对不起，网速有点慢，所以才迟mod

NORMAL
HP drain 太低了，搞到分数不够高，提高一点点?
00:23:090 (1) - 除去whistle,把whistle放在这里00:24:030 (2)
01:37:081 (3) - 如果可以的话，可以把这个移到别位吗 ? 因为给01:36:062 (4)挡住了， normal player 恐怕会捉不到。
很好的normal,如果这是你的第一个图，恭喜你，做的很好，有前途。 xD

INSANE
01:36:022 (1,2) - 这个被遮到得很厉害，看不到，看看别人怎么说吧
01:37:081 (1,2) - ^

还有delete这个file
Golden City Factory - Shugetsu (Tonoko).osb
然后full resubmit.

还有一个满小的东西，就是你的BG的dimension不对ratio, 搞到BG的左边有个小小的黑条，仔细看一下蛮不爽的，建议resize picture.

好map. Star.

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路过打酱油
好玩
好听

star~

GOOD MAP

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star

Awesome map <3

I noticed one mistake though

[Insane]
00:47:020 (7) - Looks like you meant to have it a 1/8th sooner. Timeline nudge to previous red tick.

Also, if the map is done, you should move it to Pending Beatmaps.

It's very good!

Star! ミ☆

oh ~ I forget to fixed that note...I found it before ...

thank you for everyone~

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star

good jod
star

star~

Hi

- Easy:

• .Suggestions:
  01:51:32 (1) - Make this end to 01:54:504

- Normal:

• .Suggestions:
  00:47:74 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) + 00:49:033 (1,2,3,4,5) - Maybe a bit hard for a Normal
  01:13:37 (1) - make this end to 01:15:960
  01:44:96 (1) - add a finish hitsound in the beginning of this slider?

- Remix:

• .Opinions:
  Did you forget to add KIAI?
  I really like this difficulty
  .Suggestions:
  00:18:34 (3) - please copy (CTRL-C) 00:17:055 (1), then paste (CTRL-V) it where (3) is, flip vertically (CTRL-H) and finally remove new combo. That looks way better
  .Errors/Mistakes:
  01:29:073 - WHAT O.O Map it until 01:54:504 please, this difficulty is great DDDDD: (EDIT: oh, i just noticed it's still WIP)

- Insane:

• .Opinions:
  Did you forget to add KIAI?
  Tricky, but fun map
  .Suggestions:
  00:14:37 (5) - new combo
  00:56:49 (7) - add one more repetition to this slider
  01:51:32 (1) - Make this end to 01:54:504

Great job, map fits perfectly the song ^^
Star for you

just add kiai time in [insane]...

If anyone find it difficult to catch the note,I will remove it again

:p

Easy:
00:19:013 (3) - new combo

Normal:
01:13:037 (1) - 从01:13:179开始spinner
01:27:048 (5) - new combo

Insane:
00:19:013 (5) - new combo
add kiai time
不觉得这像insane，改hard吧

Remix:
00:30:026 (9) - new combo
00:42:098 (8) - *
00:49:033 (5) - slider去掉，把前面的spinner移过来，结尾在00:50:927
01:28:097 (1) - spinner结尾无声如何？

一点点个人建议罢了，见笑

Blue: Sugestion. Should take good effects.
Green: Notification or cosmetic issue. May, but don't have to be changed.
Yellow: Should be fixed.
Red: Have to be fixed.

[Easy]
Perfect

[Normal]

1. 00:47:74 (1) - 00:50:13 (5) - this is definitely too hard on normal difficulty
2. That combo flower are a little too hard imo but i'm just complainig. Maybe use shorter spacing...

[Insane]
Perfect (you can set 1/4 beat snap divisor, why 1/8)

[Remix]
Also perfect ^_^

Anyway i suggest cutting mp3 to reduce filesize.

Awesome map. Starrr'd ^_^

mp3 had changed ...

but offset also changed...

OSU! Timing Help!

[All Difficulties Timing]

• 1. Offset 125

[Normal Timing]

• 2. Offset 53966
  3. Offset 56350

Starred~!

weeeeeee lots of nazi since maps are done very well
You did hitsound patterns differently for each diff~ wow
Why does Easy and Normal have countdown, and Insane and Remix doesn't? O-o

Easy- Don't "Rarely Stack" on Easy please (its only a few notes effected though)
00:34:297 (3) - I think this would sound better if it sounded like 00:32:707 (3) (remove whistle from both ends of sliderpoint, but keep whistleslider slide?)
Thats all I wanna pick out here

Normal- hmm also don't use "rarely stack" here
Nazi?-

Insane- Maybe increase overall diff by one.. it would make some of the complex patterns easier to read..
Nazi-

Remix- Aside from the high drain that kills me every time, I like this map
nazi-
I personally don't like mixing two hitsounds together on same beat, but since you have a lot, I guess thats what you're aiming for
Awesome mapsets by the way

fixed easy normal insane by myself ~ ~ thx Shinxyn >W<
waiting for [remix]'s update

[/color]

Shinxyn wrote:

Remix- Aside from the high drain that kills me every time, I like this map
nazi-

SPOILER

00:17:410 (4) - hmmm move this to middle where (2) is, or make this the start of new combo fixed
00:19:992 (9) - new combo fixed
00:20:787 (1) - move this up at tick so the combo equally seperate sorry, I don't know how to do that D:
00:25:555 (1) - this note is weird to play, cuz the pace suddenly changes, just pointing out xD
00:30:919 (4) - this... is fairly hidden when playing, most ppl are too busy catching the jumps to notice this is a slider... I don't even think this has to be a slider... yeah, it is a hidden slider sure now fixed
00:52:376 (5) - new combo since it sounds like a new start? fixed
00:56:548 (5) - new combo just to make the streams seperate fixed
01:29:032 (1) - Start this on the white tick, auto still gets 2k~ I just wanna make playing more exciting :p
01:52:973 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - place these directly on top of each other, otherwise it would look kinda off when they get stacked (use 0.0 distance snap with grid snap off or just grid snap them all on one spot)

yup, fixed(although I wanna make them alway stack each other but no change the stacking set I guess that impossible)

I personally don't like mixing two hitsounds together on same beat, but since you have a lot, I guess thats what you're aiming for
Awesome mapsets by the way
at the last ,thanks for your modding

NI HAO!

[Easy]
00:35:091 (1) - Make a same slider like 00:36:681 (2)
00:47:807 (4) - Remove 1 repeat slider
01:21:184 (x) - Place note here
01:21:582 (x) - Place note here with clap hitsound
01:29:528 (2) - Add a clap hitsound at the end of slider
01:31:118 (2) - ^
01:36:283 (2) - Remove whitsle hitsound and add a clap hitsound at the end of slider
01:37:873 (2) - ^
01:39:462 (2) - ^
01:41:052 (2) - ^
01:47:409 (4) - Remove whistle hitsound and add a finish hitsound

[Normal]
I use these to make better to hear or to play
00:30:124 (x) - Place note here
00:30:323 (x) - Place note here and add a new combo
00:30:522 (x) - Place note here
00:30:721 (1) - No new combo
00:30:919 (x) - Place note here
00:36:482 (x) - ^
00:42:840 (x) - ^
00:43:038 (x) - Place note here and add a new combo
00:43:237 (x) - Place note here
00:43:436 (1) - No new combo
00:43:634 (x) - Place note here
00:49:197 (x) - ^
01:52:773 (x) - ^

[Insane]
00:30:323 (1) - This spinner should end in 00:31:118
00:42:840 (x) - Place note here
01:08:668 (1,1,1,1) - No new combo

[Remix]
00:48:204 (1,1,1) - No new combo
00:49:595 (1,1,1,1) - ^
01:51:780 (1,1,1) - ^
01:53:171 (1,1,1,1,1) - ^

Nice map
STAR

Leorda wrote:

NI HAO!

[Easy]
00:35:091 (1) - Make a same slider like 00:36:681 (2)
00:47:807 (4) - Remove 1 repeat slider
01:21:184 (x) - Place note here
01:21:582 (x) - Place note here with clap hitsound
01:29:528 (2) - Add a clap hitsound at the end of slider
01:31:118 (2) - ^
01:36:283 (2) - Remove whitsle hitsound and add a clap hitsound at the end of slider
01:37:873 (2) - ^
01:39:462 (2) - ^
01:41:052 (2) - ^
01:47:409 (4) - Remove whistle hitsound and add a finish hitsound
thanks for you help...I fixed some of them
[Normal]
I use these to make better to hear or to play
00:30:124 (x) - Place note here
00:30:323 (x) - Place note here and add a new combo
00:30:522 (x) - Place note here
00:30:721 (1) - No new combo
00:30:919 (x) - Place note here
00:36:482 (x) - ^
00:42:840 (x) - ^
00:43:038 (x) - Place note here and add a new combo
00:43:237 (x) - Place note here
00:43:436 (1) - No new combo
00:43:634 (x) - Place note here
00:49:197 (x) - ^
01:52:773 (x) - ^

[Insane]
00:30:323 (1) - This spinner should end in 00:31:118
00:42:840 (x) - Place note here
01:08:668 (1,1,1,1) - No new combo


When I add these new notes in those timing points...the style have change a lot...and make it much harder...so I won't change it...
[Remix]
00:48:204 (1,1,1) - No new combo
00:49:595 (1,1,1,1) - ^
01:51:780 (1,1,1) - ^
01:53:171 (1,1,1,1,1) - ^
waiting for Response
Nice map
STAR

>W< NI HAO~ thank you very much~

~Easy~
Fine.

~Normal~
Fine.

~Insane~
01:52:774 - add note
01:52:774 (1) - start on white tick

~Remix~
00:30:919 (4) - I don't think this slider fit the song
01:29:032 (1) - start on white tick
01:46:814 (2) - offscreen
01:47:410 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - hard to read

offset : 141
以前都谁给测的bpm.差那么大。
map做的不错

喔...我改改看看...thx~ ~

殿子大人加油啊，永远支持你

一只猩猩

Wriggle <3

Offset: 134 (-7 from current)

[Easy]
00:32:723 (3) - remove clap from tail, make whistle?
00:34:313 (3) - ^
00:35:107 (1) - remove the clap?
00:38:684 (2,2) - remove the claps from these and maybe whistle?
(IDK, Claps don't really fit the song imo)
00:45:439 (3,3) - ^
00:47:823 (4) - Finish excess. Just make the last tail the finish.
00:51:796 (3,3) - again with the claps.
(not all claps sound bad; just pointing out what I can see that would sound better as whistles instead)
01:29:544 (2,2) - claps->whistle?
01:33:915 (2,4) - remove whistles?
01:37:094 (1) - clap at tail?
01:41:862 (1,1) - remove finish?

[Normal]
Wait a minute, why did this suddenly become Normal soundset at the start (or did the start of Easy have to be normal? Eitherway...)? It's preferrable that all the difficulties are using the same soundset at the same parts unless it's a different music, which in this case it shouldn't be...
Okay I suddenly got tired from hitsound modding D: I'm definitely sure some hitsound swaps would be nicer on this difficulty too.
00:52:988 (1,2) - feels a bit empty, maybe add notes before this?

[Insane]
ARGH WHITE CIRCLES ARE BLENDING WITH THE BACKGROUND D:
00:20:803 (1,2) - maybe better if 2 looks like 1 but flipped?
01:13:253 (1,2,3,4,5) - adjust so that 1,3,5 are at the center?
01:21:995 (2) - getting covered by the slider since 1.) it's so bright 2.) yeah the circle's directly below the slider o_o
01:34:710 (2) - ^
01:40:273 (1,2,3,4,5) - I dunno, just looks weird

[Remix]
The heck are bookmarks doing right after the song? Go to the .osu file and delete all the bookmarks
00:25:571 (1,2,3) - ouch at sudden stream o_O
00:49:015 (1) - a bit going offscreen?
01:03:717 (1) - uneven stack ouchness...
(Second Break) -I have a feeling it would be better if something was mapped here
(Some notes at the end) - over-finish'd I think
(Kiai) - I don't think it fits? ah w/e

Awesome techniques used at [Remix] heh... Star.

im late=0=

tonoko moe moe chu~❤

GOOD JOB

good map!

A few requests before protobubbling.

- Normal has two unhinerited sections, fix them. Remember: if you have to use 2x slider spped, inherit and check the 2x icon

- Remix has all unhinerited sections!!! Please fix >.<

- All backgrounds are .png and one is over 1MB! Please convert them to jpg to save space. If you can't do that, ask me by PM and i'll do it for you.

PM me when everything is ok, and you'll get a protobubble ^^

I'm suck

Download: Golden City Factory - Shugetsu--remixed (Tonoko) [Remix].osu

Star~

Easy

1. 00:28:743(1) - The way that is now, it's hard to deduce where the slider repetitions end. I would align the (2) with the (1), so this way you can see that the slider repetitions end on the same side that start.

Normal

1. 00:30:730(1,2) - Strange silence... Would be better if you did the same that you did at 00:36:690(1,2,3,4,5)
2. 00:43:445(1,2) - Same here~

Insane and Remix

• No problem! Nice!

Overall
So damn well used hit sounds! And the gameplay is awesome too!!!
Seriosly, this map need a BAT to rank this soon.

Star for a great map!!!!!

well

Download: Golden City Factory - Shugetsu--remixed (Tonoko) [Remix].osu

Tags: Mooned Insect Wriggle Nightbug touhuo


touhuo ? =A=!!!!

touhou o(^_')b

oh !?~ that's a mistake... I will fix it~

Proto-Bubbled ^^

As your request.

Read this first for the icon explanation.
- [?] Asking for the second thought.
- [!] Fatal error. You have to fix this for sure.
- [No icon] Only a suggestion.

Star.

star

Hi

1. Offset: 142 (A little later than yours)

[EASY]

Looks good

[NORMAL]

A bit hard for a normal, but you already ave an easy, so I can let this go.

Im not sure why you would want the 1.5x timing section at 00:54:173 just to make the sliders a little longer. Meh. It plays the same either way, so :/



[INSANE]

00:56:557 (7) - Remove one of the repeats? Follows the tune a little better that way to me

Some of those jumps and some overlaps are a bit awkward, but theres nothing I can rag on, so this passes I guess.

[REMIX]

This reminds me of James/Al-Azifs Gojou Kai maps so much.

00:51:002 (1) - Remove this and make that slider 1/4 longer? feels a little smoother to me. Looking at all those timing sections there though, I don't think you'll want to change that.

Very nice map. You don't have to change anything I've suggested, but if you do, I will come back and re-protobubble for you. Good job

Starred

All good for me
just star it

Hmm. I Noticed you fixed some of my suggestions but haven't posted saying so. Either way, It doesn't matter.

Protobubbled

thank you ~ ~

I always forget what should do ~ ~

Remix
00:57:352 - this inherited section isn't doing anything, remove it

Insane
00:47:816 - inherited section on top of the note.. move it back 1/4 or 1/2
01:00:531 - useless inherited section

Normal
wow this is hard for a normal... maybe rename Hard?
01:30:133 (3) - no jumps on normal

Easy
Rename normal? is to hard for an easy imo.
00:25:564 - move inherited timing section 1/2 back
01:41:855 - same

remember to place inherited timing section before the note, not on top, cuz if you hit early you wont get the sound you want.

thanks ~

fixed all timing section

Good.
+Star~

[General]

1. Delete the osb file and full submit.
2. The title is... weird. Sure "remix" doesn't need to be capitalized (and spaced)? (and even that would be a bit vague since there's no remixer).Getting a confirmation for that title would be nice.
3. You should rename [Normal] to [Normal+] or something. It's harder than a [Normal] difficulty.
4. I agree with 142ish offset (and even that sounds a bit early for me).

There.

" GCFT-0050 / DSP　TOHO　RemixesBEST　Last　Celebration（ラストセレブレーション）"

ok ^.^ I make sure that the "remix" title is right & add the remixer's name in tags

and I change the diff name

Title of this song should be "Stirring an Autumn Moon ~ Mooned Insect" but since the title would be too long to fit in the player panel, just put it as "Stirring an Autumn Moon".

If "Tsukamaete" is in the tags for [Remix], shouldn't it be in the other difficulties as well?

changed & fixed

Why is "(remix)" in the title still? ._. Remove it please!

~ ~0 you know, I'm a baka that misunderstood what you mean

I will fix it tomorrow ~ ~ I have to sleep now

Bubbled~

Looks good!

thank you ~ ~

May be it's still have some defects.

thank you all .