,0,P|318:219|314:179,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,84,134238,6,0,B|236:60|188:80|188:80|144:104|72:84,2,240,6|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,112,138904,1,8,0:0:0:0:
384,208,139571,6,0,P|352:276|276:312,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,312,141571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
116,244,142238,2,0,P|108:208|116:164,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,76,143571,2,0,P|184:68|228:76,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,140,144904,5,12,0:0:0:0:
256,192,145571,8,0,148904,0:0:0:0:

Kurokami

osu! Alumni

4,024 posts

Joined February 2010

Kurokami 11 years ago

Serena- wrote:
hi pm request~

[Kurokami's Platter]
its not a real problem, but note that there is only one HD in the diff. i know its hard to make a HD with bpm 90, but trying to move notes like these(00:32:238 (1) - ) and make a HD might be good also Might be, since to create a HDash I need 20 grid free grid line between notes with grid size 2. So its almost impossible to use HDashes on this map. Thats why I made "harder" dashes. But I was able to change this a bit.
00:50:279 (2) - i think placing this 00:50:321 - might sound better Actually it is at yellow tick. The feedback last till 321 but the main sound is there. If someone else also point this out I will change it.
00:54:238 (1) - stack this over 00:54:321 (2) - like the others? No, because this part is slightly different in rhythm from the others. And this is the start of that part so I think its acceptable to be like now. Although if a BAT recommend to change it then I will. And also there is a finish sound on it which I think its better to have harder jump pattern then the rest.

and to Kurokami srry for not responding to your mod cuz my computer cant read the beatmap file of my map T.T ill try to fix them as soon as possible. lol, try to re-download it. Most of the times it helpes. Or try to cut out the whole folder, press f5 at the song selection, place back then f5 again. It maybe helps. :3

Thanks for your mod. Although I just fixed one I think it was a good mod. Man, HDash with 90bpm is so impossible. orz

SPOILER

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Shinonomegiku.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 84907
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 2
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 8
GridSize: 16
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Shinonomegiku
TitleUnicode:東雲菊
Artist:BURTON
ArtistUnicode:BURTON
Creator:[_Crystal]
Version:Kurokami's Platter
Source:ましろ色シンフォニー -Love is pure white-
Tags:Mashiro-iro Symphony original soundtrack ost SUBSTAC9 yf_bmp Kurokami Wafu IamKwaN
BeatmapID:382311
BeatmapSetID:152709

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.5
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"sana1.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,0,0,0

[TimingPoints]
238,666.666666666667,3,2,1,20,1,0
19238,-66.6666666666667,3,2,1,20,0,0
19904,-100,3,2,1,20,0,0
22238,-100,3,2,1,60,0,0
44238,-100,3,2,1,50,0,0
44571,-100,3,2,1,40,0,0
44904,-100,3,2,1,30,0,0
45238,-100,3,2,1,20,0,0
45571,-100,3,2,1,60,0,0
54238,-100,3,2,1,60,0,0
76238,-50,3,2,1,60,0,0
77571,-100,3,2,1,60,0,0
86238,666.666666666667,4,2,1,60,1,1
86238,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
91571,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
92238,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
94238,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
95571,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
102238,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
102904,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
103571,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
104238,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
104904,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
105571,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
106571,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
107238,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
107571,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
110238,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
110904,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
115571,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
116238,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
118238,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
118904,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
126238,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
126904,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
131571,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
132238,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
136904,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
137571,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
139571,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
140238,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
142238,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
142904,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
144904,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
146238,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
146904,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
147571,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
147904,-100,4,2,1,20,0,0
148238,-100,4,2,1,10,0,0
148571,-100,4,2,1,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 128,255,255
Combo2 : 128,128,255
Combo3 : 128,255,0

[HitObjects]
416,288,238,5,2,0:0:0:0:
128,272,904,2,0,L|256:192,1,150,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,224,2238,6,0,L|144:144,2,150,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,64,4238,6,0,L|352:112,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,144,4904,2,0,L|224:160,2,75,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,112,5904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,96,6238,6,0,L|208:176,2,150,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,176,8238,6,0,L|384:192,2,37.5,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,192,8904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,160,9071,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,128,9238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,192,9571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,272,10238,6,0,L|64:192,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,192,10904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,144,11238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,11571,2,0,L|272:192,1,75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,144,12238,6,0,L|336:96,1,150,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,64,13571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,64,13904,1,2,0:0:0:0:
480,64,14238,6,0,L|400:64,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,96,14904,2,0,L|256:144,1,75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,208,15571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,288,15904,1,2,0:0:0:0:
16,208,16238,6,0,L|80:160,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,160,16904,2,0,L|272:112,1,75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,64,17571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,32,17904,1,2,0:0:0:0:
416,80,18238,6,0,L|496:112,2,75,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,96,19238,2,0,B|160:192|160:192|224:288,1,225.000008583069,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,20238,12,0,21904,0:0:0:0:
192,176,22238,6,0,L|112:144,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,112,22904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,112,23238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,192,23571,2,0,L|320:256,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,288,24238,6,0,L|32:256,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,192,24904,2,0,L|224:128,1,75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,80,25571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,48,25904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
16,80,26238,6,0,L|96:96,2,75,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,48,27238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,48,27571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,48,27904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,112,28238,6,0,L|416:160,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,176,28904,2,0,L|240:176,1,37.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,192,29238,2,0,L|320:256,1,75,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,272,29904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,256,30238,6,0,L|256:208,2,75,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,192,31238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,144,31571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
32,144,31904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,80,32238,6,0,L|352:80,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,80,32904,2,0,L|160:80,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,16,33571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,16,33738,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,16,33904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,112,34238,6,0,L|288:144,2,75,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,128,35238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
16,192,35571,2,0,L|96:192,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,192,36238,6,0,L|240:240,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,240,36904,2,0,L|400:304,1,75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,320,37571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
432,176,37904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,160,38238,6,0,L|112:32,1,150,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,32,39238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,96,39571,2,0,L|208:96,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,96,40238,6,0,L|336:96,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,160,40904,2,0,L|160:208,1,75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,272,41571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,320,41904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,192,42238,6,0,L|272:144,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,80,42904,2,0,L|400:80,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,80,43571,2,0,L|224:80,1,75,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,80,44238,5,2,0:0:0:0:
416,112,44321,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,144,44404,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,176,44488,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,208,44571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,224,44904,1,2,0:0:0:0:
96,256,44988,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,288,45071,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,320,45154,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,352,45238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,336,45571,2,0,L|384:288,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,192,46238,6,0,L|208:144,2,75,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,192,47238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,112,47571,1,10,0:0:0:0:
320,112,47904,1,2,0:0:0:0:
352,48,48238,6,0,L|416:96,2,75,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,48,49238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,112,49571,1,10,0:0:0:0:
144,112,49779,1,2,0:0:0:0:
336,176,49988,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,176,50238,5,0,0:0:0:0:
144,192,50279,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,208,50404,2,0,L|176:288,1,112.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,336,51238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,288,51571,2,0,L|112:240,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,192,52238,6,0,L|400:240,2,75,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,144,53238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,192,53571,2,0,L|288:128,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,64,54238,5,2,0:0:0:0:
192,64,54321,2,0,L|160:112,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,192,54904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,192,54988,2,0,L|304:240,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,256,55571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,256,55654,2,0,L|128:304,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,304,56238,5,2,0:0:0:0:
384,304,56321,2,0,L|416:256,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,192,56904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,192,56988,2,0,L|176:160,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,96,57571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
368,96,57654,2,0,L|416:64,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,80,58238,5,2,0:0:0:0:
192,80,58321,2,0,L|240:48,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,80,58904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
16,80,58988,2,0,L|64:112,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,160,59571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,160,59654,2,0,L|224:192,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,60238,5,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,60321,2,0,L|400:224,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,288,60904,2,0,L|240:240,1,75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,61571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,61654,2,0,L|400:160,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,144,62238,5,2,0:0:0:0:
160,144,62321,2,0,L|112:112,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,96,62904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,96,62988,2,0,L|384:64,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,48,63571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,48,63654,2,0,L|208:96,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,192,64238,5,2,0:0:0:0:
16,192,64321,2,0,L|64:224,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,240,64904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,240,64988,2,0,L|240:272,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,256,65571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
464,256,65654,2,0,L|432:208,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,160,66238,5,2,0:0:0:0:
288,128,66321,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,96,66404,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,48,66571,2,0,L|416:96,2,75,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,32,67571,2,0,L|336:32,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,48,68238,6,0,L|176:96,2,75,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,32,69238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,96,69571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,160,69904,1,2,0:0:0:0:
272,192,70071,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,224,70238,6,0,L|128:272,2,75,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,160,71238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,128,71571,2,0,L|224:80,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,32,72238,6,0,L|464:96,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,48,72904,2,0,L|224:112,1,75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,192,73571,2,0,L|336:192,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,208,74238,6,0,L|176:256,2,75,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,144,75238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
496,80,75571,2,0,L|432:32,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,48,76238,6,0,L|64:96,4,150,2|0|0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,32,77904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,80,78238,6,0,L|320:128,2,75,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,64,79238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,80,79571,2,0,L|208:144,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,192,80238,6,0,L|352:256,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,256,80904,2,0,L|208:192,1,75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,192,81571,2,0,L|64:128,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,96,82238,6,0,L|352:144,2,75,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,32,83238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,96,83571,2,0,L|240:160,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,144,84238,6,0,L|416:192,2,75,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,96,85238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,160,85571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,224,85904,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,272,86071,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,272,86238,6,0,L|192:192,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,128,87238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,112,87571,2,0,L|224:64,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,64,88238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,64,88571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
16,48,88904,6,0,L|80:96,2,75,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,64,89904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,64,90238,2,0,L|352:64,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,64,90904,2,0,L|96:128,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,144,91571,6,0,B|480:240|480:240|368:352,1,300,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,304,92571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,240,92904,2,0,L|240:240,2,75,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,160,93904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,16,94238,6,0,B|480:96|480:96|384:176|384:176,2,300,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,304,95904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,176,96238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,176,96571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,128,96738,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,80,96904,6,0,L|192:0,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,0,97904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,0,98238,2,0,L|128:48,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,80,98904,1,8,0:0:0:0:
80,128,99238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,192,99571,6,0,L|224:192,2,75,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,256,100571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,272,100904,2,0,L|224:224,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,192,101571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,128,101904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,32,102238,6,0,L|336:112,2,150,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,16,103238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
16,32,103571,2,0,B|144:112|144:112|16:192,1,300,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,224,104571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,208,104904,6,0,B|288:128|288:128|416:48,1,300,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,32,105904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,48,106238,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,96,106571,5,8,0:0:0:0:
160,112,106738,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,128,106904,1,2,0:0:0:0:
272,192,107238,1,2,0:0:0:0:
480,192,107571,6,0,L|352:272,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,288,108571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,192,108904,1,2,0:0:0:0:
80,96,109238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,64,109571,2,0,L|256:64,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,112,110238,6,0,B|352:192|352:192|480:272,1,300,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,320,111238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,272,111571,2,0,L|144:224,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,144,112238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,96,112571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,80,112904,6,0,L|288:32,2,75,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,96,113904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,144,114238,2,0,L|256:192,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,192,114904,2,0,L|400:240,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,272,115571,6,0,B|240:192|240:192|112:112,1,300,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,64,116571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,48,116904,2,0,L|160:0,1,75,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,16,117571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,64,117904,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,112,118071,1,8,0:0:0:0:
384,160,118238,6,0,B|256:240|256:240|384:320,1,300,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,240,119238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,240,119571,2,0,L|320:240,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,240,120238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,160,120571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,128,120904,6,0,L|0:96,2,75,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,160,121904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
496,176,122238,2,0,L|448:240,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,240,122904,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,240,123238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,192,123571,6,0,L|272:112,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,96,124571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,112,124904,2,0,L|320:48,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,96,125571,2,0,L|112:32,1,75,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,112,126238,6,0,B|448:192|448:192|320:272,1,300,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,192,127238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,192,127571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
80,176,127904,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,128,128071,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,80,128238,1,2,0:0:0:0:
16,48,128571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
304,80,128904,6,0,L|224:208,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,256,129904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,208,130238,2,0,L|160:256,2,75,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,160,131238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,208,131571,6,0,B|96:128|96:128|224:48,1,300,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,112,132571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,208,132904,2,0,L|176:144,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,160,133571,2,0,L|352:96,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,208,134238,6,0,L|192:208,2,75,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,208,135238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,208,135571,2,0,L|160:144,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,128,136238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,48,136571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,48,136904,6,0,B|192:128|192:128|320:208,1,300,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,128,137904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,208,138238,2,0,L|272:272,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,272,138904,2,0,L|112:272,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,288,139571,6,0,B|496:208|496:208|368:128,1,300,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,96,140571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,128,140904,2,0,L|320:192,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,240,141571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,320,141904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,320,142238,6,0,B|160:240|160:240|32:160,1,300,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,80,143238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,112,143571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
272,192,143904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,272,144238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,304,144571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,144904,12,0,148904,0:0:0:0:

yurunneram

682 posts

Joined January 2012

yurunneram 11 years ago

mod mod OwO)/ Hello there~

EASY

00:06:238 (2) - I would NC here instead but it really depends on who ur askin

00:11:904 - Wana add a break here? it's easy so a short break like that is reasonable

00:41:571 (4) - Don't think you should understack for easy. just recommendation

01:40:904 (4) - Move to x368 y52 for better flow

Omg this is like the perfect Easy diff~ God if it was my first time playing osu! I would want this map so bad. I star you for this

NORMAL

Nothing

HARD

01:05:571 (3) - I would ctrl + J + < this thing for better flow

Not much. Nice hard

No kudos thanks

Have a nice day ^^)/

Crystal

Former osu!catch Champion: 2018

1,123 posts

Joined June 2012

Topic Starter

Crystal 11 years ago

yurunneram wrote:
mod mod OwO)/ Hello there~

HARD

01:05:571 (3) - I would ctrl + J + < this thing for better flow

Not much. Nice hard

No kudos thanks

Have a nice day ^^)/

thanks for modding~ sorry for not noticing "no kds" orz

IamKwaN

osu! Alumni

3,905 posts

Joined August 2012

IamKwaN 11 years ago

yurunneram wrote:
mod mod OwO)/ Hello there~ Hi!

EASY

00:06:238 (2) - I would NC here instead but it really depends on who ur askin no, I wanna maintain the consistent NC pattern

00:11:904 - Wana add a break here? it's easy so a short break like that is reasonable It's too short lol

00:41:571 (4) - Don't think you should understack for easy. just recommendation I think it's okay :c

01:40:904 (4) - Move to x368 y52 for better flow Fix this one!

Omg this is like the perfect Easy diff~ God if it was my first time playing osu! I would want this map so bad. I star you for this Thanks! <3

SPOILER

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Shinonomegiku.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 84907
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 0.8

[Metadata]
Title:Shinonomegiku
TitleUnicode:東雲菊
Artist:BURTON
ArtistUnicode:BURTON
Creator:[_Crystal]
Version:KwaN's Easy
Source:ましろ色シンフォニー -Love is pure white-
Tags:Mashiro-iro Symphony original soundtrack ost SUBSTAC9 yf_bmp Kurokami Wafu IamKwaN
BeatmapID:387799
BeatmapSetID:152709

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:2
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:2
SliderMultiplier:0.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"sana1.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,0,0,0

[TimingPoints]
238,666.666666666667,3,2,1,20,1,0
22238,-100,3,2,2,60,0,0
54238,-100,3,2,3,60,0,0
56238,-100,3,2,2,60,0,0
56404,-100,3,2,3,60,0,0
58238,-100,3,2,2,60,0,0
58404,-100,3,2,3,60,0,0
60238,-100,3,2,2,60,0,0
60404,-100,3,2,3,60,0,0
62238,-100,3,2,2,60,0,0
62404,-100,3,2,3,60,0,0
64238,-100,3,2,2,60,0,0
64404,-100,3,2,3,60,0,0
66238,-100,3,2,2,60,0,0
66404,-100,3,2,3,60,0,0
68238,-100,3,2,2,60,0,0
68404,-100,3,2,3,60,0,0
70238,-100,3,2,2,60,0,0
86238,666.666666666667,4,2,3,60,1,1
86238,-100,4,2,2,60,0,1
94904,-100,4,2,3,60,0,1
95071,-100,4,2,2,60,0,1
97571,-100,4,2,3,60,0,1
97738,-100,4,2,2,60,0,1
105571,-100,4,2,3,60,0,1
105738,-100,4,2,2,60,0,1
106571,-100,4,2,2,40,0,0
107238,-100,4,2,2,50,0,0
107571,-100,4,2,2,60,0,1
118904,-100,4,2,3,60,0,1
119071,-100,4,2,2,60,0,1
126904,-100,4,2,3,60,0,1
127071,-100,4,2,2,60,0,1
134904,-100,4,2,3,60,0,1
135071,-100,4,2,2,60,0,1
137571,-100,4,2,3,60,0,1
137738,-100,4,2,2,60,0,1
140238,-100,4,2,3,60,0,1
140404,-100,4,2,2,60,0,1
144904,-100,4,2,3,60,0,0
146238,-100,4,2,3,50,0,0
146904,-100,4,2,3,40,0,0
147571,-100,4,2,3,30,0,0
147904,-100,4,2,3,20,0,0
148238,-100,4,2,3,10,0,0
148571,-100,4,2,3,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 128,255,255
Combo2 : 128,128,255
Combo3 : 128,255,0

[HitObjects]
112,88,238,6,0,P|80:160|88:240,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,312,2238,2,0,P|228:332|305:311,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,280,4238,6,0,B|444:244|328:168|444:148|396:88,1,200,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,56,6238,2,0,P|288:76|208:56,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,32,8238,6,0,L|96:108,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,200,9571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
96,292,10238,2,0,L|120:368,2,80,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,96,13571,6,0,P|344:100|384:96,2,80,2|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,80,15571,2,0,P|168:76|128:80,2,80,2|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,168,17571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
120,252,18238,6,0,P|120:312|144:368,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,284,20238,2,0,L|460:284,1,200,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
484,244,22238,6,0,P|500:208|500:164,1,80,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,84,23571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
356,72,24238,2,0,P|316:72|280:92,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,152,25571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,204,26238,6,0,B|176:264|244:240|244:240|280:240,2,160,2|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,120,29571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,88,30238,6,0,L|256:104,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,164,31571,2,0,L|376:160,2,40,8|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,240,32904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,316,33571,2,0,L|160:308,1,40,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,300,34238,6,0,P|108:248|124:192,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,176,35238,2,0,L|156:168,1,40,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,108,36238,2,0,L|300:96,2,80,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,152,38238,6,0,P|128:192|140:232,1,80,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,184,39571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
236,280,40238,2,0,P|274:266|303:236,1,80,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,184,41571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
308,136,42238,6,0,P|348:128|388:136,2,80,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,136,44238,2,0,P|164:128|124:136,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,224,45571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
196,316,46238,6,0,P|236:308|276:316,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,332,47571,2,0,L|384:276,1,40,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,248,48238,2,0,L|412:168,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,76,49571,2,0,L|380:64,1,53.3333333333333,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,60,50238,6,0,P|276:88|260:172,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,256,52238,2,0,L|352:244,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,228,53571,2,0,L|442:177,1,40,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,140,54238,6,0,L|436:28,2,80,4|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,108,56238,2,0,L|344:-4,2,80,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,108,58238,6,0,L|256:-4,2,80,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,140,60238,2,0,L|164:28,2,80,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,236,62238,6,0,P|112:268|52:276,2,80,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,248,64238,2,0,P|227:296|176:330,2,80,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,184,66238,6,0,P|344:234|337:294,2,80,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,88,68238,2,0,P|315:33|290:-20,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,52,69571,2,0,L|168:44,1,40,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,56,70238,6,0,L|24:84,2,80,6|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,152,72238,2,0,L|48:172,2,80,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,144,74238,6,0,L|301:163,2,80,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,240,76238,2,0,L|312:260,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,240,77571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
384,144,78238,6,0,B|376:104|376:104|352:72,2,80,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,144,80238,2,0,B|257:117|257:117|218:106,2,80,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,200,82238,6,0,B|268:248|324:224|324:224|364:248,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,284,84238,2,0,B|472:236|436:184|436:184|440:156,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,140,85571,2,0,L|348:116,1,40,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,104,86238,6,0,P|327:64|352:28,2,80,6|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,200,88238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
220,212,88904,2,0,L|136:224,2,80,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,200,90904,2,0,L|380:188,1,40,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,180,91571,6,0,L|412:96,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,36,92904,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,76,93571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
164,52,94238,2,0,P|152:112|168:168,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,216,95571,2,0,L|100:216,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,312,96904,6,0,L|280:312,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,272,98904,1,8,0:0:0:0:
428,200,99571,2,0,L|436:120,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,52,100904,1,2,0:0:0:0:
272,32,101571,2,0,L|232:36,1,40,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,40,102238,6,0,L|176:120,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,184,103571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
128,276,104238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
212,320,104904,2,0,B|249:332|283:302|283:302|318:272|359:274,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,276,106904,2,0,L|462:228,1,40,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,188,107571,6,0,P|480:152|476:108,2,80,6|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,136,109571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
324,64,110238,2,0,P|360:44|408:44,2,80,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,88,112238,2,0,L|192:94,1,40,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,96,112904,6,0,L|60:104,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,176,114238,1,2,0:0:0:0:
56,256,114904,1,8,0:0:0:0:
152,264,115571,2,0,L|240:264,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,172,116904,2,0,L|352:172,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,244,118238,6,0,P|440:172|412:100,1,160,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,36,120238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,76,120904,2,0,P|216:76|180:56,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,20,122238,1,2,0:0:0:0:
84,116,122904,2,0,L|80:168,1,40,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,204,123571,6,0,L|84:284,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,316,124904,1,2,0:0:0:0:
264,276,125571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
328,204,126238,2,0,L|340:44,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,28,128238,2,0,L|240:76,1,40,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,116,128904,6,0,P|199:134|159:138,1,80,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,208,130238,2,0,P|114:245|118:285,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,344,131571,2,0,P|229:326|269:322,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,256,132904,2,0,P|318:219|314:179,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,84,134238,6,0,B|236:60|188:80|188:80|144:104|72:84,2,240,6|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,112,138904,1,8,0:0:0:0:
384,208,139571,6,0,P|352:276|276:312,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,312,141571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
116,244,142238,2,0,P|108:208|116:164,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,76,143571,2,0,P|184:68|228:76,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,140,144904,5,12,0:0:0:0:
256,192,145571,8,0,148904,0:0:0:0:

riffy

osu! Alumni

8,061 posts

Joined December 2010

riffy 11 years ago

Yo, as requested.

[General]

The BG is really nice, but according to the rules it is better to use 1024x768 BG. So, here's a 1024x768 version of the BG.
Please, disable Widescreen Support since it makes no sense to keep it enaled here.
Your colours are so bright and cheerful, they don't work well with the BG, imo. How about something a bit darker and more depressing?
Note: perhaps, yiou can pick some better colours. I'm just showing you what approximately I want you to do.
Well, maybe not so depressing.
```
[img]http://puu.sh/84mKP.png[/img]
[Colours]
Combo1 : 170,187,180
Combo2 : 124,159,231
Combo3 : 182,148,176
```

[KwaN's Easy]

01:08:238 (2) - nazi -just a really minor thing. The slider is way too close to HP-Bar, and tail of the slider may be overlapped with the HP-Bar. Moving the slider a bit down or curving it more will not hurt too much.
01:18:238 (1,2) - using red nods/anchors here is not a good decision, imo. The sound is very soft, therefore it's better to keep shapes relaxing and soft, as well. Come n, admit it, you like the softer shape more! please ;_;
Note: oh, and blanket at 01:22:238 (1) - could be also improved.
01:24:238 (2) - the path of this slider is pretty hard to read. I would go with something less complicated, be gentle with beginners!
01:34:238 (4) - ahh, come on. The blanket here would be a good idea, but maybe I'm going TOO nazi. Sorry.
01:36:571 - maybe the only thing that really worth considering is mapping this beat. The sound here is pretty strong and mapable. Try this pattern or something like this, should fit with the music.

Great diff, awesome rhythm and hitsounding. Amazing!

[Wafu's Normal]

Try to use less new combos. Your diff seems overloaded with them, placing NC every second downbeat big white line may work better.Your combos are way too short as they are, imo.
00:19:738 (1) - the mapset has no Mania/Taiko diffs, so players may play your diff in different modes. 1/4 pattern is definetly confusing and weird for a Normal diff, so I recommend you to start spinner exactly where it should start (on 00:20:238) or replace it with a 2/1 slider.
Note: 02:25:071 (1) - the same here.
01:09:904 - how about a circle here? Or you can turn (3) into 1/2 slider, so the beat at 01:09:904 - won't be ignored. See for yourself, but I would map this beat.
01:31:571 (1) - no way, man! Come on, you can map this part much better! Do not ruin awesome rhythm, show us your creativity. Long sliders are not interesting to play, huh? How about something a bit more complicated?
Note: Normal diff should be harder than Easy, right?
02:25:571 (2) - Consider adding a NC on this spinner. You know, AIBat never lies~

Awesome rhythm and hitsounding. I would like to see some harder patterns and more of your creativity. And comboing should be fixed. Otherwise, that's a pretty cool diff.

[Hard]
The diff itself is overloaded with jumps. Maybe it feels more like Hard+ but that's okay. The diff is still fun to play and jumps are understandable.

As we've discussed in-game, get some help with the hitsounds. Some more experienced hitsounders would turn your diff into masterpiece!
00:38:071 (5) - overapping spoils the pleasure from playing your diff. Please, do not place objects if there's nothing to map in music.
00:44:238 (1) - that echo sounds like 1/6 beats, if you want to make your diff a bit more challenging, go ahead and use 1/6 here. example
Note: Otherwise, just place a couple of 1/2 sliders to follow the sound. If you don't want to use complicated rhythm. example
00:54:071 (3) - overmapping again. There's NO reason to place any beats if there's no music. In fact, you've got a lot of ignored 1/4 beats, if you want to make your diff harder go andmap them instead of overmapping, please!
01:46:571 (1,2) - well, since you've got new combo there, you might also want to put new combo on 02:08:071 (4) - to keep consistency.

Pretty nice diff, enjoyed testing it.

Nice mapset, keep up the good work!

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Best of luck!

Crystal

Former osu!catch Champion: 2018

1,123 posts

Joined June 2012

Topic Starter

Crystal 11 years ago

-Bakari- wrote:
Yo, as requested. <3 thanks

[General]
The BG is really nice, but according to the rules it is better to use 1024x768 BG. So, here's a 1024x768 version of the BG. oh :3 thanks, changed
Please, disable Widescreen Support since it makes no sense to keep it enaled here. fixed
Your colours are so bright and cheerful, they don't work well with the BG, imo. How about something a bit darker and more depressing? fixed as you recommended below :3
Note: perhaps, yiou can pick some better colours. I'm just showing you what approximately I want you to do.
Well, maybe not so depressing.
[img]http://puu.sh/84mKP.png[/img]
[Colours]
Combo1 : 170,187,180
Combo2 : 124,159,231
Combo3 : 182,148,176
[Hard]
The diff itself is overloaded with jumps. Maybe it feels more like Hard+ but that's okay. The diff is still fun to play and jumps are understandable. i think the low bpm of the song won't be fine if i map an insane diff :3 so i set some jump in hard diff
As we've discussed in-game, get some help with the hitsounds. Some more experienced hitsounders would turn your diff into masterpiece! :3
00:38:071 (5) - overapping spoils the pleasure from playing your diff. Please, do not place objects if there's nothing to map in music. fixed
00:44:238 (1) - that echo sounds like 1/6 beats, if you want to make your diff a bit more challenging, go ahead and use 1/6 here. example
Note: Otherwise, just place a couple of 1/2 sliders to follow the sound. If you don't want to use complicated rhythm. example this is not exact 1/6, imo. because i tried 1/6 and it seems bad when using this
00:54:071 (3) - overmapping again. There's NO reason to place any beats if there's no music. In fact, you've got a lot of ignored 1/4 beats, if you want to make your diff harder go andmap them instead of overmapping, please! fixed
01:46:571 (1,2) - well, since you've got new combo there, you might also want to put new combo on 02:08:071 (4) - to keep consistency. hmm... it doesn't look pretty if add nc at 02:08:071 (4) - , imo. because this slider begins at 1/4 ;w; but will consider to change it if others also metion it xD

Pretty nice diff, enjoyed testing it. thanks~~!
Nice mapset, keep up the good work! xD

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Best of luck! <333

thanks for the helpful mod~~!!

IamKwaN

osu! Alumni

3,905 posts

Joined August 2012

IamKwaN 11 years ago

@Bakari: Fix all except the last one coz it seems too difficult lol

SPOILER

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Shinonomegiku.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 84907
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 0.8

[Metadata]
Title:Shinonomegiku
TitleUnicode:東雲菊
Artist:BURTON
ArtistUnicode:BURTON
Creator:[_Crystal]
Version:KwaN's Easy
Source:ましろ色シンフォニー -Love is pure white-
Tags:Mashiro-iro Symphony original soundtrack ost SUBSTAC9 yf_bmp Kurokami Wafu IamKwaN
BeatmapID:387799
BeatmapSetID:152709

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:2
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:2
SliderMultiplier:0.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"sana1.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,0,0,0

[TimingPoints]
238,666.666666666667,3,2,1,20,1,0
22238,-100,3,2,2,60,0,0
54238,-100,3,2,3,60,0,0
56238,-100,3,2,2,60,0,0
56404,-100,3,2,3,60,0,0
58238,-100,3,2,2,60,0,0
58404,-100,3,2,3,60,0,0
60238,-100,3,2,2,60,0,0
60404,-100,3,2,3,60,0,0
62238,-100,3,2,2,60,0,0
62404,-100,3,2,3,60,0,0
64238,-100,3,2,2,60,0,0
64404,-100,3,2,3,60,0,0
66238,-100,3,2,2,60,0,0
66404,-100,3,2,3,60,0,0
68238,-100,3,2,2,60,0,0
68404,-100,3,2,3,60,0,0
70238,-100,3,2,2,60,0,0
86238,666.666666666667,4,2,3,60,1,1
86238,-100,4,2,2,60,0,1
94904,-100,4,2,3,60,0,1
95071,-100,4,2,2,60,0,1
97571,-100,4,2,3,60,0,1
97738,-100,4,2,2,60,0,1
105571,-100,4,2,3,60,0,1
105738,-100,4,2,2,60,0,1
106571,-100,4,2,2,40,0,0
107238,-100,4,2,2,50,0,0
107571,-100,4,2,2,60,0,1
118904,-100,4,2,3,60,0,1
119071,-100,4,2,2,60,0,1
126904,-100,4,2,3,60,0,1
127071,-100,4,2,2,60,0,1
134904,-100,4,2,3,60,0,1
135071,-100,4,2,2,60,0,1
137571,-100,4,2,3,60,0,1
137738,-100,4,2,2,60,0,1
140238,-100,4,2,3,60,0,1
140404,-100,4,2,2,60,0,1
144904,-100,4,2,3,60,0,0
146238,-100,4,2,3,50,0,0
146904,-100,4,2,3,40,0,0
147571,-100,4,2,3,30,0,0
147904,-100,4,2,3,20,0,0
148238,-100,4,2,3,10,0,0
148571,-100,4,2,3,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 170,187,180
Combo2 : 124,159,231
Combo3 : 182,148,176

[HitObjects]
112,88,238,6,0,P|80:160|88:240,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,312,2238,2,0,P|228:332|305:311,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,280,4238,6,0,B|444:244|328:168|444:148|396:88,1,200,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,56,6238,2,0,P|288:76|208:56,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,32,8238,6,0,L|96:108,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,200,9571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
96,292,10238,2,0,L|120:368,2,80,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,96,13571,6,0,P|344:100|384:96,2,80,2|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,80,15571,2,0,P|168:76|128:80,2,80,2|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,168,17571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
120,252,18238,6,0,P|120:312|144:368,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,284,20238,2,0,L|460:284,1,200,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
484,244,22238,6,0,P|500:208|500:164,1,80,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,84,23571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
356,72,24238,2,0,P|316:72|280:92,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,152,25571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,204,26238,6,0,B|176:264|244:240|244:240|280:240,2,160,2|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,120,29571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,88,30238,6,0,L|256:104,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,164,31571,2,0,L|376:160,2,40,8|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,240,32904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,316,33571,2,0,L|160:308,1,40,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,300,34238,6,0,P|108:248|124:192,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,176,35238,2,0,L|156:168,1,40,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,108,36238,2,0,L|300:96,2,80,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,152,38238,6,0,P|128:192|140:232,1,80,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,184,39571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
236,280,40238,2,0,P|274:266|303:236,1,80,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,184,41571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
308,136,42238,6,0,P|348:128|388:136,2,80,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,136,44238,2,0,P|164:128|124:136,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,224,45571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
196,316,46238,6,0,P|236:308|276:316,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,332,47571,2,0,L|384:276,1,40,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,248,48238,2,0,L|412:168,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,76,49571,2,0,L|380:64,1,53.3333333333333,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,60,50238,6,0,P|276:88|260:172,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,256,52238,2,0,L|352:244,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,228,53571,2,0,L|442:177,1,40,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,140,54238,6,0,L|436:28,2,80,4|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,108,56238,2,0,L|344:-4,2,80,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,108,58238,6,0,L|256:-4,2,80,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,140,60238,2,0,L|164:28,2,80,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,236,62238,6,0,P|112:268|52:276,2,80,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,248,64238,2,0,P|227:296|176:330,2,80,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,184,66238,6,0,P|344:234|337:294,2,80,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,88,68238,2,0,P|320:48|308:12,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,52,69571,2,0,L|164:44,1,40,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,56,70238,6,0,L|20:84,2,80,6|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,152,72238,2,0,L|48:172,2,80,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,144,74238,6,0,L|301:163,2,80,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,240,76238,2,0,L|312:260,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,240,77571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
384,144,78238,6,0,B|376:104|344:72,2,80,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,152,80238,2,0,B|257:124|212:118,2,80,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,3:0:0:0:
212,212,82238,6,0,B|268:260|324:236|324:236|364:260,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,280,84238,2,0,B|476:220|448:164,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,144,85571,2,0,L|352:120,1,40,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,96,86238,6,0,P|331:56|356:20,2,80,6|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,192,88238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
220,204,88904,2,0,L|136:216,2,80,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,192,90904,2,0,L|380:180,1,40,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,172,91571,6,0,L|412:88,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,28,92904,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,68,93571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
164,44,94238,2,0,P|152:104|168:160,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,208,95571,2,0,L|100:208,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,304,96904,6,0,L|272:304,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,264,98904,1,8,0:0:0:0:
428,200,99571,2,0,L|436:120,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,56,100904,1,2,0:0:0:0:
272,32,101571,2,0,L|232:36,1,40,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,40,102238,6,0,L|176:120,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,184,103571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
128,276,104238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
212,320,104904,2,0,B|249:332|283:302|283:302|318:272|359:274,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,276,106904,2,0,L|462:228,1,40,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,188,107571,6,0,P|480:152|476:108,2,80,6|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,136,109571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
324,64,110238,2,0,P|360:44|408:44,2,80,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,88,112238,2,0,L|192:94,1,40,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,96,112904,6,0,L|60:104,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,176,114238,1,2,0:0:0:0:
56,256,114904,1,8,0:0:0:0:
152,264,115571,2,0,L|240:264,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,172,116904,2,0,L|352:172,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,244,118238,6,0,P|440:172|412:100,1,160,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,36,120238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,76,120904,2,0,P|216:76|180:56,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,20,122238,1,2,0:0:0:0:
84,116,122904,2,0,L|80:168,1,40,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,204,123571,6,0,L|84:284,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,316,124904,1,2,0:0:0:0:
264,276,125571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
328,204,126238,2,0,L|340:44,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,28,128238,2,0,L|240:76,1,40,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,116,128904,6,0,P|199:134|159:138,1,80,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,208,130238,2,0,P|114:245|118:285,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,344,131571,2,0,P|229:326|269:322,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,256,132904,2,0,P|318:219|314:179,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,84,134238,6,0,B|236:60|188:80|188:80|144:104|72:84,2,240,6|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,112,138904,1,8,0:0:0:0:
384,208,139571,6,0,P|352:276|276:312,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,312,141571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
116,244,142238,2,0,P|108:208|116:164,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,76,143571,2,0,P|184:68|228:76,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,140,144904,5,12,0:0:0:0:
256,192,145571,8,0,148904,0:0:0:0:

Kamio Misuzu

580 posts

Joined November 2012

Kamio Misuzu 11 years ago

[General]
S:C1的whistle音换一个清脆一点的铃音怎么样？比如这个

http://puu.sh/84sH1.wav 对比了半天发现没更合适的了。。这个虽然也不是那么完美

如果加了这个音的话前面那一段soft1的whistle音需要稍微调一下了（现在也OK，加不加看你吧~）
[Hard]
00:08:238 (2) - 这里用一个1/8或许1/12更佳/w\的折返slider怎么样？突出那个叮铃铃的声音

00:11:571 (4) - 这个折返没什么必要啊，因为只有开头是有音的，后面很违和。这里不要overmap吧，开头处一个note就够了

00:34:238 (4,1,2,3,4) - 4到1这个过渡说不出的难受，因为你这里4-1很近，而后面连着几个远距离的跳，心里很发虚的。你是是这样的，4-1就放开点

SPOILER

00:36:238 (1) - 如果你要是改了上面那条的话，这个slider和后面的就得相应变一下了。前面向上弯了，这里向下折一下感觉可能不错

SPOILER

00:39:571 (4,1,2) - 和刚刚有点相似，参照着差不多改一下

01:08:238 (3,4,5,6,1) - 不弄个五角星么？美观点，就像这里一样01:44:904 (1,2,3,4,5) -

[Wafu's Normal]
02:00:904 (1,3) - blanket

02:03:571 (1,3) - ^

[KwaN's Easy]
没啥问题，挺好

没了o.o，纯白好评，来一发~☆ Good Luck！

Wafu

1,703 posts

Joined June 2011

Wafu 11 years ago

Fixed everything in Bakari's mod. Thanks~
Didn't use exactly the patterns you gave me, but I just fixed the problems by myself

yf_bmp

Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper

1,634 posts

Joined December 2011

yf_bmp 11 years ago

sound-effect-recheck

[Hard]
默认whistle有些滥用一些应该比较安静的地方加了反而会影响效果
比如
00:01:571 (2) -
00:03:571 (2) -
00:06:904 (1) - 首尾
00:08:904 (3) -
00:11:571 (4) - 尾
00:14:904 (3) -
00:16:904 (3) -
00:19:571 (5) - 头
这样试试少一点的默认whistle会更有意境

再看下默认whistle用的大部分都是一个白线一个whistle 这样会使人觉得音效有些空洞因为音乐本身有些地方是有起伏的
如果是一个白线一个whistle这样很规则的话重音全在白线上就不太好了
比如00:04:904 (2) - 这里的whistle加在尾上会比较好
00:10:904 (3) - ^
后面部分的whistle的节奏没什么大碍

漏音效:
仔细听音乐本身的乐器
像这里00:23:238 (3) - 听这里音乐的乐器这里尾部应该加上自定义whistle
00:25:238 (3) - ^
00:27:238 (4) - ^
00:28:904 (7) - 这个whistle不是加在头上的是在折返处的
00:30:904 (2) - 尾whistle
00:32:904 (2) - ^
00:34:238 (4) - 头上的clap加上去完全不合音乐本身应该像之前一样加上whistle才是
00:34:904 (1,2) - 一样(1)上应该去掉whistle, 而是加在2上
00:36:904 (2) - 尾whistle
00:38:904 (3) - ^
00:40:904 (3) - 加错位置
00:42:904 (2) - ^
00:45:238 (3) - whistle
00:52:904 (4) - 头去掉clap 尾加whistle

00:27:571 (5) - 头换clap
00:31:571 (3) - 换clap
00:33:571 (3) - ^
00:35:571 (3) - ^
00:53:571 (1) - clap
00:57:571 (6) - 头clap
00:59:571 (5) - clap
01:01:571 (2) - ^
01:03:571 (6) - ^
01:05:571 (3) - 头clap
01:13:571 (7) - 头clap
01:19:571 (3) - clap

多余音效:
00:48:904 (4) - 去掉clap
00:50:904 (1) - ^
00:56:238 (4) - 尾去掉clap
00:58:904 (3) - 去
01:04:238 (1) - 去clap
01:08:904 (5) - ^
01:12:238 (5) - 尾去clap
01:16:238 (3) - 尾去
01:18:904 (2) - 去
01:24:904 (3) - 头去

建议音效:
01:09:904 - 这里加绿线, 同时01:10:238 - 这里也加绿线. 前者音量设为30% 后者不变动. 在01:09:571 (1) - 的尾上加clap & ctrl+r, 且01:10:071 (2) - 加finish & ctrl+r
01:25:904 (4) - ^ 同理
01:46:904 (1,2) - ^ 自己感受下加哪里
02:08:238 (4,5) - ^

00:53:904 (2) - clap
01:36:571 (4,5) - ^
01:57:904 (5,6) - ^
02:07:571 (3) - 尾clap
02:08:071 (4) - 头clap

这次比较详细...
Good Luck
no kds

Crystal

Former osu!catch Champion: 2018

1,123 posts

Joined June 2012

Topic Starter

Crystal 11 years ago

Kamio Misuzu wrote:
[General]
S:C1的whistle音换一个清脆一点的铃音怎么样？比如这个

http://puu.sh/84sH1.wav 对比了半天发现没更合适的了。。这个虽然也不是那么完美我想先保留它

如果加了这个音的话前面那一段soft1的whistle音需要稍微调一下了（现在也OK，加不加看你吧~）
[Hard]
00:08:238 (2) - 这里用一个1/8或许1/12更佳/w\的折返slider怎么样？突出那个叮铃铃的声音但是是开头所以不太适合

00:11:571 (4) - 这个折返没什么必要啊，因为只有开头是有音的，后面很违和。这里不要overmap吧，开头处一个note就够了 /w\我感觉没啥问题

00:34:238 (4,1,2,3,4) - 4到1这个过渡说不出的难受，因为你这里4-1很近，而后面连着几个远距离的跳，心里很发虚的。你是是这样的，4-1就放开点
SPOILER

00:36:238 (1) - 如果你要是改了上面那条的话，这个slider和后面的就得相应变一下了。前面向上弯了，这里向下折一下感觉可能不错
SPOILER
这两个这么改flow就有点别扭了不是么？

00:39:571 (4,1,2) - 和刚刚有点相似，参照着差不多改一下

01:08:238 (3,4,5,6,1) - 不弄个五角星么？美观点，就像这里一样01:44:904 (1,2,3,4,5) - /w\稍微改了一点点

没了o.o，纯白好评，来一发~☆ Good Luck！谢谢xD

yf_bmp wrote:
sound-effect-recheck

[Hard]
默认whistle有些滥用一些应该比较安静的地方加了反而会影响效果
比如
00:01:571 (2) -
00:03:571 (2) -
00:06:904 (1) - 首尾
00:08:904 (3) -
00:11:571 (4) - 尾
00:14:904 (3) -
00:16:904 (3) -
00:19:571 (5) - 头
这样试试少一点的默认whistle会更有意境

再看下默认whistle用的大部分都是一个白线一个whistle 这样会使人觉得音效有些空洞因为音乐本身有些地方是有起伏的
如果是一个白线一个whistle这样很规则的话重音全在白线上就不太好了
比如00:04:904 (2) - 这里的whistle加在尾上会比较好
00:10:904 (3) - ^
后面部分的whistle的节奏没什么大碍

漏音效:
仔细听音乐本身的乐器
像这里00:23:238 (3) - 听这里音乐的乐器这里尾部应该加上自定义whistle
00:25:238 (3) - ^
00:27:238 (4) - ^
00:28:904 (7) - 这个whistle不是加在头上的是在折返处的
00:30:904 (2) - 尾whistle
00:32:904 (2) - ^
00:34:238 (4) - 头上的clap加上去完全不合音乐本身应该像之前一样加上whistle才是
00:34:904 (1,2) - 一样(1)上应该去掉whistle, 而是加在2上
00:36:904 (2) - 尾whistle
00:38:904 (3) - ^
00:40:904 (3) - 加错位置
00:42:904 (2) - ^
00:45:238 (3) - whistle
00:52:904 (4) - 头去掉clap 尾加whistle

00:27:571 (5) - 头换clap
00:31:571 (3) - 换clap
00:33:571 (3) - ^
00:35:571 (3) - ^
00:53:571 (1) - clap
00:57:571 (6) - 头clap
00:59:571 (5) - clap
01:01:571 (2) - ^
01:03:571 (6) - ^
01:05:571 (3) - 头clap
01:13:571 (7) - 头clap
01:19:571 (3) - clap

多余音效:
00:48:904 (4) - 去掉clap
00:50:904 (1) - ^
00:56:238 (4) - 尾去掉clap
00:58:904 (3) - 去
01:04:238 (1) - 去clap 本来就没有;w;
01:08:904 (5) - ^
01:12:238 (5) - 尾去clap
01:16:238 (3) - 尾去
01:18:904 (2) - 去
01:24:904 (3) - 头去

建议音效:
01:09:904 - 这里加绿线, 同时01:10:238 - 这里也加绿线. 前者音量设为30% 后者不变动. 在01:09:571 (1) - 的尾上加clap & ctrl+r, 且01:10:071 (2) - 加finish & ctrl+r
01:25:904 (4) - ^ 同理
01:46:904 (1,2) - ^ 自己感受下加哪里
02:08:238 (4,5) - ^

00:53:904 (2) - clap
01:36:571 (4,5) - ^
01:57:904 (5,6) - ^ 这两个加了我感觉有点太吵惹/w\
02:07:571 (3) - 尾clap
02:08:071 (4) - 头clap

这次比较详细...
Good Luck
no kds 除了上面提到的几处,其他都改了,非常感谢

thanks for modding~ /w\

IamKwaN

osu! Alumni

3,905 posts

Joined August 2012

IamKwaN 11 years ago

Have you updated my diff 星星 ;w;?

CLSW

osu! Alumni

2,182 posts

Joined October 2010

CLSW 11 years ago

[STAC's Salad]
00:34:904 (1) - x : 92.
00:36:238 (3) - x : 356.
01:00:571 (4) - x : 200?
01:34:238 (3,4,5) - choose your favorite.
- 01:35:904 (4) - x : 0
- 01:36:238 (5) - x : 320

[Kurokami's Platter]
00:14:904 (2) - why don't you use horizontal one?
00:31:571 (3,4) - x : 192, 16
02:08:071 (5,6) - x : 184, 288
02:18:904 (4) - use 02:18:238 (3) this one.
02:23:904 (4) - x : 256

good luck!

Crystal

Former osu!catch Champion: 2018

1,123 posts

Joined June 2012

Topic Starter

Crystal 11 years ago

CLSW wrote:
[STAC's Salad]
00:34:904 (1) - x : 92.
00:36:238 (3) - x : 356.
01:00:571 (4) - x : 200?
01:34:238 (3,4,5) - choose your favorite.
- 01:35:904 (4) - x : 0
- 01:36:238 (5) - x : 320

[Kurokami's Platter]
00:14:904 (2) - why don't you use horizontal one?
00:31:571 (3,4) - x : 192, 16
02:08:071 (5,6) - x : 184, 288
02:18:904 (4) - use 02:18:238 (3) this one.
02:23:904 (4) - x : 256

good luck!

thanks for modding~

IamKwaN wrote:
Have you updated my diff 星星 ;w;?

up惹>.<

SUBSTAC9

288 posts

Joined May 2009

SUBSTAC9 11 years ago

CLSW wrote:
[STAC's Salad]
00:34:904 (1) - x : 92. done
00:36:238 (3) - x : 356. done
01:00:571 (4) - x : 200? done
01:34:238 (3,4,5) - choose your favorite.
- 01:35:904 (4) - x : 0
- 01:36:238 (5) - x : 320
^ ahh so strange for me I replace to proper place.
good luck!

thank you very much CLSW!
update

SPOILER

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Shinonomegiku.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 84907
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 2
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Shinonomegiku
TitleUnicode:東雲菊
Artist:BURTON
ArtistUnicode:BURTON
Creator:[_Crystal]
Version:STAC's Salad
Source:ましろ色シンフォニー -Love is pure white-
Tags:Mashiro-iro Symphony original soundtrack ost SUBSTAC9 yf_bmp Kurokami Wafu IamKwaN
BeatmapID:401256
BeatmapSetID:152709

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.5
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"sana1.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,0,0,0

[TimingPoints]
238,666.666666666667,3,2,1,20,1,0
22238,-100,3,2,1,60,0,0
54238,-100,3,2,1,60,0,0
76238,-50,3,2,1,60,0,0
77571,-100,3,2,1,60,0,0
86238,666.666666666667,4,2,1,60,1,1
86238,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
91571,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
92238,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
94238,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
95571,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
104904,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
105571,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
107238,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
107571,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
110238,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
110904,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
118238,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
118904,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
127904,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
128904,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
134904,-100,4,2,1,55,0,1
136238,-100,4,2,1,50,0,1
137571,-100,4,2,1,45,0,1
138904,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
144904,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
146238,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
146904,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
147571,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
147904,-100,4,2,1,20,0,0
148238,-100,4,2,1,10,0,0
148571,-100,4,2,1,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 170,187,180
Combo2 : 124,159,231
Combo3 : 182,148,176

[HitObjects]
256,192,19571,12,0,21571,0:0:0:0:
384,192,22238,6,0,L|208:192,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,23238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,192,23571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,192,23904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,64,24238,2,0,L|304:64,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,128,25238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,128,25571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
48,192,25904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,208,26238,6,0,L|384:208,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,112,27238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,112,27571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,112,27904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,112,28238,2,0,L|128:112,2,75,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,192,29238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,112,29571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,192,29904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,192,30238,6,0,L|448:80,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,192,31238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,192,31571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,192,31904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,192,32238,6,0,L|64:80,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,80,33238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,192,33571,2,0,L|448:80,1,150,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,112,34571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
92,192,34904,6,0,L|60:272,2,75,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,192,35904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,192,36238,2,0,L|388:288,2,75,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,192,37238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,192,37571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,192,37904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,192,38238,6,0,L|272:96,1,150,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,64,39238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,64,39571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,64,39904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,176,40238,2,0,L|480:280,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,288,41238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,296,41571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,288,41904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,288,42238,6,0,L|448:144,2,150,2|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,288,44238,2,0,L|64:144,2,150,2|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,192,46238,6,0,L|352:192,2,150,2|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,47904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,192,48238,2,0,L|368:192,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,192,49238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,192,49571,2,0,L|160:192,2,150,10|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,192,51571,6,0,L|240:192,2,150,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,96,53238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,96,53571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,96,53904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,96,54238,6,0,P|432:160|384:240,1,150,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,55238,2,0,L|256:96,2,75,0|10|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,288,56238,2,0,P|80:224|128:144,1,150,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,96,57238,2,0,L|352:96,2,75,0|10|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,192,58238,6,0,P|160:240|208:192,1,150,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,128,59238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,192,59571,2,0,P|352:240|304:192,1,150,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,320,60571,2,0,L|104:320,2,75,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,320,61571,1,10,0:0:0:0:
256,272,61904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,320,62238,6,0,L|48:144,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,192,63238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,192,63571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,352,63904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,320,64238,2,0,L|464:144,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,64,65238,5,0,0:0:0:0:
272,64,65571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,64,65904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,64,66238,2,0,L|192:64,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,67238,2,0,L|80:288,2,75,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,112,68238,5,2,0:0:0:0:
256,48,68571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,112,68904,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,48,69238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
80,128,69571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,48,69904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,128,70238,6,0,L|336:272,1,150,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,128,71571,2,0,L|176:272,1,150,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,192,72571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,192,72904,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,192,73238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,192,73571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
368,192,74238,6,0,L|384:288,2,75,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,192,75238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,192,75571,2,0,L|128:288,2,75,8|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,192,76904,2,0,L|96:192,1,300,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,80,78238,6,0,L|240:80,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,80,79238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,80,79571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
240,192,79904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,192,80238,2,0,L|230:192,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,192,81238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,81571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
432,192,81904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,192,82238,6,0,L|96:192,1,300,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,84238,2,0,L|400:192,1,300,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,85738,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,192,85904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,192,86071,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,192,86238,1,4,0:0:0:0:
416,80,86904,6,0,L|416:176,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,192,87571,2,0,L|304:96,1,75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,80,88238,2,0,L|96:176,2,75,8|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,160,89238,6,0,L|160:240,1,75,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,160,89904,2,0,L|352:240,1,75,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,320,90571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,288,90904,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,320,91238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,320,91571,6,0,P|96:272|96:48,1,300,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,240,92904,2,0,P|368:208|352:96,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,176,94238,2,0,B|256:96|432:192,2,300,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,328,95904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
76,192,96238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
368,256,96571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,224,96738,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,192,96904,1,6,0:0:0:0:
120,192,97571,6,0,L|168:96,2,75,8|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,192,98904,1,8,0:0:0:0:
360,192,99238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,192,99571,2,0,L|352:96,2,150,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,101571,5,8,0:0:0:0:
368,192,101904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,192,102238,2,0,L|32:192,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,192,103571,2,0,L|480:192,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,112,104904,2,0,L|112:112,1,150,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,105571,6,0,L|352:192,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,192,106238,1,2,0:0:0:0:
208,192,106571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,106738,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,192,106904,1,2,0:0:0:0:
48,192,107238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,192,107571,6,0,L|384:96,1,150,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,112,108571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,108,108904,1,2,0:0:0:0:
128,112,109238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,112,109571,2,0,L|400:256,1,150,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,256,110571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,243,110904,5,8,0:0:0:0:
392,243,111238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,256,111571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,256,111904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,192,112238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
32,192,112571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,256,112904,6,0,L|416:256,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,192,113904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,192,114238,2,0,L|0:192,2,150,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,128,115904,5,0,0:0:0:0:
368,192,116238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
512,192,116571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,192,116904,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,128,117238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,192,117571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
512,192,117904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,192,118071,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,192,118238,6,0,B|160:192|160:192|128:32,1,300,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,80,119238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,144,119571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
416,160,119904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,144,120238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
416,160,120571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,272,120904,6,0,P|128:224|96:176,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,272,122238,2,0,P|384:224|416:176,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,96,123238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,192,123571,2,0,L|16:256,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,192,124571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,192,124904,6,0,L|432:256,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,288,125571,2,0,L|272:336,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,288,126238,2,0,L|160:192,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,192,126904,2,0,L|32:256,2,75,8|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,192,127904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,128071,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,192,128238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,192,128571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,192,128904,6,0,L|448:192,1,150,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,192,129904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,192,130238,2,0,L|368:192,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,192,131238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,131571,2,0,L|288:192,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,192,132571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,132904,2,0,L|432:192,2,150,2|8|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,134904,12,0,138238,0:0:0:0:
144,192,138904,5,8,0:0:0:0:
368,192,139238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,96,139571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,96,140238,5,8,0:0:0:0:
16,96,140571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,140904,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,288,141238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,141571,5,8,0:0:0:0:
256,96,141904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
496,96,142238,1,2,0:0:0:0:
384,192,142571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,142904,6,0,L|176:288,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,143571,2,0,L|336:288,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,192,144238,6,0,L|0:176,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,144904,12,0,148904,0:0:0:0:

Kurokami

osu! Alumni

4,024 posts

Joined February 2010

Kurokami 11 years ago

CLSW wrote:
[Kurokami's Platter]
00:14:904 (2) - why don't you use horizontal one? It makes no difference. q.q
00:31:571 (3,4) - x : 192, 16 I move (4) there because its a good HDash but I hate to use variable distances so (3) goes in the middle.
02:08:071 (5,6) - x : 184, 288 Why? Its not hard to catch them with that distance and moving them one small grid is not really gives difference. Tell me the reason why and I consider changing it.
02:18:904 (4) - use 02:18:238 (3) this one. k
02:23:904 (4) - x : 256 I did that on purpose. It gives a little difference to those jumps. :3

good luck!

Thanks for modding. :3

SPOILER

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Shinonomegiku.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 84907
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 2
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 16
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Shinonomegiku
TitleUnicode:東雲菊
Artist:BURTON
ArtistUnicode:BURTON
Creator:[_Crystal]
Version:Kurokami's Platter
Source:ましろ色シンフォニー -Love is pure white-
Tags:Mashiro-iro Symphony original soundtrack ost SUBSTAC9 yf_bmp Kurokami Wafu IamKwaN
BeatmapID:382311
BeatmapSetID:152709

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.5
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"sana1.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,0,0,0

[TimingPoints]
238,666.666666666667,3,2,1,20,1,0
19238,-66.6666666666667,3,2,1,20,0,0
19904,-100,3,2,1,20,0,0
22238,-100,3,2,1,60,0,0
44238,-100,3,2,1,50,0,0
44571,-100,3,2,1,40,0,0
44904,-100,3,2,1,30,0,0
45238,-100,3,2,1,20,0,0
45571,-100,3,2,1,60,0,0
54238,-100,3,2,1,60,0,0
76238,-50,3,2,1,60,0,0
77571,-100,3,2,1,60,0,0
86238,666.666666666667,4,2,1,60,1,1
86238,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
91571,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
92238,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
94238,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
95571,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
102238,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
102904,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
103571,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
104238,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
104904,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
105571,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
106571,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
107238,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
107571,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
110238,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
110904,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
115571,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
116238,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
118238,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
118904,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
126238,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
126904,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
131571,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
132238,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
136904,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
137571,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
139571,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
140238,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
142238,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
142904,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
144904,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
146238,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
146904,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
147571,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
147904,-100,4,2,1,20,0,0
148238,-100,4,2,1,10,0,0
148571,-100,4,2,1,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 128,255,255
Combo2 : 128,128,255
Combo3 : 128,255,0

[HitObjects]
416,288,238,5,2,0:0:0:0:
128,272,904,2,0,L|256:192,1,150,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,224,2238,6,0,L|144:144,2,150,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,64,4238,6,0,L|352:112,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,144,4904,2,0,L|224:160,2,75,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,112,5904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,96,6238,6,0,L|208:176,2,150,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,176,8238,6,0,L|384:192,2,37.5,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,192,8904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,160,9071,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,128,9238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,192,9571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,272,10238,6,0,L|64:192,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,192,10904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,144,11238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,11571,2,0,L|272:192,1,75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,144,12238,6,0,L|336:96,1,150,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,64,13571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,64,13904,1,2,0:0:0:0:
480,64,14238,6,0,L|400:64,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,96,14904,2,0,L|256:144,1,75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,208,15571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,288,15904,1,2,0:0:0:0:
16,208,16238,6,0,L|80:160,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,160,16904,2,0,L|272:112,1,75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,64,17571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,32,17904,1,2,0:0:0:0:
416,80,18238,6,0,L|496:112,2,75,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,96,19238,2,0,B|160:192|160:192|224:288,1,225.000008583069,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,20238,12,0,21904,0:0:0:0:
192,176,22238,6,0,L|112:144,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,112,22904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,112,23238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,192,23571,2,0,L|320:256,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,288,24238,6,0,L|32:256,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,192,24904,2,0,L|224:128,1,75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,80,25571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,48,25904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
16,80,26238,6,0,L|96:96,2,75,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,48,27238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,48,27571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,48,27904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,112,28238,6,0,L|416:160,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,176,28904,2,0,L|240:176,1,37.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,192,29238,2,0,L|320:256,1,75,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,272,29904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,256,30238,6,0,L|256:208,2,75,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,192,31238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,160,31571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
16,128,31904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,80,32238,6,0,L|352:80,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,80,32904,2,0,L|160:80,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,16,33571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,16,33738,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,16,33904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,112,34238,6,0,L|288:144,2,75,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,128,35238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
16,192,35571,2,0,L|96:192,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,192,36238,6,0,L|240:240,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,240,36904,2,0,L|400:304,1,75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,320,37571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
432,176,37904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,160,38238,6,0,L|112:32,1,150,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,32,39238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,96,39571,2,0,L|208:96,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,96,40238,6,0,L|336:96,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,160,40904,2,0,L|160:208,1,75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,272,41571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,320,41904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,192,42238,6,0,L|272:144,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,80,42904,2,0,L|400:80,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,80,43571,2,0,L|224:80,1,75,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,80,44238,5,2,0:0:0:0:
416,112,44321,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,144,44404,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,176,44488,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,208,44571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,224,44904,1,2,0:0:0:0:
96,256,44988,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,288,45071,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,320,45154,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,352,45238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,336,45571,2,0,L|384:288,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,192,46238,6,0,L|208:144,2,75,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,192,47238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,112,47571,1,10,0:0:0:0:
320,112,47904,1,2,0:0:0:0:
352,48,48238,6,0,L|416:96,2,75,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,48,49238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,112,49571,1,10,0:0:0:0:
144,112,49779,1,2,0:0:0:0:
336,176,49988,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,176,50238,5,0,0:0:0:0:
144,192,50279,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,208,50404,2,0,L|176:288,1,112.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,336,51238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,288,51571,2,0,L|112:240,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,192,52238,6,0,L|400:240,2,75,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,144,53238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,192,53571,2,0,L|288:128,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,64,54238,5,2,0:0:0:0:
192,64,54321,2,0,L|160:112,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,192,54904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,192,54988,2,0,L|304:240,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,256,55571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,256,55654,2,0,L|128:304,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,304,56238,5,2,0:0:0:0:
384,304,56321,2,0,L|416:256,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,192,56904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,192,56988,2,0,L|176:160,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,96,57571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
368,96,57654,2,0,L|416:64,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,80,58238,5,2,0:0:0:0:
192,80,58321,2,0,L|240:48,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,80,58904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
16,80,58988,2,0,L|64:112,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,160,59571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,160,59654,2,0,L|224:192,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,60238,5,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,60321,2,0,L|400:224,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,288,60904,2,0,L|240:240,1,75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,61571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,61654,2,0,L|400:160,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,144,62238,5,2,0:0:0:0:
160,144,62321,2,0,L|112:112,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,96,62904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,96,62988,2,0,L|384:64,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,48,63571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,48,63654,2,0,L|208:96,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,192,64238,5,2,0:0:0:0:
16,192,64321,2,0,L|64:224,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,240,64904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,240,64988,2,0,L|240:272,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,256,65571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
464,256,65654,2,0,L|432:208,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,160,66238,5,2,0:0:0:0:
288,128,66321,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,96,66404,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,48,66571,2,0,L|416:96,2,75,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,32,67571,2,0,L|336:32,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,48,68238,6,0,L|176:96,2,75,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,32,69238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,96,69571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,160,69904,1,2,0:0:0:0:
272,192,70071,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,224,70238,6,0,L|128:272,2,75,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,160,71238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,128,71571,2,0,L|224:80,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,32,72238,6,0,L|464:96,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,48,72904,2,0,L|224:112,1,75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,192,73571,2,0,L|336:192,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,208,74238,6,0,L|176:256,2,75,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,144,75238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
496,80,75571,2,0,L|432:32,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,48,76238,6,0,L|64:96,4,150,2|0|0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,32,77904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,80,78238,6,0,L|320:128,2,75,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,64,79238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,80,79571,2,0,L|208:144,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,192,80238,6,0,L|352:256,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,256,80904,2,0,L|208:192,1,75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,192,81571,2,0,L|64:128,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,96,82238,6,0,L|352:144,2,75,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,32,83238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,96,83571,2,0,L|240:160,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,144,84238,6,0,L|416:192,2,75,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,96,85238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,160,85571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,224,85904,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,272,86071,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,272,86238,6,0,L|192:192,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,128,87238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,112,87571,2,0,L|224:64,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,64,88238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,64,88571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
16,48,88904,6,0,L|80:96,2,75,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,64,89904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,64,90238,2,0,L|352:64,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,64,90904,2,0,L|96:128,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,144,91571,6,0,B|480:240|480:240|368:352,1,300,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,304,92571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,240,92904,2,0,L|240:240,2,75,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,160,93904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,16,94238,6,0,B|480:96|480:96|384:176|384:176,2,300,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,304,95904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,176,96238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,176,96571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,128,96738,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,80,96904,6,0,L|192:0,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,0,97904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,0,98238,2,0,L|128:48,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,80,98904,1,8,0:0:0:0:
80,128,99238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,192,99571,6,0,L|224:192,2,75,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,256,100571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,272,100904,2,0,L|224:224,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,192,101571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,128,101904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,32,102238,6,0,L|336:112,2,150,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,16,103238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
16,32,103571,2,0,B|144:112|144:112|16:192,1,300,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,224,104571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,208,104904,6,0,B|288:128|288:128|416:48,1,300,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,32,105904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,48,106238,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,96,106571,5,8,0:0:0:0:
160,112,106738,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,128,106904,1,2,0:0:0:0:
272,192,107238,1,2,0:0:0:0:
480,192,107571,6,0,L|352:272,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,288,108571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,192,108904,1,2,0:0:0:0:
80,96,109238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,64,109571,2,0,L|256:64,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,112,110238,6,0,B|352:192|352:192|480:272,1,300,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,320,111238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,272,111571,2,0,L|144:224,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,144,112238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,96,112571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,80,112904,6,0,L|288:32,2,75,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,96,113904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,144,114238,2,0,L|256:192,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,192,114904,2,0,L|400:240,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,272,115571,6,0,B|240:192|240:192|112:112,1,300,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,64,116571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,48,116904,2,0,L|160:0,1,75,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,16,117571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,64,117904,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,112,118071,1,8,0:0:0:0:
384,160,118238,6,0,B|256:240|256:240|384:320,1,300,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,240,119238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,240,119571,2,0,L|320:240,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,240,120238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,160,120571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,128,120904,6,0,L|0:96,2,75,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,160,121904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
496,176,122238,2,0,L|448:240,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,240,122904,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,240,123238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,192,123571,6,0,L|272:112,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,96,124571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,112,124904,2,0,L|320:48,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,96,125571,2,0,L|112:32,1,75,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,112,126238,6,0,B|448:192|448:192|320:272,1,300,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,192,127238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,192,127571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
80,176,127904,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,128,128071,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,80,128238,1,2,0:0:0:0:
16,48,128571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
304,80,128904,6,0,L|224:208,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,256,129904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,208,130238,2,0,L|160:256,2,75,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,160,131238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,208,131571,6,0,B|96:128|96:128|224:48,1,300,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,112,132571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,208,132904,2,0,L|176:144,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,160,133571,2,0,L|352:96,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,208,134238,6,0,L|192:208,2,75,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,208,135238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,208,135571,2,0,L|160:144,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,128,136238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,48,136571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,48,136904,6,0,B|192:128|192:128|320:208,1,300,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,128,137904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,208,138238,2,0,L|272:272,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,208,138904,2,0,L|80:272,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,288,139571,6,0,B|496:208|496:208|368:128,1,300,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,96,140571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,128,140904,2,0,L|320:192,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,240,141571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,320,141904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,320,142238,6,0,B|160:240|160:240|32:160,1,300,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,80,143238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,112,143571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
272,192,143904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,272,144238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,304,144571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,144904,12,0,148904,0:0:0:0:

10nya

2,746 posts

Joined February 2011

10nya 11 years ago

ooh, good luck!

Crystal

Former osu!catch Champion: 2018

1,123 posts

Joined June 2012

Topic Starter

Crystal 11 years ago

10nya wrote:
ooh, good luck!

ursa

1,302 posts

Joined April 2010

ursa 11 years ago

Mod time :3

Kurokami's Platter

for my opion about the map , the kiai time pattern seems bored , i think you should improve the kiai part @_@

00:08:238 (1) - make it same with 00:08:904 (2,3,4) -

00:28:904 (2,3) - use this timeline *Pic

00:31:238 (2,3,4) - imo , the distance of this jump makes the pattern kinda forced to catch

00:44:571 (5) - delete (i think you should use 4 beat to make the pattern fit with the piano beat)
00:45:238 (10) - ^ same

00:48:238 (1,2,3,4,5) - as far i suggest to try this pattern [url=http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1554096] *pic [url]

00:54:238 (1,2) - why 00:54:238 (1) - don't stack with 00:54:321 (2) -

Note :
From
00:54:238 (1,2) - to 01:05:571 (5,6) - , I feel all the pattern is just only spam the same type slider. I suggest try some variety slider like this example

*pic

01:09:904 (4,5,1) - try to raise the distance for this part a bit to make the part more nicer

01:36:571 (4,5,1) - same case as above ^

STAC's Salad

00:23:238 (2,3,4) - drag all the circle & move into x=148

00:25:238 (6,7,8) - try this position to make the move range more wider *Pic

00:55:238 (2) - make the slider's postition opposite with 00:57:238 (4)

01:19:238 (2,3,4) - try this position *pic

good luck :3

QHideaki13

Global Moderator

458 posts

Joined March 2011

QHideaki13 11 years ago

I guess ursa already mentioned most of the things in his mod, so I just add up a thing:

[Kurokami's Platter]

00:50:238 (1,2) - Using 1/8 here already looks fine for me. Just stack them up to x: 256 y: 208.

That's all. No kudosu.
Good luck~

SUBSTAC9

288 posts

Joined May 2009

SUBSTAC9 11 years ago

ursa wrote:
STAC's Salad

00:23:238 (2,3,4) - drag all the circle & move into x=148 I still use beat pattern as like next pattern so change 1 and 2 stack and make 3 to a linear flow.

00:25:238 (6,7,8) - try this position to make the move range more wider *Pic ^

00:55:238 (2) - make the slider's postition opposite with 00:57:238 (4) make to other pattern

01:19:238 (2,3,4) - try this position *picok

good luck :3

thank you very much ursa

update

SPOILER

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Shinonomegiku.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 84907
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 2
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 16
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Shinonomegiku
TitleUnicode:東雲菊
Artist:BURTON
ArtistUnicode:BURTON
Creator:[_Crystal]
Version:STAC's Salad
Source:ましろ色シンフォニー -Love is pure white-
Tags:Mashiro-iro Symphony original soundtrack ost SUBSTAC9 yf_bmp Kurokami Wafu IamKwaN
BeatmapID:401256
BeatmapSetID:152709

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.5
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"sana1.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,0,0,0

[TimingPoints]
238,666.666666666667,3,2,1,20,1,0
22238,-100,3,2,1,60,0,0
54238,-100,3,2,1,60,0,0
76238,-50,3,2,1,60,0,0
77571,-100,3,2,1,60,0,0
86238,666.666666666667,4,2,1,60,1,1
86238,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
91571,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
92238,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
94238,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
95571,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
104904,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
105571,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
107238,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
107571,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
110238,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
110904,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
118238,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
118904,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
127904,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
128904,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
134904,-100,4,2,1,55,0,1
136238,-100,4,2,1,50,0,1
137571,-100,4,2,1,45,0,1
138904,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
144904,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
146238,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
146904,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
147571,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
147904,-100,4,2,1,20,0,0
148238,-100,4,2,1,10,0,0
148571,-100,4,2,1,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 170,187,180
Combo2 : 124,159,231
Combo3 : 182,148,176

[HitObjects]
256,192,19571,12,0,21571,0:0:0:0:
384,192,22238,6,0,L|208:192,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,192,23238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,192,23571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,23904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,64,24238,2,0,L|304:64,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,128,25238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,128,25571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
48,192,25904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,208,26238,6,0,L|384:208,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,112,27238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,112,27571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,112,27904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,112,28238,2,0,L|128:112,2,75,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,192,29238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,112,29571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,192,29904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,192,30238,6,0,L|448:80,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,192,31238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,192,31571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,192,31904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,192,32238,6,0,L|64:80,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,80,33238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,192,33571,2,0,L|448:80,1,150,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,112,34571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
92,192,34904,6,0,L|60:272,2,75,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,192,35904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,192,36238,2,0,L|388:288,2,75,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,192,37238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,192,37571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,192,37904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,192,38238,6,0,L|272:96,1,150,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,64,39238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,64,39571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,64,39904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,176,40238,2,0,L|480:280,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,288,41238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,296,41571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,288,41904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,288,42238,6,0,L|448:144,2,150,2|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,288,44238,2,0,L|64:144,2,150,2|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,192,46238,6,0,L|352:192,2,150,2|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,47904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,192,48238,2,0,L|368:192,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,192,49238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,192,49571,2,0,L|160:192,2,150,10|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,192,51571,6,0,L|240:192,2,150,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,96,53238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,96,53571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,96,53904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,96,54238,6,0,P|432:160|384:240,1,150,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,55238,2,0,L|352:192,2,75,0|10|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,288,56238,2,0,P|80:224|128:144,1,150,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,96,57238,2,0,L|160:96,2,75,0|10|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,192,58238,6,0,P|160:240|208:192,1,150,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,128,59238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,192,59571,2,0,P|352:240|304:192,1,150,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,320,60571,2,0,L|104:320,2,75,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,320,61571,1,10,0:0:0:0:
256,272,61904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,320,62238,6,0,L|48:144,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,192,63238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,192,63571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,352,63904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,320,64238,2,0,L|464:144,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,64,65238,5,0,0:0:0:0:
272,64,65571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,64,65904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,64,66238,2,0,L|192:64,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,67238,2,0,L|80:288,2,75,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,112,68238,5,2,0:0:0:0:
256,48,68571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,112,68904,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,48,69238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
80,128,69571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,48,69904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,128,70238,6,0,L|336:272,1,150,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,128,71571,2,0,L|176:272,1,150,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,192,72571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,192,72904,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,192,73238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,192,73571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
368,192,74238,6,0,L|384:288,2,75,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,192,75238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,192,75571,2,0,L|128:288,2,75,8|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,192,76904,2,0,L|96:192,1,300,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,80,78238,6,0,L|240:80,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,80,79238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,112,79571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,224,79904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,192,80238,2,0,L|230:192,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,192,81238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,81571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
432,192,81904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,192,82238,6,0,L|96:192,1,300,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,84238,2,0,L|400:192,1,300,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,85738,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,192,85904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,192,86071,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,192,86238,1,4,0:0:0:0:
416,80,86904,6,0,L|416:176,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,192,87571,2,0,L|304:96,1,75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,80,88238,2,0,L|96:176,2,75,8|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,128,89238,6,0,L|320:208,1,75,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,192,89904,2,0,L|192:272,1,75,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,320,90571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,288,90904,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,320,91238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,320,91571,6,0,P|416:272|416:48,1,300,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,240,92904,2,0,P|144:208|160:96,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,176,94238,2,0,B|256:96|80:192,2,300,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,328,95904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
76,192,96238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
368,256,96571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,224,96738,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,192,96904,1,6,0:0:0:0:
120,192,97571,6,0,L|168:96,2,75,8|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,192,98904,1,8,0:0:0:0:
360,192,99238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,192,99571,2,0,L|352:96,2,150,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,101571,5,8,0:0:0:0:
368,192,101904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,192,102238,2,0,L|32:192,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,192,103571,2,0,L|480:192,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,112,104904,2,0,L|112:112,1,150,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,105571,6,0,L|352:192,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,192,106238,1,2,0:0:0:0:
208,192,106571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,106738,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,192,106904,1,2,0:0:0:0:
48,192,107238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,192,107571,6,0,L|384:96,1,150,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,112,108571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,108,108904,1,2,0:0:0:0:
128,112,109238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,112,109571,2,0,L|400:256,1,150,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,256,110571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,243,110904,5,8,0:0:0:0:
392,243,111238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,256,111571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,256,111904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,192,112238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
32,192,112571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,256,112904,6,0,L|416:256,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,192,113904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,192,114238,2,0,L|0:192,2,150,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,128,115904,5,0,0:0:0:0:
368,192,116238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
512,192,116571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,192,116904,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,128,117238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,192,117571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
512,192,117904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,192,118071,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,192,118238,6,0,B|160:192|160:192|128:32,1,300,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,80,119238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,144,119571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
416,160,119904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,144,120238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
416,160,120571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,272,120904,6,0,P|128:224|96:176,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,272,122238,2,0,P|384:224|416:176,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,96,123238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,192,123571,2,0,L|16:256,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,192,124571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,192,124904,6,0,L|432:256,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,288,125571,2,0,L|272:336,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,288,126238,2,0,L|160:192,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,192,126904,2,0,L|32:256,2,75,8|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,192,127904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,128071,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,192,128238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,192,128571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,192,128904,6,0,L|448:192,1,150,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,192,129904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,192,130238,2,0,L|368:192,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,192,131238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,131571,2,0,L|288:192,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,192,132571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,132904,2,0,L|432:192,2,150,2|8|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,134904,12,0,138238,0:0:0:0:
144,192,138904,5,8,0:0:0:0:
368,192,139238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,96,139571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,96,140238,5,8,0:0:0:0:
16,96,140571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,140904,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,288,141238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,141571,5,8,0:0:0:0:
256,96,141904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
496,96,142238,1,2,0:0:0:0:
384,192,142571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,142904,6,0,L|176:288,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,143571,2,0,L|336:288,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,192,144238,6,0,L|0:176,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,144904,12,0,148904,0:0:0:0:

Kurokami

osu! Alumni

4,024 posts

Joined February 2010

Kurokami 11 years ago

ursa wrote:
Mod time :3

[notice]Kurokami's Platter

for my opion about the map , the kiai time pattern seems bored , i think you should improve the kiai part @_@

00:08:238 (1) - make it same with 00:08:904 (2,3,4) -

00:28:904 (2,3) - use this timeline *Pic

00:31:238 (2,3,4) - imo , the distance of this jump makes the pattern kinda forced to catch

00:44:571 (5) - delete (i think you should use 4 beat to make the pattern fit with the piano beat)
00:45:238 (10) - ^ same

00:48:238 (1,2,3,4,5) - as far i suggest to try this pattern [url=http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1554096] *pic [url]

00:54:238 (1,2) - why 00:54:238 (1) - don't stack with 00:54:321 (2) - I won't stack it. The music is slightly different here. Stop suggesting this.

Note :
From
00:54:238 (1,2) - to 01:05:571 (5,6) - , I feel all the pattern is just only spam the same type slider. I suggest try some variety slider like this example This is intended. The song is also calm and with this SV the sliders unable to change too many. And I don't want to use SV change here.

*pic

01:09:904 (4,5,1) - try to raise the distance for this part a bit to make the part more nicer

01:36:571 (4,5,1) - same case as above ^

good luck :3

Thanks for modding it.

SPOILER

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Shinonomegiku.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 84907
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 2
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 8
GridSize: 16
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Shinonomegiku
TitleUnicode:東雲菊
Artist:BURTON
ArtistUnicode:BURTON
Creator:[_Crystal]
Version:Kurokami's Platter
Source:ましろ色シンフォニー -Love is pure white-
Tags:Mashiro-iro Symphony original soundtrack ost SUBSTAC9 yf_bmp Kurokami Wafu IamKwaN
BeatmapID:382311
BeatmapSetID:152709

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.5
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"sana1.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,0,0,0

[TimingPoints]
238,666.666666666667,3,2,1,20,1,0
19238,-66.6666666666667,3,2,1,20,0,0
19904,-100,3,2,1,20,0,0
22238,-100,3,2,1,60,0,0
44238,-100,3,2,1,50,0,0
44571,-100,3,2,1,40,0,0
44904,-100,3,2,1,30,0,0
45238,-100,3,2,1,20,0,0
45571,-100,3,2,1,60,0,0
54238,-100,3,2,1,60,0,0
76238,-50,3,2,1,60,0,0
77571,-100,3,2,1,60,0,0
86238,666.666666666667,4,2,1,60,1,1
86238,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
91571,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
92238,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
94238,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
95571,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
102238,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
102904,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
103571,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
104238,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
104904,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
105571,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
106571,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
107238,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
107571,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
110238,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
110904,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
115571,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
116238,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
118238,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
118904,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
126238,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
126904,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
131571,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
132238,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
136904,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
137571,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
139571,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
140238,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
142238,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
142904,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
144904,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
146238,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
146904,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
147571,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
147904,-100,4,2,1,20,0,0
148238,-100,4,2,1,10,0,0
148571,-100,4,2,1,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 128,255,255
Combo2 : 128,128,255
Combo3 : 128,255,0

[HitObjects]
416,288,238,5,2,0:0:0:0:
128,272,904,2,0,L|256:192,1,150,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,224,2238,6,0,L|144:144,2,150,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,64,4238,6,0,L|352:112,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,144,4904,2,0,L|224:160,2,75,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,112,5904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,96,6238,6,0,L|208:176,2,150,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,192,8238,5,2,0:0:0:0:
336,160,8405,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,128,8572,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,192,8904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,160,9071,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,128,9238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,192,9571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,272,10238,6,0,L|64:192,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,192,10904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,144,11238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,11571,2,0,L|272:192,1,75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,144,12238,6,0,L|336:96,1,150,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,64,13571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,64,13904,1,2,0:0:0:0:
480,64,14238,6,0,L|400:64,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,96,14904,2,0,L|256:144,1,75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,208,15571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,288,15904,1,2,0:0:0:0:
16,208,16238,6,0,L|80:160,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,160,16904,2,0,L|272:112,1,75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,64,17571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,32,17904,1,2,0:0:0:0:
416,80,18238,6,0,L|496:112,2,75,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,96,19238,2,0,B|160:192|160:192|224:288,1,225.000008583069,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,20238,12,0,21904,0:0:0:0:
192,176,22238,6,0,L|112:144,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,112,22904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,112,23238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,192,23571,2,0,L|320:256,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,288,24238,6,0,L|32:256,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,192,24904,2,0,L|224:128,1,75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,80,25571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,48,25904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
16,80,26238,6,0,L|96:96,2,75,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,48,27238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,48,27571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,48,27904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,112,28238,6,0,L|416:160,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
229,176,28904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,176,29071,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,224,29238,2,0,L|320:256,1,75,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,272,29904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,256,30238,6,0,L|256:208,2,75,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,192,31238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,160,31571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
16,128,31904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,80,32238,6,0,L|352:80,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,80,32904,2,0,L|160:80,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,16,33571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,16,33738,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,16,33904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,112,34238,6,0,L|288:144,2,75,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,128,35238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
16,192,35571,2,0,L|96:192,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,192,36238,6,0,L|240:240,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,240,36904,2,0,L|400:304,1,75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,320,37571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
432,176,37904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,160,38238,6,0,L|112:32,1,150,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,32,39238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,96,39571,2,0,L|208:96,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,96,40238,6,0,L|336:96,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,160,40904,2,0,L|160:208,1,75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,272,41571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,320,41904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,192,42238,6,0,L|272:144,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,80,42904,2,0,L|400:80,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,80,43571,2,0,L|224:80,1,75,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,80,44238,5,2,0:0:0:0:
416,112,44321,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,144,44404,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,176,44488,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,224,44904,1,2,0:0:0:0:
96,256,44988,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,288,45071,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,320,45154,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,336,45571,2,0,L|384:288,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,192,46238,6,0,L|208:144,2,75,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,192,47238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,112,47571,1,10,0:0:0:0:
320,112,47904,1,2,0:0:0:0:
176,112,48238,6,0,L|256:112,2,75,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,112,49238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,176,49571,1,10,0:0:0:0:
144,176,49779,1,2,0:0:0:0:
336,240,49988,1,2,0:0:0:0:
128,144,50238,5,0,0:0:0:0:
192,176,50321,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,208,50404,2,0,L|176:288,1,112.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,336,51238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,288,51571,2,0,L|112:240,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,192,52238,6,0,L|400:240,2,75,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,144,53238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,192,53571,2,0,L|288:128,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,64,54238,5,2,0:0:0:0:
192,64,54321,2,0,L|160:112,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,192,54904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,192,54988,2,0,L|304:240,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,256,55571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,256,55654,2,0,L|128:304,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,304,56238,5,2,0:0:0:0:
384,304,56321,2,0,L|416:256,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,192,56904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,192,56988,2,0,L|176:160,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,96,57571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
368,96,57654,2,0,L|416:64,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,80,58238,5,2,0:0:0:0:
192,80,58321,2,0,L|240:48,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,80,58904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
16,80,58988,2,0,L|64:112,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,160,59571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,160,59654,2,0,L|224:192,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,60238,5,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,60321,2,0,L|400:224,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,288,60904,2,0,L|240:240,1,75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,61571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,61654,2,0,L|400:160,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,144,62238,5,2,0:0:0:0:
160,144,62321,2,0,L|112:112,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,96,62904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,96,62988,2,0,L|384:64,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,48,63571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,48,63654,2,0,L|208:96,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,192,64238,5,2,0:0:0:0:
16,192,64321,2,0,L|64:224,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,240,64904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,240,64988,2,0,L|240:272,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,256,65571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
464,256,65654,2,0,L|432:208,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,160,66238,5,2,0:0:0:0:
288,128,66321,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,96,66404,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,48,66571,2,0,L|416:96,2,75,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,32,67571,2,0,L|336:32,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,48,68238,6,0,L|176:96,2,75,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,32,69238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,96,69571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,160,69904,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,70071,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,224,70238,6,0,L|80:256,2,75,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,160,71238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,128,71571,2,0,L|224:80,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,32,72238,6,0,L|464:96,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,48,72904,2,0,L|224:112,1,75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,192,73571,2,0,L|336:192,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,208,74238,6,0,L|176:256,2,75,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,144,75238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
496,80,75571,2,0,L|432:32,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,48,76238,6,0,L|64:96,4,150,2|0|0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,32,77904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,80,78238,6,0,L|320:128,2,75,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,64,79238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,80,79571,2,0,L|208:144,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,192,80238,6,0,L|352:256,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,256,80904,2,0,L|208:192,1,75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,192,81571,2,0,L|64:128,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,96,82238,6,0,L|352:144,2,75,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,32,83238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,96,83571,2,0,L|240:160,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,144,84238,6,0,L|416:192,2,75,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,96,85238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,160,85571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,224,85904,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,272,86071,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,272,86238,6,0,L|192:192,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,128,87238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,112,87571,2,0,L|224:64,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,64,88238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,64,88571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
16,48,88904,6,0,L|80:96,2,75,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,64,89904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,64,90238,2,0,L|352:64,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,64,90904,2,0,L|96:128,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,144,91571,6,0,B|480:240|480:240|368:352,1,300,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,304,92571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,240,92904,2,0,L|240:240,2,75,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,160,93904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,16,94238,6,0,B|480:96|480:96|384:176|384:176,2,300,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,304,95904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,176,96238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,176,96571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
240,128,96738,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,80,96904,6,0,L|224:0,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,0,97904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,0,98238,2,0,L|128:48,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,80,98904,1,8,0:0:0:0:
80,128,99238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,192,99571,6,0,L|224:192,2,75,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,256,100571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,272,100904,2,0,L|224:224,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,192,101571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,128,101904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,32,102238,6,0,L|336:112,2,150,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,16,103238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
16,32,103571,2,0,B|144:112|144:112|16:192,1,300,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,224,104571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,208,104904,6,0,B|288:128|288:128|416:48,1,300,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,32,105904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,48,106238,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,96,106571,5,8,0:0:0:0:
160,112,106738,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,128,106904,1,2,0:0:0:0:
272,192,107238,1,2,0:0:0:0:
480,192,107571,6,0,L|352:272,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,288,108571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,192,108904,1,2,0:0:0:0:
80,96,109238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,64,109571,2,0,L|256:64,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,112,110238,6,0,B|352:192|352:192|480:272,1,300,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,320,111238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,272,111571,2,0,L|144:224,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,144,112238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,96,112571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,80,112904,6,0,L|288:32,2,75,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,96,113904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,144,114238,2,0,L|256:192,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,192,114904,2,0,L|400:240,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,272,115571,6,0,B|240:192|240:192|112:112,1,300,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,64,116571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,48,116904,2,0,L|160:0,1,75,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,16,117571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,64,117904,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,112,118071,1,8,0:0:0:0:
384,160,118238,6,0,B|256:240|256:240|384:320,1,300,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,240,119238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,240,119571,2,0,L|320:240,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,240,120238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,160,120571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,128,120904,6,0,L|0:96,2,75,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,160,121904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
496,176,122238,2,0,L|448:240,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,240,122904,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,240,123238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,192,123571,6,0,L|272:112,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,96,124571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,112,124904,2,0,L|320:48,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,96,125571,2,0,L|112:32,1,75,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,112,126238,6,0,B|448:192|448:192|320:272,1,300,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,192,127238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,192,127571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
80,176,127904,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,128,128071,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,80,128238,1,2,0:0:0:0:
16,48,128571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
304,80,128904,6,0,L|224:208,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,256,129904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,208,130238,2,0,L|160:256,2,75,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,160,131238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,208,131571,6,0,B|96:128|96:128|224:48,1,300,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,112,132571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,208,132904,2,0,L|176:144,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,160,133571,2,0,L|352:96,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,208,134238,6,0,L|192:208,2,75,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,208,135238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,208,135571,2,0,L|160:144,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,128,136238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,48,136571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,48,136904,6,0,B|192:128|192:128|320:208,1,300,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,128,137904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,208,138238,2,0,L|272:272,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,208,138904,2,0,L|80:272,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,288,139571,6,0,B|496:208|496:208|368:128,1,300,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,96,140571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,128,140904,2,0,L|320:192,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,240,141571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,320,141904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,320,142238,6,0,B|160:240|160:240|32:160,1,300,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,80,143238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,112,143571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
272,192,143904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,272,144238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,304,144571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,144904,12,0,148904,0:0:0:0:

Jekate

Jekate 11 years ago

hi, I love relaxing song
thanks _Crystal for letting me know this song

[Salad]
Hitsounding:
00:23:571 (3) - Add clap
00:25:571 (7) - Add clap
00:27:571 (3) - Add clap
00:29:571 (7) - Add clap
00:31:571 (3) - Add clap
00:33:571 (3) - Add clap on head
00:44:238 (2) - Add finish on head? I think the curent whistle sound is weak to fill that part
00:53:904 (4) - Add clap? for variation on hitsounding and to make a sign that the hitsounding for the next part is diffrent
00:56:238 (3) - Add whistle on tail
00:58:238 (1) - Add whistle on tail
01:00:571 (4) - Change clap into whistle on reverse arrow, to fit more the song
01:02:238 (1) - Change clap into whistle on tail
01:04:238 (5) - Change clap into whistle on tail
01:06:238 (4) - Change clap into whistle on tail
01:08:904 (3) - Change clap into whistle
01:27:571 (2) - Add whistle on head
01:29:904 (2) - Add whistle on tail
01:36:571 (6) - Add clap
01:36:738 (7) - Add clap
01:36:904 (8) - Delete whistle
01:45:571 (1) - Add clap on tail
01:46:238 (2) - Delete whistle
01:46:738 (4) - Add clap
01:46:904 (5) - Add clap
01:57:904 (7) - Add clap
01:58:071 (8) - Add clap
01:58:238 (1) - Delete whistle on head
02:06:904 (4) - Add clap on reverse
02:08:071 (6) - Add clap

Rhythm:
00:19:571 (1) - Maybe that spinner should be start at here 00:20:238 - and end at here 00:21:904 - Following the piano and cymbal like sound from the music it'll fit better
00:35:904 (2) - Delete? for better rhythm and to make a "stop" effect while playing
00:37:904 (5) - Same reason as above
01:24:238 (2) - Reduce the slider lenght to the red tick, here 01:25:238 - to follow the drum sound and add a circle here 01:25:571 - with clap on it
01:25:738 (4) - Delete? for better rhythm
01:30:571 (3) - Delete? for better rhythm
02:14:904 (1) - Reduce the spiner lenght to the white tick here 02:17:571 - To follow the violin sound instead

Misc:
00:54:238 - Delete that green line (inherited point), because useless. Or you can adjust volume on that green line to 50% since that part is a bit calm then you can add a green line here 01:10:238 - to make the volume back to 60%

[Platter]
Hitsounding:
00:19:238 (2) - Add whistle on tail
00:22:238 (1) - Add finish on head, I hear cymbal sound there
00:38:238 (1) - Add finish on head
00:42:904 (2) - Delete clap on head, not fit the song
00:53:571 (3) - Add clap on tail? to make a sign that the hitsounding for the next part is diffrent
00:54:238 (1) - Add finish
01:09:904 (4) - Change whistle into clap? somehow clap is more fit on that part
01:10:071 (5) - Same as above
01:10:238 (1) - Add finish on head
01:25:904 (4) - Change whistle into clap? somehow clap is more fit on that part
01:26:071 (5) - Same as above
01:26:238 (1) - Add finish on head
01:36:904 (1) - Add finish on head
01:45:904 (2) - Add clap? I hear drum sound there
01:46:904 (3) - Delete whistle?
01:47:238 (4) - Same as above
01:47:571 (1) - Add finish on head
01:56:904 (3) - Delete whistle on tail
01:58:238 (1) - Add finish on head
02:07:238 (2) - Add clap? I hear drum sound there
02:08:238 (6) - Delete whistle
02:08:571 (7) - Same as above
02:08:904 (1) - Add finish on head
02:14:238 (1) - Add finish on head

Rhythm:
00:08:238 (1,2,3) - I think that part should be like this http://puu.sh/8t1uF.jpg since you follow the piano sound and It fit if you use 1/8 instead of 1/4 or you can make it like this one 00:44:238 (1,2,3,4) -
00:08:904 (4,5,6) - Same as above
00:28:988 (3) - Add circle there if you follow the piano sound
00:33:571 (3,4,5) - I thinks it'll better if you follow this rhythm instead http://puu.sh/8t3YC.jpg

Misc:
00:00:238 - I sugest to set the volume to 50~60%, 20% is too silent
00:19:238 - and 00:19:904 - Same as above
--
[]
done, goodluck then~ and make sure to reply what you change so I can improve

mintong89

3,699 posts

Joined July 2011

mintong89 11 years ago

哇善良图

[Hard]

00:00:238 (1) - 额...个人觉得太弯了点.
00:28:238 (6) - 我觉得这里需要NC, 因为钢琴高音的关系
00:34:238 (4) - ^ 而不是 00:34:904 (1) -
00:51:238 - 这里鼓音很大, 建议加个note
00:53:571 (1) - 去掉NC然后 00:54:238 - NC这个然后去掉 00:54:571 (1) - 这个...话说NC排放好像有点乱, 建议3/3一次NC.
去掉 01:01:238 (1) - then 01:02:238 (3) - NC...接下来的我都不提了
01:14:238 - 这里clap怪怪的...我觉得whistle比较适合
01:20:238 (5) - ^ (头)

挺干净的...就是NC排放不好.

[Normal]
Well...The AR is quite slow between the easy, AR +1?

clean map.

Easy 也找不到什么...
先射个星, 下次有比较正常的歌再给我mod吧 orz 真心找不到
加油!

Crystal

Former osu!catch Champion: 2018

1,123 posts

Joined June 2012

Topic Starter

Crystal 11 years ago

Mintong wrote:
哇善良图 :3

[Hard]

00:00:238 (1) - 额...个人觉得太弯了点. fixed
00:28:238 (6) - 我觉得这里需要NC, 因为钢琴高音的关系 fixed
00:34:238 (4) - ^ 而不是 00:34:904 (1) - fixed
00:51:238 - 这里鼓音很大, 建议加个note 不了,因为前面一直都是均匀2分而这里的前面突然出了一个1/6,节奏变化比较强烈所以我空一拍听起来更舒服一点
00:53:571 (1) - 去掉NC然后 00:54:238 - NC这个然后去掉 00:54:571 (1) - 这个...话说NC排放好像有点乱, 建议3/3一次NC.fixed, 有的2个3/3一个NC了不然有点spam
去掉 01:01:238 (1) - then 01:02:238 (3) - NC...接下来的我都不提了 ok
01:14:238 - 这里clap怪怪的...我觉得whistle比较适合 fixed
01:20:238 (5) - ^ (头) fixed

挺干净的...就是NC排放不好. 谢谢,提升了不少~!

先射个星, 下次有比较正常的歌再给我mod吧 orz 真心找不到 0.0谢谢星星www
加油! <3谢谢

thanks for modding~

Kurokami

osu! Alumni

4,024 posts

Joined February 2010

Kurokami 11 years ago

Jekate wrote:
hi, I love relaxing song
thanks _Crystal for letting me know this song

[Platter]
Hitsounding:
00:19:238 (2) - Add whistle on tail
00:22:238 (1) - Add finish on head, I hear cymbal sound there
00:38:238 (1) - Add finish on head
00:42:904 (2) - Delete clap on head, not fit the song Changed to whistle.
00:53:571 (3) - Add clap on tail? to make a sign that the hitsounding for the next part is diffrent
00:54:238 (1) - Add finish
01:09:904 (4) - Change whistle into clap? somehow clap is more fit on that part
01:10:071 (5) - Same as above
01:10:238 (1) - Add finish on head
01:25:904 (4) - Change whistle into clap? somehow clap is more fit on that part
01:26:071 (5) - Same as above
01:26:238 (1) - Add finish on head
01:36:904 (1) - Add finish on head
01:45:904 (2) - Add clap? I hear drum sound there
01:46:904 (3) - Delete whistle?
01:47:238 (4) - Same as above
01:47:571 (1) - Add finish on head
01:56:904 (3) - Delete whistle on tail
01:58:238 (1) - Add finish on head
02:07:238 (2) - Add clap? I hear drum sound there
02:08:238 (6) - Delete whistle
02:08:571 (7) - Same as above
02:08:904 (1) - Add finish on head
02:14:238 (1) - Add finish on head

Fixed all.

Rhythm:
00:08:238 (1,2,3) - I think that part should be like this http://puu.sh/8t1uF.jpg since you follow the piano sound and It fit if you use 1/8 instead of 1/4 or you can make it like this one 00:44:238 (1,2,3,4) - True. Sounds a little better.
00:08:904 (4,5,6) - Same as above You don't need to point out twice since you did it already previously. o.o
00:28:988 (3) - Add circle there if you follow the piano sound k.
00:33:571 (3,4,5) - I thinks it'll better if you follow this rhythm instead http://puu.sh/8t3YC.jpg Good catch.

Misc:
00:00:238 - I sugest to set the volume to 50~60%, 20% is too silent My bad. Fixed.
00:19:238 - and 00:19:904 - Same as above Fixed.
--
[]
done, goodluck then~ and make sure to reply what you change so I can improve

Thanks for your mod. It was helpful. :3

SPOILER

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Shinonomegiku.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 84907
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 2
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 8
GridSize: 16
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Shinonomegiku
TitleUnicode:東雲菊
Artist:BURTON
ArtistUnicode:BURTON
Creator:[_Crystal]
Version:Kurokami's Platter
Source:ましろ色シンフォニー -Love is pure white-
Tags:Mashiro-iro Symphony original soundtrack ost SUBSTAC9 yf_bmp Kurokami Wafu IamKwaN
BeatmapID:382311
BeatmapSetID:152709

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.5
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"sana1.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,0,0,0

[TimingPoints]
238,666.666666666667,3,2,1,50,1,0
19238,-66.6666666666667,3,2,1,50,0,0
19904,-100,3,2,1,50,0,0
22238,-100,3,2,1,60,0,0
44238,-100,3,2,1,50,0,0
44571,-100,3,2,1,40,0,0
44904,-100,3,2,1,30,0,0
45238,-100,3,2,1,20,0,0
45571,-100,3,2,1,60,0,0
54238,-100,3,2,1,60,0,0
76238,-50,3,2,1,60,0,0
77571,-100,3,2,1,60,0,0
86238,666.666666666667,4,2,1,60,1,1
86238,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
91571,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
92238,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
94238,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
95571,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
102238,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
102904,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
103571,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
104238,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
104904,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
105571,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
106571,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
107238,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
107571,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
110238,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
110904,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
115571,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
116238,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
118238,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
118904,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
126238,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
126904,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
131571,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
132238,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
136904,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
137571,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
139571,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
140238,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
142238,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
142904,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
144904,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
146238,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
146904,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
147571,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
147904,-100,4,2,1,20,0,0
148238,-100,4,2,1,10,0,0
148571,-100,4,2,1,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 128,255,255
Combo2 : 128,128,255
Combo3 : 128,255,0

[HitObjects]
416,288,238,5,2,0:0:0:0:
128,272,904,2,0,L|256:192,1,150,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,224,2238,6,0,L|144:144,2,150,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,64,4238,6,0,L|352:112,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,144,4904,2,0,L|224:160,2,75,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,112,5904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,96,6238,6,0,L|208:176,2,150,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,192,8237,5,2,0:0:0:0:
336,160,8321,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,128,8404,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,96,8488,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,8904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,144,8988,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,96,9071,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,48,9154,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,192,9571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,272,10238,6,0,L|64:192,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,192,10904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,144,11238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,11571,2,0,L|272:192,1,75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,144,12238,6,0,L|336:96,1,150,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,64,13571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,64,13904,1,2,0:0:0:0:
480,64,14238,6,0,L|400:64,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,96,14904,2,0,L|256:144,1,75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,208,15571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,288,15904,1,2,0:0:0:0:
16,208,16238,6,0,L|80:160,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,160,16904,2,0,L|272:112,1,75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,64,17571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,32,17904,1,2,0:0:0:0:
416,80,18238,6,0,L|496:112,2,75,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,96,19238,2,0,B|160:192|160:192|224:288,1,225.000008583069,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,20238,12,0,21904,0:0:0:0:
192,176,22238,6,0,L|112:144,1,75,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,112,22904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,112,23238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,192,23571,2,0,L|320:256,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,288,24238,6,0,L|32:256,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,192,24904,2,0,L|224:128,1,75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,80,25571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,48,25904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
16,80,26238,6,0,L|96:96,2,75,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,48,27238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,48,27571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,48,27904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,112,28238,6,0,L|400:112,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,176,28904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,176,28988,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,176,29071,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,224,29238,2,0,L|320:256,1,75,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,272,29904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,256,30238,6,0,L|256:208,2,75,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,192,31238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,160,31571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
16,128,31904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,80,32238,6,0,L|352:80,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,80,32904,2,0,L|160:80,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,16,33571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,16,33654,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,16,33738,1,0,0:0:0:0:
48,144,33904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,112,34238,6,0,L|288:144,2,75,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,128,35238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
16,192,35571,2,0,L|96:192,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,192,36238,6,0,L|240:240,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,240,36904,2,0,L|400:304,1,75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,320,37571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
432,176,37904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,160,38238,6,0,L|112:32,1,150,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,32,39238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,96,39571,2,0,L|208:96,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,96,40238,6,0,L|336:96,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,160,40904,2,0,L|160:208,1,75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,272,41571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,320,41904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,192,42238,6,0,L|272:144,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,80,42904,2,0,L|400:80,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,80,43571,2,0,L|224:80,1,75,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,80,44238,5,2,0:0:0:0:
416,112,44321,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,144,44404,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,176,44488,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,224,44904,1,2,0:0:0:0:
96,256,44988,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,288,45071,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,320,45154,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,336,45571,2,0,L|384:288,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,192,46238,6,0,L|208:144,2,75,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,192,47238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,112,47571,1,10,0:0:0:0:
320,112,47904,1,2,0:0:0:0:
176,112,48238,6,0,L|256:112,2,75,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,112,49238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,176,49571,1,10,0:0:0:0:
144,176,49779,1,2,0:0:0:0:
336,240,49988,1,2,0:0:0:0:
128,144,50238,5,0,0:0:0:0:
192,176,50321,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,208,50404,2,0,L|176:288,1,112.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,336,51238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,288,51571,2,0,L|112:240,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,192,52238,6,0,L|400:240,2,75,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,144,53238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,192,53571,2,0,L|288:128,1,75,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,64,54238,5,10,0:0:0:0:
192,64,54321,2,0,L|160:112,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,192,54904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,192,54988,2,0,L|304:240,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,256,55571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,256,55654,2,0,L|128:304,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,304,56238,5,2,0:0:0:0:
384,304,56321,2,0,L|416:256,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,192,56904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,192,56988,2,0,L|176:160,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,96,57571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
368,96,57654,2,0,L|416:64,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,80,58238,5,2,0:0:0:0:
192,80,58321,2,0,L|240:48,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,80,58904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
16,80,58988,2,0,L|64:112,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,160,59571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,160,59654,2,0,L|224:192,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,60238,5,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,60321,2,0,L|400:224,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,288,60904,2,0,L|240:240,1,75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,61571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,61654,2,0,L|400:160,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,144,62238,5,2,0:0:0:0:
160,144,62321,2,0,L|112:112,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,96,62904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,96,62988,2,0,L|384:64,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,48,63571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,48,63654,2,0,L|208:96,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,192,64238,5,2,0:0:0:0:
16,192,64321,2,0,L|64:224,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,240,64904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,240,64988,2,0,L|240:272,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,256,65571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
464,256,65654,2,0,L|432:208,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,160,66238,5,2,0:0:0:0:
288,128,66321,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,96,66404,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,48,66571,2,0,L|416:96,2,75,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,32,67571,2,0,L|336:32,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,48,68238,6,0,L|176:96,2,75,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,32,69238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,96,69571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,160,69904,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,70071,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,224,70238,6,0,L|80:256,2,75,6|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,160,71238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,128,71571,2,0,L|224:80,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,32,72238,6,0,L|464:96,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,48,72904,2,0,L|224:112,1,75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,192,73571,2,0,L|336:192,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,208,74238,6,0,L|176:256,2,75,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,144,75238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
496,80,75571,2,0,L|432:32,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,48,76238,6,0,L|64:96,4,150,2|0|0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,32,77904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,80,78238,6,0,L|320:128,2,75,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,64,79238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,80,79571,2,0,L|208:144,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,192,80238,6,0,L|352:256,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,256,80904,2,0,L|208:192,1,75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,192,81571,2,0,L|64:128,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,96,82238,6,0,L|352:144,2,75,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,32,83238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,96,83571,2,0,L|240:160,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,144,84238,6,0,L|416:192,2,75,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,96,85238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,160,85571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,224,85904,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,272,86071,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,272,86238,6,0,L|192:192,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,128,87238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,112,87571,2,0,L|224:64,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,64,88238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,64,88571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
16,48,88904,6,0,L|80:96,2,75,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,64,89904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,64,90238,2,0,L|352:64,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,64,90904,2,0,L|96:128,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,144,91571,6,0,B|480:240|480:240|368:352,1,300,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,304,92571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,240,92904,2,0,L|240:240,2,75,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,160,93904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,16,94238,6,0,B|480:96|480:96|384:176|384:176,2,300,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,304,95904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,176,96238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,176,96571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
240,128,96738,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,80,96904,6,0,L|224:0,1,150,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,0,97904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,0,98238,2,0,L|128:48,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,80,98904,1,8,0:0:0:0:
80,128,99238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,192,99571,6,0,L|224:192,2,75,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,256,100571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,272,100904,2,0,L|224:224,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,192,101571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,128,101904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,32,102238,6,0,L|336:112,2,150,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,16,103238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
16,32,103571,2,0,B|144:112|144:112|16:192,1,300,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,224,104571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,208,104904,6,0,B|288:128|288:128|416:48,1,300,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,32,105904,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,48,106238,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,96,106571,5,8,0:0:0:0:
160,112,106738,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,128,106904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,192,107238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,192,107571,6,0,L|352:272,1,150,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,288,108571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,192,108904,1,2,0:0:0:0:
80,96,109238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,64,109571,2,0,L|256:64,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,112,110238,6,0,B|352:192|352:192|480:272,1,300,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,320,111238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,272,111571,2,0,L|144:224,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,144,112238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,96,112571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,80,112904,6,0,L|288:32,2,75,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,96,113904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,144,114238,2,0,L|256:192,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,192,114904,2,0,L|400:240,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,272,115571,6,0,B|240:192|240:192|112:112,1,300,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,64,116571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,48,116904,2,0,L|160:0,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,16,117571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,64,117904,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,112,118071,1,8,0:0:0:0:
384,160,118238,6,0,B|256:240|256:240|384:320,1,300,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,240,119238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,240,119571,2,0,L|320:240,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,240,120238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,160,120571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,128,120904,6,0,L|0:96,2,75,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,160,121904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
496,176,122238,2,0,L|448:240,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,240,122904,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,240,123238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,192,123571,6,0,L|272:112,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,96,124571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,112,124904,2,0,L|320:48,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,96,125571,2,0,L|112:32,1,75,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,112,126238,6,0,B|448:192|448:192|320:272,1,300,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,192,127238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,192,127571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
80,176,127904,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,128,128071,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,80,128238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
16,48,128571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,80,128904,6,0,L|224:208,1,150,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,256,129904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,208,130238,2,0,L|160:256,2,75,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,160,131238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,208,131571,6,0,B|96:128|96:128|224:48,1,300,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,112,132571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,208,132904,2,0,L|176:144,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,160,133571,2,0,L|352:96,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,208,134238,6,0,L|192:208,2,75,6|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,208,135238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,208,135571,2,0,L|160:144,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,128,136238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,48,136571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,48,136904,6,0,B|192:128|192:128|320:208,1,300,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,128,137904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,208,138238,2,0,L|272:272,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,208,138904,2,0,L|80:272,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,288,139571,6,0,B|496:208|496:208|368:128,1,300,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,96,140571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,128,140904,2,0,L|320:192,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,240,141571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,320,141904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,320,142238,6,0,B|160:240|160:240|32:160,1,300,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,80,143238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,112,143571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
272,192,143904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,272,144238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,304,144571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,144904,12,0,148904,0:0:0:0:

p3n

osu! Alumni

947 posts

Joined June 2009

p3n 11 years ago

[KwaN's Easy]
You should try to re-align your hitobjects without Grid Snap to polish the overall visual appearance of this map.
00:49:571 (4) - while this is correct I recommend not using the slider ending on 1/3. Using a single circle here makes this more appropriate for the difficulty level. You can decide what you like more here: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1570120
00:50:238 (1) - missed clap on ending
01:20:238 (2) - slider body is set to "Drum sampleset" - should be "Auto" (will play wrong hitsound on first play in playmode otherwise)

[Wafu's Normal]
00:40:238 (3) - missed whistle on slider head
02:22:238 (4) - missed whistle on slider head or was this intentional?

I really like the hitsound pattern in this map.

[Hard]
01:09:571 (1,2,1) - good hitsounds
01:16:238 (4) - blanket could be done better
01:31:404 (5) - overmapped note. If you want to keep it as addition to the song you should at least add proper hitsounds (SC:3 claps)
01:36:571 (4,5) - add claps
01:57:904 (5,6) - ^same
02:08:571 (5,6) - add some hitsounds. Personally I would use drum addition finish on (5) and clap on (6) to complement the previous triplet

IamKwaN

osu! Alumni

3,905 posts

Joined August 2012

IamKwaN 11 years ago

p3n

[KwaN's Easy]
You should try to re-align your hitobjects without Grid Snap to polish the overall visual appearance of this map. /.\ Would u mind pointing out where they look unpolished specific? I try to do some adjustments but I have no idea where I shd start ;w;
00:49:571 (4) - while this is correct I recommend not using the slider ending on 1/3. Using a single circle here makes this more appropriate for the difficulty level. You can decide what you like more here: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1570120 ok
00:50:238 (1) - missed clap on ending kkk
01:20:238 (2) - slider body is set to "Drum sampleset" - should be "Auto" (will play wrong hitsound on first play in playmode otherwise) yes!

SPOILER

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Shinonomegiku.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 84907
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 0.8

[Metadata]
Title:Shinonomegiku
TitleUnicode:東雲菊
Artist:BURTON
ArtistUnicode:BURTON
Creator:[_Crystal]
Version:KwaN's Easy
Source:ましろ色シンフォニー -Love is pure white-
Tags:Mashiro-iro Symphony original soundtrack ost SUBSTAC9 yf_bmp Kurokami Wafu IamKwaN
BeatmapID:387799
BeatmapSetID:152709

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:2
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:2
SliderMultiplier:0.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"sana1.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,0,0,0

[TimingPoints]
238,666.666666666667,3,2,1,20,1,0
22238,-100,3,2,2,60,0,0
54238,-100,3,2,3,60,0,0
56238,-100,3,2,2,60,0,0
56404,-100,3,2,3,60,0,0
58238,-100,3,2,2,60,0,0
58404,-100,3,2,3,60,0,0
60238,-100,3,2,2,60,0,0
60404,-100,3,2,3,60,0,0
62238,-100,3,2,2,60,0,0
62404,-100,3,2,3,60,0,0
64238,-100,3,2,2,60,0,0
64404,-100,3,2,3,60,0,0
66238,-100,3,2,2,60,0,0
66404,-100,3,2,3,60,0,0
68238,-100,3,2,2,60,0,0
68404,-100,3,2,3,60,0,0
70238,-100,3,2,2,60,0,0
86238,666.666666666667,4,2,3,60,1,1
86238,-100,4,2,2,60,0,1
94904,-100,4,2,3,60,0,1
95071,-100,4,2,2,60,0,1
97571,-100,4,2,3,60,0,1
97738,-100,4,2,2,60,0,1
105571,-100,4,2,3,60,0,1
105738,-100,4,2,2,60,0,1
106571,-100,4,2,2,40,0,0
107238,-100,4,2,2,50,0,0
107571,-100,4,2,2,60,0,1
118904,-100,4,2,3,60,0,1
119071,-100,4,2,2,60,0,1
126904,-100,4,2,3,60,0,1
127071,-100,4,2,2,60,0,1
134904,-100,4,2,3,60,0,1
135071,-100,4,2,2,60,0,1
137571,-100,4,2,3,60,0,1
137738,-100,4,2,2,60,0,1
140238,-100,4,2,3,60,0,1
140404,-100,4,2,2,60,0,1
144904,-100,4,2,3,60,0,0
146238,-100,4,2,3,50,0,0
146904,-100,4,2,3,40,0,0
147571,-100,4,2,3,30,0,0
147904,-100,4,2,3,20,0,0
148238,-100,4,2,3,10,0,0
148571,-100,4,2,3,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 170,187,180
Combo2 : 124,159,231
Combo3 : 182,148,176

[HitObjects]
112,88,238,6,0,P|80:160|88:240,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,312,2238,2,0,P|228:332|305:311,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,280,4238,6,0,B|444:244|328:168|444:148|396:88,1,200,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,56,6238,2,0,P|288:76|208:56,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,32,8238,6,0,L|96:108,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,200,9571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
96,292,10238,2,0,L|120:368,2,80,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,96,13571,6,0,P|344:100|384:96,2,80,2|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,80,15571,2,0,P|168:76|128:80,2,80,2|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,168,17571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
120,252,18238,6,0,P|120:312|144:368,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,284,20238,2,0,L|460:284,1,200,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
484,244,22238,6,0,P|500:208|500:164,1,80,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,84,23571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
356,72,24238,2,0,P|316:72|280:92,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,152,25571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,204,26238,6,0,B|176:264|244:240|244:240|280:240,2,160,2|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,120,29571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,88,30238,6,0,L|256:104,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,164,31571,2,0,L|376:160,2,40,8|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,240,32904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,316,33571,2,0,L|160:308,1,40,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,300,34238,6,0,P|108:248|124:192,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,176,35238,2,0,L|156:168,1,40,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,108,36238,2,0,L|300:96,2,80,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,152,38238,6,0,P|128:192|140:232,1,80,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,184,39571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
236,280,40238,2,0,P|274:266|303:236,1,80,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,184,41571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
308,136,42238,6,0,P|348:128|388:136,2,80,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,136,44238,2,0,P|164:128|124:136,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,224,45571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
196,316,46238,6,0,P|236:308|276:316,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,332,47571,2,0,L|384:276,1,40,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,248,48238,2,0,L|412:168,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,77,49571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
342,58,50238,6,0,P|270:86|254:170,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,255,52238,2,0,L|344:243,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,227,53571,2,0,L|434:176,1,40,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,138,54238,6,0,L|428:26,2,80,4|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,106,56238,2,0,L|336:-6,2,80,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,106,58238,6,0,L|248:-6,2,80,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,138,60238,2,0,L|156:26,2,80,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,233,62238,6,0,P|104:265|44:273,2,80,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,245,64238,2,0,P|219:293|168:327,2,80,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,181,66238,6,0,P|336:231|329:291,2,80,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,85,68238,2,0,P|312:45|300:9,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,49,69571,2,0,L|156:41,1,40,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,53,70238,6,0,L|12:81,2,80,6|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,149,72238,2,0,L|40:169,2,80,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,141,74238,6,0,L|293:160,2,80,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,237,76238,2,0,L|304:257,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,237,77571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
376,141,78238,6,0,B|368:101|336:69,2,80,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,149,80238,2,0,B|249:121|204:115,2,80,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,209,82238,6,0,B|260:257|316:233|316:233|356:257,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,277,84238,2,0,B|468:217|440:161,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,141,85571,2,0,L|344:117,1,40,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,93,86238,6,0,P|323:53|348:17,2,80,6|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,189,88238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
212,201,88904,2,0,L|128:213,2,80,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,189,90904,2,0,L|372:177,1,40,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
394,173,91571,6,0,L|406:89,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
346,32,92904,1,2,0:0:0:0:
258,72,93571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
166,48,94238,2,0,P|154:108|170:164,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,210,95571,2,0,L|100:210,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
110,305,96904,6,0,L|274:305,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
358,268,98904,1,8,0:0:0:0:
430,204,99571,2,0,L|438:124,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,58,100904,1,2,0:0:0:0:
274,36,101571,2,0,L|234:40,1,40,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
186,44,102238,6,0,L|178:124,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
106,188,103571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
130,280,104238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
214,324,104904,2,0,B|251:336|285:306|285:306|320:276|361:278,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
458,280,106904,2,0,L|464:232,1,40,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
470,192,107571,6,0,P|482:156|478:112,2,80,6|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
390,140,109571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
326,68,110238,2,0,P|362:48|410:48,2,80,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
234,92,112238,2,0,L|194:98,1,40,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
146,100,112904,6,0,L|62:108,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
2,180,114238,1,2,0:0:0:0:
58,260,114904,1,8,0:0:0:0:
154,268,115571,2,0,L|242:268,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
266,176,116904,2,0,L|354:176,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
410,248,118238,6,0,P|442:176|414:104,1,160,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
346,40,120238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
258,80,120904,2,0,P|218:80|182:60,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
94,24,122238,1,2,0:0:0:0:
86,120,122904,2,0,L|82:172,1,40,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
82,208,123571,6,0,L|86:288,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
178,320,124904,1,2,0:0:0:0:
266,280,125571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
330,208,126238,2,0,L|342:48,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
246,32,128238,2,0,L|242:80,1,40,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
238,120,128904,6,0,P|201:138|161:142,1,80,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
98,212,130238,2,0,P|116:249|120:289,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
194,348,131571,2,0,P|231:330|271:326,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
338,260,132904,2,0,P|320:223|316:183,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
310,88,134238,6,0,B|238:64|190:84|190:84|146:108|74:88,2,240,6|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
402,116,138904,1,8,0:0:0:0:
386,212,139571,6,0,P|354:280|278:316,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
186,316,141571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
118,248,142238,2,0,P|110:212|118:168,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
150,80,143571,2,0,P|186:72|230:80,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
298,144,144904,5,12,0:0:0:0:
256,192,145571,8,0,148904,0:0:0:0:

Crystal

Former osu!catch Champion: 2018

1,123 posts

Joined June 2012

Topic Starter

Crystal 11 years ago

p3n wrote:
[Hard]
01:09:571 (1,2,1) - good hitsounds thank you <3
01:16:238 (4) - blanket could be done better fixed, maybe :3 im not sure if it's blanket well because im not very experienced about this o.o
01:31:404 (5) - overmapped note. If you want to keep it as addition to the song you should at least add proper hitsounds (SC:3 claps) i have no idea about this one.. i think adding neither clap nor whistle (S:C3) at 01:31:404 (5) doesn't sound very nice... but if delete, it sounds empty.. so i'd like to keep it. if it has problem, plz tell me
01:36:571 (4,5) - add claps fixed
01:57:904 (5,6) - ^same fixed
02:08:571 (5,6) - add some hitsounds. Personally I would use drum addition finish on (5) and clap on (6) to complement the previous triplet fixed, and also add the same hitsounds at 01:47:238 (2) - because rhythm here is the same

thanks a lot for modding~!

p3n

osu! Alumni

947 posts

Joined June 2009

p3n 11 years ago

Partial re-check because of some questions, no kd for this.

[KwaN's Easy]
01:31:571 (1,2) - spacing error

As to your question:

I usually don't point these things out one by one because I don't think it belongs into this kind of mod posts but I can make an exception with a few examples...you can fix these but it is not a "hard requirement". It would just make the map look a bit better

I'll try to explain some things the way I see them. This is only my view on appearance and I don't have a problem if you disagree.

00:33:571 (4,1,2) - spacing difference is visible in play mode
00:34:238 (1,2) - direction of the sliders (maybe make them face the exact same direction)
00:42:238 (1,2) - spacing (even if it is symmetric to the center line on the grid in the editor...no one will notice the symmetry in play mode)
00:47:571 (2,3) - slider directions
01:20:238 (2,1) - blanket and roundness of (1) can be improved by adding another node: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1574516

280,149,80238,2,0,B|253:114|205:115,2,80,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
206,208,82238,6,0,B|237:244|277:252|319:235|319:235|356:257,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

01:24:238 (2,3,1) - spacing difference visible in play mode
01:52:238 (4,1) - slider alignment and direction

slider alignment

Making sliders face the exact same direction AND being perfectly in-line can be easily done by placing them on the grid either horizontal or vertically. Adjust their lengths and positions and then rotate both at the same time with the rotate function:

To make it look and feel more interesting you could use a stair, without grid snap you can hold shift to snap the note in 45° steps:

As I told you before things like this are just cosmetic and your map doesn't look "bad"...just a tiny bit rough. If you wanted you could improve it further with not much work.

[Hard]
Well if you delete 01:31:238 (4,5) - and listen closely (or even at 50% speed) you'll clearly hear nothing on 01:31:404 (5) - . I don't have a problem with adding something for a calm song like this.

I think the best solution is:

01:31:238 (4) - drum hitfinish (SC:3)
01:31:404 (5) - soft clap (SC:3)

This would be the most natural use of a snare hitsound because it adds a certain dynamic and I would really like this as an addition to the beat in this song.

Wafu

1,703 posts

Joined June 2011

Wafu 11 years ago

p3n wrote:
[Wafu's Normal]
00:40:238 (3) - missed whistle on slider head
02:22:238 (4) - missed whistle on slider head or was this intentional?

I really like the hitsound pattern in this map.

Both fixed, thanks for your mod. The second one was not intentional, I just did it fast so I missed it

IamKwaN

osu! Alumni

3,905 posts

Joined August 2012

IamKwaN 11 years ago

@p3n: fix all! Thanks for your detailed explanation!

SPOILER

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Shinonomegiku.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 84907
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 0.8

[Metadata]
Title:Shinonomegiku
TitleUnicode:東雲菊
Artist:BURTON
ArtistUnicode:BURTON
Creator:[_Crystal]
Version:KwaN's Easy
Source:ましろ色シンフォニー -Love is pure white-
Tags:Mashiro-iro Symphony original soundtrack ost SUBSTAC9 yf_bmp Kurokami Wafu IamKwaN
BeatmapID:387799
BeatmapSetID:152709

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:2
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:2
SliderMultiplier:0.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"sana1.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,0,0,0

[TimingPoints]
238,666.666666666667,3,2,1,20,1,0
22238,-100,3,2,2,60,0,0
54238,-100,3,2,3,60,0,0
56238,-100,3,2,2,60,0,0
56404,-100,3,2,3,60,0,0
58238,-100,3,2,2,60,0,0
58404,-100,3,2,3,60,0,0
60238,-100,3,2,2,60,0,0
60404,-100,3,2,3,60,0,0
62238,-100,3,2,2,60,0,0
62404,-100,3,2,3,60,0,0
64238,-100,3,2,2,60,0,0
64404,-100,3,2,3,60,0,0
66238,-100,3,2,2,60,0,0
66404,-100,3,2,3,60,0,0
68238,-100,3,2,2,60,0,0
68404,-100,3,2,3,60,0,0
70238,-100,3,2,2,60,0,0
86238,666.666666666667,4,2,3,60,1,1
86238,-100,4,2,2,60,0,1
94904,-100,4,2,3,60,0,1
95071,-100,4,2,2,60,0,1
97571,-100,4,2,3,60,0,1
97738,-100,4,2,2,60,0,1
105571,-100,4,2,3,60,0,1
105738,-100,4,2,2,60,0,1
106571,-100,4,2,2,40,0,0
107238,-100,4,2,2,50,0,0
107571,-100,4,2,2,60,0,1
118904,-100,4,2,3,60,0,1
119071,-100,4,2,2,60,0,1
126904,-100,4,2,3,60,0,1
127071,-100,4,2,2,60,0,1
134904,-100,4,2,3,60,0,1
135071,-100,4,2,2,60,0,1
137571,-100,4,2,3,60,0,1
137738,-100,4,2,2,60,0,1
140238,-100,4,2,3,60,0,1
140404,-100,4,2,2,60,0,1
144904,-100,4,2,3,60,0,0
146238,-100,4,2,3,50,0,0
146904,-100,4,2,3,40,0,0
147571,-100,4,2,3,30,0,0
147904,-100,4,2,3,20,0,0
148238,-100,4,2,3,10,0,0
148571,-100,4,2,3,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 170,187,180
Combo2 : 124,159,231
Combo3 : 182,148,176

[HitObjects]
112,88,238,6,0,P|80:160|88:240,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,312,2238,2,0,P|228:332|305:311,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,280,4238,6,0,B|444:244|328:168|444:148|396:88,1,200,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,56,6238,2,0,P|288:76|208:56,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,32,8238,6,0,L|96:108,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,200,9571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
96,292,10238,2,0,L|120:368,2,80,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,96,13571,6,0,P|344:100|384:96,2,80,2|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,80,15571,2,0,P|168:76|128:80,2,80,2|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,168,17571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
120,252,18238,6,0,P|120:312|144:368,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,284,20238,2,0,L|460:284,1,200,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
484,244,22238,6,0,P|500:208|500:164,1,80,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,84,23571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
356,72,24238,2,0,P|316:72|280:92,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,152,25571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,204,26238,6,0,B|176:264|244:240|244:240|280:240,2,160,2|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,120,29571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,88,30238,6,0,L|256:104,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,164,31571,2,0,L|376:160,2,40,8|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,240,32904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,316,33571,2,0,L|160:308,1,40,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
121,301,34238,6,0,P|109:249|125:193,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
129,178,35238,2,0,L|177:170,1,40,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
218,89,36238,2,0,L|298:77,2,80,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
134,133,38238,6,0,P|126:173|138:213,1,80,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
222,165,39571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
234,261,40238,2,0,P|272:247|301:217,1,80,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
222,165,41571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,115,42238,6,0,P|344:107|384:115,2,80,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
207,115,44238,2,0,P|167:107|127:115,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
167,205,45571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
200,295,46238,6,0,P|240:287|280:295,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,312,47571,2,0,L|388:256,1,40,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,227,48238,2,0,L|418:150,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
439,58,49571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
343,51,50238,6,0,P|271:79|255:163,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
265,248,52238,2,0,L|345:236,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
437,220,53571,2,0,L|435:169,1,40,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
433,131,54238,6,0,L|429:19,2,80,4|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,106,56238,2,0,L|336:-6,2,80,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,106,58238,6,0,L|248:-6,2,80,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,138,60238,2,0,L|156:26,2,80,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
150,234,62238,6,0,P|106:266|46:274,2,80,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
246,246,64238,2,0,P|221:294|170:328,2,80,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
318,182,66238,6,0,P|338:232|331:292,2,80,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
306,86,68238,2,0,P|314:46|302:10,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
215,51,69571,2,0,L|159:43,1,40,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
127,46,70238,6,0,L|15:74,2,80,6|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
123,142,72238,2,0,L|43:162,2,80,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,118,74238,6,0,L|293:137,2,80,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,214,76238,2,0,L|304:234,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
394,256,77571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
374,160,78238,6,0,B|366:120|334:88,2,80,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
278,169,80238,2,0,B|251:134|203:135,2,80,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,228,82238,6,0,B|235:264|275:272|317:255|317:255|354:277,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
438,302,84238,2,0,B|466:242|438:186,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
394,166,85571,2,0,L|342:142,1,40,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,133,86238,6,0,P|319:93|344:57,2,80,6|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
317,228,88238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
221,240,88904,2,0,L|137:252,2,80,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
317,228,90904,2,0,L|381:216,1,40,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
403,213,91571,6,0,L|415:129,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
338,74,92904,1,2,0:0:0:0:
250,114,93571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
158,90,94238,2,0,P|146:150|162:206,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
173,252,95571,2,0,L|93:252,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,345,96904,6,0,L|276:345,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,308,98904,1,8,0:0:0:0:
432,244,99571,2,0,L|440:164,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
370,98,100904,1,2,0:0:0:0:
276,76,101571,2,0,L|236:80,1,40,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,87,102238,6,0,L|180:167,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,231,103571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
132,323,104238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
216,367,104904,2,0,B|253:379|287:349|287:349|322:319|363:321,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
458,320,106904,2,0,L|464:272,1,40,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
470,229,107571,6,0,P|482:193|478:149,2,80,6|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
390,177,109571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
326,105,110238,2,0,P|362:85|410:85,2,80,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,116,112238,2,0,L|192:120,1,40,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,125,112904,6,0,L|64:133,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
8,212,114238,1,2,0:0:0:0:
58,292,114904,1,8,0:0:0:0:
154,300,115571,2,0,L|242:300,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,212,116904,2,0,L|360:212,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
413,285,118238,6,0,P|445:213|417:141,1,160,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,63,120238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,103,120904,2,0,P|232:103|196:83,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
103,50,122238,1,2,0:0:0:0:
95,146,122904,2,0,L|91:198,1,40,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
91,234,123571,6,0,L|95:314,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
187,346,124904,1,2,0:0:0:0:
275,306,125571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
339,234,126238,2,0,L|351:74,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,55,128238,2,0,L|252:103,1,40,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,143,128904,6,0,P|211:161|171:165,1,80,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,235,130238,2,0,P|126:272|130:312,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,371,131571,2,0,P|241:353|281:349,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,283,132904,2,0,P|330:246|326:206,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,111,134238,6,0,B|248:87|200:107|200:107|156:131|84:111,2,240,6|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,139,138904,1,8,0:0:0:0:
396,235,139571,6,0,P|364:303|288:339,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,339,141571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,271,142238,2,0,P|120:235|128:191,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,103,143571,2,0,P|196:95|240:103,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,167,144904,5,12,0:0:0:0:
256,192,145571,12,0,148904,0:0:0:0:

Crystal

Former osu!catch Champion: 2018

1,123 posts

Joined June 2012

Topic Starter

Crystal 11 years ago

p3n wrote:
Partial re-check because of some questions, no kd for this.

[Hard]
Well if you delete 01:31:238 (4,5) - and listen closely (or even at 50% speed) you'll clearly hear nothing on 01:31:404 (5) - . I don't have a problem with adding something for a calm song like this.

I think the best solution is:

01:31:238 (4) - drum hitfinish (SC:3)
01:31:404 (5) - soft clap (SC:3) sorry, do you mean add sampleset drum hitfinish (soft clap) with S:C3? i don't understand very clearly.. ;w; but i've used this pattern (in my understanding), if im wrong please tell me the correct solution. sorry and thank you :3

This would be the most natural use of a snare hitsound because it adds a certain dynamic and I would really like this as an addition to the beat in this song.

p3n

osu! Alumni

947 posts

Joined June 2009

p3n 11 years ago

[_Crystal] wrote:
sorry, do you mean add sampleset drum hitfinish (soft clap) with S:C3? i don't understand very clearly.. ;w; but i've used this pattern (in my understanding), if im wrong please tell me the correct solution. sorry and thank you :3

Leave the Sampleset on "Auto" for both notes and just change the Additions to "Drum" for 01:31:238 (4) and leave Additions on "Auto" for the clap on 01:31:404 (5)

Sampleset changes the whole object AND the Additions (if Additions = "Auto"). You want to keep the basic hitsound of your notes and only change one Addition (= added hitsound like whistle, finish, clap).

Hope this explains it. Sorry for the confusion

Crystal

Former osu!catch Champion: 2018

1,123 posts

Joined June 2012

Topic Starter

Crystal 11 years ago

p3n wrote:
Leave the Sampleset on "Auto" for both notes and just change the Additions to "Drum" for 01:31:238 (4) and leave Additions on "Auto" for the clap on 01:31:404 (5)

Sampleset changes the whole object AND the Additions (if Additions = "Auto"). You want to keep the basic hitsound of your notes and only change one Addition (= added hitsound like whistle, finish, clap).

Hope this explains it. Sorry for the confusion

thank you, fixed

SUBSTAC9

288 posts

Joined May 2009

SUBSTAC9 11 years ago

Jekate wrote:
[Salad]
Hitsounding:
00:23:571 (3) - Add clap
00:25:571 (7) - Add clap
00:27:571 (3) - Add clap
00:29:571 (7) - Add clap
00:31:571 (3) - Add clap
00:33:571 (3) - Add clap on head
00:44:238 (2) - Add finish on head? I think the curent whistle sound is weak to fill that part not fit in salad style
00:53:904 (4) - Add clap? for variation on hitsounding and to make a sign that the hitsounding for the next part is diffrent
00:56:238 (3) - Add whistle on tail
00:58:238 (1) - Add whistle on tail
01:00:571 (4) - Change clap into whistle on reverse arrow, to fit more the song
01:02:238 (1) - Change clap into whistle on tail
01:04:238 (5) - Change clap into whistle on tail
01:06:238 (4) - Change clap into whistle on tail
01:08:904 (3) - Change clap into whistle
01:27:571 (2) - Add whistle on head
01:29:904 (2) - Add whistle on tail
01:36:571 (6) - Add clap
01:36:738 (7) - Add clap
01:36:904 (8) - Delete whistle
01:45:571 (1) - Add clap on tail
01:46:238 (2) - Delete whistle
01:46:738 (4) - Add clap
01:46:904 (5) - Add clap
01:57:904 (7) - Add clap
01:58:071 (8) - Add clap
01:58:238 (1) - Delete whistle on head
02:06:904 (4) - Add clap on reverse
02:08:071 (6) - Add clap
^hitsound check
Rhythm:
00:19:571 (1) - Maybe that spinner should be start at here 00:20:238 - and end at here 00:21:904 - Following the piano and cymbal like sound from the music it'll fit better um I follow by first sound income so change end spinner instead.
00:35:904 (2) - Delete? for better rhythm and to make a "stop" effect while playing ok
00:37:904 (5) - Same reason as above not change sorry
01:24:238 (2) - Reduce the slider lenght to the red tick, here 01:25:238 - to follow the drum sound and add a circle here 01:25:571 - with clap on it ok
01:25:738 (4) - Delete? for better rhythm sorry
01:30:571 (3) - Delete? for better rhythm ^
02:14:904 (1) - Reduce the spiner lenght to the white tick here 02:17:571 - To follow the violin sound instead ok nice

Misc:
00:54:238 - Delete that green line (inherited point), because useless. Or you can adjust volume on that green line to 50% since that part is a bit calm then you can add a green line here 01:10:238 - to make the volume back to 60% done

Thank you very much
update

SPOILER

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Shinonomegiku.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 84907
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 2
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 16
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Shinonomegiku
TitleUnicode:東雲菊
Artist:BURTON
ArtistUnicode:BURTON
Creator:[_Crystal]
Version:STAC's Salad
Source:ましろ色シンフォニー -Love is pure white-
Tags:Mashiro-iro Symphony original soundtrack ost SUBSTAC9 yf_bmp Kurokami Wafu IamKwaN
BeatmapID:401256
BeatmapSetID:152709

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.5
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"sana1.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,0,0,0

[TimingPoints]
238,666.666666666667,3,2,1,20,1,0
22238,-100,3,2,1,60,0,0
76238,-50,3,2,1,60,0,0
77571,-100,3,2,1,60,0,0
86238,666.666666666667,4,2,1,60,1,1
86238,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
91571,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
92238,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
94238,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
95571,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
104904,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
105571,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
107238,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
107571,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
110238,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
110904,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
118238,-50,4,2,1,60,0,1
118904,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
127904,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
128904,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
134904,-100,4,2,1,55,0,1
136238,-100,4,2,1,50,0,1
137571,-100,4,2,1,45,0,1
138904,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
144904,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
146238,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
146904,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
147571,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
147904,-100,4,2,1,20,0,0
148238,-100,4,2,1,10,0,0
148571,-100,4,2,1,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 170,187,180
Combo2 : 124,159,231
Combo3 : 182,148,176

[HitObjects]
256,192,19571,12,0,21904,0:0:0:0:
384,192,22238,6,0,L|208:192,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,192,23238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,192,23571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,23904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,64,24238,2,0,L|304:64,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,128,25238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,128,25571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
48,192,25904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,208,26238,6,0,L|384:208,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,112,27238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,112,27571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
32,112,27904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,112,28238,2,0,L|128:112,2,75,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,192,29238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,112,29571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,192,29904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,192,30238,6,0,L|448:80,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,192,31238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,192,31571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,192,31904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,192,32238,6,0,L|64:80,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,80,33238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,192,33571,2,0,L|448:80,1,150,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,112,34571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
92,192,34904,6,0,L|60:272,2,75,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,192,36238,2,0,L|388:288,2,75,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,192,37238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,192,37571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,192,37904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,192,38238,6,0,L|272:96,1,150,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,64,39238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,64,39571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,64,39904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,176,40238,2,0,L|480:280,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,288,41238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,296,41571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,288,41904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,288,42238,6,0,L|448:144,2,150,2|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,288,44238,2,0,L|64:144,2,150,2|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,192,46238,6,0,L|352:192,2,150,2|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,47904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,192,48238,2,0,L|368:192,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,192,49238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,192,49571,2,0,L|160:192,2,150,10|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,192,51571,6,0,L|240:192,2,150,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,96,53238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,96,53571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,96,53904,1,8,0:0:0:0:
400,96,54238,6,0,P|432:160|384:240,1,150,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,55238,2,0,L|352:192,2,75,0|10|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,288,56238,2,0,P|80:224|128:144,1,150,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,96,57238,2,0,L|160:96,2,75,0|10|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,192,58238,6,0,P|160:240|208:192,1,150,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,128,59238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,192,59571,2,0,P|352:240|304:192,1,150,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,320,60571,2,0,L|104:320,2,75,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,320,61571,1,10,0:0:0:0:
256,272,61904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,320,62238,6,0,L|48:144,1,150,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,192,63238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,192,63571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,352,63904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,320,64238,2,0,L|464:144,1,150,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,64,65238,5,0,0:0:0:0:
272,64,65571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,64,65904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,64,66238,2,0,L|192:64,1,150,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,67238,2,0,L|80:288,2,75,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,112,68238,5,2,0:0:0:0:
256,48,68571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,112,68904,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,48,69238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
80,128,69571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,48,69904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,128,70238,6,0,L|336:272,1,150,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,128,71571,2,0,L|176:272,1,150,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,192,72571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,192,72904,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,192,73238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,192,73571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
368,192,74238,6,0,L|384:288,2,75,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,192,75238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,192,75571,2,0,L|128:288,2,75,8|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,192,76904,2,0,L|96:192,1,300,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,80,78238,6,0,L|240:80,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,80,79238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,112,79571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,224,79904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,192,80238,2,0,L|230:192,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,192,81238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,81571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
432,192,81904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,192,82238,6,0,L|96:192,1,300,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,84238,2,0,L|304:192,1,225,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,192,85571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,192,85738,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,192,85904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,192,86071,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,192,86238,1,4,0:0:0:0:
416,80,86904,6,0,L|416:176,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,192,87571,2,0,L|304:96,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,80,88238,2,0,L|96:176,2,75,8|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,128,89238,6,0,L|320:208,1,75,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,192,89904,2,0,L|192:272,1,75,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,320,90571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,288,90904,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,320,91238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,320,91571,6,0,P|416:272|416:48,1,300,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,240,92904,2,0,P|144:208|160:96,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,176,94238,2,0,B|256:96|80:192,2,300,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,328,95904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
76,192,96238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
368,256,96571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
416,224,96738,1,8,0:0:0:0:
464,192,96904,1,4,0:0:0:0:
120,192,97571,6,0,L|168:96,2,75,8|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,192,98904,1,8,0:0:0:0:
360,192,99238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,192,99571,2,0,L|352:96,2,150,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,101571,5,8,0:0:0:0:
368,192,101904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,192,102238,2,0,L|32:192,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,192,103571,2,0,L|480:192,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,112,104904,2,0,L|112:112,1,150,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,105571,6,0,L|352:192,1,75,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,192,106238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,192,106571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,106738,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,192,106904,1,10,0:0:0:0:
48,192,107238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,192,107571,6,0,L|384:96,1,150,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,112,108571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,108,108904,1,2,0:0:0:0:
128,112,109238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,112,109571,2,0,L|400:256,1,150,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,256,110571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,243,110904,5,8,0:0:0:0:
392,243,111238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,256,111571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,256,111904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,192,112238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
32,192,112571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,256,112904,6,0,L|416:256,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,192,113904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,192,114238,2,0,L|0:192,2,150,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,128,115904,5,0,0:0:0:0:
368,192,116238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
512,192,116571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,192,116904,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,128,117238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,192,117571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
512,192,117904,1,8,0:0:0:0:
424,192,118071,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,192,118238,6,0,B|160:192|160:192|128:32,1,300,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,80,119238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,144,119571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
416,160,119904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,144,120238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
416,160,120571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,272,120904,6,0,P|128:224|96:176,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,272,122238,2,0,P|384:224|416:176,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,96,123238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,192,123571,2,0,L|16:256,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,192,124571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,192,124904,6,0,L|432:256,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,288,125571,2,0,L|272:336,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,288,126238,2,0,L|160:192,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,192,126904,2,0,L|32:256,2,75,8|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,192,127904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,128071,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,192,128238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,192,128571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,192,128904,6,0,L|448:192,1,150,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,192,129904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,192,130238,2,0,L|368:192,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,192,131238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,131571,2,0,L|288:192,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,192,132571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,132904,2,0,L|432:192,2,150,2|8|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,134904,12,0,137571,0:0:0:0:
144,192,138904,5,8,0:0:0:0:
368,192,139238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,96,139571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,96,140238,5,8,0:0:0:0:
16,96,140571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,140904,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,288,141238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,141571,5,8,0:0:0:0:
256,96,141904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
496,96,142238,1,2,0:0:0:0:
384,192,142571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,142904,6,0,L|176:288,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,143571,2,0,L|336:288,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,192,144238,6,0,L|0:176,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,144904,12,0,148904,0:0:0:0: