BURTON - Shinonomegiku [Osu|CatchTheBeat] · forum

Crystal

Former osu!catch Champion: 2018

Joined June 2012

Topic Starter

Crystal 2014-03-23T02:54:19+00:00

ZZHBOY wrote:
晚上又喝多干了这杯
[general]
建议把normal的CS-1让整体的diff spread好点毕竟EZ是cs1
[hard]
最高难度尽量别漏音太明显比如00:44:241 - 这里怎么放都比较违和因为不是1/8
00:49:574 - 三分拍加原曲没有的音效感觉还是违和或者音量弄小一点好的
01:04:241 (1,3) - 没blanket好
01:13:241 (4,5) - ^
01:28:241 (5,6) - ^
01:49:574 (5,6) - ^
02:23:241 (2,3) - ^ 以上都改了
01:10:241 (3) - NC 下一个额Nc把cancel了的好额
01:26:241 (5) - ^ 好
01:47:241 (2) - DS好高啊美味ent? 美味ent
01:56:907 (3) - 前后DS差太多感觉不太好把下一个额滑条弄近一点或者把这个弄远点吧稍微修改了下现在感觉这个DS没有问题了
02:05:241 - 这里明显有个音最好别空不了,因为快到结尾了不跟鼓了
02:09:907 - ^ ^
02:20:907 (5) - 角度这么大好丑的有吗?没感觉丑..
美丽

谢谢mod

Last edited by Crystal 2014-03-23T05:58:14+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

IamKwaN

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Joined August 2012

IamKwaN 2014-03-23T05:47:00+00:00

ZZHBOY wrote:
[easy]
可以考虑给slider tick加上音效現在有音的啊
00:15:574 (2) - 弧度大一点美观跟00:13:574 (1) 是一對的
00:35:241 (2) - 简化成白线的单点就可以啦不然三个滑条挤一起很丑的欸豈不是漏音了
01:12:241 (2) - 建议和上一个一样不要有弧度美观问题多弧度blanket就美麗
01:33:574 (3,4) - 完全可以把4像上移点blanket嘛美观為啥我覺得這blanket很醜
01:34:241 - 这里也可以加finish音效不耶我是抄Normal的音效我看你nm也沒建議+finish 所以不了

Neta

536 posts

Joined May 2011

Neta 2014-03-24T15:53:03+00:00

Hello~ from my modding queue

[KwaN's Easy]

00:52:241 (2,3) - how about this one?
SPOILER

SPOILER
NICEMAP~~

[Wafu's Normal]

map is good but i think you should use little more hitsound...
NP

[Hard]

00:22:907 (3,4) - little more bending will be nice
01:02:241 (3) - Ctrl + G?
01:15:574 (2) - ^
02:12:241 (5) - ^

so nice map ~

can't find many problems XD

STAR and GL~

Kurokami

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4,024 posts

Joined February 2010

Kurokami 2014-03-24T16:51:48+00:00

Sorry, no change on CtB. The only jump is at (2) to (3) and that is not really a long one. It is during the kiai anyways.

Crystal

Former osu!catch Champion: 2018

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Topic Starter

Crystal 2014-03-25T10:21:02+00:00

Neta wrote:
Hello~ from my modding queue <3

[Hard]
00:22:907 (3,4) - little more bending will be nice that's right, fixed <3
01:02:241 (3) - Ctrl + G?
01:15:574 (2) - ^
02:12:241 (5) - ^ all nope because it's on purpose
so nice map ~

can't find many problems XD

STAR and GL~ :3 thanks~

thanks for modding and star~~

IamKwaN

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IamKwaN 2014-03-25T11:55:53+00:00

@Neta: fix all of them.

SPOILER

osu file format v12

[General]
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PreviewTime: 84907
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
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[Editor]
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TitleUnicode:東雲菊
Artist:BURTON
ArtistUnicode:BURTON
Creator:[_Crystal]
Version:KwaN's Easy
Source:ましろ色シンフォニー -Love is pure white-
Tags:Mashiro-iro Symphony original soundtrack ost SUBSTAC9 yf_bmp Kurokami Wafu IamKwaN
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10crystalmask01

10crystalmask01 2014-03-25T20:54:04+00:00

Hey, mod from queue

[Hard]

*Overall I'd say the rhythm is good, but it's also a little dull. Try making some triplet hit objects in the rhythm, to it spice up!
00:23:407 - Add a hit circle?
00:25:407 - ^
00:27:407 - ^
00:31:407 - ^
00:39:407 - ^
00:41:407 - ^
00:45:407 - ^
00:57:074 - ^
00:59:407 - ^
01:01:074 - ^
01:06:741 - ^
01:13:074 - ^
01:15:407 - ^
01:17:074 - ^
01:21:074 - ^
00:58:241 (1,2,3,4) - Square or diamond, you can still fix this shape.

[Wafu's Normal]
Circle size - 1? Their spacing is quite large for a Normal diff. And also so that the circle size is consistent throughout the diff (Easy - 2, Normal 4, Hard - 4)
00:05:241 - Not going to add a note here to start the follow up with the piano notes?
00:11:907 - ^
00:31:574 (3) - Consider making it a 1/2 slider from 00:31:574 - 00:31:907
00:47:907 (2,1) - I hate being nazi, but I have to say please fix the blanket here.
01:09:907 - Interesting. Try adding a note here with a drum clap. After you add the hitsound, just adjust the setting (shown the the top left) to this:

01:25:907 - Same as above

02:08:241 (3,4) - Change the whistle on these notes to drum claps?
02:19:241 - Add a note here with a clap

[KwaN's Easy]
Looks fine to me.

Good luck.

Crystal

Former osu!catch Champion: 2018

1,123 posts

Joined June 2012

Topic Starter

Crystal 2014-03-26T12:03:13+00:00

10crystalmask01 wrote:
Hey, mod from queue xD
[Hard]

*Overall I'd say the rhythm is good, but it's also a little dull. Try making some triplet hit objects in the rhythm, to it spice up!
00:23:407 - Add a hit circle?
00:25:407 - ^
00:27:407 - ^
00:31:407 - ^
00:39:407 - ^
00:41:407 - ^
00:45:407 - ^
00:57:074 - ^
00:59:407 - ^
01:01:074 - ^
01:06:741 - ^
01:13:074 - ^
01:15:407 - ^
01:17:074 - ^
01:21:074 - ^ i just follow the music, if add circles at these places it doesn't sound very good imo. so no fix sry ;w;
00:58:241 (1,2,3,4) - Square or diamond, you can still fix this shape. 00:58:907 (3,4,5,6) - is shaped as well, making 00:58:241 (1,2,3,4) -square-shaped or diamond-shaped breaks this shape. so im not going to fix it sry

Good luck. :3 thanks

thanks anyway <333

Wafu

1,703 posts

Joined June 2011

Wafu 2014-03-27T17:19:53+00:00

I'm sorry, but nothing fixed in both mods, I don't find any of these things much reasonable, or they were even wrong.

lkx_Shore

1,453 posts

Joined January 2010

lkx_Shore 2014-03-28T10:03:05+00:00

[Hard]
00:08:241 (2) - 我觉得这是一个1/8的3连打...在hard里放一个1/8的来回我觉得是没问题的
00:12:241 (5) - delete,00:10:574 (2,4) - 换note，这段还是不要放多余的节奏了，不自然
00:19:241 - 这个音还是别漏了
00:33:574 (3) - 嗯我觉得有1/8就应该下1/8..
00:44:241 (1) - ^ 不过这个好像是1/6折返一次
00:50:241 (2) - 还是1/8
01:06:241 - ^
01:10:074 (2) - 换drum，然后01:10:241 (1) - 加finish
01:36:907 (1) - 去掉头里的clap
01:36:907 (1) - 还不如单用finish

跳都是随机跳，这样从表达音乐的最初宗旨上已经fail。当然随机跳没什么，毕竟“打着爽”

[Wafu's nm]
two bigwhitle line add one NC is better imo

[at last]
我觉得timing有点不对...

Crystal

Former osu!catch Champion: 2018

1,123 posts

Joined June 2012

Topic Starter

Crystal 2014-03-28T13:13:27+00:00

lkx_Shore wrote:
[Hard]
00:08:241 (2) - 我觉得这是一个1/8的3连打...在hard里放一个1/8的来回我觉得是没问题的但是这首曲子很平静的耶,开头更是静的可以,突然放个1/8有点突然的感觉
00:12:241 (5) - delete,00:10:574 (2,4) - 换note，这段还是不要放多余的节奏了，不自然嗯确实是,但是我不确定改动后是不是更好,如果后面还有modder提出来的话我再改动
00:19:241 - 这个音还是别漏了改了
00:33:574 (3) - 嗯我觉得有1/8就应该下1/8.. 但是不好衔接,个人认为,map这首歌我不太想在节奏上做的太"跳跃"
00:44:241 (1) - ^ 不过这个好像是1/6折返一次不,我听了很多遍是间隔不同的,所以就用一个circle这样子
00:50:241 (2) - 还是1/8 还是不好衔接,个人认为;w;
01:06:241 - ^
01:10:074 (2) - 换drum，然后01:10:241 (1) - 加finish ok改了
01:36:907 (1) - 去掉头里的clap
01:36:907 (1) - 还不如单用finish 改了,这两个是说的一个嘛?还是复制错了时间线;w;

跳都是随机跳，这样从表达音乐的最初宗旨上已经fail。当然随机跳没什么，毕竟“打着爽” 我初衷就是想摆随机的,所以;w; 当然我比较叒所以不太会表达音乐

[at last]
我觉得timing有点不对... 确实是,会改,先和其他mapper说一下等会统一改动

谢谢mod

IamKwaN

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IamKwaN 2014-03-28T13:34:15+00:00

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Yumeno Himiko

Elite Storyboarder

1,168 posts

Joined August 2012

Yumeno Himiko 2014-03-28T14:56:49+00:00

先射一颗星星~~
好既然叫我mod了那我就来了
You'll see many ~~useless~~ suggestions. I hope it will be of help to your map.
前面这么多摸过的我菊得general应该不用看惹

[KwaN's Easy]
00:17:574 (3) - 左移1格
00:54:241 (1,2,1,2) - 可以改成逐渐向左下移动的看起来可能更好？
01:24:241 (2) - 感觉拖得不好看
Ez做得挺好摸不出啥东西来=。=

[Wafu's Normal]
00:19:741 (1) - This spinner should start from 00:19:907 here (Since it's a Normal level)
00:50:241 (1) - 1grid down and 1 grid left
01:46:241 (3) - change the circle to a slider may feel better?
02:10:907 (2) - ^
Well done but I feel a bit strange QAQ //Maybe in sliders? some sliders just feel uncomfortable.

[Hard]
首先check一下ds啊 hard对DS的要求还是有的开了一下AImod看到一堆DS问题可能你是换DS摆的四暗刻不过还是注意一下
00:19:574 (5) - 重新拉一下
00:34:907 (1,2,3,4) - 不够美观
00:42:241 (1,2,3,1) - 后面突然少一个音感觉不太好可以考虑换成slider 不过保持这样也可以或者换个折返的slider
00:58:241 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 其实这种点你都是怎么摆的.-.
01:22:574 (4) - 这个note删掉
02:18:907 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - 最后这段DS明显开太大了我觉得要remap一下
感觉跟normal一样有几个slider看起来挺别扭应该是弧度太大可以考虑重新画一下
然后有的地方可以补点节奏进去这个Hard感觉偏简单//单说节奏

[STAC's Salad]

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I forget if the salad can be FC without using dashes TUT,if dashes can use,ignore the following
00:37:907 (6,1) - I can't catch this without using a dash,consider change it.
00:53:907 (4,1) - ^
01:05:907 (3,4) - ^
01:46:241 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - ^
01:57:907 (7,8,1) - ^
02:21:907 (2,3) - ^

01:16:907 (4) - I think this can be a reversed slider
01:25:741 (3,4,5) - change them to a slider or delete them
01:34:241 (3) - Needs to be fixed as the plate has to move a long way and may be hard for beginners
02:12:574 (6,7) - just follow the previous patterns looks better~

[Kurokami's Platter]
00:44:241 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - These two threats me. Maybe can make the ds shorter.
in kiai time maybe use too many dashes. consider cut some distances down.
good rhythm and well mapped~ I believe it's a wonderful CTB diff.

好了其实我也没摸出啥
有啥乱提的建议不要打我我请你吃桶还不行吗

Wafu

1,703 posts

Joined June 2011

Wafu 2014-03-28T16:09:28+00:00

I'm sorry, nothing fixed in examination's mod. I don't find these important, because you know, one grid left, one grid right.. these things are not worth changing, it's almost invisible.

IamKwaN

osu! Alumni

3,905 posts

Joined August 2012

IamKwaN 2014-03-28T17:37:29+00:00

@考試: fix了第一個;然後第二跟第三個都是intentional的,所以就不fix了
@Crystal: 下面這個是最新版

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Crystal

Former osu!catch Champion: 2018

1,123 posts

Joined June 2012

Topic Starter

Crystal 2014-03-30T05:24:14+00:00

examination wrote:
先射一颗星星~~ 谢谢:3
好既然叫我mod了那我就来了
You'll see many ~~useless~~ suggestions. I hope it will be of help to your map.
前面这么多摸过的我菊得general应该不用看惹 ._.

[Hard]
首先check一下ds啊 hard对DS的要求还是有的开了一下AImod看到一堆DS问题可能你是换DS摆的四暗刻不过还是注意一下有么;w;
00:19:574 (5) - 重新拉一下不懂什么意思=.= 我感觉挺好
00:34:907 (1,2,3,4) - 不够美观改了
00:42:241 (1,2,3,1) - 后面突然少一个音感觉不太好可以考虑换成slider 不过保持这样也可以或者换个折返的slider 但是不管怎么放都比较违和,这样我感觉是最好了
00:58:241 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 其实这种点你都是怎么摆的.-. .-.
01:22:574 (4) - 这个note删掉 nope D:
02:18:907 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - 最后这段DS明显开太大了我觉得要remap一下为什么;w;
感觉跟normal一样有几个slider看起来挺别扭应该是弧度太大可以考虑重新画一下 bpm低呀,弧度再减小就比较boring了
然后有的地方可以补点节奏进去这个Hard感觉偏简单//单说节奏好我考虑一下

好了其实我也没摸出啥
有啥乱提的建议不要打我我请你吃桶还不行吗 ;w;

谢谢mod

yf_bmp

Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper

1,630 posts

Joined December 2011

yf_bmp 2014-03-30T08:06:38+00:00

M4M moeXingxing

Notice:

Red: Be unrankable
Blue: Be important
Black: Suggestions

[General]
建议将tick音与默认的soft-hitnormal音混合:3

[Hard]
有一些滑条都拉的太弯了比如00:33:571 (3,4) - 00:38:904 (3,4) - 等有些丑改一下更好吧

00:59:238 (4,5,6) - 尝试等距?
01:20:238 (5) - ctrl+g更好flow感觉
01:22:238 (3,4,5) - 等距?
01:24:238 (1,2,3) - ^
02:23:571 (3,4,5) - 尾杀不好 02:24:571 (4) - x:384 y:68 这里附近可以接受
02:24:904 (5) - 换finish

好

[Normal]
00:00:238 (1,1) - blank them better
00:47:904 (2,1) - blank better
02:00:907 (1,3) - ^
02:03:574 (1,3) - ^

[Easy]
00:49:571 (4) - 節奏對於ez有些不太好掌握
01:20:238 (2,1) - 包好啦
01:24:238 (2) - 這個也是

Nothing serious. The map is good enough to rank!
M4M map: http://osu.ppy.sh/s/152595 thanks~

IamKwaN

osu! Alumni

3,905 posts

Joined August 2012

IamKwaN 2014-03-30T13:02:06+00:00

yf_bmp wrote:
M4M moeXingxing moe yf <3

[Easy]
00:49:571 (4) - 節奏對於ez有些不太好掌握但那裡真的是1/3
01:20:238 (2,1) - 包好啦 kkk
01:24:238 (2) - 這個也是 kkk

Thanks!

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Kurokami

osu! Alumni

4,024 posts

Joined February 2010

Kurokami 2014-03-31T05:13:03+00:00

Ok. Here is my diff. Yeah, the timing is much better. I forgot to check it before mapping but oh well.

SPOILER

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Shinonomegiku.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 84907
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 2
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 16
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Shinonomegiku
TitleUnicode:東雲菊
Artist:BURTON
ArtistUnicode:BURTON
Creator:[_Crystal]
Version:Kurokami's Platter
Source:ましろ色シンフォニー -Love is pure white-
Tags:Mashiro-iro Symphony original soundtrack ost SUBSTAC9 yf_bmp Kurokami Wafu IamKwaN
BeatmapID:382311
BeatmapSetID:152709

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.5
SliderTickRate:2

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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
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//Storyboard Sound Samples
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Edit: Ok, edited with the latest timing.

SUBSTAC9

288 posts

Joined May 2009

SUBSTAC9 2014-03-31T07:04:26+00:00

examination wrote:
[STAC's Salad]
collapsed text
I forget if the salad can be FC without using dashes TUT,if dashes can use,ignore the following
00:37:907 (6,1) - I can't catch this without using a dash,consider change it.
00:53:907 (4,1) - ^
01:05:907 (3,4) - ^
01:46:241 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - ^
01:57:907 (7,8,1) - ^
02:21:907 (2,3) - ^
yeah that's can Dash improve to be more challenge but there's not over HDash I consider and adjust some with your suggests from above.
01:16:907 (4) - I think this can be a reversed slider sorry not change
01:25:741 (3,4,5) - change them to a slider or delete them ahmm.. add note is better
01:34:241 (3) - Needs to be fixed as the plate has to move a long way and may be hard for beginners change for all pattern thanks
02:12:574 (6,7) - just follow the previous patterns looks better~ ok

edit to final timing and fix from examination's modding
thank you

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Crystal

Former osu!catch Champion: 2018

1,123 posts

Joined June 2012

Topic Starter

Crystal 2014-03-31T10:18:16+00:00

yf_bmp wrote:
M4M moeXingxing moeYF >.<

Notice:

Red: Be unrankable
Blue: Be important
Black: Suggestions
[General]
建议将tick音与默认的soft-hitnormal音混合:3 ok

[Hard]
有一些滑条都拉的太弯了比如00:33:571 (3,4) - 00:38:904 (3,4) - 等有些丑改一下更好吧其实我感觉还好;w;听听后面人怎么说吧

00:59:238 (4,5,6) - 尝试等距? 改了
01:20:238 (5) - ctrl+g更好flow感觉 ;w;个人不太喜欢这样后面怎么调整都不太好衔接
01:22:238 (3,4,5) - 等距? 改了
01:24:238 (1,2,3) - ^ 改了
02:23:571 (3,4,5) - 尾杀不好 02:24:571 (4) - x:384 y:68 这里附近可以接受改了
02:24:904 (5) - 换finish 改了

好 ^^

Nothing serious. The map is good enough to rank! >.<谢谢
M4M map: http://osu.ppy.sh/s/152595 thanks~ ok, will check it soon

谢谢mod

smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

smallboat 2014-04-02T08:43:55+00:00

嗨星星，來晚。

[General]

Widescreen support 不一致，check君媽的diff.

[KwaN's Easy]

00:18:238 (1) - 尾端應該是在後一格白線，這樣滑的比較舒服，現在這個感覺才滑到一半，有點不舒服的感覺。
00:34:238 (1,2) - 這邊節奏有點太複雜，不如跟00:36:238 (2) 一樣，玩得比較順暢。
00:44:238 (2,3) - ^ 節奏用 00:42:238 (1) 試試。
00:50:238 (1) - 尾端應該是前一格白線。
01:12:238 (2) - 不太喜歡這種要彎不彎要直不直的slider，只是我的意見，不如全部弄直?
02:24:904 (3) - 這裡應該NC?

[Wafu's Normal] Why are you have so many object's unsnapped? (Check the Aimod)

00:05:238 (2) - Have a rhythm at this here,so I think add this ,can fit the music.
00:17:238 (2) - ^
00:29:238 (2) - ^
00:31:904 (4) - ^
00:37:238 (2) - ^

[Hard] 有些輕柔的whistle聲都被clap蓋住了..所以我建議要remove..

00:22:904 (3) - 這個去掉clap，聽起來比較自然些，連續兩個聽的很noisy，所以00:23:571 (4) 開頭有鼓聲就強調這裡就好了。
00:24:904 (3) - ^
00:26:904 (3) - ^
00:30:904 (2) - ^
00:32:904 (2) - ^
00:36:904 (2) - ^
00:38:904 (3) - ^
00:40:904 (3) - ^
00:42:904 (2) - ^
00:44:238 (1) - 換1/4折返?
00:44:904 (2) - 這個去掉clap
00:46:238 (1) - 尾端音效去掉
01:00:238 (7) - 開頭我覺得是whistle
01:06:904 (1) - 這個去掉clap
01:08:904 (5) - ^
01:13:571 (7) - 前後加兩個clap聽起來很奇怪，搬動後面那一個比較適合音樂。
01:22:904 (5) - 這個去掉clap (後面還有類似的試試自己搬動看看? 有些沒有鼓聲卻放clap，不如不要加)
02:24:904 (5) - 試試這裡NC?

節奏不錯沒什麼問題，只是音效有點..聽的不太舒服...

祝星星RANK ~ !

IamKwaN

osu! Alumni

3,905 posts

Joined August 2012

IamKwaN 2014-04-02T09:14:35+00:00

smallboat wrote:
嗨星星，來晚。 \:D/

[General]

Widescreen support 不一致，check君媽的diff. 無SB,所以跟我uncheck才對

[KwaN's Easy]

00:18:238 (1) - 尾端應該是在後一格白線，這樣滑的比較舒服，現在這個感覺才滑到一半，有點不舒服的感覺。我在跟鋼琴;w;
00:34:238 (1,2) - 這邊節奏有點太複雜，不如跟00:36:238 (2) 一樣，玩得比較順暢。這樣會漏掉00:35:238
00:44:238 (2,3) - ^ 節奏用 00:42:238 (1) 試試。再想想
00:50:238 (1) - 尾端應該是前一格白線。對
01:12:238 (2) - 不太喜歡這種要彎不彎要直不直的slider，只是我的意見，不如全部弄直? ;w; 在blanket
02:24:904 (3) - 這裡應該NC? 前面都轉了NC

謝謝>.<
@星星, update了的話請告知

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Kuzino

Former osu!catch Champion: 2014

1,207 posts

Joined August 2009

Kuzino 2014-04-02T12:55:37+00:00

Hi
from modding queue

nice song

[STAC's Salad]
00:23:571 (3) - move this note x:280
00:33:238 (2) - move this note x:256
00:37:904 (6) - move this note x:176
01:05:238 (1,2,3,4) - how about this pattern https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1475219 (note 2 → x:272) or https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1475219
01:12:571 (3,4,5,6) - how about this pattern http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1475228 (note 4,6 → x:272) or http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1475232 (note 3,4 → x:368 and note 5,6 → x:176)
01:57:904 (7,8,1) - How about making these notes a bit closer to each other?
02:14:904 (1) - decrease hitsound volume at spinners

[Kurokami's Platter]
00:19:571 (1) - , 00:19:904 (1) - add note
00:28:904 (2) - I think a note will be better here instead of a short slider
00:44:238 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - how about decrease space?
00:49:238 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - i think this part use 1/4 is better.
00:54:238 (1) - move this note x:192
01:34:238 (1) - change like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1475314. this enables putting a hitsound here( 01:34:904 ), which is more natural.
01:47:238 (4) - move this note x:272
01:49:571 (5) - move this slider x:336

Good Luck!

Zygfryd reinn1

24 posts

Joined April 2014

Zygfryd reinn1 2014-04-02T12:58:06+00:00

Map is good at all

.

SUBSTAC9

288 posts

Joined May 2009

SUBSTAC9 2014-04-03T02:52:06+00:00

Kuzino wrote:
Hi
[STAC's Salad]
00:23:571 (3) - move this note x:280 ok
00:33:238 (2) - move this note x:256 not change this by cause of logic
00:37:904 (6) - move this note x:176 ok
01:05:238 (1,2,3,4) - how about this pattern https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1475219 (note 2 → x:272) or https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1475219 ok
01:12:571 (3,4,5,6) - how about this pattern http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1475228 (note 4,6 → x:272) or http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1475232 (note 3,4 → x:368 and note 5,6 → x:176) change by other way
01:57:904 (7,8,1) - How about making these notes a bit closer to each other? ok thank you
02:14:904 (1) - decrease hitsound volume at spinners added

thank you very much kuzino
update

SPOILER

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TitleUnicode:東雲菊
Artist:BURTON
ArtistUnicode:BURTON
Creator:[_Crystal]
Version:STAC's Salad
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Maboyu

373 posts

Joined November 2011

Maboyu 2014-04-03T05:09:58+00:00

我來了>W< 星星:D

[KwaN's Easy]
Circle size+1?

nice>w< 沒什麼問題!

[Wafu's Normal]
00:49:571 (2,3) - I suggest this rhythm ↓↓

SPOILER

01:31:574 (1) - Try this rhythm?

SPOILER

[Hard]
00:12:238 (5) - 這邊放一個Circle就好?

SPOILER

00:18:904 (4,5) - 沒包好><
00:28:238 - NC?
01:28:238 (6,7) - 沒包好!!>W<
02:00:904 (2,3) - ^
02:03:571 (1,2) - 試試這樣的節奏?

SPOILER

02:10:238 (2,3) - 沒包好!
02:16:904 (1) - 試試看這樣?

SPOILER

02:23:238 (2,3) - 沒包好!

祝你早日RANK^^
MOD還不是說很成熟>< 請多多包含OAQ

Kurokami

osu! Alumni

4,024 posts

Joined February 2010

Kurokami 2014-04-03T05:53:43+00:00

Kuzino wrote:
Hi
from modding queue

nice song

[Kurokami's Platter]
00:19:571 (1) - , 00:19:904 (1) - add note Why? I can hear nothing there which needs two note. o.o Changed the previous circle to a long slider.
00:28:904 (2) - I think a note will be better here instead of a short slider Nope, because the base sound is still going on in the background but at 00:29:238 there is a second one which tears the first one apart. Thats why I used two slider instead of one.
00:44:238 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - how about decrease space? No, if you mean between the notes. If you mean between this and the next one I did that, just after my last post and I forgot to send it, or more like I waited for the next mod.
00:49:238 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - i think this part use 1/4 is better. No, because the sounds are not there. It will be too hard to catch them with hidden since its slow so you can only use your rhythm sense to jump and stuff.
00:54:238 (1) - move this note x:192 No because here is the rhythm change in the music thats why I mapped it differently from the rest. Its hard to catch thats true but some harder patterns needs since this is kinda easy isn't it? (And this is sounds a little bit differently than the rest anyways.)
01:34:238 (1) - change like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1475314. this enables putting a hitsound here( 01:34:904 ), which is more natural. I also wondered about this. Thanks for pointing out.
01:47:238 (4) - move this note x:272 k
01:49:571 (5) - move this slider x:336 k

Good Luck!

Thanks for your mod. :3

SPOILER

osu file format v12

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 84907
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 2
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 16
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Shinonomegiku
TitleUnicode:東雲菊
Artist:BURTON
ArtistUnicode:BURTON
Creator:[_Crystal]
Version:Kurokami's Platter
Source:ましろ色シンフォニー -Love is pure white-
Tags:Mashiro-iro Symphony original soundtrack ost SUBSTAC9 yf_bmp Kurokami Wafu IamKwaN
BeatmapID:382311
BeatmapSetID:152709

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8
ApproachRate:8
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IamKwaN

osu! Alumni

3,905 posts

Joined August 2012

IamKwaN 2014-04-03T11:01:36+00:00

@小魚: 不轉了lol
@星星: 為毛N的AR仍然是6?

Crystal

Former osu!catch Champion: 2018

1,123 posts

Joined June 2012

Topic Starter

Crystal 2014-04-03T12:49:26+00:00

smallboat

smallboat wrote:
嗨星星，來晚。 >.<

[General]

Widescreen support 不一致，check君媽的diff.

[Hard] 有些輕柔的whistle聲都被clap蓋住了..所以我建議要remove.. 猴!

00:22:904 (3) - 這個去掉clap，聽起來比較自然些，連續兩個聽的很noisy，所以00:23:571 (4) 開頭有鼓聲就強調這裡就好了。
00:24:904 (3) - ^
00:26:904 (3) - ^
00:30:904 (2) - ^
00:32:904 (2) - ^
00:36:904 (2) - ^
00:38:904 (3) - ^
00:40:904 (3) - ^
00:42:904 (2) - ^ 以上的都改了
00:44:238 (1) - 換1/4折返? 这里还是一个circle因为不是1/4也不是1/6
00:44:904 (2) - 這個去掉clap kk
00:46:238 (1) - 尾端音效去掉 kk
01:00:238 (7) - 開頭我覺得是whistle kk
01:06:904 (1) - 這個去掉clap kk
01:08:904 (5) - ^ kk
01:13:571 (7) - 前後加兩個clap聽起來很奇怪，搬動後面那一個比較適合音樂。不了;w;挺好
01:22:904 (5) - 這個去掉clap (後面還有類似的試試自己搬動看看? 有些沒有鼓聲卻放clap，不如不要加) 猴,彻底改了一遍
02:24:904 (5) - 試試這裡NC? ok

節奏不錯沒什麼問題，只是音效有點..聽的不太舒服... 彻底排查了一遍,现在应该好多了

祝星星RANK ~ ! xD谢谢

AliomLoung

AliomLoung wrote:
我來了>W< 星星:D :3

[Hard]
00:12:238 (5) - 這邊放一個Circle就好? 改啦xD
SPOILER
00:18:904 (4,5) - 沒包好>< ><fixed
00:28:238 - NC? 不了因为和前面的是连贯的
01:28:238 (6,7) - 沒包好!!>W< ><改了
02:00:904 (2,3) - ^ 也改了
02:03:571 (1,2) - 試試這樣的節奏? 算了QAQ
SPOILER
02:10:238 (2,3) - 沒包好! >.<改了
02:16:904 (1) - 試試看這樣? 不了我认为这样挺不错的
SPOILER
02:23:238 (2,3) - 沒包好! ><嗯嗯改了

祝你早日RANK^^ 谢谢:3
MOD還不是說很成熟>< 請多多包含OAQ [/color]

thanks for modding~!! :3

IamKwaN wrote:
@小魚: 不轉了lol
@星星: 為毛N的AR仍然是6? 我去和他说说:3

rainn1 wrote:
Map is good at all . thanks!!! xD

Wafu

1,703 posts

Joined June 2011

Wafu 2014-04-03T14:28:35+00:00

Fixed only unsnapped notes and AR. Nothing from AliomLoung's mod was fixed, because I don't want to overmap and also use 1/6 notes on normal diff. Thanks.

DeletedUser_2243638

DeletedUser_2243638 2014-04-06T08:19:37+00:00

Mod-Request~

Guest-Easy

00:01:571 add whistle
00:03:571 ^
00:07:571 ^
00:20:238 (2) this slider is so long you could play with its' shape more

01:36:904 (1) ^
02:06:238 (4) ^

Guest-Normal

00:01:571 add wihstle~
00:03:571 ^
00:07:571 ^
00:08:238 (1) make a reverseslider of this one (but keep the lengh), I think this fits better
00:48:238 remove NC
00:49:571 add NC
00:50:238 remove NC
00:54:238 remove NC
00:58:238 remove NC
01:30:904 add Nc
01:31:571 remove NC
01:36:571 add object
01:39:571 remove NC
01:41:571 add NC
01:42:238 remove NC
01:46:904 add NC
01:47:571 remove Nc
01:50:238 remove NC
01:51:571 add NC
01:52:904 remove NC
01:58:238 remove NC
01:59:571 add NC
02:00:904 remove NC
02:02:904 add NC
02:03:571 remove NC

Hard

00:01:571 add whistle
00:03:571 ^
00:07:571 ^
00:13:571 remove clap (doesn't really fit to this calm point)
00:14:904 ^
00:16:904 ^
00:18:904 ^
00:34:238 remove clap
00:34:904 remove whistle
00:40:904 remove clap
00:42:904 ^
00:43:571 ^
00:54:071 add clap
01:10:071 ^
01:14:238 remove clap
01:31:238 (4,5) add claps
01:36:571 (4,5) ^
01:57:904 (5,6) ^
02:08:571 (5,6) ^
02:09:904 add object
02:16:904 you could play a bit with the shape of this slider ^^
02:22:238 ^

Hope I helped you a bit, though I couldn't find much but give some hitsound-advice ^^ A really nice song, it was fun to mod it

Serena-

454 posts

Joined December 2012

Serena- 2014-04-06T08:36:27+00:00

hi pm request~

[STAC's Salad]
00:41:904 (8) - try to stack it on 00:41:238 (6) -
00:42:238 (1) - how about making a jump here? like 00:39:238 (2,3,4,5) - this pattern

[Kurokami's Platter]
its not a real problem, but note that there is only one HD in the diff. i know its hard to make a HD with bpm 90, but trying to move notes like these(00:32:238 (1) - ) and make a HD might be good also
00:50:279 (2) - i think placing this 00:50:321 - might sound better
00:54:238 (1) - stack this over 00:54:321 (2) - like the others?

and to Kurokami srry for not responding to your mod cuz my computer cant read the beatmap file of my map T.T ill try to fix them as soon as possible.

IamKwaN

osu! Alumni

3,905 posts

Joined August 2012

IamKwaN 2014-04-06T11:47:10+00:00

@Julini: fix all those hitsounds mod, thank you!

SPOILER

osu file format v12

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TitleUnicode:東雲菊
Artist:BURTON
ArtistUnicode:BURTON
Creator:[_Crystal]
Version:KwaN's Easy
Source:ましろ色シンフォニー -Love is pure white-
Tags:Mashiro-iro Symphony original soundtrack ost SUBSTAC9 yf_bmp Kurokami Wafu IamKwaN
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Last edited by IamKwaN 2014-04-06T12:30:19+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Crystal

Former osu!catch Champion: 2018

1,123 posts

Joined June 2012

Topic Starter

Crystal 2014-04-06T12:16:25+00:00

Julini wrote:
Mod-Request~ <3
Hard

00:01:571 add whistle
00:03:571 ^
00:07:571 ^
00:13:571 remove clap (doesn't really fit to this calm point)
00:14:904 ^
00:16:904 ^
00:18:904 ^ fixed all the above
00:34:238 remove clap i'd like keep a clap here, it fits the music more, imo <3
00:34:904 remove whistle ^
00:40:904 remove clap ^
00:42:904 ^ ^
00:43:571 ^ ^
00:54:071 add clap no sry, i think it's too noisy ;w;
01:10:071 ^ ^
01:14:238 remove clap fixed
01:31:238 (4,5) add claps
01:36:571 (4,5) ^
01:57:904 (5,6) ^
02:08:571 (5,6) ^ no sry, i think it's too noisy, too ;w;
02:09:904 add object sry no fix, i think it's enough
02:16:904 you could play a bit with the shape of this slider ^^ ok, will consider about this one <3
02:22:238 ^ ^

Hope I helped you a bit, though I couldn't find much but give some hitsound-advice ^^ A really nice song, it was fun to mod it thank you Julini, improved this mapset a lot xD

thanks for modding~

SUBSTAC9

288 posts

Joined May 2009

SUBSTAC9 2014-04-06T16:43:51+00:00

Serena- wrote:
[STAC's Salad]
00:41:904 (8) - try to stack it on 00:41:238 (6) -
00:42:238 (1) - how about making a jump here? like 00:39:238 (2,3,4,5) - this pattern

ok change to new pattern style
thank you very much

update

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Oracle

571 posts

Joined April 2012

Oracle 2014-04-07T02:14:14+00:00

老星啊

Hard
irc modded

Wafu's Normal
You are using NC too often. Almost like a NC spam=.=. I suggest you remove 1 new combo from each 2
01:21:571 (3) - i'd prefer to put this downwards from 2 http://puu.sh/7YZG5.jpg to have a better flow transition to 01:22:238 (1) -
i have no complain besides, safe diff.

徒弟's Easy
OD+1吧 2→4→6的spread好点
00:49:571 (4) - 不是很建议结束在1/3的tick. 由于SV很低所以这里十分难读出节奏.很容易以为跟00:47:571 (2) - 是一样的。推荐缩短到00:49:904 - ,跟打节拍的1/2鼓。
01:12:238 (2) - 我会推荐跟01:14:238 (1) - 一样做成直的。看起来整洁点。
01:34:238 (4) - 中间的白线要不要用tick音?
01:39:571 (3) - 头上加个whistle然后尾巴加clap? 你长白线好像都加了,这里应该是漏了。
01:40:904 (4) - 漏了whistle?
没了,下次找你做GD!

Good Luck~

Crystal

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Topic Starter

Crystal 2014-04-07T03:01:46+00:00

Oracle wrote:
老星啊

Hard
irc modded
Good Luck~

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2014-04-07 09:30 Oracle: 00:00:238 (1,2) - 
2014-04-07 09:30 Oracle: 比如这个
2014-04-07 09:31 Oracle: 实际上1的尾巴和2这两个音是一组的
2014-04-07 09:31 Oracle: 00:06:904 (1) - 应该像这个一样跟
2014-04-07 09:32 Oracle: 00:13:571 (1) - 然后这边  滑条尾巴压了一个重音
2014-04-07 09:32 Oracle: 是不太推荐的   
2014-04-07 09:32 Oracle: 做的时候尽量避免
2014-04-07 09:32 [_Crystal]: 猴
2014-04-07 09:32 Oracle: 因为滑条尾巴打击感弱
2014-04-07 09:32 Oracle: 所以不要拿来跟强的音
2014-04-07 09:32 [_Crystal]: 我改改看
2014-04-07 09:32 Oracle: 00:17:904 (2) - 这个也是
2014-04-07 09:33 Oracle: 但是这种点很多  都改的话简直成了remap了;w;
2014-04-07 09:33 Oracle: 以后做的时候注意一下
2014-04-07 09:33 [_Crystal]: 诶;w;
2014-04-07 09:33 [_Crystal]: 我后面很少有这样了诶
2014-04-07 09:34 Oracle: 如果不多就改改
2014-04-07 09:34 Oracle: 00:36:238 (1,2) - 
2014-04-07 09:34 Oracle: 这个  顺时针转一下
2014-04-07 09:34 Oracle: 稍微转一点点
2014-04-07 09:34 Oracle: 00:35:904 (4,1) - 这个flow比较歪
2014-04-07 09:34 Oracle: 转一下顺
2014-04-07 09:34 [_Crystal]: 00:36:238 (1,2) - 一起转?
2014-04-07 09:34 Oracle: en
2014-04-07 09:35 [_Crystal]: hou
2014-04-07 09:35 [_Crystal]: 大概多少度啊;w;
2014-04-07 09:35 Oracle: 我转转看。。
2014-04-07 09:37 Oracle: http://puu.sh/7YYlG.jpg
2014-04-07 09:37 Oracle: 大概这样  
2014-04-07 09:37 Oracle: 4也移动了一点
2014-04-07 09:38 [_Crystal]: 好
2014-04-07 09:38 Oracle: 01:13:571 (7) - 
2014-04-07 09:38 Oracle: 这个我会比较喜欢ctrl+G
2014-04-07 09:38 Oracle: 甩尾flow到8
2014-04-07 09:38 Oracle: 也顺不少
2014-04-07 09:39 Oracle: 01:20:238 (5) - 这个也是
2014-04-07 09:39 Oracle: ;w;我是转圈爱好者 你试试看觉得好就改
2014-04-07 09:40 [_Crystal]: 嗯
2014-04-07 09:40 Oracle: 我打起来是感觉爽一些
2014-04-07 09:41 [_Crystal]: 01:20:238 (5) - 这个调整之后后面的要不要调啊;w; 上次yf也说过这个我总感觉后面不太顺
2014-04-07 09:41 Oracle: 不用  
2014-04-07 09:42 Oracle: 顺着的  而且滑条跳circle  大跳都不怕
2014-04-07 09:42 [_Crystal]: k
2014-04-07 09:43 Oracle: 02:05:904 (4) - 这个我感觉放在3右下会好打点  可你的blanket就美丽了
2014-04-07 09:43 [_Crystal]: 我柑橘这个挺好啊;w;
2014-04-07 09:43 Oracle: 那就不改了  其实都行
2014-04-07 09:43 [_Crystal]: 嗯
2014-04-07 09:44 Oracle: 02:07:571 (3,4) - 这个的间距  希望还能小一点。。
2014-04-07 09:44 Oracle: 跟1/2好像
2014-04-07 09:44 Oracle: 我打的时候豪侠才能够嵯峨乐
2014-04-07 09:44 Oracle: 好像读错了*
2014-04-07 09:44 [_Crystal]: 红啊u
2014-04-07 09:44 [_Crystal]: 后啊
2014-04-07 09:44 Oracle: 02:16:571 (6,1) - 
2014-04-07 09:45 Oracle: 这两个  弄成三点一线  
2014-04-07 09:45 Oracle: http://puu.sh/7YYPj.jpg
2014-04-07 09:45 [_Crystal]: 我先把前面那个改完
2014-04-07 09:46 Oracle: 你savelog慢慢看\o/
2014-04-07 09:46 Oracle: 其他没啥了 
2014-04-07 09:46 [_Crystal]: 猴
2014-04-07 09:46 Oracle: 因为bpm很低  所以怎么打都不会怪的
2014-04-07 09:46 [_Crystal]: XD
2014-04-07 09:46 Oracle: 建议找狗
2014-04-07 09:47 [_Crystal]: 先拿水果还是先拿std都一样?
2014-04-07 09:47 Oracle: 拿得到哪个就去拿哪个
2014-04-07 09:47 [_Crystal]: hao
2014-04-07 09:47 Oracle: 我赶紧趁热打铁给你摸完
2014-04-07 09:47 Oracle: 不然又懒了

谢谢mod

IamKwaN

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IamKwaN 2014-04-07T06:12:10+00:00

@master: only no fix that 1/3, 因為我主要都不是跟鼓

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Kurokami

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4,024 posts

Joined February 2010

Kurokami 2014-04-08T05:56:03+00:00

Serena- wrote:
hi pm request~

[Kurokami's Platter]
its not a real problem, but note that there is only one HD in the diff. i know its hard to make a HD with bpm 90, but trying to move notes like these(00:32:238 (1) - ) and make a HD might be good also Might be, since to create a HDash I need 20 grid free grid line between notes with grid size 2. So its almost impossible to use HDashes on this map. Thats why I made "harder" dashes. But I was able to change this a bit.
00:50:279 (2) - i think placing this 00:50:321 - might sound better Actually it is at yellow tick. The feedback last till 321 but the main sound is there. If someone else also point this out I will change it.
00:54:238 (1) - stack this over 00:54:321 (2) - like the others? No, because this part is slightly different in rhythm from the others. And this is the start of that part so I think its acceptable to be like now. Although if a BAT recommend to change it then I will. And also there is a finish sound on it which I think its better to have harder jump pattern then the rest.

and to Kurokami srry for not responding to your mod cuz my computer cant read the beatmap file of my map T.T ill try to fix them as soon as possible. lol, try to re-download it. Most of the times it helpes. Or try to cut out the whole folder, press f5 at the song selection, place back then f5 again. It maybe helps. :3

Thanks for your mod. Although I just fixed one I think it was a good mod. Man, HDash with 90bpm is so impossible. orz

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240,16,103238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
16,32,103571,2,0,B|144:112|144:112|16:192,1,300,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,224,104571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,208,104904,6,0,B|288:128|288:128|416:48,1,300,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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64,48,106238,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,96,106571,5,8,0:0:0:0:
160,112,106738,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,128,106904,1,2,0:0:0:0:
272,192,107238,1,2,0:0:0:0:
480,192,107571,6,0,L|352:272,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,288,108571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,192,108904,1,2,0:0:0:0:
80,96,109238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,64,109571,2,0,L|256:64,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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272,320,111238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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320,144,112238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,96,112571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,80,112904,6,0,L|288:32,2,75,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,96,113904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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464,192,114904,2,0,L|400:240,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,272,115571,6,0,B|240:192|240:192|112:112,1,300,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,64,116571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,48,116904,2,0,L|160:0,1,75,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,16,117571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,64,117904,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,112,118071,1,8,0:0:0:0:
384,160,118238,6,0,B|256:240|256:240|384:320,1,300,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,240,119238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,240,119571,2,0,L|320:240,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,240,120238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,160,120571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,128,120904,6,0,L|0:96,2,75,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,160,121904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
496,176,122238,2,0,L|448:240,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,240,122904,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,240,123238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,192,123571,6,0,L|272:112,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,96,124571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,112,124904,2,0,L|320:48,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,96,125571,2,0,L|112:32,1,75,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,112,126238,6,0,B|448:192|448:192|320:272,1,300,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,192,127238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,192,127571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
80,176,127904,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,128,128071,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,80,128238,1,2,0:0:0:0:
16,48,128571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
304,80,128904,6,0,L|224:208,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,256,129904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,208,130238,2,0,L|160:256,2,75,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,160,131238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,208,131571,6,0,B|96:128|96:128|224:48,1,300,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,112,132571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,208,132904,2,0,L|176:144,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,160,133571,2,0,L|352:96,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,208,134238,6,0,L|192:208,2,75,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,208,135238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,208,135571,2,0,L|160:144,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,128,136238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,48,136571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,48,136904,6,0,B|192:128|192:128|320:208,1,300,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,128,137904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,208,138238,2,0,L|272:272,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,272,138904,2,0,L|112:272,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,288,139571,6,0,B|496:208|496:208|368:128,1,300,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,96,140571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,128,140904,2,0,L|320:192,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,240,141571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,320,141904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,320,142238,6,0,B|160:240|160:240|32:160,1,300,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,80,143238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,112,143571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
272,192,143904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,272,144238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,304,144571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,144904,12,0,148904,0:0:0:0:

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